Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
NURTURE.
Michael Edwards said:
Had lunch at the Waterfront listening to a live jazz band and looking out across the canal basin - and there I saw my first kingfisher of the year - all while eating lunch - all is well with the world. Loved the write.
January 25th, 2019 11:54
Michael Edwards said:
Had lunch at the Waterfront listening to a live jazz band and looking out across the canal basin - and there I saw my first kingfisher of the year - all while eating lunch - all is well with the world. Loved the write.
January 25th, 2019 11:54
NURTURE.
Neville said:
a super poem Fay and yes, I agree with those sentiments.... I was only gazing up at the cliffs in West Bay yesterday and it looked like some of the gulls might be rearing their young on some of the most precarious looking ledges.. then thought, maybe it is my imagination.. it is still January after all.. though the daffodils are in bloom here, so who knows.... N x
January 25th, 2019 06:00
Neville said:
a super poem Fay and yes, I agree with those sentiments.... I was only gazing up at the cliffs in West Bay yesterday and it looked like some of the gulls might be rearing their young on some of the most precarious looking ledges.. then thought, maybe it is my imagination.. it is still January after all.. though the daffodils are in bloom here, so who knows.... N x
January 25th, 2019 06:00
NURTURE.
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you look at nature in a deeper thought provoking way.
So many people seem not to bother to notice and I can\'t understand it.
January 25th, 2019 05:50
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you look at nature in a deeper thought provoking way.
So many people seem not to bother to notice and I can\'t understand it.
January 25th, 2019 05:50
INTER-SPUN.
Neville said:
these words of yours are awesome and collectively they comprise a beautiful and uplifting poem to be proud of..... N
January 25th, 2019 04:52
Neville said:
these words of yours are awesome and collectively they comprise a beautiful and uplifting poem to be proud of..... N
January 25th, 2019 04:52
EVOKING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Calliope looks down upon me every day as I write my words, she must be within you Fay as you write yours.
January 25th, 2019 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Calliope looks down upon me every day as I write my words, she must be within you Fay as you write yours.
January 25th, 2019 01:53
EVOKING.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
“ Oh Calliopé, never forgo scribal ability”...
Such a great line in this amazing write!
Yes, Peace should be given a chance!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2019 01:38
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
“ Oh Calliopé, never forgo scribal ability”...
Such a great line in this amazing write!
Yes, Peace should be given a chance!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2019 01:38
EVOKING.
dusk arising said:
Yes, yes, yes. My muse is in slumber at the moment and I look forward to becoming one of your \'minions pens\' on muse awakening.
I\'m in a dry period
January 24th, 2019 17:21
dusk arising said:
Yes, yes, yes. My muse is in slumber at the moment and I look forward to becoming one of your \'minions pens\' on muse awakening.
I\'m in a dry period
January 24th, 2019 17:21
EVOKING.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you to Sylvia and Sunshine for saving this poem to your favourite lists. So pleased you both enjoyed the read.
January 24th, 2019 07:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you to Sylvia and Sunshine for saving this poem to your favourite lists. So pleased you both enjoyed the read.
January 24th, 2019 07:08
EVOKING.
Neville said:
what poet would not have wanted to have written these words... a page full of plea\'s.......... a good write indeed....
January 24th, 2019 07:07
Neville said:
what poet would not have wanted to have written these words... a page full of plea\'s.......... a good write indeed....
January 24th, 2019 07:07
HOPING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Those buds are there ready to issue their majesty as your words do on this page.
We have some daffodil buds that I noticed yesterday.
January 24th, 2019 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those buds are there ready to issue their majesty as your words do on this page.
We have some daffodil buds that I noticed yesterday.
January 24th, 2019 01:18
HOPING.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful. The Natural Cycles: the seasons, life/death - if we make it through the Winters, Spring awaits us.
Keep on climbing, keep on climbing! - Great poem Fay, had me feeling like singing. - Phil A.
January 23rd, 2019 19:24
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful. The Natural Cycles: the seasons, life/death - if we make it through the Winters, Spring awaits us.
Keep on climbing, keep on climbing! - Great poem Fay, had me feeling like singing. - Phil A.
January 23rd, 2019 19:24
HOPING.
dusk arising said:
Subtle. I read this as the human condition. Emotionally we are creatures of seasons we create. Let us hope we don\'t become too damaged by our winters frosts, and that we remain ever ready to blossom when sunshine once again lights our eyes.
January 23rd, 2019 14:15
dusk arising said:
Subtle. I read this as the human condition. Emotionally we are creatures of seasons we create. Let us hope we don\'t become too damaged by our winters frosts, and that we remain ever ready to blossom when sunshine once again lights our eyes.
January 23rd, 2019 14:15
HOPING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A PICTURE paints a thousand words !
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES buds are the harbingers of Spring ~ but in Essex we haven\'t had Winter yet ! Thanks for sharing ~
Yours as always BRIAN
Please check TO A MOUSE ~ Thanks B & A 🧡
January 23rd, 2019 14:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A PICTURE paints a thousand words !
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES buds are the harbingers of Spring ~ but in Essex we haven\'t had Winter yet ! Thanks for sharing ~
Yours as always BRIAN
Please check TO A MOUSE ~ Thanks B & A 🧡
January 23rd, 2019 14:13
HOPING.
Netashi said:
Hoping is hopefully working, as always your words are amazing. Keep up the stellar work.
- T
January 23rd, 2019 13:51
Netashi said:
Hoping is hopefully working, as always your words are amazing. Keep up the stellar work.
- T
January 23rd, 2019 13:51
HOPING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. yes, some snowdrops appeared really early, it seems. We can keep looking for buds and greenery to appear - signs of Spring.
January 23rd, 2019 05:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. yes, some snowdrops appeared really early, it seems. We can keep looking for buds and greenery to appear - signs of Spring.
January 23rd, 2019 05:46
HOPING.
Neville said:
brevitas sublimas, when less is more than.. an exquisite little gem Fay and true... roll on spring eh
January 23rd, 2019 05:20
Neville said:
brevitas sublimas, when less is more than.. an exquisite little gem Fay and true... roll on spring eh
January 23rd, 2019 05:20
LOVESCAPE.
Michael Edwards said:
All your works are gems - this is a diamond.
January 22nd, 2019 14:50
Michael Edwards said:
All your works are gems - this is a diamond.
January 22nd, 2019 14:50
LOVESCAPE.
Neville said:
This is most definitely a keeper, if ever there was... Whoever requested a re-post of these more than fine words... please forward me your details and I shall buy you a pint..... Neville
January 22nd, 2019 08:07
Neville said:
This is most definitely a keeper, if ever there was... Whoever requested a re-post of these more than fine words... please forward me your details and I shall buy you a pint..... Neville
January 22nd, 2019 08:07
LOVESCAPE.
kevin browne said:
you appear to have a superb ethic about the dimensions in which poets and people can only dream about. Your involvement to encapsulate a meaning towards the lovescape is thrilling to say the least. I have to remember and learn from this beautifully poem. Amazingly done.
January 22nd, 2019 08:02
kevin browne said:
you appear to have a superb ethic about the dimensions in which poets and people can only dream about. Your involvement to encapsulate a meaning towards the lovescape is thrilling to say the least. I have to remember and learn from this beautifully poem. Amazingly done.
January 22nd, 2019 08:02
EARLYNESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ Thanks for an evocative picture and title for a perfect poem ! It suggests (V 1.) that there is a uniqueness as each Dawn unfolds ! In V 2. We listen to Natures morning hum as her every aspect bursts forth in to life of a New Day ! V 3. turns Anthropocene as WE smile as WE breath the cleansed Air and quaff freshly squeezed juice and enjoy the sunlight that dawn brings to both West (Cornwall) & East (Essex) ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN ! It happens here too FAY (although its 11 pm here) every day ! Loved your Poem & Picture (Very N Z in January !) : Blessings & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 22nd, 2019 05:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ Thanks for an evocative picture and title for a perfect poem ! It suggests (V 1.) that there is a uniqueness as each Dawn unfolds ! In V 2. We listen to Natures morning hum as her every aspect bursts forth in to life of a New Day ! V 3. turns Anthropocene as WE smile as WE breath the cleansed Air and quaff freshly squeezed juice and enjoy the sunlight that dawn brings to both West (Cornwall) & East (Essex) ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN ! It happens here too FAY (although its 11 pm here) every day ! Loved your Poem & Picture (Very N Z in January !) : Blessings & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 22nd, 2019 05:16
EARLYNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, the early mornings are so wonderful.
January 21st, 2019 14:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, the early mornings are so wonderful.
January 21st, 2019 14:45
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