Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LAMENT.
Neville said:
this is indeed a lament... no other title would come close.... even I ache having read these fine words...
January 10th, 2019 04:55
Neville said:
this is indeed a lament... no other title would come close.... even I ache having read these fine words...
January 10th, 2019 04:55
CAPTURED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
LOVE THE PHOTO FAY : Im a real Windmill freak ! : ANGELA. Thanks for another elegant Poem : love the shape : like the bases of a WINDMILLS ! We cant see the WIND but we feel its Power as wave power & coastal erosion (Which is one of Brians Research Projects) and Forest Fires are fanned by the WIND ! BUT like every Natural Force the wind can be captured and harnessed to produce Electricity (The MAORIS hate Wind Turbines but I love their SF Elegance !). Wind when harnessed loses its destructive nature and becomes constructive ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing :
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 8th, 2019 14:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
LOVE THE PHOTO FAY : Im a real Windmill freak ! : ANGELA. Thanks for another elegant Poem : love the shape : like the bases of a WINDMILLS ! We cant see the WIND but we feel its Power as wave power & coastal erosion (Which is one of Brians Research Projects) and Forest Fires are fanned by the WIND ! BUT like every Natural Force the wind can be captured and harnessed to produce Electricity (The MAORIS hate Wind Turbines but I love their SF Elegance !). Wind when harnessed loses its destructive nature and becomes constructive ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing :
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 8th, 2019 14:33
CAPTURED.
Michael Edwards said:
I know all about captured wind lol - great piece Fay.
January 8th, 2019 11:53
Michael Edwards said:
I know all about captured wind lol - great piece Fay.
January 8th, 2019 11:53
CAPTURED.
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of wind you get near those coasts Fay. More than we get inland. \'That\'s a lot of weather\' as they say!
January 8th, 2019 08:53
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of wind you get near those coasts Fay. More than we get inland. \'That\'s a lot of weather\' as they say!
January 8th, 2019 08:53
YOUR SONG.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Love the picture of ME just breathing in NATURE : ANGELA (past 11 pm Tuesday !) Im catching up on yesterdays poem which i found very apposite ! Love the last line of each verse in your nstalgic ode ! REMEMBER The Key : The Secret : The Text : The Spell RING The Changes and Do I really merit praise ? I hav experienced much in the last 30 Years (as an ALCHEMIST !) and it makes me what I am TODAY ! An Independent Young Woman : IN LOVE ! In New Zealand they live closer to Nature & closer to GOD : especially the MAORI and each Season here I am remembering the PAST and also rediscovering myslf and my potential. Being a Physio I am interacting with the KIWIS & MAORIS : HANDS ON : a great priviledge !
Thanks for caring and sharing
LOVE in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 8th, 2019 05:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Love the picture of ME just breathing in NATURE : ANGELA (past 11 pm Tuesday !) Im catching up on yesterdays poem which i found very apposite ! Love the last line of each verse in your nstalgic ode ! REMEMBER The Key : The Secret : The Text : The Spell RING The Changes and Do I really merit praise ? I hav experienced much in the last 30 Years (as an ALCHEMIST !) and it makes me what I am TODAY ! An Independent Young Woman : IN LOVE ! In New Zealand they live closer to Nature & closer to GOD : especially the MAORI and each Season here I am remembering the PAST and also rediscovering myslf and my potential. Being a Physio I am interacting with the KIWIS & MAORIS : HANDS ON : a great priviledge !
Thanks for caring and sharing
LOVE in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 8th, 2019 05:46
YOUR SONG.
Michael Edwards said:
Particularly enjoyed the construction in this fine work Fay.
January 7th, 2019 11:38
Michael Edwards said:
Particularly enjoyed the construction in this fine work Fay.
January 7th, 2019 11:38
YOUR SONG.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Alchemy has worked once more Fay and turned your words into Gold.
January 7th, 2019 03:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Alchemy has worked once more Fay and turned your words into Gold.
January 7th, 2019 03:59
INVASION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Powerful Picture ~ Powerful Poem ~ Powerful Seas. Your Poem rang a bell with me as I have posted poems on Coastal Erosion with dramatic pictures from Hemsby Norfolk of houses fallen & falling into the sea. They are uninsurable and people lose everything ! I have visited these sites and it is heart-breaking. Global warming is the cause for three reasons: 1. The ice caps are melting causing sea level rise 2. Higher ocean temperature causes more intense storms 3. Water expand when it is heated and it can only get worse . The rise in temperature (Greenhouse Effect) is due to rise in atmossperic CO2 from HUMAN SOURSES ! We are ALL responsible ! Thanks for caring ~
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 2nd, 2019 19:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Powerful Picture ~ Powerful Poem ~ Powerful Seas. Your Poem rang a bell with me as I have posted poems on Coastal Erosion with dramatic pictures from Hemsby Norfolk of houses fallen & falling into the sea. They are uninsurable and people lose everything ! I have visited these sites and it is heart-breaking. Global warming is the cause for three reasons: 1. The ice caps are melting causing sea level rise 2. Higher ocean temperature causes more intense storms 3. Water expand when it is heated and it can only get worse . The rise in temperature (Greenhouse Effect) is due to rise in atmossperic CO2 from HUMAN SOURSES ! We are ALL responsible ! Thanks for caring ~
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 2nd, 2019 19:33
INVASION.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A great write that speaks to the ferocity at which energy is released by these weather-related natural occurrences. I loved it. :-)
January 2nd, 2019 12:34
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A great write that speaks to the ferocity at which energy is released by these weather-related natural occurrences. I loved it. :-)
January 2nd, 2019 12:34
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
Goldfinch60 said:
May the brightness continue all the way through this year.
January 2nd, 2019 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May the brightness continue all the way through this year.
January 2nd, 2019 01:15
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here. Your poem describes exactly how the Change from the Old Year to the New is celebrated ! One minute Peace & Quiet : Then on the stroke of MIDNIGHT all Pyrotechnic Hell breaks loose ! Because AUCKLAND is the FIRST MAJOR Global City to greet the NEW YEAR it was both awesome & exciting. Please check my Poem & Video !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit for 2019 :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 1st, 2019 16:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here. Your poem describes exactly how the Change from the Old Year to the New is celebrated ! One minute Peace & Quiet : Then on the stroke of MIDNIGHT all Pyrotechnic Hell breaks loose ! Because AUCKLAND is the FIRST MAJOR Global City to greet the NEW YEAR it was both awesome & exciting. Please check my Poem & Video !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit for 2019 :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 1st, 2019 16:38
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
Neville said:
awesome.. what a sight to behold eh.. a great poem too based on an established British tradition.... Happy New Year Fay...
January 1st, 2019 09:48
Neville said:
awesome.. what a sight to behold eh.. a great poem too based on an established British tradition.... Happy New Year Fay...
January 1st, 2019 09:48
COLOURS OF CHANGE.
Michael Edwards said:
And what a display on the south bank - stopped up to see it and now taking a break from preparing a feast for some friends who will be with us soon. All the very to you and yours dear Fay.
January 1st, 2019 06:44
Michael Edwards said:
And what a display on the south bank - stopped up to see it and now taking a break from preparing a feast for some friends who will be with us soon. All the very to you and yours dear Fay.
January 1st, 2019 06:44
TOO SOON ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay.
Some years ago we used to have a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day year after year.
January 1st, 2019 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay.
Some years ago we used to have a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day year after year.
January 1st, 2019 02:16
TOO SOON ?
Michael Edwards said:
Great observation Fay - this morning I noted a couple f the most beautiful hellebores are now in bloom - will have a floating flower as a centre piece tomorrow when friends will be coming round for a buffet lunch and nibbles and wine and wine and wine and wine...
December 31st, 2018 07:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great observation Fay - this morning I noted a couple f the most beautiful hellebores are now in bloom - will have a floating flower as a centre piece tomorrow when friends will be coming round for a buffet lunch and nibbles and wine and wine and wine and wine...
December 31st, 2018 07:30
TOO SOON ?
Neville said:
it was an absolute pleasure to stumble upon these very fine words this frosty mane my friend.... Neville
December 31st, 2018 05:26
Neville said:
it was an absolute pleasure to stumble upon these very fine words this frosty mane my friend.... Neville
December 31st, 2018 05:26
OLD INTO NEW.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, a great New Year to you as well.
December 31st, 2018 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, a great New Year to you as well.
December 31st, 2018 01:41
OLD INTO NEW.
MendedFences27 said:
Well chosen wording of Nature\'s changing environs. Always consistent,always changing, as you say, \"year to year,\" Nature gives rise to new hope . Happy New Year to you and yours. - Phil A.
December 30th, 2018 18:45
MendedFences27 said:
Well chosen wording of Nature\'s changing environs. Always consistent,always changing, as you say, \"year to year,\" Nature gives rise to new hope . Happy New Year to you and yours. - Phil A.
December 30th, 2018 18:45
OLD INTO NEW.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you FAY an excellent metamorphis from OLD to NEW !
Verse 1. Life cycle of Plants from Season to Season. Verse 2. The miracle of the transition from Dead Winter to Living Spring. Verse 3. The inevitable rotation ~ Year by Year from Winter to Summer ~ cold to heat ~ fog to clarity ~ inertia to vibrance ! All this encapsulated in five balanced quintets ~ That is what i call a POEM ! Love & Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 30th, 2018 11:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you FAY an excellent metamorphis from OLD to NEW !
Verse 1. Life cycle of Plants from Season to Season. Verse 2. The miracle of the transition from Dead Winter to Living Spring. Verse 3. The inevitable rotation ~ Year by Year from Winter to Summer ~ cold to heat ~ fog to clarity ~ inertia to vibrance ! All this encapsulated in five balanced quintets ~ That is what i call a POEM ! Love & Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 30th, 2018 11:05
OLD INTO NEW.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. New Year Greetings to you too!
December 30th, 2018 08:17
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. New Year Greetings to you too!
December 30th, 2018 08:17
OLD INTO NEW.
Neville said:
A very apt and timely, well crafted and kind poem indeed, brimming with beauty and with hope ... Neville x
December 30th, 2018 05:46
Neville said:
A very apt and timely, well crafted and kind poem indeed, brimming with beauty and with hope ... Neville x
December 30th, 2018 05:46
BEHIND AND BETWEEN.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Just when we think its safe to close our computers ~ You post another epic ode for us to analyse. We all live in a multifaced existance ~ betwixt & between the Natural & Supernatural & the Spiritual ! (Verse 1). Verse 2 Explains the perceived ~ but unseen World we all inhabit ~ conscious or unconscious ~ real or surreal ! Verse 3 Challenges our perception of a one Dimnesional Universe and our ability (or inability) to see the paranormal ~ beyond the normal and the Spiritual Dimension where God and His Angelic Host dwell ! God bridged this dimension @ the First Christmas and every Believer does daily in Prayer and Behind & Between ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing ~ Blessings & Love in the Spirit
BRIAN & ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 29th, 2018 17:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY ~ Just when we think its safe to close our computers ~ You post another epic ode for us to analyse. We all live in a multifaced existance ~ betwixt & between the Natural & Supernatural & the Spiritual ! (Verse 1). Verse 2 Explains the perceived ~ but unseen World we all inhabit ~ conscious or unconscious ~ real or surreal ! Verse 3 Challenges our perception of a one Dimnesional Universe and our ability (or inability) to see the paranormal ~ beyond the normal and the Spiritual Dimension where God and His Angelic Host dwell ! God bridged this dimension @ the First Christmas and every Believer does daily in Prayer and Behind & Between ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing ~ Blessings & Love in the Spirit
BRIAN & ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 29th, 2018 17:48
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