Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Be To Me.
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is so special as shown in your words Fay.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is so special as shown in your words Fay.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 00:33
Be To Me.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here ! Thnak you for your elegant Love Poem !
V 1. Is a plea that *Love is for Life* not just CHRISTMAS
V 2. Search for qualities of LOVE - that are Infinite & Limitless
V 3. Not just Loves *Blush of Youth* but *Ageless Passion*
That is exactly what I was looking for (PERMANANCE) in
my relationship with BRIAN and I have found it ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 25th, 2020 13:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here ! Thnak you for your elegant Love Poem !
V 1. Is a plea that *Love is for Life* not just CHRISTMAS
V 2. Search for qualities of LOVE - that are Infinite & Limitless
V 3. Not just Loves *Blush of Youth* but *Ageless Passion*
That is exactly what I was looking for (PERMANANCE) in
my relationship with BRIAN and I have found it ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 25th, 2020 13:35
Be To Me.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Upon reading “Be To Me” and Andy’s “Beauty Within”, I found a recurring thread between the two that is very meaningful to me. Thank you for sharing your poetic pen.
Laura🌻
N.B. - Please read the comment I made to Andy’s “Beauty Within”.
June 25th, 2020 10:44
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Upon reading “Be To Me” and Andy’s “Beauty Within”, I found a recurring thread between the two that is very meaningful to me. Thank you for sharing your poetic pen.
Laura🌻
N.B. - Please read the comment I made to Andy’s “Beauty Within”.
June 25th, 2020 10:44
Be To Me.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay, though Fido don\'t let me have much passion! heehee.
June 25th, 2020 06:13
orchidee said:
Good write Fay, though Fido don\'t let me have much passion! heehee.
June 25th, 2020 06:13
Be To Me.
Accidental Poet said:
Love is but a beautiful rose of the heart. Great write Fay.
June 25th, 2020 05:39
Accidental Poet said:
Love is but a beautiful rose of the heart. Great write Fay.
June 25th, 2020 05:39
Be To Me.
Neville said:
who could possibly want for anything more... these words are perfectly placed on the page where they clearly belong...
June 25th, 2020 03:47
Neville said:
who could possibly want for anything more... these words are perfectly placed on the page where they clearly belong...
June 25th, 2020 03:47
Ethereal Music.
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful set of words Fay, once more I was there enchanted by that spell that you created.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful set of words Fay, once more I was there enchanted by that spell that you created.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:04
Ethereal Music.
Suresh said:
I immediately visualized the auroras, and their ethereal dance, and imagined the music if we could hear it.
Again, another engrossing piece.
June 24th, 2020 22:22
Suresh said:
I immediately visualized the auroras, and their ethereal dance, and imagined the music if we could hear it.
Again, another engrossing piece.
June 24th, 2020 22:22
Hunger.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A great write as always; into my favorites it goes.
I enjoyed the read. Every time you write about fishermen, I reminds me of my great grandfather.
After I finished reading your beautifully penned poem, I closed my eyes and envisioned my great grandmother waiting “bravely In port” for her fisherman. After they hugged and kissed, they’d hurry home to enjoy his favorite meal—spaghetti alla marinara!🍝
Laura🌻
June 24th, 2020 10:26
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A great write as always; into my favorites it goes.
I enjoyed the read. Every time you write about fishermen, I reminds me of my great grandfather.
After I finished reading your beautifully penned poem, I closed my eyes and envisioned my great grandmother waiting “bravely In port” for her fisherman. After they hugged and kissed, they’d hurry home to enjoy his favorite meal—spaghetti alla marinara!🍝
Laura🌻
June 24th, 2020 10:26
Ethereal Music.
orchidee said:
Yes, an ethereal write Fay. I dunno what it means - or do I? lol. *Gets out dictionary*
June 24th, 2020 10:11
orchidee said:
Yes, an ethereal write Fay. I dunno what it means - or do I? lol. *Gets out dictionary*
June 24th, 2020 10:11
Ethereal Music.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE + Thank you FAY for another beautiful Tone Poem - I could hear the Ethereal Music (Shades of Sinding *Russle of Spring*). I could see mist vieling the Silver Moon ! There are always Rainbows lurking in your expressive Odes ! I have saved as a fave !
Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check *Lockdown Loosening*
And our latest FUSION *JULY 4th .........*
Thanks A & B !
June 24th, 2020 08:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE + Thank you FAY for another beautiful Tone Poem - I could hear the Ethereal Music (Shades of Sinding *Russle of Spring*). I could see mist vieling the Silver Moon ! There are always Rainbows lurking in your expressive Odes ! I have saved as a fave !
Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check *Lockdown Loosening*
And our latest FUSION *JULY 4th .........*
Thanks A & B !
June 24th, 2020 08:35
Ethereal Music.
Neville said:
Everything about this page is ethereal Fay and then some...
June 24th, 2020 03:41
Neville said:
Everything about this page is ethereal Fay and then some...
June 24th, 2020 03:41
Hunger.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another beautiful write Fay, thank you for sharing your wonderful words.
An dy
June 24th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another beautiful write Fay, thank you for sharing your wonderful words.
An dy
June 24th, 2020 01:36
Hunger.
Suresh said:
How you have merged the hunger of one creature with the other, and their effort to satisfy, while their mates wait with searching eyes for their return.
Excellent
June 23rd, 2020 16:42
Suresh said:
How you have merged the hunger of one creature with the other, and their effort to satisfy, while their mates wait with searching eyes for their return.
Excellent
June 23rd, 2020 16:42
Hunger.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY thanks for your haunting Poem ! In your Elergy - BIRDS & BRIDES become one. Birds searching for food for themselves and their Young - Brides scouring the Horizon for *When the Boat comes in !* Deep Sea Fishing is one of the mosy hazadous occupations in the UK. Our Church does Carol Concerts each Year and raises nearly &1000 for the S E Coast Mission to Deep Sea Fishermen. There are many tragedies & needs each Year. Their slogan is *The true Price of Fish & Chips* AMEN Please check *Patio Pools Paradise* - Thanks.
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 23rd, 2020 14:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY thanks for your haunting Poem ! In your Elergy - BIRDS & BRIDES become one. Birds searching for food for themselves and their Young - Brides scouring the Horizon for *When the Boat comes in !* Deep Sea Fishing is one of the mosy hazadous occupations in the UK. Our Church does Carol Concerts each Year and raises nearly &1000 for the S E Coast Mission to Deep Sea Fishermen. There are many tragedies & needs each Year. Their slogan is *The true Price of Fish & Chips* AMEN Please check *Patio Pools Paradise* - Thanks.
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 23rd, 2020 14:04
Reflectioin.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay. Loved the POEM *SECRETS OF LOVE* It sure is true (so far) of Brian & I. Love your POEM also !
Love is too Perfect to DEFORM
Too Precious to DISORDER
Too Primary to DISTORT
True Love demands 100% dedication - AMEN ! Please check IMAGINATION
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
June 22nd, 2020 14:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay. Loved the POEM *SECRETS OF LOVE* It sure is true (so far) of Brian & I. Love your POEM also !
Love is too Perfect to DEFORM
Too Precious to DISORDER
Too Primary to DISTORT
True Love demands 100% dedication - AMEN ! Please check IMAGINATION
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
June 22nd, 2020 14:00
Reflectioin.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Good Morning ☀️
Hope all’s well with you.
My first read of the day—
and a powerful read it is.
Much to reflect upon; ultimately,
“Love demands but honest reflection
for its ground to blossom
and vows adorn.”
This perfectly penned poem
will definitely go into my favorites.
Thank you for sharing.
Take care my dear poetess.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2020 05:40
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Good Morning ☀️
Hope all’s well with you.
My first read of the day—
and a powerful read it is.
Much to reflect upon; ultimately,
“Love demands but honest reflection
for its ground to blossom
and vows adorn.”
This perfectly penned poem
will definitely go into my favorites.
Thank you for sharing.
Take care my dear poetess.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2020 05:40
Wonder.
Goldfinch60 said:
That wonder is always there within your words Fay.
Andy
June 22nd, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That wonder is always there within your words Fay.
Andy
June 22nd, 2020 00:56
Wonder.
MendedFences27 said:
I was just wondering how the beauty of this small gem can speak so loudly of Nature\'s wonderment. It\'s amazing how if one looks and listens what wonders one can find.
Another beauty, Fay.- Phil A.
June 19th, 2020 21:58
MendedFences27 said:
I was just wondering how the beauty of this small gem can speak so loudly of Nature\'s wonderment. It\'s amazing how if one looks and listens what wonders one can find.
Another beauty, Fay.- Phil A.
June 19th, 2020 21:58
Wonder.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY - Angela here ! Love the nuances in the elegant *Eulogy to Nature* that *Everything is B eautiful in its Own Way* There is a symbiosis of rhythm & harmony in the - Trill of the Birds - Song of the Bees - Chirping of Insects & the Rustle of Leaves. We sense many of these things simultaneously in a *Walk in the Woods* antytime of the Day or Night ! There is always a rich sensual *Tapestry of Wonder* ! You have unlocked *Natures Box of Wonder* for us in this Elegant Ode - AMEN . Please check *SOCIAL DISTANCE* Thanks
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 19th, 2020 17:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY - Angela here ! Love the nuances in the elegant *Eulogy to Nature* that *Everything is B eautiful in its Own Way* There is a symbiosis of rhythm & harmony in the - Trill of the Birds - Song of the Bees - Chirping of Insects & the Rustle of Leaves. We sense many of these things simultaneously in a *Walk in the Woods* antytime of the Day or Night ! There is always a rich sensual *Tapestry of Wonder* ! You have unlocked *Natures Box of Wonder* for us in this Elegant Ode - AMEN . Please check *SOCIAL DISTANCE* Thanks
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 19th, 2020 17:55
Wonder.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY - Angela here ! Love the nuances in the elegant *Eulogy to Nature that *Everything is B eautiful in its Own Way* There is a symbiosis of rhythm & harmony in the - Trill of the Birds - Song o the Bees - Chirping of Insects & the Rustle of leaves. We sense many of these things simultaneously in a *Walk in the Woods* antytime of the Day or Night ! There is always a rich sensual *Tapestry of Wnder* ! You have unlocked *Natures Box of Wonder* for us in this Elegant Ode - AMEN . Please check *SOCIAL DISTANCE* Thanks
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 19th, 2020 17:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY - Angela here ! Love the nuances in the elegant *Eulogy to Nature that *Everything is B eautiful in its Own Way* There is a symbiosis of rhythm & harmony in the - Trill of the Birds - Song o the Bees - Chirping of Insects & the Rustle of leaves. We sense many of these things simultaneously in a *Walk in the Woods* antytime of the Day or Night ! There is always a rich sensual *Tapestry of Wnder* ! You have unlocked *Natures Box of Wonder* for us in this Elegant Ode - AMEN . Please check *SOCIAL DISTANCE* Thanks
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 19th, 2020 17:55
Wonder.
Accidental Poet said:
To wonder is to imagine that anything is possible. Excellent Fay.
June 19th, 2020 15:56
Accidental Poet said:
To wonder is to imagine that anything is possible. Excellent Fay.
June 19th, 2020 15:56
Wonder.
dusk arising said:
And what is it that we each perceive? Well to each one of us a different perception i guess but certainly one wonders at the vastness of \'creation\' in our living world. It certainly brings you down to earth and without prompting leads you to reflect upon the insignificance of your own life and problems.
Well, thats my perception anyway. You words went into my brain (a quandary in itself) and dusted off the cobwebs in a corner which had been quietly dozing off.
June 19th, 2020 11:47
dusk arising said:
And what is it that we each perceive? Well to each one of us a different perception i guess but certainly one wonders at the vastness of \'creation\' in our living world. It certainly brings you down to earth and without prompting leads you to reflect upon the insignificance of your own life and problems.
Well, thats my perception anyway. You words went into my brain (a quandary in itself) and dusted off the cobwebs in a corner which had been quietly dozing off.
June 19th, 2020 11:47
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