Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
RISING.
dusk arising said:
The wonder of springtime made glorious with your fine words here today.
Yes, the re-birth of our beloved \'taken for granted\' natural world is the most wonderful time of year. Made more rewarding when one stops to observe and think about the wonder of it all, as prompted by you today.
I\'m looking forward to that time brief time when the grasses and foliage turn everywhere into a verdant lushness before the sun begins to bleach and sap. Ho-hum!
March 6th, 2019 06:30
dusk arising said:
The wonder of springtime made glorious with your fine words here today.
Yes, the re-birth of our beloved \'taken for granted\' natural world is the most wonderful time of year. Made more rewarding when one stops to observe and think about the wonder of it all, as prompted by you today.
I\'m looking forward to that time brief time when the grasses and foliage turn everywhere into a verdant lushness before the sun begins to bleach and sap. Ho-hum!
March 6th, 2019 06:30
RISING.
JaydeVictoria said:
I love Spring! You\'ve captured the imagery perfectly :)
March 6th, 2019 06:12
JaydeVictoria said:
I love Spring! You\'ve captured the imagery perfectly :)
March 6th, 2019 06:12
RISING.
Neville said:
You just nailed Spring dear poet in the nicest of possible ways.. with a brush loaded with words and colours and scents and sounds and tastes to delight each of our senses... I have found tomorrows inspiration.... Neville
March 6th, 2019 05:34
Neville said:
You just nailed Spring dear poet in the nicest of possible ways.. with a brush loaded with words and colours and scents and sounds and tastes to delight each of our senses... I have found tomorrows inspiration.... Neville
March 6th, 2019 05:34
RISING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yet I knew I shouldn\'t have put away my long-johns just yet (ooh! lol).
March 6th, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yet I knew I shouldn\'t have put away my long-johns just yet (ooh! lol).
March 6th, 2019 02:48
INSIDE ME.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
I AM A ROCK : I AM AN ISLAND
Thanks for sharing FAY betrayal makes one
Hard as Rock and as isolated as an Island.
As Ladies we present a Soft and Gentle and
gregarious exterior : BUT : when betrayed our
inner (hard ?) core shows through and we
resist like the rest. HARD AS ROCK !
Thanks for sharing.
BRIAN will never betray me : and
I will never betray BRIAN AMEN !
Love through lyrics ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 6th, 2019 02:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
I AM A ROCK : I AM AN ISLAND
Thanks for sharing FAY betrayal makes one
Hard as Rock and as isolated as an Island.
As Ladies we present a Soft and Gentle and
gregarious exterior : BUT : when betrayed our
inner (hard ?) core shows through and we
resist like the rest. HARD AS ROCK !
Thanks for sharing.
BRIAN will never betray me : and
I will never betray BRIAN AMEN !
Love through lyrics ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 6th, 2019 02:26
INSIDE ME.
Goldfinch60 said:
The strength within us all is the foundation on which our lives are built. Good true write Fay.
March 6th, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
The strength within us all is the foundation on which our lives are built. Good true write Fay.
March 6th, 2019 00:58
INSIDE ME.
MendedFences27 said:
Life hardens us all. Better to be the rock and not the bug, Remember that gentle water flowing carved out the Grand Canyon. Sometimes we can lose the pain gently over a long time and still be strong enough. A great bit of imagery of strength of stone and the power of positive thinking.. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:15
MendedFences27 said:
Life hardens us all. Better to be the rock and not the bug, Remember that gentle water flowing carved out the Grand Canyon. Sometimes we can lose the pain gently over a long time and still be strong enough. A great bit of imagery of strength of stone and the power of positive thinking.. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:15
INSIDE ME.
Poetic Dan said:
What an ending. I can\'t help but cry, is this still my pain? I\'ll sit with this one, thank you and I truly appreciate where this may of came from. You are as we all should know a wonderful gift to the worlds vibration.
March 5th, 2019 09:02
Poetic Dan said:
What an ending. I can\'t help but cry, is this still my pain? I\'ll sit with this one, thank you and I truly appreciate where this may of came from. You are as we all should know a wonderful gift to the worlds vibration.
March 5th, 2019 09:02
INSIDE ME.
Neville said:
How perfectly pinned to this page your words do appear...
I sense old hurt and a residual ache but like some phoenix, you are rose again and stronger for it.... Neville
March 5th, 2019 06:26
Neville said:
How perfectly pinned to this page your words do appear...
I sense old hurt and a residual ache but like some phoenix, you are rose again and stronger for it.... Neville
March 5th, 2019 06:26
INSIDE ME.
dusk arising said:
Though we can be shaken to the foundations by the unexpected actions of others, such occasions can reveal to us our true mettle. That central \'me\' core which life has matured within. For a while we run in \'safe\' mode don\'t we.
But the sun still shines, the trees remind us of passing seasons, and the joy of grandchildren light our eyes. Such beauties warm our core allowing it to melt safely. But it\'s ever there.
I think your words stirred something in me today.
March 5th, 2019 04:36
dusk arising said:
Though we can be shaken to the foundations by the unexpected actions of others, such occasions can reveal to us our true mettle. That central \'me\' core which life has matured within. For a while we run in \'safe\' mode don\'t we.
But the sun still shines, the trees remind us of passing seasons, and the joy of grandchildren light our eyes. Such beauties warm our core allowing it to melt safely. But it\'s ever there.
I think your words stirred something in me today.
March 5th, 2019 04:36
INSIDE ME.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks trin for saving this piece as one of your faves. - much appreciated.
March 5th, 2019 04:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks trin for saving this piece as one of your faves. - much appreciated.
March 5th, 2019 04:15
INSIDE ME.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Rocks reminded me, that some call me \'Fossil\' - my middle name, cos I\'m very old! heehee.
March 5th, 2019 03:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Rocks reminded me, that some call me \'Fossil\' - my middle name, cos I\'m very old! heehee.
March 5th, 2019 03:02
TO THE SANDMAN
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Fay, Morpheus does elude me occasionally but normally I can sleep well but the wife needs me several times during the night so it is not always a good nights sleep.
March 5th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Fay, Morpheus does elude me occasionally but normally I can sleep well but the wife needs me several times during the night so it is not always a good nights sleep.
March 5th, 2019 01:23
TO THE SANDMAN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : We love every bit of this Presentation : The visual and the quirkiness & shape of the Poem . There are so many similies reating to sleep all of them both amusing & frustrating if it evades one ! We both have important JOBS dealing with People and it can pray on ones mind. We both try to get into bed (11,500 miles apart !) by 11 pm as we both have to rise & shine by 7:30 am (Angela is over 12 hours ahead !) We have both found (independently) that reading The BIBLE (or a Spiitual Book) and praying before hitting the sack is better than a sleeping pill ! Also ANGELA always advises me not to drink (alcohol) in the Evening and not to eat Heavy Food after 7 pm. She has a qualification in Nutrition : but its good advice ! Thanks for sharing and sleep tight !
Blessings & Love through entertaining Lyrics !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 4th, 2019 16:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : We love every bit of this Presentation : The visual and the quirkiness & shape of the Poem . There are so many similies reating to sleep all of them both amusing & frustrating if it evades one ! We both have important JOBS dealing with People and it can pray on ones mind. We both try to get into bed (11,500 miles apart !) by 11 pm as we both have to rise & shine by 7:30 am (Angela is over 12 hours ahead !) We have both found (independently) that reading The BIBLE (or a Spiitual Book) and praying before hitting the sack is better than a sleeping pill ! Also ANGELA always advises me not to drink (alcohol) in the Evening and not to eat Heavy Food after 7 pm. She has a qualification in Nutrition : but its good advice ! Thanks for sharing and sleep tight !
Blessings & Love through entertaining Lyrics !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 4th, 2019 16:17
TO THE SANDMAN
dusk arising said:
Excellent timing, i didn\'t sleep a wink last night.
Oh falling asleep is easy.... but no matter how hard i try to sleep (what a ridiculous statement) it eludes me sometimes. A good book can help but ner ner ner ner all been heard before.
Sandman is a great healer, not available on demand. Why must i rant about sleep. Am i tired or something?
March 4th, 2019 15:08
dusk arising said:
Excellent timing, i didn\'t sleep a wink last night.
Oh falling asleep is easy.... but no matter how hard i try to sleep (what a ridiculous statement) it eludes me sometimes. A good book can help but ner ner ner ner all been heard before.
Sandman is a great healer, not available on demand. Why must i rant about sleep. Am i tired or something?
March 4th, 2019 15:08
TO THE SANDMAN
MendedFences27 said:
Most nights my wife does not sleep well, up and down a million times, so I am with you on this one. Very clever how you\'ve covered all the sleep/non-sleep genres. \"boatman who never rows me to Morpheus\" my favorite. \" Oh well\". he says dozing off, waiting for his afternoon siesta. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:22
MendedFences27 said:
Most nights my wife does not sleep well, up and down a million times, so I am with you on this one. Very clever how you\'ve covered all the sleep/non-sleep genres. \"boatman who never rows me to Morpheus\" my favorite. \" Oh well\". he says dozing off, waiting for his afternoon siesta. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:22
TO THE SANDMAN
Michael Edwards said:
My daytime naps tend to join up - I\'m worried in case I don\'t wake at all - goodness what I\'ll do then. Thanks for the smile this Monday morn Fay.
March 4th, 2019 08:41
Michael Edwards said:
My daytime naps tend to join up - I\'m worried in case I don\'t wake at all - goodness what I\'ll do then. Thanks for the smile this Monday morn Fay.
March 4th, 2019 08:41
TO THE SANDMAN
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Fay. A nap during the day or evening - we may say \'I should like to have the time for it!\'. Yet if we do, then we\'re not always sleepy at bedtime. Those pesky sheep - no end of counting them sometimes!
March 4th, 2019 04:05
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Fay. A nap during the day or evening - we may say \'I should like to have the time for it!\'. Yet if we do, then we\'re not always sleepy at bedtime. Those pesky sheep - no end of counting them sometimes!
March 4th, 2019 04:05
TO THE SANDMAN
Neville said:
I felt the full fury of this fitfully infuriating and fickle night wanderer last nocte.. and never not a single z could be found..... this is what I call a fine Frant my friend x
March 4th, 2019 03:58
Neville said:
I felt the full fury of this fitfully infuriating and fickle night wanderer last nocte.. and never not a single z could be found..... this is what I call a fine Frant my friend x
March 4th, 2019 03:58
STIMULATION.
Neville said:
the picture I believe you refer to is delightful mid to late Taisho maybe.. the poem you penned to justify your initial impressions, divine and of which I have no doubt.. Neville x
March 3rd, 2019 10:57
Neville said:
the picture I believe you refer to is delightful mid to late Taisho maybe.. the poem you penned to justify your initial impressions, divine and of which I have no doubt.. Neville x
March 3rd, 2019 10:57
A DELICATE THING.
Neville said:
I have fallen in love with more trees over time, than I have with anything else... indeed, today with thanks to you.. I have a whole forest to look back on fondly... Neville
March 2nd, 2019 17:55
Neville said:
I have fallen in love with more trees over time, than I have with anything else... indeed, today with thanks to you.. I have a whole forest to look back on fondly... Neville
March 2nd, 2019 17:55
ONCE
Goldfinch60 said:
Mistress Fay your words lead me back in the realms of time.
March 1st, 2019 15:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Mistress Fay your words lead me back in the realms of time.
March 1st, 2019 15:54
ONCE
kevin browne said:
Best we meet up sown by the harbour to speak about this farther. Smooth stuff, Fay.
March 1st, 2019 14:55
kevin browne said:
Best we meet up sown by the harbour to speak about this farther. Smooth stuff, Fay.
March 1st, 2019 14:55
ONCE
dusk arising said:
Betwixt the light of dusk and dawn
In deepest dreams my mind be drawn
To lay with thee through blessed night
Conjoined in flame forever bright.
Ha ha, you got my my poetic juices flowing with your words.
March 1st, 2019 10:35
dusk arising said:
Betwixt the light of dusk and dawn
In deepest dreams my mind be drawn
To lay with thee through blessed night
Conjoined in flame forever bright.
Ha ha, you got my my poetic juices flowing with your words.
March 1st, 2019 10:35
ONCE
Michael Edwards said:
Wow Fay - I\'ll join Neville - off to the southbound platform - love it.
March 1st, 2019 09:15
Michael Edwards said:
Wow Fay - I\'ll join Neville - off to the southbound platform - love it.
March 1st, 2019 09:15
ONCE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Love the Picture & the Poem ! It describes exactly how I feel 11,500 miles apart from my beloved Brian !
Unrest in Mind : seeking Ecstasy
Unease in Soul : seeking Desire
Unsetled in Sleep : seeking to be
Thank God he will be my Easter Bunny !
Thanks for sharing (and caring)
Love through Lyrics : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 1st, 2019 04:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Love the Picture & the Poem ! It describes exactly how I feel 11,500 miles apart from my beloved Brian !
Unrest in Mind : seeking Ecstasy
Unease in Soul : seeking Desire
Unsetled in Sleep : seeking to be
Thank God he will be my Easter Bunny !
Thanks for sharing (and caring)
Love through Lyrics : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 1st, 2019 04:24
ONCE
Neville said:
forsooth and by Saint John dear mistress Fay.. how tempting thy invite and perfectly put.... am on my way say\'s I........... Neville x
March 1st, 2019 04:05
Neville said:
forsooth and by Saint John dear mistress Fay.. how tempting thy invite and perfectly put.... am on my way say\'s I........... Neville x
March 1st, 2019 04:05
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