Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WINGED.
Suresh said:
AAAHHHHH!!!!!! When in love, one truly is soaring....like your words.
July 15th, 2019 08:58
Suresh said:
AAAHHHHH!!!!!! When in love, one truly is soaring....like your words.
July 15th, 2019 08:58
WINGED.
Neville said:
simple, to the point and almost contained within a heart shaped poem..... the accompanying image made me smile this mane too.... N
July 15th, 2019 02:16
Neville said:
simple, to the point and almost contained within a heart shaped poem..... the accompanying image made me smile this mane too.... N
July 15th, 2019 02:16
WINGED.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wing your flights, you hearts.... sounds like a line I could use in a poem!
July 15th, 2019 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wing your flights, you hearts.... sounds like a line I could use in a poem!
July 15th, 2019 01:52
Mantra\'s Mistique.
Neville said:
Pon my very word, we all need such a mantra...... and your final stanza is to die for........ Neville
July 14th, 2019 09:43
Neville said:
Pon my very word, we all need such a mantra...... and your final stanza is to die for........ Neville
July 14th, 2019 09:43
THE SUNFLOWER.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here 9am Sunday morning ! Love SUNFLOWERS - love your Poem : You have captured their very essence !
Tall - and yes ~ they really do smile ! A Giant seeking for the Rain ! Soakin up more rain in a hour than I drink all day ! Bringing such Joy & Glory to my Garden ! MAMA used to get us to grow Sunflowers to see whose could reach to the SKY : happy memories !
Blessings & Peace & Love to YOU
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 13th, 2019 15:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here 9am Sunday morning ! Love SUNFLOWERS - love your Poem : You have captured their very essence !
Tall - and yes ~ they really do smile ! A Giant seeking for the Rain ! Soakin up more rain in a hour than I drink all day ! Bringing such Joy & Glory to my Garden ! MAMA used to get us to grow Sunflowers to see whose could reach to the SKY : happy memories !
Blessings & Peace & Love to YOU
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 13th, 2019 15:32
Inside Breath.
Neville said:
this is indeed an elegant poem, a joy to read and a pleasure to see perfectly pinned to the page....
your \'Inside Breath\' took mine and blew me away ..N..
July 13th, 2019 03:54
Neville said:
this is indeed an elegant poem, a joy to read and a pleasure to see perfectly pinned to the page....
your \'Inside Breath\' took mine and blew me away ..N..
July 13th, 2019 03:54
THE SUNFLOWER.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The sunflower along with the poppy and the daisy are three of my favorite flowers! They bring me back to my very, very happy early childhood memories!
‘The sunflower silently sighs
Then smiles again.”
Yes, indeed! It certainly does...as does your beautiful poem!
~Laura~🌻
July 12th, 2019 23:49
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
The sunflower along with the poppy and the daisy are three of my favorite flowers! They bring me back to my very, very happy early childhood memories!
‘The sunflower silently sighs
Then smiles again.”
Yes, indeed! It certainly does...as does your beautiful poem!
~Laura~🌻
July 12th, 2019 23:49
THE SUNFLOWER.
Suresh said:
Sunflower 🌻 traces the movement of the Sun, from dawn to dusk, as if paying homage, and then silently sleeps the night till next morning.
A refreshing poem indeed
July 12th, 2019 13:02
Suresh said:
Sunflower 🌻 traces the movement of the Sun, from dawn to dusk, as if paying homage, and then silently sleeps the night till next morning.
A refreshing poem indeed
July 12th, 2019 13:02
THE SUNFLOWER.
Neville said:
you got the heart of it and that\'s the whole of it........ beautiful...
July 12th, 2019 11:46
Neville said:
you got the heart of it and that\'s the whole of it........ beautiful...
July 12th, 2019 11:46
Winnow The Wind.
Neville said:
I am watching the cobwebs play with my own vines this very hot mane...
a little treat for myself these words this day.... Fay....... Neville
July 12th, 2019 02:29
Neville said:
I am watching the cobwebs play with my own vines this very hot mane...
a little treat for myself these words this day.... Fay....... Neville
July 12th, 2019 02:29
PLANNED.
Suresh said:
I have so many times thought of writing about a blade of grass and how sturdy they really are. Much has not been said about the exotic smell of a fresh cut grass and the thrill of rolling around in it.
Thnx for this poem
July 10th, 2019 15:52
Suresh said:
I have so many times thought of writing about a blade of grass and how sturdy they really are. Much has not been said about the exotic smell of a fresh cut grass and the thrill of rolling around in it.
Thnx for this poem
July 10th, 2019 15:52
PLANNED.
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderfully written, superbly expressed = as ever from your magical pen.
July 10th, 2019 07:52
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderfully written, superbly expressed = as ever from your magical pen.
July 10th, 2019 07:52
PLANNED.
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of nature can be so strong and so inspiring Fay.
July 10th, 2019 05:10
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of nature can be so strong and so inspiring Fay.
July 10th, 2019 05:10
PLANNED.
Neville said:
wonderfully writ and raising the kind of questions only a poet would care to try and understand....
pen perfect.... Neville
July 10th, 2019 02:54
Neville said:
wonderfully writ and raising the kind of questions only a poet would care to try and understand....
pen perfect.... Neville
July 10th, 2019 02:54
TENDED.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that flower bloom into the beauty as shown by your words Fay.
July 10th, 2019 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that flower bloom into the beauty as shown by your words Fay.
July 10th, 2019 00:05
TENDED.
Suresh said:
You have planted a garden of hope, her her and others in her shoes.
July 9th, 2019 19:51
Suresh said:
You have planted a garden of hope, her her and others in her shoes.
July 9th, 2019 19:51
TENDED.
dusk arising said:
May she feel again the compost of adulation as the muck spreader of good fortune makes fertile her bed.
July 9th, 2019 11:49
dusk arising said:
May she feel again the compost of adulation as the muck spreader of good fortune makes fertile her bed.
July 9th, 2019 11:49
TENDED.
Michael Edwards said:
For a Lady deserving of love - beautiful write dear Fay.-
July 9th, 2019 06:24
Michael Edwards said:
For a Lady deserving of love - beautiful write dear Fay.-
July 9th, 2019 06:24
TENDED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (nearly Midnight !) Love the picture ! It is ME searching the skies for BA flying my BRIAN back to me again (OCTOBER !) Ahhhhh FAY : how Precious & Sensitive are we Ladies ? We need to be restored each night as we slumber away : our burned out feelings ! We give out so so much LOVE in all we do ! We do need sensitive breezes to restore our Dreams ! We do need Peace & caring Love ! The gardens of our life do get overgrown with weeds with the pace of life : but with much TLC we can blossom in the Morning ! My JOB requires a Healing Touch and Female Physios bring a cornucopia of TLC to the JOB ! BUT we do need to be Spiritually : Mentally & Physically restored at the end of each day. I need someone to give Me a soothing Aromatherapy Massage : AMEN !
Thanks for your Poem : thought provoking at the
close of the Day : Blessings & Love & Peace
Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 9th, 2019 06:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (nearly Midnight !) Love the picture ! It is ME searching the skies for BA flying my BRIAN back to me again (OCTOBER !) Ahhhhh FAY : how Precious & Sensitive are we Ladies ? We need to be restored each night as we slumber away : our burned out feelings ! We give out so so much LOVE in all we do ! We do need sensitive breezes to restore our Dreams ! We do need Peace & caring Love ! The gardens of our life do get overgrown with weeds with the pace of life : but with much TLC we can blossom in the Morning ! My JOB requires a Healing Touch and Female Physios bring a cornucopia of TLC to the JOB ! BUT we do need to be Spiritually : Mentally & Physically restored at the end of each day. I need someone to give Me a soothing Aromatherapy Massage : AMEN !
Thanks for your Poem : thought provoking at the
close of the Day : Blessings & Love & Peace
Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 9th, 2019 06:04
ENCORE.
orchidee said:
Looks like walking/dancing on water too! Another fine write Fay.
July 4th, 2019 11:23
orchidee said:
Looks like walking/dancing on water too! Another fine write Fay.
July 4th, 2019 11:23
ENCORE.
Suresh said:
I say keep on dancing, dance yourself into a chant, merge yourself to the beauty of nature, intoxicated by words of your poem
July 4th, 2019 10:13
Suresh said:
I say keep on dancing, dance yourself into a chant, merge yourself to the beauty of nature, intoxicated by words of your poem
July 4th, 2019 10:13
ENCORE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : MIDNIGHT and another lovely NZ Day is Over ! Love the Picture & Poem : Looks like Me : Lady in White splashing the Bay and enjoying the New Sunset : AMEN *Now the Day is Over* is a fave Hymn of mine and your elegant poem echoes that ! YES Dusk does have an Ethereal Charm and when on the Beach @ New Jersey USA when the Sun Goes Down we all sing *The Star Spangled Banner* and thank GOD for another Day. Midnight has just turned and I am dancing : but sadly *Alone again : Naturally*
All your POEMS \'n PICS evoke good vibes !
Blessings & Peace & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our tribute to USA Independence : Tnanks A & B !
July 4th, 2019 06:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : MIDNIGHT and another lovely NZ Day is Over ! Love the Picture & Poem : Looks like Me : Lady in White splashing the Bay and enjoying the New Sunset : AMEN *Now the Day is Over* is a fave Hymn of mine and your elegant poem echoes that ! YES Dusk does have an Ethereal Charm and when on the Beach @ New Jersey USA when the Sun Goes Down we all sing *The Star Spangled Banner* and thank GOD for another Day. Midnight has just turned and I am dancing : but sadly *Alone again : Naturally*
All your POEMS \'n PICS evoke good vibes !
Blessings & Peace & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our tribute to USA Independence : Tnanks A & B !
July 4th, 2019 06:20
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