Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Release.
Neville said:
Goodbyes oft taste bitter, rarely have I known a sweet one....
well penned my fine literary friend... Neville
May 23rd, 2020 06:13
Neville said:
Goodbyes oft taste bitter, rarely have I known a sweet one....
well penned my fine literary friend... Neville
May 23rd, 2020 06:13
Crystaline Charm.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, those paperweights can be fascinating in the way they draw you into them so that you seem to become part of them.
I get a similar feeling with artworks and some of Michael Edwards abstract paintings pull me into them so that I seem to be part of them as well.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, those paperweights can be fascinating in the way they draw you into them so that you seem to become part of them.
I get a similar feeling with artworks and some of Michael Edwards abstract paintings pull me into them so that I seem to be part of them as well.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:23
Crystaline Charm.
Neville said:
a most magnificent artefact and tis clear in a mysteriously opaque way just how and why you were inspired to craft such a beautiful dedication … I have an ancient witches orb that hangs in my study window I never tire of, because it just wont let me....
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 05:00
Neville said:
a most magnificent artefact and tis clear in a mysteriously opaque way just how and why you were inspired to craft such a beautiful dedication … I have an ancient witches orb that hangs in my study window I never tire of, because it just wont let me....
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 05:00
Chains.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words Fay, the sun may set and those tears may flow but the sun will always rise again and dry those tears.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 23:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words Fay, the sun may set and those tears may flow but the sun will always rise again and dry those tears.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 23:49
Chains.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A pensively fine poem Fay. Very well put together.
Ex animo, Alan
May 21st, 2020 14:59
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A pensively fine poem Fay. Very well put together.
Ex animo, Alan
May 21st, 2020 14:59
Chains.
Neville said:
held me transfixed for the duration.. and then some.. exquisite... to coin or term a phrase …… Neville
May 21st, 2020 07:14
Neville said:
held me transfixed for the duration.. and then some.. exquisite... to coin or term a phrase …… Neville
May 21st, 2020 07:14
Chains.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD THORSDAY FAY ~ Brian Here busy making the garden safe for SMOKEY for FRIDAY we are bth so so excited and He senses something is afoot. The Cattery says we can take his scrstching post with us cos He is used to it ! Love the Picture & the form of the POEM but the contents is MELANCHOLY. We were in our 30\'s when we got married but some of our Friends (who got married Younger) have now split up ~ mainly due to Male Infidelity - so so sad. Sunset reminiscences ~ Yearning - Regret - Goodbye - Ache & Tears ! It happens but we PRAY (every day) it will NEVER EVER happen to US ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
Please check *AN IMPOSSIBLE DREAM* ~ Thanks !
May 21st, 2020 03:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD THORSDAY FAY ~ Brian Here busy making the garden safe for SMOKEY for FRIDAY we are bth so so excited and He senses something is afoot. The Cattery says we can take his scrstching post with us cos He is used to it ! Love the Picture & the form of the POEM but the contents is MELANCHOLY. We were in our 30\'s when we got married but some of our Friends (who got married Younger) have now split up ~ mainly due to Male Infidelity - so so sad. Sunset reminiscences ~ Yearning - Regret - Goodbye - Ache & Tears ! It happens but we PRAY (every day) it will NEVER EVER happen to US ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
Please check *AN IMPOSSIBLE DREAM* ~ Thanks !
May 21st, 2020 03:37
Paint\'s Heat.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Angela & I find all of VGs Paintings emotional. They are Larger than Life & the colour is Bolder than Bold ! Especially Los Flores del Sol ! They all look 3D because of the thickness of the Oil Paint. Great mediun to dabble in ! With VGs paintings you can always feel the ANGST - Impressionism @ its zenith !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
Please check WATERFALLS ~ Thanks !
May 20th, 2020 17:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Angela & I find all of VGs Paintings emotional. They are Larger than Life & the colour is Bolder than Bold ! Especially Los Flores del Sol ! They all look 3D because of the thickness of the Oil Paint. Great mediun to dabble in ! With VGs paintings you can always feel the ANGST - Impressionism @ its zenith !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
Please check WATERFALLS ~ Thanks !
May 20th, 2020 17:37
Paint\'s Heat.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Just cos he had one outer ear left, it don\'t mean he could not hear! Some may forget that. Doh!
May 20th, 2020 06:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Just cos he had one outer ear left, it don\'t mean he could not hear! Some may forget that. Doh!
May 20th, 2020 06:47
Paint\'s Heat.
Neville said:
there\'s a whole lot of truth in your words .. a most beautiful dedication to a great mans brush... and then some..
May 20th, 2020 05:08
Neville said:
there\'s a whole lot of truth in your words .. a most beautiful dedication to a great mans brush... and then some..
May 20th, 2020 05:08
Covert.
Goldfinch60 said:
Those trysts can be filled with both passion and treachery but can still be enthralling.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those trysts can be filled with both passion and treachery but can still be enthralling.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 23:55
Covert.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. yep, I, or rather Fido my watchdog, warned folk about ardour! lol.
May 19th, 2020 04:06
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. yep, I, or rather Fido my watchdog, warned folk about ardour! lol.
May 19th, 2020 04:06
Timed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, your words made me feel as though I was walking beside you.
Andy
May 18th, 2020 23:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, your words made me feel as though I was walking beside you.
Andy
May 18th, 2020 23:54
Timed.
Neville said:
Timed and pitched perfectly Fay.. Another smashing example of this most beautiful of art forms...
May 18th, 2020 13:59
Neville said:
Timed and pitched perfectly Fay.. Another smashing example of this most beautiful of art forms...
May 18th, 2020 13:59
Timed.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afernoon Fay - Angela here - No Clinics this afternoon so Ive been to the E Coast with BR IAN with a PIC-NIC and to meditate on your Tone Poem ! We love your use of WORDS our Poems tend to be more concrete
V 1. Gliding frothing lace
v 2. Greeny-weed flats
V 3. Increasing cream
V 4. Stranded kelp in fast pooling harbour
V 5. All footfalls must yield to tidal action
Perfect word selection - Rhythm eclipsing Rhyme !
We are working on a *Tone Poem* on *Waterfalls* which we hope will be more LYRICAL & less SCIENTIFIC
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
May 18th, 2020 10:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afernoon Fay - Angela here - No Clinics this afternoon so Ive been to the E Coast with BR IAN with a PIC-NIC and to meditate on your Tone Poem ! We love your use of WORDS our Poems tend to be more concrete
V 1. Gliding frothing lace
v 2. Greeny-weed flats
V 3. Increasing cream
V 4. Stranded kelp in fast pooling harbour
V 5. All footfalls must yield to tidal action
Perfect word selection - Rhythm eclipsing Rhyme !
We are working on a *Tone Poem* on *Waterfalls* which we hope will be more LYRICAL & less SCIENTIFIC
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
May 18th, 2020 10:27
Timed.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is equal to holding a conch shell to your ear and hearing the ocean Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
May 18th, 2020 09:38
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is equal to holding a conch shell to your ear and hearing the ocean Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
May 18th, 2020 09:38
Zest.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY - Thanks for a wonderful Poem to lift our Spirits on a Boris Blurred Lockdown Sunny Sunday Afternoon !
ZEST is an awesome word almost oneamatopaic ! Lots of synonyms some of SAVOUR (Relish - Flavour - Piquancy) and some of ZING (Gusto - Tang - Joie de Vivre). My MAMA isnt Spanish but she loves Citrus Fruits and grated their rind (ZEST) into Drinks - Puddings - Cakes & Biscuits etc.
Love the similie in the Poem - Dawn as a zest-halo as Hermano Sol bursts through the darkness & the clouds to herald a NEW DAY - AMEN.
We are not posting toay but have posted a New Fusion *What have you Learned from Lockdown ?* Please add a POEM ~ Thanks A !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angel & Brian 💛💛💛
May 17th, 2020 06:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY - Thanks for a wonderful Poem to lift our Spirits on a Boris Blurred Lockdown Sunny Sunday Afternoon !
ZEST is an awesome word almost oneamatopaic ! Lots of synonyms some of SAVOUR (Relish - Flavour - Piquancy) and some of ZING (Gusto - Tang - Joie de Vivre). My MAMA isnt Spanish but she loves Citrus Fruits and grated their rind (ZEST) into Drinks - Puddings - Cakes & Biscuits etc.
Love the similie in the Poem - Dawn as a zest-halo as Hermano Sol bursts through the darkness & the clouds to herald a NEW DAY - AMEN.
We are not posting toay but have posted a New Fusion *What have you Learned from Lockdown ?* Please add a POEM ~ Thanks A !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angel & Brian 💛💛💛
May 17th, 2020 06:25
Zest.
Neville said:
Ah\' I feel like a new man... in an old body.... bless ya dear Fay.. these words are sublime.... N : )
May 17th, 2020 04:07
Neville said:
Ah\' I feel like a new man... in an old body.... bless ya dear Fay.. these words are sublime.... N : )
May 17th, 2020 04:07
If Only.
Neville said:
Tis truly wonderful my friend and loved no end...
Oh\' and I\'m quite taken by the song of the turdus merula myself dont\'cha know
May 16th, 2020 10:17
Neville said:
Tis truly wonderful my friend and loved no end...
Oh\' and I\'m quite taken by the song of the turdus merula myself dont\'cha know
May 16th, 2020 10:17
Brooding.
Neville said:
if I was to adopt a pen name, it would most probably be John something... and I would use it only sparingly....
if I was to adopt such a name... I would not be ashamed to place it squarely at the bottom of your page...
May 15th, 2020 07:56
Neville said:
if I was to adopt a pen name, it would most probably be John something... and I would use it only sparingly....
if I was to adopt such a name... I would not be ashamed to place it squarely at the bottom of your page...
May 15th, 2020 07:56
Brooding.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such beautiful time in each day as the sun sets and shines with your words Fay.
Andy
May 15th, 2020 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such beautiful time in each day as the sun sets and shines with your words Fay.
Andy
May 15th, 2020 00:49
Brooding.
Michael Edwards said:
the joy of your work is that it transports the reader to another place and this is sure no exception.
May 14th, 2020 13:39
Michael Edwards said:
the joy of your work is that it transports the reader to another place and this is sure no exception.
May 14th, 2020 13:39
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