Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
BOUGHT..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
C\'est la Vie FAY ~ For thousands (yea millions) of Girls (& some Men) who flirt on the edge of Show & Glamour Business and never make it big-time but on the way lose direction & morals & ultimately ~ Self Respect ~Some of my older Students in Beauty & Media are heading in that direction and even 1 or 2 in my very Extended Family ! It is sad but true and very prevalent in today\'s very secular and amoral Society ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN.
October 10th, 2018 17:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
C\'est la Vie FAY ~ For thousands (yea millions) of Girls (& some Men) who flirt on the edge of Show & Glamour Business and never make it big-time but on the way lose direction & morals & ultimately ~ Self Respect ~Some of my older Students in Beauty & Media are heading in that direction and even 1 or 2 in my very Extended Family ! It is sad but true and very prevalent in today\'s very secular and amoral Society ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN.
October 10th, 2018 17:59
BOUGHT..
orchidee said:
A thoughtful story Fay.
Meanwhile - I reversed and crashed into a lamp-post. Doh! I would only have swooned anyway!
October 10th, 2018 07:09
orchidee said:
A thoughtful story Fay.
Meanwhile - I reversed and crashed into a lamp-post. Doh! I would only have swooned anyway!
October 10th, 2018 07:09
CAGED.
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
My first read of this exceptional poem reminded me of Maya Angelouās āI Know Why The Caged Bird Singsā- - -metaphorically comparable!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:15
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
My first read of this exceptional poem reminded me of Maya Angelouās āI Know Why The Caged Bird Singsā- - -metaphorically comparable!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:15
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and for the record I\'m not in the WI although I do sometimes give talks to them - but I forgive Orchi.
October 8th, 2018 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and for the record I\'m not in the WI although I do sometimes give talks to them - but I forgive Orchi.
October 8th, 2018 11:44
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. One place I knew insisted on hats or scarves or some head-covering for women. Hope it\'s not irreverent to say, but it made some of them look frumpy, or a gathering of the W.I. They can be terrifying, you know! lol. Have I put my foot in it? Are you in the W.I.?
October 8th, 2018 07:20
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. One place I knew insisted on hats or scarves or some head-covering for women. Hope it\'s not irreverent to say, but it made some of them look frumpy, or a gathering of the W.I. They can be terrifying, you know! lol. Have I put my foot in it? Are you in the W.I.?
October 8th, 2018 07:20
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
WEll penned Fay
Some great descriptive here of a life well led I wonder what a city version of this would read like
NO... I hope I never find out
October 8th, 2018 07:13
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
WEll penned Fay
Some great descriptive here of a life well led I wonder what a city version of this would read like
NO... I hope I never find out
October 8th, 2018 07:13
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
Christina8 said:
What a fantastic poem! \"Hatted heads bow\"...We don\'t much do hats in america. I don\'t even own a hat! I would love to attend a church in England! I digress.....back to your poem, it is very descriptive and I read it twice because it was so wonderful!
October 8th, 2018 06:56
Christina8 said:
What a fantastic poem! \"Hatted heads bow\"...We don\'t much do hats in america. I don\'t even own a hat! I would love to attend a church in England! I digress.....back to your poem, it is very descriptive and I read it twice because it was so wonderful!
October 8th, 2018 06:56
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
onepauly said:
sunday,
the last day of the week
and the beginning of a new one.
October 8th, 2018 03:54
onepauly said:
sunday,
the last day of the week
and the beginning of a new one.
October 8th, 2018 03:54
BITTER.
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Fay.
Meanwhile - release feels better for one when one has gagged me, so I can\'t sing! Aww, I\'m horrible to me. lol.
October 5th, 2018 04:11
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Fay.
Meanwhile - release feels better for one when one has gagged me, so I can\'t sing! Aww, I\'m horrible to me. lol.
October 5th, 2018 04:11
BITTER.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ I\'m just off to work and have had no time to en an ODE today. Love the Shape of your Poem (very El Greco) and it looks like falling tear drops which befits the Subject.
Sadly so often there is neither time nor opportunity for those BITTER GOODBYES ~ and the sadness hangs suspended in time FOREVER.
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BLESSINGS BRIAN & ANGELA š§”š§”š§”
October 5th, 2018 03:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ I\'m just off to work and have had no time to en an ODE today. Love the Shape of your Poem (very El Greco) and it looks like falling tear drops which befits the Subject.
Sadly so often there is neither time nor opportunity for those BITTER GOODBYES ~ and the sadness hangs suspended in time FOREVER.
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BLESSINGS BRIAN & ANGELA š§”š§”š§”
October 5th, 2018 03:03
BITTER.
dusk arising said:
Release feels better when the mind knows the situation was not right for the both of you. Love shared is the most wonderful flower we have in our lives and from it spring many riches. Love misplaced is a torturous existence teaching us things we have to learn painfully.
Either way, Love endures.
October 5th, 2018 02:59
dusk arising said:
Release feels better when the mind knows the situation was not right for the both of you. Love shared is the most wonderful flower we have in our lives and from it spring many riches. Love misplaced is a torturous existence teaching us things we have to learn painfully.
Either way, Love endures.
October 5th, 2018 02:59
BREAKOUT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once more Fay, I have watched dawn get up in all her many guises.
October 5th, 2018 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once more Fay, I have watched dawn get up in all her many guises.
October 5th, 2018 00:33
UNANSWERED.
Netashi said:
A beautiful and well thought out write as per usual Fay, keep up the magnificent work
-Theta
October 3rd, 2018 13:32
Netashi said:
A beautiful and well thought out write as per usual Fay, keep up the magnificent work
-Theta
October 3rd, 2018 13:32
UNANSWERED.
Michael Edwards said:
What a great read Fay - thanks for posting.
October 3rd, 2018 04:36
Michael Edwards said:
What a great read Fay - thanks for posting.
October 3rd, 2018 04:36
UNANSWERED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL NOSTALGIC POEM FAY ~ thanks for sharing ! We all get stranded from time to time \"out of our comfort zones\". Thus far I\'ve managed to make it back in time ~ those that don\'t perish. Of such is LIFE & (sadly) DEATH. Yours as always BRIAN Please check my Poem on WORDS ~ Thanks B !
October 3rd, 2018 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL NOSTALGIC POEM FAY ~ thanks for sharing ! We all get stranded from time to time \"out of our comfort zones\". Thus far I\'ve managed to make it back in time ~ those that don\'t perish. Of such is LIFE & (sadly) DEATH. Yours as always BRIAN Please check my Poem on WORDS ~ Thanks B !
October 3rd, 2018 03:30
SENSUALITY.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poetry, Faye.
I once had the chance to see a belly dancer and her movements were unbelievable, like those of the Hawaiian dancers.
So good to give the belly dancer the recognition she deserves.
I loved the originality of you poem. and thanks for posting. :)
October 2nd, 2018 14:17
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poetry, Faye.
I once had the chance to see a belly dancer and her movements were unbelievable, like those of the Hawaiian dancers.
So good to give the belly dancer the recognition she deserves.
I loved the originality of you poem. and thanks for posting. :)
October 2nd, 2018 14:17
SENSUALITY.
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Fay,
An engaging read! I danced all the way trough your write...from the first word to the last! Awesome!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2018 18:08
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Fay,
An engaging read! I danced all the way trough your write...from the first word to the last! Awesome!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2018 18:08
SENSUALITY.
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see the lady dancing through your words Fay.
October 1st, 2018 15:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see the lady dancing through your words Fay.
October 1st, 2018 15:39
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