Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Birthright.
dusk arising said:
Yahoo (throws cap up into air - hoping to get it back one day) couldn\'t agree more.
I\'m making plans for a fun retirement future after this lots done with.
May 11th, 2020 11:07
dusk arising said:
Yahoo (throws cap up into air - hoping to get it back one day) couldn\'t agree more.
I\'m making plans for a fun retirement future after this lots done with.
May 11th, 2020 11:07
Birthright.
Neville said:
Well said Fay.. a poem of the moment if ever there was...
Neville
May 11th, 2020 06:27
Neville said:
Well said Fay.. a poem of the moment if ever there was...
Neville
May 11th, 2020 06:27
Birthright.
orchidee said:
Godo write Fay. Awww, they distance 50 metres from me singing - health crisis or not! heehee.
May 11th, 2020 06:01
orchidee said:
Godo write Fay. Awww, they distance 50 metres from me singing - health crisis or not! heehee.
May 11th, 2020 06:01
Chasms..
Goldfinch60 said:
It is always the way that those with the money do not want to give it away. Our daughter was dating a man who was a millionaire and she said that he was the meanest man she had ever known.
The caption at the beginning says it all Fay.
Andy
May 9th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
It is always the way that those with the money do not want to give it away. Our daughter was dating a man who was a millionaire and she said that he was the meanest man she had ever known.
The caption at the beginning says it all Fay.
Andy
May 9th, 2020 00:23
Chasms..
germanamericanchurch said:
We are but a bat colony that has gen golden custard hair at the helm - testing himself regularly - for an animal “thing” - he calls Chinese
May 8th, 2020 18:24
germanamericanchurch said:
We are but a bat colony that has gen golden custard hair at the helm - testing himself regularly - for an animal “thing” - he calls Chinese
May 8th, 2020 18:24
Chasms..
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I know - we must all support Branson, never mind the poor! Doh!
May 8th, 2020 07:56
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I know - we must all support Branson, never mind the poor! Doh!
May 8th, 2020 07:56
Chasms..
dusk arising said:
I was brought-up old fashioned. Using money as a key to class acceptability was frowned upon according to mamma and papa as money could only achieve the status of nouveau riche and the accompanying lack of manners and etiquette was as evident as a claxon in a symphony orchestra.
My own class status finds me financially poor but exceedingly well bred.
Hovis in a Wonderloaf packet one might say.
Love it or hate it \'class\' exists. A minority choose to fight it but to what end i\'m unsure. It is a battle which will not be won by fighting but interbreeding I think.
May 8th, 2020 04:33
dusk arising said:
I was brought-up old fashioned. Using money as a key to class acceptability was frowned upon according to mamma and papa as money could only achieve the status of nouveau riche and the accompanying lack of manners and etiquette was as evident as a claxon in a symphony orchestra.
My own class status finds me financially poor but exceedingly well bred.
Hovis in a Wonderloaf packet one might say.
Love it or hate it \'class\' exists. A minority choose to fight it but to what end i\'m unsure. It is a battle which will not be won by fighting but interbreeding I think.
May 8th, 2020 04:33
Chasms..
Neville said:
this is one of those poems that should be written in to history....
and your capture say\'s it all.. a great write dear Fay...…… Neville
May 8th, 2020 04:07
Neville said:
this is one of those poems that should be written in to history....
and your capture say\'s it all.. a great write dear Fay...…… Neville
May 8th, 2020 04:07
Severed.
Goldfinch60 said:
So much life and history can be seen in the detritus on the beaches and it is totally brought to life in your words Fay.
Andy
May 8th, 2020 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
So much life and history can be seen in the detritus on the beaches and it is totally brought to life in your words Fay.
Andy
May 8th, 2020 00:57
Severed.
SerenWise said:
Lovely write, how such little things can provide inspiration
May 7th, 2020 20:31
SerenWise said:
Lovely write, how such little things can provide inspiration
May 7th, 2020 20:31
Cream-Plied.
dusk arising said:
Such is life that the frustrations of the day to day are oft vented upon those nearest and dearest.But awaking fresh and rested finds such frustrations distant and more readily the truth of togetherness is the daily ripe fruit upon the vine of life.
May 7th, 2020 18:11
dusk arising said:
Such is life that the frustrations of the day to day are oft vented upon those nearest and dearest.But awaking fresh and rested finds such frustrations distant and more readily the truth of togetherness is the daily ripe fruit upon the vine of life.
May 7th, 2020 18:11
Severed.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MORTE DU KELP EN CINQ SEPTAINES
Brian here - Good Evening Fay ! Being a Coastal Dweller - Like yourself - I too can enjoy the elegance of KELP with it s roots in the sand - with its noble stem enabling its *leaves* to surface for photosynthesis . Swimming in KELP enables one to appreciate its elegance & form. To see it stranded dead & dying on the shore is a sad sight for sore eyes ! Love the Poem that this tragedy has spawned (V 1.) Alas too often on our Beach Walks we concetrate on other Flosom & Jetsom and ignore the indignity of the stranded SEA KELP ! The scene is graphically described in V 2. Thanks for including the poignant photo of what so moved your MUSE ! V 3. You suggest a dialogue with the disloged KELP - Beautiful ! V 4. You marval @ its struggle. V 5. You lovingly return it to its appropriate resting place - Wicked
Please check *I love Angela because* - THANKS.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
May 7th, 2020 17:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MORTE DU KELP EN CINQ SEPTAINES
Brian here - Good Evening Fay ! Being a Coastal Dweller - Like yourself - I too can enjoy the elegance of KELP with it s roots in the sand - with its noble stem enabling its *leaves* to surface for photosynthesis . Swimming in KELP enables one to appreciate its elegance & form. To see it stranded dead & dying on the shore is a sad sight for sore eyes ! Love the Poem that this tragedy has spawned (V 1.) Alas too often on our Beach Walks we concetrate on other Flosom & Jetsom and ignore the indignity of the stranded SEA KELP ! The scene is graphically described in V 2. Thanks for including the poignant photo of what so moved your MUSE ! V 3. You suggest a dialogue with the disloged KELP - Beautiful ! V 4. You marval @ its struggle. V 5. You lovingly return it to its appropriate resting place - Wicked
Please check *I love Angela because* - THANKS.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
May 7th, 2020 17:29
Severed.
dusk arising said:
Touched in the right places and the poetic beauty in you is fired to emotion. Here we see what I and most others see as detritus brought magestically forward for our contemplation.
How perceptive to reach for the soul of this kelp upon the brutal unforgiving shoreline. The place which forever confuses our senses with both tragedy and romance
May 7th, 2020 05:21
dusk arising said:
Touched in the right places and the poetic beauty in you is fired to emotion. Here we see what I and most others see as detritus brought magestically forward for our contemplation.
How perceptive to reach for the soul of this kelp upon the brutal unforgiving shoreline. The place which forever confuses our senses with both tragedy and romance
May 7th, 2020 05:21
Severed.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not near the coast, but do my snail-saving still. Well, it might take them 2 hours to cross the path!
May 7th, 2020 04:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not near the coast, but do my snail-saving still. Well, it might take them 2 hours to cross the path!
May 7th, 2020 04:49
Cream-Plied.
myself and me said:
Cream-plied, such a perfect metaphor for relationship. Wonderful read.
May 6th, 2020 14:28
myself and me said:
Cream-plied, such a perfect metaphor for relationship. Wonderful read.
May 6th, 2020 14:28
If Only.
myself and me said:
There is no way we could beat the harmony of nature, even the best composer would feel disabled.
May 5th, 2020 14:34
myself and me said:
There is no way we could beat the harmony of nature, even the best composer would feel disabled.
May 5th, 2020 14:34
If Only.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
gods orchestra for our pleasure and for free
May 4th, 2020 13:09
ron parrish aka wordman said:
gods orchestra for our pleasure and for free
May 4th, 2020 13:09
If Only.
orchidee said:
If only I wrote such good writes too! Am I flattering now? And will flattery get me everywhere?! lol.
May 4th, 2020 10:45
orchidee said:
If only I wrote such good writes too! Am I flattering now? And will flattery get me everywhere?! lol.
May 4th, 2020 10:45
If Only.
sylviasearcher said:
Indeed you pen has captured that sense of being moved by birdsong. One of my favourite sounds
May 4th, 2020 06:08
sylviasearcher said:
Indeed you pen has captured that sense of being moved by birdsong. One of my favourite sounds
May 4th, 2020 06:08
If Only.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sound the blackbird makes it is there when I awake in the morning singing in harmony with the robin.
\"If Only....?\" the most compelling question we all have - \"If only ?\"
May 4th, 2020 05:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sound the blackbird makes it is there when I awake in the morning singing in harmony with the robin.
\"If Only....?\" the most compelling question we all have - \"If only ?\"
May 4th, 2020 05:29
Bells
Goldfinch60 said:
Absolutely wonderful write Fay seeing those blue glades in the forest is such a wonderful sight.
Andy
May 4th, 2020 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Absolutely wonderful write Fay seeing those blue glades in the forest is such a wonderful sight.
Andy
May 4th, 2020 00:09
Bells
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired write - we have a bluebell glade near us (only known to the locals) - a joy to see.
May 3rd, 2020 15:18
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired write - we have a bluebell glade near us (only known to the locals) - a joy to see.
May 3rd, 2020 15:18
Bells
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for a lovely rhyming Poem & Picture extolling the virtue of my fave Spring Flower. I like the Spanish & English ones equally ! Your Picture shows the unique *Carpet of Blue* created by the Woodland Bluebells. The fact that they are *transient* - due to th canopy closing as the leaves develope and competition from other plants - adds to their beauty and intrinsic femininity !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💜💜💜
May 3rd, 2020 10:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for a lovely rhyming Poem & Picture extolling the virtue of my fave Spring Flower. I like the Spanish & English ones equally ! Your Picture shows the unique *Carpet of Blue* created by the Woodland Bluebells. The fact that they are *transient* - due to th canopy closing as the leaves develope and competition from other plants - adds to their beauty and intrinsic femininity !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💜💜💜
May 3rd, 2020 10:21
Bells
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Fay
And the bees have it all to themselves this year
I hope if gives hem a chance to recover
BRAVO!
May 3rd, 2020 09:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Fay
And the bees have it all to themselves this year
I hope if gives hem a chance to recover
BRAVO!
May 3rd, 2020 09:50
Bells
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I could set this to a hymn tune, and possibly extend it a bit, if you wish?
May 3rd, 2020 07:14
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I could set this to a hymn tune, and possibly extend it a bit, if you wish?
May 3rd, 2020 07:14
Bells
peto said:
Great picture
Super writing
Unusual to see you rhyming
Loved this one
May 3rd, 2020 06:35
peto said:
Great picture
Super writing
Unusual to see you rhyming
Loved this one
May 3rd, 2020 06:35
Twice Stirred.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, we all try to get the words from our mind to the paper.
Andy
May 2nd, 2020 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, we all try to get the words from our mind to the paper.
Andy
May 2nd, 2020 00:46
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