Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SIGNS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhh FAY ~ The AGONY & ECSTASY of LOVE ~ Over the last 20 years I have experienced both ~ several times ! For the last two years ANGELA and I are both in Ecstasy mode and we pray it will last forever ! Our Touch IS as soft as a cobweb ~ our Bodies ARE damp with the Dew of Love ~ our Kisses ARE Ruby Red Wine ! It\'s just a pity that we are physically as far apart on earth ~ as we can be ! Our Love is STRONGER after 3 months separation (and then 2 weeks togetherness !) We know our Love will be twice as strong after 7 months of separation ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN
September 5th, 2018 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhh FAY ~ The AGONY & ECSTASY of LOVE ~ Over the last 20 years I have experienced both ~ several times ! For the last two years ANGELA and I are both in Ecstasy mode and we pray it will last forever ! Our Touch IS as soft as a cobweb ~ our Bodies ARE damp with the Dew of Love ~ our Kisses ARE Ruby Red Wine ! It\'s just a pity that we are physically as far apart on earth ~ as we can be ! Our Love is STRONGER after 3 months separation (and then 2 weeks togetherness !) We know our Love will be twice as strong after 7 months of separation ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN
September 5th, 2018 10:29
SIGNS.
dusk arising said:
Hmmm, i\'m envious of the love you describe... and they say envy is a sin?
September 5th, 2018 07:38
dusk arising said:
Hmmm, i\'m envious of the love you describe... and they say envy is a sin?
September 5th, 2018 07:38
SIGNS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once again Fay, love when found is wonderful.
September 5th, 2018 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once again Fay, love when found is wonderful.
September 5th, 2018 02:54
WINDING DOWN.
w c said:
Hi, Fay. I really enjoyed your poem. I was raised around a farm, and I miss those days very much.
September 4th, 2018 17:31
w c said:
Hi, Fay. I really enjoyed your poem. I was raised around a farm, and I miss those days very much.
September 4th, 2018 17:31
WINDING DOWN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ooooo FAY ~ Your elegant ODE paints a busy but less frenetic life style (before my Time) in the Middle of the last Century. West Country Farming ! Rumbling tractors ~ Laundry on the line ~ Owls & foxes ~ Country kitchens ~ Boiling eggs ~ Sheep dogs ~ Creaking gates ~ New born lambs ~ Chores 24/7 ! In some aspects LIFE was HARDER but I guess (without information overkill) people were HAPPIER ? Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my FUSION on Seasons ~ Thanks B 🧡
September 4th, 2018 10:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ooooo FAY ~ Your elegant ODE paints a busy but less frenetic life style (before my Time) in the Middle of the last Century. West Country Farming ! Rumbling tractors ~ Laundry on the line ~ Owls & foxes ~ Country kitchens ~ Boiling eggs ~ Sheep dogs ~ Creaking gates ~ New born lambs ~ Chores 24/7 ! In some aspects LIFE was HARDER but I guess (without information overkill) people were HAPPIER ? Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my FUSION on Seasons ~ Thanks B 🧡
September 4th, 2018 10:41
WINDING DOWN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write a tribute to those who work on farms, many do not just how hard they have to work.
September 4th, 2018 07:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write a tribute to those who work on farms, many do not just how hard they have to work.
September 4th, 2018 07:52
WINDING DOWN.
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - whenever you write nostalgically about countryside living you always take me with you. You\'ve done it with the sea as well. I wasn\'t born to farm life but working with the horses all those years with my husband left me loving the smells, the nature all around and the day\'s end satisfaction after being with all that for a full day. Thanks for this beautiful picture ...
September 4th, 2018 05:57
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - whenever you write nostalgically about countryside living you always take me with you. You\'ve done it with the sea as well. I wasn\'t born to farm life but working with the horses all those years with my husband left me loving the smells, the nature all around and the day\'s end satisfaction after being with all that for a full day. Thanks for this beautiful picture ...
September 4th, 2018 05:57
MIRAGE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ GLASS is an awesome material ~ a supercooled liquid, which is why it is transparent. The form of 3D glass objects d\'arte is infinite and I am always intrigued by them. I am a Technical Glassblower and can make & repair Scientific Glassware ~ OK. ANGELA has a collection of Glass and also Lladro Pottery. I love the language in your Poem it brings the World of decorative Glass alive ! Entwined silhouettes ~ rotated throughout lit opalescence ! You came ~ You saw and the GLASS conquered YOU ! Another perfect Poem ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Love the photo ~ Thanks.
September 3rd, 2018 16:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ GLASS is an awesome material ~ a supercooled liquid, which is why it is transparent. The form of 3D glass objects d\'arte is infinite and I am always intrigued by them. I am a Technical Glassblower and can make & repair Scientific Glassware ~ OK. ANGELA has a collection of Glass and also Lladro Pottery. I love the language in your Poem it brings the World of decorative Glass alive ! Entwined silhouettes ~ rotated throughout lit opalescence ! You came ~ You saw and the GLASS conquered YOU ! Another perfect Poem ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Love the photo ~ Thanks.
September 3rd, 2018 16:06
MIRAGE.
Michael Edwards said:
There are some beautiful examples of the glass makers art about and you have captured the excitement so well Fay.
September 3rd, 2018 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
There are some beautiful examples of the glass makers art about and you have captured the excitement so well Fay.
September 3rd, 2018 08:04
MIRAGE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Paperweights can be so magical to look at, as are your words.
September 3rd, 2018 07:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Paperweights can be so magical to look at, as are your words.
September 3rd, 2018 07:50
MIRAGE.
Lorna said:
I\'m mad about paperweights! I\'m so glad you got your hands on it!!! Better than all the jewelry in the world.
Lovely images Fay...
September 3rd, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
I\'m mad about paperweights! I\'m so glad you got your hands on it!!! Better than all the jewelry in the world.
Lovely images Fay...
September 3rd, 2018 06:20
MIRAGE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I saw something as old as me - a petrified decorative fossil, of about 200 million years ago. Don\'t drop it on a hard surface, it might shatter after all those years!
September 3rd, 2018 04:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I saw something as old as me - a petrified decorative fossil, of about 200 million years ago. Don\'t drop it on a hard surface, it might shatter after all those years!
September 3rd, 2018 04:42
CAUGHT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. I have seen sea eagles on Skye, wonderful birds.
August 31st, 2018 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. I have seen sea eagles on Skye, wonderful birds.
August 31st, 2018 08:07
CAUGHT.
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Fay.
Only man kills out of selfishness surely. There\'s arguing about scallops now, of all things (the French) and throwing smoke bombs at each other. Bit pathetic. doh!
August 31st, 2018 06:52
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Fay.
Only man kills out of selfishness surely. There\'s arguing about scallops now, of all things (the French) and throwing smoke bombs at each other. Bit pathetic. doh!
August 31st, 2018 06:52
CAUGHT.
sylviasearcher said:
You write so well of magnificent feathered creatures.
You always do justice to their awesomeness
August 31st, 2018 06:27
sylviasearcher said:
You write so well of magnificent feathered creatures.
You always do justice to their awesomeness
August 31st, 2018 06:27
PLANNED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ I have researched PLANT BIOSYNTHESIS and my conclusions ~ from my research is that \"THERE IS A GOD\". By Photosynthesis CO2 & H2O are converted into Glucose C6H12O6 : which (with enzymes) can be converted into POLYMERS STARCH (for food) and CELLULOSE (for fibres). Seed dispersion ~ for propogation ~ is one of GOD\'s many Master Plans n the field of Plant Biochemistry ! Yours as always BRIAN 🧡
August 29th, 2018 16:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ I have researched PLANT BIOSYNTHESIS and my conclusions ~ from my research is that \"THERE IS A GOD\". By Photosynthesis CO2 & H2O are converted into Glucose C6H12O6 : which (with enzymes) can be converted into POLYMERS STARCH (for food) and CELLULOSE (for fibres). Seed dispersion ~ for propogation ~ is one of GOD\'s many Master Plans n the field of Plant Biochemistry ! Yours as always BRIAN 🧡
August 29th, 2018 16:51
PLANNED.
orchidee said:
Another fine write Fay. And trees are never \'only trees\'. Each one is different, all shades of green, etc.
August 29th, 2018 11:42
orchidee said:
Another fine write Fay. And trees are never \'only trees\'. Each one is different, all shades of green, etc.
August 29th, 2018 11:42
FINALITY.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely but sad write,you conveted it well
August 28th, 2018 23:22
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely but sad write,you conveted it well
August 28th, 2018 23:22
FINALITY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
🧡 Thanks FAY for bringing us all to tears ! An ONLY CHILD is an infinite blessing because it turns a loving couple into a FAMILY ! If that child is taken away the effect is devastating especially if the mother is unable to conceive again ! I have seen the effect of this in my extended Family & the Community. As a Church Worker I have had to counsel Parents in that situation ~ it is never easy ~ weeping & praying with them brings some consolation. They show the PAIN you describe: deep cries ~ shuddering whines ~ moans & howling ~ abandonment (especially the Mother !) ~ WHY ME ? inconsolable questions.
The picture of Mary with her Baby reminded me that when she was only about 50 she stood at the Cross and witnessed her SON ~ JESUS die a horrible death ~ CRUCIFIED ~ equally horrific. Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN & ANGELA Please check ANGELAS POEM ~ NEW ZEALAND TRIP ~ Thanks 🧡
August 28th, 2018 17:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
🧡 Thanks FAY for bringing us all to tears ! An ONLY CHILD is an infinite blessing because it turns a loving couple into a FAMILY ! If that child is taken away the effect is devastating especially if the mother is unable to conceive again ! I have seen the effect of this in my extended Family & the Community. As a Church Worker I have had to counsel Parents in that situation ~ it is never easy ~ weeping & praying with them brings some consolation. They show the PAIN you describe: deep cries ~ shuddering whines ~ moans & howling ~ abandonment (especially the Mother !) ~ WHY ME ? inconsolable questions.
The picture of Mary with her Baby reminded me that when she was only about 50 she stood at the Cross and witnessed her SON ~ JESUS die a horrible death ~ CRUCIFIED ~ equally horrific. Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN & ANGELA Please check ANGELAS POEM ~ NEW ZEALAND TRIP ~ Thanks 🧡
August 28th, 2018 17:01
FINALITY.
Michael Edwards said:
The grief is evident in every word - so well crafted dear Fay
August 28th, 2018 07:46
Michael Edwards said:
The grief is evident in every word - so well crafted dear Fay
August 28th, 2018 07:46
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