Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
YOU ARE.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem that uplifts your readers with thoughts of hope.
I loved it!
September 24th, 2018 18:39
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem that uplifts your readers with thoughts of hope.
I loved it!
September 24th, 2018 18:39
YOU ARE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here, I needed this today, I miss BRIAN of course and the Hospital in Auckland has given me a big schedule! I addition to Morning, Afternoon & Evening Clinics I am involved in the Training of 5 Maori Trainee Physiotherapists. I love it but it is tiring! Its 9:45 am (Tuesday) here. Today my first Clinic is 1pm and then I work to 8pm! I have high self-esteem and want to get the most out of my Work Exchange so I can be a Team Leader & Trainer when I return to the UK : BUT I do need to be \"More gentle on myself !\" Thanks for sharing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 24th, 2018 16:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY : ANGELA here, I needed this today, I miss BRIAN of course and the Hospital in Auckland has given me a big schedule! I addition to Morning, Afternoon & Evening Clinics I am involved in the Training of 5 Maori Trainee Physiotherapists. I love it but it is tiring! Its 9:45 am (Tuesday) here. Today my first Clinic is 1pm and then I work to 8pm! I have high self-esteem and want to get the most out of my Work Exchange so I can be a Team Leader & Trainer when I return to the UK : BUT I do need to be \"More gentle on myself !\" Thanks for sharing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
September 24th, 2018 16:41
YOU ARE.
orchidee said:
Just as long as I don\'t sing and ruin everything! heehee. A lovely write Fay.
September 24th, 2018 10:49
orchidee said:
Just as long as I don\'t sing and ruin everything! heehee. A lovely write Fay.
September 24th, 2018 10:49
YOU ARE.
dusk arising said:
Soothing and reassuring. A definate favourite.
September 24th, 2018 09:23
dusk arising said:
Soothing and reassuring. A definate favourite.
September 24th, 2018 09:23
YOU ARE.
Christina8 said:
Great thoughtful poem Fay! I loved it! I also loved the sweet message you posted before the poem. Great job!
September 24th, 2018 06:38
Christina8 said:
Great thoughtful poem Fay! I loved it! I also loved the sweet message you posted before the poem. Great job!
September 24th, 2018 06:38
UNDERPRIZED.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are right,i have always said true love is forever
September 23rd, 2018 09:21
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are right,i have always said true love is forever
September 23rd, 2018 09:21
UNDERPRIZED.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Your words ring so true!
“Left un-nurtured, this gift called love
withers when carnal lust invades
and fades it’s force to
rating mere second.”
Lust is not everlasting!
As your chosen quote states, it is the
“true unconditional love” that IS everlasting.
A true and honest write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2018 16:19
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Your words ring so true!
“Left un-nurtured, this gift called love
withers when carnal lust invades
and fades it’s force to
rating mere second.”
Lust is not everlasting!
As your chosen quote states, it is the
“true unconditional love” that IS everlasting.
A true and honest write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2018 16:19
UNDERPRIZED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ANGELA HERE : I have read your Poem & Brians response and agree with both of you. KIWI Men, who are well groomed and handsome have tried it on but have quickly got the message! Both Ruth & I have gained the respect of both the Male & Female Staff and they know that we are Truly in Love with Brian & David. Many Young people in our position are unfaithful and think nothing of it ~ that is the tragedy. Thanks for caring its 11 am Friday here and I have a clinic @ 2pm and another @ 6 pm. Love ANGELA XXXX
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September 20th, 2018 18:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FAY ANGELA HERE : I have read your Poem & Brians response and agree with both of you. KIWI Men, who are well groomed and handsome have tried it on but have quickly got the message! Both Ruth & I have gained the respect of both the Male & Female Staff and they know that we are Truly in Love with Brian & David. Many Young people in our position are unfaithful and think nothing of it ~ that is the tragedy. Thanks for caring its 11 am Friday here and I have a clinic @ 2pm and another @ 6 pm. Love ANGELA XXXX
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September 20th, 2018 18:18
UNDERPRIZED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing about NONLOVE ! It describes the situation many of my Friends find themselves in ~ it is very shallow and there is no commitment. ANGELA & I have found TRUE LOVE and for both of us it is so so different from anything we have experienced before. One of my Friends ~ who has worked in Auckland said I was a FOOL to let a Girl as Lovely as ANGELA go to NZ for more than a Year when were are not yet married. He knows what Male KIWIS are like ! I told HIM ~ I know Angela will be faithful to Me (and I to Her) because of the Purity & Intensity of Love we have for Each Other ~ AMEN. Thanks for your Support FAY for all TRUE LOVERS ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Unconditional LOVE really is EVERLASTING ~ AMEN.
September 20th, 2018 13:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for caring and sharing about NONLOVE ! It describes the situation many of my Friends find themselves in ~ it is very shallow and there is no commitment. ANGELA & I have found TRUE LOVE and for both of us it is so so different from anything we have experienced before. One of my Friends ~ who has worked in Auckland said I was a FOOL to let a Girl as Lovely as ANGELA go to NZ for more than a Year when were are not yet married. He knows what Male KIWIS are like ! I told HIM ~ I know Angela will be faithful to Me (and I to Her) because of the Purity & Intensity of Love we have for Each Other ~ AMEN. Thanks for your Support FAY for all TRUE LOVERS ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Unconditional LOVE really is EVERLASTING ~ AMEN.
September 20th, 2018 13:47
AUTUMN COMES RUNNING.
Michael Edwards said:
You have absolutely captured Autumn in this Fay
September 18th, 2018 15:29
Michael Edwards said:
You have absolutely captured Autumn in this Fay
September 18th, 2018 15:29
AUTUMN COMES RUNNING.
orchidee said:
Yes, running, and with a blast of wind! Fairly mild still though. A lovely write Fay. I knew it 90F one weekend end of September one year - a freak heatwave!
September 18th, 2018 11:29
orchidee said:
Yes, running, and with a blast of wind! Fairly mild still though. A lovely write Fay. I knew it 90F one weekend end of September one year - a freak heatwave!
September 18th, 2018 11:29
AUTUMN COMES RUNNING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ increasingly my fave Season. The leaves ~ in all their Autumn Glory ~ seem to linger longer on the branches before forming a rainbow carpet at our feet. Your poem ~ replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ captures beautifully the awesome transition from Summer to Winter ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN. ANGELA sends her love XX but she is sulking because its SPRING in Auckland and she is missing swishing through the Autumn Leaves and ME of course !
September 18th, 2018 04:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ increasingly my fave Season. The leaves ~ in all their Autumn Glory ~ seem to linger longer on the branches before forming a rainbow carpet at our feet. Your poem ~ replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ captures beautifully the awesome transition from Summer to Winter ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN. ANGELA sends her love XX but she is sulking because its SPRING in Auckland and she is missing swishing through the Autumn Leaves and ME of course !
September 18th, 2018 04:40
AUTUMN COMES RUNNING.
Goldfinch60 said:
My absolute favourite time of the year, the beauty of nature will shine all around us.
September 18th, 2018 03:25
Goldfinch60 said:
My absolute favourite time of the year, the beauty of nature will shine all around us.
September 18th, 2018 03:25
UNSATED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay and so meaningful for me at the moment.
September 17th, 2018 07:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay and so meaningful for me at the moment.
September 17th, 2018 07:59
UNSATED.
Michael Edwards said:
As I mentioned elsewhere an epic write dear Fay.
September 17th, 2018 07:42
Michael Edwards said:
As I mentioned elsewhere an epic write dear Fay.
September 17th, 2018 07:42
UNSATED.
dusk arising said:
Poignant - \"Best is closure so hunger can then turn elsewhere for comfort\".
Wisdom says \'put it away\' whenever you can. Pain of loves loss accentuates solitude, solitude encourages the mind to wander into sorrowful valleys where waterfalls await.
But wait, the birds still sing, the sky is still blue and blossoms call out for appreciation. Life does go on and the passing years have given grace and knowledge - a cloak we wear.
September 17th, 2018 05:32
dusk arising said:
Poignant - \"Best is closure so hunger can then turn elsewhere for comfort\".
Wisdom says \'put it away\' whenever you can. Pain of loves loss accentuates solitude, solitude encourages the mind to wander into sorrowful valleys where waterfalls await.
But wait, the birds still sing, the sky is still blue and blossoms call out for appreciation. Life does go on and the passing years have given grace and knowledge - a cloak we wear.
September 17th, 2018 05:32
UNSATED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FAY : ANGELA here : BRIAN is at work and Ive finished for the day 9:30pm! After I turned 17 the feminine longing inside of me was UNSATED from time to time. I guess I was yearning for Someone Special who would Light my Fire! When I met Brian He gave me a deep glow deep inside my Heart and I was SATED & have been ever since. Its hard being so far apart : but when he phones & skypes me and I read his His Love Poems etc I am reinsated! Loved the pensiveness & longing in the Poem & the Picture : BEAUTIFUL Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 17th, 2018 04:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FAY : ANGELA here : BRIAN is at work and Ive finished for the day 9:30pm! After I turned 17 the feminine longing inside of me was UNSATED from time to time. I guess I was yearning for Someone Special who would Light my Fire! When I met Brian He gave me a deep glow deep inside my Heart and I was SATED & have been ever since. Its hard being so far apart : but when he phones & skypes me and I read his His Love Poems etc I am reinsated! Loved the pensiveness & longing in the Poem & the Picture : BEAUTIFUL Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 17th, 2018 04:32
UNSATED.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... What a powerful read so many emotions ran through me while reading.
Thank you
Much love and respect
September 17th, 2018 03:38
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... What a powerful read so many emotions ran through me while reading.
Thank you
Much love and respect
September 17th, 2018 03:38
QUIET.
dusk arising said:
I was so inspired by this that in writing a comment i actually wrote my next poem to be posted here.
I believe i know the healing of quiet which is not the same thing as silence. Quiet can bring peace, relaxation, harmony and wellbeing, repairing our soul.
September 13th, 2018 20:37
dusk arising said:
I was so inspired by this that in writing a comment i actually wrote my next poem to be posted here.
I believe i know the healing of quiet which is not the same thing as silence. Quiet can bring peace, relaxation, harmony and wellbeing, repairing our soul.
September 13th, 2018 20:37
QUIET.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay, I saw th title and prodeeded to read out in a whisper... LOL... lovely well done you.
September 13th, 2018 10:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fay, I saw th title and prodeeded to read out in a whisper... LOL... lovely well done you.
September 13th, 2018 10:37
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