Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
DEFENCES.
Christina8 said:
Its always been amazing to me to that the underground rootwork of a tree is more complex than what we see up above. This is a fine piece of work, Fay!
July 24th, 2019 22:45
Christina8 said:
Its always been amazing to me to that the underground rootwork of a tree is more complex than what we see up above. This is a fine piece of work, Fay!
July 24th, 2019 22:45
DEFENCES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I would like to think that the traits of the wise men could come to the fore and take us into a world of wonder.
July 24th, 2019 05:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I would like to think that the traits of the wise men could come to the fore and take us into a world of wonder.
July 24th, 2019 05:05
DEFENCES.
Neville said:
the juxtapositioning of the old tree and wise men/people is done superbly..... as is everything else about these words....... Neville
July 24th, 2019 04:48
Neville said:
the juxtapositioning of the old tree and wise men/people is done superbly..... as is everything else about these words....... Neville
July 24th, 2019 04:48
DEFENCES.
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those windswept Cornish trees, defiant of the weather.
And so in humans, strength to withstand lifes battering, strong and hardy souls. Carefully guarded soft interiors have immediate sensory contact with all encounters and a lifetimes risk assessment radar.
July 24th, 2019 03:08
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those windswept Cornish trees, defiant of the weather.
And so in humans, strength to withstand lifes battering, strong and hardy souls. Carefully guarded soft interiors have immediate sensory contact with all encounters and a lifetimes risk assessment radar.
July 24th, 2019 03:08
YOU ARE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great message Fay, those moments of stillness and peace are so important in our lives.
July 24th, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Great message Fay, those moments of stillness and peace are so important in our lives.
July 24th, 2019 01:06
YOU ARE.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m glad I had a few minutes to pop in today! Your penned words are exactly what I needed at this moment!
“Muse a few moments and find
a still space”...
Thank you for sharing these much needed sentiments!
~Laura~
July 23rd, 2019 09:26
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m glad I had a few minutes to pop in today! Your penned words are exactly what I needed at this moment!
“Muse a few moments and find
a still space”...
Thank you for sharing these much needed sentiments!
~Laura~
July 23rd, 2019 09:26
YOU ARE.
Seek said:
To express so much optimism, positivism and hope in our times must require a special talent and temperament. A very reassuring write.
July 23rd, 2019 08:01
Seek said:
To express so much optimism, positivism and hope in our times must require a special talent and temperament. A very reassuring write.
July 23rd, 2019 08:01
YOU ARE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : Its midnight in NZ ! Thanks for your Poem the concept of *BE YOURSELF* really cheered me up : and spurred Me on : today ! Even though Ive been happilly engaged to BRIAN for ovr a Year : the 11,500 miles separation make me lonely at times ! I need to count my BLESSINGS ! I am blessed to be (currently) in Paradise (Auckland NZ) I love my JOB (Physio) and my Colleagues & Clients and my Five Maori Trainees : do think I am a Star : now that they are fuul Qualified Physiotherapists ! I am very *presentable* and engaged to the most beautiful MAN on the PLANET my *Big Teddy Bear* BRIAN ! So I guess I can be *Gentle with Myself* TODAY (and TOMORROW as well !) Thanks for caring for us ALL ! Love the positive PICTURE !
Blessings & Peace & Love & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙
Please check our WATERFALLS !
July 23rd, 2019 06:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE : Its midnight in NZ ! Thanks for your Poem the concept of *BE YOURSELF* really cheered me up : and spurred Me on : today ! Even though Ive been happilly engaged to BRIAN for ovr a Year : the 11,500 miles separation make me lonely at times ! I need to count my BLESSINGS ! I am blessed to be (currently) in Paradise (Auckland NZ) I love my JOB (Physio) and my Colleagues & Clients and my Five Maori Trainees : do think I am a Star : now that they are fuul Qualified Physiotherapists ! I am very *presentable* and engaged to the most beautiful MAN on the PLANET my *Big Teddy Bear* BRIAN ! So I guess I can be *Gentle with Myself* TODAY (and TOMORROW as well !) Thanks for caring for us ALL ! Love the positive PICTURE !
Blessings & Peace & Love & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙
Please check our WATERFALLS !
July 23rd, 2019 06:31
YOU ARE.
Neville said:
I bet I\'m not the only one who feels these words are meant for them... these are special words... like medicine to all us ailing poets... and the rest..... Neville
July 23rd, 2019 04:45
Neville said:
I bet I\'m not the only one who feels these words are meant for them... these are special words... like medicine to all us ailing poets... and the rest..... Neville
July 23rd, 2019 04:45
YOU ARE.
dusk arising said:
A message we all need to heed from time to time. Time to enjoy singleton self.... a few years under the belt, all the more reason.
July 23rd, 2019 04:20
dusk arising said:
A message we all need to heed from time to time. Time to enjoy singleton self.... a few years under the belt, all the more reason.
July 23rd, 2019 04:20
UNTELLABLE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, love can be a fraud but true love is sublime and within your words it can be found in spite of the temptations that are within the wold.
July 23rd, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, love can be a fraud but true love is sublime and within your words it can be found in spite of the temptations that are within the wold.
July 23rd, 2019 00:29
UNTELLABLE.
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem, Fay! I wish I knew the answers to the questions you pose. Wonderful!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:27
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem, Fay! I wish I knew the answers to the questions you pose. Wonderful!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:27
UNTELLABLE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA here ! Its 10:30 am (Tuesday) and Im just catching up on MPS as I have an Evening Clinic ! Brian thought I should comment on this one ! We are not married yet (and dont cohabit !) so for us it is really *A Bridge too Soon !* However in retrospect in our *close encounter* during our trip to South Island we did glimpse the ecstasy of verses 1 2 3 & 6 ! But dont tell MY PAPA because ours really is REAL LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN🧡💙🧡💙
July 22nd, 2019 16:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA here ! Its 10:30 am (Tuesday) and Im just catching up on MPS as I have an Evening Clinic ! Brian thought I should comment on this one ! We are not married yet (and dont cohabit !) so for us it is really *A Bridge too Soon !* However in retrospect in our *close encounter* during our trip to South Island we did glimpse the ecstasy of verses 1 2 3 & 6 ! But dont tell MY PAPA because ours really is REAL LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN🧡💙🧡💙
July 22nd, 2019 16:40
UNTELLABLE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There is NOTHING simple about love but I DO KNOW
I haven\'t the energy for an affair I am loved out but I can relate to the equation of absession...
Great write fay
July 22nd, 2019 12:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There is NOTHING simple about love but I DO KNOW
I haven\'t the energy for an affair I am loved out but I can relate to the equation of absession...
Great write fay
July 22nd, 2019 12:50
UNTELLABLE.
Suresh said:
Your stolen words from different mediums to emphasize the frustration of lusts desire for orgasmic explosion, cloaked as misguided love, is truly awesome
July 22nd, 2019 09:19
Suresh said:
Your stolen words from different mediums to emphasize the frustration of lusts desire for orgasmic explosion, cloaked as misguided love, is truly awesome
July 22nd, 2019 09:19
UNTELLABLE.
Neville said:
You have certainly created magic here and these words are quite literally captivating and spellbinding.........
Neville
July 22nd, 2019 04:18
Neville said:
You have certainly created magic here and these words are quite literally captivating and spellbinding.........
Neville
July 22nd, 2019 04:18
UNTELLABLE.
dusk arising said:
Love slumbers and relaxes into the everyday, camoflaged withing the acceptance of two. Only to rise like an empassioned jealous wilde beast, talons and fangs ready to throat rip in rage of pure blood boiling heat - once disturbed back into recognition.
July 22nd, 2019 04:07
dusk arising said:
Love slumbers and relaxes into the everyday, camoflaged withing the acceptance of two. Only to rise like an empassioned jealous wilde beast, talons and fangs ready to throat rip in rage of pure blood boiling heat - once disturbed back into recognition.
July 22nd, 2019 04:07
UNTELLABLE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I went delirious ages ago - upon the first \'swoony\' poem I read on here! heehee. Can anyone help poor Orchi?!
July 22nd, 2019 03:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I went delirious ages ago - upon the first \'swoony\' poem I read on here! heehee. Can anyone help poor Orchi?!
July 22nd, 2019 03:55
PAINTED LADIES.
Neville said:
you paint an amazing picture of these truly amazing creatures and you seem to do it with consummate ease dear Fay....... Neville
July 21st, 2019 03:36
Neville said:
you paint an amazing picture of these truly amazing creatures and you seem to do it with consummate ease dear Fay....... Neville
July 21st, 2019 03:36
PAINTED LADIES.
Suresh said:
There you have the Painted Ladies, here we have the Monarch Butterflies. By weight they weigh less than a feather, yet they journey thousands of miles to keep their genes alive. A poetic remembrance
July 17th, 2019 11:09
Suresh said:
There you have the Painted Ladies, here we have the Monarch Butterflies. By weight they weigh less than a feather, yet they journey thousands of miles to keep their genes alive. A poetic remembrance
July 17th, 2019 11:09
PAINTED LADIES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Painted ladies are amazing creatures in our wonderful world. That world depicted brilliantly in the picture.
July 17th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Painted ladies are amazing creatures in our wonderful world. That world depicted brilliantly in the picture.
July 17th, 2019 00:16
PAINTED LADIES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks Fay for an intersting Poem on the *Miracle of Butterfly Migration* ANGELA & I have both studied Zoology and we are amazed at the ability of small birds & butterflies to migrate huge distances during migration ! They are driven by HOPE and an innate Promise of BETTER LAND ! God designed & created them to survive the ordeal !
We too as HUMANS are also driven by HOPE and the promise of a BETTER LAND ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 16th, 2019 16:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks Fay for an intersting Poem on the *Miracle of Butterfly Migration* ANGELA & I have both studied Zoology and we are amazed at the ability of small birds & butterflies to migrate huge distances during migration ! They are driven by HOPE and an innate Promise of BETTER LAND ! God designed & created them to survive the ordeal !
We too as HUMANS are also driven by HOPE and the promise of a BETTER LAND ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 16th, 2019 16:42
WINGED.
Fay Slimm. said:
Good for you to choose flying hearts Brian -- the picture explains their allure -- and of course once unlocked and flying the heart can become truly unassailable. Loevd your comment and thank you lots for your visit and read.
July 15th, 2019 16:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Good for you to choose flying hearts Brian -- the picture explains their allure -- and of course once unlocked and flying the heart can become truly unassailable. Loevd your comment and thank you lots for your visit and read.
July 15th, 2019 16:10
WINGED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY love the PICTURE and the POEM about winged HEARTS ! We should never bottle up our LOVE we should always give wings to our HEARTS !
People have asked ANGELA & I about the use of three 🧡🧡🧡 at the end of our postings. The three hearts says I or WE LOVE YOU !
In comments our MPS Family always get four hearts 🧡🧡🧡🧡 and ANDY gets an extra one for JOYCE and ORCHII a + 🧡 for FIDO ! New Members get ONE or TWO and for ME ~ ANGELA gets SEVEN (for perfection) and she sends SEVEN back to ME ! OK !
So we dont send *FLYING FLOWERS* we send *FLYING HEARTS* instead to spread a little LOVE thoughout MPS !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 10:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY love the PICTURE and the POEM about winged HEARTS ! We should never bottle up our LOVE we should always give wings to our HEARTS !
People have asked ANGELA & I about the use of three 🧡🧡🧡 at the end of our postings. The three hearts says I or WE LOVE YOU !
In comments our MPS Family always get four hearts 🧡🧡🧡🧡 and ANDY gets an extra one for JOYCE and ORCHII a + 🧡 for FIDO ! New Members get ONE or TWO and for ME ~ ANGELA gets SEVEN (for perfection) and she sends SEVEN back to ME ! OK !
So we dont send *FLYING FLOWERS* we send *FLYING HEARTS* instead to spread a little LOVE thoughout MPS !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 10:23
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