Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
AIR.
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, this is where the poet in me comes into conflict with the scientist in me.
So to get myself out of that sillyness i shall picture the coastal hills and the birds forever bringing forth our envy at their flight and mastery of the air.
March 15th, 2019 03:52
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, this is where the poet in me comes into conflict with the scientist in me.
So to get myself out of that sillyness i shall picture the coastal hills and the birds forever bringing forth our envy at their flight and mastery of the air.
March 15th, 2019 03:52
OMENS.
Goldfinch60 said:
If only those stones could talk we would become so knowledgeable.
March 15th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
If only those stones could talk we would become so knowledgeable.
March 15th, 2019 01:49
OMENS.
kevin browne said:
Yes, Stonehenge is prevalent all the way through this wonderfully observed and expressed in detail of these stunning stones. I\'m not too far from Stonehenge and have visited on many occasions. It has a sense of nobleness about it as indeed just like your poem.
March 14th, 2019 17:42
kevin browne said:
Yes, Stonehenge is prevalent all the way through this wonderfully observed and expressed in detail of these stunning stones. I\'m not too far from Stonehenge and have visited on many occasions. It has a sense of nobleness about it as indeed just like your poem.
March 14th, 2019 17:42
OMENS.
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, what an inspirational message. Watch the stones and then you\'ll know longevity and victory! I enjoyed the read.
March 14th, 2019 16:34
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, what an inspirational message. Watch the stones and then you\'ll know longevity and victory! I enjoyed the read.
March 14th, 2019 16:34
OMENS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing this FAY ~ Much food for thought ! When we visit STONEHENGE and the Standing Stones in the English Lake District and the Geysers & Hot Springs etc in New Zealand & Ayres Rock in Australia and sites sacred to the Native Americans they all trigger mystic vibes in our Minds ! FAITH ICONS always conceal covert TRUTHS ~ BUT ~ to echo your first verse ~ HOW do we unlock them ? Love the visual which complements your questioning Poem ! Some facets of your Poem reflects JOHN BETJAMANS \"Ireland with Emily\" where he ponders similar questions.
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing this FAY ~ Much food for thought ! When we visit STONEHENGE and the Standing Stones in the English Lake District and the Geysers & Hot Springs etc in New Zealand & Ayres Rock in Australia and sites sacred to the Native Americans they all trigger mystic vibes in our Minds ! FAITH ICONS always conceal covert TRUTHS ~ BUT ~ to echo your first verse ~ HOW do we unlock them ? Love the visual which complements your questioning Poem ! Some facets of your Poem reflects JOHN BETJAMANS \"Ireland with Emily\" where he ponders similar questions.
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:39
MEANT.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for sharing this very meaningful Poem of MPS Affection ! Poetic Soul Mates (V 4.) describes the relationship each of us has with a FINITE number of MPS Members ! WE have six or more : we always relate to : and You are a very important one ! These interactions are MEANT : for Brian & I to get the most out of MPS through sincere sharing of our Poetry and commenting encouragingly on the contibutions of others : as we do with you !
We use HEARTS (🧡🧡🧡🧡) because our interaction is both cerebral & emotional ! The words you employ in your Poem : exemplify your stance and we thank you for it !
Friendly love : Tied fetter of harmony
Ease with one another : Empathy
Amity : Soul Mate attraction : The extended
Soft hand of meant happiness etc !
Would that all Members shared those qualities !
Over the past few Years : Brian & I have experienced
these qualities and the real empathy that flows
between us DAILY ~ AMEN
Blessings & Poetic Soul Mate LOVE
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for sharing this very meaningful Poem of MPS Affection ! Poetic Soul Mates (V 4.) describes the relationship each of us has with a FINITE number of MPS Members ! WE have six or more : we always relate to : and You are a very important one ! These interactions are MEANT : for Brian & I to get the most out of MPS through sincere sharing of our Poetry and commenting encouragingly on the contibutions of others : as we do with you !
We use HEARTS (🧡🧡🧡🧡) because our interaction is both cerebral & emotional ! The words you employ in your Poem : exemplify your stance and we thank you for it !
Friendly love : Tied fetter of harmony
Ease with one another : Empathy
Amity : Soul Mate attraction : The extended
Soft hand of meant happiness etc !
Would that all Members shared those qualities !
Over the past few Years : Brian & I have experienced
these qualities and the real empathy that flows
between us DAILY ~ AMEN
Blessings & Poetic Soul Mate LOVE
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:13
OMENS.
dusk arising said:
Somehow these noble stones command a respect. A sense of wonderment invades us. Thoughts unthought invite us to wander spiritually.
Similar to hugging a tree.... what secrets do you know?
March 14th, 2019 12:40
dusk arising said:
Somehow these noble stones command a respect. A sense of wonderment invades us. Thoughts unthought invite us to wander spiritually.
Similar to hugging a tree.... what secrets do you know?
March 14th, 2019 12:40
OMENS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'ve gone mad. I felt sorry for a lamp-post out on a cold night - get a grip, Orchi. Men in white coats will turn up soon! ooh.
March 14th, 2019 05:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'ve gone mad. I felt sorry for a lamp-post out on a cold night - get a grip, Orchi. Men in white coats will turn up soon! ooh.
March 14th, 2019 05:33
MEANT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Fay, that love that first stirs gets stronger as the souls become one in love.
March 14th, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Fay, that love that first stirs gets stronger as the souls become one in love.
March 14th, 2019 01:12
MEANT.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But, aww, why no one offer me the hand of friendship when I sing? They throw rotten eggs at me instead! lol.
March 13th, 2019 10:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But, aww, why no one offer me the hand of friendship when I sing? They throw rotten eggs at me instead! lol.
March 13th, 2019 10:49
MEANT.
Fay Slimm. said:
Many thanks dear L.G. for saving this verse among your favourites.
March 13th, 2019 06:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Many thanks dear L.G. for saving this verse among your favourites.
March 13th, 2019 06:57
MEANT.
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way the words are woven and especially the line: Time severs doubt\'s fading threads .
Super as always.
March 13th, 2019 05:14
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way the words are woven and especially the line: Time severs doubt\'s fading threads .
Super as always.
March 13th, 2019 05:14
MEANT.
Neville said:
these words should be dedicated to special friends around the globe.. only the very most special of special friends though.... accepted, bless ya my friend.... N
March 13th, 2019 05:05
Neville said:
these words should be dedicated to special friends around the globe.. only the very most special of special friends though.... accepted, bless ya my friend.... N
March 13th, 2019 05:05
MEANT.
dusk arising said:
This is so much about the coming together of new true soul mates i feel.
Sharing the same views, motivations, joys and possibly destiny.... who could ask for more?
A joy to read.... a hope renewed in the heart.... a smile in my soul.
Most uplifting read of today and a must for my favourites.
March 13th, 2019 04:58
dusk arising said:
This is so much about the coming together of new true soul mates i feel.
Sharing the same views, motivations, joys and possibly destiny.... who could ask for more?
A joy to read.... a hope renewed in the heart.... a smile in my soul.
Most uplifting read of today and a must for my favourites.
March 13th, 2019 04:58
MEANT.
Nicholas Browning said:
I would take any hand that offers me hope in this world. A hand to hold in order to save, enlighten, love or hate. Your poetry is enigmatic as always, but it\'s how you carry the message along the words that makes your poetry so riveting I think. All in the timing Fay, and you\'ve certainly mastered your style.
March 13th, 2019 04:27
Nicholas Browning said:
I would take any hand that offers me hope in this world. A hand to hold in order to save, enlighten, love or hate. Your poetry is enigmatic as always, but it\'s how you carry the message along the words that makes your poetry so riveting I think. All in the timing Fay, and you\'ve certainly mastered your style.
March 13th, 2019 04:27
LET\'S GO.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once again Fay, may your togetherness never fail.
March 13th, 2019 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once again Fay, may your togetherness never fail.
March 13th, 2019 01:45
LET\'S GO.
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this a lot. The usage of syllables and scheme go well with each other. It\'s just like the timing is really good with the speed it\'s meant to be read. Nice one.
March 12th, 2019 17:09
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this a lot. The usage of syllables and scheme go well with each other. It\'s just like the timing is really good with the speed it\'s meant to be read. Nice one.
March 12th, 2019 17:09
LET\'S GO.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY you can be so romantic at times it makes a Lady blush. Its MORNING here (10:30 am Wednesday) but I just spoke to Brian on Skype so it was Evening Blues for Him as we are so so far apart PHYSICALLY but ROMANTICALLY we are in each others arms 24/7 and we WILL be \"Together Again\" @ Easter ! On SKYPE where we can see but not touch : We often say \"O lets fly away : just you and I\" and thats when the distance (11,500 miles ~ Wish I gone to Andalucia !) hits hard ! Still @ Easter we will have two weeks in a (BIG) Camper Van together ~ AMEN
I have an afternoon & Evening clinic today so catching up on MPS !
Please check our FUSION : SEASONS
(Nice poems & Music & Pictures etc)
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the visual very Romantic !
March 12th, 2019 16:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY you can be so romantic at times it makes a Lady blush. Its MORNING here (10:30 am Wednesday) but I just spoke to Brian on Skype so it was Evening Blues for Him as we are so so far apart PHYSICALLY but ROMANTICALLY we are in each others arms 24/7 and we WILL be \"Together Again\" @ Easter ! On SKYPE where we can see but not touch : We often say \"O lets fly away : just you and I\" and thats when the distance (11,500 miles ~ Wish I gone to Andalucia !) hits hard ! Still @ Easter we will have two weeks in a (BIG) Camper Van together ~ AMEN
I have an afternoon & Evening clinic today so catching up on MPS !
Please check our FUSION : SEASONS
(Nice poems & Music & Pictures etc)
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the visual very Romantic !
March 12th, 2019 16:41
LET\'S GO.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve got the tickets - let\'s go - fine write.
March 12th, 2019 12:14
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve got the tickets - let\'s go - fine write.
March 12th, 2019 12:14
LET\'S GO.
sylviasearcher said:
You captured magic like I used to believe in 🌈
March 12th, 2019 08:41
sylviasearcher said:
You captured magic like I used to believe in 🌈
March 12th, 2019 08:41
LET\'S GO.
Neville said:
this is a delightful poem Fay one that sits beautifully on its very own page, whispering soft... and I am sure it is not only my heart that tis a fluttering this very windy March mane.... Neville
March 12th, 2019 08:39
Neville said:
this is a delightful poem Fay one that sits beautifully on its very own page, whispering soft... and I am sure it is not only my heart that tis a fluttering this very windy March mane.... Neville
March 12th, 2019 08:39
AHEAD.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super poem leading us to a positive life flying into Spring.
March 12th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Super poem leading us to a positive life flying into Spring.
March 12th, 2019 01:20
AHEAD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY : Love the Picture ~ rainbowy & springy ! The style I have always called \"interupted doublets\" the ........................... providing time for thought ! There is a time paradox ~ between the end of Winter (officially 20 March) and the start of Spring ! Winter winds down too slowly (in some Northern US States it lastd \'til May Day) and Spring springs in suddenly ~ with Lambs & Chickens and a cornucopia of Spring Flowers ! We had a glimpse (21C = 70F) but its back to normal now ! Some of your Pithy couplets resonated with my 35 years experience. !
Depression adds no ..........
extra kindness to time !
Loves heat once begun ..........
can help wings Spring-soar
Thanks for sharing ~ each dynamic doublet is its own Poem !
Blessings & Love as always
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 11th, 2019 18:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY : Love the Picture ~ rainbowy & springy ! The style I have always called \"interupted doublets\" the ........................... providing time for thought ! There is a time paradox ~ between the end of Winter (officially 20 March) and the start of Spring ! Winter winds down too slowly (in some Northern US States it lastd \'til May Day) and Spring springs in suddenly ~ with Lambs & Chickens and a cornucopia of Spring Flowers ! We had a glimpse (21C = 70F) but its back to normal now ! Some of your Pithy couplets resonated with my 35 years experience. !
Depression adds no ..........
extra kindness to time !
Loves heat once begun ..........
can help wings Spring-soar
Thanks for sharing ~ each dynamic doublet is its own Poem !
Blessings & Love as always
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 11th, 2019 18:45
AHEAD.
Neville said:
Not only very different .. unique in fact but very special too.. a real treat this fine Monday mane and with a promise of tomorrow,,,, N x
March 11th, 2019 07:29
Neville said:
Not only very different .. unique in fact but very special too.. a real treat this fine Monday mane and with a promise of tomorrow,,,, N x
March 11th, 2019 07:29
AHEAD.
Michael Edwards said:
Super form and some great phrases - another worthy write dear Fay,
March 11th, 2019 05:49
Michael Edwards said:
Super form and some great phrases - another worthy write dear Fay,
March 11th, 2019 05:49
AHEAD.
JaydeVictoria said:
This is a beautiful poem, I especially liked \'Hope melts the quicker, on frost written names\'
Lovely write
March 11th, 2019 03:45
JaydeVictoria said:
This is a beautiful poem, I especially liked \'Hope melts the quicker, on frost written names\'
Lovely write
March 11th, 2019 03:45
PASSION.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful painter who only sold one painting in his lifetime - it\'s different now.
March 11th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful painter who only sold one painting in his lifetime - it\'s different now.
March 11th, 2019 01:27
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