Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
RECALL.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
This is a beautiful poem Fay : Thanks for sharing ! You paint all the changing colours as Evening morphs into Night. Silver - Grey - Scarlet - Azure etc. Grief demons of Night are charmed away : When you glimse your Love Star : Awesome !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 7th, 2019 18:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
This is a beautiful poem Fay : Thanks for sharing ! You paint all the changing colours as Evening morphs into Night. Silver - Grey - Scarlet - Azure etc. Grief demons of Night are charmed away : When you glimse your Love Star : Awesome !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 7th, 2019 18:16
RECALL.
Neville said:
Ah\' indeed.. tis such recollections that mean so very much .. I find the older I get, the more important memories are... this is a most beautiful post and I particularly like your concluding line, which for some reason, made me think of friends and lovers and family members lost..... thank you dear Fay.... Neville
February 7th, 2019 10:08
Neville said:
Ah\' indeed.. tis such recollections that mean so very much .. I find the older I get, the more important memories are... this is a most beautiful post and I particularly like your concluding line, which for some reason, made me think of friends and lovers and family members lost..... thank you dear Fay.... Neville
February 7th, 2019 10:08
RECALL.
dusk arising said:
Made me think of my own \'nom de plume\' dusk arising whilst reading you.
Grief\'s demons can always be chased away with happier times recalled can\'t they. \"Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket, save it for a rainy day\".
Once again you paint a beguiling canvas with your word pallet and caring brushwork\'s romance.
February 7th, 2019 06:04
dusk arising said:
Made me think of my own \'nom de plume\' dusk arising whilst reading you.
Grief\'s demons can always be chased away with happier times recalled can\'t they. \"Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket, save it for a rainy day\".
Once again you paint a beguiling canvas with your word pallet and caring brushwork\'s romance.
February 7th, 2019 06:04
RECALL.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I didn\'t know what \'azure\' was at one time!
February 7th, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I didn\'t know what \'azure\' was at one time!
February 7th, 2019 04:16
RESILIENCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great tribute to all those who have to work in all weathers.
February 6th, 2019 15:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Great tribute to all those who have to work in all weathers.
February 6th, 2019 15:43
RESILIENCE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : You paint a Beautiful Picture of what Cornwall is going through : Brian tell me you have had more than your share of the White Stuff already. Lovely POEM made me shiver & think of English Winters Past when I have been Snow Hiking in the Lake District as a student and seen the Hardness & Harshness of the Hill Shepherds lives ! I always work indoors (even in NZ) which is a blessing in the UK.The AQUATHERAPY POOL is always heated ! I wont mention that @ 9 am (THURS) its already 18C (64F) here and I am just leaving for work !
Love the PIC & POEM :
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Unlucky in Love ?
February 6th, 2019 15:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : You paint a Beautiful Picture of what Cornwall is going through : Brian tell me you have had more than your share of the White Stuff already. Lovely POEM made me shiver & think of English Winters Past when I have been Snow Hiking in the Lake District as a student and seen the Hardness & Harshness of the Hill Shepherds lives ! I always work indoors (even in NZ) which is a blessing in the UK.The AQUATHERAPY POOL is always heated ! I wont mention that @ 9 am (THURS) its already 18C (64F) here and I am just leaving for work !
Love the PIC & POEM :
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Unlucky in Love ?
February 6th, 2019 15:11
RESILIENCE.
dusk arising said:
Oooh-arrr my deario, I can see the nostril breath of lowing cattle in the farmyard as farmers wife brings a welcome flask of soup to her man.
Whilst we\'re thinking of throwing back the duvet to a dark, frosty morning there\'s already been three hours frosted sweat \'pon yon herdsman\'s brow.
You paint such pictures for us.
February 6th, 2019 12:54
dusk arising said:
Oooh-arrr my deario, I can see the nostril breath of lowing cattle in the farmyard as farmers wife brings a welcome flask of soup to her man.
Whilst we\'re thinking of throwing back the duvet to a dark, frosty morning there\'s already been three hours frosted sweat \'pon yon herdsman\'s brow.
You paint such pictures for us.
February 6th, 2019 12:54
RESILIENCE.
Lorna said:
And it\'s never the super rich that go through anything like this....... instantly took me to the Great Depression - I met a few \"poor\' folks who had survived it - one with a family of 6. Trying to start the old truck in the cold mornings so he could go and stand waiting for work if he could find it. More power to you Dominic........ I remember your stories.
February 6th, 2019 06:57
Lorna said:
And it\'s never the super rich that go through anything like this....... instantly took me to the Great Depression - I met a few \"poor\' folks who had survived it - one with a family of 6. Trying to start the old truck in the cold mornings so he could go and stand waiting for work if he could find it. More power to you Dominic........ I remember your stories.
February 6th, 2019 06:57
RESILIENCE.
Neville said:
without doubt, the cruelest of seasons captured and the struggles and endurance of those men and their women too.. frozen now in time and against a back cloth of white... these words feel a lot older than the newness of em... another sign of a skilled words mistress.... N
February 6th, 2019 05:16
Neville said:
without doubt, the cruelest of seasons captured and the struggles and endurance of those men and their women too.. frozen now in time and against a back cloth of white... these words feel a lot older than the newness of em... another sign of a skilled words mistress.... N
February 6th, 2019 05:16
RESILIENCE.
orchidee said:
You on that Number 7 bus M? Transport? Or in oblivion, with a blank comment added? lol.
February 6th, 2019 04:47
orchidee said:
You on that Number 7 bus M? Transport? Or in oblivion, with a blank comment added? lol.
February 6th, 2019 04:47
RESILIENCE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. \'When the going gets tough, the tough gets going\'? as someone said.
Aww, I\'m a snowflake. I saw a chihuahua without a coat, shivering, and on a bit milder day too. I nearly burst into tears.
I saw a medium sized dog last year too, shivering in the snow, while owner went into a shop.
February 6th, 2019 04:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. \'When the going gets tough, the tough gets going\'? as someone said.
Aww, I\'m a snowflake. I saw a chihuahua without a coat, shivering, and on a bit milder day too. I nearly burst into tears.
I saw a medium sized dog last year too, shivering in the snow, while owner went into a shop.
February 6th, 2019 04:46
RESILIENCE.
Michael Edwards said:
You always manage to transport the reader - now where am I? lol 😜
February 6th, 2019 04:39
Michael Edwards said:
You always manage to transport the reader - now where am I? lol 😜
February 6th, 2019 04:39
HEARABLE.
dusk arising said:
You took me back to something half a lifetime ago.
i wonder if it is still in me to be there again.
February 6th, 2019 01:39
dusk arising said:
You took me back to something half a lifetime ago.
i wonder if it is still in me to be there again.
February 6th, 2019 01:39
HEARABLE.
psychofemale said:
this was a gorgeous write. nicely written, wonderful!!!!!!!!!!
February 5th, 2019 21:01
psychofemale said:
this was a gorgeous write. nicely written, wonderful!!!!!!!!!!
February 5th, 2019 21:01
HEARABLE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature’s Chorus is so wonderful Fay, as are your words.
February 5th, 2019 15:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature’s Chorus is so wonderful Fay, as are your words.
February 5th, 2019 15:35
HEARABLE.
Michael Edwards said:
Bound over by your use of the language dear Fay.
February 5th, 2019 15:29
Michael Edwards said:
Bound over by your use of the language dear Fay.
February 5th, 2019 15:29
HEARABLE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for another Poem straight form your HEART & EXPERIENCE !
V 1. Communicating with NATURE always lifts our souls.
V 2. We get more immersed visually !
V 3. We get immersed ~ not just by SIGHT but also by SOUND and every other sense ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT & through Poetry ~ as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 5th, 2019 09:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for another Poem straight form your HEART & EXPERIENCE !
V 1. Communicating with NATURE always lifts our souls.
V 2. We get more immersed visually !
V 3. We get immersed ~ not just by SIGHT but also by SOUND and every other sense ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT & through Poetry ~ as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 5th, 2019 09:52
HEARABLE.
Lorna said:
Glorious yellow-woven words! I\'m in the cornfield with you! So beautiful.
February 5th, 2019 07:08
Lorna said:
Glorious yellow-woven words! I\'m in the cornfield with you! So beautiful.
February 5th, 2019 07:08
HEARABLE.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I should like to have the time - and the weather - to sit in fields of corn. Don\'t be daft, Orchi. It\'s not full grown this time of year! I shall come back to the field in about 6 months time.
February 5th, 2019 07:00
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I should like to have the time - and the weather - to sit in fields of corn. Don\'t be daft, Orchi. It\'s not full grown this time of year! I shall come back to the field in about 6 months time.
February 5th, 2019 07:00
HEARABLE.
Neville said:
My word.. you have somehow managed to describe something quite wondrous my friend... something not everyone will have experienced or even be aware of... Something ultra special.. How privileged are we that have and do... All Good Things, your friend, Neville
February 5th, 2019 06:46
Neville said:
My word.. you have somehow managed to describe something quite wondrous my friend... something not everyone will have experienced or even be aware of... Something ultra special.. How privileged are we that have and do... All Good Things, your friend, Neville
February 5th, 2019 06:46
OUTGROWN
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, yes we need to let go of the youngsters to find there own ways and paths in the world and life.
At present we have one granddaughter working in Beijing and the other studying in Milan as part of her degree.
February 5th, 2019 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, yes we need to let go of the youngsters to find there own ways and paths in the world and life.
At present we have one granddaughter working in Beijing and the other studying in Milan as part of her degree.
February 5th, 2019 01:28
LOVESCAPE.
CindyB said:
This makes me think of my first love.... I don\'t think we ever love like that a second time. Beautiful!
February 5th, 2019 00:44
CindyB said:
This makes me think of my first love.... I don\'t think we ever love like that a second time. Beautiful!
February 5th, 2019 00:44
OUTGROWN
dusk arising said:
What a wonderful analogy, casting seeds to the wind ... encouragement to parents.... let them go and find their own place in humanity.
Much wisdom.
February 4th, 2019 18:49
dusk arising said:
What a wonderful analogy, casting seeds to the wind ... encouragement to parents.... let them go and find their own place in humanity.
Much wisdom.
February 4th, 2019 18:49
OUTGROWN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ! Young of all species \"Flee the Nest\" some much earlier than Young Humans. Alas some children as young as FIVE ~ have to fend for themselves ~ and they can ! BRIAN ~ My Parents enabled me to move into my own Flat (close to them) at 25. Also ANGELA\'S Parents allowed her (at 27) to share a Flat with her colleague RUTH. They both worked near their Parents and could have lived @ Home. Their Parents forbade them to live with a Man before they were married. We are all Church Workers and it would set a bad example to the Teens in our Church ! Parents should take responsibility for thier Children (& Teens & Twenties) leaving HOME ! A Residential University does give us a taste for \"Freedom\" but the cost of independent living only hits one when you do it for real. Im glad my NEST is still close enough (and available) for SUNDAY LUNCH ! Thanks for raising an important issue !
Blessings & Love through Poetry :
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 4th, 2019 17:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ! Young of all species \"Flee the Nest\" some much earlier than Young Humans. Alas some children as young as FIVE ~ have to fend for themselves ~ and they can ! BRIAN ~ My Parents enabled me to move into my own Flat (close to them) at 25. Also ANGELA\'S Parents allowed her (at 27) to share a Flat with her colleague RUTH. They both worked near their Parents and could have lived @ Home. Their Parents forbade them to live with a Man before they were married. We are all Church Workers and it would set a bad example to the Teens in our Church ! Parents should take responsibility for thier Children (& Teens & Twenties) leaving HOME ! A Residential University does give us a taste for \"Freedom\" but the cost of independent living only hits one when you do it for real. Im glad my NEST is still close enough (and available) for SUNDAY LUNCH ! Thanks for raising an important issue !
Blessings & Love through Poetry :
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 4th, 2019 17:38
OUTGROWN
Lorna said:
I remember it was hard breaking away from what people who love you wanted for you.... but I don\'t regret a moment. Your poem brought it all back Fay.
February 4th, 2019 08:39
Lorna said:
I remember it was hard breaking away from what people who love you wanted for you.... but I don\'t regret a moment. Your poem brought it all back Fay.
February 4th, 2019 08:39
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