Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
NEW NOTIONS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
I have a picture of Calliope looking down at me where I write my words, her inspiration is is valuable.
October 25th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay.
I have a picture of Calliope looking down at me where I write my words, her inspiration is is valuable.
October 25th, 2018 01:22
NEW NOTIONS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU FAY : For sharing something of your process from idea to draft to finished Poem. Yours are always perfect as presented ! I always learn something about poetic form from your posts ! Today you have presented four balanced quatrains with an xaxa xbxb etc rhyme & half-rhyme pattern. It reads and recites well which is the hallmark of a good Poem ! In my todays POEM (which I have called a 6 4 4 Sonnet !) The content SUNRISE : SUNSET alas overtook a consistent Rhyme Pattern (BRIAN is teaching me to be a better poet) : He did not edit this one because I wanted to surprise him. I treat MPS as a Poetry School and I learn from ALL the Poets I comment on ! Please check Sunrise Sunset.
Your MPS FRIEND : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 24th, 2018 16:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU FAY : For sharing something of your process from idea to draft to finished Poem. Yours are always perfect as presented ! I always learn something about poetic form from your posts ! Today you have presented four balanced quatrains with an xaxa xbxb etc rhyme & half-rhyme pattern. It reads and recites well which is the hallmark of a good Poem ! In my todays POEM (which I have called a 6 4 4 Sonnet !) The content SUNRISE : SUNSET alas overtook a consistent Rhyme Pattern (BRIAN is teaching me to be a better poet) : He did not edit this one because I wanted to surprise him. I treat MPS as a Poetry School and I learn from ALL the Poets I comment on ! Please check Sunrise Sunset.
Your MPS FRIEND : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 24th, 2018 16:30
NEW NOTIONS.
dusk arising said:
Ah and so to bed to rest your active mind. For your past works reveal the dawning is such a creative time within your soul.
Awake refreshed and dazzling. Seeing as only you see. Writing as only you. Creating within us your vivid pictures as if a scent were transporting us.
Sleep perchance to awaken creative.
October 24th, 2018 06:53
dusk arising said:
Ah and so to bed to rest your active mind. For your past works reveal the dawning is such a creative time within your soul.
Awake refreshed and dazzling. Seeing as only you see. Writing as only you. Creating within us your vivid pictures as if a scent were transporting us.
Sleep perchance to awaken creative.
October 24th, 2018 06:53
INTER-SPUN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a wonderful Love Poem : Which I appreciate as a Woman because it is written from your perspective ! In the past 15 years I have experienced \"Aspects of Love\" : Flames of Desire : Attraction & Ranges of Passion ! I have experienced \"Levels of Love\" : Many faceted & exciting which has grown from Tenuous Beginnings ! Then I met BRIAN : We were 28 & 33 : We knew the \"Silver Secrets of Love\" : so we went for GOLD ! Being apart just at a time when we most need each other is difficult : BUT our LOVE grows deeper day by day : AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing about LOVE : LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 17:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a wonderful Love Poem : Which I appreciate as a Woman because it is written from your perspective ! In the past 15 years I have experienced \"Aspects of Love\" : Flames of Desire : Attraction & Ranges of Passion ! I have experienced \"Levels of Love\" : Many faceted & exciting which has grown from Tenuous Beginnings ! Then I met BRIAN : We were 28 & 33 : We knew the \"Silver Secrets of Love\" : so we went for GOLD ! Being apart just at a time when we most need each other is difficult : BUT our LOVE grows deeper day by day : AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing about LOVE : LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 17:36
INTER-SPUN.
sylviasearcher said:
I so want to go for gold fay. It sounds like what we all need to believe in
October 23rd, 2018 06:35
sylviasearcher said:
I so want to go for gold fay. It sounds like what we all need to believe in
October 23rd, 2018 06:35
CONTRIVANCE.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, the imagery in your poem brings the written word to life. A wonderful write and a joy to read. :)
October 22nd, 2018 16:03
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, the imagery in your poem brings the written word to life. A wonderful write and a joy to read. :)
October 22nd, 2018 16:03
CONTRIVANCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Greetings FAY ~ BRIAN here ! Nice to communicate with you again ! I have never been asked to paint a Lady\'s Portrait ~ But if I am asked I will take note of your observations.
1. Colour is paramount
2. Enhance Beauty & Presence
3. Wistful NOT Wanton
4. Loving & Romantic.
For me to try to capture all Angela\'s attributes in Acrylic would be a Bridge too too Far !
Thanks BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡
October 22nd, 2018 14:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Greetings FAY ~ BRIAN here ! Nice to communicate with you again ! I have never been asked to paint a Lady\'s Portrait ~ But if I am asked I will take note of your observations.
1. Colour is paramount
2. Enhance Beauty & Presence
3. Wistful NOT Wanton
4. Loving & Romantic.
For me to try to capture all Angela\'s attributes in Acrylic would be a Bridge too too Far !
Thanks BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡
October 22nd, 2018 14:49
CONTRIVANCE.
Michael Edwards said:
And it was ever thus throughout history - now we have photos :) Being an artist this one resonates - a fine piece..
October 22nd, 2018 07:58
Michael Edwards said:
And it was ever thus throughout history - now we have photos :) Being an artist this one resonates - a fine piece..
October 22nd, 2018 07:58
IN TUNE.
Gino said:
Lovely write Fay. Embracing time between song and span. Thanks for this treat of a read...
October 21st, 2018 23:13
Gino said:
Lovely write Fay. Embracing time between song and span. Thanks for this treat of a read...
October 21st, 2018 23:13
IN TUNE.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your imagery is impressive in this poem, Fay. Nicely penned and a joy to read. :)
October 19th, 2018 14:56
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your imagery is impressive in this poem, Fay. Nicely penned and a joy to read. :)
October 19th, 2018 14:56
GROWTH.
Christina8 said:
In my world I must allow my children to do their homework on their ipads but books are essential to learning too. And good old fashioned exercise! In this world, we must be firm with the electronic device bit. Great write!!
October 18th, 2018 20:50
Christina8 said:
In my world I must allow my children to do their homework on their ipads but books are essential to learning too. And good old fashioned exercise! In this world, we must be firm with the electronic device bit. Great write!!
October 18th, 2018 20:50
GROWTH.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, they must be able to learn for themselves but with understanding guidance from there parents. In the first five years of a childs life they gain seventy five percent of their total life’s knowledge.
October 17th, 2018 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, they must be able to learn for themselves but with understanding guidance from there parents. In the first five years of a childs life they gain seventy five percent of their total life’s knowledge.
October 17th, 2018 07:55
GROWTH.
Michael Edwards said:
They can be stifled but they can also have too much freedom. My daughter only allows her 5year old to spend 1 hour a day on electronic devices and as a result he takes himself off to do reading, homework (even at this age) and play outside - so different to those children who are not guided in any way and left to their own devices. Love, interest and guidance are key but so many modern parents seem to fail at the the firmness bit.
October 17th, 2018 07:28
Michael Edwards said:
They can be stifled but they can also have too much freedom. My daughter only allows her 5year old to spend 1 hour a day on electronic devices and as a result he takes himself off to do reading, homework (even at this age) and play outside - so different to those children who are not guided in any way and left to their own devices. Love, interest and guidance are key but so many modern parents seem to fail at the the firmness bit.
October 17th, 2018 07:28
DUO-LIQUEUR
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the words mixed into a fine Rioja.
October 17th, 2018 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the words mixed into a fine Rioja.
October 17th, 2018 00:16
DUO-LIQUEUR
Syd said:
Great write Faye. Yeah I too could do with a bottle or two.
- Syd
October 16th, 2018 14:19
Syd said:
Great write Faye. Yeah I too could do with a bottle or two.
- Syd
October 16th, 2018 14:19
DUO-LIQUEUR
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh - I\'m off tp Aldi to get a bottle - A super weaving of the language Fay.
October 16th, 2018 11:36
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh - I\'m off tp Aldi to get a bottle - A super weaving of the language Fay.
October 16th, 2018 11:36
DUO-LIQUEUR
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But oh, I might swoon. It\'s pesky Fido keeps barking at anything, even remotely \'swoony!\' heehee.
October 16th, 2018 06:08
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But oh, I might swoon. It\'s pesky Fido keeps barking at anything, even remotely \'swoony!\' heehee.
October 16th, 2018 06:08
DUO-LIQUEUR
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oooh Fay...
Made me put the kettle on
Love the weaving of these words very playful
Great write
October 16th, 2018 05:42
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oooh Fay...
Made me put the kettle on
Love the weaving of these words very playful
Great write
October 16th, 2018 05:42
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