Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
WITH YOU.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, this poem is filled with sentiment from the heart. A fine romantic piece that hammers home the intimacy with the repeating line, \"Or was it
those breakfasts with you ?\"
Excellent write, Fay. :-)
November 21st, 2018 13:26
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, this poem is filled with sentiment from the heart. A fine romantic piece that hammers home the intimacy with the repeating line, \"Or was it
those breakfasts with you ?\"
Excellent write, Fay. :-)
November 21st, 2018 13:26
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Neville said:
What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for your poems aesthetic/visual appearance and value but because often, sculptured poems dont seem to work, at least not for me. These however, most certainly do. Thoroughly enjoyed.... Neville
November 21st, 2018 12:21
Neville said:
What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for your poems aesthetic/visual appearance and value but because often, sculptured poems dont seem to work, at least not for me. These however, most certainly do. Thoroughly enjoyed.... Neville
November 21st, 2018 12:21
WITH YOU.
Debsspot said:
Beautiful words Fay. You\'ve captured all the \"little\" things that make romance so special.
November 21st, 2018 05:46
Debsspot said:
Beautiful words Fay. You\'ve captured all the \"little\" things that make romance so special.
November 21st, 2018 05:46
WITH YOU.
Michael Edwards said:
Your work should be widely acclaimed - another great piece.
November 21st, 2018 05:25
Michael Edwards said:
Your work should be widely acclaimed - another great piece.
November 21st, 2018 05:25
WITH YOU.
orchidee said:
Yep, it was me. I scoffed all the cornflakes. Very romantic! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
November 21st, 2018 04:21
orchidee said:
Yep, it was me. I scoffed all the cornflakes. Very romantic! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
November 21st, 2018 04:21
BEAUTIFUL.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about my favourite time of the year - thank you.
November 21st, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about my favourite time of the year - thank you.
November 21st, 2018 01:44
BEAUTIFUL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ Winter has visited the East (Essex) as well as the West ! Love the picture it screams AUTUMN. For ANGELA it is 20+ C and it will be Summer in 2 weeks (December !) I love Poems in triplets ! Your meter is perfect so it flows beautifully as free verse with a soupcon of half~rhyme ! Scarf weather ~ well wrapped up to watch the last leaves falling enjoying the crunch of the leaves and the crisp of the day ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2018 18:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ Winter has visited the East (Essex) as well as the West ! Love the picture it screams AUTUMN. For ANGELA it is 20+ C and it will be Summer in 2 weeks (December !) I love Poems in triplets ! Your meter is perfect so it flows beautifully as free verse with a soupcon of half~rhyme ! Scarf weather ~ well wrapped up to watch the last leaves falling enjoying the crunch of the leaves and the crisp of the day ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2018 18:51
BEAUTIFUL.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your crisp imagery detailing Autumn walks brings us to the realization that Summer\'s warmth has left us for another year.
Nicely written, Fay. :-)
November 20th, 2018 12:33
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your crisp imagery detailing Autumn walks brings us to the realization that Summer\'s warmth has left us for another year.
Nicely written, Fay. :-)
November 20th, 2018 12:33
BEAUTIFUL.
orchidee said:
Not so bad with the sun-shiny blueness, but horrid if black as thunder! A fine write Fay.
Oh well only about a month to go, and it gets lighter again! Wishing the year away?!
November 20th, 2018 11:30
orchidee said:
Not so bad with the sun-shiny blueness, but horrid if black as thunder! A fine write Fay.
Oh well only about a month to go, and it gets lighter again! Wishing the year away?!
November 20th, 2018 11:30
BEAUTIFUL.
Michael Edwards said:
An inspirational piece - and I too love mornings like this - a gentle walk in Autumn\'s arms.
November 20th, 2018 10:45
Michael Edwards said:
An inspirational piece - and I too love mornings like this - a gentle walk in Autumn\'s arms.
November 20th, 2018 10:45
BEAUTIFUL.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your poem “Beautiful” is dreamy and delightful as is your choice of pic!
I love these lines...
“Walk ousts sleep as drowsy brains
doused with dawn air
stay wakefully keen all day.”
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
November 20th, 2018 10:40
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your poem “Beautiful” is dreamy and delightful as is your choice of pic!
I love these lines...
“Walk ousts sleep as drowsy brains
doused with dawn air
stay wakefully keen all day.”
Beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
November 20th, 2018 10:40
CARRYING ON.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay, I can see those fisher-folk in your words.
November 20th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay, I can see those fisher-folk in your words.
November 20th, 2018 01:10
CARRYING ON.
Michael Edwards said:
The scene is before me - beautiful write dear Fay
November 19th, 2018 09:09
Michael Edwards said:
The scene is before me - beautiful write dear Fay
November 19th, 2018 09:09
CARRYING ON.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY FOR ANOTHER GEM ! UK Members will recognise LANDS END as the tip of the CORNWALL PENINSULAR and a Fishing Ground. Love the picture of the Cornwall Fishing Boats. Its all Hands on Deck when ~ The Boats come in ! ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Im in my lunch break and Angela is fast asleep in NZ (3 am !).
November 19th, 2018 09:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY FOR ANOTHER GEM ! UK Members will recognise LANDS END as the tip of the CORNWALL PENINSULAR and a Fishing Ground. Love the picture of the Cornwall Fishing Boats. Its all Hands on Deck when ~ The Boats come in ! ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Im in my lunch break and Angela is fast asleep in NZ (3 am !).
November 19th, 2018 09:03
TRANSFORMATION.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words...
a kaleidoscope of colors coruscating from the screen! I thoroughly enjoyed your phenomenal poem...including the choice for the background of your “avatar”! It’s perfect for you!
🌈 Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
November 16th, 2018 21:25
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Absolutely stunning!
Your words...
a kaleidoscope of colors coruscating from the screen! I thoroughly enjoyed your phenomenal poem...including the choice for the background of your “avatar”! It’s perfect for you!
🌈 Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
November 16th, 2018 21:25
TRANSFORMATION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ! I adore Poems about COLOUR & Rainbows & Sunrises & Sunsets etc ! As you say WHITE LIGHT conceals the whole Spectrum. Shine it through a PRISM (or a raindrop) and it is refracted into Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Indigo Violet and an infinite range of shades. The ones you have shared are very evocative ! Carmine : Aquamarine : Lavender : Ginger & Plum : Awesome ! Ruth is a PHYSICIST (Radiographer) so she explained all the scientific terms you introduced in the second half of your ODE ! Translucent : Vibrations : Chromatic Resonance : Alchemy and Spectroscope etc. Your vocabulary is infinite. Thanks for sharing and being such a prolific WORDSMITH : Love ANGELA & RUTH 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 16th, 2018 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ! I adore Poems about COLOUR & Rainbows & Sunrises & Sunsets etc ! As you say WHITE LIGHT conceals the whole Spectrum. Shine it through a PRISM (or a raindrop) and it is refracted into Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Indigo Violet and an infinite range of shades. The ones you have shared are very evocative ! Carmine : Aquamarine : Lavender : Ginger & Plum : Awesome ! Ruth is a PHYSICIST (Radiographer) so she explained all the scientific terms you introduced in the second half of your ODE ! Translucent : Vibrations : Chromatic Resonance : Alchemy and Spectroscope etc. Your vocabulary is infinite. Thanks for sharing and being such a prolific WORDSMITH : Love ANGELA & RUTH 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 16th, 2018 16:37
DUET.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, I could hear that nightingale through your words.
November 16th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, I could hear that nightingale through your words.
November 16th, 2018 01:10
DUET.
Netashi said:
This details I can almost hear and feel I wish I read this at night on my stairs. Beautiful write Fay keep it up
-Theta
November 15th, 2018 14:54
Netashi said:
This details I can almost hear and feel I wish I read this at night on my stairs. Beautiful write Fay keep it up
-Theta
November 15th, 2018 14:54
DUET.
orchidee said:
This is not at all \'odious\' (ode-ious) but a fine ode Fay!
November 15th, 2018 07:15
orchidee said:
This is not at all \'odious\' (ode-ious) but a fine ode Fay!
November 15th, 2018 07:15
DUET.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Angela here : Love the picture and I love Birdsong ! Cornwall is a Magic Place and I am pleased that your observations of the sights & sounds of Nature so move your Muse to produce delightful Poetry. Brian & Mike try to educate me about Poetic Form : BUT you simply present your own style of fluid verse : which I love but could never emulate. It is a perfection of verbal cadence ! Thanks You for being You and freely sharing your poetic Elegance with us 24/7 !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Angela here : Love the picture and I love Birdsong ! Cornwall is a Magic Place and I am pleased that your observations of the sights & sounds of Nature so move your Muse to produce delightful Poetry. Brian & Mike try to educate me about Poetic Form : BUT you simply present your own style of fluid verse : which I love but could never emulate. It is a perfection of verbal cadence ! Thanks You for being You and freely sharing your poetic Elegance with us 24/7 !
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 06:02
CHAINS.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Well-written Fay.
No tears!
You may also view it as light rather than darkness or an escape from the chains that bind. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:46
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Well-written Fay.
No tears!
You may also view it as light rather than darkness or an escape from the chains that bind. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:46
CHAINS.
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Aww, and why those chains break that hold people sane, when I begin to sing?! heehee.
November 13th, 2018 07:17
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Aww, and why those chains break that hold people sane, when I begin to sing?! heehee.
November 13th, 2018 07:17
CHAINS.
kingOfOne said:
I hope you see the sun again, fay.. loved it to say the absolute least.
November 13th, 2018 04:39
kingOfOne said:
I hope you see the sun again, fay.. loved it to say the absolute least.
November 13th, 2018 04:39
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