Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Learnt Curves.
Neville said:
Love the title and the rest warms the cockles of this reader\'s heart .....
Neville
July 29th, 2019 07:03
Neville said:
Love the title and the rest warms the cockles of this reader\'s heart .....
Neville
July 29th, 2019 07:03
Learnt Curves.
Poetic Dan said:
Saved for more time to read but loved the start
July 29th, 2019 05:27
Poetic Dan said:
Saved for more time to read but loved the start
July 29th, 2019 05:27
Twice Stirred.
Neville said:
Damn good in its own write
Calliope is all these things and more... her beauty and mystery limited only by the imaginations of those poets and authors who pen her name...
July 27th, 2019 11:00
Neville said:
Damn good in its own write
Calliope is all these things and more... her beauty and mystery limited only by the imaginations of those poets and authors who pen her name...
July 27th, 2019 11:00
HAPPENINGS.
Suresh said:
Nature - your perception, quiet different from that of the moth or thrush or every single creature and plant... to them everyday is a fight to survive ....
.... but your words woven here, a rarity
July 26th, 2019 11:33
Suresh said:
Nature - your perception, quiet different from that of the moth or thrush or every single creature and plant... to them everyday is a fight to survive ....
.... but your words woven here, a rarity
July 26th, 2019 11:33
HAPPENINGS.
dusk arising said:
Eeh bah gum lass, the\'rs nowt strange bout nature nor nowt stranger than nature herself. For nature be a lady didn\'cha know.
An it taks a reet poetic bint such as thee\'sen to make a parcel a goodies wi words so fine that ... well.. so fine that yous could parcel em up in a chocolates box and give \'em as a lasting thing o beauty to a reet gud lookin young love.
\'Appen.
July 26th, 2019 09:43
dusk arising said:
Eeh bah gum lass, the\'rs nowt strange bout nature nor nowt stranger than nature herself. For nature be a lady didn\'cha know.
An it taks a reet poetic bint such as thee\'sen to make a parcel a goodies wi words so fine that ... well.. so fine that yous could parcel em up in a chocolates box and give \'em as a lasting thing o beauty to a reet gud lookin young love.
\'Appen.
July 26th, 2019 09:43
HAPPENINGS.
Neville said:
and they call it evolution.... strange that..... I have long called it nature...
a mighty poem if ever there was... with all manner of strengths .. I particularly like the way you set me thinking about each of the observations you have made......
Neville
July 26th, 2019 03:47
Neville said:
and they call it evolution.... strange that..... I have long called it nature...
a mighty poem if ever there was... with all manner of strengths .. I particularly like the way you set me thinking about each of the observations you have made......
Neville
July 26th, 2019 03:47
Love\'s Call.
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fay, the anguish flows through your words.
July 26th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fay, the anguish flows through your words.
July 26th, 2019 00:57
Love\'s Call.
Suresh said:
War has produced most romantic poems imaginable, for it holds the suspense of ever meeting again, in body and soul, as when departed.
Very well scripted
July 25th, 2019 16:13
Suresh said:
War has produced most romantic poems imaginable, for it holds the suspense of ever meeting again, in body and soul, as when departed.
Very well scripted
July 25th, 2019 16:13
Love\'s Call.
MendedFences27 said:
Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the former the more painful. Those that wait also die from the separation, and and endure the anxiety of not knowing.
The ancient cry to end all wars keeps repeating, but hopefully growing in volume.
Oh, how you have recreated the longing felt, the risks taken, and the futility of it all. It saddens the reader while truthfully displaying the over-riding dread. Your words fall like her tears and their meaning explodes in the mind of the reader.
I really enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:27
MendedFences27 said:
Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the former the more painful. Those that wait also die from the separation, and and endure the anxiety of not knowing.
The ancient cry to end all wars keeps repeating, but hopefully growing in volume.
Oh, how you have recreated the longing felt, the risks taken, and the futility of it all. It saddens the reader while truthfully displaying the over-riding dread. Your words fall like her tears and their meaning explodes in the mind of the reader.
I really enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:27
Love\'s Call.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ooo the famished mind
hungry
ravenous...
I like this fay
VERY WELL expressed my dear
July 25th, 2019 10:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ooo the famished mind
hungry
ravenous...
I like this fay
VERY WELL expressed my dear
July 25th, 2019 10:08
Love\'s Call.
Neville said:
On reflection, these well crafted words remind me that war is not for lovers........ Neville
July 25th, 2019 04:30
Neville said:
On reflection, these well crafted words remind me that war is not for lovers........ Neville
July 25th, 2019 04:30
Love\'s Call.
dusk arising said:
Reads like the heartache of a lovers parting with the agonising waiting, hoping, and the anguish of fear that her hero may be yet another sacrifice to some politicians war game.
Compelling and heart wrenching.
July 25th, 2019 04:12
dusk arising said:
Reads like the heartache of a lovers parting with the agonising waiting, hoping, and the anguish of fear that her hero may be yet another sacrifice to some politicians war game.
Compelling and heart wrenching.
July 25th, 2019 04:12
DEFENCES.
Christina8 said:
Its always been amazing to me to that the underground rootwork of a tree is more complex than what we see up above. This is a fine piece of work, Fay!
July 24th, 2019 22:45
Christina8 said:
Its always been amazing to me to that the underground rootwork of a tree is more complex than what we see up above. This is a fine piece of work, Fay!
July 24th, 2019 22:45
DEFENCES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I would like to think that the traits of the wise men could come to the fore and take us into a world of wonder.
July 24th, 2019 05:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I would like to think that the traits of the wise men could come to the fore and take us into a world of wonder.
July 24th, 2019 05:05
DEFENCES.
Neville said:
the juxtapositioning of the old tree and wise men/people is done superbly..... as is everything else about these words....... Neville
July 24th, 2019 04:48
Neville said:
the juxtapositioning of the old tree and wise men/people is done superbly..... as is everything else about these words....... Neville
July 24th, 2019 04:48
DEFENCES.
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those windswept Cornish trees, defiant of the weather.
And so in humans, strength to withstand lifes battering, strong and hardy souls. Carefully guarded soft interiors have immediate sensory contact with all encounters and a lifetimes risk assessment radar.
July 24th, 2019 03:08
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those windswept Cornish trees, defiant of the weather.
And so in humans, strength to withstand lifes battering, strong and hardy souls. Carefully guarded soft interiors have immediate sensory contact with all encounters and a lifetimes risk assessment radar.
July 24th, 2019 03:08
YOU ARE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great message Fay, those moments of stillness and peace are so important in our lives.
July 24th, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Great message Fay, those moments of stillness and peace are so important in our lives.
July 24th, 2019 01:06
YOU ARE.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m glad I had a few minutes to pop in today! Your penned words are exactly what I needed at this moment!
“Muse a few moments and find
a still space”...
Thank you for sharing these much needed sentiments!
~Laura~
July 23rd, 2019 09:26
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m glad I had a few minutes to pop in today! Your penned words are exactly what I needed at this moment!
“Muse a few moments and find
a still space”...
Thank you for sharing these much needed sentiments!
~Laura~
July 23rd, 2019 09:26
YOU ARE.
Seek said:
To express so much optimism, positivism and hope in our times must require a special talent and temperament. A very reassuring write.
July 23rd, 2019 08:01
Seek said:
To express so much optimism, positivism and hope in our times must require a special talent and temperament. A very reassuring write.
July 23rd, 2019 08:01
YOU ARE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : Its midnight in NZ ! Thanks for your Poem the concept of *BE YOURSELF* really cheered me up : and spurred Me on : today ! Even though Ive been happilly engaged to BRIAN for ovr a Year : the 11,500 miles separation make me lonely at times ! I need to count my BLESSINGS ! I am blessed to be (currently) in Paradise (Auckland NZ) I love my JOB (Physio) and my Colleagues & Clients and my Five Maori Trainees : do think I am a Star : now that they are fuul Qualified Physiotherapists ! I am very *presentable* and engaged to the most beautiful MAN on the PLANET my *Big Teddy Bear* BRIAN ! So I guess I can be *Gentle with Myself* TODAY (and TOMORROW as well !) Thanks for caring for us ALL ! Love the positive PICTURE !
Blessings & Peace & Love & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙
Please check our WATERFALLS !
July 23rd, 2019 06:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : Its midnight in NZ ! Thanks for your Poem the concept of *BE YOURSELF* really cheered me up : and spurred Me on : today ! Even though Ive been happilly engaged to BRIAN for ovr a Year : the 11,500 miles separation make me lonely at times ! I need to count my BLESSINGS ! I am blessed to be (currently) in Paradise (Auckland NZ) I love my JOB (Physio) and my Colleagues & Clients and my Five Maori Trainees : do think I am a Star : now that they are fuul Qualified Physiotherapists ! I am very *presentable* and engaged to the most beautiful MAN on the PLANET my *Big Teddy Bear* BRIAN ! So I guess I can be *Gentle with Myself* TODAY (and TOMORROW as well !) Thanks for caring for us ALL ! Love the positive PICTURE !
Blessings & Peace & Love & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙
Please check our WATERFALLS !
July 23rd, 2019 06:31
YOU ARE.
Neville said:
I bet I\'m not the only one who feels these words are meant for them... these are special words... like medicine to all us ailing poets... and the rest..... Neville
July 23rd, 2019 04:45
Neville said:
I bet I\'m not the only one who feels these words are meant for them... these are special words... like medicine to all us ailing poets... and the rest..... Neville
July 23rd, 2019 04:45
YOU ARE.
dusk arising said:
A message we all need to heed from time to time. Time to enjoy singleton self.... a few years under the belt, all the more reason.
July 23rd, 2019 04:20
dusk arising said:
A message we all need to heed from time to time. Time to enjoy singleton self.... a few years under the belt, all the more reason.
July 23rd, 2019 04:20
UNTELLABLE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, love can be a fraud but true love is sublime and within your words it can be found in spite of the temptations that are within the wold.
July 23rd, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, love can be a fraud but true love is sublime and within your words it can be found in spite of the temptations that are within the wold.
July 23rd, 2019 00:29
UNTELLABLE.
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem, Fay! I wish I knew the answers to the questions you pose. Wonderful!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:27
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem, Fay! I wish I knew the answers to the questions you pose. Wonderful!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:27
UNTELLABLE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA here ! Its 10:30 am (Tuesday) and Im just catching up on MPS as I have an Evening Clinic ! Brian thought I should comment on this one ! We are not married yet (and dont cohabit !) so for us it is really *A Bridge too Soon !* However in retrospect in our *close encounter* during our trip to South Island we did glimpse the ecstasy of verses 1 2 3 & 6 ! But dont tell MY PAPA because ours really is REAL LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN🧡💙🧡💙
July 22nd, 2019 16:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA here ! Its 10:30 am (Tuesday) and Im just catching up on MPS as I have an Evening Clinic ! Brian thought I should comment on this one ! We are not married yet (and dont cohabit !) so for us it is really *A Bridge too Soon !* However in retrospect in our *close encounter* during our trip to South Island we did glimpse the ecstasy of verses 1 2 3 & 6 ! But dont tell MY PAPA because ours really is REAL LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN🧡💙🧡💙
July 22nd, 2019 16:40
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