Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
DECISIVE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Reminds of \'Do we have proper rain?\' Or will it be \'decisive\' rain, not the drizzle or mizzle?!
February 19th, 2019 06:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Reminds of \'Do we have proper rain?\' Or will it be \'decisive\' rain, not the drizzle or mizzle?!
February 19th, 2019 06:48
DECISIVE.
Neville said:
there are no two ways about it.. tis the way it is.. and always shall be....
Thank you Fay... Neville
February 19th, 2019 05:01
Neville said:
there are no two ways about it.. tis the way it is.. and always shall be....
Thank you Fay... Neville
February 19th, 2019 05:01
REMEMBERING.
Neville said:
Just visited this page again.. just because I can.. bit of a guilty pleasure really.... N
February 18th, 2019 15:39
Neville said:
Just visited this page again.. just because I can.. bit of a guilty pleasure really.... N
February 18th, 2019 15:39
REMEMBERING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOME BREWED WINE ! Nectar of the Gods ~ well perhaps sometimes ! It stirred many memories for your readers ! Like all Human Beings from time to time I am often bequeathed a Bottle of Home Brew ! In my experience most are impotable and deteriorate (or explode !) with time. Being a Chemist I have two ways of rendering such beverages potable & useful.
1. I can distil them (illegally ?) which produces neat ETHANOL (Alcohol 100%) which can be used in cooking etc !
2. I filter them through a water softener or a Column of Alumina (Aluminium Oxide) which removes all the \"Bitter Principles\" and renders Jungle Juice ~ Blander but much more potable ! Angela\'s PAPA is a Wine Merchant (RIOJA) and we often visit the Vineyards and perhaps more than anyone ~ We know that WINE MAKING is much more than a BLACK ART !
Love through Poetry ~
BRIAN & ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 18th, 2019 11:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOME BREWED WINE ! Nectar of the Gods ~ well perhaps sometimes ! It stirred many memories for your readers ! Like all Human Beings from time to time I am often bequeathed a Bottle of Home Brew ! In my experience most are impotable and deteriorate (or explode !) with time. Being a Chemist I have two ways of rendering such beverages potable & useful.
1. I can distil them (illegally ?) which produces neat ETHANOL (Alcohol 100%) which can be used in cooking etc !
2. I filter them through a water softener or a Column of Alumina (Aluminium Oxide) which removes all the \"Bitter Principles\" and renders Jungle Juice ~ Blander but much more potable ! Angela\'s PAPA is a Wine Merchant (RIOJA) and we often visit the Vineyards and perhaps more than anyone ~ We know that WINE MAKING is much more than a BLACK ART !
Love through Poetry ~
BRIAN & ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 18th, 2019 11:58
REMEMBERING.
Neville said:
absolutely delicious & heady .. a more than fine poem to warm our cockles on a cold winters eve...... I raise my glass to you Fay.. another splendid poem & true..... Neville
February 18th, 2019 11:17
Neville said:
absolutely delicious & heady .. a more than fine poem to warm our cockles on a cold winters eve...... I raise my glass to you Fay.. another splendid poem & true..... Neville
February 18th, 2019 11:17
REMEMBERING.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s a Memory Lane Day!
Excellent Fay
February 18th, 2019 05:28
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s a Memory Lane Day!
Excellent Fay
February 18th, 2019 05:28
REMEMBERING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay and it brings back so many memories. I used to make wine from the collected fruits of the countryside. I can still see my kids faces as they said \"Oh no, we\'re not going out collecting elder flowers again are we Dad!\"
February 18th, 2019 03:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay and it brings back so many memories. I used to make wine from the collected fruits of the countryside. I can still see my kids faces as they said \"Oh no, we\'re not going out collecting elder flowers again are we Dad!\"
February 18th, 2019 03:23
REMEMBERING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. They\'ll shoot me though - I keep adding water to their tipples. I tell them it saves them money, cos it will last longer, but they don\'t see it that way. They just spit out the diluted tipple with a \'Bleeuurgghhh!\' lol. There\'s no helping some people. heehee.
February 18th, 2019 03:17
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. They\'ll shoot me though - I keep adding water to their tipples. I tell them it saves them money, cos it will last longer, but they don\'t see it that way. They just spit out the diluted tipple with a \'Bleeuurgghhh!\' lol. There\'s no helping some people. heehee.
February 18th, 2019 03:17
RECOLLECTIONS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of innocence where dreams are made.
February 16th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of innocence where dreams are made.
February 16th, 2019 01:24
RECOLLECTIONS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Love the picture : childhood soon disappears especially for GIRLS ! Love the Poem : Memories sure are made of this !
Scented dialect of childhod
Playtime that still ghosts my dreaming
Autumn -red juices of childhood
Summers ago beutiful wealth : cherished memories
Thanks for caring : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 15th, 2019 13:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Love the picture : childhood soon disappears especially for GIRLS ! Love the Poem : Memories sure are made of this !
Scented dialect of childhod
Playtime that still ghosts my dreaming
Autumn -red juices of childhood
Summers ago beutiful wealth : cherished memories
Thanks for caring : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 15th, 2019 13:45
RECOLLECTIONS.
Michael Edwards said:
Captures the innocence of childhood which also applies (in my case at least) to little lads as well. I used to love roaming in virgin countryside with my Dad who would point out the different wild flowers and birds - magical times.
February 15th, 2019 05:21
Michael Edwards said:
Captures the innocence of childhood which also applies (in my case at least) to little lads as well. I used to love roaming in virgin countryside with my Dad who would point out the different wild flowers and birds - magical times.
February 15th, 2019 05:21
RECOLLECTIONS.
Neville said:
what recall, what a gift ...innocence & beauty personified, in word .... N
February 15th, 2019 04:36
Neville said:
what recall, what a gift ...innocence & beauty personified, in word .... N
February 15th, 2019 04:36
RECOLLECTIONS.
dusk arising said:
Beautiful. All those lovely things we took for granted as children are now rosey memories to be savoured whilst they still shine in the corner of our minds eye.
Lovely pic too.
February 15th, 2019 04:21
dusk arising said:
Beautiful. All those lovely things we took for granted as children are now rosey memories to be savoured whilst they still shine in the corner of our minds eye.
Lovely pic too.
February 15th, 2019 04:21
RELIANCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures canvas would be nothing without the sky highlighting its beauty.
February 15th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures canvas would be nothing without the sky highlighting its beauty.
February 15th, 2019 01:43
RELIANCE.
Amherrera1190 said:
Amazing i like how i can imagine the scenes as i read.
February 14th, 2019 12:29
Amherrera1190 said:
Amazing i like how i can imagine the scenes as i read.
February 14th, 2019 12:29
RELIANCE.
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t want to wake to a life without a sky. The sky illuminates everything beautiful. The sky defines our body clock.
Spring brings my most favourite days when suddenly our landscape is full of verdant growth before the sky begins to bleach it.
Your words bring this mornings recognition of these two marvels.
February 14th, 2019 08:58
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t want to wake to a life without a sky. The sky illuminates everything beautiful. The sky defines our body clock.
Spring brings my most favourite days when suddenly our landscape is full of verdant growth before the sky begins to bleach it.
Your words bring this mornings recognition of these two marvels.
February 14th, 2019 08:58
RELIANCE.
Michael Edwards said:
A long walk this morning looking at the bare branches and twigs shining green, red, purple and silver in the morning sun - magical. Super work Fay.
February 14th, 2019 06:55
Michael Edwards said:
A long walk this morning looking at the bare branches and twigs shining green, red, purple and silver in the morning sun - magical. Super work Fay.
February 14th, 2019 06:55
RELIANCE.
Neville said:
As far as I\'m concerned dear Fay, you just nailed two of my very favourite S\'s ... sky and spring.. there are of course others, but I\'m far too much of a ................. Happy V Day my friend, N
February 14th, 2019 06:30
Neville said:
As far as I\'m concerned dear Fay, you just nailed two of my very favourite S\'s ... sky and spring.. there are of course others, but I\'m far too much of a ................. Happy V Day my friend, N
February 14th, 2019 06:30
JOINED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
DEAR FAY ~ You have touched on a sadness you bear on the Dawn of Valentines that Angela & I dared not broach ! We are a young COUPLE anticipating Union but we are aware that the time will come when PHYSICALLY we will only be ONE. However your beautiful Poem assures us that SPIRITUALLY we will be FOREVER JOINED ~ AMEN.
Your Poem speaks eloquently of the gap left when a Loved One is transported to the Celestial Realm. However:
You taste His Spirit
You long for a Sign
You feel His Absence
You long for His Touch
You reject Deaths Dominion
You taste Loves Nectar
You reject Deaths Hold ~ AMEN !
FAY ~ Your Faith & abiding Love gives us hope (at the Dawn of our Love) that we too could rise above Physical Separation in our assurance of Eternal Life & Eternal Love. Thanks for caring & sharing !
Eternal Blessings & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 13th, 2019 19:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
DEAR FAY ~ You have touched on a sadness you bear on the Dawn of Valentines that Angela & I dared not broach ! We are a young COUPLE anticipating Union but we are aware that the time will come when PHYSICALLY we will only be ONE. However your beautiful Poem assures us that SPIRITUALLY we will be FOREVER JOINED ~ AMEN.
Your Poem speaks eloquently of the gap left when a Loved One is transported to the Celestial Realm. However:
You taste His Spirit
You long for a Sign
You feel His Absence
You long for His Touch
You reject Deaths Dominion
You taste Loves Nectar
You reject Deaths Hold ~ AMEN !
FAY ~ Your Faith & abiding Love gives us hope (at the Dawn of our Love) that we too could rise above Physical Separation in our assurance of Eternal Life & Eternal Love. Thanks for caring & sharing !
Eternal Blessings & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 13th, 2019 19:04
JOINED.
dusk arising said:
Beautiful Fay. So many people robbed of their one true love by death must yearn for the loving, caring, familiar togetherness torn from their existence.
Night time is the time we feel the most needy. Night times atmosphere was one where romance was known in all its forms.
Loss.
February 13th, 2019 13:35
dusk arising said:
Beautiful Fay. So many people robbed of their one true love by death must yearn for the loving, caring, familiar togetherness torn from their existence.
Night time is the time we feel the most needy. Night times atmosphere was one where romance was known in all its forms.
Loss.
February 13th, 2019 13:35
JOINED.
Neville said:
so deceptively deep and beautiful.. this poet could drown here and most happily ..... Neville
February 13th, 2019 09:33
Neville said:
so deceptively deep and beautiful.. this poet could drown here and most happily ..... Neville
February 13th, 2019 09:33
JOINED.
Michael Edwards said:
And Jeanne and I have remained - fine work Fay.
February 13th, 2019 04:19
Michael Edwards said:
And Jeanne and I have remained - fine work Fay.
February 13th, 2019 04:19
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