Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WHY ?
sylviasearcher said:
Fay you have composed this story so well. I have visions of a ghost like heroine wandering on the moors seeking her dream that never could be.
But I\'m a silly romantic who lives a stone\'s throw from the bronte\'s playground.
Thanks for your heartfelt write
January 17th, 2019 04:13
sylviasearcher said:
Fay you have composed this story so well. I have visions of a ghost like heroine wandering on the moors seeking her dream that never could be.
But I\'m a silly romantic who lives a stone\'s throw from the bronte\'s playground.
Thanks for your heartfelt write
January 17th, 2019 04:13
WHY ?
Michael Edwards said:
This reads perfectly - just flows and tells such a poignant story. This is what I try (with emphasis on try) to achieve with many of my more serious writings.
January 17th, 2019 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
This reads perfectly - just flows and tells such a poignant story. This is what I try (with emphasis on try) to achieve with many of my more serious writings.
January 17th, 2019 04:04
TAKE WING.
dusk arising said:
Positivity reigns here, as it does with me.
An uplifting read.
January 16th, 2019 14:42
dusk arising said:
Positivity reigns here, as it does with me.
An uplifting read.
January 16th, 2019 14:42
TAKE WING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : ANGELA here its 8 am here ! Thanks for your Picture & Poem. We love the MESSAGE of your Poem : To forget past Failures and aim a bit lower : and to forget revenge & regret and to learn FORGIVENESS ~ AMEN.
Pick edible Love-seed and reach for Contentment & Peace : LOVE IT !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Love through Poetry : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 16th, 2019 14:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : ANGELA here its 8 am here ! Thanks for your Picture & Poem. We love the MESSAGE of your Poem : To forget past Failures and aim a bit lower : and to forget revenge & regret and to learn FORGIVENESS ~ AMEN.
Pick edible Love-seed and reach for Contentment & Peace : LOVE IT !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Love through Poetry : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 16th, 2019 14:01
TAKE WING.
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to be a buzzard and just hang in the wind. Beautiful write Fay.
January 16th, 2019 13:35
Goldfinch60 said:
I want to be a buzzard and just hang in the wind. Beautiful write Fay.
January 16th, 2019 13:35
TAKE WING.
Netashi said:
Beautiful words indeed written again by you Fay. Keep up the amazing work.
-T
January 16th, 2019 13:06
Netashi said:
Beautiful words indeed written again by you Fay. Keep up the amazing work.
-T
January 16th, 2019 13:06
TAKE WING.
Michael Edwards said:
Interesting construction - fine work and work it does.
January 16th, 2019 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Interesting construction - fine work and work it does.
January 16th, 2019 09:11
TAKE WING.
Neville said:
another uplifting little bit of magic here.... delightful our Fay and true... N
January 16th, 2019 07:04
Neville said:
another uplifting little bit of magic here.... delightful our Fay and true... N
January 16th, 2019 07:04
PRECOCIOUS..
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the wonder of the way air plays with us can be sublime as are your words Fay.
January 16th, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the wonder of the way air plays with us can be sublime as are your words Fay.
January 16th, 2019 01:13
PRECOCIOUS..
Michael Edwards said:
Your creative mind works on a plane of its own - super poetry.
January 15th, 2019 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
Your creative mind works on a plane of its own - super poetry.
January 15th, 2019 11:44
PRECOCIOUS..
Neville said:
probably one of the least precocious poems I\'ve read for hours.. and I been reading Blood Axe Poems of the year circa 2003 since 08.00hrs this very mane... nice one Fay
January 15th, 2019 07:02
Neville said:
probably one of the least precocious poems I\'ve read for hours.. and I been reading Blood Axe Poems of the year circa 2003 since 08.00hrs this very mane... nice one Fay
January 15th, 2019 07:02
PRECOCIOUS..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! ANGELA here its 11pm ! Love the picture : I love all the pictures of Powerful Ladies : This one could be captioned PHYSIOTERRORIST : We exercise great power over our CLIENTS ! I always tell them (If they question my exercise & diet regime !) NO GAIN WITHOUT PAIN.
Love your poem too ! Your Lady has freedom of her BODY MIND & SPIRIT : She moves with Grace & Energy in all SEASONS ! Thanks for writing in Praise of Women : All DIVAS are PRECOCIOUS ! Thanks for sharing.
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check HAPPINESS : Brians Love Poem to ME : Thanks
January 15th, 2019 05:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ! ANGELA here its 11pm ! Love the picture : I love all the pictures of Powerful Ladies : This one could be captioned PHYSIOTERRORIST : We exercise great power over our CLIENTS ! I always tell them (If they question my exercise & diet regime !) NO GAIN WITHOUT PAIN.
Love your poem too ! Your Lady has freedom of her BODY MIND & SPIRIT : She moves with Grace & Energy in all SEASONS ! Thanks for writing in Praise of Women : All DIVAS are PRECOCIOUS ! Thanks for sharing.
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check HAPPINESS : Brians Love Poem to ME : Thanks
January 15th, 2019 05:36
MOVES.
dusk arising said:
Time... what was that which was our yesterdays? Here and now we are older, bolder, wiser and so much more able to realise the beautiful thing which falling in love brings to us.
Beautiful writing Fay.
January 14th, 2019 18:47
dusk arising said:
Time... what was that which was our yesterdays? Here and now we are older, bolder, wiser and so much more able to realise the beautiful thing which falling in love brings to us.
Beautiful writing Fay.
January 14th, 2019 18:47
MOVES.
Neville said:
that\'s reality for ya.. a delightful poem Fay... truly
January 14th, 2019 05:55
Neville said:
that\'s reality for ya.. a delightful poem Fay... truly
January 14th, 2019 05:55
MOVES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Ive missed you ! Love all the nuances in this delightful Love Picture and Love Poem. It mirrors the Love Sonnet I have posted for Brian today ! Love through poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 14th, 2019 05:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : Ive missed you ! Love all the nuances in this delightful Love Picture and Love Poem. It mirrors the Love Sonnet I have posted for Brian today ! Love through poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 14th, 2019 05:40
MELT-DOWN
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay and so true, love can always bring warmth to the body and soul.
January 12th, 2019 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay and so true, love can always bring warmth to the body and soul.
January 12th, 2019 01:01
MELT-DOWN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : Its 10am Saturday here : sailing this afternoon ! Love the picture and the ODE of LOVE for frozen LOVELESSNESS ! To a flame defying FROSTINESS ! Verse two suggests Love does slow down : but sufficient heat remains to prevent severe heart chill ! Brian & I are still in the first flush of LOVE which we endeavour to keep hot by phone & skype and unpublished LOVE POEMS !
Blessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 11th, 2019 16:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY : Its 10am Saturday here : sailing this afternoon ! Love the picture and the ODE of LOVE for frozen LOVELESSNESS ! To a flame defying FROSTINESS ! Verse two suggests Love does slow down : but sufficient heat remains to prevent severe heart chill ! Brian & I are still in the first flush of LOVE which we endeavour to keep hot by phone & skype and unpublished LOVE POEMS !
Blessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 11th, 2019 16:12
MELT-DOWN
Lorna said:
Very hopeful and beautiful sentiments Fay.............
January 11th, 2019 08:59
Lorna said:
Very hopeful and beautiful sentiments Fay.............
January 11th, 2019 08:59
MELT-DOWN
Neville said:
I have held the notion for longer than I care to mention that love does both carry and convey with it an optimum temperature .... warm regards and congratulations to both you and your pen.... N
January 11th, 2019 06:36
Neville said:
I have held the notion for longer than I care to mention that love does both carry and convey with it an optimum temperature .... warm regards and congratulations to both you and your pen.... N
January 11th, 2019 06:36
LAMENT.
Michael Edwards said:
Nor waves of laughter sweep the shore - great write Fay.
January 10th, 2019 12:41
Michael Edwards said:
Nor waves of laughter sweep the shore - great write Fay.
January 10th, 2019 12:41
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