Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Dreamscape.
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping, Taking visionary input and reconstructing it under slumber. Some feel they are real, visions from another place or time. Whatever. Thing is, some of us get our best ideas from our dreams or write stirring stuff such as this about them. A delightful read, Fay. It made me think. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:34
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping, Taking visionary input and reconstructing it under slumber. Some feel they are real, visions from another place or time. Whatever. Thing is, some of us get our best ideas from our dreams or write stirring stuff such as this about them. A delightful read, Fay. It made me think. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:34
Dreamscape.
dusk arising said:
Oh that bloody alarm clock!
Got to say this reminded me so much of my recent post about a dream though none of our dreams can be the same as another persons.
Yes, there\'s a lot of loving goes on in a dream. Wonderful to read your words on an amazing realm of self created fantasy featuring real characters who meld to our dream purpose. ..... sigh!... if only.
June 9th, 2020 09:31
dusk arising said:
Oh that bloody alarm clock!
Got to say this reminded me so much of my recent post about a dream though none of our dreams can be the same as another persons.
Yes, there\'s a lot of loving goes on in a dream. Wonderful to read your words on an amazing realm of self created fantasy featuring real characters who meld to our dream purpose. ..... sigh!... if only.
June 9th, 2020 09:31
Dreamscape.
Neville said:
there aint nothin ya can\'t do in a good dream is there...
this is lovely and proves the point both poetically and precisely...…
Neville
June 9th, 2020 04:50
Neville said:
there aint nothin ya can\'t do in a good dream is there...
this is lovely and proves the point both poetically and precisely...…
Neville
June 9th, 2020 04:50
Errant.
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there can be many who trade falsehoods in love, not caring just wanting. Fine words Fay.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there can be many who trade falsehoods in love, not caring just wanting. Fine words Fay.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:20
Errant.
Neville said:
there is something about the word errant that makes even the hardest of hardliners smile.. or is that a wince I feel forming...…
You nailed it Fay.... is it true that double agents have twice the fun..... they sure do live dangerously.....
Neville
June 8th, 2020 16:19
Neville said:
there is something about the word errant that makes even the hardest of hardliners smile.. or is that a wince I feel forming...…
You nailed it Fay.... is it true that double agents have twice the fun..... they sure do live dangerously.....
Neville
June 8th, 2020 16:19
Errant.
dusk arising said:
It always ends in tears. I\'ll stick to memories of the good times i had while they lasted and look to the future without risk of more of them there tears.
Mind you, I\'m up for a bit of flirting.
Lotta truth in your words today.
June 8th, 2020 12:46
dusk arising said:
It always ends in tears. I\'ll stick to memories of the good times i had while they lasted and look to the future without risk of more of them there tears.
Mind you, I\'m up for a bit of flirting.
Lotta truth in your words today.
June 8th, 2020 12:46
Errant.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Could I adapt your other poem on \'love\'?
June 8th, 2020 09:26
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Could I adapt your other poem on \'love\'?
June 8th, 2020 09:26
Foremost.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ An elegant LOVE POEM echoing Pauls Immortal Love Poem in 1 Corrinthians 13. The Joni Mitchel Paraphrase is cited by DA ~ beautiful to lsten to ! There are millions of epic Love Poems penned in thousands of languages ! This should not suprise us. GOD IS LOVE and Mankind was created in His Likeness and *Just a little lower the the ANGELS* AMEN. Consequenly *Love is and integral & essential part of our Character. Your elegant ODE describes *Exactly whats in the SKIN !* Thanks for caring ~ AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace be Yours - always !
Angela 💛 Brian 💛 Smokey Cat 💛
June 8th, 2020 03:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ An elegant LOVE POEM echoing Pauls Immortal Love Poem in 1 Corrinthians 13. The Joni Mitchel Paraphrase is cited by DA ~ beautiful to lsten to ! There are millions of epic Love Poems penned in thousands of languages ! This should not suprise us. GOD IS LOVE and Mankind was created in His Likeness and *Just a little lower the the ANGELS* AMEN. Consequenly *Love is and integral & essential part of our Character. Your elegant ODE describes *Exactly whats in the SKIN !* Thanks for caring ~ AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace be Yours - always !
Angela 💛 Brian 💛 Smokey Cat 💛
June 8th, 2020 03:33
Foremost.
AwHec8 said:
Love, always looking for the best in the world. Love your poem. Don
June 7th, 2020 08:17
AwHec8 said:
Love, always looking for the best in the world. Love your poem. Don
June 7th, 2020 08:17
Foremost.
orchidee said:
We see then that love is not just one thing. The \'Love is...\' cartoons are good.
I could set this to a hymn-poem, if you wish, though it may break up some of the rhyme.
June 7th, 2020 05:58
orchidee said:
We see then that love is not just one thing. The \'Love is...\' cartoons are good.
I could set this to a hymn-poem, if you wish, though it may break up some of the rhyme.
June 7th, 2020 05:58
Foremost.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so wonderful and will always be with you, with us and hopefully with everybody.
Fine words Fay.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so wonderful and will always be with you, with us and hopefully with everybody.
Fine words Fay.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:20
Foremost.
dusk arising said:
It takes us a while to learn what love is. Romantic love with all it\'s bells and whistles is probably our introduction to love. Then gradually we realise more and more about the love within us and around us. Your words are a delight. I see in them the famed Corinthians theme which is astounding.
We are gifted with love and learn to cherish love. It is so big a subject, covering so many facets of existence that no written piece could fully do it justice. I think that your piece, as do many great poems, serves to draw our attention to the mystique and magic of this thing called love.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=faaJqFVP__Q
June 7th, 2020 04:05
dusk arising said:
It takes us a while to learn what love is. Romantic love with all it\'s bells and whistles is probably our introduction to love. Then gradually we realise more and more about the love within us and around us. Your words are a delight. I see in them the famed Corinthians theme which is astounding.
We are gifted with love and learn to cherish love. It is so big a subject, covering so many facets of existence that no written piece could fully do it justice. I think that your piece, as do many great poems, serves to draw our attention to the mystique and magic of this thing called love.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=faaJqFVP__Q
June 7th, 2020 04:05
Foremost.
Neville said:
now who in their write mind is gonna argue with ya here eh\' … no one, that\'s who... Lovely..
Neville
June 7th, 2020 03:42
Neville said:
now who in their write mind is gonna argue with ya here eh\' … no one, that\'s who... Lovely..
Neville
June 7th, 2020 03:42
Frenzy.
Goldfinch60 said:
The feeding frenzy is happening as I write these words, the starlings, sparrows, blackbirds and goldfinches have just been fed.
It is wonderful to see the young being fed.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The feeding frenzy is happening as I write these words, the starlings, sparrows, blackbirds and goldfinches have just been fed.
It is wonderful to see the young being fed.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:48
Frenzy.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great observation piece Fay We have a gobby little blackbird she fiercely defends our hedge in the front garden now she\'s got us fending off cats for her
Great piece BRAVO
June 5th, 2020 15:35
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great observation piece Fay We have a gobby little blackbird she fiercely defends our hedge in the front garden now she\'s got us fending off cats for her
Great piece BRAVO
June 5th, 2020 15:35
Frenzy.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - we\'ve got pigeons nesting in a conifer so the songbirds and others are giving the garden a miss. And we miss them.
June 5th, 2020 14:20
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - we\'ve got pigeons nesting in a conifer so the songbirds and others are giving the garden a miss. And we miss them.
June 5th, 2020 14:20
Frenzy.
dusk arising said:
It\'s been a hard year for my neighbourly blackbird. In the evenings i notice how knackered she is as she makes her low and ragged flight to her song perch where she throws herself down. It\'s unusual to hear her panting for breath before she starts her beautiful song.
Now, being the oft early riser that i am, regularly i would hear her yawning before starting into the dawn chorus but lately all i get are her gentle snores until the chicks pestering forces her out to hunt juicey worms and crusty flies.
The old bird still loves to nibble at the seeds I put though the prowling crafty cat is a worry.
June 5th, 2020 12:21
dusk arising said:
It\'s been a hard year for my neighbourly blackbird. In the evenings i notice how knackered she is as she makes her low and ragged flight to her song perch where she throws herself down. It\'s unusual to hear her panting for breath before she starts her beautiful song.
Now, being the oft early riser that i am, regularly i would hear her yawning before starting into the dawn chorus but lately all i get are her gentle snores until the chicks pestering forces her out to hunt juicey worms and crusty flies.
The old bird still loves to nibble at the seeds I put though the prowling crafty cat is a worry.
June 5th, 2020 12:21
Frenzy.
Saxon Crow said:
Love it. I watch all the starling fledglings every morning out and about with mum and dadand mr and mrs crow with junior. Its such a treat to watch. I love youve put this into poetry.
June 5th, 2020 09:56
Saxon Crow said:
Love it. I watch all the starling fledglings every morning out and about with mum and dadand mr and mrs crow with junior. Its such a treat to watch. I love youve put this into poetry.
June 5th, 2020 09:56
Frenzy.
Neville said:
I read these words earlier but had to answer a wee call of nature....
this is lovely... did you know that once all the fledglings have flown the nest.. you won\'t see a cock blackbird for ages....
Oh\' I just love them screeching gapes .. I can picture them now …
Neville
June 5th, 2020 04:53
Neville said:
I read these words earlier but had to answer a wee call of nature....
this is lovely... did you know that once all the fledglings have flown the nest.. you won\'t see a cock blackbird for ages....
Oh\' I just love them screeching gapes .. I can picture them now …
Neville
June 5th, 2020 04:53
Frenzy.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Cheers - here\'s to some more of them noon\'s scorching hours!
June 5th, 2020 03:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Cheers - here\'s to some more of them noon\'s scorching hours!
June 5th, 2020 03:58
Duet.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, listening to Natures Chorus by a stream at dusk always brings glory within us.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, listening to Natures Chorus by a stream at dusk always brings glory within us.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 00:56
Duet.
Neville said:
Sounds spectacular Fay and reads remarkable..
a duet crying out to be shared....
June 4th, 2020 12:47
Neville said:
Sounds spectacular Fay and reads remarkable..
a duet crying out to be shared....
June 4th, 2020 12:47
Duet.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was gonna do a duet with a bird, but it flew off. Doh! Well, it knew what my singing was like. lol.
June 4th, 2020 05:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was gonna do a duet with a bird, but it flew off. Doh! Well, it knew what my singing was like. lol.
June 4th, 2020 05:42
Duet.
dusk arising said:
Again those silken threads woven to delifght.. but wait.... what other light between the craftwork shines?... Tis the wonder thrown forth by the very presence of moonlight\'s peeping.... for what brings the damsel Fay to woodland this fair night..... when shawl of darkness covers true intent and blush, no more required, yields to pagan lust..... Nay poet Dusk... away with such thoughts. Tis the beauty of nightingales song attracts M\'lady heineken.
You at your best again with natures gifts.
June 4th, 2020 04:44
dusk arising said:
Again those silken threads woven to delifght.. but wait.... what other light between the craftwork shines?... Tis the wonder thrown forth by the very presence of moonlight\'s peeping.... for what brings the damsel Fay to woodland this fair night..... when shawl of darkness covers true intent and blush, no more required, yields to pagan lust..... Nay poet Dusk... away with such thoughts. Tis the beauty of nightingales song attracts M\'lady heineken.
You at your best again with natures gifts.
June 4th, 2020 04:44
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