Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
VICTORIOUS.
Lorna said:
Your poem reinforces the power of love - thanks Fay.
November 5th, 2018 07:48
Lorna said:
Your poem reinforces the power of love - thanks Fay.
November 5th, 2018 07:48
VICTORIOUS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Sorry I swooned a libido! Then I recovered to read the rest of the poem. I must \'get out more\'.heehee.
November 5th, 2018 07:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Sorry I swooned a libido! Then I recovered to read the rest of the poem. I must \'get out more\'.heehee.
November 5th, 2018 07:27
OH LILY.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Poor old Lily fragile on the hill
I shall pray for Lily, now that she is ill
Great write Fay nice style flows so well.
November 2nd, 2018 11:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Poor old Lily fragile on the hill
I shall pray for Lily, now that she is ill
Great write Fay nice style flows so well.
November 2nd, 2018 11:57
OH LILY.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Oh you mean lily the flower. I thought it was going to be about fag-ash Lil (whoever she was/is exactly?) lol.
November 2nd, 2018 07:27
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. Oh you mean lily the flower. I thought it was going to be about fag-ash Lil (whoever she was/is exactly?) lol.
November 2nd, 2018 07:27
OH LILY.
Lorna said:
I just had to come back and read it again......... get well Lily..........
November 2nd, 2018 05:29
Lorna said:
I just had to come back and read it again......... get well Lily..........
November 2nd, 2018 05:29
OH LILY.
Lorna said:
Oh this absolutely delighted me Fay! So charming - caught me with the first line........ for all of us who speak to our plants because they are friends.
November 2nd, 2018 05:01
Lorna said:
Oh this absolutely delighted me Fay! So charming - caught me with the first line........ for all of us who speak to our plants because they are friends.
November 2nd, 2018 05:01
OH LILY.
Michael Edwards said:
Something really different - an engaging read dear Fay
November 2nd, 2018 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
Something really different - an engaging read dear Fay
November 2nd, 2018 04:42
KNOWINGNESS..
Lorna said:
Hi Fay - I agree knowingness can easily be squashed by the day-to-day weight of things........
November 1st, 2018 07:59
Lorna said:
Hi Fay - I agree knowingness can easily be squashed by the day-to-day weight of things........
November 1st, 2018 07:59
KNOWINGNESS..
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely penned, Fay. I particularly liked how you tied in all the verses with the last line \"What slumbers is knowingness.\"
Loved it! Keep writing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 16:50
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely penned, Fay. I particularly liked how you tied in all the verses with the last line \"What slumbers is knowingness.\"
Loved it! Keep writing. :-)
October 31st, 2018 16:50
KNOWINGNESS..
Michael Edwards said:
Your super library of work forever expandeth (ah a new word)
October 31st, 2018 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Your super library of work forever expandeth (ah a new word)
October 31st, 2018 09:11
KNOWINGNESS..
orchidee said:
I never \'knew\' all this went on. Well, maybe I did! heehee.
October 31st, 2018 08:14
orchidee said:
I never \'knew\' all this went on. Well, maybe I did! heehee.
October 31st, 2018 08:14
LISTENING IN.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, summer this year anyway, led me to write some poems with a parched them included.
October 30th, 2018 08:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, summer this year anyway, led me to write some poems with a parched them included.
October 30th, 2018 08:55
LISTENING IN.
dusk arising said:
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp cold soil around her, hoping the squirrels have secreted sufficient nuts as she prepares for yet another cool quiet winter and its cruel weather.
October 30th, 2018 06:48
dusk arising said:
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp cold soil around her, hoping the squirrels have secreted sufficient nuts as she prepares for yet another cool quiet winter and its cruel weather.
October 30th, 2018 06:48
LISTENING IN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY : Love the picture : I love people with natural Red Hair (especially Prince Harry : but dont tell BRIAN !) Love your perfect poem which is SUMMER BASED and so so perfectly describes the interaction of the elements and the flora. I love clouds and my fave line is:
Listening in I hear NIMBUS creaking
with unshed weight of rain : PERFECT
OMG : I closed my eyes and could not only SEE it : but I HEARD it and felt it as well : Beautiful descriptive Poetry !
Its nearly MIDNIGHT here and RUTH & I saw H & M on their walk about TODAY ! Harry is so Handsome & Meghan is so so Lovely : Blooming Beautiful ! Poem tomorrow : BRIAN is helping me with an ACROSTIC SONNET !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We have posted a new FUSION : CHRISTMAS : please feel free to add a POEM : Thanks A & B !
October 30th, 2018 06:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY : Love the picture : I love people with natural Red Hair (especially Prince Harry : but dont tell BRIAN !) Love your perfect poem which is SUMMER BASED and so so perfectly describes the interaction of the elements and the flora. I love clouds and my fave line is:
Listening in I hear NIMBUS creaking
with unshed weight of rain : PERFECT
OMG : I closed my eyes and could not only SEE it : but I HEARD it and felt it as well : Beautiful descriptive Poetry !
Its nearly MIDNIGHT here and RUTH & I saw H & M on their walk about TODAY ! Harry is so Handsome & Meghan is so so Lovely : Blooming Beautiful ! Poem tomorrow : BRIAN is helping me with an ACROSTIC SONNET !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We have posted a new FUSION : CHRISTMAS : please feel free to add a POEM : Thanks A & B !
October 30th, 2018 06:01
CONCORDANCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for us all but many just cannot see it.
The Hippies had it right \"Make love, not war\"
October 30th, 2018 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for us all but many just cannot see it.
The Hippies had it right \"Make love, not war\"
October 30th, 2018 01:58
CONCORDANCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ~ Thanks for thought provoking Poem based on Three Words. Brian & I both love WORDS.
CONCORDANCE = Agreement on correct order
CONTENTION = Disagreement : Do your own thing !
CORDIALITY = Agreement and Harmony is restored !
Life is often like that ! Its 11:15 am here and my next Clinic is 6pm. Harry & Meghan are doing walk about in The Harbour this afternoon so Im hoping to see them ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check Our Poem on PERSONALITY and our LATEST FUSION on CHRISTMAS
October 29th, 2018 17:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ~ Thanks for thought provoking Poem based on Three Words. Brian & I both love WORDS.
CONCORDANCE = Agreement on correct order
CONTENTION = Disagreement : Do your own thing !
CORDIALITY = Agreement and Harmony is restored !
Life is often like that ! Its 11:15 am here and my next Clinic is 6pm. Harry & Meghan are doing walk about in The Harbour this afternoon so Im hoping to see them ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check Our Poem on PERSONALITY and our LATEST FUSION on CHRISTMAS
October 29th, 2018 17:18
CONCORDANCE.
dusk arising said:
Love is a lesson which continues to teach us. So long as we have an open mind we can hear it\'s teaching.
Many, many minds are closed to these things and war/terrorism/violence continues.
Love your three verses of awakening awareness.
October 29th, 2018 16:37
dusk arising said:
Love is a lesson which continues to teach us. So long as we have an open mind we can hear it\'s teaching.
Many, many minds are closed to these things and war/terrorism/violence continues.
Love your three verses of awakening awareness.
October 29th, 2018 16:37
CONCORDANCE.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This is exactly the poem that should be read by everyone...especially during these most difficult times!
The last stanza truly sums it up!
A beautiful and sensitive read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 29th, 2018 14:24
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This is exactly the poem that should be read by everyone...especially during these most difficult times!
The last stanza truly sums it up!
A beautiful and sensitive read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 29th, 2018 14:24
KEEPING WATCH.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your sweet poem and pic have taken me back a few decades! I miss those days when my children were little and needed my undivided attention...especially when they were not feeling well!
Thank you for sharing your your gift as a poetess!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 23:06
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your sweet poem and pic have taken me back a few decades! I miss those days when my children were little and needed my undivided attention...especially when they were not feeling well!
Thank you for sharing your your gift as a poetess!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 23:06
KEEPING WATCH.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture & lovely Poem. Your Poem & Meghan\'s bump has made me broody but Im only just 30 so Brian & I have time to start a Family. The Wedding is set for Easter 2020. The Church will cater so we dont have to worry about booking a Hotel : The Honeymoon will be in Sevilla so we can visit my Dad\'s relations ! Love the Picture & Poem : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 26th, 2018 16:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture & lovely Poem. Your Poem & Meghan\'s bump has made me broody but Im only just 30 so Brian & I have time to start a Family. The Wedding is set for Easter 2020. The Church will cater so we dont have to worry about booking a Hotel : The Honeymoon will be in Sevilla so we can visit my Dad\'s relations ! Love the Picture & Poem : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 26th, 2018 16:15
KEEPING WATCH.
Michael Edwards said:
They bring such joy, the little ones and this is full of tenderness.
October 26th, 2018 09:45
Michael Edwards said:
They bring such joy, the little ones and this is full of tenderness.
October 26th, 2018 09:45
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