Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
FORSAKEN.
Joanna Garrido said:
Good write, Fay. It’s a sad state of affairs the trafficking of the young and poor, or families selling them into that life
December 29th, 2018 10:02
Joanna Garrido said:
Good write, Fay. It’s a sad state of affairs the trafficking of the young and poor, or families selling them into that life
December 29th, 2018 10:02
BEHIND AND BETWEEN.
Neville said:
Wow this is seriously good our Fay and I rarely say wow... I dont suppose you have seen or heard Robert Plant and the sensational shape shifters by any chance.... x
December 29th, 2018 04:35
Neville said:
Wow this is seriously good our Fay and I rarely say wow... I dont suppose you have seen or heard Robert Plant and the sensational shape shifters by any chance.... x
December 29th, 2018 04:35
BEHIND AND BETWEEN.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I suppose it can seem easier to live by sight, and what we can sense, rather than by faith - unseen, but still there, etc.
December 29th, 2018 02:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I suppose it can seem easier to live by sight, and what we can sense, rather than by faith - unseen, but still there, etc.
December 29th, 2018 02:54
FORSAKEN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it is such a shame that this is all too common in this day and age.
December 28th, 2018 09:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it is such a shame that this is all too common in this day and age.
December 28th, 2018 09:43
FORSAKEN.
Neville said:
another poem that was simply crying out to be writ... yes.. tis a crying shame, an absolute outrage...
December 28th, 2018 07:45
Neville said:
another poem that was simply crying out to be writ... yes.. tis a crying shame, an absolute outrage...
December 28th, 2018 07:45
WINTER-CLAD.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about the battle the farmers have with winter but their resilience is always sound.
December 27th, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write about the battle the farmers have with winter but their resilience is always sound.
December 27th, 2018 01:57
WINTER-CLAD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ A timely reminder of what the fickle UK Winter may yet BRING Clmate is an erstwhile beast and Hotter Summers may herald colder Winters to compensate ! I have lived in Yorkshire where every Family owned sledge and friends who were FARMERS fought a losing battle with WINTER every Year ~ but showed great resisliance & optimism in the next three months as your Poem Suggests ~ LOVED IT ~ A Perfect Poem from a great Wordsmith ~ THANK YOU ~ Love & Blessings for All Seasons
BRAIN (5 C) & ANGELA (25 C) 🧡🧡🧡
December 26th, 2018 10:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ A timely reminder of what the fickle UK Winter may yet BRING Clmate is an erstwhile beast and Hotter Summers may herald colder Winters to compensate ! I have lived in Yorkshire where every Family owned sledge and friends who were FARMERS fought a losing battle with WINTER every Year ~ but showed great resisliance & optimism in the next three months as your Poem Suggests ~ LOVED IT ~ A Perfect Poem from a great Wordsmith ~ THANK YOU ~ Love & Blessings for All Seasons
BRAIN (5 C) & ANGELA (25 C) 🧡🧡🧡
December 26th, 2018 10:14
WINTER-CLAD.
Neville said:
here we have winter personified my friend.. made me shiver just thinking about the harshness of it .. Neville
December 26th, 2018 07:01
Neville said:
here we have winter personified my friend.. made me shiver just thinking about the harshness of it .. Neville
December 26th, 2018 07:01
WINTER-CLAD.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, rather more battling the damp and rain this year?!
December 26th, 2018 04:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, rather more battling the damp and rain this year?!
December 26th, 2018 04:34
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful sadly emotive write, it brought such emotion to me.
Thank you for all your wonderful poems on here Fay.
Have e very good Christmas.
December 25th, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful sadly emotive write, it brought such emotion to me.
Thank you for all your wonderful poems on here Fay.
Have e very good Christmas.
December 25th, 2018 01:47
E-MAIL TO GOD.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,,merry christmas
December 24th, 2018 16:47
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,,merry christmas
December 24th, 2018 16:47
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Neville said:
what an absolutely splendid poem Fay.. you have captured a little girls heartfelt Christmas plea so bloomin well here.... bless ya and true
Seasons Best and All Good Things to you and yours... Neville
December 24th, 2018 12:17
Neville said:
what an absolutely splendid poem Fay.. you have captured a little girls heartfelt Christmas plea so bloomin well here.... bless ya and true
Seasons Best and All Good Things to you and yours... Neville
December 24th, 2018 12:17
E-MAIL TO GOD.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful Bitter - Sweet poem. You have a Poets mind and in this Poem you have perfectly encapsulted ~ the MIND ~ Spelling and Spiritually of young child ~ awesome ! The child is concerned about all the little things that would ameliorate her MUMS stay in Hospital. Extra pillas ~ hair combed genty ~ frilly nighty ~ someone to read to \'er and a FREND ~ AMEN If only we could PRAY that intelligently and that direct ! The WORLD would be a much better place ~ AMEN ! Love through Poetry !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 24th, 2018 10:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful Bitter - Sweet poem. You have a Poets mind and in this Poem you have perfectly encapsulted ~ the MIND ~ Spelling and Spiritually of young child ~ awesome ! The child is concerned about all the little things that would ameliorate her MUMS stay in Hospital. Extra pillas ~ hair combed genty ~ frilly nighty ~ someone to read to \'er and a FREND ~ AMEN If only we could PRAY that intelligently and that direct ! The WORLD would be a much better place ~ AMEN ! Love through Poetry !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 24th, 2018 10:50
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This is absolutely a beautiful but somewhat sad poem that pulls at my heartstrings! As I read it, I was vividly reminded of the time my grandfather was ill and the end was near! I wished and hoped with all my might that he would be okay because they told me that God would take care of him! I was barely four years old at the time of his passing!
Thank you for this share!
~Laura~
December 24th, 2018 10:09
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This is absolutely a beautiful but somewhat sad poem that pulls at my heartstrings! As I read it, I was vividly reminded of the time my grandfather was ill and the end was near! I wished and hoped with all my might that he would be okay because they told me that God would take care of him! I was barely four years old at the time of his passing!
Thank you for this share!
~Laura~
December 24th, 2018 10:09
E-MAIL TO GOD.
Michael Edwards said:
What a delightful yet sad read - I so much enjoyed it and would never have put your name to it Fay but so glade you did write it. May I wish you all the very best and here\'s to another 12 months of great poetry.
December 24th, 2018 10:01
Michael Edwards said:
What a delightful yet sad read - I so much enjoyed it and would never have put your name to it Fay but so glade you did write it. May I wish you all the very best and here\'s to another 12 months of great poetry.
December 24th, 2018 10:01
SPACES.
Neville said:
Blessed be those spaces.. the bigger the better, but not always,
sometimes.. tis the closeness of them that is most important.. a splendid poem Fay.. I\'m quite partial to a bit o Kahil Gibran too x
December 23rd, 2018 14:07
Neville said:
Blessed be those spaces.. the bigger the better, but not always,
sometimes.. tis the closeness of them that is most important.. a splendid poem Fay.. I\'m quite partial to a bit o Kahil Gibran too x
December 23rd, 2018 14:07
SECRET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Death doth hide but not divide
It is as though the rose
That blossomed on our Garden Wall
Has bloomed upon the Other Side !
This is a verse we have used at Funerals & on gravestones. Reading between the lines of your second verse. My Boyfriends often sent me 12 rosebuds (@ Valentine etc) and they opened as our love developed ! Your poem is very elegant in its presentation : and expresive in its prose. Thanks again for a precious & personal Poem.
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 21st, 2018 17:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Death doth hide but not divide
It is as though the rose
That blossomed on our Garden Wall
Has bloomed upon the Other Side !
This is a verse we have used at Funerals & on gravestones. Reading between the lines of your second verse. My Boyfriends often sent me 12 rosebuds (@ Valentine etc) and they opened as our love developed ! Your poem is very elegant in its presentation : and expresive in its prose. Thanks again for a precious & personal Poem.
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 21st, 2018 17:20
SECRET
Michael Edwards said:
As beautifully written as the rose itself- superb dear Fay
December 21st, 2018 15:14
Michael Edwards said:
As beautifully written as the rose itself- superb dear Fay
December 21st, 2018 15:14
ESSENTIALS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Fay celebrating the wonder and beauty of nature.
December 20th, 2018 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Fay celebrating the wonder and beauty of nature.
December 20th, 2018 01:31
ESSENTIALS.
Michael Edwards said:
Like a chefs review of the store cupboard - great subject - great write.
December 19th, 2018 15:01
Michael Edwards said:
Like a chefs review of the store cupboard - great subject - great write.
December 19th, 2018 15:01
ESSENTIALS.
kevin browne said:
Oh, such a wonderful picture you have painted from natures enthusiastic beauty. This captured the cold rain and the warmth of our planet, More is needed in such work as this.
December 19th, 2018 11:05
kevin browne said:
Oh, such a wonderful picture you have painted from natures enthusiastic beauty. This captured the cold rain and the warmth of our planet, More is needed in such work as this.
December 19th, 2018 11:05
PACE.
Michael Edwards said:
It flows with your powers of descriptive verse.
December 18th, 2018 09:19
Michael Edwards said:
It flows with your powers of descriptive verse.
December 18th, 2018 09:19
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