Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
UNTELLABLE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There is NOTHING simple about love but I DO KNOW
I haven\'t the energy for an affair I am loved out but I can relate to the equation of absession...
Great write fay
July 22nd, 2019 12:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There is NOTHING simple about love but I DO KNOW
I haven\'t the energy for an affair I am loved out but I can relate to the equation of absession...
Great write fay
July 22nd, 2019 12:50
UNTELLABLE.
Suresh said:
Your stolen words from different mediums to emphasize the frustration of lusts desire for orgasmic explosion, cloaked as misguided love, is truly awesome
July 22nd, 2019 09:19
Suresh said:
Your stolen words from different mediums to emphasize the frustration of lusts desire for orgasmic explosion, cloaked as misguided love, is truly awesome
July 22nd, 2019 09:19
UNTELLABLE.
Neville said:
You have certainly created magic here and these words are quite literally captivating and spellbinding.........
Neville
July 22nd, 2019 04:18
Neville said:
You have certainly created magic here and these words are quite literally captivating and spellbinding.........
Neville
July 22nd, 2019 04:18
UNTELLABLE.
dusk arising said:
Love slumbers and relaxes into the everyday, camoflaged withing the acceptance of two. Only to rise like an empassioned jealous wilde beast, talons and fangs ready to throat rip in rage of pure blood boiling heat - once disturbed back into recognition.
July 22nd, 2019 04:07
dusk arising said:
Love slumbers and relaxes into the everyday, camoflaged withing the acceptance of two. Only to rise like an empassioned jealous wilde beast, talons and fangs ready to throat rip in rage of pure blood boiling heat - once disturbed back into recognition.
July 22nd, 2019 04:07
UNTELLABLE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I went delirious ages ago - upon the first \'swoony\' poem I read on here! heehee. Can anyone help poor Orchi?!
July 22nd, 2019 03:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I went delirious ages ago - upon the first \'swoony\' poem I read on here! heehee. Can anyone help poor Orchi?!
July 22nd, 2019 03:55
PAINTED LADIES.
Neville said:
you paint an amazing picture of these truly amazing creatures and you seem to do it with consummate ease dear Fay....... Neville
July 21st, 2019 03:36
Neville said:
you paint an amazing picture of these truly amazing creatures and you seem to do it with consummate ease dear Fay....... Neville
July 21st, 2019 03:36
PAINTED LADIES.
Suresh said:
There you have the Painted Ladies, here we have the Monarch Butterflies. By weight they weigh less than a feather, yet they journey thousands of miles to keep their genes alive. A poetic remembrance
July 17th, 2019 11:09
Suresh said:
There you have the Painted Ladies, here we have the Monarch Butterflies. By weight they weigh less than a feather, yet they journey thousands of miles to keep their genes alive. A poetic remembrance
July 17th, 2019 11:09
PAINTED LADIES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Painted ladies are amazing creatures in our wonderful world. That world depicted brilliantly in the picture.
July 17th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Painted ladies are amazing creatures in our wonderful world. That world depicted brilliantly in the picture.
July 17th, 2019 00:16
PAINTED LADIES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks Fay for an intersting Poem on the *Miracle of Butterfly Migration* ANGELA & I have both studied Zoology and we are amazed at the ability of small birds & butterflies to migrate huge distances during migration ! They are driven by HOPE and an innate Promise of BETTER LAND ! God designed & created them to survive the ordeal !
We too as HUMANS are also driven by HOPE and the promise of a BETTER LAND ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 16th, 2019 16:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks Fay for an intersting Poem on the *Miracle of Butterfly Migration* ANGELA & I have both studied Zoology and we are amazed at the ability of small birds & butterflies to migrate huge distances during migration ! They are driven by HOPE and an innate Promise of BETTER LAND ! God designed & created them to survive the ordeal !
We too as HUMANS are also driven by HOPE and the promise of a BETTER LAND ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 16th, 2019 16:42
WINGED.
Fay Slimm. said:
Good for you to choose flying hearts Brian -- the picture explains their allure -- and of course once unlocked and flying the heart can become truly unassailable. Loevd your comment and thank you lots for your visit and read.
July 15th, 2019 16:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Good for you to choose flying hearts Brian -- the picture explains their allure -- and of course once unlocked and flying the heart can become truly unassailable. Loevd your comment and thank you lots for your visit and read.
July 15th, 2019 16:10
WINGED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY love the PICTURE and the POEM about winged HEARTS ! We should never bottle up our LOVE we should always give wings to our HEARTS !
People have asked ANGELA & I about the use of three 🧡🧡🧡 at the end of our postings. The three hearts says I or WE LOVE YOU !
In comments our MPS Family always get four hearts 🧡🧡🧡🧡 and ANDY gets an extra one for JOYCE and ORCHII a + 🧡 for FIDO ! New Members get ONE or TWO and for ME ~ ANGELA gets SEVEN (for perfection) and she sends SEVEN back to ME ! OK !
So we dont send *FLYING FLOWERS* we send *FLYING HEARTS* instead to spread a little LOVE thoughout MPS !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 10:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY love the PICTURE and the POEM about winged HEARTS ! We should never bottle up our LOVE we should always give wings to our HEARTS !
People have asked ANGELA & I about the use of three 🧡🧡🧡 at the end of our postings. The three hearts says I or WE LOVE YOU !
In comments our MPS Family always get four hearts 🧡🧡🧡🧡 and ANDY gets an extra one for JOYCE and ORCHII a + 🧡 for FIDO ! New Members get ONE or TWO and for ME ~ ANGELA gets SEVEN (for perfection) and she sends SEVEN back to ME ! OK !
So we dont send *FLYING FLOWERS* we send *FLYING HEARTS* instead to spread a little LOVE thoughout MPS !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 10:23
WINGED.
Suresh said:
AAAHHHHH!!!!!! When in love, one truly is soaring....like your words.
July 15th, 2019 08:58
Suresh said:
AAAHHHHH!!!!!! When in love, one truly is soaring....like your words.
July 15th, 2019 08:58
WINGED.
Neville said:
simple, to the point and almost contained within a heart shaped poem..... the accompanying image made me smile this mane too.... N
July 15th, 2019 02:16
Neville said:
simple, to the point and almost contained within a heart shaped poem..... the accompanying image made me smile this mane too.... N
July 15th, 2019 02:16
WINGED.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wing your flights, you hearts.... sounds like a line I could use in a poem!
July 15th, 2019 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wing your flights, you hearts.... sounds like a line I could use in a poem!
July 15th, 2019 01:52
Mantra\'s Mistique.
Neville said:
Pon my very word, we all need such a mantra...... and your final stanza is to die for........ Neville
July 14th, 2019 09:43
Neville said:
Pon my very word, we all need such a mantra...... and your final stanza is to die for........ Neville
July 14th, 2019 09:43
THE SUNFLOWER.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here 9am Sunday morning ! Love SUNFLOWERS - love your Poem : You have captured their very essence !
Tall - and yes ~ they really do smile ! A Giant seeking for the Rain ! Soakin up more rain in a hour than I drink all day ! Bringing such Joy & Glory to my Garden ! MAMA used to get us to grow Sunflowers to see whose could reach to the SKY : happy memories !
Blessings & Peace & Love to YOU
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 13th, 2019 15:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here 9am Sunday morning ! Love SUNFLOWERS - love your Poem : You have captured their very essence !
Tall - and yes ~ they really do smile ! A Giant seeking for the Rain ! Soakin up more rain in a hour than I drink all day ! Bringing such Joy & Glory to my Garden ! MAMA used to get us to grow Sunflowers to see whose could reach to the SKY : happy memories !
Blessings & Peace & Love to YOU
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 13th, 2019 15:32
Inside Breath.
Neville said:
this is indeed an elegant poem, a joy to read and a pleasure to see perfectly pinned to the page....
your \'Inside Breath\' took mine and blew me away ..N..
July 13th, 2019 03:54
Neville said:
this is indeed an elegant poem, a joy to read and a pleasure to see perfectly pinned to the page....
your \'Inside Breath\' took mine and blew me away ..N..
July 13th, 2019 03:54
THE SUNFLOWER.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The sunflower along with the poppy and the daisy are three of my favorite flowers! They bring me back to my very, very happy early childhood memories!
‘The sunflower silently sighs
Then smiles again.”
Yes, indeed! It certainly does...as does your beautiful poem!
~Laura~🌻
July 12th, 2019 23:49
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The sunflower along with the poppy and the daisy are three of my favorite flowers! They bring me back to my very, very happy early childhood memories!
‘The sunflower silently sighs
Then smiles again.”
Yes, indeed! It certainly does...as does your beautiful poem!
~Laura~🌻
July 12th, 2019 23:49
THE SUNFLOWER.
Suresh said:
Sunflower 🌻 traces the movement of the Sun, from dawn to dusk, as if paying homage, and then silently sleeps the night till next morning.
A refreshing poem indeed
July 12th, 2019 13:02
Suresh said:
Sunflower 🌻 traces the movement of the Sun, from dawn to dusk, as if paying homage, and then silently sleeps the night till next morning.
A refreshing poem indeed
July 12th, 2019 13:02
THE SUNFLOWER.
Neville said:
you got the heart of it and that\'s the whole of it........ beautiful...
July 12th, 2019 11:46
Neville said:
you got the heart of it and that\'s the whole of it........ beautiful...
July 12th, 2019 11:46
Winnow The Wind.
Neville said:
I am watching the cobwebs play with my own vines this very hot mane...
a little treat for myself these words this day.... Fay....... Neville
July 12th, 2019 02:29
Neville said:
I am watching the cobwebs play with my own vines this very hot mane...
a little treat for myself these words this day.... Fay....... Neville
July 12th, 2019 02:29
PLANNED.
Suresh said:
I have so many times thought of writing about a blade of grass and how sturdy they really are. Much has not been said about the exotic smell of a fresh cut grass and the thrill of rolling around in it.
Thnx for this poem
July 10th, 2019 15:52
Suresh said:
I have so many times thought of writing about a blade of grass and how sturdy they really are. Much has not been said about the exotic smell of a fresh cut grass and the thrill of rolling around in it.
Thnx for this poem
July 10th, 2019 15:52
PLANNED.
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderfully written, superbly expressed = as ever from your magical pen.
July 10th, 2019 07:52
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderfully written, superbly expressed = as ever from your magical pen.
July 10th, 2019 07:52
PLANNED.
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of nature can be so strong and so inspiring Fay.
July 10th, 2019 05:10
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of nature can be so strong and so inspiring Fay.
July 10th, 2019 05:10
PLANNED.
Neville said:
wonderfully writ and raising the kind of questions only a poet would care to try and understand....
pen perfect.... Neville
July 10th, 2019 02:54
Neville said:
wonderfully writ and raising the kind of questions only a poet would care to try and understand....
pen perfect.... Neville
July 10th, 2019 02:54
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