Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
TO THE SANDMAN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : We love every bit of this Presentation : The visual and the quirkiness & shape of the Poem . There are so many similies reating to sleep all of them both amusing & frustrating if it evades one ! We both have important JOBS dealing with People and it can pray on ones mind. We both try to get into bed (11,500 miles apart !) by 11 pm as we both have to rise & shine by 7:30 am (Angela is over 12 hours ahead !) We have both found (independently) that reading The BIBLE (or a Spiitual Book) and praying before hitting the sack is better than a sleeping pill ! Also ANGELA always advises me not to drink (alcohol) in the Evening and not to eat Heavy Food after 7 pm. She has a qualification in Nutrition : but its good advice ! Thanks for sharing and sleep tight !
Blessings & Love through entertaining Lyrics !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 4th, 2019 16:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : We love every bit of this Presentation : The visual and the quirkiness & shape of the Poem . There are so many similies reating to sleep all of them both amusing & frustrating if it evades one ! We both have important JOBS dealing with People and it can pray on ones mind. We both try to get into bed (11,500 miles apart !) by 11 pm as we both have to rise & shine by 7:30 am (Angela is over 12 hours ahead !) We have both found (independently) that reading The BIBLE (or a Spiitual Book) and praying before hitting the sack is better than a sleeping pill ! Also ANGELA always advises me not to drink (alcohol) in the Evening and not to eat Heavy Food after 7 pm. She has a qualification in Nutrition : but its good advice ! Thanks for sharing and sleep tight !
Blessings & Love through entertaining Lyrics !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 4th, 2019 16:17
TO THE SANDMAN
dusk arising said:
Excellent timing, i didn\'t sleep a wink last night.
Oh falling asleep is easy.... but no matter how hard i try to sleep (what a ridiculous statement) it eludes me sometimes. A good book can help but ner ner ner ner all been heard before.
Sandman is a great healer, not available on demand. Why must i rant about sleep. Am i tired or something?
March 4th, 2019 15:08
dusk arising said:
Excellent timing, i didn\'t sleep a wink last night.
Oh falling asleep is easy.... but no matter how hard i try to sleep (what a ridiculous statement) it eludes me sometimes. A good book can help but ner ner ner ner all been heard before.
Sandman is a great healer, not available on demand. Why must i rant about sleep. Am i tired or something?
March 4th, 2019 15:08
TO THE SANDMAN
MendedFences27 said:
Most nights my wife does not sleep well, up and down a million times, so I am with you on this one. Very clever how you\'ve covered all the sleep/non-sleep genres. \"boatman who never rows me to Morpheus\" my favorite. \" Oh well\". he says dozing off, waiting for his afternoon siesta. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:22
MendedFences27 said:
Most nights my wife does not sleep well, up and down a million times, so I am with you on this one. Very clever how you\'ve covered all the sleep/non-sleep genres. \"boatman who never rows me to Morpheus\" my favorite. \" Oh well\". he says dozing off, waiting for his afternoon siesta. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:22
TO THE SANDMAN
Michael Edwards said:
My daytime naps tend to join up - I\'m worried in case I don\'t wake at all - goodness what I\'ll do then. Thanks for the smile this Monday morn Fay.
March 4th, 2019 08:41
Michael Edwards said:
My daytime naps tend to join up - I\'m worried in case I don\'t wake at all - goodness what I\'ll do then. Thanks for the smile this Monday morn Fay.
March 4th, 2019 08:41
TO THE SANDMAN
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Fay. A nap during the day or evening - we may say \'I should like to have the time for it!\'. Yet if we do, then we\'re not always sleepy at bedtime. Those pesky sheep - no end of counting them sometimes!
March 4th, 2019 04:05
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Fay. A nap during the day or evening - we may say \'I should like to have the time for it!\'. Yet if we do, then we\'re not always sleepy at bedtime. Those pesky sheep - no end of counting them sometimes!
March 4th, 2019 04:05
TO THE SANDMAN
Neville said:
I felt the full fury of this fitfully infuriating and fickle night wanderer last nocte.. and never not a single z could be found..... this is what I call a fine Frant my friend x
March 4th, 2019 03:58
Neville said:
I felt the full fury of this fitfully infuriating and fickle night wanderer last nocte.. and never not a single z could be found..... this is what I call a fine Frant my friend x
March 4th, 2019 03:58
STIMULATION.
Neville said:
the picture I believe you refer to is delightful mid to late Taisho maybe.. the poem you penned to justify your initial impressions, divine and of which I have no doubt.. Neville x
March 3rd, 2019 10:57
Neville said:
the picture I believe you refer to is delightful mid to late Taisho maybe.. the poem you penned to justify your initial impressions, divine and of which I have no doubt.. Neville x
March 3rd, 2019 10:57
A DELICATE THING.
Neville said:
I have fallen in love with more trees over time, than I have with anything else... indeed, today with thanks to you.. I have a whole forest to look back on fondly... Neville
March 2nd, 2019 17:55
Neville said:
I have fallen in love with more trees over time, than I have with anything else... indeed, today with thanks to you.. I have a whole forest to look back on fondly... Neville
March 2nd, 2019 17:55
ONCE
Goldfinch60 said:
Mistress Fay your words lead me back in the realms of time.
March 1st, 2019 15:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Mistress Fay your words lead me back in the realms of time.
March 1st, 2019 15:54
ONCE
kevin browne said:
Best we meet up sown by the harbour to speak about this farther. Smooth stuff, Fay.
March 1st, 2019 14:55
kevin browne said:
Best we meet up sown by the harbour to speak about this farther. Smooth stuff, Fay.
March 1st, 2019 14:55
ONCE
dusk arising said:
Betwixt the light of dusk and dawn
In deepest dreams my mind be drawn
To lay with thee through blessed night
Conjoined in flame forever bright.
Ha ha, you got my my poetic juices flowing with your words.
March 1st, 2019 10:35
dusk arising said:
Betwixt the light of dusk and dawn
In deepest dreams my mind be drawn
To lay with thee through blessed night
Conjoined in flame forever bright.
Ha ha, you got my my poetic juices flowing with your words.
March 1st, 2019 10:35
ONCE
Michael Edwards said:
Wow Fay - I\'ll join Neville - off to the southbound platform - love it.
March 1st, 2019 09:15
Michael Edwards said:
Wow Fay - I\'ll join Neville - off to the southbound platform - love it.
March 1st, 2019 09:15
ONCE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Love the Picture & the Poem ! It describes exactly how I feel 11,500 miles apart from my beloved Brian !
Unrest in Mind : seeking Ecstasy
Unease in Soul : seeking Desire
Unsetled in Sleep : seeking to be
Thank God he will be my Easter Bunny !
Thanks for sharing (and caring)
Love through Lyrics : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 1st, 2019 04:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Love the Picture & the Poem ! It describes exactly how I feel 11,500 miles apart from my beloved Brian !
Unrest in Mind : seeking Ecstasy
Unease in Soul : seeking Desire
Unsetled in Sleep : seeking to be
Thank God he will be my Easter Bunny !
Thanks for sharing (and caring)
Love through Lyrics : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 1st, 2019 04:24
ONCE
Neville said:
forsooth and by Saint John dear mistress Fay.. how tempting thy invite and perfectly put.... am on my way say\'s I........... Neville x
March 1st, 2019 04:05
Neville said:
forsooth and by Saint John dear mistress Fay.. how tempting thy invite and perfectly put.... am on my way say\'s I........... Neville x
March 1st, 2019 04:05
INDELIBLE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : I have Poems on similar themes ! To me the whole the Natural World (Flora & Fauna) is the Garden of Eden and nowhere on Earth more so than New Zealand. The MAORI live in 24/7 \"Harmony with Nature\" & the KIWIS are learning fast : There is only one Planet Earth so if we kill it we die with it ! I teach CONSERVATION and the UK is gradually waking up to the inevtable ANTHROPOGENIC destruction of Planet Earth in this Century (by 2100) if we don\'t wake up !
Let Eden Reign : AMEN !
Bessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 28th, 2019 17:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : I have Poems on similar themes ! To me the whole the Natural World (Flora & Fauna) is the Garden of Eden and nowhere on Earth more so than New Zealand. The MAORI live in 24/7 \"Harmony with Nature\" & the KIWIS are learning fast : There is only one Planet Earth so if we kill it we die with it ! I teach CONSERVATION and the UK is gradually waking up to the inevtable ANTHROPOGENIC destruction of Planet Earth in this Century (by 2100) if we don\'t wake up !
Let Eden Reign : AMEN !
Bessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 28th, 2019 17:50
INDELIBLE.
sylviasearcher said:
Such beauty captured by your prose, it’s like I can feel the awe and tenderness with which you wrote this.
February 28th, 2019 11:41
sylviasearcher said:
Such beauty captured by your prose, it’s like I can feel the awe and tenderness with which you wrote this.
February 28th, 2019 11:41
INDELIBLE.
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - Will our planet ever stop declining I wonder - let us savour it for its beauty whilst we may.
February 28th, 2019 11:02
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - Will our planet ever stop declining I wonder - let us savour it for its beauty whilst we may.
February 28th, 2019 11:02
INDELIBLE.
Neville said:
If I could have written these words, believe me, I would have.. and I would have been extremely proud of myself .... goes without saying.... thank you...
February 28th, 2019 06:15
Neville said:
If I could have written these words, believe me, I would have.. and I would have been extremely proud of myself .... goes without saying.... thank you...
February 28th, 2019 06:15
INDELIBLE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
This takes me back to Blakes Augeries of innocence
Thank you
February 28th, 2019 06:12
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
This takes me back to Blakes Augeries of innocence
Thank you
February 28th, 2019 06:12
SOLO.
MendedFences27 said:
A look to the sea for the hope of a returning lover, a classic image, that ends your poem of longing. It is proceeded by some great inventful phrasings. Truly enjoyed this. _ Phil A.
February 27th, 2019 20:31
MendedFences27 said:
A look to the sea for the hope of a returning lover, a classic image, that ends your poem of longing. It is proceeded by some great inventful phrasings. Truly enjoyed this. _ Phil A.
February 27th, 2019 20:31
SOLO.
dusk arising said:
Ah the sailors girl waits, knowing all the tides. Knowing his last words. Bearing their last togetherness inside. Have todays communications taken this magic away?
Lovely how you take us through a change of moods, from reverie, loneliness to hope and joy with todays words.
February 27th, 2019 14:45
dusk arising said:
Ah the sailors girl waits, knowing all the tides. Knowing his last words. Bearing their last togetherness inside. Have todays communications taken this magic away?
Lovely how you take us through a change of moods, from reverie, loneliness to hope and joy with todays words.
February 27th, 2019 14:45
SOLO.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! Our muses are on the same vibe today ! You by the Window and me by the Shore ! Broken mornings and shattered evenings. In POETRY & PROSE the Sea is often a euphamism for Loneliness & Despair. When I am on the Coast I always feel close to reality with all its vicissitudes ! Angela says the same about AUCKLAND which is pervaded by the sight & sound of the SEA ! I think my Poem upset her she is now threatening to stop me swimming in the SEA when we are on Honeymoon in Spain in 2020 ! I guess one only see a Lady in her true integrity when shes Married ~ MAMA ANGELA !
Love through Lyrics BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 27th, 2019 06:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ! Our muses are on the same vibe today ! You by the Window and me by the Shore ! Broken mornings and shattered evenings. In POETRY & PROSE the Sea is often a euphamism for Loneliness & Despair. When I am on the Coast I always feel close to reality with all its vicissitudes ! Angela says the same about AUCKLAND which is pervaded by the sight & sound of the SEA ! I think my Poem upset her she is now threatening to stop me swimming in the SEA when we are on Honeymoon in Spain in 2020 ! I guess one only see a Lady in her true integrity when shes Married ~ MAMA ANGELA !
Love through Lyrics BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 27th, 2019 06:15
SOLO.
Neville said:
a stupendous bit o poetry, pitch perfect and singularly special... ........ Neville
February 27th, 2019 05:36
Neville said:
a stupendous bit o poetry, pitch perfect and singularly special... ........ Neville
February 27th, 2019 05:36
SOLO.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Fay
Made me think of the tales from Matha\'s Vinyard and those who did not return
February 27th, 2019 03:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Fay
Made me think of the tales from Matha\'s Vinyard and those who did not return
February 27th, 2019 03:47
SOLO.
Michael Edwards said:
This really held me and the last two lines, in view of what goes before, are superb.
February 27th, 2019 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
This really held me and the last two lines, in view of what goes before, are superb.
February 27th, 2019 03:26
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