Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
VIBES.
Suresh said:
Truly intense poetry indeed - a classroom subject of discussion
June 22nd, 2019 08:13
Suresh said:
Truly intense poetry indeed - a classroom subject of discussion
June 22nd, 2019 08:13
VIBES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, listening to nature passed is one of the things I do as I walk beside My river.
June 21st, 2019 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, listening to nature passed is one of the things I do as I walk beside My river.
June 21st, 2019 03:00
VIBES.
Neville said:
Your \'Vibes\' Fay is awe inspiring and made me shudder, for more reasons than might meet the eye... you touch on things here that I have been toying with myself in the last several days..... Neville
June 21st, 2019 01:41
Neville said:
Your \'Vibes\' Fay is awe inspiring and made me shudder, for more reasons than might meet the eye... you touch on things here that I have been toying with myself in the last several days..... Neville
June 21st, 2019 01:41
Victorious.
Neville said:
you got it in a nutshell here Fay.. it always wins in the end...... N
June 21st, 2019 01:24
Neville said:
you got it in a nutshell here Fay.. it always wins in the end...... N
June 21st, 2019 01:24
Bubble Magic.
Neville said:
the splendid sphere depicted here fragile and true
captured for eternity in words both iridescent and almost indescribabubble ....
I have a witches ball hanging in my study eerily similar in size and hue.. how strange is that.. N
June 20th, 2019 16:28
Neville said:
the splendid sphere depicted here fragile and true
captured for eternity in words both iridescent and almost indescribabubble ....
I have a witches ball hanging in my study eerily similar in size and hue.. how strange is that.. N
June 20th, 2019 16:28
SEDUCTION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA HERE ! Its nearly NOON (Saturday) Ive just had BRUNCH and getting ready for a SAIL 16C = 61F not bad for two weeks into WINTER ! Love the sub-tropical CLIMATE here ! Brian left this one for me to reply to : He loved it ! In esence I agree with You FAY : It is the Ladies who are the SEDUCERS and the MEN who are SEDUCED ! Females were created with many more *Tokens of Passion* to offer than mere MEN ! The WINE of our Passion is RED : like VINTAGE RIOJA : and it does both MAKE & BREAK MAN ! One taste at the Fountain of our LOVE and they are Slaves to our PASSION for EVER & A DAY : AMEN ! Thanks for sharing : I love SEXTETS with an abcabc Rhyme Pattern : flowing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 14th, 2019 18:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA HERE ! Its nearly NOON (Saturday) Ive just had BRUNCH and getting ready for a SAIL 16C = 61F not bad for two weeks into WINTER ! Love the sub-tropical CLIMATE here ! Brian left this one for me to reply to : He loved it ! In esence I agree with You FAY : It is the Ladies who are the SEDUCERS and the MEN who are SEDUCED ! Females were created with many more *Tokens of Passion* to offer than mere MEN ! The WINE of our Passion is RED : like VINTAGE RIOJA : and it does both MAKE & BREAK MAN ! One taste at the Fountain of our LOVE and they are Slaves to our PASSION for EVER & A DAY : AMEN ! Thanks for sharing : I love SEXTETS with an abcabc Rhyme Pattern : flowing !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 14th, 2019 18:05
SEDUCTION.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ESCAPE!!! are you mad???
Wonderful write AGAIN! Fay
Love the SSSsssaucey SSsssnake!
June 14th, 2019 12:48
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
ESCAPE!!! are you mad???
Wonderful write AGAIN! Fay
Love the SSSsssaucey SSsssnake!
June 14th, 2019 12:48
SEDUCTION.
Neville said:
ah\' the lure and the grip of a satin boa....... intoxicating.. in a fun kinda way..... delicious & then some.... Neville
June 14th, 2019 05:15
Neville said:
ah\' the lure and the grip of a satin boa....... intoxicating.. in a fun kinda way..... delicious & then some.... Neville
June 14th, 2019 05:15
WE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : Its 8am here and Ive just woken up to a new DAY. Working hard on my reports & assessments for my 5 Trainees ! Thanks for writing a lovely Love Poem about ME ! I love my Victorian Dress and my whistful look as I gaze into the SKY just waiting & waiting for BRIAN\'s return.
Verse 1. If I was in Brian*s Arms : as we were on South Island : I would sleep each night : like a BABY ! Ecstasy repeated !
V 2. Could but hold BRIAN : Physically : once each DAY : My Soul would be at rest ! Destiny unfolded !
V 3. Time would indeed cease : if we we *physically* together again ! Paradise regained !
Thanks for sharing FAY : it gives me strength to survive til OCTOBER !
Blessings & Peace & Love as always
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 14:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : Its 8am here and Ive just woken up to a new DAY. Working hard on my reports & assessments for my 5 Trainees ! Thanks for writing a lovely Love Poem about ME ! I love my Victorian Dress and my whistful look as I gaze into the SKY just waiting & waiting for BRIAN\'s return.
Verse 1. If I was in Brian*s Arms : as we were on South Island : I would sleep each night : like a BABY ! Ecstasy repeated !
V 2. Could but hold BRIAN : Physically : once each DAY : My Soul would be at rest ! Destiny unfolded !
V 3. Time would indeed cease : if we we *physically* together again ! Paradise regained !
Thanks for sharing FAY : it gives me strength to survive til OCTOBER !
Blessings & Peace & Love as always
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 14:14
WE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : Its 8am here and Ive just woken up to a new DAY. Working hard on my reports & assessments for my 5 Trainees ! Thanks for writing a lovely Love Poem about ME ! I love my Victorian Dress and my whistful look as I gaze into the SKY just waiting & waiting for BRIAN\'s return.
Verse 1. If I was in Brian*s Arms : as we were on South Island : I would sleep each night : like a BABY ! Ecstasy repeated !
V 2. Could but hold BRIAN : Physically : once each : My Soul would be at rest ! Destiny unfolded !
V 3. Time would indeed cease if we we *physically* together again ! Paradise regained !
Thanks for sharing FAY : it gives me strength to survive til OCTOBER !
Blessings & Peace & Love as always
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 14:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY : Its 8am here and Ive just woken up to a new DAY. Working hard on my reports & assessments for my 5 Trainees ! Thanks for writing a lovely Love Poem about ME ! I love my Victorian Dress and my whistful look as I gaze into the SKY just waiting & waiting for BRIAN\'s return.
Verse 1. If I was in Brian*s Arms : as we were on South Island : I would sleep each night : like a BABY ! Ecstasy repeated !
V 2. Could but hold BRIAN : Physically : once each : My Soul would be at rest ! Destiny unfolded !
V 3. Time would indeed cease if we we *physically* together again ! Paradise regained !
Thanks for sharing FAY : it gives me strength to survive til OCTOBER !
Blessings & Peace & Love as always
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 14:14
WE.
Neville said:
I double dare anyone to deny these words failed to put a smile on their face... they bloomin well did mine... delightful Fay & true..... Neville
June 13th, 2019 08:01
Neville said:
I double dare anyone to deny these words failed to put a smile on their face... they bloomin well did mine... delightful Fay & true..... Neville
June 13th, 2019 08:01
WE.
dusk arising said:
Eyyup lass, tha\'s nailed eet wi words as teks me back tuh when dad bort us wu fost sprung mattress.
By gad many woh the neet ah spent laid a spoonin wi her from t\'post office in t\'high street.
Paradeese indeed it woh!
And i reet thank thee fo\' bringin t\'all back tuh me.
June 13th, 2019 07:06
dusk arising said:
Eyyup lass, tha\'s nailed eet wi words as teks me back tuh when dad bort us wu fost sprung mattress.
By gad many woh the neet ah spent laid a spoonin wi her from t\'post office in t\'high street.
Paradeese indeed it woh!
And i reet thank thee fo\' bringin t\'all back tuh me.
June 13th, 2019 07:06
ESTEEM.
Neville said:
filled like a bloomin garden... full of beautiful truisms one only need look... Neville
June 12th, 2019 02:34
Neville said:
filled like a bloomin garden... full of beautiful truisms one only need look... Neville
June 12th, 2019 02:34
SMALLNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Those little changes can be so wonderful and so important in life.
June 12th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. Those little changes can be so wonderful and so important in life.
June 12th, 2019 00:36
SMALLNESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY : ANGELA HERE : Its 9am (Wednesday) here annd MAMA & PAPA are flying back today via Los Angeles ! It has been wonderful having them here & everyone has treated them like they were their MAMA & PAPA : We have enjoyed every minute ! Love the picture : Love CABBAGE WHITES : BRIAN uses them to teach His Students about the Life Cycle ! Egg - Caterpillar - Pupa - Butterfly ! Love your Poem it has great Form & Function !
SIZE :There is a scale of things : from the COSMOS down to the ELECTRON and MAN (H. Sapiens) is in the MIDDLE. God gave us the Capacity to invent Telescopes & Microscopes and see His handiwork in the very large and the very small ! All the living things you focus on Grass - Leaves - petals - Toads - Bees - Worms - Birds - Ants - Snails - Slugs etc and then smaller still to microorganisms ! They all have their PLACE in NATURE in complex Food Chains & Food Webs which keep the BIOSPHERE in equilibrium : AMEN ! The FOOL has said in HIS HEART *There is NO GOD !* Thanks for sharing & caring FAY much food for THOUGHT : AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Your Friend ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check TOOTHACHE : Thanks A !
June 11th, 2019 15:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY : ANGELA HERE : Its 9am (Wednesday) here annd MAMA & PAPA are flying back today via Los Angeles ! It has been wonderful having them here & everyone has treated them like they were their MAMA & PAPA : We have enjoyed every minute ! Love the picture : Love CABBAGE WHITES : BRIAN uses them to teach His Students about the Life Cycle ! Egg - Caterpillar - Pupa - Butterfly ! Love your Poem it has great Form & Function !
SIZE :There is a scale of things : from the COSMOS down to the ELECTRON and MAN (H. Sapiens) is in the MIDDLE. God gave us the Capacity to invent Telescopes & Microscopes and see His handiwork in the very large and the very small ! All the living things you focus on Grass - Leaves - petals - Toads - Bees - Worms - Birds - Ants - Snails - Slugs etc and then smaller still to microorganisms ! They all have their PLACE in NATURE in complex Food Chains & Food Webs which keep the BIOSPHERE in equilibrium : AMEN ! The FOOL has said in HIS HEART *There is NO GOD !* Thanks for sharing & caring FAY much food for THOUGHT : AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Your Friend ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check TOOTHACHE : Thanks A !
June 11th, 2019 15:23
SMALLNESS.
MendedFences27 said:
It is that \"Smallness\" that allows the rest of us to exist. Bees are endangered at the moment, and without them we all perish. It\'s the small things in life that truly matter. In a person\'s mind it is also mostly the small things that become keepsakes. \"Littleness\" does indeed \"feed\" the \"soul\" as Natures little wonders feed the Earth. A lovely poem, Fay - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 10:13
MendedFences27 said:
It is that \"Smallness\" that allows the rest of us to exist. Bees are endangered at the moment, and without them we all perish. It\'s the small things in life that truly matter. In a person\'s mind it is also mostly the small things that become keepsakes. \"Littleness\" does indeed \"feed\" the \"soul\" as Natures little wonders feed the Earth. A lovely poem, Fay - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 10:13
SMALLNESS.
Neville said:
without the eyes of a poet and all associated skills, such wonders would go unnoticed, or at the very least, unremarked upon and then forgot.......... nice one Fay..... N
June 11th, 2019 05:22
Neville said:
without the eyes of a poet and all associated skills, such wonders would go unnoticed, or at the very least, unremarked upon and then forgot.......... nice one Fay..... N
June 11th, 2019 05:22
SMALLNESS.
dusk arising said:
Heady things that we are, it is so easy to ignore the tiny world at our feet.
Around the patch where i live there are an amazing amount of small black spiders down there. Get down to their level and they are unmissable.
You took me to a similar place of meditation. So many weeds i should have dealt with.
June 11th, 2019 03:26
dusk arising said:
Heady things that we are, it is so easy to ignore the tiny world at our feet.
Around the patch where i live there are an amazing amount of small black spiders down there. Get down to their level and they are unmissable.
You took me to a similar place of meditation. So many weeds i should have dealt with.
June 11th, 2019 03:26
SMALLNESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Fay. Snail-saving time now - damp weather, they come out of hedges, and try to cross the \'motorway\' - the pavement! More a bit later in the year though.
June 11th, 2019 02:51
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Fay. Snail-saving time now - damp weather, they come out of hedges, and try to cross the \'motorway\' - the pavement! More a bit later in the year though.
June 11th, 2019 02:51
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