Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Alteration.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once more Fay, I was lost in those evening skies waiting for Luna to rise upon me.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once more Fay, I was lost in those evening skies waiting for Luna to rise upon me.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:47
Alteration.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Thank you for a perfect picture & Tone Poem which encapsulaes perfectly *The End of the Day !* Often as each Day capitulates to Night we are indoors and so see it only *Through glass darkly* However in your Tone Poem - You descript it in all its Dynamic Glory !
V 1. The LIGHT does indeed hibernate to
be replaced by Sister Moon !
V 2. MAUVE VELVET is a perfect description
of the late evening SKY
V 3. For those in LOCKDOWN (like Brian etc)
each person is increasingly weary and
welcomes the onset of LUNAS gentle smile
Thanks for sharing - Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
May 27th, 2020 14:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Thank you for a perfect picture & Tone Poem which encapsulaes perfectly *The End of the Day !* Often as each Day capitulates to Night we are indoors and so see it only *Through glass darkly* However in your Tone Poem - You descript it in all its Dynamic Glory !
V 1. The LIGHT does indeed hibernate to
be replaced by Sister Moon !
V 2. MAUVE VELVET is a perfect description
of the late evening SKY
V 3. For those in LOCKDOWN (like Brian etc)
each person is increasingly weary and
welcomes the onset of LUNAS gentle smile
Thanks for sharing - Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
May 27th, 2020 14:35
Alteration.
Neville said:
I could lay here in the depth of these words till all around me grows cold … they are like a refreshing and much needed hot bath ma\'am …. N : )
May 27th, 2020 10:29
Neville said:
I could lay here in the depth of these words till all around me grows cold … they are like a refreshing and much needed hot bath ma\'am …. N : )
May 27th, 2020 10:29
Colour-Power.
Goldfinch60 said:
The colours in life are so meaningful, they can bring every emotion.
Andy
May 26th, 2020 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The colours in life are so meaningful, they can bring every emotion.
Andy
May 26th, 2020 00:36
Colour-Power.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - HOLIDAY today - helping Brian to make the Garden - FOX PROOF for SMOKEY and SMOKEY PROOF for the BIRDS. Brian & I are both on our H & S Commitees @ work so we have to Practice what we Preach !
Love the Colour Chart (can I use it in a Poem - Please ?) and the Poem ! My Profession as a Physio is concerned with improving my Clients Mobility & Self-esteem. Colour is important and Green is a very soothing colour for my Salon. Blue is a soothing colour for people to wear when they are in recovery - It was used by wounded ex-Servicemen. We all give out a Spiritual Aura as do Angels ! It is only when we are in complete Harmony (or Love !) with another Person that we can visulise their aura ! After a shower Brian radiates MAUVE and he says I radiate MAGENTA - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !
Please check *LIFE IS LIKE A CROSSWORD* Thanks !
May 25th, 2020 10:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - HOLIDAY today - helping Brian to make the Garden - FOX PROOF for SMOKEY and SMOKEY PROOF for the BIRDS. Brian & I are both on our H & S Commitees @ work so we have to Practice what we Preach !
Love the Colour Chart (can I use it in a Poem - Please ?) and the Poem ! My Profession as a Physio is concerned with improving my Clients Mobility & Self-esteem. Colour is important and Green is a very soothing colour for my Salon. Blue is a soothing colour for people to wear when they are in recovery - It was used by wounded ex-Servicemen. We all give out a Spiritual Aura as do Angels ! It is only when we are in complete Harmony (or Love !) with another Person that we can visulise their aura ! After a shower Brian radiates MAUVE and he says I radiate MAGENTA - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !
Please check *LIFE IS LIKE A CROSSWORD* Thanks !
May 25th, 2020 10:25
Connection.
peto said:
Read this then wrote for 1st time in a while
Inspiring
Ta
May 25th, 2020 05:10
peto said:
Read this then wrote for 1st time in a while
Inspiring
Ta
May 25th, 2020 05:10
Colour-Power.
peto said:
Your writing is always colourful Fay
Unseen glows eh
At least now I know why you went for purple hair a while back.
Always a pleasure to read
May 25th, 2020 05:03
peto said:
Your writing is always colourful Fay
Unseen glows eh
At least now I know why you went for purple hair a while back.
Always a pleasure to read
May 25th, 2020 05:03
Connection.
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Very will put together I loved the part “Between
connection are threads
composed as unsaid wordlets.”
Very inspiring and very impactful with your words. Love it ❤️
May 24th, 2020 18:23
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Very will put together I loved the part “Between
connection are threads
composed as unsaid wordlets.”
Very inspiring and very impactful with your words. Love it ❤️
May 24th, 2020 18:23
Crystaline Charm.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ Angela here ! I love GLASS PAPER WIEGHTS and have a small collection. I like the ones with spirals in. Glass is a Supercooled Liquid which is why it is transparent which is one of its chief qualities. Because he is a *Chemist* Brian has a collection of natural crytals. They are exhibied in our China Cabinet along with our Crystal Wine Glasses etc. There is space for up to 10 of my Paper Weights which I rotate ! Thanks for sharing a great Purchase in a perfect Picture & Poem.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check SMOKEY (III) ~ Thanks.
May 24th, 2020 16:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ Angela here ! I love GLASS PAPER WIEGHTS and have a small collection. I like the ones with spirals in. Glass is a Supercooled Liquid which is why it is transparent which is one of its chief qualities. Because he is a *Chemist* Brian has a collection of natural crytals. They are exhibied in our China Cabinet along with our Crystal Wine Glasses etc. There is space for up to 10 of my Paper Weights which I rotate ! Thanks for sharing a great Purchase in a perfect Picture & Poem.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check SMOKEY (III) ~ Thanks.
May 24th, 2020 16:15
Connection.
Neville said:
each one a little pearl of wisdom
without connection, one is nothing
May 24th, 2020 03:45
Neville said:
each one a little pearl of wisdom
without connection, one is nothing
May 24th, 2020 03:45
Connection.
Goldfinch60 said:
Each page opened leads us to a new chapter in our life.
Good one Fay.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 03:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Each page opened leads us to a new chapter in our life.
Good one Fay.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 03:34
Clocking Time.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Folk suffer them \'insufferable swathes of time\' when I sing. Time don\'t go quickly for them, as they\'re not enjoying themselves listening to my torturous tones! lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:26
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Folk suffer them \'insufferable swathes of time\' when I sing. Time don\'t go quickly for them, as they\'re not enjoying themselves listening to my torturous tones! lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:26
Clocking Time.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’ve enjoyed reading this piece that you penned ‘moons ago’.
As Neville stated, “Timeless”!
Stay safe and be well,
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 08:26
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’ve enjoyed reading this piece that you penned ‘moons ago’.
As Neville stated, “Timeless”!
Stay safe and be well,
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 08:26
Release.
Neville said:
Goodbyes oft taste bitter, rarely have I known a sweet one....
well penned my fine literary friend... Neville
May 23rd, 2020 06:13
Neville said:
Goodbyes oft taste bitter, rarely have I known a sweet one....
well penned my fine literary friend... Neville
May 23rd, 2020 06:13
Crystaline Charm.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, those paperweights can be fascinating in the way they draw you into them so that you seem to become part of them.
I get a similar feeling with artworks and some of Michael Edwards abstract paintings pull me into them so that I seem to be part of them as well.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, those paperweights can be fascinating in the way they draw you into them so that you seem to become part of them.
I get a similar feeling with artworks and some of Michael Edwards abstract paintings pull me into them so that I seem to be part of them as well.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:23
Crystaline Charm.
Neville said:
a most magnificent artefact and tis clear in a mysteriously opaque way just how and why you were inspired to craft such a beautiful dedication … I have an ancient witches orb that hangs in my study window I never tire of, because it just wont let me....
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 05:00
Neville said:
a most magnificent artefact and tis clear in a mysteriously opaque way just how and why you were inspired to craft such a beautiful dedication … I have an ancient witches orb that hangs in my study window I never tire of, because it just wont let me....
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 05:00
Chains.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words Fay, the sun may set and those tears may flow but the sun will always rise again and dry those tears.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 23:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words Fay, the sun may set and those tears may flow but the sun will always rise again and dry those tears.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 23:49
Chains.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A pensively fine poem Fay. Very well put together.
Ex animo, Alan
May 21st, 2020 14:59
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A pensively fine poem Fay. Very well put together.
Ex animo, Alan
May 21st, 2020 14:59
Chains.
Neville said:
held me transfixed for the duration.. and then some.. exquisite... to coin or term a phrase …… Neville
May 21st, 2020 07:14
Neville said:
held me transfixed for the duration.. and then some.. exquisite... to coin or term a phrase …… Neville
May 21st, 2020 07:14
Chains.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD THORSDAY FAY ~ Brian Here busy making the garden safe for SMOKEY for FRIDAY we are bth so so excited and He senses something is afoot. The Cattery says we can take his scrstching post with us cos He is used to it ! Love the Picture & the form of the POEM but the contents is MELANCHOLY. We were in our 30\'s when we got married but some of our Friends (who got married Younger) have now split up ~ mainly due to Male Infidelity - so so sad. Sunset reminiscences ~ Yearning - Regret - Goodbye - Ache & Tears ! It happens but we PRAY (every day) it will NEVER EVER happen to US ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
Please check *AN IMPOSSIBLE DREAM* ~ Thanks !
May 21st, 2020 03:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD THORSDAY FAY ~ Brian Here busy making the garden safe for SMOKEY for FRIDAY we are bth so so excited and He senses something is afoot. The Cattery says we can take his scrstching post with us cos He is used to it ! Love the Picture & the form of the POEM but the contents is MELANCHOLY. We were in our 30\'s when we got married but some of our Friends (who got married Younger) have now split up ~ mainly due to Male Infidelity - so so sad. Sunset reminiscences ~ Yearning - Regret - Goodbye - Ache & Tears ! It happens but we PRAY (every day) it will NEVER EVER happen to US ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
Please check *AN IMPOSSIBLE DREAM* ~ Thanks !
May 21st, 2020 03:37
Paint\'s Heat.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Angela & I find all of VGs Paintings emotional. They are Larger than Life & the colour is Bolder than Bold ! Especially Los Flores del Sol ! They all look 3D because of the thickness of the Oil Paint. Great mediun to dabble in ! With VGs paintings you can always feel the ANGST - Impressionism @ its zenith !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
Please check WATERFALLS ~ Thanks !
May 20th, 2020 17:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Angela & I find all of VGs Paintings emotional. They are Larger than Life & the colour is Bolder than Bold ! Especially Los Flores del Sol ! They all look 3D because of the thickness of the Oil Paint. Great mediun to dabble in ! With VGs paintings you can always feel the ANGST - Impressionism @ its zenith !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
Please check WATERFALLS ~ Thanks !
May 20th, 2020 17:37
Paint\'s Heat.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Just cos he had one outer ear left, it don\'t mean he could not hear! Some may forget that. Doh!
May 20th, 2020 06:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Just cos he had one outer ear left, it don\'t mean he could not hear! Some may forget that. Doh!
May 20th, 2020 06:47
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