Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
RELIANCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures canvas would be nothing without the sky highlighting its beauty.
February 15th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures canvas would be nothing without the sky highlighting its beauty.
February 15th, 2019 01:43
RELIANCE.
Amherrera1190 said:
Amazing i like how i can imagine the scenes as i read.
February 14th, 2019 12:29
Amherrera1190 said:
Amazing i like how i can imagine the scenes as i read.
February 14th, 2019 12:29
RELIANCE.
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t want to wake to a life without a sky. The sky illuminates everything beautiful. The sky defines our body clock.
Spring brings my most favourite days when suddenly our landscape is full of verdant growth before the sky begins to bleach it.
Your words bring this mornings recognition of these two marvels.
February 14th, 2019 08:58
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t want to wake to a life without a sky. The sky illuminates everything beautiful. The sky defines our body clock.
Spring brings my most favourite days when suddenly our landscape is full of verdant growth before the sky begins to bleach it.
Your words bring this mornings recognition of these two marvels.
February 14th, 2019 08:58
RELIANCE.
Michael Edwards said:
A long walk this morning looking at the bare branches and twigs shining green, red, purple and silver in the morning sun - magical. Super work Fay.
February 14th, 2019 06:55
Michael Edwards said:
A long walk this morning looking at the bare branches and twigs shining green, red, purple and silver in the morning sun - magical. Super work Fay.
February 14th, 2019 06:55
RELIANCE.
Neville said:
As far as I\'m concerned dear Fay, you just nailed two of my very favourite S\'s ... sky and spring.. there are of course others, but I\'m far too much of a ................. Happy V Day my friend, N
February 14th, 2019 06:30
Neville said:
As far as I\'m concerned dear Fay, you just nailed two of my very favourite S\'s ... sky and spring.. there are of course others, but I\'m far too much of a ................. Happy V Day my friend, N
February 14th, 2019 06:30
JOINED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
DEAR FAY ~ You have touched on a sadness you bear on the Dawn of Valentines that Angela & I dared not broach ! We are a young COUPLE anticipating Union but we are aware that the time will come when PHYSICALLY we will only be ONE. However your beautiful Poem assures us that SPIRITUALLY we will be FOREVER JOINED ~ AMEN.
Your Poem speaks eloquently of the gap left when a Loved One is transported to the Celestial Realm. However:
You taste His Spirit
You long for a Sign
You feel His Absence
You long for His Touch
You reject Deaths Dominion
You taste Loves Nectar
You reject Deaths Hold ~ AMEN !
FAY ~ Your Faith & abiding Love gives us hope (at the Dawn of our Love) that we too could rise above Physical Separation in our assurance of Eternal Life & Eternal Love. Thanks for caring & sharing !
Eternal Blessings & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 13th, 2019 19:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
DEAR FAY ~ You have touched on a sadness you bear on the Dawn of Valentines that Angela & I dared not broach ! We are a young COUPLE anticipating Union but we are aware that the time will come when PHYSICALLY we will only be ONE. However your beautiful Poem assures us that SPIRITUALLY we will be FOREVER JOINED ~ AMEN.
Your Poem speaks eloquently of the gap left when a Loved One is transported to the Celestial Realm. However:
You taste His Spirit
You long for a Sign
You feel His Absence
You long for His Touch
You reject Deaths Dominion
You taste Loves Nectar
You reject Deaths Hold ~ AMEN !
FAY ~ Your Faith & abiding Love gives us hope (at the Dawn of our Love) that we too could rise above Physical Separation in our assurance of Eternal Life & Eternal Love. Thanks for caring & sharing !
Eternal Blessings & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 13th, 2019 19:04
JOINED.
dusk arising said:
Beautiful Fay. So many people robbed of their one true love by death must yearn for the loving, caring, familiar togetherness torn from their existence.
Night time is the time we feel the most needy. Night times atmosphere was one where romance was known in all its forms.
Loss.
February 13th, 2019 13:35
dusk arising said:
Beautiful Fay. So many people robbed of their one true love by death must yearn for the loving, caring, familiar togetherness torn from their existence.
Night time is the time we feel the most needy. Night times atmosphere was one where romance was known in all its forms.
Loss.
February 13th, 2019 13:35
JOINED.
Neville said:
so deceptively deep and beautiful.. this poet could drown here and most happily ..... Neville
February 13th, 2019 09:33
Neville said:
so deceptively deep and beautiful.. this poet could drown here and most happily ..... Neville
February 13th, 2019 09:33
JOINED.
Michael Edwards said:
And Jeanne and I have remained - fine work Fay.
February 13th, 2019 04:19
Michael Edwards said:
And Jeanne and I have remained - fine work Fay.
February 13th, 2019 04:19
INVITING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY:
Lovely descrioption of a Cornish morning
Sparrowed pools ~ bleat of new-dropped Lambs
Sirring of moored Boats ~scents of Dawn !
Im not too near the Coast (12 miles ) but i share the other sounds. Im generally up by 6 am to make an entry into MPS before WORK !
Yours as always CARPE DIEM ~ BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 12th, 2019 09:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY:
Lovely descrioption of a Cornish morning
Sparrowed pools ~ bleat of new-dropped Lambs
Sirring of moored Boats ~scents of Dawn !
Im not too near the Coast (12 miles ) but i share the other sounds. Im generally up by 6 am to make an entry into MPS before WORK !
Yours as always CARPE DIEM ~ BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 12th, 2019 09:33
INVITING.
dusk arising said:
Gosh, you do write so beautifully about the dawn. How many of your dawn poems have i read now?
Wonderful descriptions like \'sparrowed pools\'... only you do this.
February 12th, 2019 08:54
dusk arising said:
Gosh, you do write so beautifully about the dawn. How many of your dawn poems have i read now?
Wonderful descriptions like \'sparrowed pools\'... only you do this.
February 12th, 2019 08:54
INVITING.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There\'s a sombre air in the postings today This is peaceful Fay and full of hope
Beautiful
Thank you
February 12th, 2019 07:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There\'s a sombre air in the postings today This is peaceful Fay and full of hope
Beautiful
Thank you
February 12th, 2019 07:37
INVITING.
Neville said:
this is without a shadow of doubt.. one of THE most beautiful poems....
Large case intended... neville x
February 12th, 2019 05:52
Neville said:
this is without a shadow of doubt.. one of THE most beautiful poems....
Large case intended... neville x
February 12th, 2019 05:52
VEILS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ for caring & sharing !
As Scientists we like to live
In the realms of Time & Sense
BUT ~ those realms do not explain all !
Sometimes we need to look beyond the veil
Into the mystical & spiritual dimension.
Where we see ephemeral creatures and we
Hear voices from beyond our own dimension !
We should never be afraid to explore
Into other dimensions ~ as we search for TRUTH
Blessings & Love ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 11th, 2019 17:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ for caring & sharing !
As Scientists we like to live
In the realms of Time & Sense
BUT ~ those realms do not explain all !
Sometimes we need to look beyond the veil
Into the mystical & spiritual dimension.
Where we see ephemeral creatures and we
Hear voices from beyond our own dimension !
We should never be afraid to explore
Into other dimensions ~ as we search for TRUTH
Blessings & Love ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 11th, 2019 17:36
VEILS.
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - deserves another read - I will return.
February 11th, 2019 12:49
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - deserves another read - I will return.
February 11th, 2019 12:49
VEILS.
dusk arising said:
Reality is but an illusion! Yes I do look for something beyond my disbelief in that which is taught to us. However one has to be on their guard for there are many potholes for the gullible and many a charlatan lurks showing a light into darkened constructs of their own profit making austere realms.
Hmmmm various churches suddenly spring to mind.
I love the way you let your unpunctuated lines run into each other challenging your reader to set one\'s own meter.
A murky mysterious read and quite enthralling.
February 11th, 2019 08:45
dusk arising said:
Reality is but an illusion! Yes I do look for something beyond my disbelief in that which is taught to us. However one has to be on their guard for there are many potholes for the gullible and many a charlatan lurks showing a light into darkened constructs of their own profit making austere realms.
Hmmmm various churches suddenly spring to mind.
I love the way you let your unpunctuated lines run into each other challenging your reader to set one\'s own meter.
A murky mysterious read and quite enthralling.
February 11th, 2019 08:45
VEILS.
Neville said:
You just sent a shiver down my spine Fay.. although of course, my interpretation of these words so fine can be nothing but subjective .. I feel a deep connection and congratulate you on another little masterpiece ... Neville
February 11th, 2019 05:55
Neville said:
You just sent a shiver down my spine Fay.. although of course, my interpretation of these words so fine can be nothing but subjective .. I feel a deep connection and congratulate you on another little masterpiece ... Neville
February 11th, 2019 05:55
ABANDONMENT.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY & Thanks MOLLUSCS for shedding your Shells on the sea shore ! Scuptured Residenses for us to enjoy as ornaments ; lamps : jewellery : love tokens etc ! We have some fabulous sea shells in New Zealand ! I always marvel how so many delicate shells : despite the tempest : can survive intact & perfect & valuable ! On each new N Z beach I am always a shell seaker !
Sunday Blessings & Spiritual Love :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Photo !
Please check our new FUSION : VALENTINE !
Please add a POEM : Thanks : ANGELA !
February 9th, 2019 15:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY & Thanks MOLLUSCS for shedding your Shells on the sea shore ! Scuptured Residenses for us to enjoy as ornaments ; lamps : jewellery : love tokens etc ! We have some fabulous sea shells in New Zealand ! I always marvel how so many delicate shells : despite the tempest : can survive intact & perfect & valuable ! On each new N Z beach I am always a shell seaker !
Sunday Blessings & Spiritual Love :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Photo !
Please check our new FUSION : VALENTINE !
Please add a POEM : Thanks : ANGELA !
February 9th, 2019 15:22
ABANDONMENT.
Caleb.A said:
\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\', wow truly beautiful.
February 8th, 2019 10:35
Caleb.A said:
\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\', wow truly beautiful.
February 8th, 2019 10:35
ABANDONMENT.
Neville said:
the perfect title and so befitting of a perfectly penned poem... I close my eyes & can hear the sea.... x
February 8th, 2019 09:39
Neville said:
the perfect title and so befitting of a perfectly penned poem... I close my eyes & can hear the sea.... x
February 8th, 2019 09:39
ABANDONMENT.
dusk arising said:
Oh my, what a wonderful conjunction of words \"tumbles at measured pace in ocean breakers\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\".
In sober moments on the beach i shall reflect upon those words.
February 8th, 2019 07:43
dusk arising said:
Oh my, what a wonderful conjunction of words \"tumbles at measured pace in ocean breakers\' restless dance with fate\'s abandonment\".
In sober moments on the beach i shall reflect upon those words.
February 8th, 2019 07:43
ABANDONMENT.
Lorna said:
Like tiny castles...... little memorials to the creatures that made them. Lovely words Fay.
February 8th, 2019 06:45
Lorna said:
Like tiny castles...... little memorials to the creatures that made them. Lovely words Fay.
February 8th, 2019 06:45
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