Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



PRECOCIOUS..
orchidee said:

A fine write again Fay.

January 15th, 2019 06:45

PRECOCIOUS..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING FAY ! ANGELA here its 11pm ! Love the picture : I love all the pictures of Powerful Ladies : This one could be captioned PHYSIOTERRORIST : We exercise great power over our CLIENTS ! I always tell them (If they question my exercise & diet regime !) NO GAIN WITHOUT PAIN.
Love your poem too ! Your Lady has freedom of her BODY MIND & SPIRIT : She moves with Grace & Energy in all SEASONS ! Thanks for writing in Praise of Women : All DIVAS are PRECOCIOUS ! Thanks for sharing.
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check HAPPINESS : Brians Love Poem to ME : Thanks

January 15th, 2019 05:36

MOVES.
psychofemale said:

this was lovely :) i can soon relate ;)

January 14th, 2019 21:45

MOVES.
dusk arising said:

Time... what was that which was our yesterdays? Here and now we are older, bolder, wiser and so much more able to realise the beautiful thing which falling in love brings to us.
Beautiful writing Fay.

January 14th, 2019 18:47

MOVES.
whisperingquill said:

Purely mesmerizing

January 14th, 2019 12:20

MOVES.
Michael Edwards said:

Great work Fay

January 14th, 2019 09:14

MOVES.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

January 14th, 2019 08:18

MOVES.
Neville said:

that\'s reality for ya.. a delightful poem Fay... truly

January 14th, 2019 05:55

MOVES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks FAY : Ive missed you ! Love all the nuances in this delightful Love Picture and Love Poem. It mirrors the Love Sonnet I have posted for Brian today ! Love through poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

January 14th, 2019 05:40

MELT-DOWN
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay and so true, love can always bring warmth to the body and soul.

January 12th, 2019 01:01

MELT-DOWN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing FAY : Its 10am Saturday here : sailing this afternoon ! Love the picture and the ODE of LOVE for frozen LOVELESSNESS ! To a flame defying FROSTINESS ! Verse two suggests Love does slow down : but sufficient heat remains to prevent severe heart chill ! Brian & I are still in the first flush of LOVE which we endeavour to keep hot by phone & skype and unpublished LOVE POEMS !
Blessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

January 11th, 2019 16:12

MELT-DOWN
Lorna said:

Very hopeful and beautiful sentiments Fay.............

January 11th, 2019 08:59

MELT-DOWN
Neville said:

I have held the notion for longer than I care to mention that love does both carry and convey with it an optimum temperature .... warm regards and congratulations to both you and your pen.... N

January 11th, 2019 06:36

MELT-DOWN
orchidee said:

A lovely write Fay.

January 11th, 2019 04:00

LAMENT.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive write Fay, so sad.

January 11th, 2019 01:18

LAMENT.
Michael Edwards said:

Nor waves of laughter sweep the shore - great write Fay.

January 10th, 2019 12:41

LAMENT.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

January 10th, 2019 07:43

LAMENT.
Neville said:

this is indeed a lament... no other title would come close.... even I ache having read these fine words...

January 10th, 2019 04:55

CAPTURED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

LOVE THE PHOTO FAY : Im a real Windmill freak ! : ANGELA. Thanks for another elegant Poem : love the shape : like the bases of a WINDMILLS ! We cant see the WIND but we feel its Power as wave power & coastal erosion (Which is one of Brians Research Projects) and Forest Fires are fanned by the WIND ! BUT like every Natural Force the wind can be captured and harnessed to produce Electricity (The MAORIS hate Wind Turbines but I love their SF Elegance !). Wind when harnessed loses its destructive nature and becomes constructive ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing :
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡

January 8th, 2019 14:33

CAPTURED.
Michael Edwards said:

I know all about captured wind lol - great piece Fay.

January 8th, 2019 11:53

CAPTURED.
orchidee said:

That\'s a lot of wind you get near those coasts Fay. More than we get inland. \'That\'s a lot of weather\' as they say!

January 8th, 2019 08:53

YOUR SONG.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Love the picture of ME just breathing in NATURE : ANGELA (past 11 pm Tuesday !) Im catching up on yesterdays poem which i found very apposite ! Love the last line of each verse in your nstalgic ode ! REMEMBER The Key : The Secret : The Text : The Spell RING The Changes and Do I really merit praise ? I hav experienced much in the last 30 Years (as an ALCHEMIST !) and it makes me what I am TODAY ! An Independent Young Woman : IN LOVE ! In New Zealand they live closer to Nature & closer to GOD : especially the MAORI and each Season here I am remembering the PAST and also rediscovering myslf and my potential. Being a Physio I am interacting with the KIWIS & MAORIS : HANDS ON : a great priviledge !
Thanks for caring and sharing
LOVE in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

January 8th, 2019 05:46

YOUR SONG.
psychofemale said:

Nicely done :)

January 7th, 2019 13:19

YOUR SONG.
Michael Edwards said:

Particularly enjoyed the construction in this fine work Fay.

January 7th, 2019 11:38

YOUR SONG.
orchidee said:

A fine write again Fay.

January 7th, 2019 04:01

YOUR SONG.
Goldfinch60 said:

Your Alchemy has worked once more Fay and turned your words into Gold.

January 7th, 2019 03:59

INVASION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FAY ~ Powerful Picture ~ Powerful Poem ~ Powerful Seas. Your Poem rang a bell with me as I have posted poems on Coastal Erosion with dramatic pictures from Hemsby Norfolk of houses fallen & falling into the sea. They are uninsurable and people lose everything ! I have visited these sites and it is heart-breaking. Global warming is the cause for three reasons: 1. The ice caps are melting causing sea level rise 2. Higher ocean temperature causes more intense storms 3. Water expand when it is heated and it can only get worse . The rise in temperature (Greenhouse Effect) is due to rise in atmossperic CO2 from HUMAN SOURSES ! We are ALL responsible ! Thanks for caring ~
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

January 2nd, 2019 19:33

INVASION.
Goldfinch60 said:

The sea is so powerful as are your words Fay.

January 2nd, 2019 16:03

INVASION.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A great write that speaks to the ferocity at which energy is released by these weather-related natural occurrences. I loved it. :-)

January 2nd, 2019 12:34

INVASION.
Michael Edwards said:

Wreaks of oceans fury - fine work Fay.

January 2nd, 2019 11:04



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