Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
DUET.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, I could hear that nightingale through your words.
November 16th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, I could hear that nightingale through your words.
November 16th, 2018 01:10
DUET.
Netashi said:
This details I can almost hear and feel I wish I read this at night on my stairs. Beautiful write Fay keep it up
-Theta
November 15th, 2018 14:54
Netashi said:
This details I can almost hear and feel I wish I read this at night on my stairs. Beautiful write Fay keep it up
-Theta
November 15th, 2018 14:54
DUET.
orchidee said:
This is not at all \'odious\' (ode-ious) but a fine ode Fay!
November 15th, 2018 07:15
orchidee said:
This is not at all \'odious\' (ode-ious) but a fine ode Fay!
November 15th, 2018 07:15
DUET.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Angela here : Love the picture and I love Birdsong ! Cornwall is a Magic Place and I am pleased that your observations of the sights & sounds of Nature so move your Muse to produce delightful Poetry. Brian & Mike try to educate me about Poetic Form : BUT you simply present your own style of fluid verse : which I love but could never emulate. It is a perfection of verbal cadence ! Thanks You for being You and freely sharing your poetic Elegance with us 24/7 !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Angela here : Love the picture and I love Birdsong ! Cornwall is a Magic Place and I am pleased that your observations of the sights & sounds of Nature so move your Muse to produce delightful Poetry. Brian & Mike try to educate me about Poetic Form : BUT you simply present your own style of fluid verse : which I love but could never emulate. It is a perfection of verbal cadence ! Thanks You for being You and freely sharing your poetic Elegance with us 24/7 !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 06:02
CHAINS.
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Aww, and why those chains break that hold people sane, when I begin to sing?! heehee.
November 13th, 2018 07:17
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Aww, and why those chains break that hold people sane, when I begin to sing?! heehee.
November 13th, 2018 07:17
CHAINS.
kingOfOne said:
I hope you see the sun again, fay.. loved it to say the absolute least.
November 13th, 2018 04:39
kingOfOne said:
I hope you see the sun again, fay.. loved it to say the absolute least.
November 13th, 2018 04:39
STRANGENESS.
dusk arising said:
I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the universe no less!
Given all that, you\'d think i\'d recognise a picture of my relatives, but i don\'t.
Yes those heavenly bodies are truly amazing and tempt mankind to invent/create new knowledge about our relationship with the universe - most of which goes over my head (pun not intended).
I far prefer your poetic approach and appreciation of what\'s up there.
November 12th, 2018 12:58
dusk arising said:
I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the universe no less!
Given all that, you\'d think i\'d recognise a picture of my relatives, but i don\'t.
Yes those heavenly bodies are truly amazing and tempt mankind to invent/create new knowledge about our relationship with the universe - most of which goes over my head (pun not intended).
I far prefer your poetic approach and appreciation of what\'s up there.
November 12th, 2018 12:58
STRANGENESS.
Michael Edwards said:
I never be ceased to be amazed by the sky both during the day and at night when it displays its jewels.
November 12th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
I never be ceased to be amazed by the sky both during the day and at night when it displays its jewels.
November 12th, 2018 10:42
STRANGENESS.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
There truly “is awe beyond measure in” this “photographed nebula” as there’s awe in the power of your pen! Your ability to describe such beauty is incredible! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 10:11
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
There truly “is awe beyond measure in” this “photographed nebula” as there’s awe in the power of your pen! Your ability to describe such beauty is incredible! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 10:11
STRANGENESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : The full extent of the Universe is beyond Human Comprehension ! However the NEBULAE we see through the Hubble Telescope have given us glimpse of GLORY ! Their shapes & colours are literally \"Out of this World\" !
The EYE of GOD reminds us the without GOD our CREATOR : there would be NO Universe : Solar System : Planet Earth or YOU & US : AMEN.
Billy Graham said \"I look through a Microscope - God is There : I look around me - God is there also and when I look through a Telescope - GOD sure is there as well !
The Heavens declare the GLORY of GOD : Planet Earth sure shows His Handiwork. Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 12th, 2018 09:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : The full extent of the Universe is beyond Human Comprehension ! However the NEBULAE we see through the Hubble Telescope have given us glimpse of GLORY ! Their shapes & colours are literally \"Out of this World\" !
The EYE of GOD reminds us the without GOD our CREATOR : there would be NO Universe : Solar System : Planet Earth or YOU & US : AMEN.
Billy Graham said \"I look through a Microscope - God is There : I look around me - God is there also and when I look through a Telescope - GOD sure is there as well !
The Heavens declare the GLORY of GOD : Planet Earth sure shows His Handiwork. Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 12th, 2018 09:23
STRANGENESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven’s mysteries will be shown to us in time.
November 12th, 2018 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven’s mysteries will be shown to us in time.
November 12th, 2018 09:00
STRANGENESS.
Christina8 said:
Wonderful picture! A beautiful write about it! Very nice, indeed.
November 12th, 2018 08:54
Christina8 said:
Wonderful picture! A beautiful write about it! Very nice, indeed.
November 12th, 2018 08:54
STRANGENESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. What\'s strange too, is that I got cut orf - a poem would not upload, now I\'m out of sequence. Can\'t upload another until 24 hours is up! lol.
November 12th, 2018 05:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. What\'s strange too, is that I got cut orf - a poem would not upload, now I\'m out of sequence. Can\'t upload another until 24 hours is up! lol.
November 12th, 2018 05:33
WAR CRY.
Lorna said:
Beautiful tribute Fay...... I had a great uncle \"Alec\" who was gassed and had to live in a tent when he got home in order to breath properly.... he died soon after returning - he was very young and has a haunting and gentle face (his photos). Over and over again young men go off thinking it\'s a great adventure.
November 10th, 2018 08:32
Lorna said:
Beautiful tribute Fay...... I had a great uncle \"Alec\" who was gassed and had to live in a tent when he got home in order to breath properly.... he died soon after returning - he was very young and has a haunting and gentle face (his photos). Over and over again young men go off thinking it\'s a great adventure.
November 10th, 2018 08:32
WAR CRY.
Michael Edwards said:
May we indeed - they did it for our liberty and independence - such a sacrifice to pay.
November 9th, 2018 09:47
Michael Edwards said:
May we indeed - they did it for our liberty and independence - such a sacrifice to pay.
November 9th, 2018 09:47
WAR CRY.
dusk arising said:
Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay.
I find this period of rememberance very moving every year. There but for the grace of god go I.
November 9th, 2018 04:12
dusk arising said:
Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay.
I find this period of rememberance very moving every year. There but for the grace of god go I.
November 9th, 2018 04:12
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Netashi said:
An hourglass poem for when we between worlds hmmm very interesting,as always your poems are beautiful and meaningful.Keep up the good work.
-Theta
November 8th, 2018 14:32
Netashi said:
An hourglass poem for when we between worlds hmmm very interesting,as always your poems are beautiful and meaningful.Keep up the good work.
-Theta
November 8th, 2018 14:32
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Michael Edwards said:
A SUPERB WRITE IN BOTH CONTENT AND SCULPTURED FORM - A MASTERPIECE.
November 8th, 2018 09:57
Michael Edwards said:
A SUPERB WRITE IN BOTH CONTENT AND SCULPTURED FORM - A MASTERPIECE.
November 8th, 2018 09:57
BETWEEN WORLDS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY a non-punctuated sculptured Poem ! I have printed it out for my Poetry Scrap Book and it looks as Elegant & as Hourglass as YOU ! I love the poetic sentiments in your DIABLO in praise of Poets & Poetry. For ME : Your base-triplet encapsulates all that I know & love about poetry. Sharing on MPS makes me a BETTER POET : AMEN
To describe life : poets slip outside reality
to spin cotton-wool dreams and mind-flying
between worlds : steal time to share fine words !
Reading this FAY has made me shed tears of appreciation for the Perfection of Poetry you freely share with us every day. It always elevates my Spirit. It is so so comforting that I am never JEALOUS : just INSPIRED to be a better and more substantial POET : AMEN
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 8th, 2018 04:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY a non-punctuated sculptured Poem ! I have printed it out for my Poetry Scrap Book and it looks as Elegant & as Hourglass as YOU ! I love the poetic sentiments in your DIABLO in praise of Poets & Poetry. For ME : Your base-triplet encapsulates all that I know & love about poetry. Sharing on MPS makes me a BETTER POET : AMEN
To describe life : poets slip outside reality
to spin cotton-wool dreams and mind-flying
between worlds : steal time to share fine words !
Reading this FAY has made me shed tears of appreciation for the Perfection of Poetry you freely share with us every day. It always elevates my Spirit. It is so so comforting that I am never JEALOUS : just INSPIRED to be a better and more substantial POET : AMEN
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 8th, 2018 04:51
SPIRITED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER FAY : Its 8 am Tuesday here and this is just the sort of encouragement a LADY (trying to cope with a Professional Job) : NEEDS ! I need to be SPIRITED in every aspect of my Job as a DEDICATED HEALER !
LOVE is the ANSWER !
Defiant in the face of adversity
Standing Tall in the face of humiliation
Proud & Erect to eradicate : Hurt @ root level
LOVE always finds a way to BEAUTY & PEACE ~ AMEN
This mantra will help me with all and any situations : I may face today ~ OK
Thanks for caring & sharing
Peace & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 7th, 2018 14:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER FAY : Its 8 am Tuesday here and this is just the sort of encouragement a LADY (trying to cope with a Professional Job) : NEEDS ! I need to be SPIRITED in every aspect of my Job as a DEDICATED HEALER !
LOVE is the ANSWER !
Defiant in the face of adversity
Standing Tall in the face of humiliation
Proud & Erect to eradicate : Hurt @ root level
LOVE always finds a way to BEAUTY & PEACE ~ AMEN
This mantra will help me with all and any situations : I may face today ~ OK
Thanks for caring & sharing
Peace & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 7th, 2018 14:09
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