Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
STRANGENESS.
dusk arising said:
I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the universe no less!
Given all that, you\'d think i\'d recognise a picture of my relatives, but i don\'t.
Yes those heavenly bodies are truly amazing and tempt mankind to invent/create new knowledge about our relationship with the universe - most of which goes over my head (pun not intended).
I far prefer your poetic approach and appreciation of what\'s up there.
November 12th, 2018 12:58
dusk arising said:
I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the universe no less!
Given all that, you\'d think i\'d recognise a picture of my relatives, but i don\'t.
Yes those heavenly bodies are truly amazing and tempt mankind to invent/create new knowledge about our relationship with the universe - most of which goes over my head (pun not intended).
I far prefer your poetic approach and appreciation of what\'s up there.
November 12th, 2018 12:58
STRANGENESS.
Michael Edwards said:
I never be ceased to be amazed by the sky both during the day and at night when it displays its jewels.
November 12th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
I never be ceased to be amazed by the sky both during the day and at night when it displays its jewels.
November 12th, 2018 10:42
STRANGENESS.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
There truly “is awe beyond measure in” this “photographed nebula” as there’s awe in the power of your pen! Your ability to describe such beauty is incredible! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 10:11
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
There truly “is awe beyond measure in” this “photographed nebula” as there’s awe in the power of your pen! Your ability to describe such beauty is incredible! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 10:11
STRANGENESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : The full extent of the Universe is beyond Human Comprehension ! However the NEBULAE we see through the Hubble Telescope have given us glimpse of GLORY ! Their shapes & colours are literally \"Out of this World\" !
The EYE of GOD reminds us the without GOD our CREATOR : there would be NO Universe : Solar System : Planet Earth or YOU & US : AMEN.
Billy Graham said \"I look through a Microscope - God is There : I look around me - God is there also and when I look through a Telescope - GOD sure is there as well !
The Heavens declare the GLORY of GOD : Planet Earth sure shows His Handiwork. Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 12th, 2018 09:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : The full extent of the Universe is beyond Human Comprehension ! However the NEBULAE we see through the Hubble Telescope have given us glimpse of GLORY ! Their shapes & colours are literally \"Out of this World\" !
The EYE of GOD reminds us the without GOD our CREATOR : there would be NO Universe : Solar System : Planet Earth or YOU & US : AMEN.
Billy Graham said \"I look through a Microscope - God is There : I look around me - God is there also and when I look through a Telescope - GOD sure is there as well !
The Heavens declare the GLORY of GOD : Planet Earth sure shows His Handiwork. Thanks for sharing : Blessings & Love : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 12th, 2018 09:23
STRANGENESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven’s mysteries will be shown to us in time.
November 12th, 2018 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven’s mysteries will be shown to us in time.
November 12th, 2018 09:00
STRANGENESS.
Christina8 said:
Wonderful picture! A beautiful write about it! Very nice, indeed.
November 12th, 2018 08:54
Christina8 said:
Wonderful picture! A beautiful write about it! Very nice, indeed.
November 12th, 2018 08:54
STRANGENESS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. What\'s strange too, is that I got cut orf - a poem would not upload, now I\'m out of sequence. Can\'t upload another until 24 hours is up! lol.
November 12th, 2018 05:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. What\'s strange too, is that I got cut orf - a poem would not upload, now I\'m out of sequence. Can\'t upload another until 24 hours is up! lol.
November 12th, 2018 05:33
WAR CRY.
Lorna said:
Beautiful tribute Fay...... I had a great uncle \"Alec\" who was gassed and had to live in a tent when he got home in order to breath properly.... he died soon after returning - he was very young and has a haunting and gentle face (his photos). Over and over again young men go off thinking it\'s a great adventure.
November 10th, 2018 08:32
Lorna said:
Beautiful tribute Fay...... I had a great uncle \"Alec\" who was gassed and had to live in a tent when he got home in order to breath properly.... he died soon after returning - he was very young and has a haunting and gentle face (his photos). Over and over again young men go off thinking it\'s a great adventure.
November 10th, 2018 08:32
WAR CRY.
Michael Edwards said:
May we indeed - they did it for our liberty and independence - such a sacrifice to pay.
November 9th, 2018 09:47
Michael Edwards said:
May we indeed - they did it for our liberty and independence - such a sacrifice to pay.
November 9th, 2018 09:47
WAR CRY.
dusk arising said:
Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay.
I find this period of rememberance very moving every year. There but for the grace of god go I.
November 9th, 2018 04:12
dusk arising said:
Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay.
I find this period of rememberance very moving every year. There but for the grace of god go I.
November 9th, 2018 04:12
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Netashi said:
An hourglass poem for when we between worlds hmmm very interesting,as always your poems are beautiful and meaningful.Keep up the good work.
-Theta
November 8th, 2018 14:32
Netashi said:
An hourglass poem for when we between worlds hmmm very interesting,as always your poems are beautiful and meaningful.Keep up the good work.
-Theta
November 8th, 2018 14:32
BETWEEN WORLDS.
Michael Edwards said:
A SUPERB WRITE IN BOTH CONTENT AND SCULPTURED FORM - A MASTERPIECE.
November 8th, 2018 09:57
Michael Edwards said:
A SUPERB WRITE IN BOTH CONTENT AND SCULPTURED FORM - A MASTERPIECE.
November 8th, 2018 09:57
BETWEEN WORLDS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY a non-punctuated sculptured Poem ! I have printed it out for my Poetry Scrap Book and it looks as Elegant & as Hourglass as YOU ! I love the poetic sentiments in your DIABLO in praise of Poets & Poetry. For ME : Your base-triplet encapsulates all that I know & love about poetry. Sharing on MPS makes me a BETTER POET : AMEN
To describe life : poets slip outside reality
to spin cotton-wool dreams and mind-flying
between worlds : steal time to share fine words !
Reading this FAY has made me shed tears of appreciation for the Perfection of Poetry you freely share with us every day. It always elevates my Spirit. It is so so comforting that I am never JEALOUS : just INSPIRED to be a better and more substantial POET : AMEN
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 8th, 2018 04:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY a non-punctuated sculptured Poem ! I have printed it out for my Poetry Scrap Book and it looks as Elegant & as Hourglass as YOU ! I love the poetic sentiments in your DIABLO in praise of Poets & Poetry. For ME : Your base-triplet encapsulates all that I know & love about poetry. Sharing on MPS makes me a BETTER POET : AMEN
To describe life : poets slip outside reality
to spin cotton-wool dreams and mind-flying
between worlds : steal time to share fine words !
Reading this FAY has made me shed tears of appreciation for the Perfection of Poetry you freely share with us every day. It always elevates my Spirit. It is so so comforting that I am never JEALOUS : just INSPIRED to be a better and more substantial POET : AMEN
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 8th, 2018 04:51
SPIRITED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER FAY : Its 8 am Tuesday here and this is just the sort of encouragement a LADY (trying to cope with a Professional Job) : NEEDS ! I need to be SPIRITED in every aspect of my Job as a DEDICATED HEALER !
LOVE is the ANSWER !
Defiant in the face of adversity
Standing Tall in the face of humiliation
Proud & Erect to eradicate : Hurt @ root level
LOVE always finds a way to BEAUTY & PEACE ~ AMEN
This mantra will help me with all and any situations : I may face today ~ OK
Thanks for caring & sharing
Peace & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 7th, 2018 14:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER FAY : Its 8 am Tuesday here and this is just the sort of encouragement a LADY (trying to cope with a Professional Job) : NEEDS ! I need to be SPIRITED in every aspect of my Job as a DEDICATED HEALER !
LOVE is the ANSWER !
Defiant in the face of adversity
Standing Tall in the face of humiliation
Proud & Erect to eradicate : Hurt @ root level
LOVE always finds a way to BEAUTY & PEACE ~ AMEN
This mantra will help me with all and any situations : I may face today ~ OK
Thanks for caring & sharing
Peace & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 7th, 2018 14:09
SPIRITED.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay you write some superb lines which all weld together into a glorious whole - another beauty.
November 7th, 2018 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Fay you write some superb lines which all weld together into a glorious whole - another beauty.
November 7th, 2018 10:33
SECRETS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s pearls are wonderful, as are your words Fay.
November 7th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s pearls are wonderful, as are your words Fay.
November 7th, 2018 01:40
SECRETS.
Netashi said:
A good read for the morning, simple and beautiful. Great write Fay keep it up.
- Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:52
Netashi said:
A good read for the morning, simple and beautiful. Great write Fay keep it up.
- Theta
November 6th, 2018 13:52
SECRETS.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. All that happening at beak of day!
November 6th, 2018 11:21
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. All that happening at beak of day!
November 6th, 2018 11:21
SECRETS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In our experience FAY ~ NATURE always SURPRISES and never DISAPPOINTS ! ANGELA & I both share the awesome Beauties of the UK (especially the West Country !) and Spain & New Zealand. Every Season and every day (wherever we are) is filled with surprises !
Your perfect Poem highlights the Glory of the Blackbird : just one of the Millions of Natures Pearls : that reveal Gods Glory : AMEN Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In our experience FAY ~ NATURE always SURPRISES and never DISAPPOINTS ! ANGELA & I both share the awesome Beauties of the UK (especially the West Country !) and Spain & New Zealand. Every Season and every day (wherever we are) is filled with surprises !
Your perfect Poem highlights the Glory of the Blackbird : just one of the Millions of Natures Pearls : that reveal Gods Glory : AMEN Love in the Spirit : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:45
SECRETS.
Lorna said:
A beautiful start to the day Fay - lovely morning...........
November 6th, 2018 05:12
Lorna said:
A beautiful start to the day Fay - lovely morning...........
November 6th, 2018 05:12
VICTORIOUS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : For a wonderful ODE to LOVE ! It really covers all the Phases Brian & I have been through to get where we are TODAY ! 11 thousand miles apart : and yet two separated HEARTS still beating as ONE : AMEN.
LOVE Dispenses
LOVE Impregnates
LOVE Decapitates
LOVE Invalidates
All NEGATIVES are eliminated and All that is POSITIVE accentuated.
LOVE always WINS ! Thank you for Caring :
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 5th, 2018 14:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : For a wonderful ODE to LOVE ! It really covers all the Phases Brian & I have been through to get where we are TODAY ! 11 thousand miles apart : and yet two separated HEARTS still beating as ONE : AMEN.
LOVE Dispenses
LOVE Impregnates
LOVE Decapitates
LOVE Invalidates
All NEGATIVES are eliminated and All that is POSITIVE accentuated.
LOVE always WINS ! Thank you for Caring :
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 5th, 2018 14:36
VICTORIOUS.
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh \'eck wish I was young again - a super write Fay.
November 5th, 2018 11:34
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh \'eck wish I was young again - a super write Fay.
November 5th, 2018 11:34
VICTORIOUS.
dusk arising said:
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece today if one was looking through the eyes of a person who had never been smitten?
I can\'t imagine. There\'s no going back!
November 5th, 2018 11:16
dusk arising said:
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece today if one was looking through the eyes of a person who had never been smitten?
I can\'t imagine. There\'s no going back!
November 5th, 2018 11:16
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