Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
That was a beautiful and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB.
March 10th, 2019 14:51
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
That was a beautiful and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB.
March 10th, 2019 14:51
PASSION.
Neville said:
and what a fine tribute too... this is splendid Fay and one of my fave VG\' paintings too.. could ya get more golden... I dont think so x
March 10th, 2019 13:32
Neville said:
and what a fine tribute too... this is splendid Fay and one of my fave VG\' paintings too.. could ya get more golden... I dont think so x
March 10th, 2019 13:32
PASSION.
Michael Edwards said:
VG captured in one brilliant stanza - great tribute Fay.
March 10th, 2019 08:44
Michael Edwards said:
VG captured in one brilliant stanza - great tribute Fay.
March 10th, 2019 08:44
PASSION.
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done, what a wonderful vibration to go with a dazzling sight.
March 10th, 2019 08:22
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done, what a wonderful vibration to go with a dazzling sight.
March 10th, 2019 08:22
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay. Each cloud is unique as are we all.
March 10th, 2019 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay. Each cloud is unique as are we all.
March 10th, 2019 01:03
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
orchidee said:
I am, or I is (bit ungrammatical there!) enjoying the start of this series!
March 9th, 2019 11:53
orchidee said:
I am, or I is (bit ungrammatical there!) enjoying the start of this series!
March 9th, 2019 11:53
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ I love I AM CLOUD ! I have been interested in Clouds ever since I did my Metreology Badge in the Scouts we had to keep a Daily Cloud Log for a Month ! We learned CIRRUS (Windy) NIMBUS (Rainy) and CUMULUS (Cloudy !) etc etc ! I see things in the Clouds ~ like LINUS saw Beetehoven composing the Moonlight at his Piano when all CHARLIE BROWN saw was a Horsey & a Teddy ! I love the way you have anthropomorphised the Clouds & given them CHARACTER. Offspring of Water & Gravity ~ Blanket against Suns heat ~ Basking against Ice & Cold ~ Hiding lightning & rain ~ Flirting with Maiden Moon ~ Embellishing Sunrises & Sunsets ~ Riding over Oceans ~ Ephemeral a Will-o-the-Wisp ~ I AM CLOUD ! And remember FAY : The Maoris christened New Zealand \"Land of the Long White Cloud\" ~ which creates unique Sunrises & Sunsets :
Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love :
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 9th, 2019 10:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ I love I AM CLOUD ! I have been interested in Clouds ever since I did my Metreology Badge in the Scouts we had to keep a Daily Cloud Log for a Month ! We learned CIRRUS (Windy) NIMBUS (Rainy) and CUMULUS (Cloudy !) etc etc ! I see things in the Clouds ~ like LINUS saw Beetehoven composing the Moonlight at his Piano when all CHARLIE BROWN saw was a Horsey & a Teddy ! I love the way you have anthropomorphised the Clouds & given them CHARACTER. Offspring of Water & Gravity ~ Blanket against Suns heat ~ Basking against Ice & Cold ~ Hiding lightning & rain ~ Flirting with Maiden Moon ~ Embellishing Sunrises & Sunsets ~ Riding over Oceans ~ Ephemeral a Will-o-the-Wisp ~ I AM CLOUD ! And remember FAY : The Maoris christened New Zealand \"Land of the Long White Cloud\" ~ which creates unique Sunrises & Sunsets :
Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love :
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 9th, 2019 10:32
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
JaydeVictoria said:
This is incredible, I am rapidly becoming a huge fan of your work Faye, brilliant write
March 9th, 2019 07:34
JaydeVictoria said:
This is incredible, I am rapidly becoming a huge fan of your work Faye, brilliant write
March 9th, 2019 07:34
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
Neville said:
this is not just a cloud poem, is it..
I AM has got the bloomin lot.. tis very special in my humble opinion... N
March 9th, 2019 06:26
Neville said:
this is not just a cloud poem, is it..
I AM has got the bloomin lot.. tis very special in my humble opinion... N
March 9th, 2019 06:26
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t know how you consistently write to this quality and to this length - superb as always.
March 9th, 2019 05:34
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t know how you consistently write to this quality and to this length - superb as always.
March 9th, 2019 05:34
BIRD-TALK..
Goldfinch60 said:
Dippers are amazing birds to look at as are your words Fay.
March 9th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Dippers are amazing birds to look at as are your words Fay.
March 9th, 2019 01:23
BIRD-TALK..
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks Outback for saving the poem in your favourite list. So pleased you enjoyed the read.
March 8th, 2019 15:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks Outback for saving the poem in your favourite list. So pleased you enjoyed the read.
March 8th, 2019 15:54
BIRD-TALK..
MendedFences27 said:
We are in the midst of Snowstorms here. I\'ll be lucky to see a Penguin, maybe. Just kidding. Come spring and summer our backyard (garden) is host to lots of feathered friends. We watch and try to identify them. Some sing, others squawk. It can get very loud at times. Oh well, enjoyed your descriptions of your encounter. Nicely done. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
We are in the midst of Snowstorms here. I\'ll be lucky to see a Penguin, maybe. Just kidding. Come spring and summer our backyard (garden) is host to lots of feathered friends. We watch and try to identify them. Some sing, others squawk. It can get very loud at times. Oh well, enjoyed your descriptions of your encounter. Nicely done. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:44
BIRD-TALK..
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliantly described. I have just returned from my studio and I saw a blackbird under the bay - as I got near he hopped up onto a branch about level with my face and just sat there as I walked past - although I am sure he would flown at the first movement of my arm I could have reached him easily - he just sat there as I walked past softly talking to him. There was just something quite magical about it as there is about your poem..
March 8th, 2019 07:08
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliantly described. I have just returned from my studio and I saw a blackbird under the bay - as I got near he hopped up onto a branch about level with my face and just sat there as I walked past - although I am sure he would flown at the first movement of my arm I could have reached him easily - he just sat there as I walked past softly talking to him. There was just something quite magical about it as there is about your poem..
March 8th, 2019 07:08
BIRD-TALK..
dusk arising said:
Amazing wild life story from you again. I wonder just what these little beauties have in their mind when they seem to communicate with us. For all we know they\'re telling us to bugger off... or maybe \"come any closer and i\'ll fly away\".... or \"join in, have a drink, there\'s more than enough for us both\".... What did you imagine was being said?
March 8th, 2019 05:40
dusk arising said:
Amazing wild life story from you again. I wonder just what these little beauties have in their mind when they seem to communicate with us. For all we know they\'re telling us to bugger off... or maybe \"come any closer and i\'ll fly away\".... or \"join in, have a drink, there\'s more than enough for us both\".... What did you imagine was being said?
March 8th, 2019 05:40
BIRD-TALK..
Neville said:
Beautiful Fay and in any language...
would you believe it I saw a dipper this morning, as I often do hopping along the river Parrett which runs near the bottom of my garden... yesterday, I saw a kingfisher in almost the same spot.... x
March 8th, 2019 05:02
Neville said:
Beautiful Fay and in any language...
would you believe it I saw a dipper this morning, as I often do hopping along the river Parrett which runs near the bottom of my garden... yesterday, I saw a kingfisher in almost the same spot.... x
March 8th, 2019 05:02
BIRD-TALK..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ I wouls classify this as a 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet ~ wich is a very appropriate structure for the Subject. Thanks for posting such an inspiring Poem \'n Pic. It has mellowed my day. Im on duty as Greeter (11:30 am) for the Pensioners Lunch (£5 for three Haute Cuisine Courses) in the College Training Restaurant today ! No teaching this morning ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 04:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ I wouls classify this as a 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet ~ wich is a very appropriate structure for the Subject. Thanks for posting such an inspiring Poem \'n Pic. It has mellowed my day. Im on duty as Greeter (11:30 am) for the Pensioners Lunch (£5 for three Haute Cuisine Courses) in the College Training Restaurant today ! No teaching this morning ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 04:20
BIRD-TALK..
orchidee said:
You talking with the birds there Fay? Glad it\'s them singing, and not me! People think it\'s two cats fighting! heehee.
March 8th, 2019 04:07
orchidee said:
You talking with the birds there Fay? Glad it\'s them singing, and not me! People think it\'s two cats fighting! heehee.
March 8th, 2019 04:07
ARDOUR.
MendedFences27 said:
Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian behavior. I\'m sure it all happened behind closed doors. Perhaps, they were locked and he could not escape.
A lovely poem with a taste of fiery passion. I like the form of it .She goes from unveiling her powers, to a plea for satisfaction I\'m sure this made everyone\'s day. Really good stuff. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2019 22:22
MendedFences27 said:
Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian behavior. I\'m sure it all happened behind closed doors. Perhaps, they were locked and he could not escape.
A lovely poem with a taste of fiery passion. I like the form of it .She goes from unveiling her powers, to a plea for satisfaction I\'m sure this made everyone\'s day. Really good stuff. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2019 22:22
ARDOUR.
dusk arising said:
My word, what beast lurks within?
Do not go gentle through that dark window dusk, rage, rage against the .... no, hang on a minute.... it actually sounds like fun..... but what commitment is sought?
March 7th, 2019 15:16
dusk arising said:
My word, what beast lurks within?
Do not go gentle through that dark window dusk, rage, rage against the .... no, hang on a minute.... it actually sounds like fun..... but what commitment is sought?
March 7th, 2019 15:16
ARDOUR.
JaydeVictoria said:
Very seductive and captivating!
Really enjoyed this Faye
x
March 7th, 2019 07:28
JaydeVictoria said:
Very seductive and captivating!
Really enjoyed this Faye
x
March 7th, 2019 07:28
ARDOUR.
Neville said:
Pon my very word our cups they do runneth over this fine mane and true.. us lucky lusty lads are in for a treat methinks and our thirsts be quenched by lithesome buxom wenched..... forgive the ed....
Another perfectly poemed post Fay.. a real good un and a keeper for sure.. Neville x
March 7th, 2019 06:03
Neville said:
Pon my very word our cups they do runneth over this fine mane and true.. us lucky lusty lads are in for a treat methinks and our thirsts be quenched by lithesome buxom wenched..... forgive the ed....
Another perfectly poemed post Fay.. a real good un and a keeper for sure.. Neville x
March 7th, 2019 06:03
ARDOUR.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m dong an Orchi - I\'m swooning. fine seductive write dear Fay
March 7th, 2019 04:38
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m dong an Orchi - I\'m swooning. fine seductive write dear Fay
March 7th, 2019 04:38
ARDOUR.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ Some libido risng ardour. Love the Picture ~ Love the Poem and the simile to fine wine ! Thanks for sharing ~
Love through Lyrics ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please taste Angela\'s ~ NZ Lamb & Claret !
March 7th, 2019 04:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ Some libido risng ardour. Love the Picture ~ Love the Poem and the simile to fine wine ! Thanks for sharing ~
Love through Lyrics ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please taste Angela\'s ~ NZ Lamb & Claret !
March 7th, 2019 04:34
ARDOUR.
orchidee said:
Now, should I try some of this! Should I meet her? Anything to with \'ardour\', and my \'watchdog\' Fido barks, to warn me off. I\'ll put him in the shed a while, and let me hair down. What Fido don\'t see won\'t hurt him! heehee.
March 7th, 2019 03:17
orchidee said:
Now, should I try some of this! Should I meet her? Anything to with \'ardour\', and my \'watchdog\' Fido barks, to warn me off. I\'ll put him in the shed a while, and let me hair down. What Fido don\'t see won\'t hurt him! heehee.
March 7th, 2019 03:17
ONCE
Suresh said:
Those who can TRULY experience
Will never have to search again...
March 6th, 2019 17:31
Suresh said:
Those who can TRULY experience
Will never have to search again...
March 6th, 2019 17:31
RISING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : For a perfect picture and a wonderful Ode to the visual & aural Joys of a West Country Spring : O YES I remember it well. We often had a Cottage in Devon / Cornwall at Easter ! NZ is a Paradise but Poems like yours & Brians Quartet on the Seasons (especially the SNOWMAN) have made me homesick ! Thanks for sharing : My Poem tomorrow is about the taste of New Zealand Lamb with a Recipe !
Love through shared experiences ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 7:30 am (Thursday) here : just catching up on MPS !
March 6th, 2019 13:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : For a perfect picture and a wonderful Ode to the visual & aural Joys of a West Country Spring : O YES I remember it well. We often had a Cottage in Devon / Cornwall at Easter ! NZ is a Paradise but Poems like yours & Brians Quartet on the Seasons (especially the SNOWMAN) have made me homesick ! Thanks for sharing : My Poem tomorrow is about the taste of New Zealand Lamb with a Recipe !
Love through shared experiences ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 7:30 am (Thursday) here : just catching up on MPS !
March 6th, 2019 13:22
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