Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
Goldfinch60 said:
May the brightness continue all the way through this year.
January 2nd, 2019 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May the brightness continue all the way through this year.
January 2nd, 2019 01:15
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here. Your poem describes exactly how the Change from the Old Year to the New is celebrated ! One minute Peace & Quiet : Then on the stroke of MIDNIGHT all Pyrotechnic Hell breaks loose ! Because AUCKLAND is the FIRST MAJOR Global City to greet the NEW YEAR it was both awesome & exciting. Please check my Poem & Video !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit for 2019 :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 1st, 2019 16:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here. Your poem describes exactly how the Change from the Old Year to the New is celebrated ! One minute Peace & Quiet : Then on the stroke of MIDNIGHT all Pyrotechnic Hell breaks loose ! Because AUCKLAND is the FIRST MAJOR Global City to greet the NEW YEAR it was both awesome & exciting. Please check my Poem & Video !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit for 2019 :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 1st, 2019 16:38
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
Neville said:
awesome.. what a sight to behold eh.. a great poem too based on an established British tradition.... Happy New Year Fay...
January 1st, 2019 09:48
Neville said:
awesome.. what a sight to behold eh.. a great poem too based on an established British tradition.... Happy New Year Fay...
January 1st, 2019 09:48
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
Michael Edwards said:
And what a display on the south bank - stopped up to see it and now taking a break from preparing a feast for some friends who will be with us soon. All the very to you and yours dear Fay.
January 1st, 2019 06:44
Michael Edwards said:
And what a display on the south bank - stopped up to see it and now taking a break from preparing a feast for some friends who will be with us soon. All the very to you and yours dear Fay.
January 1st, 2019 06:44
TOO SOON ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay.
Some years ago we used to have a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day year after year.
January 1st, 2019 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay.
Some years ago we used to have a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day year after year.
January 1st, 2019 02:16
TOO SOON ?
Michael Edwards said:
Great observation Fay - this morning I noted a couple f the most beautiful hellebores are now in bloom - will have a floating flower as a centre piece tomorrow when friends will be coming round for a buffet lunch and nibbles and wine and wine and wine and wine...
December 31st, 2018 07:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great observation Fay - this morning I noted a couple f the most beautiful hellebores are now in bloom - will have a floating flower as a centre piece tomorrow when friends will be coming round for a buffet lunch and nibbles and wine and wine and wine and wine...
December 31st, 2018 07:30
TOO SOON ?
Neville said:
it was an absolute pleasure to stumble upon these very fine words this frosty mane my friend.... Neville
December 31st, 2018 05:26
Neville said:
it was an absolute pleasure to stumble upon these very fine words this frosty mane my friend.... Neville
December 31st, 2018 05:26
OLD INTO NEW.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, a great New Year to you as well.
December 31st, 2018 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, a great New Year to you as well.
December 31st, 2018 01:41
OLD INTO NEW.
MendedFences27 said:
Well chosen wording of Nature\'s changing environs. Always consistent,always changing, as you say, \"year to year,\" Nature gives rise to new hope . Happy New Year to you and yours. - Phil A.
December 30th, 2018 18:45
MendedFences27 said:
Well chosen wording of Nature\'s changing environs. Always consistent,always changing, as you say, \"year to year,\" Nature gives rise to new hope . Happy New Year to you and yours. - Phil A.
December 30th, 2018 18:45
OLD INTO NEW.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you FAY an excellent metamorphis from OLD to NEW !
Verse 1. Life cycle of Plants from Season to Season. Verse 2. The miracle of the transition from Dead Winter to Living Spring. Verse 3. The inevitable rotation ~ Year by Year from Winter to Summer ~ cold to heat ~ fog to clarity ~ inertia to vibrance ! All this encapsulated in five balanced quintets ~ That is what i call a POEM ! Love & Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 30th, 2018 11:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you FAY an excellent metamorphis from OLD to NEW !
Verse 1. Life cycle of Plants from Season to Season. Verse 2. The miracle of the transition from Dead Winter to Living Spring. Verse 3. The inevitable rotation ~ Year by Year from Winter to Summer ~ cold to heat ~ fog to clarity ~ inertia to vibrance ! All this encapsulated in five balanced quintets ~ That is what i call a POEM ! Love & Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 30th, 2018 11:05
OLD INTO NEW.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. New Year Greetings to you too!
December 30th, 2018 08:17
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. New Year Greetings to you too!
December 30th, 2018 08:17
OLD INTO NEW.
Neville said:
A very apt and timely, well crafted and kind poem indeed, brimming with beauty and with hope ... Neville x
December 30th, 2018 05:46
Neville said:
A very apt and timely, well crafted and kind poem indeed, brimming with beauty and with hope ... Neville x
December 30th, 2018 05:46
BEHIND AND BETWEEN.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Just when we think its safe to close our computers ~ You post another epic ode for us to analyse. We all live in a multifaced existance ~ betwixt & between the Natural & Supernatural & the Spiritual ! (Verse 1). Verse 2 Explains the perceived ~ but unseen World we all inhabit ~ conscious or unconscious ~ real or surreal ! Verse 3 Challenges our perception of a one Dimnesional Universe and our ability (or inability) to see the paranormal ~ beyond the normal and the Spiritual Dimension where God and His Angelic Host dwell ! God bridged this dimension @ the First Christmas and every Believer does daily in Prayer and Behind & Between ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing ~ Blessings & Love in the Spirit
BRIAN & ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 29th, 2018 17:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Just when we think its safe to close our computers ~ You post another epic ode for us to analyse. We all live in a multifaced existance ~ betwixt & between the Natural & Supernatural & the Spiritual ! (Verse 1). Verse 2 Explains the perceived ~ but unseen World we all inhabit ~ conscious or unconscious ~ real or surreal ! Verse 3 Challenges our perception of a one Dimnesional Universe and our ability (or inability) to see the paranormal ~ beyond the normal and the Spiritual Dimension where God and His Angelic Host dwell ! God bridged this dimension @ the First Christmas and every Believer does daily in Prayer and Behind & Between ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing ~ Blessings & Love in the Spirit
BRIAN & ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 29th, 2018 17:48
FORSAKEN.
Joanna Garrido said:
Good write, Fay. It’s a sad state of affairs the trafficking of the young and poor, or families selling them into that life
December 29th, 2018 10:02
Joanna Garrido said:
Good write, Fay. It’s a sad state of affairs the trafficking of the young and poor, or families selling them into that life
December 29th, 2018 10:02
BEHIND AND BETWEEN.
Neville said:
Wow this is seriously good our Fay and I rarely say wow... I dont suppose you have seen or heard Robert Plant and the sensational shape shifters by any chance.... x
December 29th, 2018 04:35
Neville said:
Wow this is seriously good our Fay and I rarely say wow... I dont suppose you have seen or heard Robert Plant and the sensational shape shifters by any chance.... x
December 29th, 2018 04:35
BEHIND AND BETWEEN.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I suppose it can seem easier to live by sight, and what we can sense, rather than by faith - unseen, but still there, etc.
December 29th, 2018 02:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I suppose it can seem easier to live by sight, and what we can sense, rather than by faith - unseen, but still there, etc.
December 29th, 2018 02:54
FORSAKEN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it is such a shame that this is all too common in this day and age.
December 28th, 2018 09:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it is such a shame that this is all too common in this day and age.
December 28th, 2018 09:43
FORSAKEN.
Neville said:
another poem that was simply crying out to be writ... yes.. tis a crying shame, an absolute outrage...
December 28th, 2018 07:45
Neville said:
another poem that was simply crying out to be writ... yes.. tis a crying shame, an absolute outrage...
December 28th, 2018 07:45
WINTER-CLAD.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about the battle the farmers have with winter but their resilience is always sound.
December 27th, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about the battle the farmers have with winter but their resilience is always sound.
December 27th, 2018 01:57
WINTER-CLAD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ A timely reminder of what the fickle UK Winter may yet BRING Clmate is an erstwhile beast and Hotter Summers may herald colder Winters to compensate ! I have lived in Yorkshire where every Family owned sledge and friends who were FARMERS fought a losing battle with WINTER every Year ~ but showed great resisliance & optimism in the next three months as your Poem Suggests ~ LOVED IT ~ A Perfect Poem from a great Wordsmith ~ THANK YOU ~ Love & Blessings for All Seasons
BRAIN (5 C) & ANGELA (25 C) 🧡🧡🧡
December 26th, 2018 10:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ A timely reminder of what the fickle UK Winter may yet BRING Clmate is an erstwhile beast and Hotter Summers may herald colder Winters to compensate ! I have lived in Yorkshire where every Family owned sledge and friends who were FARMERS fought a losing battle with WINTER every Year ~ but showed great resisliance & optimism in the next three months as your Poem Suggests ~ LOVED IT ~ A Perfect Poem from a great Wordsmith ~ THANK YOU ~ Love & Blessings for All Seasons
BRAIN (5 C) & ANGELA (25 C) 🧡🧡🧡
December 26th, 2018 10:14
WINTER-CLAD.
Neville said:
here we have winter personified my friend.. made me shiver just thinking about the harshness of it .. Neville
December 26th, 2018 07:01
Neville said:
here we have winter personified my friend.. made me shiver just thinking about the harshness of it .. Neville
December 26th, 2018 07:01
WINTER-CLAD.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, rather more battling the damp and rain this year?!
December 26th, 2018 04:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, rather more battling the damp and rain this year?!
December 26th, 2018 04:34
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful sadly emotive write, it brought such emotion to me.
Thank you for all your wonderful poems on here Fay.
Have e very good Christmas.
December 25th, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful sadly emotive write, it brought such emotion to me.
Thank you for all your wonderful poems on here Fay.
Have e very good Christmas.
December 25th, 2018 01:47
E-MAIL TO GOD.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,,merry christmas
December 24th, 2018 16:47
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,,merry christmas
December 24th, 2018 16:47
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Neville said:
what an absolutely splendid poem Fay.. you have captured a little girls heartfelt Christmas plea so bloomin well here.... bless ya and true
Seasons Best and All Good Things to you and yours... Neville
December 24th, 2018 12:17
Neville said:
what an absolutely splendid poem Fay.. you have captured a little girls heartfelt Christmas plea so bloomin well here.... bless ya and true
Seasons Best and All Good Things to you and yours... Neville
December 24th, 2018 12:17
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