Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
CONNECTION.
Michael Edwards said:
Mum used to beat her carpets - she had an old fashioned carpet beater. Anyway I am with Nicholas on this fine write.
March 25th, 2019 07:03
Michael Edwards said:
Mum used to beat her carpets - she had an old fashioned carpet beater. Anyway I am with Nicholas on this fine write.
March 25th, 2019 07:03
CONNECTION.
Nicholas Browning said:
Another lovely write, Fay. It is indeed important for us to be self aware, and be aware that self awareness can either bring much joy or much harm.
March 25th, 2019 05:07
Nicholas Browning said:
Another lovely write, Fay. It is indeed important for us to be self aware, and be aware that self awareness can either bring much joy or much harm.
March 25th, 2019 05:07
CONNECTION.
Neville said:
You can beat an egg and you can beat a carpet folks but you just can\'t beat a bit of introspection & self indulgence with of course subsequent blissful results.... Tho my response to these great words is partly writ with tongue in cheek, there is much truth to what you have proposed here Fay and the compliment I pay........A very touching poem my friend... Neville
March 25th, 2019 04:49
Neville said:
You can beat an egg and you can beat a carpet folks but you just can\'t beat a bit of introspection & self indulgence with of course subsequent blissful results.... Tho my response to these great words is partly writ with tongue in cheek, there is much truth to what you have proposed here Fay and the compliment I pay........A very touching poem my friend... Neville
March 25th, 2019 04:49
CONNECTION.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I got a bit miffed at a leader, who says he goes off on \'retreats\' 4 times a year.
It\'s good to do, but I thought: \'What about the staff under him? It\'s OK for him to swan off when he pleases, and get his \'meditation\' and stuff. When do the real workers get their breaks? Grrr. Doh!
The staff think: \'I should like to have the time to swan off like he does. He\'s in Cuckoo Land\'.
March 25th, 2019 04:24
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I got a bit miffed at a leader, who says he goes off on \'retreats\' 4 times a year.
It\'s good to do, but I thought: \'What about the staff under him? It\'s OK for him to swan off when he pleases, and get his \'meditation\' and stuff. When do the real workers get their breaks? Grrr. Doh!
The staff think: \'I should like to have the time to swan off like he does. He\'s in Cuckoo Land\'.
March 25th, 2019 04:24
NEW.
Nicholas Browning said:
The message accompanying the words is a lovely sight to see.
May we all prosper in aspiring to be better!
A wonderful read, Fay.
March 24th, 2019 19:55
Nicholas Browning said:
The message accompanying the words is a lovely sight to see.
May we all prosper in aspiring to be better!
A wonderful read, Fay.
March 24th, 2019 19:55
NEW.
Michael Edwards said:
Stay as you are and keep writing stuff like this gem.
March 24th, 2019 16:21
Michael Edwards said:
Stay as you are and keep writing stuff like this gem.
March 24th, 2019 16:21
NEW.
Neville said:
Cor blimey how bloomin good is this.. your way with words is amazing dear lady.. am sure a lot of folk around here are gonna be smiling at this little creation...... I know I am.... N
March 24th, 2019 06:31
Neville said:
Cor blimey how bloomin good is this.. your way with words is amazing dear lady.. am sure a lot of folk around here are gonna be smiling at this little creation...... I know I am.... N
March 24th, 2019 06:31
WAVERING.
Neville said:
I am quite sure that even the most outwardly sturdy, fixated and otherwise committed and strong have occasional doubts.. it is part of being who and what we are.... a doubt in time can save more than.... Good Sunday mane Fay x
March 24th, 2019 03:38
Neville said:
I am quite sure that even the most outwardly sturdy, fixated and otherwise committed and strong have occasional doubts.. it is part of being who and what we are.... a doubt in time can save more than.... Good Sunday mane Fay x
March 24th, 2019 03:38
FORTUNE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Thanks for an elegant \"Ode to Spring\" and its pallet of intriguing shades ! Jade : Blue : Saphire : Emerald : White (snowdraop & daisey) : Gold : Topaz & Dun ! Perhaps Autumn does not have the Monopoly ? Your poem invites us all to view Spring with \"Eyes wide Open\" !
Blessings & The JOY of SPRING
Brian & Angela š§”š§”š§”š§”
March 23rd, 2019 16:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Thanks for an elegant \"Ode to Spring\" and its pallet of intriguing shades ! Jade : Blue : Saphire : Emerald : White (snowdraop & daisey) : Gold : Topaz & Dun ! Perhaps Autumn does not have the Monopoly ? Your poem invites us all to view Spring with \"Eyes wide Open\" !
Blessings & The JOY of SPRING
Brian & Angela š§”š§”š§”š§”
March 23rd, 2019 16:45
FORTUNE.
Goldfinch60 said:
The treasures if Spring are showing all around and in your words Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 16:43
Goldfinch60 said:
The treasures if Spring are showing all around and in your words Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 16:43
FORTUNE.
Neville said:
No king nor queen could possibly bestow upon each of us here.. who watch and look and see and find the richness and riches of spring.. she kindly wove into this brightly hued and scented poetic tapestry... thank you Fay x
March 23rd, 2019 11:16
Neville said:
No king nor queen could possibly bestow upon each of us here.. who watch and look and see and find the richness and riches of spring.. she kindly wove into this brightly hued and scented poetic tapestry... thank you Fay x
March 23rd, 2019 11:16
FORTUNE.
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a truly wonderful piece about a passion that shines so brightly in your mind. Well done, Fay.
You\'re descriptions of nature are a wonder.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a truly wonderful piece about a passion that shines so brightly in your mind. Well done, Fay.
You\'re descriptions of nature are a wonder.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
FORTUNE.
sylviasearcher said:
A beautiful picture you have created. Like a delightful picnic I canāt wait to indulge in!
March 23rd, 2019 03:10
sylviasearcher said:
A beautiful picture you have created. Like a delightful picnic I canāt wait to indulge in!
March 23rd, 2019 03:10
FORTUNE.
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Fay,
No signs of spring where I am!
While reading your poem though, Iāve envisioned...
āthe flash of emerald as snowdrop perfection adorns its shy petalsā...
Your excellent choice of words have painted the perfect picture in my mind...the picture of new beginnings...the picture of Springtime!
Thank you for sharing !
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 02:58
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Fay,
No signs of spring where I am!
While reading your poem though, Iāve envisioned...
āthe flash of emerald as snowdrop perfection adorns its shy petalsā...
Your excellent choice of words have painted the perfect picture in my mind...the picture of new beginnings...the picture of Springtime!
Thank you for sharing !
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 02:58
FORTUNE.
Michael Edwards said:
Nature is sure beginning to expose its treasures - it\'s quite stunning looking out and I\'ll soon be out there. Mind you I\'m helping at a charity rummage sale all day today so I\'ll not see so much of it. Such an elegant write Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 02:20
Michael Edwards said:
Nature is sure beginning to expose its treasures - it\'s quite stunning looking out and I\'ll soon be out there. Mind you I\'m helping at a charity rummage sale all day today so I\'ll not see so much of it. Such an elegant write Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 02:20
OMENS.
Neville said:
a magnificent post here we have folks....
I oft stand and stare in awe at some of these giants..scattered around this most beautiful isle of ours.. and boy, do I wonder so... Aint we lucky having so many of them down our neck of the woods eh\' Fay.... only yesterday did I marvel at Stonehenge on passing .... N x
March 22nd, 2019 17:50
Neville said:
a magnificent post here we have folks....
I oft stand and stare in awe at some of these giants..scattered around this most beautiful isle of ours.. and boy, do I wonder so... Aint we lucky having so many of them down our neck of the woods eh\' Fay.... only yesterday did I marvel at Stonehenge on passing .... N x
March 22nd, 2019 17:50
MYSTERY.
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea still hols so many mysteries Fay, I wonder if they will ever be solved.
March 22nd, 2019 15:51
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea still hols so many mysteries Fay, I wonder if they will ever be solved.
March 22nd, 2019 15:51
MYSTERY.
MendedFences27 said:
Empathy for the crab? Truly a poet\'s response. Much so that a poem is written, and mysteries theorized. If we completely understood the Ocean, we might be able to save ourselves. A very nice description and cause for thinking. Thanks for posting this reminder of two thirds of our planet that seems to go unnoticed.- Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:33
MendedFences27 said:
Empathy for the crab? Truly a poet\'s response. Much so that a poem is written, and mysteries theorized. If we completely understood the Ocean, we might be able to save ourselves. A very nice description and cause for thinking. Thanks for posting this reminder of two thirds of our planet that seems to go unnoticed.- Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:33
MYSTERY.
dusk arising said:
Such a last verse to make one sit up and think today. Could the mystery simply be \'harmony\'? A commodity which humanity has grasped in small quantity only to witness it\'s slipping through our fingers time after time.
Earlier, reading, my thoughts painted pictures of the pathetic tragedy a corpse presents as it is rolled and dismembered by a now cruel tide. A once beautiful creation reduced to this. Here i am also mindful of the ruined bodies of roadkill we see all too often.
Vivid pictures today.
March 22nd, 2019 08:18
dusk arising said:
Such a last verse to make one sit up and think today. Could the mystery simply be \'harmony\'? A commodity which humanity has grasped in small quantity only to witness it\'s slipping through our fingers time after time.
Earlier, reading, my thoughts painted pictures of the pathetic tragedy a corpse presents as it is rolled and dismembered by a now cruel tide. A once beautiful creation reduced to this. Here i am also mindful of the ruined bodies of roadkill we see all too often.
Vivid pictures today.
March 22nd, 2019 08:18
MYSTERY.
Nicholas Browning said:
There may very well be the cure for cancer at the bottom of the ocean somewhere.
A lovely write, Fay.
March 22nd, 2019 06:19
Nicholas Browning said:
There may very well be the cure for cancer at the bottom of the ocean somewhere.
A lovely write, Fay.
March 22nd, 2019 06:19
MYSTERY.
Michael Edwards said:
Super salty stuff Fay - and there is so much to learn from exists beneath the waves.
March 22nd, 2019 06:09
Michael Edwards said:
Super salty stuff Fay - and there is so much to learn from exists beneath the waves.
March 22nd, 2019 06:09
VIBRATIONS.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you kindly Sunshinefalling for adding my poem to your favourites.
March 21st, 2019 21:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you kindly Sunshinefalling for adding my poem to your favourites.
March 21st, 2019 21:21
VIBRATIONS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Again FAY you have shared a Poem that is beautiful in both its meter & message ! Irespective of \"Wherever in the World we are : UK or NZ\" : An ear bent to NATURE does become tuned into its \"GOOD VIBRATIONS\" Because the Population Density in NZ is only 7% that of the UK there is much less background noise and the \"Sounds of Nature\" become predominant and beautiful ! Our Poem today on Mickey Mouse does resonate with yours in that one day all Art will graduate to the Pastoral ! As in Robbie Burns \"To a Mouse !\"
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”
March 21st, 2019 16:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Again FAY you have shared a Poem that is beautiful in both its meter & message ! Irespective of \"Wherever in the World we are : UK or NZ\" : An ear bent to NATURE does become tuned into its \"GOOD VIBRATIONS\" Because the Population Density in NZ is only 7% that of the UK there is much less background noise and the \"Sounds of Nature\" become predominant and beautiful ! Our Poem today on Mickey Mouse does resonate with yours in that one day all Art will graduate to the Pastoral ! As in Robbie Burns \"To a Mouse !\"
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA š§”š§”š§”š§”
March 21st, 2019 16:03
CLIMBING.
Neville said:
indeed it is true, nothing stings quite like the smarting sting left in the wake of betrayal... any kind of betrayal in my mind.. another great write from a delicate & dedicated pen.... yours truly... A fan.....
March 21st, 2019 15:21
Neville said:
indeed it is true, nothing stings quite like the smarting sting left in the wake of betrayal... any kind of betrayal in my mind.. another great write from a delicate & dedicated pen.... yours truly... A fan.....
March 21st, 2019 15:21
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