Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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Goldfinch60 said:
May that flower bloom into the beauty as shown by your words Fay.
July 10th, 2019 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that flower bloom into the beauty as shown by your words Fay.
July 10th, 2019 00:05
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Suresh said:
You have planted a garden of hope, her her and others in her shoes.
July 9th, 2019 19:51
Suresh said:
You have planted a garden of hope, her her and others in her shoes.
July 9th, 2019 19:51
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dusk arising said:
May she feel again the compost of adulation as the muck spreader of good fortune makes fertile her bed.
July 9th, 2019 11:49
dusk arising said:
May she feel again the compost of adulation as the muck spreader of good fortune makes fertile her bed.
July 9th, 2019 11:49
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Michael Edwards said:
For a Lady deserving of love - beautiful write dear Fay.-
July 9th, 2019 06:24
Michael Edwards said:
For a Lady deserving of love - beautiful write dear Fay.-
July 9th, 2019 06:24
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (nearly Midnight !) Love the picture ! It is ME searching the skies for BA flying my BRIAN back to me again (OCTOBER !) Ahhhhh FAY : how Precious & Sensitive are we Ladies ? We need to be restored each night as we slumber away : our burned out feelings ! We give out so so much LOVE in all we do ! We do need sensitive breezes to restore our Dreams ! We do need Peace & caring Love ! The gardens of our life do get overgrown with weeds with the pace of life : but with much TLC we can blossom in the Morning ! My JOB requires a Healing Touch and Female Physios bring a cornucopia of TLC to the JOB ! BUT we do need to be Spiritually : Mentally & Physically restored at the end of each day. I need someone to give Me a soothing Aromatherapy Massage : AMEN !
Thanks for your Poem : thought provoking at the
close of the Day : Blessings & Love & Peace
Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 9th, 2019 06:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (nearly Midnight !) Love the picture ! It is ME searching the skies for BA flying my BRIAN back to me again (OCTOBER !) Ahhhhh FAY : how Precious & Sensitive are we Ladies ? We need to be restored each night as we slumber away : our burned out feelings ! We give out so so much LOVE in all we do ! We do need sensitive breezes to restore our Dreams ! We do need Peace & caring Love ! The gardens of our life do get overgrown with weeds with the pace of life : but with much TLC we can blossom in the Morning ! My JOB requires a Healing Touch and Female Physios bring a cornucopia of TLC to the JOB ! BUT we do need to be Spiritually : Mentally & Physically restored at the end of each day. I need someone to give Me a soothing Aromatherapy Massage : AMEN !
Thanks for your Poem : thought provoking at the
close of the Day : Blessings & Love & Peace
Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 9th, 2019 06:04
ENCORE.
orchidee said:
Looks like walking/dancing on water too! Another fine write Fay.
July 4th, 2019 11:23
orchidee said:
Looks like walking/dancing on water too! Another fine write Fay.
July 4th, 2019 11:23
ENCORE.
Suresh said:
I say keep on dancing, dance yourself into a chant, merge yourself to the beauty of nature, intoxicated by words of your poem
July 4th, 2019 10:13
Suresh said:
I say keep on dancing, dance yourself into a chant, merge yourself to the beauty of nature, intoxicated by words of your poem
July 4th, 2019 10:13
ENCORE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : MIDNIGHT and another lovely NZ Day is Over ! Love the Picture & Poem : Looks like Me : Lady in White splashing the Bay and enjoying the New Sunset : AMEN *Now the Day is Over* is a fave Hymn of mine and your elegant poem echoes that ! YES Dusk does have an Ethereal Charm and when on the Beach @ New Jersey USA when the Sun Goes Down we all sing *The Star Spangled Banner* and thank GOD for another Day. Midnight has just turned and I am dancing : but sadly *Alone again : Naturally*
All your POEMS \'n PICS evoke good vibes !
Blessings & Peace & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our tribute to USA Independence : Tnanks A & B !
July 4th, 2019 06:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : MIDNIGHT and another lovely NZ Day is Over ! Love the Picture & Poem : Looks like Me : Lady in White splashing the Bay and enjoying the New Sunset : AMEN *Now the Day is Over* is a fave Hymn of mine and your elegant poem echoes that ! YES Dusk does have an Ethereal Charm and when on the Beach @ New Jersey USA when the Sun Goes Down we all sing *The Star Spangled Banner* and thank GOD for another Day. Midnight has just turned and I am dancing : but sadly *Alone again : Naturally*
All your POEMS \'n PICS evoke good vibes !
Blessings & Peace & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our tribute to USA Independence : Tnanks A & B !
July 4th, 2019 06:20
PRECIOUS.
Michael Edwards said:
When I think of children I melt
When I think of my own children I\'m proud
Super write Fay.
July 3rd, 2019 08:49
Michael Edwards said:
When I think of children I melt
When I think of my own children I\'m proud
Super write Fay.
July 3rd, 2019 08:49
PRECIOUS.
dusk arising said:
I have a son of forty years of whom i am so very proud... it is a joy to reflect back on his childhood days and see how his experiences have moulded him into what he is today.
Wonderful photos spring to mind, phrases like \"i\'ve got a headache in my leg!\" and the games we played.
Joyously recalled right here and now with the reading of your words. Thank you Fay.
July 3rd, 2019 05:27
dusk arising said:
I have a son of forty years of whom i am so very proud... it is a joy to reflect back on his childhood days and see how his experiences have moulded him into what he is today.
Wonderful photos spring to mind, phrases like \"i\'ve got a headache in my leg!\" and the games we played.
Joyously recalled right here and now with the reading of your words. Thank you Fay.
July 3rd, 2019 05:27
PRECIOUS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! ANGELA here its 11pm : almost time for BED again ! Love the Photo : wish i could be a little Girl again : just for a WEEK ! Love the consistent meter in your linguistically elegant Blank Verse Ode ! Love the precious memories afforded by Old Snaps ! Precious hours - Green days - High times & Good years ! I had a blessed Childhood in London & Sevillia *O Yes I remember it well* You have brought the memories flooding back ! I fully concur wih the final verse and th last line *We become AGELESS !* Ruth & I are always giggling : over some silly thing : like SCHOOLGIRLS ! We are such a blessing to each other ! Ruth is flying home in September (she is getting married @ Christmas - Romantic !) but BRIAN is coming to take me back Home to Essex ! in October ! Thanks agisn for a lovely Pic an\' Poem !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA (& BRIAN) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 3rd, 2019 05:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! ANGELA here its 11pm : almost time for BED again ! Love the Photo : wish i could be a little Girl again : just for a WEEK ! Love the consistent meter in your linguistically elegant Blank Verse Ode ! Love the precious memories afforded by Old Snaps ! Precious hours - Green days - High times & Good years ! I had a blessed Childhood in London & Sevillia *O Yes I remember it well* You have brought the memories flooding back ! I fully concur wih the final verse and th last line *We become AGELESS !* Ruth & I are always giggling : over some silly thing : like SCHOOLGIRLS ! We are such a blessing to each other ! Ruth is flying home in September (she is getting married @ Christmas - Romantic !) but BRIAN is coming to take me back Home to Essex ! in October ! Thanks agisn for a lovely Pic an\' Poem !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA (& BRIAN) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 3rd, 2019 05:11
PRECIOUS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those cob-webbed boxes can hold some wonderful memories.
I have a cob webbed covered trunk in the loft full of photographs.
July 3rd, 2019 03:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those cob-webbed boxes can hold some wonderful memories.
I have a cob webbed covered trunk in the loft full of photographs.
July 3rd, 2019 03:13
PRECIOUS.
Neville said:
Word perfect if you ask me... perfect anyway for such a day as this.. sun smiles and such super simple recollections... got to dash... got a plane to catch... N
July 3rd, 2019 02:43
Neville said:
Word perfect if you ask me... perfect anyway for such a day as this.. sun smiles and such super simple recollections... got to dash... got a plane to catch... N
July 3rd, 2019 02:43
Naked Heart.
Neville said:
How I wish I had found this last eve when I felt for the life of me, I was the only one ....
this is more than super tis soporific ..... Neville
July 3rd, 2019 01:37
Neville said:
How I wish I had found this last eve when I felt for the life of me, I was the only one ....
this is more than super tis soporific ..... Neville
July 3rd, 2019 01:37
LEARNING.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your wonderful poem, we are reminded we’re forever learning...and that’s a great thing!
Taking care of my Aunt’s needs at this time, the specific words that stand out for me at the moment are the following...
“compassionate feeders of more
relief to those in need,”
Thank you for sharing your magnificent pen!
~Laura~
July 2nd, 2019 18:55
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your wonderful poem, we are reminded we’re forever learning...and that’s a great thing!
Taking care of my Aunt’s needs at this time, the specific words that stand out for me at the moment are the following...
“compassionate feeders of more
relief to those in need,”
Thank you for sharing your magnificent pen!
~Laura~
July 2nd, 2019 18:55
LEARNING.
Poetic Dan said:
I do wish so, and what a wonderful mindful read to help me process my evening!
Thank you so much
July 2nd, 2019 16:56
Poetic Dan said:
I do wish so, and what a wonderful mindful read to help me process my evening!
Thank you so much
July 2nd, 2019 16:56
LEARNING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY ~ BRIAN here ! LOVE THE CONCEPTS & feel good factors (in this Poem) all induced by LEARNING ~ which in my experience (at the tender age of 35) is a *cradletograve* process ! H Sapiens is programmed to *Never know enough !* Always Always learning but never coming to a real understanding of TRUTH ! However LEARNING does lead to UNDERSTANDING and makes us better CITIZENS ! Good feel mediums ~ Mood transformers ~ Compassionate feeders ~ Bringer of bliss ~ Cheer makers ~ Care trillionaires ! ~ Givers ~ Yielders ~ Creators ~ Changers ~ Achievers ~ All this & More ~ AMEN ! It reads like the SALVATION ARMY\'s Mission Statement for 2020 ! Only to be what GOD wants ME to be ~ every moment of every DAY ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Love & Peace & JOY
Yours as always BRIAN (& ANGELA) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 2nd, 2019 11:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FAY ~ BRIAN here ! LOVE THE CONCEPTS & feel good factors (in this Poem) all induced by LEARNING ~ which in my experience (at the tender age of 35) is a *cradletograve* process ! H Sapiens is programmed to *Never know enough !* Always Always learning but never coming to a real understanding of TRUTH ! However LEARNING does lead to UNDERSTANDING and makes us better CITIZENS ! Good feel mediums ~ Mood transformers ~ Compassionate feeders ~ Bringer of bliss ~ Cheer makers ~ Care trillionaires ! ~ Givers ~ Yielders ~ Creators ~ Changers ~ Achievers ~ All this & More ~ AMEN ! It reads like the SALVATION ARMY\'s Mission Statement for 2020 ! Only to be what GOD wants ME to be ~ every moment of every DAY ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Love & Peace & JOY
Yours as always BRIAN (& ANGELA) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 2nd, 2019 11:28
LEARNING.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that reason to be the person we are always be inside us.
July 2nd, 2019 09:13
Goldfinch60 said:
May that reason to be the person we are always be inside us.
July 2nd, 2019 09:13
LEARNING.
Suresh said:
A silent doer, is in \"nirvana\" at all times.
Thoroughly enjoyed your poetic presentation
July 2nd, 2019 03:56
Suresh said:
A silent doer, is in \"nirvana\" at all times.
Thoroughly enjoyed your poetic presentation
July 2nd, 2019 03:56
LEARNING.
Neville said:
I am lost for words as I work through these of yours for the severalth time ...filled with both admiration and respect for the wanting to be.....what you have drawn attention to here.....and yes, I am all for lifelong learning...... Neville
July 2nd, 2019 03:52
Neville said:
I am lost for words as I work through these of yours for the severalth time ...filled with both admiration and respect for the wanting to be.....what you have drawn attention to here.....and yes, I am all for lifelong learning...... Neville
July 2nd, 2019 03:52
CHANGE.
Christina8 said:
oh Fay---WoW!! Such descriptive language invokes the beauty of every day. Thank you for sharing!
July 1st, 2019 22:28
Christina8 said:
oh Fay---WoW!! Such descriptive language invokes the beauty of every day. Thank you for sharing!
July 1st, 2019 22:28
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