Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
EARLYNESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You seeing those mornings dawning a little more now? Getting lighter a couple of minutes more each day. But if dark cloudy mornings, it may take longer to get light, so we\'re not \'winning\' then. Doh!
January 21st, 2019 04:18
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You seeing those mornings dawning a little more now? Getting lighter a couple of minutes more each day. But if dark cloudy mornings, it may take longer to get light, so we\'re not \'winning\' then. Doh!
January 21st, 2019 04:18
HUSBANDRY.
The Retired Bloke said:
I have never been anywhere near a dairy in my life. However your poem painted such a picture that I felt that I had!
January 18th, 2019 16:16
The Retired Bloke said:
I have never been anywhere near a dairy in my life. However your poem painted such a picture that I felt that I had!
January 18th, 2019 16:16
HUSBANDRY.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
LOVE THE Picture & Poem FAY : Thanks for caring ! I always feel Milk Maids would make good Physios : gentle touch & a real empathy with their Bovine Clients ! The Cows move into the Miking Parlour knowing the the Milk Maid wil enjoy the proces of milking and reducing the pressure of latation !
A Biohemical Mirxcle has taken place ! A Brown Cow eating Green Grass has converted it into White Milk & Cream for Cornish Cream Teas ~ AMEN !
Just like HUMANS all Cows respond to kindness & gentleness and it is reflected in the YIELD ! Contented Cows produce Good Milk !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 18th, 2019 15:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
LOVE THE Picture & Poem FAY : Thanks for caring ! I always feel Milk Maids would make good Physios : gentle touch & a real empathy with their Bovine Clients ! The Cows move into the Miking Parlour knowing the the Milk Maid wil enjoy the proces of milking and reducing the pressure of latation !
A Biohemical Mirxcle has taken place ! A Brown Cow eating Green Grass has converted it into White Milk & Cream for Cornish Cream Teas ~ AMEN !
Just like HUMANS all Cows respond to kindness & gentleness and it is reflected in the YIELD ! Contented Cows produce Good Milk !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 18th, 2019 15:51
HUSBANDRY.
dusk arising said:
A late brother-in-law was a dairy farmer and introduced me to some of his Ladies in the milking parlour. He knew each very well and took pleasure in telling me of their individual personalities as the machinery chugged away.
Truly was an eye opener and i look upon our bovine fellow residents of Earth with an enriched regard for his kind and knowing words.
All the above brought back by your romantic study.
January 18th, 2019 14:09
dusk arising said:
A late brother-in-law was a dairy farmer and introduced me to some of his Ladies in the milking parlour. He knew each very well and took pleasure in telling me of their individual personalities as the machinery chugged away.
Truly was an eye opener and i look upon our bovine fellow residents of Earth with an enriched regard for his kind and knowing words.
All the above brought back by your romantic study.
January 18th, 2019 14:09
HUSBANDRY.
Neville said:
I read this poem earlier today before I went out... and decided it deserved further consideration... when I returned, had you changed the title... tis a smashing poem, an unusual but most interesting topic.. very much enjoyed on each occasion I have read it through and am likely to be back later for another peek..... N
January 18th, 2019 11:05
Neville said:
I read this poem earlier today before I went out... and decided it deserved further consideration... when I returned, had you changed the title... tis a smashing poem, an unusual but most interesting topic.. very much enjoyed on each occasion I have read it through and am likely to be back later for another peek..... N
January 18th, 2019 11:05
HUSBANDRY.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This poem would’ve delighted my grandmother! When my mom speaks of her, I visualize my grandmother exactly as the young woman in the pic you cleverly chose to complement your wonderful poem!
“ while maid’s cool hands calm full udders by touch of experience for care dis-arms agitation when lactating heat begets alarm.”
“Bovines react by responding to kindness and discrimination for husbandry,”...
A delightful read. Thank you for sharing this super write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 07:44
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This poem would’ve delighted my grandmother! When my mom speaks of her, I visualize my grandmother exactly as the young woman in the pic you cleverly chose to complement your wonderful poem!
“ while maid’s cool hands calm full udders by touch of experience for care dis-arms agitation when lactating heat begets alarm.”
“Bovines react by responding to kindness and discrimination for husbandry,”...
A delightful read. Thank you for sharing this super write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 07:44
HUSBANDRY.
markashley1961 said:
I really like \"while the girl\'s parlour-pail
fills and spills pearls at each flick of tail\"
January 18th, 2019 06:49
markashley1961 said:
I really like \"while the girl\'s parlour-pail
fills and spills pearls at each flick of tail\"
January 18th, 2019 06:49
HUSBANDRY.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the rusticity of yesteryear - great piece as always Fay.
January 18th, 2019 06:28
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the rusticity of yesteryear - great piece as always Fay.
January 18th, 2019 06:28
WHY ?
Neville said:
Have you ever noticed when one why is answered, another why immediately follows it... This is a super poem Fay.. Not only is it well crafted, it makes me tingle when I read it to myself..... N
January 17th, 2019 09:41
Neville said:
Have you ever noticed when one why is answered, another why immediately follows it... This is a super poem Fay.. Not only is it well crafted, it makes me tingle when I read it to myself..... N
January 17th, 2019 09:41
WHY ?
dusk arising said:
How lifes past disappointments can poison hope. Beautifully portrayed in your telling.
January 17th, 2019 09:02
dusk arising said:
How lifes past disappointments can poison hope. Beautifully portrayed in your telling.
January 17th, 2019 09:02
WHY ?
sylviasearcher said:
Fay you have composed this story so well. I have visions of a ghost like heroine wandering on the moors seeking her dream that never could be.
But I\'m a silly romantic who lives a stone\'s throw from the bronte\'s playground.
Thanks for your heartfelt write
January 17th, 2019 04:13
sylviasearcher said:
Fay you have composed this story so well. I have visions of a ghost like heroine wandering on the moors seeking her dream that never could be.
But I\'m a silly romantic who lives a stone\'s throw from the bronte\'s playground.
Thanks for your heartfelt write
January 17th, 2019 04:13
WHY ?
Michael Edwards said:
This reads perfectly - just flows and tells such a poignant story. This is what I try (with emphasis on try) to achieve with many of my more serious writings.
January 17th, 2019 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
This reads perfectly - just flows and tells such a poignant story. This is what I try (with emphasis on try) to achieve with many of my more serious writings.
January 17th, 2019 04:04
TAKE WING.
dusk arising said:
Positivity reigns here, as it does with me.
An uplifting read.
January 16th, 2019 14:42
dusk arising said:
Positivity reigns here, as it does with me.
An uplifting read.
January 16th, 2019 14:42
TAKE WING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : ANGELA here its 8 am here ! Thanks for your Picture & Poem. We love the MESSAGE of your Poem : To forget past Failures and aim a bit lower : and to forget revenge & regret and to learn FORGIVENESS ~ AMEN.
Pick edible Love-seed and reach for Contentment & Peace : LOVE IT !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Love through Poetry : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 16th, 2019 14:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : ANGELA here its 8 am here ! Thanks for your Picture & Poem. We love the MESSAGE of your Poem : To forget past Failures and aim a bit lower : and to forget revenge & regret and to learn FORGIVENESS ~ AMEN.
Pick edible Love-seed and reach for Contentment & Peace : LOVE IT !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Love through Poetry : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 16th, 2019 14:01
TAKE WING.
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to be a buzzard and just hang in the wind. Beautiful write Fay.
January 16th, 2019 13:35
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to be a buzzard and just hang in the wind. Beautiful write Fay.
January 16th, 2019 13:35
TAKE WING.
Netashi said:
Beautiful words indeed written again by you Fay. Keep up the amazing work.
-T
January 16th, 2019 13:06
Netashi said:
Beautiful words indeed written again by you Fay. Keep up the amazing work.
-T
January 16th, 2019 13:06
TAKE WING.
Michael Edwards said:
Interesting construction - fine work and work it does.
January 16th, 2019 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Interesting construction - fine work and work it does.
January 16th, 2019 09:11
TAKE WING.
Neville said:
another uplifting little bit of magic here.... delightful our Fay and true... N
January 16th, 2019 07:04
Neville said:
another uplifting little bit of magic here.... delightful our Fay and true... N
January 16th, 2019 07:04
PRECOCIOUS..
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the wonder of the way air plays with us can be sublime as are your words Fay.
January 16th, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the wonder of the way air plays with us can be sublime as are your words Fay.
January 16th, 2019 01:13
PRECOCIOUS..
Michael Edwards said:
Your creative mind works on a plane of its own - super poetry.
January 15th, 2019 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
Your creative mind works on a plane of its own - super poetry.
January 15th, 2019 11:44
PRECOCIOUS..
Neville said:
probably one of the least precocious poems I\'ve read for hours.. and I been reading Blood Axe Poems of the year circa 2003 since 08.00hrs this very mane... nice one Fay
January 15th, 2019 07:02
Neville said:
probably one of the least precocious poems I\'ve read for hours.. and I been reading Blood Axe Poems of the year circa 2003 since 08.00hrs this very mane... nice one Fay
January 15th, 2019 07:02
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