Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SPIRITED.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay you write some superb lines which all weld together into a glorious whole - another beauty.
November 7th, 2018 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Fay you write some superb lines which all weld together into a glorious whole - another beauty.
November 7th, 2018 10:33
SECRETS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s pearls are wonderful, as are your words Fay.
November 7th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s pearls are wonderful, as are your words Fay.
November 7th, 2018 01:40
SECRETS.
Netashi said:
A good read for the morning, simple and beautiful. Great write Fay keep it up.
- Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:52
Netashi said:
A good read for the morning, simple and beautiful. Great write Fay keep it up.
- Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:52
SECRETS.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. All that happening at beak of day!
November 6th, 2018 11:21
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. All that happening at beak of day!
November 6th, 2018 11:21
SECRETS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In our experience FAY ~ NATURE always SURPRISES and never DISAPPOINTS ! ANGELA & I both share the awesome Beauties of the UK (especially the West Country !) and Spain & New Zealand. Every Season and every day (wherever we are) is filled with surprises !
Your perfect Poem highlights the Glory of the Blackbird : just one of the Millions of Natures Pearls : that reveal Gods Glory : AMEN Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In our experience FAY ~ NATURE always SURPRISES and never DISAPPOINTS ! ANGELA & I both share the awesome Beauties of the UK (especially the West Country !) and Spain & New Zealand. Every Season and every day (wherever we are) is filled with surprises !
Your perfect Poem highlights the Glory of the Blackbird : just one of the Millions of Natures Pearls : that reveal Gods Glory : AMEN Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:45
SECRETS.
Lorna said:
A beautiful start to the day Fay - lovely morning...........
November 6th, 2018 05:12
Lorna said:
A beautiful start to the day Fay - lovely morning...........
November 6th, 2018 05:12
VICTORIOUS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : For a wonderful ODE to LOVE ! It really covers all the Phases Brian & I have been through to get where we are TODAY ! 11 thousand miles apart : and yet two separated HEARTS still beating as ONE : AMEN.
LOVE Dispenses
LOVE Impregnates
LOVE Decapitates
LOVE Invalidates
All NEGATIVES are eliminated and All that is POSITIVE accentuated.
LOVE always WINS ! Thank you for Caring :
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 5th, 2018 14:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : For a wonderful ODE to LOVE ! It really covers all the Phases Brian & I have been through to get where we are TODAY ! 11 thousand miles apart : and yet two separated HEARTS still beating as ONE : AMEN.
LOVE Dispenses
LOVE Impregnates
LOVE Decapitates
LOVE Invalidates
All NEGATIVES are eliminated and All that is POSITIVE accentuated.
LOVE always WINS ! Thank you for Caring :
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 5th, 2018 14:36
VICTORIOUS.
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh \'eck wish I was young again - a super write Fay.
November 5th, 2018 11:34
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh \'eck wish I was young again - a super write Fay.
November 5th, 2018 11:34
VICTORIOUS.
dusk arising said:
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece today if one was looking through the eyes of a person who had never been smitten?
I can\'t imagine. There\'s no going back!
November 5th, 2018 11:16
dusk arising said:
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece today if one was looking through the eyes of a person who had never been smitten?
I can\'t imagine. There\'s no going back!
November 5th, 2018 11:16
VICTORIOUS.
Lorna said:
Your poem reinforces the power of love - thanks Fay.
November 5th, 2018 07:48
Lorna said:
Your poem reinforces the power of love - thanks Fay.
November 5th, 2018 07:48
VICTORIOUS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Sorry I swooned a libido! Then I recovered to read the rest of the poem. I must \'get out more\'.heehee.
November 5th, 2018 07:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Sorry I swooned a libido! Then I recovered to read the rest of the poem. I must \'get out more\'.heehee.
November 5th, 2018 07:27
OH LILY.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Poor old Lily fragile on the hill
I shall pray for Lily, now that she is ill
Great write Fay nice style flows so well.
November 2nd, 2018 11:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Poor old Lily fragile on the hill
I shall pray for Lily, now that she is ill
Great write Fay nice style flows so well.
November 2nd, 2018 11:57
OH LILY.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Oh you mean lily the flower. I thought it was going to be about fag-ash Lil (whoever she was/is exactly?) lol.
November 2nd, 2018 07:27
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Oh you mean lily the flower. I thought it was going to be about fag-ash Lil (whoever she was/is exactly?) lol.
November 2nd, 2018 07:27
OH LILY.
Lorna said:
I just had to come back and read it again......... get well Lily..........
November 2nd, 2018 05:29
Lorna said:
I just had to come back and read it again......... get well Lily..........
November 2nd, 2018 05:29
OH LILY.
Lorna said:
Oh this absolutely delighted me Fay! So charming - caught me with the first line........ for all of us who speak to our plants because they are friends.
November 2nd, 2018 05:01
Lorna said:
Oh this absolutely delighted me Fay! So charming - caught me with the first line........ for all of us who speak to our plants because they are friends.
November 2nd, 2018 05:01
OH LILY.
Michael Edwards said:
Something really different - an engaging read dear Fay
November 2nd, 2018 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
Something really different - an engaging read dear Fay
November 2nd, 2018 04:42
KNOWINGNESS..
Lorna said:
Hi Fay - I agree knowingness can easily be squashed by the day-to-day weight of things........
November 1st, 2018 07:59
Lorna said:
Hi Fay - I agree knowingness can easily be squashed by the day-to-day weight of things........
November 1st, 2018 07:59
KNOWINGNESS..
Michael Edwards said:
Your super library of work forever expandeth (ah a new word)
October 31st, 2018 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Your super library of work forever expandeth (ah a new word)
October 31st, 2018 09:11
KNOWINGNESS..
orchidee said:
I never \'knew\' all this went on. Well, maybe I did! heehee.
October 31st, 2018 08:14
orchidee said:
I never \'knew\' all this went on. Well, maybe I did! heehee.
October 31st, 2018 08:14
LISTENING IN.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, summer this year anyway, led me to write some poems with a parched them included.
October 30th, 2018 08:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, summer this year anyway, led me to write some poems with a parched them included.
October 30th, 2018 08:55
LISTENING IN.
dusk arising said:
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp cold soil around her, hoping the squirrels have secreted sufficient nuts as she prepares for yet another cool quiet winter and its cruel weather.
October 30th, 2018 06:48
dusk arising said:
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp cold soil around her, hoping the squirrels have secreted sufficient nuts as she prepares for yet another cool quiet winter and its cruel weather.
October 30th, 2018 06:48
LISTENING IN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY : Love the picture : I love people with natural Red Hair (especially Prince Harry : but dont tell BRIAN !) Love your perfect poem which is SUMMER BASED and so so perfectly describes the interaction of the elements and the flora. I love clouds and my fave line is:
Listening in I hear NIMBUS creaking
with unshed weight of rain : PERFECT
OMG : I closed my eyes and could not only SEE it : but I HEARD it and felt it as well : Beautiful descriptive Poetry !
Its nearly MIDNIGHT here and RUTH & I saw H & M on their walk about TODAY ! Harry is so Handsome & Meghan is so so Lovely : Blooming Beautiful ! Poem tomorrow : BRIAN is helping me with an ACROSTIC SONNET !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We have posted a new FUSION : CHRISTMAS : please feel free to add a POEM : Thanks A & B !
October 30th, 2018 06:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY : Love the picture : I love people with natural Red Hair (especially Prince Harry : but dont tell BRIAN !) Love your perfect poem which is SUMMER BASED and so so perfectly describes the interaction of the elements and the flora. I love clouds and my fave line is:
Listening in I hear NIMBUS creaking
with unshed weight of rain : PERFECT
OMG : I closed my eyes and could not only SEE it : but I HEARD it and felt it as well : Beautiful descriptive Poetry !
Its nearly MIDNIGHT here and RUTH & I saw H & M on their walk about TODAY ! Harry is so Handsome & Meghan is so so Lovely : Blooming Beautiful ! Poem tomorrow : BRIAN is helping me with an ACROSTIC SONNET !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We have posted a new FUSION : CHRISTMAS : please feel free to add a POEM : Thanks A & B !
October 30th, 2018 06:01
CONCORDANCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for us all but many just cannot see it.
The Hippies had it right \"Make love, not war\"
October 30th, 2018 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for us all but many just cannot see it.
The Hippies had it right \"Make love, not war\"
October 30th, 2018 01:58
CONCORDANCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ~ Thanks for thought provoking Poem based on Three Words. Brian & I both love WORDS.
CONCORDANCE = Agreement on correct order
CONTENTION = Disagreement : Do your own thing !
CORDIALITY = Agreement and Harmony is restored !
Life is often like that ! Its 11:15 am here and my next Clinic is 6pm. Harry & Meghan are doing walk about in The Harbour this afternoon so Im hoping to see them ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check Our Poem on PERSONALITY and our LATEST FUSION on CHRISTMAS
October 29th, 2018 17:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ~ Thanks for thought provoking Poem based on Three Words. Brian & I both love WORDS.
CONCORDANCE = Agreement on correct order
CONTENTION = Disagreement : Do your own thing !
CORDIALITY = Agreement and Harmony is restored !
Life is often like that ! Its 11:15 am here and my next Clinic is 6pm. Harry & Meghan are doing walk about in The Harbour this afternoon so Im hoping to see them ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check Our Poem on PERSONALITY and our LATEST FUSION on CHRISTMAS
October 29th, 2018 17:18
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