Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Approach.
Goldfinch60 said:
In life each moment becomes so near but they must not be missed as every moment in life is special.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
In life each moment becomes so near but they must not be missed as every moment in life is special.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:11
Approach.
dusk arising said:
This is a riddle..oopps... talking of which, back in a minute...
Ah, that\'s better. ..... nope, this time you\'ve baffled my weather torn, sunburned, soaked aridity. I\'m confused.... i shall return and bounce of others comments for clarity.....
June 3rd, 2020 13:19
dusk arising said:
This is a riddle..oopps... talking of which, back in a minute...
Ah, that\'s better. ..... nope, this time you\'ve baffled my weather torn, sunburned, soaked aridity. I\'m confused.... i shall return and bounce of others comments for clarity.....
June 3rd, 2020 13:19
Approach.
Neville said:
The way is clear
tis just so hard to achieve
but any way you look at it...
this is so near perfect …
June 3rd, 2020 07:23
Neville said:
The way is clear
tis just so hard to achieve
but any way you look at it...
this is so near perfect …
June 3rd, 2020 07:23
Untied..
Neville said:
…. it seems to me she barely leaves your side dear Fay...
without a doubt, another splendid composition my friend
Neville
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
Neville said:
…. it seems to me she barely leaves your side dear Fay...
without a doubt, another splendid composition my friend
Neville
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
Untied..
dusk arising said:
Ahhh you secrets are exposed! Well maybe a couple of them...... poets like you huh?... My excuse is that i\'m gullible..... hitching a ride upon a fantasy, a ticket on a street car named despair or delusion.
But there again, Goldfinches \"If only\" unfurls a landsape of possibilities.
Love the way you weave those thoughts into your own particular word style to enchant and tease us into carefully slowing down that we may absorb. or try to absorb, the intent between the silken threads.
June 2nd, 2020 06:09
dusk arising said:
Ahhh you secrets are exposed! Well maybe a couple of them...... poets like you huh?... My excuse is that i\'m gullible..... hitching a ride upon a fantasy, a ticket on a street car named despair or delusion.
But there again, Goldfinches \"If only\" unfurls a landsape of possibilities.
Love the way you weave those thoughts into your own particular word style to enchant and tease us into carefully slowing down that we may absorb. or try to absorb, the intent between the silken threads.
June 2nd, 2020 06:09
Untied..
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to writing a poem. Well, I know now! heehee.
June 2nd, 2020 05:38
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to writing a poem. Well, I know now! heehee.
June 2nd, 2020 05:38
Untied..
Goldfinch60 said:
That Muse can attack us in so many different modes and moods Fay. May it long be so for us all.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
That Muse can attack us in so many different modes and moods Fay. May it long be so for us all.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 02:07
Past Passion.
Goldfinch60 said:
That meeting again can bring such powerful feelings within us.
Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That meeting again can bring such powerful feelings within us.
Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:30
Past Passion.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the second time around,sounds exciting
June 1st, 2020 18:58
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the second time around,sounds exciting
June 1st, 2020 18:58
Past Passion.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Brian here ! Your elegant *ODE to Old Flames* rang several Belles \" Before I met ANGELA -
when I was 33 - I had endured / enjoyed *16 years of Courtship !* Some sank without trace - some showed promise and some waned to wax again ! Refreshing Regrets and Distilling Past Passions are euphamisms for *Trying to rekindle the Flame !* In my experience it never really worked and My Mantra when I met Angela was (and still is) *Old Flames cant hold a candle to YOU !* The past three years with ANGELA have been *A Revelation of Love* and Marriage (And Casa Nuestra y Gato Nuestro SMOKEY) are an Infinite Dimension of Eternal Love ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !
June 1st, 2020 14:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Brian here ! Your elegant *ODE to Old Flames* rang several Belles \" Before I met ANGELA -
when I was 33 - I had endured / enjoyed *16 years of Courtship !* Some sank without trace - some showed promise and some waned to wax again ! Refreshing Regrets and Distilling Past Passions are euphamisms for *Trying to rekindle the Flame !* In my experience it never really worked and My Mantra when I met Angela was (and still is) *Old Flames cant hold a candle to YOU !* The past three years with ANGELA have been *A Revelation of Love* and Marriage (And Casa Nuestra y Gato Nuestro SMOKEY) are an Infinite Dimension of Eternal Love ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !
June 1st, 2020 14:36
Past Passion.
dusk arising said:
Mentally the passion to relive is as strong as ever. The desire stronger. The flesh sadly weaker and flabby. The intelligence - well, frankly i\'m wise enough to keep daydreams in their place but. As before, thankful to have scenes from the past to relive and romance.
Yet more Heineken poetry woven from your life\'s inspiration.
June 1st, 2020 06:11
dusk arising said:
Mentally the passion to relive is as strong as ever. The desire stronger. The flesh sadly weaker and flabby. The intelligence - well, frankly i\'m wise enough to keep daydreams in their place but. As before, thankful to have scenes from the past to relive and romance.
Yet more Heineken poetry woven from your life\'s inspiration.
June 1st, 2020 06:11
Past Passion.
Neville said:
this is outstanding Fay.. makes me feel quite dizzy and I have only taken the smallest of sips so far...
Neville
June 1st, 2020 05:41
Neville said:
this is outstanding Fay.. makes me feel quite dizzy and I have only taken the smallest of sips so far...
Neville
June 1st, 2020 05:41
Past Passion.
orchidee said:
I should try this, but Fido keeps barking. he says - no ardour or libido for me. He\'s a pest! lol.
June 1st, 2020 05:32
orchidee said:
I should try this, but Fido keeps barking. he says - no ardour or libido for me. He\'s a pest! lol.
June 1st, 2020 05:32
Elsewhere.
Goldfinch60 said:
That amorous fire can be seen in such wonderful places.
Andy
June 1st, 2020 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
That amorous fire can be seen in such wonderful places.
Andy
June 1st, 2020 00:09
Elsewhere.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY - Angela Here ! Love the nuances in this Poem. As you know we are just starting our married life together so such scenes as you describe are few so far - but much to anticipate when we are free to explore the World (of uninhibited Love) again - AMEN ! Love the romantic pic - A !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
May 31st, 2020 14:08
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY - Angela Here ! Love the nuances in this Poem. As you know we are just starting our married life together so such scenes as you describe are few so far - but much to anticipate when we are free to explore the World (of uninhibited Love) again - AMEN ! Love the romantic pic - A !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
May 31st, 2020 14:08
Elsewhere.
orchidee said:
Fido, me watchdog, usually barks at \'ardorous\' references - \'quiet Fido!\' lol.
May 31st, 2020 07:25
orchidee said:
Fido, me watchdog, usually barks at \'ardorous\' references - \'quiet Fido!\' lol.
May 31st, 2020 07:25
Elsewhere.
dusk arising said:
Oh you brought such joy to me with these words. I\'m so pleased i led the life which gave me such wonderful memories as are triggered by your words today.
Once again, with your Heineken of poetry, you reach the parts other poets cannot reach.
May 31st, 2020 05:42
dusk arising said:
Oh you brought such joy to me with these words. I\'m so pleased i led the life which gave me such wonderful memories as are triggered by your words today.
Once again, with your Heineken of poetry, you reach the parts other poets cannot reach.
May 31st, 2020 05:42
Elsewhere.
Neville said:
I know that feeling … thank heaven for fond memories and fine poetry eh\'...
a fine write to coin but a phrase ….. Neville
May 31st, 2020 04:19
Neville said:
I know that feeling … thank heaven for fond memories and fine poetry eh\'...
a fine write to coin but a phrase ….. Neville
May 31st, 2020 04:19
Dilemma.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, finding the truth in these days certainly is a dilemma.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, finding the truth in these days certainly is a dilemma.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:47
Dilemma.
Neville said:
this days offering is a fine example of how well, astute and knowingly you wield your pen...
May 29th, 2020 07:20
Neville said:
this days offering is a fine example of how well, astute and knowingly you wield your pen...
May 29th, 2020 07:20
Dilemma.
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautifully worded Fay, and I agree with you, it is a dilemma, especially under the current circumstances.
Hope that you are keeping well in the continuing madness.
Ben.
May 29th, 2020 05:09
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautifully worded Fay, and I agree with you, it is a dilemma, especially under the current circumstances.
Hope that you are keeping well in the continuing madness.
Ben.
May 29th, 2020 05:09
Deadly.
Goldfinch60 said:
Kestrels are wonderful birds to see, as are all raptors, I have seen most of the types of raptor in the UK but the main one missing is the Golden Eagle, I have seen Sea Eagles though.
Great write on a wonderful bird.
Andy
May 29th, 2020 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Kestrels are wonderful birds to see, as are all raptors, I have seen most of the types of raptor in the UK but the main one missing is the Golden Eagle, I have seen Sea Eagles though.
Great write on a wonderful bird.
Andy
May 29th, 2020 00:44
Deadly.
Neville said:
Oh\' how well you have captured the very essence of the \'Windhover\' my friend... and indeed the harsh world in which they fail or thrive..... N
May 28th, 2020 10:18
Neville said:
Oh\' how well you have captured the very essence of the \'Windhover\' my friend... and indeed the harsh world in which they fail or thrive..... N
May 28th, 2020 10:18
Deadly.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write, great bird. It must be bird day today.
May 28th, 2020 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Great write, great bird. It must be bird day today.
May 28th, 2020 09:11
Deadly.
peto said:
Watched a kite do something similar this week
Lovely write
Fav line
Death hurls toward life
May 28th, 2020 08:57
peto said:
Watched a kite do something similar this week
Lovely write
Fav line
Death hurls toward life
May 28th, 2020 08:57
Deadly.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Fay ~ both our Muses seem to be BIRDING this morning. Both the KESTREL & the KINGFISHER are excellent Hunters in their own domain. Natures complex & necessary Food Chains & Food Webs are a thing of intrinsic beauty. We are as *Red in Tooth & Claw* as much the Birds of Prey. Kestrals - Kingfishers - Kittyhawks - Dont get their dinner served on a Plate - they have to work for it ! Thanks for servng another beautiful Symbiosis of Pic & Poem to brighten our May Morning !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat !
May 28th, 2020 06:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Fay ~ both our Muses seem to be BIRDING this morning. Both the KESTREL & the KINGFISHER are excellent Hunters in their own domain. Natures complex & necessary Food Chains & Food Webs are a thing of intrinsic beauty. We are as *Red in Tooth & Claw* as much the Birds of Prey. Kestrals - Kingfishers - Kittyhawks - Dont get their dinner served on a Plate - they have to work for it ! Thanks for servng another beautiful Symbiosis of Pic & Poem to brighten our May Morning !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat !
May 28th, 2020 06:07
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