Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
INDELIBLE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : I have Poems on similar themes ! To me the whole the Natural World (Flora & Fauna) is the Garden of Eden and nowhere on Earth more so than New Zealand. The MAORI live in 24/7 \"Harmony with Nature\" & the KIWIS are learning fast : There is only one Planet Earth so if we kill it we die with it ! I teach CONSERVATION and the UK is gradually waking up to the inevtable ANTHROPOGENIC destruction of Planet Earth in this Century (by 2100) if we don\'t wake up !
Let Eden Reign : AMEN !
Bessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 28th, 2019 17:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : I have Poems on similar themes ! To me the whole the Natural World (Flora & Fauna) is the Garden of Eden and nowhere on Earth more so than New Zealand. The MAORI live in 24/7 \"Harmony with Nature\" & the KIWIS are learning fast : There is only one Planet Earth so if we kill it we die with it ! I teach CONSERVATION and the UK is gradually waking up to the inevtable ANTHROPOGENIC destruction of Planet Earth in this Century (by 2100) if we don\'t wake up !
Let Eden Reign : AMEN !
Bessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 28th, 2019 17:50
INDELIBLE.
sylviasearcher said:
Such beauty captured by your prose, it’s like I can feel the awe and tenderness with which you wrote this.
February 28th, 2019 11:41
sylviasearcher said:
Such beauty captured by your prose, it’s like I can feel the awe and tenderness with which you wrote this.
February 28th, 2019 11:41
INDELIBLE.
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - Will our planet ever stop declining I wonder - let us savour it for its beauty whilst we may.
February 28th, 2019 11:02
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - Will our planet ever stop declining I wonder - let us savour it for its beauty whilst we may.
February 28th, 2019 11:02
INDELIBLE.
Neville said:
If I could have written these words, believe me, I would have.. and I would have been extremely proud of myself .... goes without saying.... thank you...
February 28th, 2019 06:15
Neville said:
If I could have written these words, believe me, I would have.. and I would have been extremely proud of myself .... goes without saying.... thank you...
February 28th, 2019 06:15
INDELIBLE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
This takes me back to Blakes Augeries of innocence
Thank you
February 28th, 2019 06:12
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
This takes me back to Blakes Augeries of innocence
Thank you
February 28th, 2019 06:12
SOLO.
MendedFences27 said:
A look to the sea for the hope of a returning lover, a classic image, that ends your poem of longing. It is proceeded by some great inventful phrasings. Truly enjoyed this. _ Phil A.
February 27th, 2019 20:31
MendedFences27 said:
A look to the sea for the hope of a returning lover, a classic image, that ends your poem of longing. It is proceeded by some great inventful phrasings. Truly enjoyed this. _ Phil A.
February 27th, 2019 20:31
SOLO.
dusk arising said:
Ah the sailors girl waits, knowing all the tides. Knowing his last words. Bearing their last togetherness inside. Have todays communications taken this magic away?
Lovely how you take us through a change of moods, from reverie, loneliness to hope and joy with todays words.
February 27th, 2019 14:45
dusk arising said:
Ah the sailors girl waits, knowing all the tides. Knowing his last words. Bearing their last togetherness inside. Have todays communications taken this magic away?
Lovely how you take us through a change of moods, from reverie, loneliness to hope and joy with todays words.
February 27th, 2019 14:45
SOLO.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! Our muses are on the same vibe today ! You by the Window and me by the Shore ! Broken mornings and shattered evenings. In POETRY & PROSE the Sea is often a euphamism for Loneliness & Despair. When I am on the Coast I always feel close to reality with all its vicissitudes ! Angela says the same about AUCKLAND which is pervaded by the sight & sound of the SEA ! I think my Poem upset her she is now threatening to stop me swimming in the SEA when we are on Honeymoon in Spain in 2020 ! I guess one only see a Lady in her true integrity when shes Married ~ MAMA ANGELA !
Love through Lyrics BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 27th, 2019 06:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! Our muses are on the same vibe today ! You by the Window and me by the Shore ! Broken mornings and shattered evenings. In POETRY & PROSE the Sea is often a euphamism for Loneliness & Despair. When I am on the Coast I always feel close to reality with all its vicissitudes ! Angela says the same about AUCKLAND which is pervaded by the sight & sound of the SEA ! I think my Poem upset her she is now threatening to stop me swimming in the SEA when we are on Honeymoon in Spain in 2020 ! I guess one only see a Lady in her true integrity when shes Married ~ MAMA ANGELA !
Love through Lyrics BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 27th, 2019 06:15
SOLO.
Neville said:
a stupendous bit o poetry, pitch perfect and singularly special... ........ Neville
February 27th, 2019 05:36
Neville said:
a stupendous bit o poetry, pitch perfect and singularly special... ........ Neville
February 27th, 2019 05:36
SOLO.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Fay
Made me think of the tales from Matha\'s Vinyard and those who did not return
February 27th, 2019 03:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Fay
Made me think of the tales from Matha\'s Vinyard and those who did not return
February 27th, 2019 03:47
SOLO.
Michael Edwards said:
This really held me and the last two lines, in view of what goes before, are superb.
February 27th, 2019 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
This really held me and the last two lines, in view of what goes before, are superb.
February 27th, 2019 03:26
AWESOME.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
OMG FAY (ANGELA here) I am still in shock ! I never saw you as \"A Lad\\y with a Snake\" in a caberet ! You Poem is experiential enough to actually be true : What an unexpected experience . Love the final stanza !
Moved, haunted
and forever beguiled by
your sinuous beauty : Awesome !
I have seen Lady Snake Handlers in Spain and transiently been entwined by a 12 ft yellow Python : incredible feeling. As a PHYSIO I am intriguied by their fleibility : a snake skeleton is a masterpiece ! The Snake Ladies are contortionists and just as flexible as their Pythons ! SINUOUS is a great word to describe their infinite flexibility : AMEN. Thanks for sharing : great Photo and an ever greater Poem !
Blessings & love through sharing
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check FUSION : Fave Cuddly Toy : Thanks
February 26th, 2019 16:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
OMG FAY (ANGELA here) I am still in shock ! I never saw you as \"A Lad\\y with a Snake\" in a caberet ! You Poem is experiential enough to actually be true : What an unexpected experience . Love the final stanza !
Moved, haunted
and forever beguiled by
your sinuous beauty : Awesome !
I have seen Lady Snake Handlers in Spain and transiently been entwined by a 12 ft yellow Python : incredible feeling. As a PHYSIO I am intriguied by their fleibility : a snake skeleton is a masterpiece ! The Snake Ladies are contortionists and just as flexible as their Pythons ! SINUOUS is a great word to describe their infinite flexibility : AMEN. Thanks for sharing : great Photo and an ever greater Poem !
Blessings & love through sharing
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check FUSION : Fave Cuddly Toy : Thanks
February 26th, 2019 16:37
AWESOME.
Michael Edwards said:
I was also lucky enough to experience this at a show put on for children at a local Garden Centre. Quite an experience as your super pen describes.
February 26th, 2019 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
I was also lucky enough to experience this at a show put on for children at a local Garden Centre. Quite an experience as your super pen describes.
February 26th, 2019 11:44
AWESOME.
dusk arising said:
An experience beyond my own. I can\'t say i\'m envious as there is no desire to be \'pythoned\' within me. Was there such within you beforehand or did this wonderful feeling you\'ve described come completely out of the blue with no prior snake envy?
February 26th, 2019 06:23
dusk arising said:
An experience beyond my own. I can\'t say i\'m envious as there is no desire to be \'pythoned\' within me. Was there such within you beforehand or did this wonderful feeling you\'ve described come completely out of the blue with no prior snake envy?
February 26th, 2019 06:23
AWESOME.
Neville said:
most unexpected, yet nevertheless penned perfectly, and likewise enjoyed... for a moment I thought you were writing about me.....
February 26th, 2019 05:27
Neville said:
most unexpected, yet nevertheless penned perfectly, and likewise enjoyed... for a moment I thought you were writing about me.....
February 26th, 2019 05:27
AWESOME.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a wonderful creature. I have never had that experience but would be delighted if I had the chance.
February 26th, 2019 04:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a wonderful creature. I have never had that experience but would be delighted if I had the chance.
February 26th, 2019 04:34
DEFIANCE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing another graphic Poem & Picture. On the East Coast (similar to the West) Fishermen do need a lot Defiance ~ of the Sea ~ of Dwindling Fish Stock ~ and of those of us who crave & consume the Fish unaware of their Dangers & Defiance ! The East Coast is more friable and hundreds of Buildings have already been lost to the Sea ! We should never underestimate the Power of the Sea and the Defiance of ALL FISHERMEN !
Love through the Power of Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 25th, 2019 17:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing another graphic Poem & Picture. On the East Coast (similar to the West) Fishermen do need a lot Defiance ~ of the Sea ~ of Dwindling Fish Stock ~ and of those of us who crave & consume the Fish unaware of their Dangers & Defiance ! The East Coast is more friable and hundreds of Buildings have already been lost to the Sea ! We should never underestimate the Power of the Sea and the Defiance of ALL FISHERMEN !
Love through the Power of Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 25th, 2019 17:29
DEFIANCE.
Neville said:
I read these words earlier today and vowed to return later, as indeed I have just done... whilst away from home, I read them again sitting on the old harbour wall at West Bay, my little patch of the ocean.... in essence, your words then have been pounding me all day dear Fay... and I have not yet tired of them.... N
February 25th, 2019 13:01
Neville said:
I read these words earlier today and vowed to return later, as indeed I have just done... whilst away from home, I read them again sitting on the old harbour wall at West Bay, my little patch of the ocean.... in essence, your words then have been pounding me all day dear Fay... and I have not yet tired of them.... N
February 25th, 2019 13:01
DEFIANCE.
Michael Edwards said:
I can smell the brine in these elegant words.
February 25th, 2019 08:23
Michael Edwards said:
I can smell the brine in these elegant words.
February 25th, 2019 08:23
DEFIANCE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay tough life by the coast and not getting ny easier
February 25th, 2019 03:51
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay tough life by the coast and not getting ny easier
February 25th, 2019 03:51
ONCE-SIPPED.
dusk arising said:
You are a steamy hot bundle of passion here Fay.
February 22nd, 2019 07:25
dusk arising said:
You are a steamy hot bundle of passion here Fay.
February 22nd, 2019 07:25
ONCE-SIPPED.
Neville said:
You had me smiling from ear to there and back again..
what a super way to both demonstrate and express that most wonderful of feelings.. and nicely on the very cusp of steamy too ..... enjoyed and oh\' so very muchly so... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 06:57
Neville said:
You had me smiling from ear to there and back again..
what a super way to both demonstrate and express that most wonderful of feelings.. and nicely on the very cusp of steamy too ..... enjoyed and oh\' so very muchly so... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 06:57
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