Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
UNDETERRED.
Netashi said:
Very well put words Fay. Keep up the great work.
- T
\"Forgive your enemies but never ever forget their names\" - John F Kennedy
January 31st, 2019 13:23
Netashi said:
Very well put words Fay. Keep up the great work.
- T
\"Forgive your enemies but never ever forget their names\" - John F Kennedy
January 31st, 2019 13:23
UNDETERRED.
Neville said:
I must admit that I was unaware that Roberto Assaglioli had once said that he is the founder of psychosynthesis counselling ya know.. a one time friend of Freud but had a mega falling out somewhere along the line... I studied the psychosynthesis model for several years.... Darn good poem too my friend and one with a message for us all methinks..... Neville
January 31st, 2019 10:43
Neville said:
I must admit that I was unaware that Roberto Assaglioli had once said that he is the founder of psychosynthesis counselling ya know.. a one time friend of Freud but had a mega falling out somewhere along the line... I studied the psychosynthesis model for several years.... Darn good poem too my friend and one with a message for us all methinks..... Neville
January 31st, 2019 10:43
RELEASED.
Goldfinch60 said:
The raptors seen in flight are glorious to see, as glorious as your words Fay.
January 31st, 2019 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
The raptors seen in flight are glorious to see, as glorious as your words Fay.
January 31st, 2019 01:50
RELEASED.
psychofemale said:
love your rhyme and picture you painted with this one :)
January 30th, 2019 18:06
psychofemale said:
love your rhyme and picture you painted with this one :)
January 30th, 2019 18:06
RELEASED.
Netashi said:
It seems nature is on your mind from beak to talons every birds deserves to soar above our heads in the sky. Great write keep up the great work. - T
January 30th, 2019 16:13
Netashi said:
It seems nature is on your mind from beak to talons every birds deserves to soar above our heads in the sky. Great write keep up the great work. - T
January 30th, 2019 16:13
RELEASED.
Neville said:
what an absolute beaut... a fantastic poem, exhilarating even ....almost takes one\'s breath away...... Neville x
January 30th, 2019 10:40
Neville said:
what an absolute beaut... a fantastic poem, exhilarating even ....almost takes one\'s breath away...... Neville x
January 30th, 2019 10:40
RELEASED.
Michael Edwards said:
Such an elegant plea for these magnificent birds .
January 30th, 2019 09:38
Michael Edwards said:
Such an elegant plea for these magnificent birds .
January 30th, 2019 09:38
RELEASED.
kevin browne said:
Beautifully constructed poem, Fay. everything just fitted in together perfectly. I love it.
January 30th, 2019 06:32
kevin browne said:
Beautifully constructed poem, Fay. everything just fitted in together perfectly. I love it.
January 30th, 2019 06:32
RELEASED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Lovely PICTURE to illustrate a lovely POEM. Birds of Prey should never be tethered they should all be \"FREE AS A BIRD !\" Love & Blessings for TODAY & FOREVER : Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 30th, 2019 05:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Lovely PICTURE to illustrate a lovely POEM. Birds of Prey should never be tethered they should all be \"FREE AS A BIRD !\" Love & Blessings for TODAY & FOREVER : Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 30th, 2019 05:58
LUNACY.
Gino said:
Excellent written poem. It\'s an unfortunate blunder mankind has yet to learn, that the trees, forests and all the beautiful nature help conserve our survival. Unfortunately greed has an eye at every corner we error to mirror...
January 29th, 2019 21:28
Gino said:
Excellent written poem. It\'s an unfortunate blunder mankind has yet to learn, that the trees, forests and all the beautiful nature help conserve our survival. Unfortunately greed has an eye at every corner we error to mirror...
January 29th, 2019 21:28
LUNACY.
dusk arising said:
Look what happened to Easter Island.
All very well to sympathise from afar but..... if we stopped buying the products which are the root cause of the problem then the problem would go away. You and i and a few others may care but most dont care enough or even know about it.
January 29th, 2019 18:43
dusk arising said:
Look what happened to Easter Island.
All very well to sympathise from afar but..... if we stopped buying the products which are the root cause of the problem then the problem would go away. You and i and a few others may care but most dont care enough or even know about it.
January 29th, 2019 18:43
LUNACY.
Netashi said:
Mother earth is dying while we sit in our ivory towers. Greatly written work about nature. Keep up the great work
January 29th, 2019 11:49
Netashi said:
Mother earth is dying while we sit in our ivory towers. Greatly written work about nature. Keep up the great work
January 29th, 2019 11:49
LUNACY.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HEY FAY ~ You\'re in my neck of the woods today ~ Deforestation ~ CO2 Increase & Global Warming etc. An elegant but very sad Poem. As you know PLANTS absorb CO2 and release O2 by photosynthesis to produce GLUOCOSE (& starch & cellulose). ANIMALS breath in O2 which burns (metabolises) GLUCOSE to form CO2 & H2O. This symbiosis between PLANTS & ANIMALS produced a favourable atmospheric CO2 content of 250 ppm for thousands of Years. Since the Industrial Revolution Man has lived outside Nature and the CO2 content has risen to 450 ppm and could rise to 1000 ppm by 2100. The reasons are an increase in Population (to 15 billion ?) Urbanisation (> 50%) and Deforestation (increasing !).
Thanks for drawing our attention to this Lunacy together with Mister Trump using more Fossil Fuels etc.
Yours as always BRIAN !
Please check ANGELA\'s Poem \"WELLINGTON\" also our new FUSION \"HOLIDAY PLANS for 2019\" ~ please add a Poem ~
Thanks B & A 🧡🧡
January 29th, 2019 09:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HEY FAY ~ You\'re in my neck of the woods today ~ Deforestation ~ CO2 Increase & Global Warming etc. An elegant but very sad Poem. As you know PLANTS absorb CO2 and release O2 by photosynthesis to produce GLUOCOSE (& starch & cellulose). ANIMALS breath in O2 which burns (metabolises) GLUCOSE to form CO2 & H2O. This symbiosis between PLANTS & ANIMALS produced a favourable atmospheric CO2 content of 250 ppm for thousands of Years. Since the Industrial Revolution Man has lived outside Nature and the CO2 content has risen to 450 ppm and could rise to 1000 ppm by 2100. The reasons are an increase in Population (to 15 billion ?) Urbanisation (> 50%) and Deforestation (increasing !).
Thanks for drawing our attention to this Lunacy together with Mister Trump using more Fossil Fuels etc.
Yours as always BRIAN !
Please check ANGELA\'s Poem \"WELLINGTON\" also our new FUSION \"HOLIDAY PLANS for 2019\" ~ please add a Poem ~
Thanks B & A 🧡🧡
January 29th, 2019 09:43
LUNACY.
kevin browne said:
We cut down a million trees a day. we are contaminating the air we breath, we pollute the water we drink all for the sake of wealth. It makes me hope in the glorious days when Mother Nature shows her hand at last, and wipe these demons away. A wonderful tribute towards the health of our trees, Fay.
January 29th, 2019 06:19
kevin browne said:
We cut down a million trees a day. we are contaminating the air we breath, we pollute the water we drink all for the sake of wealth. It makes me hope in the glorious days when Mother Nature shows her hand at last, and wipe these demons away. A wonderful tribute towards the health of our trees, Fay.
January 29th, 2019 06:19
LUNACY.
orchidee said:
But - a conservation group locally campaigned. A concrete-jungle - carbuncle on the landscape - of a road system next to a riverside has been scrapped for second time. Hooray!
We\'ve some woody areas not too far from where I live, for pleasant rambles. Not so much this season though!
January 29th, 2019 05:42
orchidee said:
But - a conservation group locally campaigned. A concrete-jungle - carbuncle on the landscape - of a road system next to a riverside has been scrapped for second time. Hooray!
We\'ve some woody areas not too far from where I live, for pleasant rambles. Not so much this season though!
January 29th, 2019 05:42
LUNACY.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. A terrible thing - we\'ll suffer for it sooner or later. Trees that have there much longer than us, gone in a moment. Well, I know some on MPS are old as a dinosaur (me anyway!), so we could be older than those trees! heehee.
January 29th, 2019 05:40
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. A terrible thing - we\'ll suffer for it sooner or later. Trees that have there much longer than us, gone in a moment. Well, I know some on MPS are old as a dinosaur (me anyway!), so we could be older than those trees! heehee.
January 29th, 2019 05:40
NIGHTNESS.
Netashi said:
Such a way with words Fay detailed yet calming like reading down a list. Great work and keep it up.
- T the scholar
January 28th, 2019 11:30
Netashi said:
Such a way with words Fay detailed yet calming like reading down a list. Great work and keep it up.
- T the scholar
January 28th, 2019 11:30
NIGHTNESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you FAY for a very incisive Poem ! It contrasts the placid BOVINE accommodation of NIGHTNESS ~ We just turn the lights on ! By refusing to acalimatise to NIGHTNESS puts us outside Nature ! The generaton of all that ELECTRICITY causes Global Warming !
We can learn much from Cattle as they submit to NIGHTNESS ~ Silence (V 2) Patience (V 3) Uncomplaining (V 4) ~ So we must always Look & Learn from Nature ! Your poem is almost Burnsian ~ you have crafted a GEM from rural observation ! O to be in CORNWALL ! Love in the SPIRIT ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 28th, 2019 11:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you FAY for a very incisive Poem ! It contrasts the placid BOVINE accommodation of NIGHTNESS ~ We just turn the lights on ! By refusing to acalimatise to NIGHTNESS puts us outside Nature ! The generaton of all that ELECTRICITY causes Global Warming !
We can learn much from Cattle as they submit to NIGHTNESS ~ Silence (V 2) Patience (V 3) Uncomplaining (V 4) ~ So we must always Look & Learn from Nature ! Your poem is almost Burnsian ~ you have crafted a GEM from rural observation ! O to be in CORNWALL ! Love in the SPIRIT ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 28th, 2019 11:16
NIGHTNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was with them waiting for the light that comes from your words.
January 28th, 2019 10:03
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was with them waiting for the light that comes from your words.
January 28th, 2019 10:03
NIGHTNESS.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you captured the sunset scenes and animals and all very masterfully in word painting wow. Always great to read your muse thus. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:28
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you captured the sunset scenes and animals and all very masterfully in word painting wow. Always great to read your muse thus. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:28
NIGHTNESS.
dusk arising said:
The way you capture your readers mind, re-pace their perception with your wonderful descriptions, even prying into bovine mind-set. Amazing, beguiling poetry flows from you.
Once again you bring the countryside of England to me in my semi detached urban reality. And a smile to my face.
January 28th, 2019 08:09
dusk arising said:
The way you capture your readers mind, re-pace their perception with your wonderful descriptions, even prying into bovine mind-set. Amazing, beguiling poetry flows from you.
Once again you bring the countryside of England to me in my semi detached urban reality. And a smile to my face.
January 28th, 2019 08:09
NIGHTNESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. More Dayness coming along these days, gradually now.
January 28th, 2019 05:20
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. More Dayness coming along these days, gradually now.
January 28th, 2019 05:20
NIGHTNESS.
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Fay,
That was cannading very well detailed it put me right into your poem. thanks for the share hope to read more of your work.
January 28th, 2019 05:06
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Fay,
That was cannading very well detailed it put me right into your poem. thanks for the share hope to read more of your work.
January 28th, 2019 05:06
NURTURE.
Goldfinch60 said:
That instinct is wondrous, as are your words Fay.
January 25th, 2019 16:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That instinct is wondrous, as are your words Fay.
January 25th, 2019 16:20
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