Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SENSUALITY.
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see the lady dancing through your words Fay.
October 1st, 2018 15:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see the lady dancing through your words Fay.
October 1st, 2018 15:39
SENSUALITY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ EXCELLENT PICTURE & ELEGANT POEM. We have been to Istanbul and watched the BELLY DANCERS ~ Awesome ! One of them sat on my knee so i could put some notes down her BRA. I didnt know where to put my HANDS so Angela did it ! Both GIRLS laughed so much that NATASHA nearly slipped off my LAP. Angela is very fit and a good dancer ! She joined the GIRLS for a DEMO and they offered her a JOB ! Blessings & Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 1st, 2018 10:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ EXCELLENT PICTURE & ELEGANT POEM. We have been to Istanbul and watched the BELLY DANCERS ~ Awesome ! One of them sat on my knee so i could put some notes down her BRA. I didnt know where to put my HANDS so Angela did it ! Both GIRLS laughed so much that NATASHA nearly slipped off my LAP. Angela is very fit and a good dancer ! She joined the GIRLS for a DEMO and they offered her a JOB ! Blessings & Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 1st, 2018 10:54
WHY NOT ?.
Goldfinch60 said:
That first light is a wonderful sight and looks forward to the day ahead.
September 29th, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That first light is a wonderful sight and looks forward to the day ahead.
September 29th, 2018 00:31
WHY NOT ?.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. The crack of dawn is getting later now. Then we mess about by changing the clocks and, bingo, dawn is an hour earlier!
Was it Dennis Norden who had that catchphrase centuries ago(?) in a film clip show?
September 28th, 2018 11:09
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. The crack of dawn is getting later now. Then we mess about by changing the clocks and, bingo, dawn is an hour earlier!
Was it Dennis Norden who had that catchphrase centuries ago(?) in a film clip show?
September 28th, 2018 11:09
WHY NOT ?.
Christina8 said:
Absolutely well written and wonderful poem to wake up to!! Loved it, Fay! Beautiful picture and quite refreshing as I am waking up to rain!
September 28th, 2018 08:05
Christina8 said:
Absolutely well written and wonderful poem to wake up to!! Loved it, Fay! Beautiful picture and quite refreshing as I am waking up to rain!
September 28th, 2018 08:05
WHY NOT ?.
dusk arising said:
An invigorating breath of fresh air. and why not?
Refreshing fun writing.
September 28th, 2018 06:22
dusk arising said:
An invigorating breath of fresh air. and why not?
Refreshing fun writing.
September 28th, 2018 06:22
WHY NOT ?.
kevin browne said:
I\'ve just read this 3 times because the rhythmic wording and positioning of it all is quite remarkably done. Such a poignant poem. It needs to be hung up on the sky.
September 28th, 2018 06:04
kevin browne said:
I\'ve just read this 3 times because the rhythmic wording and positioning of it all is quite remarkably done. Such a poignant poem. It needs to be hung up on the sky.
September 28th, 2018 06:04
TROUBLE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your THOUGHTS on a PICTURE and in an even more revealing POEM. Men are careless where they \"sow their seed\" and are often absent (as in your Ode) when the LADY has to \"bare the FRUIT\" alone. There would be much STIGMA attached at the beginning of the 18th C but even today when the STIGMA has lessened it is still the Lady who has to bear the STRAIN ~ and still in many circles the SHAME. So often MEN have their way and (as in your ODE) prefer FLIGHT rather than stay and FIGHT for the Lady,s Honour. Despite modern facilities I have encountered the Stress & Distress of some of my female Students and in my Extended Family. if only MEN would think before they JUMP. Angela (30) and I (35) are very capable of PROCREATING but we are both Church Workers and in Role Model Jobs (Caring & Teaching) so we will have to wait until after Easter 2020. At the moment 11,500 miles is much better than the PILL ! Thanks for sharing it has made us all think about sexual responsibility in the 21st C ! Yours as ever BRIAN 😎 Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 26th, 2018 10:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your THOUGHTS on a PICTURE and in an even more revealing POEM. Men are careless where they \"sow their seed\" and are often absent (as in your Ode) when the LADY has to \"bare the FRUIT\" alone. There would be much STIGMA attached at the beginning of the 18th C but even today when the STIGMA has lessened it is still the Lady who has to bear the STRAIN ~ and still in many circles the SHAME. So often MEN have their way and (as in your ODE) prefer FLIGHT rather than stay and FIGHT for the Lady,s Honour. Despite modern facilities I have encountered the Stress & Distress of some of my female Students and in my Extended Family. if only MEN would think before they JUMP. Angela (30) and I (35) are very capable of PROCREATING but we are both Church Workers and in Role Model Jobs (Caring & Teaching) so we will have to wait until after Easter 2020. At the moment 11,500 miles is much better than the PILL ! Thanks for sharing it has made us all think about sexual responsibility in the 21st C ! Yours as ever BRIAN 😎 Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 26th, 2018 10:15
TROUBLE.
Michael Edwards said:
A wrenching read - thankfully we now have a more tolerant and understanding society but there is still a long way to go. What a superb write Fay.
September 26th, 2018 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
A wrenching read - thankfully we now have a more tolerant and understanding society but there is still a long way to go. What a superb write Fay.
September 26th, 2018 04:05
TROUBLE.
kevin browne said:
Love this, Fay Slimm, your writing skills own such desire for the reader to go through to the end. Your idea of a misspent child is a reminder of how so many women fall to this prey. Great writing,
September 26th, 2018 03:41
kevin browne said:
Love this, Fay Slimm, your writing skills own such desire for the reader to go through to the end. Your idea of a misspent child is a reminder of how so many women fall to this prey. Great writing,
September 26th, 2018 03:41
BOARD-BALLET.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, those surfer are amazing to watch.
September 26th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, those surfer are amazing to watch.
September 26th, 2018 00:27
BOARD-BALLET.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poem, Fay, that enlightens your readers to the courage of the surf boarders and the obvious challenge of the mighty waves. :)
September 25th, 2018 13:53
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poem, Fay, that enlightens your readers to the courage of the surf boarders and the obvious challenge of the mighty waves. :)
September 25th, 2018 13:53
BOARD-BALLET.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For verbal feast in praise of SURFING ! Each word painted a picture and I could feel and taste the SURF ! Great photo too. Any subject embellished with your poetic skill materialises before our eyes ! Angela and I are great SAILORS and we have both tried surfing & sail bards ~ BUT we prefer the safety & stability of an Albacore or a Catamaran ! Thanks fir sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check Angelas Poem on essential VITAMINS also Cavatina br John Williams ~ Thanks B.
September 25th, 2018 11:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For verbal feast in praise of SURFING ! Each word painted a picture and I could feel and taste the SURF ! Great photo too. Any subject embellished with your poetic skill materialises before our eyes ! Angela and I are great SAILORS and we have both tried surfing & sail bards ~ BUT we prefer the safety & stability of an Albacore or a Catamaran ! Thanks fir sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check Angelas Poem on essential VITAMINS also Cavatina br John Williams ~ Thanks B.
September 25th, 2018 11:05
YOU ARE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. wonderful write Fay, all those words are so very meaningful - Thank You.
September 25th, 2018 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. wonderful write Fay, all those words are so very meaningful - Thank You.
September 25th, 2018 00:37
YOU ARE.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem that uplifts your readers with thoughts of hope.
I loved it!
September 24th, 2018 18:39
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem that uplifts your readers with thoughts of hope.
I loved it!
September 24th, 2018 18:39
YOU ARE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here, I needed this today, I miss BRIAN of course and the Hospital in Auckland has given me a big schedule! I addition to Morning, Afternoon & Evening Clinics I am involved in the Training of 5 Maori Trainee Physiotherapists. I love it but it is tiring! Its 9:45 am (Tuesday) here. Today my first Clinic is 1pm and then I work to 8pm! I have high self-esteem and want to get the most out of my Work Exchange so I can be a Team Leader & Trainer when I return to the UK : BUT I do need to be \"More gentle on myself !\" Thanks for sharing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 24th, 2018 16:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here, I needed this today, I miss BRIAN of course and the Hospital in Auckland has given me a big schedule! I addition to Morning, Afternoon & Evening Clinics I am involved in the Training of 5 Maori Trainee Physiotherapists. I love it but it is tiring! Its 9:45 am (Tuesday) here. Today my first Clinic is 1pm and then I work to 8pm! I have high self-esteem and want to get the most out of my Work Exchange so I can be a Team Leader & Trainer when I return to the UK : BUT I do need to be \"More gentle on myself !\" Thanks for sharing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 24th, 2018 16:41
YOU ARE.
orchidee said:
Just as long as I don\'t sing and ruin everything! heehee. A lovely write Fay.
September 24th, 2018 10:49
orchidee said:
Just as long as I don\'t sing and ruin everything! heehee. A lovely write Fay.
September 24th, 2018 10:49
YOU ARE.
dusk arising said:
Soothing and reassuring. A definate favourite.
September 24th, 2018 09:23
dusk arising said:
Soothing and reassuring. A definate favourite.
September 24th, 2018 09:23
YOU ARE.
Christina8 said:
Great thoughtful poem Fay! I loved it! I also loved the sweet message you posted before the poem. Great job!
September 24th, 2018 06:38
Christina8 said:
Great thoughtful poem Fay! I loved it! I also loved the sweet message you posted before the poem. Great job!
September 24th, 2018 06:38
UNDERPRIZED.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are right,i have always said true love is forever
September 23rd, 2018 09:21
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are right,i have always said true love is forever
September 23rd, 2018 09:21
UNDERPRIZED.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Your words ring so true!
“Left un-nurtured, this gift called love
withers when carnal lust invades
and fades it’s force to
rating mere second.”
Lust is not everlasting!
As your chosen quote states, it is the
“true unconditional love” that IS everlasting.
A true and honest write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2018 16:19
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Your words ring so true!
“Left un-nurtured, this gift called love
withers when carnal lust invades
and fades it’s force to
rating mere second.”
Lust is not everlasting!
As your chosen quote states, it is the
“true unconditional love” that IS everlasting.
A true and honest write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2018 16:19
UNDERPRIZED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ANGELA HERE : I have read your Poem & Brians response and agree with both of you. KIWI Men, who are well groomed and handsome have tried it on but have quickly got the message! Both Ruth & I have gained the respect of both the Male & Female Staff and they know that we are Truly in Love with Brian & David. Many Young people in our position are unfaithful and think nothing of it ~ that is the tragedy. Thanks for caring its 11 am Friday here and I have a clinic @ 2pm and another @ 6 pm. Love ANGELA XXXX
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September 20th, 2018 18:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ANGELA HERE : I have read your Poem & Brians response and agree with both of you. KIWI Men, who are well groomed and handsome have tried it on but have quickly got the message! Both Ruth & I have gained the respect of both the Male & Female Staff and they know that we are Truly in Love with Brian & David. Many Young people in our position are unfaithful and think nothing of it ~ that is the tragedy. Thanks for caring its 11 am Friday here and I have a clinic @ 2pm and another @ 6 pm. Love ANGELA XXXX
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September 20th, 2018 18:18
UNDERPRIZED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing about NONLOVE ! It describes the situation many of my Friends find themselves in ~ it is very shallow and there is no commitment. ANGELA & I have found TRUE LOVE and for both of us it is so so different from anything we have experienced before. One of my Friends ~ who has worked in Auckland said I was a FOOL to let a Girl as Lovely as ANGELA go to NZ for more than a Year when were are not yet married. He knows what Male KIWIS are like ! I told HIM ~ I know Angela will be faithful to Me (and I to Her) because of the Purity & Intensity of Love we have for Each Other ~ AMEN. Thanks for your Support FAY for all TRUE LOVERS ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Unconditional LOVE really is EVERLASTING ~ AMEN.
September 20th, 2018 13:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing about NONLOVE ! It describes the situation many of my Friends find themselves in ~ it is very shallow and there is no commitment. ANGELA & I have found TRUE LOVE and for both of us it is so so different from anything we have experienced before. One of my Friends ~ who has worked in Auckland said I was a FOOL to let a Girl as Lovely as ANGELA go to NZ for more than a Year when were are not yet married. He knows what Male KIWIS are like ! I told HIM ~ I know Angela will be faithful to Me (and I to Her) because of the Purity & Intensity of Love we have for Each Other ~ AMEN. Thanks for your Support FAY for all TRUE LOVERS ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Unconditional LOVE really is EVERLASTING ~ AMEN.
September 20th, 2018 13:47
AUTUMN COMES RUNNING.
Michael Edwards said:
You have absolutely captured Autumn in this Fay
September 18th, 2018 15:29
Michael Edwards said:
You have absolutely captured Autumn in this Fay
September 18th, 2018 15:29
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