Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
BIRD-TALK..
MendedFences27 said:
We are in the midst of Snowstorms here. I\'ll be lucky to see a Penguin, maybe. Just kidding. Come spring and summer our backyard (garden) is host to lots of feathered friends. We watch and try to identify them. Some sing, others squawk. It can get very loud at times. Oh well, enjoyed your descriptions of your encounter. Nicely done. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
We are in the midst of Snowstorms here. I\'ll be lucky to see a Penguin, maybe. Just kidding. Come spring and summer our backyard (garden) is host to lots of feathered friends. We watch and try to identify them. Some sing, others squawk. It can get very loud at times. Oh well, enjoyed your descriptions of your encounter. Nicely done. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:44
BIRD-TALK..
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliantly described. I have just returned from my studio and I saw a blackbird under the bay - as I got near he hopped up onto a branch about level with my face and just sat there as I walked past - although I am sure he would flown at the first movement of my arm I could have reached him easily - he just sat there as I walked past softly talking to him. There was just something quite magical about it as there is about your poem..
March 8th, 2019 07:08
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliantly described. I have just returned from my studio and I saw a blackbird under the bay - as I got near he hopped up onto a branch about level with my face and just sat there as I walked past - although I am sure he would flown at the first movement of my arm I could have reached him easily - he just sat there as I walked past softly talking to him. There was just something quite magical about it as there is about your poem..
March 8th, 2019 07:08
BIRD-TALK..
dusk arising said:
Amazing wild life story from you again. I wonder just what these little beauties have in their mind when they seem to communicate with us. For all we know they\'re telling us to bugger off... or maybe \"come any closer and i\'ll fly away\".... or \"join in, have a drink, there\'s more than enough for us both\".... What did you imagine was being said?
March 8th, 2019 05:40
dusk arising said:
Amazing wild life story from you again. I wonder just what these little beauties have in their mind when they seem to communicate with us. For all we know they\'re telling us to bugger off... or maybe \"come any closer and i\'ll fly away\".... or \"join in, have a drink, there\'s more than enough for us both\".... What did you imagine was being said?
March 8th, 2019 05:40
BIRD-TALK..
Neville said:
Beautiful Fay and in any language...
would you believe it I saw a dipper this morning, as I often do hopping along the river Parrett which runs near the bottom of my garden... yesterday, I saw a kingfisher in almost the same spot.... x
March 8th, 2019 05:02
Neville said:
Beautiful Fay and in any language...
would you believe it I saw a dipper this morning, as I often do hopping along the river Parrett which runs near the bottom of my garden... yesterday, I saw a kingfisher in almost the same spot.... x
March 8th, 2019 05:02
BIRD-TALK..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ I wouls classify this as a 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet ~ wich is a very appropriate structure for the Subject. Thanks for posting such an inspiring Poem \'n Pic. It has mellowed my day. Im on duty as Greeter (11:30 am) for the Pensioners Lunch (£5 for three Haute Cuisine Courses) in the College Training Restaurant today ! No teaching this morning ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 04:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ I wouls classify this as a 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet ~ wich is a very appropriate structure for the Subject. Thanks for posting such an inspiring Poem \'n Pic. It has mellowed my day. Im on duty as Greeter (11:30 am) for the Pensioners Lunch (£5 for three Haute Cuisine Courses) in the College Training Restaurant today ! No teaching this morning ~ AMEN
Blessings & Love ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 04:20
BIRD-TALK..
orchidee said:
You talking with the birds there Fay? Glad it\'s them singing, and not me! People think it\'s two cats fighting! heehee.
March 8th, 2019 04:07
orchidee said:
You talking with the birds there Fay? Glad it\'s them singing, and not me! People think it\'s two cats fighting! heehee.
March 8th, 2019 04:07
ARDOUR.
MendedFences27 said:
Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian behavior. I\'m sure it all happened behind closed doors. Perhaps, they were locked and he could not escape.
A lovely poem with a taste of fiery passion. I like the form of it .She goes from unveiling her powers, to a plea for satisfaction I\'m sure this made everyone\'s day. Really good stuff. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2019 22:22
MendedFences27 said:
Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian behavior. I\'m sure it all happened behind closed doors. Perhaps, they were locked and he could not escape.
A lovely poem with a taste of fiery passion. I like the form of it .She goes from unveiling her powers, to a plea for satisfaction I\'m sure this made everyone\'s day. Really good stuff. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2019 22:22
ARDOUR.
dusk arising said:
My word, what beast lurks within?
Do not go gentle through that dark window dusk, rage, rage against the .... no, hang on a minute.... it actually sounds like fun..... but what commitment is sought?
March 7th, 2019 15:16
dusk arising said:
My word, what beast lurks within?
Do not go gentle through that dark window dusk, rage, rage against the .... no, hang on a minute.... it actually sounds like fun..... but what commitment is sought?
March 7th, 2019 15:16
ARDOUR.
JaydeVictoria said:
Very seductive and captivating!
Really enjoyed this Faye
x
March 7th, 2019 07:28
JaydeVictoria said:
Very seductive and captivating!
Really enjoyed this Faye
x
March 7th, 2019 07:28
ARDOUR.
Neville said:
Pon my very word our cups they do runneth over this fine mane and true.. us lucky lusty lads are in for a treat methinks and our thirsts be quenched by lithesome buxom wenched..... forgive the ed....
Another perfectly poemed post Fay.. a real good un and a keeper for sure.. Neville x
March 7th, 2019 06:03
Neville said:
Pon my very word our cups they do runneth over this fine mane and true.. us lucky lusty lads are in for a treat methinks and our thirsts be quenched by lithesome buxom wenched..... forgive the ed....
Another perfectly poemed post Fay.. a real good un and a keeper for sure.. Neville x
March 7th, 2019 06:03
ARDOUR.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m dong an Orchi - I\'m swooning. fine seductive write dear Fay
March 7th, 2019 04:38
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m dong an Orchi - I\'m swooning. fine seductive write dear Fay
March 7th, 2019 04:38
ARDOUR.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ Some libido risng ardour. Love the Picture ~ Love the Poem and the simile to fine wine ! Thanks for sharing ~
Love through Lyrics ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please taste Angela\'s ~ NZ Lamb & Claret !
March 7th, 2019 04:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ Some libido risng ardour. Love the Picture ~ Love the Poem and the simile to fine wine ! Thanks for sharing ~
Love through Lyrics ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please taste Angela\'s ~ NZ Lamb & Claret !
March 7th, 2019 04:34
ARDOUR.
orchidee said:
Now, should I try some of this! Should I meet her? Anything to with \'ardour\', and my \'watchdog\' Fido barks, to warn me off. I\'ll put him in the shed a while, and let me hair down. What Fido don\'t see won\'t hurt him! heehee.
March 7th, 2019 03:17
orchidee said:
Now, should I try some of this! Should I meet her? Anything to with \'ardour\', and my \'watchdog\' Fido barks, to warn me off. I\'ll put him in the shed a while, and let me hair down. What Fido don\'t see won\'t hurt him! heehee.
March 7th, 2019 03:17
ONCE
Suresh said:
Those who can TRULY experience
Will never have to search again...
March 6th, 2019 17:31
Suresh said:
Those who can TRULY experience
Will never have to search again...
March 6th, 2019 17:31
RISING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : For a perfect picture and a wonderful Ode to the visual & aural Joys of a West Country Spring : O YES I remember it well. We often had a Cottage in Devon / Cornwall at Easter ! NZ is a Paradise but Poems like yours & Brians Quartet on the Seasons (especially the SNOWMAN) have made me homesick ! Thanks for sharing : My Poem tomorrow is about the taste of New Zealand Lamb with a Recipe !
Love through shared experiences ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 7:30 am (Thursday) here : just catching up on MPS !
March 6th, 2019 13:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : For a perfect picture and a wonderful Ode to the visual & aural Joys of a West Country Spring : O YES I remember it well. We often had a Cottage in Devon / Cornwall at Easter ! NZ is a Paradise but Poems like yours & Brians Quartet on the Seasons (especially the SNOWMAN) have made me homesick ! Thanks for sharing : My Poem tomorrow is about the taste of New Zealand Lamb with a Recipe !
Love through shared experiences ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its 7:30 am (Thursday) here : just catching up on MPS !
March 6th, 2019 13:22
RISING.
dusk arising said:
The wonder of springtime made glorious with your fine words here today.
Yes, the re-birth of our beloved \'taken for granted\' natural world is the most wonderful time of year. Made more rewarding when one stops to observe and think about the wonder of it all, as prompted by you today.
I\'m looking forward to that time brief time when the grasses and foliage turn everywhere into a verdant lushness before the sun begins to bleach and sap. Ho-hum!
March 6th, 2019 06:30
dusk arising said:
The wonder of springtime made glorious with your fine words here today.
Yes, the re-birth of our beloved \'taken for granted\' natural world is the most wonderful time of year. Made more rewarding when one stops to observe and think about the wonder of it all, as prompted by you today.
I\'m looking forward to that time brief time when the grasses and foliage turn everywhere into a verdant lushness before the sun begins to bleach and sap. Ho-hum!
March 6th, 2019 06:30
RISING.
JaydeVictoria said:
I love Spring! You\'ve captured the imagery perfectly :)
March 6th, 2019 06:12
JaydeVictoria said:
I love Spring! You\'ve captured the imagery perfectly :)
March 6th, 2019 06:12
RISING.
Neville said:
You just nailed Spring dear poet in the nicest of possible ways.. with a brush loaded with words and colours and scents and sounds and tastes to delight each of our senses... I have found tomorrows inspiration.... Neville
March 6th, 2019 05:34
Neville said:
You just nailed Spring dear poet in the nicest of possible ways.. with a brush loaded with words and colours and scents and sounds and tastes to delight each of our senses... I have found tomorrows inspiration.... Neville
March 6th, 2019 05:34
RISING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yet I knew I shouldn\'t have put away my long-johns just yet (ooh! lol).
March 6th, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yet I knew I shouldn\'t have put away my long-johns just yet (ooh! lol).
March 6th, 2019 02:48
INSIDE ME.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
I AM A ROCK : I AM AN ISLAND
Thanks for sharing FAY betrayal makes one
Hard as Rock and as isolated as an Island.
As Ladies we present a Soft and Gentle and
gregarious exterior : BUT : when betrayed our
inner (hard ?) core shows through and we
resist like the rest. HARD AS ROCK !
Thanks for sharing.
BRIAN will never betray me : and
I will never betray BRIAN AMEN !
Love through lyrics ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 6th, 2019 02:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
I AM A ROCK : I AM AN ISLAND
Thanks for sharing FAY betrayal makes one
Hard as Rock and as isolated as an Island.
As Ladies we present a Soft and Gentle and
gregarious exterior : BUT : when betrayed our
inner (hard ?) core shows through and we
resist like the rest. HARD AS ROCK !
Thanks for sharing.
BRIAN will never betray me : and
I will never betray BRIAN AMEN !
Love through lyrics ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 6th, 2019 02:26
INSIDE ME.
Goldfinch60 said:
The strength within us all is the foundation on which our lives are built. Good true write Fay.
March 6th, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
The strength within us all is the foundation on which our lives are built. Good true write Fay.
March 6th, 2019 00:58
INSIDE ME.
MendedFences27 said:
Life hardens us all. Better to be the rock and not the bug, Remember that gentle water flowing carved out the Grand Canyon. Sometimes we can lose the pain gently over a long time and still be strong enough. A great bit of imagery of strength of stone and the power of positive thinking.. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:15
MendedFences27 said:
Life hardens us all. Better to be the rock and not the bug, Remember that gentle water flowing carved out the Grand Canyon. Sometimes we can lose the pain gently over a long time and still be strong enough. A great bit of imagery of strength of stone and the power of positive thinking.. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:15
INSIDE ME.
Poetic Dan said:
What an ending. I can\'t help but cry, is this still my pain? I\'ll sit with this one, thank you and I truly appreciate where this may of came from. You are as we all should know a wonderful gift to the worlds vibration.
March 5th, 2019 09:02
Poetic Dan said:
What an ending. I can\'t help but cry, is this still my pain? I\'ll sit with this one, thank you and I truly appreciate where this may of came from. You are as we all should know a wonderful gift to the worlds vibration.
March 5th, 2019 09:02
INSIDE ME.
Neville said:
How perfectly pinned to this page your words do appear...
I sense old hurt and a residual ache but like some phoenix, you are rose again and stronger for it.... Neville
March 5th, 2019 06:26
Neville said:
How perfectly pinned to this page your words do appear...
I sense old hurt and a residual ache but like some phoenix, you are rose again and stronger for it.... Neville
March 5th, 2019 06:26
INSIDE ME.
dusk arising said:
Though we can be shaken to the foundations by the unexpected actions of others, such occasions can reveal to us our true mettle. That central \'me\' core which life has matured within. For a while we run in \'safe\' mode don\'t we.
But the sun still shines, the trees remind us of passing seasons, and the joy of grandchildren light our eyes. Such beauties warm our core allowing it to melt safely. But it\'s ever there.
I think your words stirred something in me today.
March 5th, 2019 04:36
dusk arising said:
Though we can be shaken to the foundations by the unexpected actions of others, such occasions can reveal to us our true mettle. That central \'me\' core which life has matured within. For a while we run in \'safe\' mode don\'t we.
But the sun still shines, the trees remind us of passing seasons, and the joy of grandchildren light our eyes. Such beauties warm our core allowing it to melt safely. But it\'s ever there.
I think your words stirred something in me today.
March 5th, 2019 04:36
INSIDE ME.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks trin for saving this piece as one of your faves. - much appreciated.
March 5th, 2019 04:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks trin for saving this piece as one of your faves. - much appreciated.
March 5th, 2019 04:15
INSIDE ME.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Rocks reminded me, that some call me \'Fossil\' - my middle name, cos I\'m very old! heehee.
March 5th, 2019 03:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Rocks reminded me, that some call me \'Fossil\' - my middle name, cos I\'m very old! heehee.
March 5th, 2019 03:02
TO THE SANDMAN
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Fay, Morpheus does elude me occasionally but normally I can sleep well but the wife needs me several times during the night so it is not always a good nights sleep.
March 5th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Fay, Morpheus does elude me occasionally but normally I can sleep well but the wife needs me several times during the night so it is not always a good nights sleep.
March 5th, 2019 01:23
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