Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Kindred.
dusk arising said:
Wonderful sentiments based upon realisation of respect for all and love of life itself. Sadly the power bases get in the way be they political or religious. I\'ve said it before on MPS, in it\'s idealistic state, pure anarchy would be wonderful. But humanity is far from ready for it.
Dream ideals as we may, we are stuck with humanity in it\'s current state.
Having said all that, if we were all over 60, with the wisdom of our years, we could make it work.
July 17th, 2020 03:20
dusk arising said:
Wonderful sentiments based upon realisation of respect for all and love of life itself. Sadly the power bases get in the way be they political or religious. I\'ve said it before on MPS, in it\'s idealistic state, pure anarchy would be wonderful. But humanity is far from ready for it.
Dream ideals as we may, we are stuck with humanity in it\'s current state.
Having said all that, if we were all over 60, with the wisdom of our years, we could make it work.
July 17th, 2020 03:20
Dream-Encrusted.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - TOUCHE FAY ! Your Sensuou Poem accurately describes the way in which my dreams have orientated since I married Brian four month ago ! I am gradually getting used to sharing our bed - with the Man of My Dreams & He with Me - PARADISE ! Every night as Mama Cass would say *I dream a little dream of Brian* & *Brian dreams a little dream of ME !* AMEN Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Love - Peace - Joy
Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat !
July 16th, 2020 17:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - TOUCHE FAY ! Your Sensuou Poem accurately describes the way in which my dreams have orientated since I married Brian four month ago ! I am gradually getting used to sharing our bed - with the Man of My Dreams & He with Me - PARADISE ! Every night as Mama Cass would say *I dream a little dream of Brian* & *Brian dreams a little dream of ME !* AMEN Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Love - Peace - Joy
Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat !
July 16th, 2020 17:04
Dream-Encrusted.
Michael Edwards said:
Dreamy and uplifting - just what we need in these dark covid days and penned as only you can Fay.
July 16th, 2020 15:55
Michael Edwards said:
Dreamy and uplifting - just what we need in these dark covid days and penned as only you can Fay.
July 16th, 2020 15:55
Dream-Encrusted.
dusk arising said:
All ahead is pure wholesome and rewarding, a young soul who is enthralled upon the spiritually lifting path to heaven on earth unique to the tender years.
Captured by you with reassuring warmth. Oh, life... why did you get in the way of this euphoria as the years faded the colours of my reality.
The way you write is so easy to relate to and feel the moment. If MPS were a rose, then your poetry would be it\'s scent.
July 16th, 2020 09:33
dusk arising said:
All ahead is pure wholesome and rewarding, a young soul who is enthralled upon the spiritually lifting path to heaven on earth unique to the tender years.
Captured by you with reassuring warmth. Oh, life... why did you get in the way of this euphoria as the years faded the colours of my reality.
The way you write is so easy to relate to and feel the moment. If MPS were a rose, then your poetry would be it\'s scent.
July 16th, 2020 09:33
Dream-Encrusted.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful romantic write Fay. With words like these that dream must come true.
Andy
July 16th, 2020 04:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful romantic write Fay. With words like these that dream must come true.
Andy
July 16th, 2020 04:23
Dream-Encrusted.
DianeKey6 said:
this is a beautiful poem. im still getting used to making comments but i really slipped into this one like my favourite pyjamas, cosy and snug. Diane
July 16th, 2020 03:54
DianeKey6 said:
this is a beautiful poem. im still getting used to making comments but i really slipped into this one like my favourite pyjamas, cosy and snug. Diane
July 16th, 2020 03:54
Altering.
Neville said:
these words were long overdue an airing my friend...
and I am sure they are familiar but no less enjoyed in the here and now as they were in them yesterdays... a stream of poetic joy from its source to the ocean.... N x
July 15th, 2020 09:20
Neville said:
these words were long overdue an airing my friend...
and I am sure they are familiar but no less enjoyed in the here and now as they were in them yesterdays... a stream of poetic joy from its source to the ocean.... N x
July 15th, 2020 09:20
Altering.
jarcher54 said:
Your verbal journey reminds me of Smetana\'s symphonic poem Die Moldau, sonically recreating the journey of a great river from its mountain-brook rivulets merging with other waters and tumbling into the vast universal sea. A great image in itself, and a great metaphor... thanks for a sweet reminder deftly crafted. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTKsHwqaIr4
July 14th, 2020 08:27
jarcher54 said:
Your verbal journey reminds me of Smetana\'s symphonic poem Die Moldau, sonically recreating the journey of a great river from its mountain-brook rivulets merging with other waters and tumbling into the vast universal sea. A great image in itself, and a great metaphor... thanks for a sweet reminder deftly crafted. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTKsHwqaIr4
July 14th, 2020 08:27
Altering.
Goldfinch60 said:
Those streams of wonderful soprano always enhance the bass of the seas wide glory.
Superb write Fay, into favourites this on goes.
Andy
July 14th, 2020 04:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Those streams of wonderful soprano always enhance the bass of the seas wide glory.
Superb write Fay, into favourites this on goes.
Andy
July 14th, 2020 04:50
Altering.
dusk arising said:
And each time i read the result of your poetic pens journey across the parchment of creation, one can still discern the springing brook that was you still racing across those shiney pebbles with a natural freshness for the day.
July 14th, 2020 03:39
dusk arising said:
And each time i read the result of your poetic pens journey across the parchment of creation, one can still discern the springing brook that was you still racing across those shiney pebbles with a natural freshness for the day.
July 14th, 2020 03:39
See Success.
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s world is so wonderful and your words do it so much justice.
Andy
July 13th, 2020 23:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s world is so wonderful and your words do it so much justice.
Andy
July 13th, 2020 23:50
See Success.
Suresh said:
Un unusually simple, yet profound piece from you indeed.
Where the wave lap onto the beach, or the Sky announces the arrival of the dawn, are the merging of the two that I can reminisce.
Thanks Fay
July 13th, 2020 15:30
Suresh said:
Un unusually simple, yet profound piece from you indeed.
Where the wave lap onto the beach, or the Sky announces the arrival of the dawn, are the merging of the two that I can reminisce.
Thanks Fay
July 13th, 2020 15:30
See Success.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening FAY - Thanks again for reminding us of the Truths in this elegant ODE ! Despite the World still being in LOCKDOWN in the grip of COVID 19 - All the things in Nature that bring us JOY are unchanging. The voice from Heaven - Human Love (we are all experiencing that in abundance !) and the uniqueness of Gods Cretion with every SUNRISE ! *And we say to Ourselves What a Wonderful World* ~ AMEN ! Please check our Poem about Mahatma Ghadi - Thanks. It is also posted as a Fusion ~ A FAY Poem on one of the Mantras would be appreciated ~ Thanks.
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela ~ Brian & Smokey Cat XXX
July 13th, 2020 14:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening FAY - Thanks again for reminding us of the Truths in this elegant ODE ! Despite the World still being in LOCKDOWN in the grip of COVID 19 - All the things in Nature that bring us JOY are unchanging. The voice from Heaven - Human Love (we are all experiencing that in abundance !) and the uniqueness of Gods Cretion with every SUNRISE ! *And we say to Ourselves What a Wonderful World* ~ AMEN ! Please check our Poem about Mahatma Ghadi - Thanks. It is also posted as a Fusion ~ A FAY Poem on one of the Mantras would be appreciated ~ Thanks.
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela ~ Brian & Smokey Cat XXX
July 13th, 2020 14:18
See Success.
MendedFences27 said:
One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\"
A wonderful poem, Fay. Truly, such individuals that work to aid Nature do not get the attention they deserve. Loved it. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2020 13:30
MendedFences27 said:
One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\"
A wonderful poem, Fay. Truly, such individuals that work to aid Nature do not get the attention they deserve. Loved it. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2020 13:30
See Success.
Neville said:
simply too darn good for words dear poet...........................................................................................................................................................................
July 13th, 2020 11:00
Neville said:
simply too darn good for words dear poet...........................................................................................................................................................................
July 13th, 2020 11:00
See Success.
dusk arising said:
What finer calling could there be than to assist nature. The natural world, so beautiful, neglected and badly abused by humanity.
Mankind in general seems to have turned it\'s back on nature\'s needs and our natural need for nature\'s ways. Not a play on words but actually how it is.
What was once symbiosis is become exploitation for monetary return. Mankind is now looking to the moon and planets with a view to plundering there.
I do feel out of tune with the aspirations of those in power and fear for the wellbeing of our future generations.
Once again your power through the written word brings forth strong heartfelt reaction.
July 13th, 2020 05:12
dusk arising said:
What finer calling could there be than to assist nature. The natural world, so beautiful, neglected and badly abused by humanity.
Mankind in general seems to have turned it\'s back on nature\'s needs and our natural need for nature\'s ways. Not a play on words but actually how it is.
What was once symbiosis is become exploitation for monetary return. Mankind is now looking to the moon and planets with a view to plundering there.
I do feel out of tune with the aspirations of those in power and fear for the wellbeing of our future generations.
Once again your power through the written word brings forth strong heartfelt reaction.
July 13th, 2020 05:12
A Secret.
MendedFences27 said:
The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those hidden inner meanings travel from heart to heart.Love opens the heart to perceive more and deeper. Well that\'s what spoke to me in this well conceived poem. Thanks for the treat.- Phil A.
July 12th, 2020 11:28
MendedFences27 said:
The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those hidden inner meanings travel from heart to heart.Love opens the heart to perceive more and deeper. Well that\'s what spoke to me in this well conceived poem. Thanks for the treat.- Phil A.
July 12th, 2020 11:28
A Secret.
benevolentbluebabe said:
This is delightful! Taking a risk can prove so worthwhile...
July 12th, 2020 10:46
benevolentbluebabe said:
This is delightful! Taking a risk can prove so worthwhile...
July 12th, 2020 10:46
A Secret.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD SUNDAY FAY - Angela here - Loving these latest Ballads (Love Songs) all about Secret Trysts - Secret Letters & Secret Desires ! Ive had such experiences in the past as I flitted from Beau to Beau. At the moment I am more than satisfied with Brian (Spiritually - Mentally - Physically) despite Him having His Elvis-like Locks shorn ! See - *Hair today & Gone tomorrow !*
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey XOXOX
July 12th, 2020 05:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD SUNDAY FAY - Angela here - Loving these latest Ballads (Love Songs) all about Secret Trysts - Secret Letters & Secret Desires ! Ive had such experiences in the past as I flitted from Beau to Beau. At the moment I am more than satisfied with Brian (Spiritually - Mentally - Physically) despite Him having His Elvis-like Locks shorn ! See - *Hair today & Gone tomorrow !*
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey XOXOX
July 12th, 2020 05:49
A Secret.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh the things we only share with one!
Great write Fay
Mindful thought provoking write
BRAVO!
July 12th, 2020 05:35
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh the things we only share with one!
Great write Fay
Mindful thought provoking write
BRAVO!
July 12th, 2020 05:35
Such Covert.
peto said:
Always a price to be paid dear Fay
Beautiful
Double coupled desire
Great line
July 10th, 2020 15:01
peto said:
Always a price to be paid dear Fay
Beautiful
Double coupled desire
Great line
July 10th, 2020 15:01
Such Covert.
MendedFences27 said:
Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years. Yet, they also yield beautiful memories. A lovely poem Fay. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2020 14:51
MendedFences27 said:
Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years. Yet, they also yield beautiful memories. A lovely poem Fay. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2020 14:51
Such Covert.
Michael Edwards said:
Never been involved in illicit anythings but love the write.
July 10th, 2020 13:32
Michael Edwards said:
Never been involved in illicit anythings but love the write.
July 10th, 2020 13:32
Such Covert.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - It happens FAY and Friends of ours have become involved in illicit but precious midnight trysts. Brian & I have never cheated on our former Girl & Boy Friends - except in TRANSITION ! For many reasons Brian & I feel our Love is too sacred not to last for ever ! But if you read tomorrows Poem I may leave Brian for a Man with ELVIS HAIR ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey
July 10th, 2020 12:08
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - It happens FAY and Friends of ours have become involved in illicit but precious midnight trysts. Brian & I have never cheated on our former Girl & Boy Friends - except in TRANSITION ! For many reasons Brian & I feel our Love is too sacred not to last for ever ! But if you read tomorrows Poem I may leave Brian for a Man with ELVIS HAIR ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey
July 10th, 2020 12:08
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