Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Michael Edwards said:
A SUPERB WRITE IN BOTH CONTENT AND SCULPTURED FORM - A MASTERPIECE.
November 8th, 2018 09:57
Michael Edwards said:
A SUPERB WRITE IN BOTH CONTENT AND SCULPTURED FORM - A MASTERPIECE.
November 8th, 2018 09:57
BETWEEN WORLDS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY a non-punctuated sculptured Poem ! I have printed it out for my Poetry Scrap Book and it looks as Elegant & as Hourglass as YOU ! I love the poetic sentiments in your DIABLO in praise of Poets & Poetry. For ME : Your base-triplet encapsulates all that I know & love about poetry. Sharing on MPS makes me a BETTER POET : AMEN
To describe life : poets slip outside reality
to spin cotton-wool dreams and mind-flying
between worlds : steal time to share fine words !
Reading this FAY has made me shed tears of appreciation for the Perfection of Poetry you freely share with us every day. It always elevates my Spirit. It is so so comforting that I am never JEALOUS : just INSPIRED to be a better and more substantial POET : AMEN
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 8th, 2018 04:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY a non-punctuated sculptured Poem ! I have printed it out for my Poetry Scrap Book and it looks as Elegant & as Hourglass as YOU ! I love the poetic sentiments in your DIABLO in praise of Poets & Poetry. For ME : Your base-triplet encapsulates all that I know & love about poetry. Sharing on MPS makes me a BETTER POET : AMEN
To describe life : poets slip outside reality
to spin cotton-wool dreams and mind-flying
between worlds : steal time to share fine words !
Reading this FAY has made me shed tears of appreciation for the Perfection of Poetry you freely share with us every day. It always elevates my Spirit. It is so so comforting that I am never JEALOUS : just INSPIRED to be a better and more substantial POET : AMEN
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 8th, 2018 04:51
SPIRITED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER FAY : Its 8 am Tuesday here and this is just the sort of encouragement a LADY (trying to cope with a Professional Job) : NEEDS ! I need to be SPIRITED in every aspect of my Job as a DEDICATED HEALER !
LOVE is the ANSWER !
Defiant in the face of adversity
Standing Tall in the face of humiliation
Proud & Erect to eradicate : Hurt @ root level
LOVE always finds a way to BEAUTY & PEACE ~ AMEN
This mantra will help me with all and any situations : I may face today ~ OK
Thanks for caring & sharing
Peace & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 7th, 2018 14:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER FAY : Its 8 am Tuesday here and this is just the sort of encouragement a LADY (trying to cope with a Professional Job) : NEEDS ! I need to be SPIRITED in every aspect of my Job as a DEDICATED HEALER !
LOVE is the ANSWER !
Defiant in the face of adversity
Standing Tall in the face of humiliation
Proud & Erect to eradicate : Hurt @ root level
LOVE always finds a way to BEAUTY & PEACE ~ AMEN
This mantra will help me with all and any situations : I may face today ~ OK
Thanks for caring & sharing
Peace & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 7th, 2018 14:09
SPIRITED.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay you write some superb lines which all weld together into a glorious whole - another beauty.
November 7th, 2018 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Fay you write some superb lines which all weld together into a glorious whole - another beauty.
November 7th, 2018 10:33
SECRETS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s pearls are wonderful, as are your words Fay.
November 7th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s pearls are wonderful, as are your words Fay.
November 7th, 2018 01:40
SECRETS.
Netashi said:
A good read for the morning, simple and beautiful. Great write Fay keep it up.
- Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:52
Netashi said:
A good read for the morning, simple and beautiful. Great write Fay keep it up.
- Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:52
SECRETS.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. All that happening at beak of day!
November 6th, 2018 11:21
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. All that happening at beak of day!
November 6th, 2018 11:21
SECRETS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In our experience FAY ~ NATURE always SURPRISES and never DISAPPOINTS ! ANGELA & I both share the awesome Beauties of the UK (especially the West Country !) and Spain & New Zealand. Every Season and every day (wherever we are) is filled with surprises !
Your perfect Poem highlights the Glory of the Blackbird : just one of the Millions of Natures Pearls : that reveal Gods Glory : AMEN Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In our experience FAY ~ NATURE always SURPRISES and never DISAPPOINTS ! ANGELA & I both share the awesome Beauties of the UK (especially the West Country !) and Spain & New Zealand. Every Season and every day (wherever we are) is filled with surprises !
Your perfect Poem highlights the Glory of the Blackbird : just one of the Millions of Natures Pearls : that reveal Gods Glory : AMEN Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:45
SECRETS.
Lorna said:
A beautiful start to the day Fay - lovely morning...........
November 6th, 2018 05:12
Lorna said:
A beautiful start to the day Fay - lovely morning...........
November 6th, 2018 05:12
VICTORIOUS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : For a wonderful ODE to LOVE ! It really covers all the Phases Brian & I have been through to get where we are TODAY ! 11 thousand miles apart : and yet two separated HEARTS still beating as ONE : AMEN.
LOVE Dispenses
LOVE Impregnates
LOVE Decapitates
LOVE Invalidates
All NEGATIVES are eliminated and All that is POSITIVE accentuated.
LOVE always WINS ! Thank you for Caring :
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 5th, 2018 14:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : For a wonderful ODE to LOVE ! It really covers all the Phases Brian & I have been through to get where we are TODAY ! 11 thousand miles apart : and yet two separated HEARTS still beating as ONE : AMEN.
LOVE Dispenses
LOVE Impregnates
LOVE Decapitates
LOVE Invalidates
All NEGATIVES are eliminated and All that is POSITIVE accentuated.
LOVE always WINS ! Thank you for Caring :
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 5th, 2018 14:36
VICTORIOUS.
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh \'eck wish I was young again - a super write Fay.
November 5th, 2018 11:34
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh \'eck wish I was young again - a super write Fay.
November 5th, 2018 11:34
VICTORIOUS.
dusk arising said:
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece today if one was looking through the eyes of a person who had never been smitten?
I can\'t imagine. There\'s no going back!
November 5th, 2018 11:16
dusk arising said:
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece today if one was looking through the eyes of a person who had never been smitten?
I can\'t imagine. There\'s no going back!
November 5th, 2018 11:16
VICTORIOUS.
Lorna said:
Your poem reinforces the power of love - thanks Fay.
November 5th, 2018 07:48
Lorna said:
Your poem reinforces the power of love - thanks Fay.
November 5th, 2018 07:48
VICTORIOUS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Sorry I swooned a libido! Then I recovered to read the rest of the poem. I must \'get out more\'.heehee.
November 5th, 2018 07:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Sorry I swooned a libido! Then I recovered to read the rest of the poem. I must \'get out more\'.heehee.
November 5th, 2018 07:27
OH LILY.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Poor old Lily fragile on the hill
I shall pray for Lily, now that she is ill
Great write Fay nice style flows so well.
November 2nd, 2018 11:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Poor old Lily fragile on the hill
I shall pray for Lily, now that she is ill
Great write Fay nice style flows so well.
November 2nd, 2018 11:57
OH LILY.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Oh you mean lily the flower. I thought it was going to be about fag-ash Lil (whoever she was/is exactly?) lol.
November 2nd, 2018 07:27
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Oh you mean lily the flower. I thought it was going to be about fag-ash Lil (whoever she was/is exactly?) lol.
November 2nd, 2018 07:27
OH LILY.
Lorna said:
I just had to come back and read it again......... get well Lily..........
November 2nd, 2018 05:29
Lorna said:
I just had to come back and read it again......... get well Lily..........
November 2nd, 2018 05:29
OH LILY.
Lorna said:
Oh this absolutely delighted me Fay! So charming - caught me with the first line........ for all of us who speak to our plants because they are friends.
November 2nd, 2018 05:01
Lorna said:
Oh this absolutely delighted me Fay! So charming - caught me with the first line........ for all of us who speak to our plants because they are friends.
November 2nd, 2018 05:01
OH LILY.
Michael Edwards said:
Something really different - an engaging read dear Fay
November 2nd, 2018 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
Something really different - an engaging read dear Fay
November 2nd, 2018 04:42
KNOWINGNESS..
Lorna said:
Hi Fay - I agree knowingness can easily be squashed by the day-to-day weight of things........
November 1st, 2018 07:59
Lorna said:
Hi Fay - I agree knowingness can easily be squashed by the day-to-day weight of things........
November 1st, 2018 07:59
KNOWINGNESS..
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely penned, Fay. I particularly liked how you tied in all the verses with the last line \"What slumbers is knowingness.\"
Loved it! Keep writing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 16:50
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely penned, Fay. I particularly liked how you tied in all the verses with the last line \"What slumbers is knowingness.\"
Loved it! Keep writing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 16:50
KNOWINGNESS..
Michael Edwards said:
Your super library of work forever expandeth (ah a new word)
October 31st, 2018 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Your super library of work forever expandeth (ah a new word)
October 31st, 2018 09:11
KNOWINGNESS..
orchidee said:
I never \'knew\' all this went on. Well, maybe I did! heehee.
October 31st, 2018 08:14
orchidee said:
I never \'knew\' all this went on. Well, maybe I did! heehee.
October 31st, 2018 08:14
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