Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
AWESOME.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
OMG FAY (ANGELA here) I am still in shock ! I never saw you as \"A Lad\\y with a Snake\" in a caberet ! You Poem is experiential enough to actually be true : What an unexpected experience . Love the final stanza !
Moved, haunted
and forever beguiled by
your sinuous beauty : Awesome !
I have seen Lady Snake Handlers in Spain and transiently been entwined by a 12 ft yellow Python : incredible feeling. As a PHYSIO I am intriguied by their fleibility : a snake skeleton is a masterpiece ! The Snake Ladies are contortionists and just as flexible as their Pythons ! SINUOUS is a great word to describe their infinite flexibility : AMEN. Thanks for sharing : great Photo and an ever greater Poem !
Blessings & love through sharing
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
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February 26th, 2019 16:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
OMG FAY (ANGELA here) I am still in shock ! I never saw you as \"A Lad\\y with a Snake\" in a caberet ! You Poem is experiential enough to actually be true : What an unexpected experience . Love the final stanza !
Moved, haunted
and forever beguiled by
your sinuous beauty : Awesome !
I have seen Lady Snake Handlers in Spain and transiently been entwined by a 12 ft yellow Python : incredible feeling. As a PHYSIO I am intriguied by their fleibility : a snake skeleton is a masterpiece ! The Snake Ladies are contortionists and just as flexible as their Pythons ! SINUOUS is a great word to describe their infinite flexibility : AMEN. Thanks for sharing : great Photo and an ever greater Poem !
Blessings & love through sharing
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check FUSION : Fave Cuddly Toy : Thanks
February 26th, 2019 16:37
AWESOME.
Michael Edwards said:
I was also lucky enough to experience this at a show put on for children at a local Garden Centre. Quite an experience as your super pen describes.
February 26th, 2019 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
I was also lucky enough to experience this at a show put on for children at a local Garden Centre. Quite an experience as your super pen describes.
February 26th, 2019 11:44
AWESOME.
dusk arising said:
An experience beyond my own. I can\'t say i\'m envious as there is no desire to be \'pythoned\' within me. Was there such within you beforehand or did this wonderful feeling you\'ve described come completely out of the blue with no prior snake envy?
February 26th, 2019 06:23
dusk arising said:
An experience beyond my own. I can\'t say i\'m envious as there is no desire to be \'pythoned\' within me. Was there such within you beforehand or did this wonderful feeling you\'ve described come completely out of the blue with no prior snake envy?
February 26th, 2019 06:23
AWESOME.
Neville said:
most unexpected, yet nevertheless penned perfectly, and likewise enjoyed... for a moment I thought you were writing about me.....
February 26th, 2019 05:27
Neville said:
most unexpected, yet nevertheless penned perfectly, and likewise enjoyed... for a moment I thought you were writing about me.....
February 26th, 2019 05:27
AWESOME.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a wonderful creature. I have never had that experience but would be delighted if I had the chance.
February 26th, 2019 04:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a wonderful creature. I have never had that experience but would be delighted if I had the chance.
February 26th, 2019 04:34
DEFIANCE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing another graphic Poem & Picture. On the East Coast (similar to the West) Fishermen do need a lot Defiance ~ of the Sea ~ of Dwindling Fish Stock ~ and of those of us who crave & consume the Fish unaware of their Dangers & Defiance ! The East Coast is more friable and hundreds of Buildings have already been lost to the Sea ! We should never underestimate the Power of the Sea and the Defiance of ALL FISHERMEN !
Love through the Power of Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 25th, 2019 17:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing another graphic Poem & Picture. On the East Coast (similar to the West) Fishermen do need a lot Defiance ~ of the Sea ~ of Dwindling Fish Stock ~ and of those of us who crave & consume the Fish unaware of their Dangers & Defiance ! The East Coast is more friable and hundreds of Buildings have already been lost to the Sea ! We should never underestimate the Power of the Sea and the Defiance of ALL FISHERMEN !
Love through the Power of Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 25th, 2019 17:29
DEFIANCE.
Neville said:
I read these words earlier today and vowed to return later, as indeed I have just done... whilst away from home, I read them again sitting on the old harbour wall at West Bay, my little patch of the ocean.... in essence, your words then have been pounding me all day dear Fay... and I have not yet tired of them.... N
February 25th, 2019 13:01
Neville said:
I read these words earlier today and vowed to return later, as indeed I have just done... whilst away from home, I read them again sitting on the old harbour wall at West Bay, my little patch of the ocean.... in essence, your words then have been pounding me all day dear Fay... and I have not yet tired of them.... N
February 25th, 2019 13:01
DEFIANCE.
Michael Edwards said:
I can smell the brine in these elegant words.
February 25th, 2019 08:23
Michael Edwards said:
I can smell the brine in these elegant words.
February 25th, 2019 08:23
DEFIANCE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay tough life by the coast and not getting ny easier
February 25th, 2019 03:51
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay tough life by the coast and not getting ny easier
February 25th, 2019 03:51
ONCE-SIPPED.
dusk arising said:
You are a steamy hot bundle of passion here Fay.
February 22nd, 2019 07:25
dusk arising said:
You are a steamy hot bundle of passion here Fay.
February 22nd, 2019 07:25
ONCE-SIPPED.
Neville said:
You had me smiling from ear to there and back again..
what a super way to both demonstrate and express that most wonderful of feelings.. and nicely on the very cusp of steamy too ..... enjoyed and oh\' so very muchly so... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 06:57
Neville said:
You had me smiling from ear to there and back again..
what a super way to both demonstrate and express that most wonderful of feelings.. and nicely on the very cusp of steamy too ..... enjoyed and oh\' so very muchly so... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 06:57
ONCE-SIPPED.
Michael Edwards said:
A wonderful write and that last 6 line stanza is something else - super stuff Fay
February 22nd, 2019 06:28
Michael Edwards said:
A wonderful write and that last 6 line stanza is something else - super stuff Fay
February 22nd, 2019 06:28
WORDLESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures symphony is so wonderful to behold. Beautiful write as ever Fay.
February 22nd, 2019 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures symphony is so wonderful to behold. Beautiful write as ever Fay.
February 22nd, 2019 01:35
WORDLESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ such a omnicompetant Ode ! The Countryside in Cornwall : Essex : New Zealand is replete with sounds especially @ Dawn & Dusk when 21st C Cacophony is more silent ! But these place specific sounds tell you exactly where you are ~ without words ! We all live near the Coast and your third stanza reprises the Sounds of the Coast ! Softer in Essex than Cornwall or Auckland more SEASIDE than SEA COAST ! Thanks for amplifying the sounds of Natures Wordless Voice. Great poem to recite !
Blessings & Love ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 21st, 2019 12:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ such a omnicompetant Ode ! The Countryside in Cornwall : Essex : New Zealand is replete with sounds especially @ Dawn & Dusk when 21st C Cacophony is more silent ! But these place specific sounds tell you exactly where you are ~ without words ! We all live near the Coast and your third stanza reprises the Sounds of the Coast ! Softer in Essex than Cornwall or Auckland more SEASIDE than SEA COAST ! Thanks for amplifying the sounds of Natures Wordless Voice. Great poem to recite !
Blessings & Love ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 21st, 2019 12:05
WORDLESS.
dusk arising said:
Ribbit! You brought to mind the quiet of woodland with a gentle roar above as breeze plays through the tall foliage and the creaking of a tree trunk as it remembers the need to sway. Musty damp aromas fill the air.
All taken for granted in my youth.
February 21st, 2019 09:51
dusk arising said:
Ribbit! You brought to mind the quiet of woodland with a gentle roar above as breeze plays through the tall foliage and the creaking of a tree trunk as it remembers the need to sway. Musty damp aromas fill the air.
All taken for granted in my youth.
February 21st, 2019 09:51
WORDLESS.
Neville said:
Somehow within words you have managed to capture natures voice in all it\'s guises and regional accents.. tender, awesome and starkly beautiful.. N
February 21st, 2019 06:02
Neville said:
Somehow within words you have managed to capture natures voice in all it\'s guises and regional accents.. tender, awesome and starkly beautiful.. N
February 21st, 2019 06:02
ENDED.
Neville said:
this is such an incredibly well crafted and poignant tribute to an an obviously much loved friend..... the fact they were a poet in their very own right, makes these words even more pertinent..... beautiful indeed and truly so......... Neville
February 20th, 2019 07:11
Neville said:
this is such an incredibly well crafted and poignant tribute to an an obviously much loved friend..... the fact they were a poet in their very own right, makes these words even more pertinent..... beautiful indeed and truly so......... Neville
February 20th, 2019 07:11
ENDED.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
So many stories strt at the end Fay
This is beautiful
February 20th, 2019 03:28
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
So many stories strt at the end Fay
This is beautiful
February 20th, 2019 03:28
DECISIVE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great desriptive Fay as always
Bravo!
February 19th, 2019 16:55
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great desriptive Fay as always
Bravo!
February 19th, 2019 16:55
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