Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WAR CRY.
Neville said:
a very timely post indeed, emotionally charged and ragged and real capturing the very essence of that saddest of affairs, that which we call war..... I wholeheartedly agree, we must never forget..... fine words Fay.. N
November 24th, 2018 04:17
Neville said:
a very timely post indeed, emotionally charged and ragged and real capturing the very essence of that saddest of affairs, that which we call war..... I wholeheartedly agree, we must never forget..... fine words Fay.. N
November 24th, 2018 04:17
OUR SONG.
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a saying in singing, and other procedures, which goes \"Use it or lose it\"
May your rhapsody of love become stronger each day.
November 24th, 2018 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a saying in singing, and other procedures, which goes \"Use it or lose it\"
May your rhapsody of love become stronger each day.
November 24th, 2018 01:21
CHAINS.
Neville said:
Not only do these fine words read well, they also look good on the page and deliver a powerful message too... thoroughly enjoyed Fay and true... Neville
November 23rd, 2018 07:23
Neville said:
Not only do these fine words read well, they also look good on the page and deliver a powerful message too... thoroughly enjoyed Fay and true... Neville
November 23rd, 2018 07:23
UNDERSTANDING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Im SPECIAL ~ because GOD loves me
He gave His best thing ~ just to Save me
JESUS crucified to take my blame
For the BAD things I have done !
Thank you JESUS ~ Thank you GOD
For loving me so much
I know I dont deserve IT !
Help me to feel your Love ~ right NOW
To know ~ deep in my Heart
That Im ~ YOUR SPECIAL FRIEND !
This Childrens Chorus underlines all you are saying. Every Human Being is created to have the capacity to be A Star : Important : Special & Worth much more than they ever thought. It is the culmination of Self Worth & Self Respect. I have to instil this into my STUDENTS ~ Some of whom are DAMAGED and ANGELA to her Clients ~ Some of whom are very DAMAGED. We are both healers. The only codicil I would add (from our Perspective & Experience as committed Christians) ~ All Humans are created in Gods Likeness and have infinite potential & resilience (The INVICTUS GAMES proves this !) BUT those who put their Trust in God ~ fulfil His Purpose for their Lives ~ And by wearing the \"Whole Armour of God\" achieve far more than they would without it ~ OK Thanks for this GEM ~ which has caused us to think on these things ~ Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 22nd, 2018 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Im SPECIAL ~ because GOD loves me
He gave His best thing ~ just to Save me
JESUS crucified to take my blame
For the BAD things I have done !
Thank you JESUS ~ Thank you GOD
For loving me so much
I know I dont deserve IT !
Help me to feel your Love ~ right NOW
To know ~ deep in my Heart
That Im ~ YOUR SPECIAL FRIEND !
This Childrens Chorus underlines all you are saying. Every Human Being is created to have the capacity to be A Star : Important : Special & Worth much more than they ever thought. It is the culmination of Self Worth & Self Respect. I have to instil this into my STUDENTS ~ Some of whom are DAMAGED and ANGELA to her Clients ~ Some of whom are very DAMAGED. We are both healers. The only codicil I would add (from our Perspective & Experience as committed Christians) ~ All Humans are created in Gods Likeness and have infinite potential & resilience (The INVICTUS GAMES proves this !) BUT those who put their Trust in God ~ fulfil His Purpose for their Lives ~ And by wearing the \"Whole Armour of God\" achieve far more than they would without it ~ OK Thanks for this GEM ~ which has caused us to think on these things ~ Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 22nd, 2018 16:53
UNDERSTANDING.
The Retired Bloke said:
Fay. As per your kind message on my post. I find this verse of great help. We sometimes forget the true meaning of life. Thank you.
November 22nd, 2018 15:38
The Retired Bloke said:
Fay. As per your kind message on my post. I find this verse of great help. We sometimes forget the true meaning of life. Thank you.
November 22nd, 2018 15:38
UNDERSTANDING.
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed this - thanks for posting it Fay
November 22nd, 2018 11:21
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed this - thanks for posting it Fay
November 22nd, 2018 11:21
UNDERSTANDING.
dusk arising said:
I love your teaching healing message here. As often happens, it reminds me of the closing lines of \'desiderata\'. Words which i hold close to me.
November 22nd, 2018 10:07
dusk arising said:
I love your teaching healing message here. As often happens, it reminds me of the closing lines of \'desiderata\'. Words which i hold close to me.
November 22nd, 2018 10:07
WITH YOU.
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Recounted beautiful things which remain long after the physical parting. These validate our being, reminding us that we are worthy of the wonderous experiences shared with such a special \'other\'.
Reflecting upon the love shared rather than the loss is the positive way to reminisce. I know it is so for me.
November 22nd, 2018 02:36
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Recounted beautiful things which remain long after the physical parting. These validate our being, reminding us that we are worthy of the wonderous experiences shared with such a special \'other\'.
Reflecting upon the love shared rather than the loss is the positive way to reminisce. I know it is so for me.
November 22nd, 2018 02:36
WITH YOU.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic write Fay - I agree with Michael.
November 22nd, 2018 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic write Fay - I agree with Michael.
November 22nd, 2018 01:46
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Neville said:
What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for your poems aesthetic/visual appearance and value but because often, sculptured poems dont seem to work, at least not for me. These however, most certainly do. Thoroughly enjoyed.... Neville
November 21st, 2018 12:21
Neville said:
What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for your poems aesthetic/visual appearance and value but because often, sculptured poems dont seem to work, at least not for me. These however, most certainly do. Thoroughly enjoyed.... Neville
November 21st, 2018 12:21
WITH YOU.
Debsspot said:
Beautiful words Fay. You\'ve captured all the \"little\" things that make romance so special.
November 21st, 2018 05:46
Debsspot said:
Beautiful words Fay. You\'ve captured all the \"little\" things that make romance so special.
November 21st, 2018 05:46
WITH YOU.
Michael Edwards said:
Your work should be widely acclaimed - another great piece.
November 21st, 2018 05:25
Michael Edwards said:
Your work should be widely acclaimed - another great piece.
November 21st, 2018 05:25
WITH YOU.
orchidee said:
Yep, it was me. I scoffed all the cornflakes. Very romantic! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
November 21st, 2018 04:21
orchidee said:
Yep, it was me. I scoffed all the cornflakes. Very romantic! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
November 21st, 2018 04:21
BEAUTIFUL.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about my favourite time of the year - thank you.
November 21st, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about my favourite time of the year - thank you.
November 21st, 2018 01:44
BEAUTIFUL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ Winter has visited the East (Essex) as well as the West ! Love the picture it screams AUTUMN. For ANGELA it is 20+ C and it will be Summer in 2 weeks (December !) I love Poems in triplets ! Your meter is perfect so it flows beautifully as free verse with a soupcon of half~rhyme ! Scarf weather ~ well wrapped up to watch the last leaves falling enjoying the crunch of the leaves and the crisp of the day ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2018 18:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ Winter has visited the East (Essex) as well as the West ! Love the picture it screams AUTUMN. For ANGELA it is 20+ C and it will be Summer in 2 weeks (December !) I love Poems in triplets ! Your meter is perfect so it flows beautifully as free verse with a soupcon of half~rhyme ! Scarf weather ~ well wrapped up to watch the last leaves falling enjoying the crunch of the leaves and the crisp of the day ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2018 18:51
BEAUTIFUL.
orchidee said:
Not so bad with the sun-shiny blueness, but horrid if black as thunder! A fine write Fay.
Oh well only about a month to go, and it gets lighter again! Wishing the year away?!
November 20th, 2018 11:30
orchidee said:
Not so bad with the sun-shiny blueness, but horrid if black as thunder! A fine write Fay.
Oh well only about a month to go, and it gets lighter again! Wishing the year away?!
November 20th, 2018 11:30
BEAUTIFUL.
Michael Edwards said:
An inspirational piece - and I too love mornings like this - a gentle walk in Autumn\'s arms.
November 20th, 2018 10:45
Michael Edwards said:
An inspirational piece - and I too love mornings like this - a gentle walk in Autumn\'s arms.
November 20th, 2018 10:45
BEAUTIFUL.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your poem “Beautiful” is dreamy and delightful as is your choice of pic!
I love these lines...
“Walk ousts sleep as drowsy brains
doused with dawn air
stay wakefully keen all day.”
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
November 20th, 2018 10:40
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your poem “Beautiful” is dreamy and delightful as is your choice of pic!
I love these lines...
“Walk ousts sleep as drowsy brains
doused with dawn air
stay wakefully keen all day.”
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
November 20th, 2018 10:40
CARRYING ON.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay, I can see those fisher-folk in your words.
November 20th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay, I can see those fisher-folk in your words.
November 20th, 2018 01:10
CARRYING ON.
Michael Edwards said:
The scene is before me - beautiful write dear Fay
November 19th, 2018 09:09
Michael Edwards said:
The scene is before me - beautiful write dear Fay
November 19th, 2018 09:09
CARRYING ON.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY FOR ANOTHER GEM ! UK Members will recognise LANDS END as the tip of the CORNWALL PENINSULAR and a Fishing Ground. Love the picture of the Cornwall Fishing Boats. Its all Hands on Deck when ~ The Boats come in ! ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Im in my lunch break and Angela is fast asleep in NZ (3 am !).
November 19th, 2018 09:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY FOR ANOTHER GEM ! UK Members will recognise LANDS END as the tip of the CORNWALL PENINSULAR and a Fishing Ground. Love the picture of the Cornwall Fishing Boats. Its all Hands on Deck when ~ The Boats come in ! ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Im in my lunch break and Angela is fast asleep in NZ (3 am !).
November 19th, 2018 09:03
TRANSFORMATION.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words...
a kaleidoscope of colors coruscating from the screen! I thoroughly enjoyed your phenomenal poem...including the choice for the background of your “avatar”! It’s perfect for you!
🌈 Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
November 16th, 2018 21:25
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words...
a kaleidoscope of colors coruscating from the screen! I thoroughly enjoyed your phenomenal poem...including the choice for the background of your “avatar”! It’s perfect for you!
🌈 Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
November 16th, 2018 21:25
TRANSFORMATION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ! I adore Poems about COLOUR & Rainbows & Sunrises & Sunsets etc ! As you say WHITE LIGHT conceals the whole Spectrum. Shine it through a PRISM (or a raindrop) and it is refracted into Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Indigo Violet and an infinite range of shades. The ones you have shared are very evocative ! Carmine : Aquamarine : Lavender : Ginger & Plum : Awesome ! Ruth is a PHYSICIST (Radiographer) so she explained all the scientific terms you introduced in the second half of your ODE ! Translucent : Vibrations : Chromatic Resonance : Alchemy and Spectroscope etc. Your vocabulary is infinite. Thanks for sharing and being such a prolific WORDSMITH : Love ANGELA & RUTH 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 16th, 2018 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ! I adore Poems about COLOUR & Rainbows & Sunrises & Sunsets etc ! As you say WHITE LIGHT conceals the whole Spectrum. Shine it through a PRISM (or a raindrop) and it is refracted into Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Indigo Violet and an infinite range of shades. The ones you have shared are very evocative ! Carmine : Aquamarine : Lavender : Ginger & Plum : Awesome ! Ruth is a PHYSICIST (Radiographer) so she explained all the scientific terms you introduced in the second half of your ODE ! Translucent : Vibrations : Chromatic Resonance : Alchemy and Spectroscope etc. Your vocabulary is infinite. Thanks for sharing and being such a prolific WORDSMITH : Love ANGELA & RUTH 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 16th, 2018 16:37
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