Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Otherness.
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is absolutely brilliant.... am almost lost for words...
Tis really quite beautiful .. this is precisely how I grew up... thank you for triggering such fond memories and for helping me keep faith in poetry............ Neville
August 7th, 2019 04:00
Neville said:
Hey Fay.. this is absolutely brilliant.... am almost lost for words...
Tis really quite beautiful .. this is precisely how I grew up... thank you for triggering such fond memories and for helping me keep faith in poetry............ Neville
August 7th, 2019 04:00
Otherness.
kevin browne said:
Where I was brought up in a tiny Village called Street in the 1970/80s used to be such a beautiful little place There were fun things to get on with and golden memories made. Today it is 3 times larger than the original and is also covered in tarmac and restuarants. You poem brought memories flooding back. Thank you for this inspiring peice..!!
August 7th, 2019 03:45
kevin browne said:
Where I was brought up in a tiny Village called Street in the 1970/80s used to be such a beautiful little place There were fun things to get on with and golden memories made. Today it is 3 times larger than the original and is also covered in tarmac and restuarants. You poem brought memories flooding back. Thank you for this inspiring peice..!!
August 7th, 2019 03:45
Knowing.
Seek said:
How many of us want to know without giving a thought to what lies beyond? Knowing is a bridge to that beyond. Great write.
August 7th, 2019 03:44
Seek said:
How many of us want to know without giving a thought to what lies beyond? Knowing is a bridge to that beyond. Great write.
August 7th, 2019 03:44
Knowing.
kevin browne said:
Those aliens been creeping out of you again, Fay? Even if they are or they aijn\'t you ressurect the beleive beyond the knowing. A little gem though I must admit..!!!
August 7th, 2019 00:25
kevin browne said:
Those aliens been creeping out of you again, Fay? Even if they are or they aijn\'t you ressurect the beleive beyond the knowing. A little gem though I must admit..!!!
August 7th, 2019 00:25
Knowing.
Goldfinch60 said:
As you we’ll know Fay each moment is to be treasured as are your words.
August 6th, 2019 15:30
Goldfinch60 said:
As you we’ll know Fay each moment is to be treasured as are your words.
August 6th, 2019 15:30
Knowing.
dusk arising said:
You have me standing on a hilltop common (Burleigh, Glos) gazing to the cloudless 2 am sky. Feeling it.
August 6th, 2019 05:45
dusk arising said:
You have me standing on a hilltop common (Burleigh, Glos) gazing to the cloudless 2 am sky. Feeling it.
August 6th, 2019 05:45
Knowing.
Neville said:
that is a kind of special feeling and a knowing... and you convey that so well here within three perfectly formed stanza\'s............. Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:27
Neville said:
that is a kind of special feeling and a knowing... and you convey that so well here within three perfectly formed stanza\'s............. Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:27
Knowing.
orchidee said:
I\'m knowing this is a fine write Fay!
Some are annoyed by \'This moment in time\' and similar expressions. lol.
August 6th, 2019 03:15
orchidee said:
I\'m knowing this is a fine write Fay!
Some are annoyed by \'This moment in time\' and similar expressions. lol.
August 6th, 2019 03:15
Need.
Christina8 said:
I agree with Da, you are the champion of romantic writes! An excellent read from beginning to end!!
August 5th, 2019 13:30
Christina8 said:
I agree with Da, you are the champion of romantic writes! An excellent read from beginning to end!!
August 5th, 2019 13:30
Need.
dusk arising said:
You are the champion of romantic recollection. Beautiful phrasing held me from line one..... i was there, and those last three lines speak of the longing in any still single romantics very soul.
Is this becoming a habit because this is another for my favourites.
August 5th, 2019 12:51
dusk arising said:
You are the champion of romantic recollection. Beautiful phrasing held me from line one..... i was there, and those last three lines speak of the longing in any still single romantics very soul.
Is this becoming a habit because this is another for my favourites.
August 5th, 2019 12:51
Need.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful Love Poem ! It rings a bell with Me because all Ladies need LOVE and to be LOVED ! being separated from my beloved Brian for over a Year (except for two precious visits) has been hard - but our love has been so strong that we have both remained FAITHFUL - Honest ! He is staying with me for a week when he comes in October ! We will have the Apartment to ourselves because RUTH is returning to England the week before ! So Brian tells Me we will live your LOVE POEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
V 1. Unspoken intention !
V 2. A Time for yielding !!
V 3. Fiery Sparks for lonely Hearts !!!
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 5th, 2019 08:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful Love Poem ! It rings a bell with Me because all Ladies need LOVE and to be LOVED ! being separated from my beloved Brian for over a Year (except for two precious visits) has been hard - but our love has been so strong that we have both remained FAITHFUL - Honest ! He is staying with me for a week when he comes in October ! We will have the Apartment to ourselves because RUTH is returning to England the week before ! So Brian tells Me we will live your LOVE POEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
V 1. Unspoken intention !
V 2. A Time for yielding !!
V 3. Fiery Sparks for lonely Hearts !!!
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 5th, 2019 08:23
Need.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. It\'s started me off crooning. No one can bear it, but it can\'t be helped! heehee.
August 5th, 2019 02:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. It\'s started me off crooning. No one can bear it, but it can\'t be helped! heehee.
August 5th, 2019 02:53
Need.
Neville said:
not only tender, but tantalizing too and so very satisfying right at the end, where you would most want it to be... N
August 5th, 2019 02:22
Neville said:
not only tender, but tantalizing too and so very satisfying right at the end, where you would most want it to be... N
August 5th, 2019 02:22
Need.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Fay, innocence moving on into love.
August 5th, 2019 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Fay, innocence moving on into love.
August 5th, 2019 02:12
Tended.
Suresh said:
In some places they have bells as collars to let us know if they have wandered off, otherwise very docile and hardly needing prodding to feed. A very lack-a-daisical activity, till the end of day, and then a lot of tending indeed.
A lovely poem on a lovely subject
August 4th, 2019 11:44
Suresh said:
In some places they have bells as collars to let us know if they have wandered off, otherwise very docile and hardly needing prodding to feed. A very lack-a-daisical activity, till the end of day, and then a lot of tending indeed.
A lovely poem on a lovely subject
August 4th, 2019 11:44
Do Try -
Neville said:
A flies sad demise is see & all despite your efforts to revive it.. maybe shoulda landed on ya biscuit...
stirred but not shaken tis truly heart breaken...... bless ya Fay....
Neville
August 4th, 2019 04:39
Neville said:
A flies sad demise is see & all despite your efforts to revive it.. maybe shoulda landed on ya biscuit...
stirred but not shaken tis truly heart breaken...... bless ya Fay....
Neville
August 4th, 2019 04:39
Love\'s Call.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A superb write and interesting look at love.
Keep writing
FineB
August 3rd, 2019 16:54
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A superb write and interesting look at love.
Keep writing
FineB
August 3rd, 2019 16:54
Shyless.
Neville said:
this is bloomin excellent... and I dont use the e word often.... love the language... or the L word either.... and to cap the whole thing off... tis more than just a token tug in the direction of erotica.......
Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:34
Neville said:
this is bloomin excellent... and I dont use the e word often.... love the language... or the L word either.... and to cap the whole thing off... tis more than just a token tug in the direction of erotica.......
Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:34
Tended.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY (BRIAN HERE) Thanks for caring ! We love your *Tone Poems* they are always a perfect compliment to the Picture ! I copied the picture & poem and used it today (hope thats OK !) - together with my own - at our last Pensioners Lunch & Poetry reading til September ! They loved the nostalgia !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 2nd, 2019 15:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY (BRIAN HERE) Thanks for caring ! We love your *Tone Poems* they are always a perfect compliment to the Picture ! I copied the picture & poem and used it today (hope thats OK !) - together with my own - at our last Pensioners Lunch & Poetry reading til September ! They loved the nostalgia !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 2nd, 2019 15:37
Tended.
moordykspot2 said:
What a superb descriptive piece. Loved it thank you
August 2nd, 2019 13:43
moordykspot2 said:
What a superb descriptive piece. Loved it thank you
August 2nd, 2019 13:43
Tended.
dusk arising said:
Bah gum lass tha\'s dun it agin... boil kettle an put pot on t\'ob for i\'s avvin steel bath down afore t\'fire forra reet good scrubbin.
Peace at the end of the day for hard working farm folk who lived and worked by the available light of the seasons.
August 2nd, 2019 07:38
dusk arising said:
Bah gum lass tha\'s dun it agin... boil kettle an put pot on t\'ob for i\'s avvin steel bath down afore t\'fire forra reet good scrubbin.
Peace at the end of the day for hard working farm folk who lived and worked by the available light of the seasons.
August 2nd, 2019 07:38
Tended.
Neville said:
Your words read more atmospheric and even prettier than the image you have used to accompany them..
delightful is an oft abused and misused term, but this truly is delightful... Neville
August 2nd, 2019 03:13
Neville said:
Your words read more atmospheric and even prettier than the image you have used to accompany them..
delightful is an oft abused and misused term, but this truly is delightful... Neville
August 2nd, 2019 03:13
Unwrapped.
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
was opening the poem
and seeing words,
Composed with love and joy
Where Fay led her pen.
August 2nd, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness
was opening the poem
and seeing words,
Composed with love and joy
Where Fay led her pen.
August 2nd, 2019 01:10
Unwrapped.
dusk arising said:
How love makes the world spin for lovers..... life at the excitement end and lasting memories...... With such memories one knows they really took part in what is probably lifes most exciting and rewarding of experiences.
August 1st, 2019 11:38
dusk arising said:
How love makes the world spin for lovers..... life at the excitement end and lasting memories...... With such memories one knows they really took part in what is probably lifes most exciting and rewarding of experiences.
August 1st, 2019 11:38
Unwrapped.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the PHOTO FAY ~ and yes it does stir ones MUSE ! Angela & I love all your LOVE POEMS because they come direct from your Loving Heart and Loving Experience !
Verse 1. Made us smile ~ we have booked a Four-poster for our Honeymoon ! V 2. Echoes of passion to come ! V 3. Does one Skinny Dip on ones Honeymoon ? Spanish Honeymoon Suits have King Size baths with the taps in the middle ~ skinny soaping ! V 4. Covert Rapture indeed but for *Our Eyes Only* ~ sorry to disapoint but nothing on YOUR-TUBE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 1st, 2019 10:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the PHOTO FAY ~ and yes it does stir ones MUSE ! Angela & I love all your LOVE POEMS because they come direct from your Loving Heart and Loving Experience !
Verse 1. Made us smile ~ we have booked a Four-poster for our Honeymoon ! V 2. Echoes of passion to come ! V 3. Does one Skinny Dip on ones Honeymoon ? Spanish Honeymoon Suits have King Size baths with the taps in the middle ~ skinny soaping ! V 4. Covert Rapture indeed but for *Our Eyes Only* ~ sorry to disapoint but nothing on YOUR-TUBE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 1st, 2019 10:51
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