Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Glorious Din.
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to see skeins of geese but the most impressive are to see murmerations of starlings, as in your picture, I have been privileged to see them a few times - wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2020 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to see skeins of geese but the most impressive are to see murmerations of starlings, as in your picture, I have been privileged to see them a few times - wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2020 02:58
Glorious Din.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderful piece by you Fay. Exactly as it happens.
I have entertained several families of starlings (around four and twenty x 2) over the past month when the chicklings have been reared and now almost fully fledged. They will soon be gone now to join those in the image provided by you.
Oh to be a songbird, highly in the sky;
Oh to sing her sweetly song, oh to have her eye.
Ex animo, Alan
June 12th, 2020 02:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderful piece by you Fay. Exactly as it happens.
I have entertained several families of starlings (around four and twenty x 2) over the past month when the chicklings have been reared and now almost fully fledged. They will soon be gone now to join those in the image provided by you.
Oh to be a songbird, highly in the sky;
Oh to sing her sweetly song, oh to have her eye.
Ex animo, Alan
June 12th, 2020 02:58
Voiceless.
Goldfinch60 said:
Those silences can be so profound and can show so much love between you.
Andy
June 12th, 2020 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Those silences can be so profound and can show so much love between you.
Andy
June 12th, 2020 00:48
Voiceless.
Suresh said:
So equisitely expressed and so true. True love shouts when just the sight of each other makes the heart flutter, or when just holding hands send ripples up ones spine, and......
June 11th, 2020 18:55
Suresh said:
So equisitely expressed and so true. True love shouts when just the sight of each other makes the heart flutter, or when just holding hands send ripples up ones spine, and......
June 11th, 2020 18:55
Voiceless.
MendedFences27 said:
Of course there is silent-speak. Its a raising of an eyebrow, a roll of the eyes, a nod of the head, a licking of the lips, etc. They meet and never speak and live happily ever-after. To some silence is golden. There is a wavelength above audible that destiny enlivens when lovers meet.
What a great thought and wonderful poem. Fay you\'ve done it again.- Phil A.
June 11th, 2020 15:48
MendedFences27 said:
Of course there is silent-speak. Its a raising of an eyebrow, a roll of the eyes, a nod of the head, a licking of the lips, etc. They meet and never speak and live happily ever-after. To some silence is golden. There is a wavelength above audible that destiny enlivens when lovers meet.
What a great thought and wonderful poem. Fay you\'ve done it again.- Phil A.
June 11th, 2020 15:48
Voiceless.
Neville said:
feel it, read it, live it.. who needs a voice anyway
Neville
June 11th, 2020 12:35
Neville said:
feel it, read it, live it.. who needs a voice anyway
Neville
June 11th, 2020 12:35
Voiceless.
dusk arising said:
Hmmm always was a bit of a dilemma for me, these speechless transmissions. I\'m asking myself does she fancy me as much as i fancy her... why isn\'t she waving a flag at me.... is it just my lusty ego saying she does.... and before you know it i\'ve realised i\'m too shy and chickened out of the whole thing.
Secret whispers? I must be in need of a hearing aid!
June 11th, 2020 05:53
dusk arising said:
Hmmm always was a bit of a dilemma for me, these speechless transmissions. I\'m asking myself does she fancy me as much as i fancy her... why isn\'t she waving a flag at me.... is it just my lusty ego saying she does.... and before you know it i\'ve realised i\'m too shy and chickened out of the whole thing.
Secret whispers? I must be in need of a hearing aid!
June 11th, 2020 05:53
Destined.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Fay. May that star rise again.
Andy
June 11th, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Fay. May that star rise again.
Andy
June 11th, 2020 00:25
Destined.
dusk arising said:
We are left with questions and a deep longing to find meaningful answers..
But there are no answers to loss, no answers to disappointments, no answers to unfulfilled dreams......
And still the stars look down upon us as some other couples walk along the beach. Beneath the stars we learn that we just don\'t matter in the great scheme of things, to sit back, relax and be thankful.
Beautiful words of life from you today.
June 10th, 2020 17:44
dusk arising said:
We are left with questions and a deep longing to find meaningful answers..
But there are no answers to loss, no answers to disappointments, no answers to unfulfilled dreams......
And still the stars look down upon us as some other couples walk along the beach. Beneath the stars we learn that we just don\'t matter in the great scheme of things, to sit back, relax and be thankful.
Beautiful words of life from you today.
June 10th, 2020 17:44
Destined.
Suresh said:
Your words have always been mesmerizing, exposing the subjects woes.
June 10th, 2020 15:55
Suresh said:
Your words have always been mesmerizing, exposing the subjects woes.
June 10th, 2020 15:55
Destined.
MendedFences27 said:
Revealing a sad loss, yet ever so sweetly. Your poem cries for the oft wished for return to happier times, and bemoans the bitterness of loss. This poem of destiny\'s raw treatment of loved ones and the pain of missing them, rings like a warning bell to all who read it. Just lovely Fay. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2020 10:54
MendedFences27 said:
Revealing a sad loss, yet ever so sweetly. Your poem cries for the oft wished for return to happier times, and bemoans the bitterness of loss. This poem of destiny\'s raw treatment of loved ones and the pain of missing them, rings like a warning bell to all who read it. Just lovely Fay. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2020 10:54
Dreamscape.
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping, Taking visionary input and reconstructing it under slumber. Some feel they are real, visions from another place or time. Whatever. Thing is, some of us get our best ideas from our dreams or write stirring stuff such as this about them. A delightful read, Fay. It made me think. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:34
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping, Taking visionary input and reconstructing it under slumber. Some feel they are real, visions from another place or time. Whatever. Thing is, some of us get our best ideas from our dreams or write stirring stuff such as this about them. A delightful read, Fay. It made me think. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:34
Dreamscape.
dusk arising said:
Oh that bloody alarm clock!
Got to say this reminded me so much of my recent post about a dream though none of our dreams can be the same as another persons.
Yes, there\'s a lot of loving goes on in a dream. Wonderful to read your words on an amazing realm of self created fantasy featuring real characters who meld to our dream purpose. ..... sigh!... if only.
June 9th, 2020 09:31
dusk arising said:
Oh that bloody alarm clock!
Got to say this reminded me so much of my recent post about a dream though none of our dreams can be the same as another persons.
Yes, there\'s a lot of loving goes on in a dream. Wonderful to read your words on an amazing realm of self created fantasy featuring real characters who meld to our dream purpose. ..... sigh!... if only.
June 9th, 2020 09:31
Dreamscape.
Neville said:
there aint nothin ya can\'t do in a good dream is there...
this is lovely and proves the point both poetically and precisely...…
Neville
June 9th, 2020 04:50
Neville said:
there aint nothin ya can\'t do in a good dream is there...
this is lovely and proves the point both poetically and precisely...…
Neville
June 9th, 2020 04:50
Errant.
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there can be many who trade falsehoods in love, not caring just wanting. Fine words Fay.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there can be many who trade falsehoods in love, not caring just wanting. Fine words Fay.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:20
Errant.
Neville said:
there is something about the word errant that makes even the hardest of hardliners smile.. or is that a wince I feel forming...…
You nailed it Fay.... is it true that double agents have twice the fun..... they sure do live dangerously.....
Neville
June 8th, 2020 16:19
Neville said:
there is something about the word errant that makes even the hardest of hardliners smile.. or is that a wince I feel forming...…
You nailed it Fay.... is it true that double agents have twice the fun..... they sure do live dangerously.....
Neville
June 8th, 2020 16:19
Errant.
dusk arising said:
It always ends in tears. I\'ll stick to memories of the good times i had while they lasted and look to the future without risk of more of them there tears.
Mind you, I\'m up for a bit of flirting.
Lotta truth in your words today.
June 8th, 2020 12:46
dusk arising said:
It always ends in tears. I\'ll stick to memories of the good times i had while they lasted and look to the future without risk of more of them there tears.
Mind you, I\'m up for a bit of flirting.
Lotta truth in your words today.
June 8th, 2020 12:46
Errant.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Could I adapt your other poem on \'love\'?
June 8th, 2020 09:26
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Could I adapt your other poem on \'love\'?
June 8th, 2020 09:26
Foremost.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ An elegant LOVE POEM echoing Pauls Immortal Love Poem in 1 Corrinthians 13. The Joni Mitchel Paraphrase is cited by DA ~ beautiful to lsten to ! There are millions of epic Love Poems penned in thousands of languages ! This should not suprise us. GOD IS LOVE and Mankind was created in His Likeness and *Just a little lower the the ANGELS* AMEN. Consequenly *Love is and integral & essential part of our Character. Your elegant ODE describes *Exactly whats in the SKIN !* Thanks for caring ~ AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace be Yours - always !
Angela 💛 Brian 💛 Smokey Cat 💛
June 8th, 2020 03:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ An elegant LOVE POEM echoing Pauls Immortal Love Poem in 1 Corrinthians 13. The Joni Mitchel Paraphrase is cited by DA ~ beautiful to lsten to ! There are millions of epic Love Poems penned in thousands of languages ! This should not suprise us. GOD IS LOVE and Mankind was created in His Likeness and *Just a little lower the the ANGELS* AMEN. Consequenly *Love is and integral & essential part of our Character. Your elegant ODE describes *Exactly whats in the SKIN !* Thanks for caring ~ AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace be Yours - always !
Angela 💛 Brian 💛 Smokey Cat 💛
June 8th, 2020 03:33
Foremost.
AwHec8 said:
Love, always looking for the best in the world. Love your poem. Don
June 7th, 2020 08:17
AwHec8 said:
Love, always looking for the best in the world. Love your poem. Don
June 7th, 2020 08:17
Foremost.
orchidee said:
We see then that love is not just one thing. The \'Love is...\' cartoons are good.
I could set this to a hymn-poem, if you wish, though it may break up some of the rhyme.
June 7th, 2020 05:58
orchidee said:
We see then that love is not just one thing. The \'Love is...\' cartoons are good.
I could set this to a hymn-poem, if you wish, though it may break up some of the rhyme.
June 7th, 2020 05:58
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