Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Twin-Flamed
Accidental Poet said:
Love makes a unique sound only the heart can hear. Excellent Fay.
June 29th, 2020 18:48
Accidental Poet said:
Love makes a unique sound only the heart can hear. Excellent Fay.
June 29th, 2020 18:48
Twin-Flamed
Suresh said:
where silence speaks
true love inflames
such as in your words
June 29th, 2020 09:26
Suresh said:
where silence speaks
true love inflames
such as in your words
June 29th, 2020 09:26
Twin-Flamed
dusk arising said:
Like the night time silence in the desert, it is what it is and needs not a brass band or waving of flags.
June 29th, 2020 07:28
dusk arising said:
Like the night time silence in the desert, it is what it is and needs not a brass band or waving of flags.
June 29th, 2020 07:28
Twin-Flamed
Neville said:
those opening words that make up that first line are sure gonna melt the hearts of all those that lose themselves to poetry.... Neville
June 29th, 2020 03:55
Neville said:
those opening words that make up that first line are sure gonna melt the hearts of all those that lose themselves to poetry.... Neville
June 29th, 2020 03:55
Would I
Accidental Poet said:
If a person has unconditional love within their heart, they have more wealth than any money or treasure in the world. This poem you penned Fay is my favorite I\'ve read in a long time.
June 28th, 2020 17:55
Accidental Poet said:
If a person has unconditional love within their heart, they have more wealth than any money or treasure in the world. This poem you penned Fay is my favorite I\'ve read in a long time.
June 28th, 2020 17:55
Would I
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Thnaks for sharing FAY a very wistful Poem about the *Value of Love* ameliorated by a wonderfully wistful Picture. After three years Courtship and three months marriage - to Brian - I feel (as a Lady) I am now - much better prepared to answer all these questions of the Heart ! Would I trade all lifes wealth ~ for one night of what we hve discovered in each other arms - the answer will always be NO NO NO ! Our Love is not for spurning ! Thanks for making us challenge our LOVE - AMEN !
Blessings - Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 28th, 2020 15:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Thnaks for sharing FAY a very wistful Poem about the *Value of Love* ameliorated by a wonderfully wistful Picture. After three years Courtship and three months marriage - to Brian - I feel (as a Lady) I am now - much better prepared to answer all these questions of the Heart ! Would I trade all lifes wealth ~ for one night of what we hve discovered in each other arms - the answer will always be NO NO NO ! Our Love is not for spurning ! Thanks for making us challenge our LOVE - AMEN !
Blessings - Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 28th, 2020 15:41
Would I
Neville said:
You dont really want me to answer that do ya...
Simply understated beauty and stacked so perfectly
I smile deep with the pain, the ache and the beauty of it ...
June 28th, 2020 05:20
Neville said:
You dont really want me to answer that do ya...
Simply understated beauty and stacked so perfectly
I smile deep with the pain, the ache and the beauty of it ...
June 28th, 2020 05:20
Would I
dusk arising said:
Long may our reward of fine memories enrich or later years. How powerful are the words we write of yesteryear\'s endeavours for our hearts relive the passions and the losses time and again as if they were before us and we could reach out and touch. Before the darkness which draws ever nearer cloaks all.
One of our great prizes in life is our will to place words among the feelings of yesterday that we may be alive in those moments again.
Your words today are all the more heartfelt as i post \"for Julie-Ann\" on mps.
June 28th, 2020 04:21
dusk arising said:
Long may our reward of fine memories enrich or later years. How powerful are the words we write of yesteryear\'s endeavours for our hearts relive the passions and the losses time and again as if they were before us and we could reach out and touch. Before the darkness which draws ever nearer cloaks all.
One of our great prizes in life is our will to place words among the feelings of yesterday that we may be alive in those moments again.
Your words today are all the more heartfelt as i post \"for Julie-Ann\" on mps.
June 28th, 2020 04:21
Would I
Goldfinch60 said:
Love passes all and any type of wealth, if you have love, you have the world.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 04:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Love passes all and any type of wealth, if you have love, you have the world.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 04:07
Would I
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Gold starts cold hearts
Excellent piece again Fay
Thank you
June 28th, 2020 03:40
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Gold starts cold hearts
Excellent piece again Fay
Thank you
June 28th, 2020 03:40
Made-Over.
Goldfinch60 said:
That recycling brings out a much stronger you to live your life in a positive manner and forge ahead into your wonderful life.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That recycling brings out a much stronger you to live your life in a positive manner and forge ahead into your wonderful life.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 00:46
Made-Over.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Sabbath Evening FAY - thanks for a beautiful self-portrait ! Love the POEM !
V 1. I have divided it into FOUR VERSES - OK. An acknowledgement that we are created as Individuals - and created for a Purpose. Brian & I are just realising that now we are married !
V 2. Passion revived - I am beginning to understand that concept. In marriage it is shared equally !
V 3. Aware of your *True Joyful Zest* and able to firm - Empowerment !
v 4. Submitting to NOTHING ! *A more enlightened New kind of ME* Self discovery is awesome !
In the Divine order of things we are all *Created for a Purpose* One of your many purposes is to be YOU on MPS - and encourage us - Day by Day by Day - with your Divine Poetry and (always) encouraging comments. You are always an encouragement and Role Model for Younger (and less experienced) Poets like Brian & I. You were born to be YOU & YOU alone ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 27th, 2020 16:19
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Sabbath Evening FAY - thanks for a beautiful self-portrait ! Love the POEM !
V 1. I have divided it into FOUR VERSES - OK. An acknowledgement that we are created as Individuals - and created for a Purpose. Brian & I are just realising that now we are married !
V 2. Passion revived - I am beginning to understand that concept. In marriage it is shared equally !
V 3. Aware of your *True Joyful Zest* and able to firm - Empowerment !
v 4. Submitting to NOTHING ! *A more enlightened New kind of ME* Self discovery is awesome !
In the Divine order of things we are all *Created for a Purpose* One of your many purposes is to be YOU on MPS - and encourage us - Day by Day by Day - with your Divine Poetry and (always) encouraging comments. You are always an encouragement and Role Model for Younger (and less experienced) Poets like Brian & I. You were born to be YOU & YOU alone ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 27th, 2020 16:19
Made-Over.
Bragee said:
Self love and has never been expressed more beautifully in words!
June 27th, 2020 14:21
Bragee said:
Self love and has never been expressed more beautifully in words!
June 27th, 2020 14:21
Made-Over.
Neville said:
I wish we could bottle these words too...
and if that were possible, I might just dispense with me torch and sit quietly in the glow, just holdin hands n stuff dont\'cha know...
This is just purrfect my friend....
June 27th, 2020 10:20
Neville said:
I wish we could bottle these words too...
and if that were possible, I might just dispense with me torch and sit quietly in the glow, just holdin hands n stuff dont\'cha know...
This is just purrfect my friend....
June 27th, 2020 10:20
Made-Over.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I changed me hair, now I can\'t do a thing with it! lol.
June 27th, 2020 05:54
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I changed me hair, now I can\'t do a thing with it! lol.
June 27th, 2020 05:54
Made-Over.
dusk arising said:
I saw your new pic for he first time ths morning. It is a well known phrase that beauty is only skin deep but having read your words for some time now i know your true beauty lies within you. However, I don\'t know how you\'ve gone and done it but, yer a bit of a beauty outside too ducks!
I\'m far too repulsive to dare a selfie be seen on here. Maybe the day will come when my ego permits though.
I admire the content of your words today. A statement in poetic form that you is wot you is and proud of it. Hoorah gal xx
June 27th, 2020 04:54
dusk arising said:
I saw your new pic for he first time ths morning. It is a well known phrase that beauty is only skin deep but having read your words for some time now i know your true beauty lies within you. However, I don\'t know how you\'ve gone and done it but, yer a bit of a beauty outside too ducks!
I\'m far too repulsive to dare a selfie be seen on here. Maybe the day will come when my ego permits though.
I admire the content of your words today. A statement in poetic form that you is wot you is and proud of it. Hoorah gal xx
June 27th, 2020 04:54
Made-Over.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I wish we could bottle this... excellent...
June 27th, 2020 04:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I wish we could bottle this... excellent...
June 27th, 2020 04:43
Authentic.
Goldfinch60 said:
You took me to that place with your words Fay and the music is playing.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
You took me to that place with your words Fay and the music is playing.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:06
Authentic.
Suresh said:
Only when one devious oneself of all distraction, can hear your music of esctasy.
Thank you.
June 26th, 2020 23:43
Suresh said:
Only when one devious oneself of all distraction, can hear your music of esctasy.
Thank you.
June 26th, 2020 23:43
Be To Me.
dusk arising said:
Such wishes expressed in words on screen or paper are desires of the heart which i fear come from a heart who has been cheated by their temporary nearness. Whilst the years ripen us they do not change such desire but we learn that perfection, though temporary, once tasted, is needy of more.
June 26th, 2020 13:30
dusk arising said:
Such wishes expressed in words on screen or paper are desires of the heart which i fear come from a heart who has been cheated by their temporary nearness. Whilst the years ripen us they do not change such desire but we learn that perfection, though temporary, once tasted, is needy of more.
June 26th, 2020 13:30
Authentic.
Accidental Poet said:
This place you speak of I believe to be within all our own hearts. Heaven is everywhere, but especially in our hearts. Great write Fay.
June 26th, 2020 11:40
Accidental Poet said:
This place you speak of I believe to be within all our own hearts. Heaven is everywhere, but especially in our hearts. Great write Fay.
June 26th, 2020 11:40
Authentic.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Angela here ! Love the Picture it reminds me of gazing out over Auckland Harbour longing for Brian to come & take me Home !
When we are Betwixt & Between we always need to Listen to Heavens Voice ! Unwalked World (The Path less Taken) always leed to DISCOVERY ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 26th, 2020 09:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Angela here ! Love the Picture it reminds me of gazing out over Auckland Harbour longing for Brian to come & take me Home !
When we are Betwixt & Between we always need to Listen to Heavens Voice ! Unwalked World (The Path less Taken) always leed to DISCOVERY ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 26th, 2020 09:50
Authentic.
dusk arising said:
Fine words upon which the hunger of a romantics heart may taste an appetiser.
June 26th, 2020 07:44
dusk arising said:
Fine words upon which the hunger of a romantics heart may taste an appetiser.
June 26th, 2020 07:44
Authentic.
orchidee said:
Yes, skilfully spun super sentences - I can\'t shay that after fhew whishkies. Hic! lol.
June 26th, 2020 07:36
orchidee said:
Yes, skilfully spun super sentences - I can\'t shay that after fhew whishkies. Hic! lol.
June 26th, 2020 07:36
Be To Me.
AwHec8 said:
Only from the mind of a woman could such beauty come. Nice Love song/poem. Taking the long haul approach of Love, instead of moments of fiery passion us men tend to bring? Concentrating on the visual we do, instead of the beauty within of the person, type thing.
June 26th, 2020 05:56
AwHec8 said:
Only from the mind of a woman could such beauty come. Nice Love song/poem. Taking the long haul approach of Love, instead of moments of fiery passion us men tend to bring? Concentrating on the visual we do, instead of the beauty within of the person, type thing.
June 26th, 2020 05:56
Authentic.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your meaningful scripted words deliver a message of importance. Freeing ourselves from troubling concerns will enable us “to hear the music of ecstasy”—inner peace.
So beautifully stated. You are an amazing poetess. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 05:47
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your meaningful scripted words deliver a message of importance. Freeing ourselves from troubling concerns will enable us “to hear the music of ecstasy”—inner peace.
So beautifully stated. You are an amazing poetess. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 05:47
Authentic.
Neville said:
amazing how one can find perfection after only eight rows of words so skilfully spun....
Neville
June 26th, 2020 03:57
Neville said:
amazing how one can find perfection after only eight rows of words so skilfully spun....
Neville
June 26th, 2020 03:57
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