Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
ALTERATION.
Syd said:
Beautiful poem about the changing of the seasons Faye. Great descriptions.
- Syd
November 26th, 2018 06:04
Syd said:
Beautiful poem about the changing of the seasons Faye. Great descriptions.
- Syd
November 26th, 2018 06:04
ALTERATION.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. That dark throne\'s moon has got about another month, then gradually lighter again!
November 26th, 2018 05:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. That dark throne\'s moon has got about another month, then gradually lighter again!
November 26th, 2018 05:38
WAR CRY.
Neville said:
a very timely post indeed, emotionally charged and ragged and real capturing the very essence of that saddest of affairs, that which we call war..... I wholeheartedly agree, we must never forget..... fine words Fay.. N
November 24th, 2018 04:17
Neville said:
a very timely post indeed, emotionally charged and ragged and real capturing the very essence of that saddest of affairs, that which we call war..... I wholeheartedly agree, we must never forget..... fine words Fay.. N
November 24th, 2018 04:17
OUR SONG.
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a saying in singing, and other procedures, which goes \"Use it or lose it\"
May your rhapsody of love become stronger each day.
November 24th, 2018 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a saying in singing, and other procedures, which goes \"Use it or lose it\"
May your rhapsody of love become stronger each day.
November 24th, 2018 01:21
CHAINS.
Neville said:
Not only do these fine words read well, they also look good on the page and deliver a powerful message too... thoroughly enjoyed Fay and true... Neville
November 23rd, 2018 07:23
Neville said:
Not only do these fine words read well, they also look good on the page and deliver a powerful message too... thoroughly enjoyed Fay and true... Neville
November 23rd, 2018 07:23
UNDERSTANDING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Im SPECIAL ~ because GOD loves me
He gave His best thing ~ just to Save me
JESUS crucified to take my blame
For the BAD things I have done !
Thank you JESUS ~ Thank you GOD
For loving me so much
I know I dont deserve IT !
Help me to feel your Love ~ right NOW
To know ~ deep in my Heart
That Im ~ YOUR SPECIAL FRIEND !
This Childrens Chorus underlines all you are saying. Every Human Being is created to have the capacity to be A Star : Important : Special & Worth much more than they ever thought. It is the culmination of Self Worth & Self Respect. I have to instil this into my STUDENTS ~ Some of whom are DAMAGED and ANGELA to her Clients ~ Some of whom are very DAMAGED. We are both healers. The only codicil I would add (from our Perspective & Experience as committed Christians) ~ All Humans are created in Gods Likeness and have infinite potential & resilience (The INVICTUS GAMES proves this !) BUT those who put their Trust in God ~ fulfil His Purpose for their Lives ~ And by wearing the \"Whole Armour of God\" achieve far more than they would without it ~ OK Thanks for this GEM ~ which has caused us to think on these things ~ Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 22nd, 2018 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Im SPECIAL ~ because GOD loves me
He gave His best thing ~ just to Save me
JESUS crucified to take my blame
For the BAD things I have done !
Thank you JESUS ~ Thank you GOD
For loving me so much
I know I dont deserve IT !
Help me to feel your Love ~ right NOW
To know ~ deep in my Heart
That Im ~ YOUR SPECIAL FRIEND !
This Childrens Chorus underlines all you are saying. Every Human Being is created to have the capacity to be A Star : Important : Special & Worth much more than they ever thought. It is the culmination of Self Worth & Self Respect. I have to instil this into my STUDENTS ~ Some of whom are DAMAGED and ANGELA to her Clients ~ Some of whom are very DAMAGED. We are both healers. The only codicil I would add (from our Perspective & Experience as committed Christians) ~ All Humans are created in Gods Likeness and have infinite potential & resilience (The INVICTUS GAMES proves this !) BUT those who put their Trust in God ~ fulfil His Purpose for their Lives ~ And by wearing the \"Whole Armour of God\" achieve far more than they would without it ~ OK Thanks for this GEM ~ which has caused us to think on these things ~ Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 22nd, 2018 16:53
UNDERSTANDING.
The Retired Bloke said:
Fay. As per your kind message on my post. I find this verse of great help. We sometimes forget the true meaning of life. Thank you.
November 22nd, 2018 15:38
The Retired Bloke said:
Fay. As per your kind message on my post. I find this verse of great help. We sometimes forget the true meaning of life. Thank you.
November 22nd, 2018 15:38
UNDERSTANDING.
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed this - thanks for posting it Fay
November 22nd, 2018 11:21
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed this - thanks for posting it Fay
November 22nd, 2018 11:21
UNDERSTANDING.
dusk arising said:
I love your teaching healing message here. As often happens, it reminds me of the closing lines of \'desiderata\'. Words which i hold close to me.
November 22nd, 2018 10:07
dusk arising said:
I love your teaching healing message here. As often happens, it reminds me of the closing lines of \'desiderata\'. Words which i hold close to me.
November 22nd, 2018 10:07
WITH YOU.
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Recounted beautiful things which remain long after the physical parting. These validate our being, reminding us that we are worthy of the wonderous experiences shared with such a special \'other\'.
Reflecting upon the love shared rather than the loss is the positive way to reminisce. I know it is so for me.
November 22nd, 2018 02:36
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Recounted beautiful things which remain long after the physical parting. These validate our being, reminding us that we are worthy of the wonderous experiences shared with such a special \'other\'.
Reflecting upon the love shared rather than the loss is the positive way to reminisce. I know it is so for me.
November 22nd, 2018 02:36
WITH YOU.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic write Fay - I agree with Michael.
November 22nd, 2018 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic write Fay - I agree with Michael.
November 22nd, 2018 01:46
WITH YOU.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, this poem is filled with sentiment from the heart. A fine romantic piece that hammers home the intimacy with the repeating line, \"Or was it
those breakfasts with you ?\"
Excellent write, Fay. :-)
November 21st, 2018 13:26
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, this poem is filled with sentiment from the heart. A fine romantic piece that hammers home the intimacy with the repeating line, \"Or was it
those breakfasts with you ?\"
Excellent write, Fay. :-)
November 21st, 2018 13:26
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Neville said:
What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for your poems aesthetic/visual appearance and value but because often, sculptured poems dont seem to work, at least not for me. These however, most certainly do. Thoroughly enjoyed.... Neville
November 21st, 2018 12:21
Neville said:
What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for your poems aesthetic/visual appearance and value but because often, sculptured poems dont seem to work, at least not for me. These however, most certainly do. Thoroughly enjoyed.... Neville
November 21st, 2018 12:21
WITH YOU.
Debsspot said:
Beautiful words Fay. You\'ve captured all the \"little\" things that make romance so special.
November 21st, 2018 05:46
Debsspot said:
Beautiful words Fay. You\'ve captured all the \"little\" things that make romance so special.
November 21st, 2018 05:46
WITH YOU.
Michael Edwards said:
Your work should be widely acclaimed - another great piece.
November 21st, 2018 05:25
Michael Edwards said:
Your work should be widely acclaimed - another great piece.
November 21st, 2018 05:25
WITH YOU.
orchidee said:
Yep, it was me. I scoffed all the cornflakes. Very romantic! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
November 21st, 2018 04:21
orchidee said:
Yep, it was me. I scoffed all the cornflakes. Very romantic! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
November 21st, 2018 04:21
BEAUTIFUL.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about my favourite time of the year - thank you.
November 21st, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about my favourite time of the year - thank you.
November 21st, 2018 01:44
BEAUTIFUL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ Winter has visited the East (Essex) as well as the West ! Love the picture it screams AUTUMN. For ANGELA it is 20+ C and it will be Summer in 2 weeks (December !) I love Poems in triplets ! Your meter is perfect so it flows beautifully as free verse with a soupcon of half~rhyme ! Scarf weather ~ well wrapped up to watch the last leaves falling enjoying the crunch of the leaves and the crisp of the day ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2018 18:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ Winter has visited the East (Essex) as well as the West ! Love the picture it screams AUTUMN. For ANGELA it is 20+ C and it will be Summer in 2 weeks (December !) I love Poems in triplets ! Your meter is perfect so it flows beautifully as free verse with a soupcon of half~rhyme ! Scarf weather ~ well wrapped up to watch the last leaves falling enjoying the crunch of the leaves and the crisp of the day ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2018 18:51
BEAUTIFUL.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your crisp imagery detailing Autumn walks brings us to the realization that Summer\'s warmth has left us for another year.
Nicely written, Fay. :-)
November 20th, 2018 12:33
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your crisp imagery detailing Autumn walks brings us to the realization that Summer\'s warmth has left us for another year.
Nicely written, Fay. :-)
November 20th, 2018 12:33
BEAUTIFUL.
orchidee said:
Not so bad with the sun-shiny blueness, but horrid if black as thunder! A fine write Fay.
Oh well only about a month to go, and it gets lighter again! Wishing the year away?!
November 20th, 2018 11:30
orchidee said:
Not so bad with the sun-shiny blueness, but horrid if black as thunder! A fine write Fay.
Oh well only about a month to go, and it gets lighter again! Wishing the year away?!
November 20th, 2018 11:30
BEAUTIFUL.
Michael Edwards said:
An inspirational piece - and I too love mornings like this - a gentle walk in Autumn\'s arms.
November 20th, 2018 10:45
Michael Edwards said:
An inspirational piece - and I too love mornings like this - a gentle walk in Autumn\'s arms.
November 20th, 2018 10:45
BEAUTIFUL.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your poem “Beautiful” is dreamy and delightful as is your choice of pic!
I love these lines...
“Walk ousts sleep as drowsy brains
doused with dawn air
stay wakefully keen all day.”
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
November 20th, 2018 10:40
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your poem “Beautiful” is dreamy and delightful as is your choice of pic!
I love these lines...
“Walk ousts sleep as drowsy brains
doused with dawn air
stay wakefully keen all day.”
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
November 20th, 2018 10:40
CARRYING ON.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay, I can see those fisher-folk in your words.
November 20th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay, I can see those fisher-folk in your words.
November 20th, 2018 01:10
CARRYING ON.
Michael Edwards said:
The scene is before me - beautiful write dear Fay
November 19th, 2018 09:09
Michael Edwards said:
The scene is before me - beautiful write dear Fay
November 19th, 2018 09:09
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