Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
OUTGROWN
kevin browne said:
This poem reminds me not just of your skilled writing ability for seeds to survive, but also the same thing happens within any form of life. What a remarkable quote/stanza you wrote resembling all forms of life as I mentioned. \"Next generation once weaned wings away from the breast\'s cloistered past. In standing erect most off spring cling not to parental mastery\". I believe every living thing is captured brilliantly in your work. Great stuff, Fay Slimm,
February 4th, 2019 06:05
kevin browne said:
This poem reminds me not just of your skilled writing ability for seeds to survive, but also the same thing happens within any form of life. What a remarkable quote/stanza you wrote resembling all forms of life as I mentioned. \"Next generation once weaned wings away from the breast\'s cloistered past. In standing erect most off spring cling not to parental mastery\". I believe every living thing is captured brilliantly in your work. Great stuff, Fay Slimm,
February 4th, 2019 06:05
OUTGROWN
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. School \'detention\' can be unfair, if the whole class is punished because of one or two offenders. Oh, the shame of it - I even got caught up in a whole-class detention. Of course it all has to be PC these days, for snowflakes!
February 4th, 2019 04:21
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. School \'detention\' can be unfair, if the whole class is punished because of one or two offenders. Oh, the shame of it - I even got caught up in a whole-class detention. Of course it all has to be PC these days, for snowflakes!
February 4th, 2019 04:21
OUTGROWN
Neville said:
this is a very special poem you have left here for us to enjoy today Fay and many more days to come I imagine... I salute thee and true x
February 4th, 2019 04:03
Neville said:
this is a very special poem you have left here for us to enjoy today Fay and many more days to come I imagine... I salute thee and true x
February 4th, 2019 04:03
OUTGROWN
Michael Edwards said:
Super write and that painting is something else - do you know who it\'s by?
February 4th, 2019 03:54
Michael Edwards said:
Super write and that painting is something else - do you know who it\'s by?
February 4th, 2019 03:54
TONIGHT.
Neville said:
a brilliant poem Fay.. you just raised the bar by quite a bit, I can tell ya...
so very atmospheric.. cold as perma frost and then some.. oh\' how I feel for all our wildlife and fauna during these cold spells.... Neville
February 3rd, 2019 10:59
Neville said:
a brilliant poem Fay.. you just raised the bar by quite a bit, I can tell ya...
so very atmospheric.. cold as perma frost and then some.. oh\' how I feel for all our wildlife and fauna during these cold spells.... Neville
February 3rd, 2019 10:59
TONIGHT.
Joseph M Marion said:
This was great it gave me chills I love reading your work
February 2nd, 2019 17:59
Joseph M Marion said:
This was great it gave me chills I love reading your work
February 2nd, 2019 17:59
TONIGHT.
dusk arising said:
\'In the bleak mid winter\' as the old hymn has it.
Many little creatures will not survive but it is amazing that most do, and we call these wonderful creatures \'pest\'.
Your words enhance the shudder brought on with this current freeze up.
February 2nd, 2019 08:08
dusk arising said:
\'In the bleak mid winter\' as the old hymn has it.
Many little creatures will not survive but it is amazing that most do, and we call these wonderful creatures \'pest\'.
Your words enhance the shudder brought on with this current freeze up.
February 2nd, 2019 08:08
UNDETERRED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ In essence this is a fantastic SONNET of 14 pithy undeterred replacments !
Hurt with mirth ~ Tears with humour ~ Black Moods with grins ~ Defuse thick skin ~ Kill insults with laughter ~ Giggle away deoression ~ Cock a snoop at revenge ~ Disperse lifes knocks ~ No eye for eye ~ Confuse ME FIRST attitudes ~ Unhinge defense ~ Shun resentment ~ Regain revival ~ Partnership Love should never be contested ! AMEN. Many of thses issues crop up at Work so Ive laminated a copy and put it on my desk ! A soft answer turneth away wrath ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring Yours as always ~ BRIAN ! 🧡
February 1st, 2019 18:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ In essence this is a fantastic SONNET of 14 pithy undeterred replacments !
Hurt with mirth ~ Tears with humour ~ Black Moods with grins ~ Defuse thick skin ~ Kill insults with laughter ~ Giggle away deoression ~ Cock a snoop at revenge ~ Disperse lifes knocks ~ No eye for eye ~ Confuse ME FIRST attitudes ~ Unhinge defense ~ Shun resentment ~ Regain revival ~ Partnership Love should never be contested ! AMEN. Many of thses issues crop up at Work so Ive laminated a copy and put it on my desk ! A soft answer turneth away wrath ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring Yours as always ~ BRIAN ! 🧡
February 1st, 2019 18:45
TONIGHT.
Michael Edwards said:
I can forgive anything when it comes to your work - the words will always shine through.
February 1st, 2019 15:23
Michael Edwards said:
I can forgive anything when it comes to your work - the words will always shine through.
February 1st, 2019 15:23
TONIGHT.
sylviasearcher said:
I always feel more at one with the world after reading your poems!
Thank you fay 😌
February 1st, 2019 07:59
sylviasearcher said:
I always feel more at one with the world after reading your poems!
Thank you fay 😌
February 1st, 2019 07:59
TONIGHT.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Regardless of the ‘misalignment’ as you say, this write is spot on!
As the song goes...
“Baby it’s cold outside”...
Your sentiments, however, are full of warmth, love and caring for nature’s wonderful creatures.
Unfortunately, they have to withstand these sub freezing conditions in many parts of the world! (-17C in NY last night.) We’re ok in our heated homes. They’re on their own to weather this weather! I feel sadness for those who are helpless and can’t survive!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 1st, 2019 07:57
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Regardless of the ‘misalignment’ as you say, this write is spot on!
As the song goes...
“Baby it’s cold outside”...
Your sentiments, however, are full of warmth, love and caring for nature’s wonderful creatures.
Unfortunately, they have to withstand these sub freezing conditions in many parts of the world! (-17C in NY last night.) We’re ok in our heated homes. They’re on their own to weather this weather! I feel sadness for those who are helpless and can’t survive!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 1st, 2019 07:57
TONIGHT.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. About six months ago we were sweating in a heatwave! Shall we all dash to NZ, as in Brian & Angela\'s poem? Me good deed? I spotted a big friendly tom cat that roams around. I called it indoors, dried the snow from off it, and it stayed on me bed a couple of hours.
February 1st, 2019 07:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. About six months ago we were sweating in a heatwave! Shall we all dash to NZ, as in Brian & Angela\'s poem? Me good deed? I spotted a big friendly tom cat that roams around. I called it indoors, dried the snow from off it, and it stayed on me bed a couple of hours.
February 1st, 2019 07:54
TONIGHT.
Fay Slimm. said:
MY APOLOGIES FOR THE AWFUL MISALIGNMENT OF THIS PIECE - I CAN DO NOTHING ABOUT THE USE OF EDIT AT THE MOMENT SO HAVE REPORTED IT TO MANAGEMENT - -HOPE THEY CAN SOLVE MY PROBLEM SOON.
February 1st, 2019 07:30
Fay Slimm. said:
MY APOLOGIES FOR THE AWFUL MISALIGNMENT OF THIS PIECE - I CAN DO NOTHING ABOUT THE USE OF EDIT AT THE MOMENT SO HAVE REPORTED IT TO MANAGEMENT - -HOPE THEY CAN SOLVE MY PROBLEM SOON.
February 1st, 2019 07:30
UNDETERRED.
dusk arising said:
For me, when things go wrong and painful, i look back at the shared joys which hightened the pain. Yes the pain is undenyable, the pleasure though.... is unforgettable.
And in writing of those joys, as I have in MPS, certain key phrases take my mind and soul back.... like the scent of Barley fields roasting beneath blazing June.
......deja vu
January 31st, 2019 16:29
dusk arising said:
For me, when things go wrong and painful, i look back at the shared joys which hightened the pain. Yes the pain is undenyable, the pleasure though.... is unforgettable.
And in writing of those joys, as I have in MPS, certain key phrases take my mind and soul back.... like the scent of Barley fields roasting beneath blazing June.
......deja vu
January 31st, 2019 16:29
UNDETERRED.
Netashi said:
Very well put words Fay. Keep up the great work.
- T
\"Forgive your enemies but never ever forget their names\" - John F Kennedy
January 31st, 2019 13:23
Netashi said:
Very well put words Fay. Keep up the great work.
- T
\"Forgive your enemies but never ever forget their names\" - John F Kennedy
January 31st, 2019 13:23
UNDETERRED.
Neville said:
I must admit that I was unaware that Roberto Assaglioli had once said that he is the founder of psychosynthesis counselling ya know.. a one time friend of Freud but had a mega falling out somewhere along the line... I studied the psychosynthesis model for several years.... Darn good poem too my friend and one with a message for us all methinks..... Neville
January 31st, 2019 10:43
Neville said:
I must admit that I was unaware that Roberto Assaglioli had once said that he is the founder of psychosynthesis counselling ya know.. a one time friend of Freud but had a mega falling out somewhere along the line... I studied the psychosynthesis model for several years.... Darn good poem too my friend and one with a message for us all methinks..... Neville
January 31st, 2019 10:43
RELEASED.
Goldfinch60 said:
The raptors seen in flight are glorious to see, as glorious as your words Fay.
January 31st, 2019 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
The raptors seen in flight are glorious to see, as glorious as your words Fay.
January 31st, 2019 01:50
RELEASED.
psychofemale said:
love your rhyme and picture you painted with this one :)
January 30th, 2019 18:06
psychofemale said:
love your rhyme and picture you painted with this one :)
January 30th, 2019 18:06
RELEASED.
Netashi said:
It seems nature is on your mind from beak to talons every birds deserves to soar above our heads in the sky. Great write keep up the great work. - T
January 30th, 2019 16:13
Netashi said:
It seems nature is on your mind from beak to talons every birds deserves to soar above our heads in the sky. Great write keep up the great work. - T
January 30th, 2019 16:13
RELEASED.
Neville said:
what an absolute beaut... a fantastic poem, exhilarating even ....almost takes one\'s breath away...... Neville x
January 30th, 2019 10:40
Neville said:
what an absolute beaut... a fantastic poem, exhilarating even ....almost takes one\'s breath away...... Neville x
January 30th, 2019 10:40
RELEASED.
Michael Edwards said:
Such an elegant plea for these magnificent birds .
January 30th, 2019 09:38
Michael Edwards said:
Such an elegant plea for these magnificent birds .
January 30th, 2019 09:38
RELEASED.
kevin browne said:
Beautifully constructed poem, Fay. everything just fitted in together perfectly. I love it.
January 30th, 2019 06:32
kevin browne said:
Beautifully constructed poem, Fay. everything just fitted in together perfectly. I love it.
January 30th, 2019 06:32
RELEASED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Lovely PICTURE to illustrate a lovely POEM. Birds of Prey should never be tethered they should all be \"FREE AS A BIRD !\" Love & Blessings for TODAY & FOREVER : Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 30th, 2019 05:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Lovely PICTURE to illustrate a lovely POEM. Birds of Prey should never be tethered they should all be \"FREE AS A BIRD !\" Love & Blessings for TODAY & FOREVER : Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 30th, 2019 05:58
LUNACY.
Gino said:
Excellent written poem. It\'s an unfortunate blunder mankind has yet to learn, that the trees, forests and all the beautiful nature help conserve our survival. Unfortunately greed has an eye at every corner we error to mirror...
January 29th, 2019 21:28
Gino said:
Excellent written poem. It\'s an unfortunate blunder mankind has yet to learn, that the trees, forests and all the beautiful nature help conserve our survival. Unfortunately greed has an eye at every corner we error to mirror...
January 29th, 2019 21:28
LUNACY.
dusk arising said:
Look what happened to Easter Island.
All very well to sympathise from afar but..... if we stopped buying the products which are the root cause of the problem then the problem would go away. You and i and a few others may care but most dont care enough or even know about it.
January 29th, 2019 18:43
dusk arising said:
Look what happened to Easter Island.
All very well to sympathise from afar but..... if we stopped buying the products which are the root cause of the problem then the problem would go away. You and i and a few others may care but most dont care enough or even know about it.
January 29th, 2019 18:43
LUNACY.
Netashi said:
Mother earth is dying while we sit in our ivory towers. Greatly written work about nature. Keep up the great work
January 29th, 2019 11:49
Netashi said:
Mother earth is dying while we sit in our ivory towers. Greatly written work about nature. Keep up the great work
January 29th, 2019 11:49
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