Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Elsewhere.
dusk arising said:
Oh you brought such joy to me with these words. I\'m so pleased i led the life which gave me such wonderful memories as are triggered by your words today.
Once again, with your Heineken of poetry, you reach the parts other poets cannot reach.
May 31st, 2020 05:42
dusk arising said:
Oh you brought such joy to me with these words. I\'m so pleased i led the life which gave me such wonderful memories as are triggered by your words today.
Once again, with your Heineken of poetry, you reach the parts other poets cannot reach.
May 31st, 2020 05:42
Elsewhere.
Neville said:
I know that feeling … thank heaven for fond memories and fine poetry eh\'...
a fine write to coin but a phrase ….. Neville
May 31st, 2020 04:19
Neville said:
I know that feeling … thank heaven for fond memories and fine poetry eh\'...
a fine write to coin but a phrase ….. Neville
May 31st, 2020 04:19
Dilemma.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, finding the truth in these days certainly is a dilemma.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, finding the truth in these days certainly is a dilemma.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:47
Dilemma.
Neville said:
this days offering is a fine example of how well, astute and knowingly you wield your pen...
May 29th, 2020 07:20
Neville said:
this days offering is a fine example of how well, astute and knowingly you wield your pen...
May 29th, 2020 07:20
Dilemma.
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautifully worded Fay, and I agree with you, it is a dilemma, especially under the current circumstances.
Hope that you are keeping well in the continuing madness.
Ben.
May 29th, 2020 05:09
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautifully worded Fay, and I agree with you, it is a dilemma, especially under the current circumstances.
Hope that you are keeping well in the continuing madness.
Ben.
May 29th, 2020 05:09
Deadly.
Goldfinch60 said:
Kestrels are wonderful birds to see, as are all raptors, I have seen most of the types of raptor in the UK but the main one missing is the Golden Eagle, I have seen Sea Eagles though.
Great write on a wonderful bird.
Andy
May 29th, 2020 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Kestrels are wonderful birds to see, as are all raptors, I have seen most of the types of raptor in the UK but the main one missing is the Golden Eagle, I have seen Sea Eagles though.
Great write on a wonderful bird.
Andy
May 29th, 2020 00:44
Deadly.
Neville said:
Oh\' how well you have captured the very essence of the \'Windhover\' my friend... and indeed the harsh world in which they fail or thrive..... N
May 28th, 2020 10:18
Neville said:
Oh\' how well you have captured the very essence of the \'Windhover\' my friend... and indeed the harsh world in which they fail or thrive..... N
May 28th, 2020 10:18
Deadly.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write, great bird. It must be bird day today.
May 28th, 2020 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Great write, great bird. It must be bird day today.
May 28th, 2020 09:11
Deadly.
peto said:
Watched a kite do something similar this week
Lovely write
Fav line
Death hurls toward life
May 28th, 2020 08:57
peto said:
Watched a kite do something similar this week
Lovely write
Fav line
Death hurls toward life
May 28th, 2020 08:57
Deadly.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Fay ~ both our Muses seem to be BIRDING this morning. Both the KESTREL & the KINGFISHER are excellent Hunters in their own domain. Natures complex & necessary Food Chains & Food Webs are a thing of intrinsic beauty. We are as *Red in Tooth & Claw* as much the Birds of Prey. Kestrals - Kingfishers - Kittyhawks - Dont get their dinner served on a Plate - they have to work for it ! Thanks for servng another beautiful Symbiosis of Pic & Poem to brighten our May Morning !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat !
May 28th, 2020 06:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Fay ~ both our Muses seem to be BIRDING this morning. Both the KESTREL & the KINGFISHER are excellent Hunters in their own domain. Natures complex & necessary Food Chains & Food Webs are a thing of intrinsic beauty. We are as *Red in Tooth & Claw* as much the Birds of Prey. Kestrals - Kingfishers - Kittyhawks - Dont get their dinner served on a Plate - they have to work for it ! Thanks for servng another beautiful Symbiosis of Pic & Poem to brighten our May Morning !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat !
May 28th, 2020 06:07
Alteration.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once more Fay, I was lost in those evening skies waiting for Luna to rise upon me.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once more Fay, I was lost in those evening skies waiting for Luna to rise upon me.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:47
Alteration.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Thank you for a perfect picture & Tone Poem which encapsulaes perfectly *The End of the Day !* Often as each Day capitulates to Night we are indoors and so see it only *Through glass darkly* However in your Tone Poem - You descript it in all its Dynamic Glory !
V 1. The LIGHT does indeed hibernate to
be replaced by Sister Moon !
V 2. MAUVE VELVET is a perfect description
of the late evening SKY
V 3. For those in LOCKDOWN (like Brian etc)
each person is increasingly weary and
welcomes the onset of LUNAS gentle smile
Thanks for sharing - Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
May 27th, 2020 14:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Thank you for a perfect picture & Tone Poem which encapsulaes perfectly *The End of the Day !* Often as each Day capitulates to Night we are indoors and so see it only *Through glass darkly* However in your Tone Poem - You descript it in all its Dynamic Glory !
V 1. The LIGHT does indeed hibernate to
be replaced by Sister Moon !
V 2. MAUVE VELVET is a perfect description
of the late evening SKY
V 3. For those in LOCKDOWN (like Brian etc)
each person is increasingly weary and
welcomes the onset of LUNAS gentle smile
Thanks for sharing - Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
May 27th, 2020 14:35
Alteration.
Neville said:
I could lay here in the depth of these words till all around me grows cold … they are like a refreshing and much needed hot bath ma\'am …. N : )
May 27th, 2020 10:29
Neville said:
I could lay here in the depth of these words till all around me grows cold … they are like a refreshing and much needed hot bath ma\'am …. N : )
May 27th, 2020 10:29
Colour-Power.
Goldfinch60 said:
The colours in life are so meaningful, they can bring every emotion.
Andy
May 26th, 2020 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The colours in life are so meaningful, they can bring every emotion.
Andy
May 26th, 2020 00:36
Colour-Power.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - HOLIDAY today - helping Brian to make the Garden - FOX PROOF for SMOKEY and SMOKEY PROOF for the BIRDS. Brian & I are both on our H & S Commitees @ work so we have to Practice what we Preach !
Love the Colour Chart (can I use it in a Poem - Please ?) and the Poem ! My Profession as a Physio is concerned with improving my Clients Mobility & Self-esteem. Colour is important and Green is a very soothing colour for my Salon. Blue is a soothing colour for people to wear when they are in recovery - It was used by wounded ex-Servicemen. We all give out a Spiritual Aura as do Angels ! It is only when we are in complete Harmony (or Love !) with another Person that we can visulise their aura ! After a shower Brian radiates MAUVE and he says I radiate MAGENTA - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !
Please check *LIFE IS LIKE A CROSSWORD* Thanks !
May 25th, 2020 10:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - HOLIDAY today - helping Brian to make the Garden - FOX PROOF for SMOKEY and SMOKEY PROOF for the BIRDS. Brian & I are both on our H & S Commitees @ work so we have to Practice what we Preach !
Love the Colour Chart (can I use it in a Poem - Please ?) and the Poem ! My Profession as a Physio is concerned with improving my Clients Mobility & Self-esteem. Colour is important and Green is a very soothing colour for my Salon. Blue is a soothing colour for people to wear when they are in recovery - It was used by wounded ex-Servicemen. We all give out a Spiritual Aura as do Angels ! It is only when we are in complete Harmony (or Love !) with another Person that we can visulise their aura ! After a shower Brian radiates MAUVE and he says I radiate MAGENTA - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !
Please check *LIFE IS LIKE A CROSSWORD* Thanks !
May 25th, 2020 10:25
Connection.
peto said:
Read this then wrote for 1st time in a while
Inspiring
Ta
May 25th, 2020 05:10
peto said:
Read this then wrote for 1st time in a while
Inspiring
Ta
May 25th, 2020 05:10
Colour-Power.
peto said:
Your writing is always colourful Fay
Unseen glows eh
At least now I know why you went for purple hair a while back.
Always a pleasure to read
May 25th, 2020 05:03
peto said:
Your writing is always colourful Fay
Unseen glows eh
At least now I know why you went for purple hair a while back.
Always a pleasure to read
May 25th, 2020 05:03
Connection.
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Very will put together I loved the part “Between
connection are threads
composed as unsaid wordlets.”
Very inspiring and very impactful with your words. Love it ❤️
May 24th, 2020 18:23
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Very will put together I loved the part “Between
connection are threads
composed as unsaid wordlets.”
Very inspiring and very impactful with your words. Love it ❤️
May 24th, 2020 18:23
Crystaline Charm.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ Angela here ! I love GLASS PAPER WIEGHTS and have a small collection. I like the ones with spirals in. Glass is a Supercooled Liquid which is why it is transparent which is one of its chief qualities. Because he is a *Chemist* Brian has a collection of natural crytals. They are exhibied in our China Cabinet along with our Crystal Wine Glasses etc. There is space for up to 10 of my Paper Weights which I rotate ! Thanks for sharing a great Purchase in a perfect Picture & Poem.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check SMOKEY (III) ~ Thanks.
May 24th, 2020 16:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ~ Angela here ! I love GLASS PAPER WIEGHTS and have a small collection. I like the ones with spirals in. Glass is a Supercooled Liquid which is why it is transparent which is one of its chief qualities. Because he is a *Chemist* Brian has a collection of natural crytals. They are exhibied in our China Cabinet along with our Crystal Wine Glasses etc. There is space for up to 10 of my Paper Weights which I rotate ! Thanks for sharing a great Purchase in a perfect Picture & Poem.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check SMOKEY (III) ~ Thanks.
May 24th, 2020 16:15
Connection.
Neville said:
each one a little pearl of wisdom
without connection, one is nothing
May 24th, 2020 03:45
Neville said:
each one a little pearl of wisdom
without connection, one is nothing
May 24th, 2020 03:45
Connection.
Goldfinch60 said:
Each page opened leads us to a new chapter in our life.
Good one Fay.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 03:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Each page opened leads us to a new chapter in our life.
Good one Fay.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 03:34
Clocking Time.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Folk suffer them \'insufferable swathes of time\' when I sing. Time don\'t go quickly for them, as they\'re not enjoying themselves listening to my torturous tones! lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:26
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Folk suffer them \'insufferable swathes of time\' when I sing. Time don\'t go quickly for them, as they\'re not enjoying themselves listening to my torturous tones! lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:26
Clocking Time.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’ve enjoyed reading this piece that you penned ‘moons ago’.
As Neville stated, “Timeless”!
Stay safe and be well,
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 08:26
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’ve enjoyed reading this piece that you penned ‘moons ago’.
As Neville stated, “Timeless”!
Stay safe and be well,
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 08:26
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