Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
BITTER.
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Fay.
Meanwhile - release feels better for one when one has gagged me, so I can\'t sing! Aww, I\'m horrible to me. lol.
October 5th, 2018 04:11
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write Fay.
Meanwhile - release feels better for one when one has gagged me, so I can\'t sing! Aww, I\'m horrible to me. lol.
October 5th, 2018 04:11
BITTER.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ I\'m just off to work and have had no time to en an ODE today. Love the Shape of your Poem (very El Greco) and it looks like falling tear drops which befits the Subject.
Sadly so often there is neither time nor opportunity for those BITTER GOODBYES ~ and the sadness hangs suspended in time FOREVER.
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BLESSINGS BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
October 5th, 2018 03:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING FAY ~ I\'m just off to work and have had no time to en an ODE today. Love the Shape of your Poem (very El Greco) and it looks like falling tear drops which befits the Subject.
Sadly so often there is neither time nor opportunity for those BITTER GOODBYES ~ and the sadness hangs suspended in time FOREVER.
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BLESSINGS BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
October 5th, 2018 03:03
BITTER.
dusk arising said:
Release feels better when the mind knows the situation was not right for the both of you. Love shared is the most wonderful flower we have in our lives and from it spring many riches. Love misplaced is a torturous existence teaching us things we have to learn painfully.
Either way, Love endures.
October 5th, 2018 02:59
dusk arising said:
Release feels better when the mind knows the situation was not right for the both of you. Love shared is the most wonderful flower we have in our lives and from it spring many riches. Love misplaced is a torturous existence teaching us things we have to learn painfully.
Either way, Love endures.
October 5th, 2018 02:59
BREAKOUT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once more Fay, I have watched dawn get up in all her many guises.
October 5th, 2018 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once more Fay, I have watched dawn get up in all her many guises.
October 5th, 2018 00:33
UNANSWERED.
Netashi said:
A beautiful and well thought out write as per usual Fay, keep up the magnificent work
-Theta
October 3rd, 2018 13:32
Netashi said:
A beautiful and well thought out write as per usual Fay, keep up the magnificent work
-Theta
October 3rd, 2018 13:32
UNANSWERED.
Michael Edwards said:
What a great read Fay - thanks for posting.
October 3rd, 2018 04:36
Michael Edwards said:
What a great read Fay - thanks for posting.
October 3rd, 2018 04:36
UNANSWERED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL NOSTALGIC POEM FAY ~ thanks for sharing ! We all get stranded from time to time \"out of our comfort zones\". Thus far I\'ve managed to make it back in time ~ those that don\'t perish. Of such is LIFE & (sadly) DEATH. Yours as always BRIAN Please check my Poem on WORDS ~ Thanks B !
October 3rd, 2018 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL NOSTALGIC POEM FAY ~ thanks for sharing ! We all get stranded from time to time \"out of our comfort zones\". Thus far I\'ve managed to make it back in time ~ those that don\'t perish. Of such is LIFE & (sadly) DEATH. Yours as always BRIAN Please check my Poem on WORDS ~ Thanks B !
October 3rd, 2018 03:30
SENSUALITY.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poetry, Faye.
I once had the chance to see a belly dancer and her movements were unbelievable, like those of the Hawaiian dancers.
So good to give the belly dancer the recognition she deserves.
I loved the originality of you poem. and thanks for posting. :)
October 2nd, 2018 14:17
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poetry, Faye.
I once had the chance to see a belly dancer and her movements were unbelievable, like those of the Hawaiian dancers.
So good to give the belly dancer the recognition she deserves.
I loved the originality of you poem. and thanks for posting. :)
October 2nd, 2018 14:17
SENSUALITY.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
An engaging read! I danced all the way trough your write...from the first word to the last! Awesome!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2018 18:08
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
An engaging read! I danced all the way trough your write...from the first word to the last! Awesome!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2018 18:08
SENSUALITY.
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see the lady dancing through your words Fay.
October 1st, 2018 15:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I could see the lady dancing through your words Fay.
October 1st, 2018 15:39
SENSUALITY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ EXCELLENT PICTURE & ELEGANT POEM. We have been to Istanbul and watched the BELLY DANCERS ~ Awesome ! One of them sat on my knee so i could put some notes down her BRA. I didnt know where to put my HANDS so Angela did it ! Both GIRLS laughed so much that NATASHA nearly slipped off my LAP. Angela is very fit and a good dancer ! She joined the GIRLS for a DEMO and they offered her a JOB ! Blessings & Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 1st, 2018 10:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ EXCELLENT PICTURE & ELEGANT POEM. We have been to Istanbul and watched the BELLY DANCERS ~ Awesome ! One of them sat on my knee so i could put some notes down her BRA. I didnt know where to put my HANDS so Angela did it ! Both GIRLS laughed so much that NATASHA nearly slipped off my LAP. Angela is very fit and a good dancer ! She joined the GIRLS for a DEMO and they offered her a JOB ! Blessings & Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 1st, 2018 10:54
WHY NOT ?.
Goldfinch60 said:
That first light is a wonderful sight and looks forward to the day ahead.
September 29th, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That first light is a wonderful sight and looks forward to the day ahead.
September 29th, 2018 00:31
WHY NOT ?.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. The crack of dawn is getting later now. Then we mess about by changing the clocks and, bingo, dawn is an hour earlier!
Was it Dennis Norden who had that catchphrase centuries ago(?) in a film clip show?
September 28th, 2018 11:09
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. The crack of dawn is getting later now. Then we mess about by changing the clocks and, bingo, dawn is an hour earlier!
Was it Dennis Norden who had that catchphrase centuries ago(?) in a film clip show?
September 28th, 2018 11:09
WHY NOT ?.
Christina8 said:
Absolutely well written and wonderful poem to wake up to!! Loved it, Fay! Beautiful picture and quite refreshing as I am waking up to rain!
September 28th, 2018 08:05
Christina8 said:
Absolutely well written and wonderful poem to wake up to!! Loved it, Fay! Beautiful picture and quite refreshing as I am waking up to rain!
September 28th, 2018 08:05
WHY NOT ?.
dusk arising said:
An invigorating breath of fresh air. and why not?
Refreshing fun writing.
September 28th, 2018 06:22
dusk arising said:
An invigorating breath of fresh air. and why not?
Refreshing fun writing.
September 28th, 2018 06:22
WHY NOT ?.
kevin browne said:
I\'ve just read this 3 times because the rhythmic wording and positioning of it all is quite remarkably done. Such a poignant poem. It needs to be hung up on the sky.
September 28th, 2018 06:04
kevin browne said:
I\'ve just read this 3 times because the rhythmic wording and positioning of it all is quite remarkably done. Such a poignant poem. It needs to be hung up on the sky.
September 28th, 2018 06:04
TROUBLE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your THOUGHTS on a PICTURE and in an even more revealing POEM. Men are careless where they \"sow their seed\" and are often absent (as in your Ode) when the LADY has to \"bare the FRUIT\" alone. There would be much STIGMA attached at the beginning of the 18th C but even today when the STIGMA has lessened it is still the Lady who has to bear the STRAIN ~ and still in many circles the SHAME. So often MEN have their way and (as in your ODE) prefer FLIGHT rather than stay and FIGHT for the Lady,s Honour. Despite modern facilities I have encountered the Stress & Distress of some of my female Students and in my Extended Family. if only MEN would think before they JUMP. Angela (30) and I (35) are very capable of PROCREATING but we are both Church Workers and in Role Model Jobs (Caring & Teaching) so we will have to wait until after Easter 2020. At the moment 11,500 miles is much better than the PILL ! Thanks for sharing it has made us all think about sexual responsibility in the 21st C ! Yours as ever BRIAN 😎 Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 26th, 2018 10:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your THOUGHTS on a PICTURE and in an even more revealing POEM. Men are careless where they \"sow their seed\" and are often absent (as in your Ode) when the LADY has to \"bare the FRUIT\" alone. There would be much STIGMA attached at the beginning of the 18th C but even today when the STIGMA has lessened it is still the Lady who has to bear the STRAIN ~ and still in many circles the SHAME. So often MEN have their way and (as in your ODE) prefer FLIGHT rather than stay and FIGHT for the Lady,s Honour. Despite modern facilities I have encountered the Stress & Distress of some of my female Students and in my Extended Family. if only MEN would think before they JUMP. Angela (30) and I (35) are very capable of PROCREATING but we are both Church Workers and in Role Model Jobs (Caring & Teaching) so we will have to wait until after Easter 2020. At the moment 11,500 miles is much better than the PILL ! Thanks for sharing it has made us all think about sexual responsibility in the 21st C ! Yours as ever BRIAN 😎 Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 26th, 2018 10:15
TROUBLE.
Michael Edwards said:
A wrenching read - thankfully we now have a more tolerant and understanding society but there is still a long way to go. What a superb write Fay.
September 26th, 2018 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
A wrenching read - thankfully we now have a more tolerant and understanding society but there is still a long way to go. What a superb write Fay.
September 26th, 2018 04:05
TROUBLE.
kevin browne said:
Love this, Fay Slimm, your writing skills own such desire for the reader to go through to the end. Your idea of a misspent child is a reminder of how so many women fall to this prey. Great writing,
September 26th, 2018 03:41
kevin browne said:
Love this, Fay Slimm, your writing skills own such desire for the reader to go through to the end. Your idea of a misspent child is a reminder of how so many women fall to this prey. Great writing,
September 26th, 2018 03:41
BOARD-BALLET.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, those surfer are amazing to watch.
September 26th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, those surfer are amazing to watch.
September 26th, 2018 00:27
BOARD-BALLET.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poem, Fay, that enlightens your readers to the courage of the surf boarders and the obvious challenge of the mighty waves. :)
September 25th, 2018 13:53
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful poem, Fay, that enlightens your readers to the courage of the surf boarders and the obvious challenge of the mighty waves. :)
September 25th, 2018 13:53
BOARD-BALLET.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For verbal feast in praise of SURFING ! Each word painted a picture and I could feel and taste the SURF ! Great photo too. Any subject embellished with your poetic skill materialises before our eyes ! Angela and I are great SAILORS and we have both tried surfing & sail bards ~ BUT we prefer the safety & stability of an Albacore or a Catamaran ! Thanks fir sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check Angelas Poem on essential VITAMINS also Cavatina br John Williams ~ Thanks B.
September 25th, 2018 11:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For verbal feast in praise of SURFING ! Each word painted a picture and I could feel and taste the SURF ! Great photo too. Any subject embellished with your poetic skill materialises before our eyes ! Angela and I are great SAILORS and we have both tried surfing & sail bards ~ BUT we prefer the safety & stability of an Albacore or a Catamaran ! Thanks fir sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check Angelas Poem on essential VITAMINS also Cavatina br John Williams ~ Thanks B.
September 25th, 2018 11:05
YOU ARE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. wonderful write Fay, all those words are so very meaningful - Thank You.
September 25th, 2018 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. wonderful write Fay, all those words are so very meaningful - Thank You.
September 25th, 2018 00:37
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