Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Unwrapped.
Michael Edwards said:
An uplifting write Fay - now where is that skinny dipping taking place?
August 1st, 2019 05:38
Michael Edwards said:
An uplifting write Fay - now where is that skinny dipping taking place?
August 1st, 2019 05:38
Unwrapped.
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is one hell of a love poem for sure... darn near perfect, and then some....
Neville
August 1st, 2019 03:04
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is one hell of a love poem for sure... darn near perfect, and then some....
Neville
August 1st, 2019 03:04
Distracted.
Christina8 said:
The quote was wonderful and your poem simply magnificent! Enjoyed the read very much!
July 31st, 2019 21:27
Christina8 said:
The quote was wonderful and your poem simply magnificent! Enjoyed the read very much!
July 31st, 2019 21:27
Distracted.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA : Angela here ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY. Love your analogy between *A Boat adrift* and the DISTRACTIONS we face every day. I have been sailing here most weekends and the winds can be very unpredictable and Brian has warned me never to go out on my own ! There are many other distractions as well. My JOB is all about being focussed and giving the right advice & treatment to my Clients who want full & pain free MOBILITY asap. I also have a responsibility to my 5 female Maori Students to teach them how to understand X-rays ~ Response to touch & flexings and the ability to make the exercise & recovery Programme specific and appropriate to each client ! There is no room for distraction ! As PHYSIOS we have to be a Jack of All Joints & Muscles and Master of ONE - such as Hand - Foot - Leg - Arm - Neck - Spine ~ Pelvis etc. For the last two years I have specialised on the Hand ! Manual dexterity is so so important as you know ! It will take another Year of Study & Practice to be certified as a Manual Physiotherapist and assigned to specific patients as well as a General Physio & also a General Tutor. I guess about 1 in a 100 Physio Clients need specialist treatment with Manual Physiotherapy. There have been several successful HAND TRANSPLANTS but I have not worked with any ! My own hands are very important in my Job so I always wear light gloves when Gardening and heavy gloves when using Power Tools etc !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love in the Spirit ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙
July 31st, 2019 18:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA : Angela here ! Thanks for caring & sharing FAY. Love your analogy between *A Boat adrift* and the DISTRACTIONS we face every day. I have been sailing here most weekends and the winds can be very unpredictable and Brian has warned me never to go out on my own ! There are many other distractions as well. My JOB is all about being focussed and giving the right advice & treatment to my Clients who want full & pain free MOBILITY asap. I also have a responsibility to my 5 female Maori Students to teach them how to understand X-rays ~ Response to touch & flexings and the ability to make the exercise & recovery Programme specific and appropriate to each client ! There is no room for distraction ! As PHYSIOS we have to be a Jack of All Joints & Muscles and Master of ONE - such as Hand - Foot - Leg - Arm - Neck - Spine ~ Pelvis etc. For the last two years I have specialised on the Hand ! Manual dexterity is so so important as you know ! It will take another Year of Study & Practice to be certified as a Manual Physiotherapist and assigned to specific patients as well as a General Physio & also a General Tutor. I guess about 1 in a 100 Physio Clients need specialist treatment with Manual Physiotherapy. There have been several successful HAND TRANSPLANTS but I have not worked with any ! My own hands are very important in my Job so I always wear light gloves when Gardening and heavy gloves when using Power Tools etc !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love in the Spirit ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙
July 31st, 2019 18:43
Distracted.
dusk arising said:
I came back to your poem tonite for a re-read and i have to say its really a moving write. I know exactly where it comes from and you convey a predicament more delicately and poetically than i could ever aspire to.
Hence it simply has to be a favourite.
July 31st, 2019 16:36
dusk arising said:
I came back to your poem tonite for a re-read and i have to say its really a moving write. I know exactly where it comes from and you convey a predicament more delicately and poetically than i could ever aspire to.
Hence it simply has to be a favourite.
July 31st, 2019 16:36
Distracted.
Suresh said:
I am like a dingy in a storm, hopelessly lost, but not in love.....
July 31st, 2019 12:54
Suresh said:
I am like a dingy in a storm, hopelessly lost, but not in love.....
July 31st, 2019 12:54
Distracted.
moordykspot2 said:
A truly meaningful piece of writing young Fay. I am a trifle Low today and your poem finishing with it\'s optimistic outlook was inspirational. thank you
July 31st, 2019 05:49
moordykspot2 said:
A truly meaningful piece of writing young Fay. I am a trifle Low today and your poem finishing with it\'s optimistic outlook was inspirational. thank you
July 31st, 2019 05:49
Distracted.
Goldfinch60 said:
WOW!
I was totally mesmerised by this,
May that song go on forever.
July 31st, 2019 04:52
Goldfinch60 said:
WOW!
I was totally mesmerised by this,
May that song go on forever.
July 31st, 2019 04:52
Distracted.
dusk arising said:
You have just inspired my poem for tomorrow which i gladly dedicate to you and is my response to this marvellous piece today.
Let your heart sing like a bird perched next to a cage who\'s door is now open wide.
July 31st, 2019 04:50
dusk arising said:
You have just inspired my poem for tomorrow which i gladly dedicate to you and is my response to this marvellous piece today.
Let your heart sing like a bird perched next to a cage who\'s door is now open wide.
July 31st, 2019 04:50
Distracted.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. People wish they could find distraction from my singing, but there\'s no cure for it! heehee.
July 31st, 2019 04:10
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. People wish they could find distraction from my singing, but there\'s no cure for it! heehee.
July 31st, 2019 04:10
Distracted.
Neville said:
smashing my dear.. a super distraction from the hum drum of the moment... my moment that is..... hence I\'m off to my own patch of ocean and shore... not too far from your own methinks......
Neville
July 31st, 2019 03:25
Neville said:
smashing my dear.. a super distraction from the hum drum of the moment... my moment that is..... hence I\'m off to my own patch of ocean and shore... not too far from your own methinks......
Neville
July 31st, 2019 03:25
Thirst.
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope is within us may it soon be beyond hope and become proof in our glorious lives.
July 31st, 2019 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope is within us may it soon be beyond hope and become proof in our glorious lives.
July 31st, 2019 00:41
Thirst.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! When one anthropomorphises the Ocean in to LOVER it produces a very powerful picture of relentless LOVE which Angela & I loved ! Love both the printed Poem and the awesome riposte it sparked in You ~ Powerful writing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 30th, 2019 15:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! When one anthropomorphises the Ocean in to LOVER it produces a very powerful picture of relentless LOVE which Angela & I loved ! Love both the printed Poem and the awesome riposte it sparked in You ~ Powerful writing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 30th, 2019 15:31
Thirst.
dusk arising said:
There\'s an ocean of love out there... I\'m hoping for a tsunami any day now... even got my cozzie on.
July 30th, 2019 12:06
dusk arising said:
There\'s an ocean of love out there... I\'m hoping for a tsunami any day now... even got my cozzie on.
July 30th, 2019 12:06
Thirst.
moordykspot2 said:
Hello Young Fay Some super verse my friend I really love reading your poems Thank you
July 30th, 2019 11:33
moordykspot2 said:
Hello Young Fay Some super verse my friend I really love reading your poems Thank you
July 30th, 2019 11:33
Thirst.
Michael Edwards said:
Your magical pen has again created a joy of a read.
July 30th, 2019 10:19
Michael Edwards said:
Your magical pen has again created a joy of a read.
July 30th, 2019 10:19
Thirst.
Neville said:
there can be no mistaking where the inspiration for today\'s poetic gift were conceived ...
I think it came from the heart and your\'s and true.....
July 30th, 2019 03:36
Neville said:
there can be no mistaking where the inspiration for today\'s poetic gift were conceived ...
I think it came from the heart and your\'s and true.....
July 30th, 2019 03:36
Learnt Curves.
Christina8 said:
The last line sums it up perfectly for me. I like your metaphors! A captivating read, Fay!
July 29th, 2019 19:21
Christina8 said:
The last line sums it up perfectly for me. I like your metaphors! A captivating read, Fay!
July 29th, 2019 19:21
Learnt Curves.
dusk arising said:
Reading your first stanza brought forth a gasp and \"there is much wisdom gained from the actual there\".
And so it continued, as i agreed with the sentiment so exquisitely phrased.
So very true and heartfelt by all who have journeyed loves chapters and allow a guarded hope a corner of their life.
July 29th, 2019 16:10
dusk arising said:
Reading your first stanza brought forth a gasp and \"there is much wisdom gained from the actual there\".
And so it continued, as i agreed with the sentiment so exquisitely phrased.
So very true and heartfelt by all who have journeyed loves chapters and allow a guarded hope a corner of their life.
July 29th, 2019 16:10
Learnt Curves.
Michael Edwards said:
And long may that love continue to breathe dear Fay. No room for shivers.
July 29th, 2019 13:04
Michael Edwards said:
And long may that love continue to breathe dear Fay. No room for shivers.
July 29th, 2019 13:04
Learnt Curves.
Suresh said:
You speak of love that once stoked melts all in its wake, and have poem\'d it with such depth. But, love is an uncontrolled emotion that once inflicted, cannot be tamed or inflamed.
July 29th, 2019 10:17
Suresh said:
You speak of love that once stoked melts all in its wake, and have poem\'d it with such depth. But, love is an uncontrolled emotion that once inflicted, cannot be tamed or inflamed.
July 29th, 2019 10:17
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