Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
INVITING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY:
Lovely descrioption of a Cornish morning
Sparrowed pools ~ bleat of new-dropped Lambs
Sirring of moored Boats ~scents of Dawn !
Im not too near the Coast (12 miles ) but i share the other sounds. Im generally up by 6 am to make an entry into MPS before WORK !
Yours as always CARPE DIEM ~ BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 12th, 2019 09:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY:
Lovely descrioption of a Cornish morning
Sparrowed pools ~ bleat of new-dropped Lambs
Sirring of moored Boats ~scents of Dawn !
Im not too near the Coast (12 miles ) but i share the other sounds. Im generally up by 6 am to make an entry into MPS before WORK !
Yours as always CARPE DIEM ~ BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 12th, 2019 09:33
INVITING.
dusk arising said:
Gosh, you do write so beautifully about the dawn. How many of your dawn poems have i read now?
Wonderful descriptions like \'sparrowed pools\'... only you do this.
February 12th, 2019 08:54
dusk arising said:
Gosh, you do write so beautifully about the dawn. How many of your dawn poems have i read now?
Wonderful descriptions like \'sparrowed pools\'... only you do this.
February 12th, 2019 08:54
INVITING.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There\'s a sombre air in the postings today This is peaceful Fay and full of hope
Beautiful
Thank you
February 12th, 2019 07:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There\'s a sombre air in the postings today This is peaceful Fay and full of hope
Beautiful
Thank you
February 12th, 2019 07:37
INVITING.
Neville said:
this is without a shadow of doubt.. one of THE most beautiful poems....
Large case intended... neville x
February 12th, 2019 05:52
Neville said:
this is without a shadow of doubt.. one of THE most beautiful poems....
Large case intended... neville x
February 12th, 2019 05:52
VEILS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ for caring & sharing !
As Scientists we like to live
In the realms of Time & Sense
BUT ~ those realms do not explain all !
Sometimes we need to look beyond the veil
Into the mystical & spiritual dimension.
Where we see ephemeral creatures and we
Hear voices from beyond our own dimension !
We should never be afraid to explore
Into other dimensions ~ as we search for TRUTH
Blessings & Love ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 11th, 2019 17:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ for caring & sharing !
As Scientists we like to live
In the realms of Time & Sense
BUT ~ those realms do not explain all !
Sometimes we need to look beyond the veil
Into the mystical & spiritual dimension.
Where we see ephemeral creatures and we
Hear voices from beyond our own dimension !
We should never be afraid to explore
Into other dimensions ~ as we search for TRUTH
Blessings & Love ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 11th, 2019 17:36
VEILS.
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - deserves another read - I will return.
February 11th, 2019 12:49
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - deserves another read - I will return.
February 11th, 2019 12:49
VEILS.
dusk arising said:
Reality is but an illusion! Yes I do look for something beyond my disbelief in that which is taught to us. However one has to be on their guard for there are many potholes for the gullible and many a charlatan lurks showing a light into darkened constructs of their own profit making austere realms.
Hmmmm various churches suddenly spring to mind.
I love the way you let your unpunctuated lines run into each other challenging your reader to set one\'s own meter.
A murky mysterious read and quite enthralling.
February 11th, 2019 08:45
dusk arising said:
Reality is but an illusion! Yes I do look for something beyond my disbelief in that which is taught to us. However one has to be on their guard for there are many potholes for the gullible and many a charlatan lurks showing a light into darkened constructs of their own profit making austere realms.
Hmmmm various churches suddenly spring to mind.
I love the way you let your unpunctuated lines run into each other challenging your reader to set one\'s own meter.
A murky mysterious read and quite enthralling.
February 11th, 2019 08:45
VEILS.
Neville said:
You just sent a shiver down my spine Fay.. although of course, my interpretation of these words so fine can be nothing but subjective .. I feel a deep connection and congratulate you on another little masterpiece ... Neville
February 11th, 2019 05:55
Neville said:
You just sent a shiver down my spine Fay.. although of course, my interpretation of these words so fine can be nothing but subjective .. I feel a deep connection and congratulate you on another little masterpiece ... Neville
February 11th, 2019 05:55
ABANDONMENT.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY & Thanks MOLLUSCS for shedding your Shells on the sea shore ! Scuptured Residenses for us to enjoy as ornaments ; lamps : jewellery : love tokens etc ! We have some fabulous sea shells in New Zealand ! I always marvel how so many delicate shells : despite the tempest : can survive intact & perfect & valuable ! On each new N Z beach I am always a shell seaker !
Sunday Blessings & Spiritual Love :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Photo !
Please check our new FUSION : VALENTINE !
Please add a POEM : Thanks : ANGELA !
February 9th, 2019 15:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY & Thanks MOLLUSCS for shedding your Shells on the sea shore ! Scuptured Residenses for us to enjoy as ornaments ; lamps : jewellery : love tokens etc ! We have some fabulous sea shells in New Zealand ! I always marvel how so many delicate shells : despite the tempest : can survive intact & perfect & valuable ! On each new N Z beach I am always a shell seaker !
Sunday Blessings & Spiritual Love :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Photo !
Please check our new FUSION : VALENTINE !
Please add a POEM : Thanks : ANGELA !
February 9th, 2019 15:22
ABANDONMENT.
Caleb.A said:
\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\', wow truly beautiful.
February 8th, 2019 10:35
Caleb.A said:
\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\', wow truly beautiful.
February 8th, 2019 10:35
ABANDONMENT.
Neville said:
the perfect title and so befitting of a perfectly penned poem... I close my eyes & can hear the sea.... x
February 8th, 2019 09:39
Neville said:
the perfect title and so befitting of a perfectly penned poem... I close my eyes & can hear the sea.... x
February 8th, 2019 09:39
ABANDONMENT.
dusk arising said:
Oh my, what a wonderful conjunction of words \"tumbles at measured pace in ocean breakers\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\".
In sober moments on the beach i shall reflect upon those words.
February 8th, 2019 07:43
dusk arising said:
Oh my, what a wonderful conjunction of words \"tumbles at measured pace in ocean breakers\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\".
In sober moments on the beach i shall reflect upon those words.
February 8th, 2019 07:43
ABANDONMENT.
Lorna said:
Like tiny castles...... little memorials to the creatures that made them. Lovely words Fay.
February 8th, 2019 06:45
Lorna said:
Like tiny castles...... little memorials to the creatures that made them. Lovely words Fay.
February 8th, 2019 06:45
RECALL.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
This is a beautiful poem Fay : Thanks for sharing ! You paint all the changing colours as Evening morphs into Night. Silver - Grey - Scarlet - Azure etc. Grief demons of Night are charmed away : When you glimse your Love Star : Awesome !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 7th, 2019 18:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
This is a beautiful poem Fay : Thanks for sharing ! You paint all the changing colours as Evening morphs into Night. Silver - Grey - Scarlet - Azure etc. Grief demons of Night are charmed away : When you glimse your Love Star : Awesome !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 7th, 2019 18:16
RECALL.
Neville said:
Ah\' indeed.. tis such recollections that mean so very much .. I find the older I get, the more important memories are... this is a most beautiful post and I particularly like your concluding line, which for some reason, made me think of friends and lovers and family members lost..... thank you dear Fay.... Neville
February 7th, 2019 10:08
Neville said:
Ah\' indeed.. tis such recollections that mean so very much .. I find the older I get, the more important memories are... this is a most beautiful post and I particularly like your concluding line, which for some reason, made me think of friends and lovers and family members lost..... thank you dear Fay.... Neville
February 7th, 2019 10:08
RECALL.
dusk arising said:
Made me think of my own \'nom de plume\' dusk arising whilst reading you.
Grief\'s demons can always be chased away with happier times recalled can\'t they. \"Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket, save it for a rainy day\".
Once again you paint a beguiling canvas with your word pallet and caring brushwork\'s romance.
February 7th, 2019 06:04
dusk arising said:
Made me think of my own \'nom de plume\' dusk arising whilst reading you.
Grief\'s demons can always be chased away with happier times recalled can\'t they. \"Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket, save it for a rainy day\".
Once again you paint a beguiling canvas with your word pallet and caring brushwork\'s romance.
February 7th, 2019 06:04
RECALL.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I didn\'t know what \'azure\' was at one time!
February 7th, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I didn\'t know what \'azure\' was at one time!
February 7th, 2019 04:16
RESILIENCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great tribute to all those who have to work in all weathers.
February 6th, 2019 15:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Great tribute to all those who have to work in all weathers.
February 6th, 2019 15:43
RESILIENCE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : You paint a Beautiful Picture of what Cornwall is going through : Brian tell me you have had more than your share of the White Stuff already. Lovely POEM made me shiver & think of English Winters Past when I have been Snow Hiking in the Lake District as a student and seen the Hardness & Harshness of the Hill Shepherds lives ! I always work indoors (even in NZ) which is a blessing in the UK.The AQUATHERAPY POOL is always heated ! I wont mention that @ 9 am (THURS) its already 18C (64F) here and I am just leaving for work !
Love the PIC & POEM :
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Unlucky in Love ?
February 6th, 2019 15:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : You paint a Beautiful Picture of what Cornwall is going through : Brian tell me you have had more than your share of the White Stuff already. Lovely POEM made me shiver & think of English Winters Past when I have been Snow Hiking in the Lake District as a student and seen the Hardness & Harshness of the Hill Shepherds lives ! I always work indoors (even in NZ) which is a blessing in the UK.The AQUATHERAPY POOL is always heated ! I wont mention that @ 9 am (THURS) its already 18C (64F) here and I am just leaving for work !
Love the PIC & POEM :
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Unlucky in Love ?
February 6th, 2019 15:11
RESILIENCE.
dusk arising said:
Oooh-arrr my deario, I can see the nostril breath of lowing cattle in the farmyard as farmers wife brings a welcome flask of soup to her man.
Whilst we\'re thinking of throwing back the duvet to a dark, frosty morning there\'s already been three hours frosted sweat \'pon yon herdsman\'s brow.
You paint such pictures for us.
February 6th, 2019 12:54
dusk arising said:
Oooh-arrr my deario, I can see the nostril breath of lowing cattle in the farmyard as farmers wife brings a welcome flask of soup to her man.
Whilst we\'re thinking of throwing back the duvet to a dark, frosty morning there\'s already been three hours frosted sweat \'pon yon herdsman\'s brow.
You paint such pictures for us.
February 6th, 2019 12:54
RESILIENCE.
Lorna said:
And it\'s never the super rich that go through anything like this....... instantly took me to the Great Depression - I met a few \"poor\' folks who had survived it - one with a family of 6. Trying to start the old truck in the cold mornings so he could go and stand waiting for work if he could find it. More power to you Dominic........ I remember your stories.
February 6th, 2019 06:57
Lorna said:
And it\'s never the super rich that go through anything like this....... instantly took me to the Great Depression - I met a few \"poor\' folks who had survived it - one with a family of 6. Trying to start the old truck in the cold mornings so he could go and stand waiting for work if he could find it. More power to you Dominic........ I remember your stories.
February 6th, 2019 06:57
RESILIENCE.
Neville said:
without doubt, the cruelest of seasons captured and the struggles and endurance of those men and their women too.. frozen now in time and against a back cloth of white... these words feel a lot older than the newness of em... another sign of a skilled words mistress.... N
February 6th, 2019 05:16
Neville said:
without doubt, the cruelest of seasons captured and the struggles and endurance of those men and their women too.. frozen now in time and against a back cloth of white... these words feel a lot older than the newness of em... another sign of a skilled words mistress.... N
February 6th, 2019 05:16
RESILIENCE.
orchidee said:
You on that Number 7 bus M? Transport? Or in oblivion, with a blank comment added? lol.
February 6th, 2019 04:47
orchidee said:
You on that Number 7 bus M? Transport? Or in oblivion, with a blank comment added? lol.
February 6th, 2019 04:47
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