Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LISTENING IN.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, summer this year anyway, led me to write some poems with a parched them included.
October 30th, 2018 08:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, summer this year anyway, led me to write some poems with a parched them included.
October 30th, 2018 08:55
LISTENING IN.
dusk arising said:
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp cold soil around her, hoping the squirrels have secreted sufficient nuts as she prepares for yet another cool quiet winter and its cruel weather.
October 30th, 2018 06:48
dusk arising said:
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp cold soil around her, hoping the squirrels have secreted sufficient nuts as she prepares for yet another cool quiet winter and its cruel weather.
October 30th, 2018 06:48
LISTENING IN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY : Love the picture : I love people with natural Red Hair (especially Prince Harry : but dont tell BRIAN !) Love your perfect poem which is SUMMER BASED and so so perfectly describes the interaction of the elements and the flora. I love clouds and my fave line is:
Listening in I hear NIMBUS creaking
with unshed weight of rain : PERFECT
OMG : I closed my eyes and could not only SEE it : but I HEARD it and felt it as well : Beautiful descriptive Poetry !
Its nearly MIDNIGHT here and RUTH & I saw H & M on their walk about TODAY ! Harry is so Handsome & Meghan is so so Lovely : Blooming Beautiful ! Poem tomorrow : BRIAN is helping me with an ACROSTIC SONNET !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We have posted a new FUSION : CHRISTMAS : please feel free to add a POEM : Thanks A & B !
October 30th, 2018 06:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY : Love the picture : I love people with natural Red Hair (especially Prince Harry : but dont tell BRIAN !) Love your perfect poem which is SUMMER BASED and so so perfectly describes the interaction of the elements and the flora. I love clouds and my fave line is:
Listening in I hear NIMBUS creaking
with unshed weight of rain : PERFECT
OMG : I closed my eyes and could not only SEE it : but I HEARD it and felt it as well : Beautiful descriptive Poetry !
Its nearly MIDNIGHT here and RUTH & I saw H & M on their walk about TODAY ! Harry is so Handsome & Meghan is so so Lovely : Blooming Beautiful ! Poem tomorrow : BRIAN is helping me with an ACROSTIC SONNET !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We have posted a new FUSION : CHRISTMAS : please feel free to add a POEM : Thanks A & B !
October 30th, 2018 06:01
CONCORDANCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for us all but many just cannot see it.
The Hippies had it right \"Make love, not war\"
October 30th, 2018 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for us all but many just cannot see it.
The Hippies had it right \"Make love, not war\"
October 30th, 2018 01:58
CONCORDANCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ~ Thanks for thought provoking Poem based on Three Words. Brian & I both love WORDS.
CONCORDANCE = Agreement on correct order
CONTENTION = Disagreement : Do your own thing !
CORDIALITY = Agreement and Harmony is restored !
Life is often like that ! Its 11:15 am here and my next Clinic is 6pm. Harry & Meghan are doing walk about in The Harbour this afternoon so Im hoping to see them ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check Our Poem on PERSONALITY and our LATEST FUSION on CHRISTMAS
October 29th, 2018 17:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ~ Thanks for thought provoking Poem based on Three Words. Brian & I both love WORDS.
CONCORDANCE = Agreement on correct order
CONTENTION = Disagreement : Do your own thing !
CORDIALITY = Agreement and Harmony is restored !
Life is often like that ! Its 11:15 am here and my next Clinic is 6pm. Harry & Meghan are doing walk about in The Harbour this afternoon so Im hoping to see them ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check Our Poem on PERSONALITY and our LATEST FUSION on CHRISTMAS
October 29th, 2018 17:18
CONCORDANCE.
dusk arising said:
Love is a lesson which continues to teach us. So long as we have an open mind we can hear it\'s teaching.
Many, many minds are closed to these things and war/terrorism/violence continues.
Love your three verses of awakening awareness.
October 29th, 2018 16:37
dusk arising said:
Love is a lesson which continues to teach us. So long as we have an open mind we can hear it\'s teaching.
Many, many minds are closed to these things and war/terrorism/violence continues.
Love your three verses of awakening awareness.
October 29th, 2018 16:37
CONCORDANCE.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This is exactly the poem that should be read by everyone...especially during these most difficult times!
The last stanza truly sums it up!
A beautiful and sensitive read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 29th, 2018 14:24
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This is exactly the poem that should be read by everyone...especially during these most difficult times!
The last stanza truly sums it up!
A beautiful and sensitive read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 29th, 2018 14:24
KEEPING WATCH.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your sweet poem and pic have taken me back a few decades! I miss those days when my children were little and needed my undivided attention...especially when they were not feeling well!
Thank you for sharing your your gift as a poetess!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 23:06
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your sweet poem and pic have taken me back a few decades! I miss those days when my children were little and needed my undivided attention...especially when they were not feeling well!
Thank you for sharing your your gift as a poetess!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 23:06
KEEPING WATCH.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture & lovely Poem. Your Poem & Meghan\'s bump has made me broody but Im only just 30 so Brian & I have time to start a Family. The Wedding is set for Easter 2020. The Church will cater so we dont have to worry about booking a Hotel : The Honeymoon will be in Sevilla so we can visit my Dad\'s relations ! Love the Picture & Poem : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 26th, 2018 16:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture & lovely Poem. Your Poem & Meghan\'s bump has made me broody but Im only just 30 so Brian & I have time to start a Family. The Wedding is set for Easter 2020. The Church will cater so we dont have to worry about booking a Hotel : The Honeymoon will be in Sevilla so we can visit my Dad\'s relations ! Love the Picture & Poem : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 26th, 2018 16:15
KEEPING WATCH.
Michael Edwards said:
They bring such joy, the little ones and this is full of tenderness.
October 26th, 2018 09:45
Michael Edwards said:
They bring such joy, the little ones and this is full of tenderness.
October 26th, 2018 09:45
NEW NOTIONS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
I have a picture of Calliope looking down at me where I write my words, her inspiration is is valuable.
October 25th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
I have a picture of Calliope looking down at me where I write my words, her inspiration is is valuable.
October 25th, 2018 01:22
NEW NOTIONS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU FAY : For sharing something of your process from idea to draft to finished Poem. Yours are always perfect as presented ! I always learn something about poetic form from your posts ! Today you have presented four balanced quatrains with an xaxa xbxb etc rhyme & half-rhyme pattern. It reads and recites well which is the hallmark of a good Poem ! In my todays POEM (which I have called a 6 4 4 Sonnet !) The content SUNRISE : SUNSET alas overtook a consistent Rhyme Pattern (BRIAN is teaching me to be a better poet) : He did not edit this one because I wanted to surprise him. I treat MPS as a Poetry School and I learn from ALL the Poets I comment on ! Please check Sunrise Sunset.
Your MPS FRIEND : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 24th, 2018 16:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU FAY : For sharing something of your process from idea to draft to finished Poem. Yours are always perfect as presented ! I always learn something about poetic form from your posts ! Today you have presented four balanced quatrains with an xaxa xbxb etc rhyme & half-rhyme pattern. It reads and recites well which is the hallmark of a good Poem ! In my todays POEM (which I have called a 6 4 4 Sonnet !) The content SUNRISE : SUNSET alas overtook a consistent Rhyme Pattern (BRIAN is teaching me to be a better poet) : He did not edit this one because I wanted to surprise him. I treat MPS as a Poetry School and I learn from ALL the Poets I comment on ! Please check Sunrise Sunset.
Your MPS FRIEND : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 24th, 2018 16:30
NEW NOTIONS.
dusk arising said:
Ah and so to bed to rest your active mind. For your past works reveal the dawning is such a creative time within your soul.
Awake refreshed and dazzling. Seeing as only you see. Writing as only you. Creating within us your vivid pictures as if a scent were transporting us.
Sleep perchance to awaken creative.
October 24th, 2018 06:53
dusk arising said:
Ah and so to bed to rest your active mind. For your past works reveal the dawning is such a creative time within your soul.
Awake refreshed and dazzling. Seeing as only you see. Writing as only you. Creating within us your vivid pictures as if a scent were transporting us.
Sleep perchance to awaken creative.
October 24th, 2018 06:53
INTER-SPUN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a wonderful Love Poem : Which I appreciate as a Woman because it is written from your perspective ! In the past 15 years I have experienced \"Aspects of Love\" : Flames of Desire : Attraction & Ranges of Passion ! I have experienced \"Levels of Love\" : Many faceted & exciting which has grown from Tenuous Beginnings ! Then I met BRIAN : We were 28 & 33 : We knew the \"Silver Secrets of Love\" : so we went for GOLD ! Being apart just at a time when we most need each other is difficult : BUT our LOVE grows deeper day by day : AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing about LOVE : LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 17:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a wonderful Love Poem : Which I appreciate as a Woman because it is written from your perspective ! In the past 15 years I have experienced \"Aspects of Love\" : Flames of Desire : Attraction & Ranges of Passion ! I have experienced \"Levels of Love\" : Many faceted & exciting which has grown from Tenuous Beginnings ! Then I met BRIAN : We were 28 & 33 : We knew the \"Silver Secrets of Love\" : so we went for GOLD ! Being apart just at a time when we most need each other is difficult : BUT our LOVE grows deeper day by day : AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing about LOVE : LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 17:36
INTER-SPUN.
sylviasearcher said:
I so want to go for gold fay. It sounds like what we all need to believe in
October 23rd, 2018 06:35
sylviasearcher said:
I so want to go for gold fay. It sounds like what we all need to believe in
October 23rd, 2018 06:35
CONTRIVANCE.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, the imagery in your poem brings the written word to life. A wonderful write and a joy to read. :)
October 22nd, 2018 16:03
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, the imagery in your poem brings the written word to life. A wonderful write and a joy to read. :)
October 22nd, 2018 16:03
CONTRIVANCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Greetings FAY ~ BRIAN here ! Nice to communicate with you again ! I have never been asked to paint a Lady\'s Portrait ~ But if I am asked I will take note of your observations.
1. Colour is paramount
2. Enhance Beauty & Presence
3. Wistful NOT Wanton
4. Loving & Romantic.
For me to try to capture all Angela\'s attributes in Acrylic would be a Bridge too too Far !
Thanks BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡
October 22nd, 2018 14:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Greetings FAY ~ BRIAN here ! Nice to communicate with you again ! I have never been asked to paint a Lady\'s Portrait ~ But if I am asked I will take note of your observations.
1. Colour is paramount
2. Enhance Beauty & Presence
3. Wistful NOT Wanton
4. Loving & Romantic.
For me to try to capture all Angela\'s attributes in Acrylic would be a Bridge too too Far !
Thanks BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡
October 22nd, 2018 14:49
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