Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
IN TUNE.
Gino said:
Lovely write Fay. Embracing time between song and span. Thanks for this treat of a read...
October 21st, 2018 23:13
Gino said:
Lovely write Fay. Embracing time between song and span. Thanks for this treat of a read...
October 21st, 2018 23:13
IN TUNE.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your imagery is impressive in this poem, Fay. Nicely penned and a joy to read. :)
October 19th, 2018 14:56
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your imagery is impressive in this poem, Fay. Nicely penned and a joy to read. :)
October 19th, 2018 14:56
GROWTH.
Christina8 said:
In my world I must allow my children to do their homework on their ipads but books are essential to learning too. And good old fashioned exercise! In this world, we must be firm with the electronic device bit. Great write!!
October 18th, 2018 20:50
Christina8 said:
In my world I must allow my children to do their homework on their ipads but books are essential to learning too. And good old fashioned exercise! In this world, we must be firm with the electronic device bit. Great write!!
October 18th, 2018 20:50
GROWTH.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, they must be able to learn for themselves but with understanding guidance from there parents. In the first five years of a childs life they gain seventy five percent of their total life’s knowledge.
October 17th, 2018 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, they must be able to learn for themselves but with understanding guidance from there parents. In the first five years of a childs life they gain seventy five percent of their total life’s knowledge.
October 17th, 2018 07:55
GROWTH.
Michael Edwards said:
They can be stifled but they can also have too much freedom. My daughter only allows her 5year old to spend 1 hour a day on electronic devices and as a result he takes himself off to do reading, homework (even at this age) and play outside - so different to those children who are not guided in any way and left to their own devices. Love, interest and guidance are key but so many modern parents seem to fail at the the firmness bit.
October 17th, 2018 07:28
Michael Edwards said:
They can be stifled but they can also have too much freedom. My daughter only allows her 5year old to spend 1 hour a day on electronic devices and as a result he takes himself off to do reading, homework (even at this age) and play outside - so different to those children who are not guided in any way and left to their own devices. Love, interest and guidance are key but so many modern parents seem to fail at the the firmness bit.
October 17th, 2018 07:28
DUO-LIQUEUR
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the words mixed into a fine Rioja.
October 17th, 2018 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the words mixed into a fine Rioja.
October 17th, 2018 00:16
DUO-LIQUEUR
Syd said:
Great write Faye. Yeah I too could do with a bottle or two.
- Syd
October 16th, 2018 14:19
Syd said:
Great write Faye. Yeah I too could do with a bottle or two.
- Syd
October 16th, 2018 14:19
DUO-LIQUEUR
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh - I\'m off tp Aldi to get a bottle - A super weaving of the language Fay.
October 16th, 2018 11:36
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh - I\'m off tp Aldi to get a bottle - A super weaving of the language Fay.
October 16th, 2018 11:36
DUO-LIQUEUR
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But oh, I might swoon. It\'s pesky Fido keeps barking at anything, even remotely \'swoony!\' heehee.
October 16th, 2018 06:08
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But oh, I might swoon. It\'s pesky Fido keeps barking at anything, even remotely \'swoony!\' heehee.
October 16th, 2018 06:08
DUO-LIQUEUR
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oooh Fay...
Made me put the kettle on
Love the weaving of these words very playful
Great write
October 16th, 2018 05:42
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oooh Fay...
Made me put the kettle on
Love the weaving of these words very playful
Great write
October 16th, 2018 05:42
CLEAN AIR.
Michael Edwards said:
Fresh smelling air - nothing like it. And what a great write to celebrate it.
October 15th, 2018 11:20
Michael Edwards said:
Fresh smelling air - nothing like it. And what a great write to celebrate it.
October 15th, 2018 11:20
CHESIL.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, you write about the sea in such refreshing language. I love the images your poem has produced in this reader\'s mind.
An excellent write. :)
October 14th, 2018 17:24
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, you write about the sea in such refreshing language. I love the images your poem has produced in this reader\'s mind.
An excellent write. :)
October 14th, 2018 17:24
COLOUR-POWER.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you painted a lovely and colorful image
October 14th, 2018 16:27
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you painted a lovely and colorful image
October 14th, 2018 16:27
COLOUR-POWER.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Could the Human Eye evolve ? I don\'t think so ! GOD our Creator put a lot of creativity into the Human Eye ~ It sees pictures in 3D ~ in Motion and in Colour ! God designed it to analyse and differentiate the VISIBLE SPECTRUM from RED through to VIOLET (R O Y G B I V) and to be able to differentiate between hundreds of different shades. The colours of the CLOTHES we over & underwear all send out a message and also (as you point out) we all have a coloured Aura which only the Spiritual can detect ~ this Aura reflects the vibrations of the soul ~AMEN. Colours do stimulate and control our senses Red stimulates the BODY ~ Yellow cheers ~ Green calms ~ Blue stimulates the MIND & Purple the SPIRIT ! Interior Designers & the Rag Trade are well aware of the effect of COLOUR on US ~ Body Soul & Spirit ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing very stimulating ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💜🧡
Please check our latest FUSION ~ WHAT MAKES YOU HAPPY ?
October 12th, 2018 19:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Could the Human Eye evolve ? I don\'t think so ! GOD our Creator put a lot of creativity into the Human Eye ~ It sees pictures in 3D ~ in Motion and in Colour ! God designed it to analyse and differentiate the VISIBLE SPECTRUM from RED through to VIOLET (R O Y G B I V) and to be able to differentiate between hundreds of different shades. The colours of the CLOTHES we over & underwear all send out a message and also (as you point out) we all have a coloured Aura which only the Spiritual can detect ~ this Aura reflects the vibrations of the soul ~AMEN. Colours do stimulate and control our senses Red stimulates the BODY ~ Yellow cheers ~ Green calms ~ Blue stimulates the MIND & Purple the SPIRIT ! Interior Designers & the Rag Trade are well aware of the effect of COLOUR on US ~ Body Soul & Spirit ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing very stimulating ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💜🧡
Please check our latest FUSION ~ WHAT MAKES YOU HAPPY ?
October 12th, 2018 19:21
COLOUR-POWER.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
Blessed are the senses
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 08:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
Blessed are the senses
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 08:08
COLOUR-POWER.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, without colour nature not be so glorious.
October 12th, 2018 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, without colour nature not be so glorious.
October 12th, 2018 07:53
CHESIL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY CHESIL BEACH ~ 18 MILES long in DORSET England and it is reckoned about 200 billion pebbles but one should examine them in situ and NOT remove them ! Lovely POEM exulting the beauty uniqueness and history of this pebble abundant beach. As one searches for ~ fossils & gemstones ~ no two pebbles are identical ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my FLAMINGOS ~ Yours as always BRIAN
October 11th, 2018 16:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY CHESIL BEACH ~ 18 MILES long in DORSET England and it is reckoned about 200 billion pebbles but one should examine them in situ and NOT remove them ! Lovely POEM exulting the beauty uniqueness and history of this pebble abundant beach. As one searches for ~ fossils & gemstones ~ no two pebbles are identical ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my FLAMINGOS ~ Yours as always BRIAN
October 11th, 2018 16:39
CHESIL.
dusk arising said:
I know this place, seen in its majesty from high on Portland. They say the whole bank/beach was washed up in some tremendous storm. It doesn\'t seem in any hurry to be swallowed up.
From atop the bank swans can be seen gracefully making way in the Fleets to the landside where once the breakers crashed. Such contrast. And yes out to sea around the Bill the currents race to wreck the unsuspecting.
Methinks you know this place well.
October 11th, 2018 14:55
dusk arising said:
I know this place, seen in its majesty from high on Portland. They say the whole bank/beach was washed up in some tremendous storm. It doesn\'t seem in any hurry to be swallowed up.
From atop the bank swans can be seen gracefully making way in the Fleets to the landside where once the breakers crashed. Such contrast. And yes out to sea around the Bill the currents race to wreck the unsuspecting.
Methinks you know this place well.
October 11th, 2018 14:55
CHESIL.
Michael Edwards said:
Captures the area so very well - fine work dear Fay.
October 11th, 2018 12:32
Michael Edwards said:
Captures the area so very well - fine work dear Fay.
October 11th, 2018 12:32
CHESIL.
kevin browne said:
You see the seas water there, well me and my father used to trawl for scallops. We worked that area frequently which within those years alongside 20 other fishing boats it was banned from from British fishing boats to fish there. However the French trawlers fished there legally.. Great place, great scenery and just like your poem, very relaxing.
October 11th, 2018 11:00
kevin browne said:
You see the seas water there, well me and my father used to trawl for scallops. We worked that area frequently which within those years alongside 20 other fishing boats it was banned from from British fishing boats to fish there. However the French trawlers fished there legally.. Great place, great scenery and just like your poem, very relaxing.
October 11th, 2018 11:00
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