Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SEEING THROUGH.
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. I call it \'messing about\', not really the right description though - I mean, if we\'re caught up with \'extra\' rules, regulations, or legalism, and not really getting anywhere, e.g. playing a sort of game called \'Going to church\' as one example.
December 13th, 2018 03:12
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. I call it \'messing about\', not really the right description though - I mean, if we\'re caught up with \'extra\' rules, regulations, or legalism, and not really getting anywhere, e.g. playing a sort of game called \'Going to church\' as one example.
December 13th, 2018 03:12
WAR..
Michael Edwards said:
Your magnificent writings continue with this fine piece Fay.
December 12th, 2018 04:26
Michael Edwards said:
Your magnificent writings continue with this fine piece Fay.
December 12th, 2018 04:26
WAR..
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Looking forward to a few days time, when it starts getting lighter again? Not to wish the year away though.
December 12th, 2018 02:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Looking forward to a few days time, when it starts getting lighter again? Not to wish the year away though.
December 12th, 2018 02:59
DEPTHS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR CARING FAY : ANGELA here : It\'s Wednesday morning here ! Ruth & I have taken some Flowers to the Shrine for GRACE. We put a note on \"From Ruth & Angela : Two very Sad Essex Girls : AMEN RIP XXX\". Love your intriguing visual. There are plenty of places in Auckland : Like you describe in your lovely Poem. I stand on the shore thinking of BRIAN & there I Discover myself !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check BRIANS \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE ........ !\" and our FUSION : Thanks A & B !
December 11th, 2018 16:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR CARING FAY : ANGELA here : It\'s Wednesday morning here ! Ruth & I have taken some Flowers to the Shrine for GRACE. We put a note on \"From Ruth & Angela : Two very Sad Essex Girls : AMEN RIP XXX\". Love your intriguing visual. There are plenty of places in Auckland : Like you describe in your lovely Poem. I stand on the shore thinking of BRIAN & there I Discover myself !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check BRIANS \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE ........ !\" and our FUSION : Thanks A & B !
December 11th, 2018 16:42
DEPTHS.
Netashi said:
Good morning this poem is very beautiful and in \"Depth\". Very beautiful write keep up the great work.
-Theta
December 11th, 2018 11:43
Netashi said:
Good morning this poem is very beautiful and in \"Depth\". Very beautiful write keep up the great work.
-Theta
December 11th, 2018 11:43
DEPTHS.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
• “Depths”
A great title for your awesome poem and pic! Truths spoken and sealed with your sagacious words...
“Real soul-beauty is empty of Self
but is filled with wonder’s ecstasy.”
Truly beautiful and amazing!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 06:21
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
• “Depths”
A great title for your awesome poem and pic! Truths spoken and sealed with your sagacious words...
“Real soul-beauty is empty of Self
but is filled with wonder’s ecstasy.”
Truly beautiful and amazing!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 06:21
SPACES.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful work once more Fay.
I do enjoy Kahlil Gibran\'s work.
December 11th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful work once more Fay.
I do enjoy Kahlil Gibran\'s work.
December 11th, 2018 01:16
SPACES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE FAY : Thanks for highlighting the importance of SPACE in LOVE & LIFE. When I was in ESSEX (UK) with BRIAN we had a lot in common but also separate interests. I was interested in Marshall Arts and Brian in Country Music with a Capital C ! This and other things gave us SPACE ! There are 11,500 miles between us now until Easter 2019 ! BUT absence (distance ?) has made our Hearts grow fonder : as your elegant Poem suggests ! Please pray for Auckland : we are all in shock over the murder of a lovely Young Lady : Grace Millane from Wickford in Essex : Brian is also in shock in Essex ! Thanks for the POWER of your elegant Poetry !
Love in the Spirit : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the picture its SUMMER inn Auckland : NOW !
Please check our latest FUSION : WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR CHRISTMAS ? : Thanks A & B !
December 10th, 2018 16:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE FAY : Thanks for highlighting the importance of SPACE in LOVE & LIFE. When I was in ESSEX (UK) with BRIAN we had a lot in common but also separate interests. I was interested in Marshall Arts and Brian in Country Music with a Capital C ! This and other things gave us SPACE ! There are 11,500 miles between us now until Easter 2019 ! BUT absence (distance ?) has made our Hearts grow fonder : as your elegant Poem suggests ! Please pray for Auckland : we are all in shock over the murder of a lovely Young Lady : Grace Millane from Wickford in Essex : Brian is also in shock in Essex ! Thanks for the POWER of your elegant Poetry !
Love in the Spirit : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the picture its SUMMER inn Auckland : NOW !
Please check our latest FUSION : WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR CHRISTMAS ? : Thanks A & B !
December 10th, 2018 16:35
SPACES.
Lorna said:
Oh yes! Much love with cords that bind loosely .......... it\'s funny too because from what I can understand (and it\'s not much) of quantum mechanics, there ARE invisible ties between all things constantly vibrating even through distances..........
December 10th, 2018 05:54
Lorna said:
Oh yes! Much love with cords that bind loosely .......... it\'s funny too because from what I can understand (and it\'s not much) of quantum mechanics, there ARE invisible ties between all things constantly vibrating even through distances..........
December 10th, 2018 05:54
OUR SONG.
IsraaD said:
Beautiful poem about the minor falls and major lifts of love.
December 9th, 2018 11:10
IsraaD said:
Beautiful poem about the minor falls and major lifts of love.
December 9th, 2018 11:10
GROWTH..
Neville said:
sadly we live in an increasingly risk adverse society and where individuality is frowned on... tis a tick a box, pop a pill, quick fix world... I did enjoy your poem though, sorry.. I almost went off on one...
December 9th, 2018 04:25
Neville said:
sadly we live in an increasingly risk adverse society and where individuality is frowned on... tis a tick a box, pop a pill, quick fix world... I did enjoy your poem though, sorry.. I almost went off on one...
December 9th, 2018 04:25
SUCHNESS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : Its 12 noon (Saturday) here in AUCKLAND and very nice & warm for sailing (19C = 66F : Summer !) Missed your muses last week : Love this one ! LIVING : LOOKING : LOVING all activities of the Hearts Core ! SUCHNESS is such a lovely word to describe the essence & substance of Human Emotions. Of such is LOVE & HEART & SPIRIT : which when combined cause our Lives to SING a unanimous song and our Hearts to WEEP no more ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 7th, 2018 18:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY : Its 12 noon (Saturday) here in AUCKLAND and very nice & warm for sailing (19C = 66F : Summer !) Missed your muses last week : Love this one ! LIVING : LOOKING : LOVING all activities of the Hearts Core ! SUCHNESS is such a lovely word to describe the essence & substance of Human Emotions. Of such is LOVE & HEART & SPIRIT : which when combined cause our Lives to SING a unanimous song and our Hearts to WEEP no more ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 7th, 2018 18:47
SUCHNESS
Michael Edwards said:
Super construct and a great message in these oh so well crafted words.
December 7th, 2018 07:03
Michael Edwards said:
Super construct and a great message in these oh so well crafted words.
December 7th, 2018 07:03
KEEPING WATCH.
Neville said:
How perfectly put... tis what we do isn\'t it... Neville :)
December 7th, 2018 04:28
Neville said:
How perfectly put... tis what we do isn\'t it... Neville :)
December 7th, 2018 04:28
LOVE BITES.
Goldfinch60 said:
That love bite can be so dangerous but it is always so wonderful.
December 7th, 2018 03:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That love bite can be so dangerous but it is always so wonderful.
December 7th, 2018 03:26
December Sky
Neville said:
this little gem is so multi-faceted, it sparkles in its very own write.. and is so very much better than all the praise it has received to date... Neville
December 6th, 2018 14:51
Neville said:
this little gem is so multi-faceted, it sparkles in its very own write.. and is so very much better than all the praise it has received to date... Neville
December 6th, 2018 14:51
TICKING AWAY.
Michael Edwards said:
Once awake to lie there is purgatory - I have to get up - my head is buzzing with ideas - usually down by 5.30am latest - nonetheless a great write.
December 5th, 2018 17:05
Michael Edwards said:
Once awake to lie there is purgatory - I have to get up - my head is buzzing with ideas - usually down by 5.30am latest - nonetheless a great write.
December 5th, 2018 17:05
CHAINS.
Neville said:
this is, without any doubt an excellent poem.. melancholic maybe, but quite necessarily so.... Neville
December 5th, 2018 05:21
Neville said:
this is, without any doubt an excellent poem.. melancholic maybe, but quite necessarily so.... Neville
December 5th, 2018 05:21
THIRST.
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much involved in being thirsty. Well, maybe I know now, through this eloquent and fine write Fay.
December 5th, 2018 03:12
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much involved in being thirsty. Well, maybe I know now, through this eloquent and fine write Fay.
December 5th, 2018 03:12
THIRST.
Neville said:
a thirst quenched, a sorrow drowned... a most welcome read to contemplate and digest more fully before retiring this super frosty eve... thank you dear friend and poet... N
December 4th, 2018 16:49
Neville said:
a thirst quenched, a sorrow drowned... a most welcome read to contemplate and digest more fully before retiring this super frosty eve... thank you dear friend and poet... N
December 4th, 2018 16:49
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