Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
CARRYING ON.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY FOR ANOTHER GEM ! UK Members will recognise LANDS END as the tip of the CORNWALL PENINSULAR and a Fishing Ground. Love the picture of the Cornwall Fishing Boats. Its all Hands on Deck when ~ The Boats come in ! ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Im in my lunch break and Angela is fast asleep in NZ (3 am !).
November 19th, 2018 09:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY FOR ANOTHER GEM ! UK Members will recognise LANDS END as the tip of the CORNWALL PENINSULAR and a Fishing Ground. Love the picture of the Cornwall Fishing Boats. Its all Hands on Deck when ~ The Boats come in ! ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Im in my lunch break and Angela is fast asleep in NZ (3 am !).
November 19th, 2018 09:03
TRANSFORMATION.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words...
a kaleidoscope of colors coruscating from the screen! I thoroughly enjoyed your phenomenal poem...including the choice for the background of your “avatar”! It’s perfect for you!
🌈 Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
November 16th, 2018 21:25
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words...
a kaleidoscope of colors coruscating from the screen! I thoroughly enjoyed your phenomenal poem...including the choice for the background of your “avatar”! It’s perfect for you!
🌈 Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
November 16th, 2018 21:25
TRANSFORMATION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ! I adore Poems about COLOUR & Rainbows & Sunrises & Sunsets etc ! As you say WHITE LIGHT conceals the whole Spectrum. Shine it through a PRISM (or a raindrop) and it is refracted into Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Indigo Violet and an infinite range of shades. The ones you have shared are very evocative ! Carmine : Aquamarine : Lavender : Ginger & Plum : Awesome ! Ruth is a PHYSICIST (Radiographer) so she explained all the scientific terms you introduced in the second half of your ODE ! Translucent : Vibrations : Chromatic Resonance : Alchemy and Spectroscope etc. Your vocabulary is infinite. Thanks for sharing and being such a prolific WORDSMITH : Love ANGELA & RUTH 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 16th, 2018 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ! I adore Poems about COLOUR & Rainbows & Sunrises & Sunsets etc ! As you say WHITE LIGHT conceals the whole Spectrum. Shine it through a PRISM (or a raindrop) and it is refracted into Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Indigo Violet and an infinite range of shades. The ones you have shared are very evocative ! Carmine : Aquamarine : Lavender : Ginger & Plum : Awesome ! Ruth is a PHYSICIST (Radiographer) so she explained all the scientific terms you introduced in the second half of your ODE ! Translucent : Vibrations : Chromatic Resonance : Alchemy and Spectroscope etc. Your vocabulary is infinite. Thanks for sharing and being such a prolific WORDSMITH : Love ANGELA & RUTH 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 16th, 2018 16:37
DUET.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, I could hear that nightingale through your words.
November 16th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, I could hear that nightingale through your words.
November 16th, 2018 01:10
DUET.
Netashi said:
This details I can almost hear and feel I wish I read this at night on my stairs. Beautiful write Fay keep it up
-Theta
November 15th, 2018 14:54
Netashi said:
This details I can almost hear and feel I wish I read this at night on my stairs. Beautiful write Fay keep it up
-Theta
November 15th, 2018 14:54
DUET.
orchidee said:
This is not at all \'odious\' (ode-ious) but a fine ode Fay!
November 15th, 2018 07:15
orchidee said:
This is not at all \'odious\' (ode-ious) but a fine ode Fay!
November 15th, 2018 07:15
DUET.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Angela here : Love the picture and I love Birdsong ! Cornwall is a Magic Place and I am pleased that your observations of the sights & sounds of Nature so move your Muse to produce delightful Poetry. Brian & Mike try to educate me about Poetic Form : BUT you simply present your own style of fluid verse : which I love but could never emulate. It is a perfection of verbal cadence ! Thanks You for being You and freely sharing your poetic Elegance with us 24/7 !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Angela here : Love the picture and I love Birdsong ! Cornwall is a Magic Place and I am pleased that your observations of the sights & sounds of Nature so move your Muse to produce delightful Poetry. Brian & Mike try to educate me about Poetic Form : BUT you simply present your own style of fluid verse : which I love but could never emulate. It is a perfection of verbal cadence ! Thanks You for being You and freely sharing your poetic Elegance with us 24/7 !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 06:02
CHAINS.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Well-written Fay.
No tears!
You may also view it as light rather than darkness or an escape from the chains that bind. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:46
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Well-written Fay.
No tears!
You may also view it as light rather than darkness or an escape from the chains that bind. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:46
CHAINS.
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Aww, and why those chains break that hold people sane, when I begin to sing?! heehee.
November 13th, 2018 07:17
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Aww, and why those chains break that hold people sane, when I begin to sing?! heehee.
November 13th, 2018 07:17
CHAINS.
kingOfOne said:
I hope you see the sun again, fay.. loved it to say the absolute least.
November 13th, 2018 04:39
kingOfOne said:
I hope you see the sun again, fay.. loved it to say the absolute least.
November 13th, 2018 04:39
STRANGENESS.
dusk arising said:
I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the universe no less!
Given all that, you\'d think i\'d recognise a picture of my relatives, but i don\'t.
Yes those heavenly bodies are truly amazing and tempt mankind to invent/create new knowledge about our relationship with the universe - most of which goes over my head (pun not intended).
I far prefer your poetic approach and appreciation of what\'s up there.
November 12th, 2018 12:58
dusk arising said:
I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the universe no less!
Given all that, you\'d think i\'d recognise a picture of my relatives, but i don\'t.
Yes those heavenly bodies are truly amazing and tempt mankind to invent/create new knowledge about our relationship with the universe - most of which goes over my head (pun not intended).
I far prefer your poetic approach and appreciation of what\'s up there.
November 12th, 2018 12:58
STRANGENESS.
Michael Edwards said:
I never be ceased to be amazed by the sky both during the day and at night when it displays its jewels.
November 12th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
I never be ceased to be amazed by the sky both during the day and at night when it displays its jewels.
November 12th, 2018 10:42
STRANGENESS.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
There truly “is awe beyond measure in” this “photographed nebula” as there’s awe in the power of your pen! Your ability to describe such beauty is incredible! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 10:11
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
There truly “is awe beyond measure in” this “photographed nebula” as there’s awe in the power of your pen! Your ability to describe such beauty is incredible! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 10:11
STRANGENESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : The full extent of the Universe is beyond Human Comprehension ! However the NEBULAE we see through the Hubble Telescope have given us glimpse of GLORY ! Their shapes & colours are literally \"Out of this World\" !
The EYE of GOD reminds us the without GOD our CREATOR : there would be NO Universe : Solar System : Planet Earth or YOU & US : AMEN.
Billy Graham said \"I look through a Microscope - God is There : I look around me - God is there also and when I look through a Telescope - GOD sure is there as well !
The Heavens declare the GLORY of GOD : Planet Earth sure shows His Handiwork. Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 12th, 2018 09:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : The full extent of the Universe is beyond Human Comprehension ! However the NEBULAE we see through the Hubble Telescope have given us glimpse of GLORY ! Their shapes & colours are literally \"Out of this World\" !
The EYE of GOD reminds us the without GOD our CREATOR : there would be NO Universe : Solar System : Planet Earth or YOU & US : AMEN.
Billy Graham said \"I look through a Microscope - God is There : I look around me - God is there also and when I look through a Telescope - GOD sure is there as well !
The Heavens declare the GLORY of GOD : Planet Earth sure shows His Handiwork. Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 12th, 2018 09:23
STRANGENESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven’s mysteries will be shown to us in time.
November 12th, 2018 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven’s mysteries will be shown to us in time.
November 12th, 2018 09:00
STRANGENESS.
Christina8 said:
Wonderful picture! A beautiful write about it! Very nice, indeed.
November 12th, 2018 08:54
Christina8 said:
Wonderful picture! A beautiful write about it! Very nice, indeed.
November 12th, 2018 08:54
STRANGENESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. What\'s strange too, is that I got cut orf - a poem would not upload, now I\'m out of sequence. Can\'t upload another until 24 hours is up! lol.
November 12th, 2018 05:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. What\'s strange too, is that I got cut orf - a poem would not upload, now I\'m out of sequence. Can\'t upload another until 24 hours is up! lol.
November 12th, 2018 05:33
WAR CRY.
Lorna said:
Beautiful tribute Fay...... I had a great uncle \"Alec\" who was gassed and had to live in a tent when he got home in order to breath properly.... he died soon after returning - he was very young and has a haunting and gentle face (his photos). Over and over again young men go off thinking it\'s a great adventure.
November 10th, 2018 08:32
Lorna said:
Beautiful tribute Fay...... I had a great uncle \"Alec\" who was gassed and had to live in a tent when he got home in order to breath properly.... he died soon after returning - he was very young and has a haunting and gentle face (his photos). Over and over again young men go off thinking it\'s a great adventure.
November 10th, 2018 08:32
WAR CRY.
Michael Edwards said:
May we indeed - they did it for our liberty and independence - such a sacrifice to pay.
November 9th, 2018 09:47
Michael Edwards said:
May we indeed - they did it for our liberty and independence - such a sacrifice to pay.
November 9th, 2018 09:47
WAR CRY.
dusk arising said:
Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay.
I find this period of rememberance very moving every year. There but for the grace of god go I.
November 9th, 2018 04:12
dusk arising said:
Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay.
I find this period of rememberance very moving every year. There but for the grace of god go I.
November 9th, 2018 04:12
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Netashi said:
An hourglass poem for when we between worlds hmmm very interesting,as always your poems are beautiful and meaningful.Keep up the good work.
-Theta
November 8th, 2018 14:32
Netashi said:
An hourglass poem for when we between worlds hmmm very interesting,as always your poems are beautiful and meaningful.Keep up the good work.
-Theta
November 8th, 2018 14:32
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