Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
CLEAN AIR.
Michael Edwards said:
Fresh smelling air - nothing like it. And what a great write to celebrate it.
October 15th, 2018 11:20
Michael Edwards said:
Fresh smelling air - nothing like it. And what a great write to celebrate it.
October 15th, 2018 11:20
CHESIL.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, you write about the sea in such refreshing language. I love the images your poem has produced in this reader\'s mind.
An excellent write. :)
October 14th, 2018 17:24
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Fay, you write about the sea in such refreshing language. I love the images your poem has produced in this reader\'s mind.
An excellent write. :)
October 14th, 2018 17:24
COLOUR-POWER.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you painted a lovely and colorful image
October 14th, 2018 16:27
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you painted a lovely and colorful image
October 14th, 2018 16:27
COLOUR-POWER.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Could the Human Eye evolve ? I don\'t think so ! GOD our Creator put a lot of creativity into the Human Eye ~ It sees pictures in 3D ~ in Motion and in Colour ! God designed it to analyse and differentiate the VISIBLE SPECTRUM from RED through to VIOLET (R O Y G B I V) and to be able to differentiate between hundreds of different shades. The colours of the CLOTHES we over & underwear all send out a message and also (as you point out) we all have a coloured Aura which only the Spiritual can detect ~ this Aura reflects the vibrations of the soul ~AMEN. Colours do stimulate and control our senses Red stimulates the BODY ~ Yellow cheers ~ Green calms ~ Blue stimulates the MIND & Purple the SPIRIT ! Interior Designers & the Rag Trade are well aware of the effect of COLOUR on US ~ Body Soul & Spirit ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing very stimulating ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA šš§”
Please check our latest FUSION ~ WHAT MAKES YOU HAPPY ?
October 12th, 2018 19:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Could the Human Eye evolve ? I don\'t think so ! GOD our Creator put a lot of creativity into the Human Eye ~ It sees pictures in 3D ~ in Motion and in Colour ! God designed it to analyse and differentiate the VISIBLE SPECTRUM from RED through to VIOLET (R O Y G B I V) and to be able to differentiate between hundreds of different shades. The colours of the CLOTHES we over & underwear all send out a message and also (as you point out) we all have a coloured Aura which only the Spiritual can detect ~ this Aura reflects the vibrations of the soul ~AMEN. Colours do stimulate and control our senses Red stimulates the BODY ~ Yellow cheers ~ Green calms ~ Blue stimulates the MIND & Purple the SPIRIT ! Interior Designers & the Rag Trade are well aware of the effect of COLOUR on US ~ Body Soul & Spirit ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing very stimulating ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA šš§”
Please check our latest FUSION ~ WHAT MAKES YOU HAPPY ?
October 12th, 2018 19:21
COLOUR-POWER.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
Blessed are the senses
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 08:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Fay
Blessed are the senses
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 08:08
COLOUR-POWER.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, without colour nature not be so glorious.
October 12th, 2018 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, without colour nature not be so glorious.
October 12th, 2018 07:53
CHESIL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY CHESIL BEACH ~ 18 MILES long in DORSET England and it is reckoned about 200 billion pebbles but one should examine them in situ and NOT remove them ! Lovely POEM exulting the beauty uniqueness and history of this pebble abundant beach. As one searches for ~ fossils & gemstones ~ no two pebbles are identical ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my FLAMINGOS ~ Yours as always BRIAN
October 11th, 2018 16:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh FAY CHESIL BEACH ~ 18 MILES long in DORSET England and it is reckoned about 200 billion pebbles but one should examine them in situ and NOT remove them ! Lovely POEM exulting the beauty uniqueness and history of this pebble abundant beach. As one searches for ~ fossils & gemstones ~ no two pebbles are identical ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my FLAMINGOS ~ Yours as always BRIAN
October 11th, 2018 16:39
CHESIL.
dusk arising said:
I know this place, seen in its majesty from high on Portland. They say the whole bank/beach was washed up in some tremendous storm. It doesn\'t seem in any hurry to be swallowed up.
From atop the bank swans can be seen gracefully making way in the Fleets to the landside where once the breakers crashed. Such contrast. And yes out to sea around the Bill the currents race to wreck the unsuspecting.
Methinks you know this place well.
October 11th, 2018 14:55
dusk arising said:
I know this place, seen in its majesty from high on Portland. They say the whole bank/beach was washed up in some tremendous storm. It doesn\'t seem in any hurry to be swallowed up.
From atop the bank swans can be seen gracefully making way in the Fleets to the landside where once the breakers crashed. Such contrast. And yes out to sea around the Bill the currents race to wreck the unsuspecting.
Methinks you know this place well.
October 11th, 2018 14:55
CHESIL.
Michael Edwards said:
Captures the area so very well - fine work dear Fay.
October 11th, 2018 12:32
Michael Edwards said:
Captures the area so very well - fine work dear Fay.
October 11th, 2018 12:32
CHESIL.
kevin browne said:
You see the seas water there, well me and my father used to trawl for scallops. We worked that area frequently which within those years alongside 20 other fishing boats it was banned from from British fishing boats to fish there. However the French trawlers fished there legally.. Great place, great scenery and just like your poem, very relaxing.
October 11th, 2018 11:00
kevin browne said:
You see the seas water there, well me and my father used to trawl for scallops. We worked that area frequently which within those years alongside 20 other fishing boats it was banned from from British fishing boats to fish there. However the French trawlers fished there legally.. Great place, great scenery and just like your poem, very relaxing.
October 11th, 2018 11:00
BOUGHT..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
C\'est la Vie FAY ~ For thousands (yea millions) of Girls (& some Men) who flirt on the edge of Show & Glamour Business and never make it big-time but on the way lose direction & morals & ultimately ~ Self Respect ~Some of my older Students in Beauty & Media are heading in that direction and even 1 or 2 in my very Extended Family ! It is sad but true and very prevalent in today\'s very secular and amoral Society ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN.
October 10th, 2018 17:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
C\'est la Vie FAY ~ For thousands (yea millions) of Girls (& some Men) who flirt on the edge of Show & Glamour Business and never make it big-time but on the way lose direction & morals & ultimately ~ Self Respect ~Some of my older Students in Beauty & Media are heading in that direction and even 1 or 2 in my very Extended Family ! It is sad but true and very prevalent in today\'s very secular and amoral Society ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN.
October 10th, 2018 17:59
BOUGHT..
orchidee said:
A thoughtful story Fay.
Meanwhile - I reversed and crashed into a lamp-post. Doh! I would only have swooned anyway!
October 10th, 2018 07:09
orchidee said:
A thoughtful story Fay.
Meanwhile - I reversed and crashed into a lamp-post. Doh! I would only have swooned anyway!
October 10th, 2018 07:09
CAGED.
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
My first read of this exceptional poem reminded me of Maya Angelouās āI Know Why The Caged Bird Singsā- - -metaphorically comparable!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:15
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
My first read of this exceptional poem reminded me of Maya Angelouās āI Know Why The Caged Bird Singsā- - -metaphorically comparable!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:15
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and for the record I\'m not in the WI although I do sometimes give talks to them - but I forgive Orchi.
October 8th, 2018 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and for the record I\'m not in the WI although I do sometimes give talks to them - but I forgive Orchi.
October 8th, 2018 11:44
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. One place I knew insisted on hats or scarves or some head-covering for women. Hope it\'s not irreverent to say, but it made some of them look frumpy, or a gathering of the W.I. They can be terrifying, you know! lol. Have I put my foot in it? Are you in the W.I.?
October 8th, 2018 07:20
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. One place I knew insisted on hats or scarves or some head-covering for women. Hope it\'s not irreverent to say, but it made some of them look frumpy, or a gathering of the W.I. They can be terrifying, you know! lol. Have I put my foot in it? Are you in the W.I.?
October 8th, 2018 07:20
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
WEll penned Fay
Some great descriptive here of a life well led I wonder what a city version of this would read like
NO... I hope I never find out
October 8th, 2018 07:13
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
WEll penned Fay
Some great descriptive here of a life well led I wonder what a city version of this would read like
NO... I hope I never find out
October 8th, 2018 07:13
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
Christina8 said:
What a fantastic poem! \"Hatted heads bow\"...We don\'t much do hats in america. I don\'t even own a hat! I would love to attend a church in England! I digress.....back to your poem, it is very descriptive and I read it twice because it was so wonderful!
October 8th, 2018 06:56
Christina8 said:
What a fantastic poem! \"Hatted heads bow\"...We don\'t much do hats in america. I don\'t even own a hat! I would love to attend a church in England! I digress.....back to your poem, it is very descriptive and I read it twice because it was so wonderful!
October 8th, 2018 06:56
SUNDAY DEMANDS.
onepauly said:
sunday,
the last day of the week
and the beginning of a new one.
October 8th, 2018 03:54
onepauly said:
sunday,
the last day of the week
and the beginning of a new one.
October 8th, 2018 03:54
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