Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
E-MAIL TO GOD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful Bitter - Sweet poem. You have a Poets mind and in this Poem you have perfectly encapsulted ~ the MIND ~ Spelling and Spiritually of young child ~ awesome ! The child is concerned about all the little things that would ameliorate her MUMS stay in Hospital. Extra pillas ~ hair combed genty ~ frilly nighty ~ someone to read to \'er and a FREND ~ AMEN If only we could PRAY that intelligently and that direct ! The WORLD would be a much better place ~ AMEN ! Love through Poetry !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 24th, 2018 10:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful Bitter - Sweet poem. You have a Poets mind and in this Poem you have perfectly encapsulted ~ the MIND ~ Spelling and Spiritually of young child ~ awesome ! The child is concerned about all the little things that would ameliorate her MUMS stay in Hospital. Extra pillas ~ hair combed genty ~ frilly nighty ~ someone to read to \'er and a FREND ~ AMEN If only we could PRAY that intelligently and that direct ! The WORLD would be a much better place ~ AMEN ! Love through Poetry !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 24th, 2018 10:50
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This is absolutely a beautiful but somewhat sad poem that pulls at my heartstrings! As I read it, I was vividly reminded of the time my grandfather was ill and the end was near! I wished and hoped with all my might that he would be okay because they told me that God would take care of him! I was barely four years old at the time of his passing!
Thank you for this share!
~Laura~
December 24th, 2018 10:09
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This is absolutely a beautiful but somewhat sad poem that pulls at my heartstrings! As I read it, I was vividly reminded of the time my grandfather was ill and the end was near! I wished and hoped with all my might that he would be okay because they told me that God would take care of him! I was barely four years old at the time of his passing!
Thank you for this share!
~Laura~
December 24th, 2018 10:09
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Michael Edwards said:
What a delightful yet sad read - I so much enjoyed it and would never have put your name to it Fay but so glade you did write it. May I wish you all the very best and here\'s to another 12 months of great poetry.
December 24th, 2018 10:01
Michael Edwards said:
What a delightful yet sad read - I so much enjoyed it and would never have put your name to it Fay but so glade you did write it. May I wish you all the very best and here\'s to another 12 months of great poetry.
December 24th, 2018 10:01
SPACES.
Neville said:
Blessed be those spaces.. the bigger the better, but not always,
sometimes.. tis the closeness of them that is most important.. a splendid poem Fay.. I\'m quite partial to a bit o Kahil Gibran too x
December 23rd, 2018 14:07
Neville said:
Blessed be those spaces.. the bigger the better, but not always,
sometimes.. tis the closeness of them that is most important.. a splendid poem Fay.. I\'m quite partial to a bit o Kahil Gibran too x
December 23rd, 2018 14:07
SECRET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Death doth hide but not divide
It is as though the rose
That blossomed on our Garden Wall
Has bloomed upon the Other Side !
This is a verse we have used at Funerals & on gravestones. Reading between the lines of your second verse. My Boyfriends often sent me 12 rosebuds (@ Valentine etc) and they opened as our love developed ! Your poem is very elegant in its presentation : and expresive in its prose. Thanks again for a precious & personal Poem.
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 21st, 2018 17:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Death doth hide but not divide
It is as though the rose
That blossomed on our Garden Wall
Has bloomed upon the Other Side !
This is a verse we have used at Funerals & on gravestones. Reading between the lines of your second verse. My Boyfriends often sent me 12 rosebuds (@ Valentine etc) and they opened as our love developed ! Your poem is very elegant in its presentation : and expresive in its prose. Thanks again for a precious & personal Poem.
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 21st, 2018 17:20
SECRET
Michael Edwards said:
As beautifully written as the rose itself- superb dear Fay
December 21st, 2018 15:14
Michael Edwards said:
As beautifully written as the rose itself- superb dear Fay
December 21st, 2018 15:14
ESSENTIALS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Fay celebrating the wonder and beauty of nature.
December 20th, 2018 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Fay celebrating the wonder and beauty of nature.
December 20th, 2018 01:31
ESSENTIALS.
Michael Edwards said:
Like a chefs review of the store cupboard - great subject - great write.
December 19th, 2018 15:01
Michael Edwards said:
Like a chefs review of the store cupboard - great subject - great write.
December 19th, 2018 15:01
ESSENTIALS.
kevin browne said:
Oh, such a wonderful picture you have painted from natures enthusiastic beauty. This captured the cold rain and the warmth of our planet, More is needed in such work as this.
December 19th, 2018 11:05
kevin browne said:
Oh, such a wonderful picture you have painted from natures enthusiastic beauty. This captured the cold rain and the warmth of our planet, More is needed in such work as this.
December 19th, 2018 11:05
PACE.
Michael Edwards said:
It flows with your powers of descriptive verse.
December 18th, 2018 09:19
Michael Edwards said:
It flows with your powers of descriptive verse.
December 18th, 2018 09:19
PACE.
Neville said:
these words read deliciously.. not only that.. they look good pinned to this page.. bravo.... N :)
December 18th, 2018 07:42
Neville said:
these words read deliciously.. not only that.. they look good pinned to this page.. bravo.... N :)
December 18th, 2018 07:42
PACE.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words flow as does that waterfall. A relatable message your poem does express!
So true...
all it takes is “one mad moment”...
“In one mad moment
fosakes granite’s grasping
claws and reels
forward at thunderous pace”...
...“once in motion water takes
the path of control.”
When I saw the title “Pace”, I immediately thought of PEACE. Pace in Italian means peace. As I read the poem, I sensed peace if we’re given enough space to breathe freely!
~Laura~
December 18th, 2018 07:06
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words flow as does that waterfall. A relatable message your poem does express!
So true...
all it takes is “one mad moment”...
“In one mad moment
fosakes granite’s grasping
claws and reels
forward at thunderous pace”...
...“once in motion water takes
the path of control.”
When I saw the title “Pace”, I immediately thought of PEACE. Pace in Italian means peace. As I read the poem, I sensed peace if we’re given enough space to breathe freely!
~Laura~
December 18th, 2018 07:06
DANGER.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for caring FAY ~ COAL is an awesome fuel and Chemical feedstock. It was Coal that energised the Industrial Revolution and made Train travel possible ! Today we take these facilities for granted and pay scant attention to those who mine the coal in difficult and dangerous circumstances. the H & S has improved ! Today there are fewer Coal Miner and fewer fatalities per 10,000 miners. In the USA in 2017 there were 84,000 miners and only 15 fatalities (2 in 10,000) ~ In 1917 there were 721,000 miners and 2228 fatalities (30 in 10,000) !
Yours as always BRIAN
December 17th, 2018 18:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for caring FAY ~ COAL is an awesome fuel and Chemical feedstock. It was Coal that energised the Industrial Revolution and made Train travel possible ! Today we take these facilities for granted and pay scant attention to those who mine the coal in difficult and dangerous circumstances. the H & S has improved ! Today there are fewer Coal Miner and fewer fatalities per 10,000 miners. In the USA in 2017 there were 84,000 miners and only 15 fatalities (2 in 10,000) ~ In 1917 there were 721,000 miners and 2228 fatalities (30 in 10,000) !
Yours as always BRIAN
December 17th, 2018 18:18
WORDS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Someone said \"A Poem is just words : strung together : often without rhyme or reason !\" BUT through MPS (and gifted poets like yourself) I am learning they are much more that that. They are expressions of the Hearts : Minds : Souls & Spirits of Real People and should be treated with TLC. Brian likes to comment on NEW POETS : Ialways feel sad if a POEM has ZERO comments ! JUST WORDS ? NO ! Poems do need to be Used : Never abused : Perused and Cherished & kept forever ! Thanks for sharing such lovey poetic thoughts :
LOVE ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 14th, 2018 04:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Someone said \"A Poem is just words : strung together : often without rhyme or reason !\" BUT through MPS (and gifted poets like yourself) I am learning they are much more that that. They are expressions of the Hearts : Minds : Souls & Spirits of Real People and should be treated with TLC. Brian likes to comment on NEW POETS : Ialways feel sad if a POEM has ZERO comments ! JUST WORDS ? NO ! Poems do need to be Used : Never abused : Perused and Cherished & kept forever ! Thanks for sharing such lovey poetic thoughts :
LOVE ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 14th, 2018 04:30
WORDS.
Neville said:
words, or more specifically, language is what sets us most apart from any other known life form... never met a penguin poet yet have ya..... please excuse my silliness.. I don\'t know what just came over me.. I agree, you cant beat those muse inspired words... N
December 14th, 2018 03:13
Neville said:
words, or more specifically, language is what sets us most apart from any other known life form... never met a penguin poet yet have ya..... please excuse my silliness.. I don\'t know what just came over me.. I agree, you cant beat those muse inspired words... N
December 14th, 2018 03:13
SEEING THROUGH.
Nicholas Browning said:
A lot of this plays a large part in a view of psychology to me. The art of seeing through another is a tricky one. I agree with the message of not judging people. You never really know who someone else is of course, but we all know that no one is perfect - So how could we judge at all?
Nicely written.
December 13th, 2018 15:32
Nicholas Browning said:
A lot of this plays a large part in a view of psychology to me. The art of seeing through another is a tricky one. I agree with the message of not judging people. You never really know who someone else is of course, but we all know that no one is perfect - So how could we judge at all?
Nicely written.
December 13th, 2018 15:32
LOVE BITES.
Neville said:
are you saying once bitten, forever smitten...
a fun take on the serious nature of what is oft called love..
or the port wine contusions inflicted during moments of heated adolescent courtship....
December 13th, 2018 14:41
Neville said:
are you saying once bitten, forever smitten...
a fun take on the serious nature of what is oft called love..
or the port wine contusions inflicted during moments of heated adolescent courtship....
December 13th, 2018 14:41
SEEING THROUGH.
Netashi said:
Never seize to amaze me with your beautifully written poems. Keep up the work Fay my dearest friend and poet.
-Theta
December 13th, 2018 13:04
Netashi said:
Never seize to amaze me with your beautifully written poems. Keep up the work Fay my dearest friend and poet.
-Theta
December 13th, 2018 13:04
SEEING THROUGH.
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again - it was never too long for me.
December 13th, 2018 11:50
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again - it was never too long for me.
December 13th, 2018 11:50
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