Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
AUTUMN COMES RUNNING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ increasingly my fave Season. The leaves ~ in all their Autumn Glory ~ seem to linger longer on the branches before forming a rainbow carpet at our feet. Your poem ~ replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ captures beautifully the awesome transition from Summer to Winter ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN. ANGELA sends her love XX but she is sulking because its SPRING in Auckland and she is missing swishing through the Autumn Leaves and ME of course !
September 18th, 2018 04:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ increasingly my fave Season. The leaves ~ in all their Autumn Glory ~ seem to linger longer on the branches before forming a rainbow carpet at our feet. Your poem ~ replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ captures beautifully the awesome transition from Summer to Winter ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN. ANGELA sends her love XX but she is sulking because its SPRING in Auckland and she is missing swishing through the Autumn Leaves and ME of course !
September 18th, 2018 04:40
AUTUMN COMES RUNNING.
Goldfinch60 said:
My absolute favourite time of the year, the beauty of nature will shine all around us.
September 18th, 2018 03:25
Goldfinch60 said:
My absolute favourite time of the year, the beauty of nature will shine all around us.
September 18th, 2018 03:25
UNSATED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay and so meaningful for me at the moment.
September 17th, 2018 07:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay and so meaningful for me at the moment.
September 17th, 2018 07:59
UNSATED.
Michael Edwards said:
As I mentioned elsewhere an epic write dear Fay.
September 17th, 2018 07:42
Michael Edwards said:
As I mentioned elsewhere an epic write dear Fay.
September 17th, 2018 07:42
UNSATED.
dusk arising said:
Poignant - \"Best is closure so hunger can then turn elsewhere for comfort\".
Wisdom says \'put it away\' whenever you can. Pain of loves loss accentuates solitude, solitude encourages the mind to wander into sorrowful valleys where waterfalls await.
But wait, the birds still sing, the sky is still blue and blossoms call out for appreciation. Life does go on and the passing years have given grace and knowledge - a cloak we wear.
September 17th, 2018 05:32
dusk arising said:
Poignant - \"Best is closure so hunger can then turn elsewhere for comfort\".
Wisdom says \'put it away\' whenever you can. Pain of loves loss accentuates solitude, solitude encourages the mind to wander into sorrowful valleys where waterfalls await.
But wait, the birds still sing, the sky is still blue and blossoms call out for appreciation. Life does go on and the passing years have given grace and knowledge - a cloak we wear.
September 17th, 2018 05:32
UNSATED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FAY : ANGELA here : BRIAN is at work and Ive finished for the day 9:30pm! After I turned 17 the feminine longing inside of me was UNSATED from time to time. I guess I was yearning for Someone Special who would Light my Fire! When I met Brian He gave me a deep glow deep inside my Heart and I was SATED & have been ever since. Its hard being so far apart : but when he phones & skypes me and I read his His Love Poems etc I am reinsated! Loved the pensiveness & longing in the Poem & the Picture : BEAUTIFUL Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 17th, 2018 04:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FAY : ANGELA here : BRIAN is at work and Ive finished for the day 9:30pm! After I turned 17 the feminine longing inside of me was UNSATED from time to time. I guess I was yearning for Someone Special who would Light my Fire! When I met Brian He gave me a deep glow deep inside my Heart and I was SATED & have been ever since. Its hard being so far apart : but when he phones & skypes me and I read his His Love Poems etc I am reinsated! Loved the pensiveness & longing in the Poem & the Picture : BEAUTIFUL Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 17th, 2018 04:32
UNSATED.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... What a powerful read so many emotions ran through me while reading.
Thank you
Much love and respect
September 17th, 2018 03:38
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... What a powerful read so many emotions ran through me while reading.
Thank you
Much love and respect
September 17th, 2018 03:38
QUIET.
dusk arising said:
I was so inspired by this that in writing a comment i actually wrote my next poem to be posted here.
I believe i know the healing of quiet which is not the same thing as silence. Quiet can bring peace, relaxation, harmony and wellbeing, repairing our soul.
September 13th, 2018 20:37
dusk arising said:
I was so inspired by this that in writing a comment i actually wrote my next poem to be posted here.
I believe i know the healing of quiet which is not the same thing as silence. Quiet can bring peace, relaxation, harmony and wellbeing, repairing our soul.
September 13th, 2018 20:37
QUIET.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay, I saw th title and prodeeded to read out in a whisper... LOL... lovely well done you.
September 13th, 2018 10:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay, I saw th title and prodeeded to read out in a whisper... LOL... lovely well done you.
September 13th, 2018 10:37
BONDS.
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written observations of that creation of a lifetimes bond between a doting pair.
Brings a joyous smile to my face and memories of my puppy bundle of fluff \'Zoe\' now long departed.
September 10th, 2018 13:44
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written observations of that creation of a lifetimes bond between a doting pair.
Brings a joyous smile to my face and memories of my puppy bundle of fluff \'Zoe\' now long departed.
September 10th, 2018 13:44
CULLED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My Friend you would not tell
with such high zest ................
To Children : ardent for some
desperate GLORY ; the old lie
DULCE ET DECORUM EST
PRO PATRIA MORI !
It is sweet and fitting
to die for ones Country
RUPERT OWEN killed in battle (WW1)
4 November 1918 aged 25
Yes FAY all War is futile but while
Aggressive MEN rule the WORLD
it is inevitable. I pray there will never
be a WORLD WAR (like WW1 & WW2)
ever again. It would destroy the Planet
ONCE & for ALL.
Thanks for sharing & caring :
Love ANGELA 🧡 and BRIAN 😎
Please check our POEM : ANNIVERSARIES : Thanks
September 7th, 2018 04:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My Friend you would not tell
with such high zest ................
To Children : ardent for some
desperate GLORY ; the old lie
DULCE ET DECORUM EST
PRO PATRIA MORI !
It is sweet and fitting
to die for ones Country
RUPERT OWEN killed in battle (WW1)
4 November 1918 aged 25
Yes FAY all War is futile but while
Aggressive MEN rule the WORLD
it is inevitable. I pray there will never
be a WORLD WAR (like WW1 & WW2)
ever again. It would destroy the Planet
ONCE & for ALL.
Thanks for sharing & caring :
Love ANGELA 🧡 and BRIAN 😎
Please check our POEM : ANNIVERSARIES : Thanks
September 7th, 2018 04:44
CULLED.
Lorna said:
Oh Fay and that\'s why we need more women politicians ... the \"glory\" of war escapes (most) of us........
September 7th, 2018 04:05
Lorna said:
Oh Fay and that\'s why we need more women politicians ... the \"glory\" of war escapes (most) of us........
September 7th, 2018 04:05
CULLED.
dusk arising said:
How can we be made in gods image if we send our young to fight the cowardly politicians battles? Maybe god is not so benevolent as we were led to believe? This is a cruel world.
September 7th, 2018 03:55
dusk arising said:
How can we be made in gods image if we send our young to fight the cowardly politicians battles? Maybe god is not so benevolent as we were led to believe? This is a cruel world.
September 7th, 2018 03:55
CULLED.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, on a youth theme, it\'s said pre-teens even, say, age 12, don\'t have full \'road-sense\'. Here young lives wasted in learning and going to war. We\'re the only species that do it. Even animals only kill for food, and because they need to.
September 7th, 2018 03:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, on a youth theme, it\'s said pre-teens even, say, age 12, don\'t have full \'road-sense\'. Here young lives wasted in learning and going to war. We\'re the only species that do it. Even animals only kill for food, and because they need to.
September 7th, 2018 03:06
WALLS.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the heart can break through all walls.
September 7th, 2018 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the heart can break through all walls.
September 7th, 2018 00:37
WALLS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In history WALLS ~ Like the Walls of JERICHO and more recently BERLIN crumbled & fell at the onslaught of TRUTH & LOVE ! So it will ever be. TRUMP will see that AMERICA has more need for MEXICAN migrant workers ~ than MEXICO has for the USA. The WALL like a lot of other things ~ Trump trumpets ~ will never happen ! Yours BRIAN 😎and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 17:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In history WALLS ~ Like the Walls of JERICHO and more recently BERLIN crumbled & fell at the onslaught of TRUTH & LOVE ! So it will ever be. TRUMP will see that AMERICA has more need for MEXICAN migrant workers ~ than MEXICO has for the USA. The WALL like a lot of other things ~ Trump trumpets ~ will never happen ! Yours BRIAN 😎and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 17:04
WALLS.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow ends in a sensational way. Love knows no bars eh. An awesome poem in superb wording, rhyming and content altogether. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 14:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow ends in a sensational way. Love knows no bars eh. An awesome poem in superb wording, rhyming and content altogether. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 14:53
WALLS.
Michael Edwards said:
I have a wall enclosed garden so I\'m keeping my fingers crossed. Fine write Fay.
September 6th, 2018 12:56
Michael Edwards said:
I have a wall enclosed garden so I\'m keeping my fingers crossed. Fine write Fay.
September 6th, 2018 12:56
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