Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
HOPING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A PICTURE paints a thousand words !
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES buds are the harbingers of Spring ~ but in Essex we haven\'t had Winter yet ! Thanks for sharing ~
Yours as always BRIAN
Please check TO A MOUSE ~ Thanks B & A 🧡
January 23rd, 2019 14:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A PICTURE paints a thousand words !
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES buds are the harbingers of Spring ~ but in Essex we haven\'t had Winter yet ! Thanks for sharing ~
Yours as always BRIAN
Please check TO A MOUSE ~ Thanks B & A 🧡
January 23rd, 2019 14:13
HOPING.
Netashi said:
Hoping is hopefully working, as always your words are amazing. Keep up the stellar work.
- T
January 23rd, 2019 13:51
Netashi said:
Hoping is hopefully working, as always your words are amazing. Keep up the stellar work.
- T
January 23rd, 2019 13:51
HOPING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. yes, some snowdrops appeared really early, it seems. We can keep looking for buds and greenery to appear - signs of Spring.
January 23rd, 2019 05:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. yes, some snowdrops appeared really early, it seems. We can keep looking for buds and greenery to appear - signs of Spring.
January 23rd, 2019 05:46
HOPING.
Neville said:
brevitas sublimas, when less is more than.. an exquisite little gem Fay and true... roll on spring eh
January 23rd, 2019 05:20
Neville said:
brevitas sublimas, when less is more than.. an exquisite little gem Fay and true... roll on spring eh
January 23rd, 2019 05:20
LOVESCAPE.
Michael Edwards said:
All your works are gems - this is a diamond.
January 22nd, 2019 14:50
Michael Edwards said:
All your works are gems - this is a diamond.
January 22nd, 2019 14:50
LOVESCAPE.
Neville said:
This is most definitely a keeper, if ever there was... Whoever requested a re-post of these more than fine words... please forward me your details and I shall buy you a pint..... Neville
January 22nd, 2019 08:07
Neville said:
This is most definitely a keeper, if ever there was... Whoever requested a re-post of these more than fine words... please forward me your details and I shall buy you a pint..... Neville
January 22nd, 2019 08:07
LOVESCAPE.
kevin browne said:
you appear to have a superb ethic about the dimensions in which poets and people can only dream about. Your involvement to encapsulate a meaning towards the lovescape is thrilling to say the least. I have to remember and learn from this beautifully poem. Amazingly done.
January 22nd, 2019 08:02
kevin browne said:
you appear to have a superb ethic about the dimensions in which poets and people can only dream about. Your involvement to encapsulate a meaning towards the lovescape is thrilling to say the least. I have to remember and learn from this beautifully poem. Amazingly done.
January 22nd, 2019 08:02
EARLYNESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ Thanks for an evocative picture and title for a perfect poem ! It suggests (V 1.) that there is a uniqueness as each Dawn unfolds ! In V 2. We listen to Natures morning hum as her every aspect bursts forth in to life of a New Day ! V 3. turns Anthropocene as WE smile as WE breath the cleansed Air and quaff freshly squeezed juice and enjoy the sunlight that dawn brings to both West (Cornwall) & East (Essex) ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN ! It happens here too FAY (although its 11 pm here) every day ! Loved your Poem & Picture (Very N Z in January !) : Blessings & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 22nd, 2019 05:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ Thanks for an evocative picture and title for a perfect poem ! It suggests (V 1.) that there is a uniqueness as each Dawn unfolds ! In V 2. We listen to Natures morning hum as her every aspect bursts forth in to life of a New Day ! V 3. turns Anthropocene as WE smile as WE breath the cleansed Air and quaff freshly squeezed juice and enjoy the sunlight that dawn brings to both West (Cornwall) & East (Essex) ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN ! It happens here too FAY (although its 11 pm here) every day ! Loved your Poem & Picture (Very N Z in January !) : Blessings & Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 22nd, 2019 05:16
EARLYNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, the early mornings are so wonderful.
January 21st, 2019 14:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, the early mornings are so wonderful.
January 21st, 2019 14:45
EARLYNESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You seeing those mornings dawning a little more now? Getting lighter a couple of minutes more each day. But if dark cloudy mornings, it may take longer to get light, so we\'re not \'winning\' then. Doh!
January 21st, 2019 04:18
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. You seeing those mornings dawning a little more now? Getting lighter a couple of minutes more each day. But if dark cloudy mornings, it may take longer to get light, so we\'re not \'winning\' then. Doh!
January 21st, 2019 04:18
HUSBANDRY.
The Retired Bloke said:
I have never been anywhere near a dairy in my life. However your poem painted such a picture that I felt that I had!
January 18th, 2019 16:16
The Retired Bloke said:
I have never been anywhere near a dairy in my life. However your poem painted such a picture that I felt that I had!
January 18th, 2019 16:16
HUSBANDRY.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
LOVE THE Picture & Poem FAY : Thanks for caring ! I always feel Milk Maids would make good Physios : gentle touch & a real empathy with their Bovine Clients ! The Cows move into the Miking Parlour knowing the the Milk Maid wil enjoy the proces of milking and reducing the pressure of latation !
A Biohemical Mirxcle has taken place ! A Brown Cow eating Green Grass has converted it into White Milk & Cream for Cornish Cream Teas ~ AMEN !
Just like HUMANS all Cows respond to kindness & gentleness and it is reflected in the YIELD ! Contented Cows produce Good Milk !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 18th, 2019 15:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
LOVE THE Picture & Poem FAY : Thanks for caring ! I always feel Milk Maids would make good Physios : gentle touch & a real empathy with their Bovine Clients ! The Cows move into the Miking Parlour knowing the the Milk Maid wil enjoy the proces of milking and reducing the pressure of latation !
A Biohemical Mirxcle has taken place ! A Brown Cow eating Green Grass has converted it into White Milk & Cream for Cornish Cream Teas ~ AMEN !
Just like HUMANS all Cows respond to kindness & gentleness and it is reflected in the YIELD ! Contented Cows produce Good Milk !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 18th, 2019 15:51
HUSBANDRY.
dusk arising said:
A late brother-in-law was a dairy farmer and introduced me to some of his Ladies in the milking parlour. He knew each very well and took pleasure in telling me of their individual personalities as the machinery chugged away.
Truly was an eye opener and i look upon our bovine fellow residents of Earth with an enriched regard for his kind and knowing words.
All the above brought back by your romantic study.
January 18th, 2019 14:09
dusk arising said:
A late brother-in-law was a dairy farmer and introduced me to some of his Ladies in the milking parlour. He knew each very well and took pleasure in telling me of their individual personalities as the machinery chugged away.
Truly was an eye opener and i look upon our bovine fellow residents of Earth with an enriched regard for his kind and knowing words.
All the above brought back by your romantic study.
January 18th, 2019 14:09
HUSBANDRY.
Neville said:
I read this poem earlier today before I went out... and decided it deserved further consideration... when I returned, had you changed the title... tis a smashing poem, an unusual but most interesting topic.. very much enjoyed on each occasion I have read it through and am likely to be back later for another peek..... N
January 18th, 2019 11:05
Neville said:
I read this poem earlier today before I went out... and decided it deserved further consideration... when I returned, had you changed the title... tis a smashing poem, an unusual but most interesting topic.. very much enjoyed on each occasion I have read it through and am likely to be back later for another peek..... N
January 18th, 2019 11:05
HUSBANDRY.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This poem would’ve delighted my grandmother! When my mom speaks of her, I visualize my grandmother exactly as the young woman in the pic you cleverly chose to complement your wonderful poem!
“ while maid’s cool hands calm full udders by touch of experience for care dis-arms agitation when lactating heat begets alarm.”
“Bovines react by responding to kindness and discrimination for husbandry,”...
A delightful read. Thank you for sharing this super write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 07:44
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This poem would’ve delighted my grandmother! When my mom speaks of her, I visualize my grandmother exactly as the young woman in the pic you cleverly chose to complement your wonderful poem!
“ while maid’s cool hands calm full udders by touch of experience for care dis-arms agitation when lactating heat begets alarm.”
“Bovines react by responding to kindness and discrimination for husbandry,”...
A delightful read. Thank you for sharing this super write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 07:44
HUSBANDRY.
markashley1961 said:
I really like \"while the girl\'s parlour-pail
fills and spills pearls at each flick of tail\"
January 18th, 2019 06:49
markashley1961 said:
I really like \"while the girl\'s parlour-pail
fills and spills pearls at each flick of tail\"
January 18th, 2019 06:49
HUSBANDRY.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the rusticity of yesteryear - great piece as always Fay.
January 18th, 2019 06:28
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the rusticity of yesteryear - great piece as always Fay.
January 18th, 2019 06:28
WHY ?
Neville said:
Have you ever noticed when one why is answered, another why immediately follows it... This is a super poem Fay.. Not only is it well crafted, it makes me tingle when I read it to myself..... N
January 17th, 2019 09:41
Neville said:
Have you ever noticed when one why is answered, another why immediately follows it... This is a super poem Fay.. Not only is it well crafted, it makes me tingle when I read it to myself..... N
January 17th, 2019 09:41
WHY ?
dusk arising said:
How lifes past disappointments can poison hope. Beautifully portrayed in your telling.
January 17th, 2019 09:02
dusk arising said:
How lifes past disappointments can poison hope. Beautifully portrayed in your telling.
January 17th, 2019 09:02
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