Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
MEANT.
dusk arising said:
This is so much about the coming together of new true soul mates i feel.
Sharing the same views, motivations, joys and possibly destiny.... who could ask for more?
A joy to read.... a hope renewed in the heart.... a smile in my soul.
Most uplifting read of today and a must for my favourites.
March 13th, 2019 04:58
dusk arising said:
This is so much about the coming together of new true soul mates i feel.
Sharing the same views, motivations, joys and possibly destiny.... who could ask for more?
A joy to read.... a hope renewed in the heart.... a smile in my soul.
Most uplifting read of today and a must for my favourites.
March 13th, 2019 04:58
MEANT.
Nicholas Browning said:
I would take any hand that offers me hope in this world. A hand to hold in order to save, enlighten, love or hate. Your poetry is enigmatic as always, but it\'s how you carry the message along the words that makes your poetry so riveting I think. All in the timing Fay, and you\'ve certainly mastered your style.
March 13th, 2019 04:27
Nicholas Browning said:
I would take any hand that offers me hope in this world. A hand to hold in order to save, enlighten, love or hate. Your poetry is enigmatic as always, but it\'s how you carry the message along the words that makes your poetry so riveting I think. All in the timing Fay, and you\'ve certainly mastered your style.
March 13th, 2019 04:27
LET\'S GO.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once again Fay, may your togetherness never fail.
March 13th, 2019 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once again Fay, may your togetherness never fail.
March 13th, 2019 01:45
LET\'S GO.
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this a lot. The usage of syllables and scheme go well with each other. It\'s just like the timing is really good with the speed it\'s meant to be read. Nice one.
March 12th, 2019 17:09
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this a lot. The usage of syllables and scheme go well with each other. It\'s just like the timing is really good with the speed it\'s meant to be read. Nice one.
March 12th, 2019 17:09
LET\'S GO.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY you can be so romantic at times it makes a Lady blush. Its MORNING here (10:30 am Wednesday) but I just spoke to Brian on Skype so it was Evening Blues for Him as we are so so far apart PHYSICALLY but ROMANTICALLY we are in each others arms 24/7 and we WILL be \"Together Again\" @ Easter ! On SKYPE where we can see but not touch : We often say \"O lets fly away : just you and I\" and thats when the distance (11,500 miles ~ Wish I gone to Andalucia !) hits hard ! Still @ Easter we will have two weeks in a (BIG) Camper Van together ~ AMEN
I have an afternoon & Evening clinic today so catching up on MPS !
Please check our FUSION : SEASONS
(Nice poems & Music & Pictures etc)
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the visual very Romantic !
March 12th, 2019 16:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ooooooo FAY you can be so romantic at times it makes a Lady blush. Its MORNING here (10:30 am Wednesday) but I just spoke to Brian on Skype so it was Evening Blues for Him as we are so so far apart PHYSICALLY but ROMANTICALLY we are in each others arms 24/7 and we WILL be \"Together Again\" @ Easter ! On SKYPE where we can see but not touch : We often say \"O lets fly away : just you and I\" and thats when the distance (11,500 miles ~ Wish I gone to Andalucia !) hits hard ! Still @ Easter we will have two weeks in a (BIG) Camper Van together ~ AMEN
I have an afternoon & Evening clinic today so catching up on MPS !
Please check our FUSION : SEASONS
(Nice poems & Music & Pictures etc)
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the visual very Romantic !
March 12th, 2019 16:41
LET\'S GO.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve got the tickets - let\'s go - fine write.
March 12th, 2019 12:14
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve got the tickets - let\'s go - fine write.
March 12th, 2019 12:14
LET\'S GO.
sylviasearcher said:
You captured magic like I used to believe in 🌈
March 12th, 2019 08:41
sylviasearcher said:
You captured magic like I used to believe in 🌈
March 12th, 2019 08:41
LET\'S GO.
Neville said:
this is a delightful poem Fay one that sits beautifully on its very own page, whispering soft... and I am sure it is not only my heart that tis a fluttering this very windy March mane.... Neville
March 12th, 2019 08:39
Neville said:
this is a delightful poem Fay one that sits beautifully on its very own page, whispering soft... and I am sure it is not only my heart that tis a fluttering this very windy March mane.... Neville
March 12th, 2019 08:39
AHEAD.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super poem leading us to a positive life flying into Spring.
March 12th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Super poem leading us to a positive life flying into Spring.
March 12th, 2019 01:20
AHEAD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY : Love the Picture ~ rainbowy & springy ! The style I have always called \"interupted doublets\" the ........................... providing time for thought ! There is a time paradox ~ between the end of Winter (officially 20 March) and the start of Spring ! Winter winds down too slowly (in some Northern US States it lastd \'til May Day) and Spring springs in suddenly ~ with Lambs & Chickens and a cornucopia of Spring Flowers ! We had a glimpse (21C = 70F) but its back to normal now ! Some of your Pithy couplets resonated with my 35 years experience. !
Depression adds no ..........
extra kindness to time !
Loves heat once begun ..........
can help wings Spring-soar
Thanks for sharing ~ each dynamic doublet is its own Poem !
Blessings & Love as always
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 11th, 2019 18:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY : Love the Picture ~ rainbowy & springy ! The style I have always called \"interupted doublets\" the ........................... providing time for thought ! There is a time paradox ~ between the end of Winter (officially 20 March) and the start of Spring ! Winter winds down too slowly (in some Northern US States it lastd \'til May Day) and Spring springs in suddenly ~ with Lambs & Chickens and a cornucopia of Spring Flowers ! We had a glimpse (21C = 70F) but its back to normal now ! Some of your Pithy couplets resonated with my 35 years experience. !
Depression adds no ..........
extra kindness to time !
Loves heat once begun ..........
can help wings Spring-soar
Thanks for sharing ~ each dynamic doublet is its own Poem !
Blessings & Love as always
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 11th, 2019 18:45
AHEAD.
Neville said:
Not only very different .. unique in fact but very special too.. a real treat this fine Monday mane and with a promise of tomorrow,,,, N x
March 11th, 2019 07:29
Neville said:
Not only very different .. unique in fact but very special too.. a real treat this fine Monday mane and with a promise of tomorrow,,,, N x
March 11th, 2019 07:29
AHEAD.
Michael Edwards said:
Super form and some great phrases - another worthy write dear Fay,
March 11th, 2019 05:49
Michael Edwards said:
Super form and some great phrases - another worthy write dear Fay,
March 11th, 2019 05:49
AHEAD.
JaydeVictoria said:
This is a beautiful poem, I especially liked \'Hope melts the quicker, on frost written names\'
Lovely write
March 11th, 2019 03:45
JaydeVictoria said:
This is a beautiful poem, I especially liked \'Hope melts the quicker, on frost written names\'
Lovely write
March 11th, 2019 03:45
PASSION.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful painter who only sold one painting in his lifetime - it\'s different now.
March 11th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about a wonderful painter who only sold one painting in his lifetime - it\'s different now.
March 11th, 2019 01:27
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
That was a beautiful and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB.
March 10th, 2019 14:51
FineB said:
Hi Fay,
That was a beautiful and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB.
March 10th, 2019 14:51
PASSION.
Neville said:
and what a fine tribute too... this is splendid Fay and one of my fave VG\' paintings too.. could ya get more golden... I dont think so x
March 10th, 2019 13:32
Neville said:
and what a fine tribute too... this is splendid Fay and one of my fave VG\' paintings too.. could ya get more golden... I dont think so x
March 10th, 2019 13:32
PASSION.
Michael Edwards said:
VG captured in one brilliant stanza - great tribute Fay.
March 10th, 2019 08:44
Michael Edwards said:
VG captured in one brilliant stanza - great tribute Fay.
March 10th, 2019 08:44
PASSION.
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done, what a wonderful vibration to go with a dazzling sight.
March 10th, 2019 08:22
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done, what a wonderful vibration to go with a dazzling sight.
March 10th, 2019 08:22
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay. Each cloud is unique as are we all.
March 10th, 2019 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay. Each cloud is unique as are we all.
March 10th, 2019 01:03
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
orchidee said:
I am, or I is (bit ungrammatical there!) enjoying the start of this series!
March 9th, 2019 11:53
orchidee said:
I am, or I is (bit ungrammatical there!) enjoying the start of this series!
March 9th, 2019 11:53
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ I love I AM CLOUD ! I have been interested in Clouds ever since I did my Metreology Badge in the Scouts we had to keep a Daily Cloud Log for a Month ! We learned CIRRUS (Windy) NIMBUS (Rainy) and CUMULUS (Cloudy !) etc etc ! I see things in the Clouds ~ like LINUS saw Beetehoven composing the Moonlight at his Piano when all CHARLIE BROWN saw was a Horsey & a Teddy ! I love the way you have anthropomorphised the Clouds & given them CHARACTER. Offspring of Water & Gravity ~ Blanket against Suns heat ~ Basking against Ice & Cold ~ Hiding lightning & rain ~ Flirting with Maiden Moon ~ Embellishing Sunrises & Sunsets ~ Riding over Oceans ~ Ephemeral a Will-o-the-Wisp ~ I AM CLOUD ! And remember FAY : The Maoris christened New Zealand \"Land of the Long White Cloud\" ~ which creates unique Sunrises & Sunsets :
Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love :
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 9th, 2019 10:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ I love I AM CLOUD ! I have been interested in Clouds ever since I did my Metreology Badge in the Scouts we had to keep a Daily Cloud Log for a Month ! We learned CIRRUS (Windy) NIMBUS (Rainy) and CUMULUS (Cloudy !) etc etc ! I see things in the Clouds ~ like LINUS saw Beetehoven composing the Moonlight at his Piano when all CHARLIE BROWN saw was a Horsey & a Teddy ! I love the way you have anthropomorphised the Clouds & given them CHARACTER. Offspring of Water & Gravity ~ Blanket against Suns heat ~ Basking against Ice & Cold ~ Hiding lightning & rain ~ Flirting with Maiden Moon ~ Embellishing Sunrises & Sunsets ~ Riding over Oceans ~ Ephemeral a Will-o-the-Wisp ~ I AM CLOUD ! And remember FAY : The Maoris christened New Zealand \"Land of the Long White Cloud\" ~ which creates unique Sunrises & Sunsets :
Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love :
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 9th, 2019 10:32
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
JaydeVictoria said:
This is incredible, I am rapidly becoming a huge fan of your work Faye, brilliant write
March 9th, 2019 07:34
JaydeVictoria said:
This is incredible, I am rapidly becoming a huge fan of your work Faye, brilliant write
March 9th, 2019 07:34
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
Neville said:
this is not just a cloud poem, is it..
I AM has got the bloomin lot.. tis very special in my humble opinion... N
March 9th, 2019 06:26
Neville said:
this is not just a cloud poem, is it..
I AM has got the bloomin lot.. tis very special in my humble opinion... N
March 9th, 2019 06:26
I AM . ( Part One of a Series)
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t know how you consistently write to this quality and to this length - superb as always.
March 9th, 2019 05:34
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t know how you consistently write to this quality and to this length - superb as always.
March 9th, 2019 05:34
BIRD-TALK..
Goldfinch60 said:
Dippers are amazing birds to look at as are your words Fay.
March 9th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Dippers are amazing birds to look at as are your words Fay.
March 9th, 2019 01:23
BIRD-TALK..
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks Outback for saving the poem in your favourite list. So pleased you enjoyed the read.
March 8th, 2019 15:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks Outback for saving the poem in your favourite list. So pleased you enjoyed the read.
March 8th, 2019 15:54
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