Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SUCHNESS
Michael Edwards said:
Super construct and a great message in these oh so well crafted words.
December 7th, 2018 07:03
Michael Edwards said:
Super construct and a great message in these oh so well crafted words.
December 7th, 2018 07:03
KEEPING WATCH.
Neville said:
How perfectly put... tis what we do isn\'t it... Neville :)
December 7th, 2018 04:28
Neville said:
How perfectly put... tis what we do isn\'t it... Neville :)
December 7th, 2018 04:28
LOVE BITES.
Goldfinch60 said:
That love bite can be so dangerous but it is always so wonderful.
December 7th, 2018 03:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That love bite can be so dangerous but it is always so wonderful.
December 7th, 2018 03:26
December Sky
Neville said:
this little gem is so multi-faceted, it sparkles in its very own write.. and is so very much better than all the praise it has received to date... Neville
December 6th, 2018 14:51
Neville said:
this little gem is so multi-faceted, it sparkles in its very own write.. and is so very much better than all the praise it has received to date... Neville
December 6th, 2018 14:51
TICKING AWAY.
Michael Edwards said:
Once awake to lie there is purgatory - I have to get up - my head is buzzing with ideas - usually down by 5.30am latest - nonetheless a great write.
December 5th, 2018 17:05
Michael Edwards said:
Once awake to lie there is purgatory - I have to get up - my head is buzzing with ideas - usually down by 5.30am latest - nonetheless a great write.
December 5th, 2018 17:05
CHAINS.
Neville said:
this is, without any doubt an excellent poem.. melancholic maybe, but quite necessarily so.... Neville
December 5th, 2018 05:21
Neville said:
this is, without any doubt an excellent poem.. melancholic maybe, but quite necessarily so.... Neville
December 5th, 2018 05:21
THIRST.
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much involved in being thirsty. Well, maybe I know now, through this eloquent and fine write Fay.
December 5th, 2018 03:12
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much involved in being thirsty. Well, maybe I know now, through this eloquent and fine write Fay.
December 5th, 2018 03:12
THIRST.
Neville said:
a thirst quenched, a sorrow drowned... a most welcome read to contemplate and digest more fully before retiring this super frosty eve... thank you dear friend and poet... N
December 4th, 2018 16:49
Neville said:
a thirst quenched, a sorrow drowned... a most welcome read to contemplate and digest more fully before retiring this super frosty eve... thank you dear friend and poet... N
December 4th, 2018 16:49
THIRST.
Michael Edwards said:
Some really great word associations make this quite special - a grand write Fay.
December 4th, 2018 15:29
Michael Edwards said:
Some really great word associations make this quite special - a grand write Fay.
December 4th, 2018 15:29
GROWTH..
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, Fay, you have penned the words of wisdom. Children exposed to nature, through adult guidance, in early life are so much more well-rounded and it is evident in the elementary school setting.
Great poem and thank you for sharing this knowledge. :-)
December 4th, 2018 13:58
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, Fay, you have penned the words of wisdom. Children exposed to nature, through adult guidance, in early life are so much more well-rounded and it is evident in the elementary school setting.
Great poem and thank you for sharing this knowledge. :-)
December 4th, 2018 13:58
THIRST.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Super write, Fay. Writing letters of friendship in the early morn does indeed wake the senses to the fragrance of the flowers.
I can appreciate your sentiment, especially at this time of year. :-)
December 4th, 2018 13:54
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Super write, Fay. Writing letters of friendship in the early morn does indeed wake the senses to the fragrance of the flowers.
I can appreciate your sentiment, especially at this time of year. :-)
December 4th, 2018 13:54
GROWTH..
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wise words Fay, every child must be allowed to explore their lives but as Michael has said guided not dominated.
December 4th, 2018 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wise words Fay, every child must be allowed to explore their lives but as Michael has said guided not dominated.
December 4th, 2018 00:47
WITH YOU.
Neville said:
I would be hard pushed to say it any better than many of my reviewing predecessors... A lovely poem and filled with correspondingly lovely imagery and concepts... I can\'t remember the last full English I enjoyed.. but am gonna have one first thing tomorrow, I can tell ya..... Neville
December 3rd, 2018 14:37
Neville said:
I would be hard pushed to say it any better than many of my reviewing predecessors... A lovely poem and filled with correspondingly lovely imagery and concepts... I can\'t remember the last full English I enjoyed.. but am gonna have one first thing tomorrow, I can tell ya..... Neville
December 3rd, 2018 14:37
GROWTH..
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your sagacious penned poem is a delightful read!
I totally agree with Michael!
“Guidance not Dominance”!
Children should not be stifled in “bubble wrapping” forevermore! Allow them to fall and pick themselves up!
~Laura~
December 3rd, 2018 10:17
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your sagacious penned poem is a delightful read!
I totally agree with Michael!
“Guidance not Dominance”!
Children should not be stifled in “bubble wrapping” forevermore! Allow them to fall and pick themselves up!
~Laura~
December 3rd, 2018 10:17
GROWTH..
Michael Edwards said:
Oh so true and so nwell expressed. Guidance not dominance.
December 3rd, 2018 05:24
Michael Edwards said:
Oh so true and so nwell expressed. Guidance not dominance.
December 3rd, 2018 05:24
GROWTH..
Classicmister said:
Wise words Faye ... Let nature and not nurture rule the child!
December 3rd, 2018 04:36
Classicmister said:
Wise words Faye ... Let nature and not nurture rule the child!
December 3rd, 2018 04:36
YIELDING.
Neville said:
I sense you have a particularly harmonious and otherwise joyous relationship with your own poetic muse... these words are not simply beautiful, they are indeed timeless.....Neville
December 2nd, 2018 15:12
Neville said:
I sense you have a particularly harmonious and otherwise joyous relationship with your own poetic muse... these words are not simply beautiful, they are indeed timeless.....Neville
December 2nd, 2018 15:12
YIELDING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, just beautiful.
Calliope looks down on me as I write, I have a picture of her on my wall.
December 1st, 2018 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Fay, just beautiful.
Calliope looks down on me as I write, I have a picture of her on my wall.
December 1st, 2018 01:25
YIELDING.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully expressed poem, Fay. The line \"Exposing raw heart to the eyes of the world,\" says it all.
Love is a double-edged sword. :-)
November 30th, 2018 16:35
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully expressed poem, Fay. The line \"Exposing raw heart to the eyes of the world,\" says it all.
Love is a double-edged sword. :-)
November 30th, 2018 16:35
YIELDING.
lasergraph said:
We are in the mists of soul bearers here and you bare yours very well. Good write Fay.
November 30th, 2018 10:19
lasergraph said:
We are in the mists of soul bearers here and you bare yours very well. Good write Fay.
November 30th, 2018 10:19
YIELDING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m silly! I swoon at some love poems. Maybe they are \'lurve\' poems, as they say. I should \'leave my sheltered life a bit, get my coat, and get out more\', as they say! lol.
November 30th, 2018 05:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m silly! I swoon at some love poems. Maybe they are \'lurve\' poems, as they say. I should \'leave my sheltered life a bit, get my coat, and get out more\', as they say! lol.
November 30th, 2018 05:06
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