Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
VIBRATIONS.
sylviasearcher said:
I sensed it too but could never pen it like you do Fay. Beauty. True.
March 21st, 2019 13:03
sylviasearcher said:
I sensed it too but could never pen it like you do Fay. Beauty. True.
March 21st, 2019 13:03
VIBRATIONS.
Neville said:
Its gonna take some time for my fingers to loosen up a bit so all I\'m gonna say here and now is .. how exquisitely penned these flowing words are and true.... N
March 21st, 2019 12:29
Neville said:
Its gonna take some time for my fingers to loosen up a bit so all I\'m gonna say here and now is .. how exquisitely penned these flowing words are and true.... N
March 21st, 2019 12:29
VIBRATIONS.
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such calming thoughts of peaceful rusticity - and mines a merlot.
March 21st, 2019 04:14
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such calming thoughts of peaceful rusticity - and mines a merlot.
March 21st, 2019 04:14
VIBRATIONS.
Nicholas Browning said:
The final stanza holds much truth to it, and the entire poem shows the great care you took to write it.
Wonderfully done, Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:39
Nicholas Browning said:
The final stanza holds much truth to it, and the entire poem shows the great care you took to write it.
Wonderfully done, Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:39
VIBRATIONS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is always more bearable after reading your wonderful words Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is always more bearable after reading your wonderful words Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:14
VIBRATIONS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna sit in those leafy green oceans of growing corn, but not in a Force 10 gale! lol.
March 21st, 2019 03:08
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna sit in those leafy green oceans of growing corn, but not in a Force 10 gale! lol.
March 21st, 2019 03:08
VIBRATIONS.
whisperingquill said:
You know it\'s exceptionally exquisite Ms. Fay
especially when I have to look up words.
\"Gowns of fragile filigree curled lightly\" that is smooth like silk
quenching like a Cabernet Sauvignon.
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 excellent work
March 21st, 2019 03:01
whisperingquill said:
You know it\'s exceptionally exquisite Ms. Fay
especially when I have to look up words.
\"Gowns of fragile filigree curled lightly\" that is smooth like silk
quenching like a Cabernet Sauvignon.
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 excellent work
March 21st, 2019 03:01
CLIMBING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful write Fay.
Experience cannot be taught but once learned can take us so much further in our lives.
March 21st, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful write Fay.
Experience cannot be taught but once learned can take us so much further in our lives.
March 21st, 2019 01:48
CLIMBING.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
As the expression goes...
—Been there, done that—
The end result of it all is extraordinary!
It has made me stronger, independent, and best of all experience a love deeper than ever before! The love we experienced for one another when we first met will always be there! No more doubts!
This great line truly describes how I felt at the time...
“Life in the wake of changes acts
out a merciless course”...
Thank you for sharing this outstanding write! You are truly a poetess I very much admire!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2019 19:53
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
As the expression goes...
—Been there, done that—
The end result of it all is extraordinary!
It has made me stronger, independent, and best of all experience a love deeper than ever before! The love we experienced for one another when we first met will always be there! No more doubts!
This great line truly describes how I felt at the time...
“Life in the wake of changes acts
out a merciless course”...
Thank you for sharing this outstanding write! You are truly a poetess I very much admire!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2019 19:53
CLIMBING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD NIGHT FAY : Its gone 12 noon (Thursday) here & my Clinic is 2 pm ! BETRAYAL is a big word and a denial of all that BRIAN & I stand for ! WE have been separated by 11,500 miles for Eight Months and because we have found TRUE LOVE and a bit more mature (30 & 35) the absence has made us stronger. We both wear engagement rings which helps and most KIWIS & MAORIS respect my status. A few have asked me for a date but I have always refused ! I either go out with RUTH or in a Group and I know BRIAN would never be unfaithful ~ AMEN
Each of the verses in your Perfect Poem expresses a betrayal of TRUST. I know Couples who have faced \"Bitter Betrayal by their Partner : some have survived : but others have ended the relationship and ended up SADDER but WISER Betrayal is something People have to climb out of or PERISH ! Brian and I keep in regular touch and lots of the Poems we post are COLLABORATIONS. We never do (and never will !) take each other for granted. Thanks for posting this poem as a salutary wraning to any would-be BETRAYERS !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 20th, 2019 18:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD NIGHT FAY : Its gone 12 noon (Thursday) here & my Clinic is 2 pm ! BETRAYAL is a big word and a denial of all that BRIAN & I stand for ! WE have been separated by 11,500 miles for Eight Months and because we have found TRUE LOVE and a bit more mature (30 & 35) the absence has made us stronger. We both wear engagement rings which helps and most KIWIS & MAORIS respect my status. A few have asked me for a date but I have always refused ! I either go out with RUTH or in a Group and I know BRIAN would never be unfaithful ~ AMEN
Each of the verses in your Perfect Poem expresses a betrayal of TRUST. I know Couples who have faced \"Bitter Betrayal by their Partner : some have survived : but others have ended the relationship and ended up SADDER but WISER Betrayal is something People have to climb out of or PERISH ! Brian and I keep in regular touch and lots of the Poems we post are COLLABORATIONS. We never do (and never will !) take each other for granted. Thanks for posting this poem as a salutary wraning to any would-be BETRAYERS !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 20th, 2019 18:58
CLIMBING.
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this very much. A very descriptive read on the subject.
Nicely written.
Best regards!
March 20th, 2019 14:03
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this very much. A very descriptive read on the subject.
Nicely written.
Best regards!
March 20th, 2019 14:03
CLIMBING.
MendedFences27 said:
A lost love through betrayal is more injurious than a loss, and your poem paints the repercussions exactly. Fighting \"on safer ground\" with \"a taste for forgiveness\" is the best result. Keep \"climbing\" - Phil A.
March 20th, 2019 13:38
MendedFences27 said:
A lost love through betrayal is more injurious than a loss, and your poem paints the repercussions exactly. Fighting \"on safer ground\" with \"a taste for forgiveness\" is the best result. Keep \"climbing\" - Phil A.
March 20th, 2019 13:38
CLIMBING.
Poetic Dan said:
This was so good in so many ways is so hard to gain trust again, I had this thought yesterday and can\'t wait to share with you.
Your ending is so powerful, shaken but on solid ground with wiser hands.
Thank you for this and the quote with a little cry ;)
March 20th, 2019 04:26
Poetic Dan said:
This was so good in so many ways is so hard to gain trust again, I had this thought yesterday and can\'t wait to share with you.
Your ending is so powerful, shaken but on solid ground with wiser hands.
Thank you for this and the quote with a little cry ;)
March 20th, 2019 04:26
WAVERING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I am glad it is from your imagination and not your reality.
March 19th, 2019 16:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I am glad it is from your imagination and not your reality.
March 19th, 2019 16:11
WAVERING.
MendedFences27 said:
Billions of people in the world, each with their own idea of reality. It does not matter what one thinks as long as it doesn\'t injure another.We can all be as we imagine ourselves.We can all think freely. We can create as we wish. Just do not step on anyone,s toes Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 19th, 2019 15:52
MendedFences27 said:
Billions of people in the world, each with their own idea of reality. It does not matter what one thinks as long as it doesn\'t injure another.We can all be as we imagine ourselves.We can all think freely. We can create as we wish. Just do not step on anyone,s toes Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 19th, 2019 15:52
WAVERING.
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, yes. Will trust allow us to see things for what they truly are? To have faith in ourselves is a difficult thing. You have said well what you meant, and here it rings true.
Nicely done, Fay.
March 19th, 2019 14:09
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, yes. Will trust allow us to see things for what they truly are? To have faith in ourselves is a difficult thing. You have said well what you meant, and here it rings true.
Nicely done, Fay.
March 19th, 2019 14:09
WAVERING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES our thoughts do waver and for me (BRIAN) especially when I am on holiday !
However when I am at work all my Lectures and Practical Classes are programmed (syllabus) and prepared well in advance ! HOWEVER at weekends ~ and on Holiday (especially abroad) I can let my mind wander & waver as described in your elegant Poem ! I hope to be retired in 2050 ~ and then my MIND can waver & wander all day ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace of Mind
BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 19th, 2019 12:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES our thoughts do waver and for me (BRIAN) especially when I am on holiday !
However when I am at work all my Lectures and Practical Classes are programmed (syllabus) and prepared well in advance ! HOWEVER at weekends ~ and on Holiday (especially abroad) I can let my mind wander & waver as described in your elegant Poem ! I hope to be retired in 2050 ~ and then my MIND can waver & wander all day ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace of Mind
BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 19th, 2019 12:15
WAVERING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We suffer ourselves too:\' A double-minded man (or person) is unstable in all their ways\' says James in New Testament. We suffer through not making up our minds: \'Shall I; Shan\'t I?\' then may miss opportunities if we take the wrong choice.
March 19th, 2019 03:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We suffer ourselves too:\' A double-minded man (or person) is unstable in all their ways\' says James in New Testament. We suffer through not making up our minds: \'Shall I; Shan\'t I?\' then may miss opportunities if we take the wrong choice.
March 19th, 2019 03:55
BEGINNINGS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ All seasons are poetical but SPRING stirs the MUSE more than the the others ~ Nature wakens from Her Winter hibernation and bursts into unstoppable life !
Verse 1. Blue skies & Beauty from dryness
V 2. Flowers begin to reclothe woodland
V 3. The snowdrops reappear SPRING has SPRUNG
V 4. Springs beginning has to be seen to be believed
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 18th, 2019 16:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ All seasons are poetical but SPRING stirs the MUSE more than the the others ~ Nature wakens from Her Winter hibernation and bursts into unstoppable life !
Verse 1. Blue skies & Beauty from dryness
V 2. Flowers begin to reclothe woodland
V 3. The snowdrops reappear SPRING has SPRUNG
V 4. Springs beginning has to be seen to be believed
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 18th, 2019 16:43
BEGINNINGS.
Jo March said:
I really enjoyed this poem! It\'s so beautiful. Yes, spring definitely marks a new beginning for us. I think we just have to look up at the \"sapphire-blue roof\" more often! Thank you for the poem!
March 18th, 2019 15:37
Jo March said:
I really enjoyed this poem! It\'s so beautiful. Yes, spring definitely marks a new beginning for us. I think we just have to look up at the \"sapphire-blue roof\" more often! Thank you for the poem!
March 18th, 2019 15:37
BEGINNINGS.
Michael Edwards said:
Great joyloads dear Fay - a beautiful morning so full of promise.r
March 18th, 2019 07:22
Michael Edwards said:
Great joyloads dear Fay - a beautiful morning so full of promise.r
March 18th, 2019 07:22
BEGINNINGS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
A church may seem a bit ghoulish. Being Protestant, one highlight of their year is Archbishop Thomas Cranmer\'s martyrdom on 21st March each year. Erm, a nice start to Spring. Doh!
Well, hopefully they don\'t rub their hands in glee, and say \'Oh goody!\'
March 18th, 2019 07:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
A church may seem a bit ghoulish. Being Protestant, one highlight of their year is Archbishop Thomas Cranmer\'s martyrdom on 21st March each year. Erm, a nice start to Spring. Doh!
Well, hopefully they don\'t rub their hands in glee, and say \'Oh goody!\'
March 18th, 2019 07:21
BEGINNINGS.
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this quite a bit.
What a wonderful roller coaster through the dawning of a new season, and new paths that we may take as people.
The description usage is superb.
Lovely write! Thank you for sharing.
March 18th, 2019 06:02
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this quite a bit.
What a wonderful roller coaster through the dawning of a new season, and new paths that we may take as people.
The description usage is superb.
Lovely write! Thank you for sharing.
March 18th, 2019 06:02
AIR.
Nicholas Browning said:
From physics to personification this is a bundle of gale description! Quite nice.
March 15th, 2019 16:00
Nicholas Browning said:
From physics to personification this is a bundle of gale description! Quite nice.
March 15th, 2019 16:00
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