Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SUCHNESS.
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely. If you have achieved such then it must be blissful. I\'m sadly lagging for parts of love still generate tears in me (and i don\'t just refer to romantic love here)
February 19th, 2018 08:16
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely. If you have achieved such then it must be blissful. I\'m sadly lagging for parts of love still generate tears in me (and i don\'t just refer to romantic love here)
February 19th, 2018 08:16
SUCHNESS.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written and superb construction - a work of poetic art.
February 19th, 2018 07:22
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written and superb construction - a work of poetic art.
February 19th, 2018 07:22
More Than.
FredPeyer said:
That light is what it is all about. Without it our lives would not be livable. Beautifully written, Fay!
February 18th, 2018 06:50
FredPeyer said:
That light is what it is all about. Without it our lives would not be livable. Beautifully written, Fay!
February 18th, 2018 06:50
More Than.
Heather T said:
So wonderful to have a writer of your caliber to read daily on this site! Your pen never fails to delight.
February 16th, 2018 16:21
Heather T said:
So wonderful to have a writer of your caliber to read daily on this site! Your pen never fails to delight.
February 16th, 2018 16:21
More Than.
Laura🌻 said:
So happy you reposted
this gem my dear Fay!
Beautifully written in its
entirety!
I especially liked...
...melting black fingers...
...but not before that
glittering exit...
Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:27
Laura🌻 said:
So happy you reposted
this gem my dear Fay!
Beautifully written in its
entirety!
I especially liked...
...melting black fingers...
...but not before that
glittering exit...
Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:27
More Than.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"GOD said ~ Let there be light
and there was light !
When we opened our EYES
and saw what GOD had created
We saw the VISIBLE SPECTRUM
R O Y G B I V ~ and could not
believe our eyes !
BUT we understood why GOD SAID ........
FIAT LUX ~ LET THERE BE LIGHT ~ AMEN
Thanks for caring & sharing ~
Yours enlightened ~ BRIAN !
February 16th, 2018 05:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"GOD said ~ Let there be light
and there was light !
When we opened our EYES
and saw what GOD had created
We saw the VISIBLE SPECTRUM
R O Y G B I V ~ and could not
believe our eyes !
BUT we understood why GOD SAID ........
FIAT LUX ~ LET THERE BE LIGHT ~ AMEN
Thanks for caring & sharing ~
Yours enlightened ~ BRIAN !
February 16th, 2018 05:10
More Than.
Lorna said:
And now I sit waiting for the light which is showing up earlier and earlier! Lovely way to wake up Fay!
February 16th, 2018 04:34
Lorna said:
And now I sit waiting for the light which is showing up earlier and earlier! Lovely way to wake up Fay!
February 16th, 2018 04:34
More Than.
Caring dove said:
wow, fay .. this is really lovely .. so many wonderful lines.. thanks for sharing x
February 16th, 2018 04:31
Caring dove said:
wow, fay .. this is really lovely .. so many wonderful lines.. thanks for sharing x
February 16th, 2018 04:31
More Than.
Michael Edwards said:
And what a great repost this is. Some wonderful lines - one of favourites being: fins stretch in watery beds.
February 16th, 2018 04:17
Michael Edwards said:
And what a great repost this is. Some wonderful lines - one of favourites being: fins stretch in watery beds.
February 16th, 2018 04:17
CAGELESS.
Accidental Poet said:
No animals of any breed should be confined or restricted from free movement in Nature. That is Nature\'s Law and should be adhered to by all of the Human race. Cage a Human and everyone is making a fuss about it. But so few care of the animal world. Now THAT is sad.
February 15th, 2018 19:41
Accidental Poet said:
No animals of any breed should be confined or restricted from free movement in Nature. That is Nature\'s Law and should be adhered to by all of the Human race. Cage a Human and everyone is making a fuss about it. But so few care of the animal world. Now THAT is sad.
February 15th, 2018 19:41
CAGELESS.
FredPeyer said:
First of all you are absolutely right, Fay! And secondly you expressed it beautifully!
February 15th, 2018 17:09
FredPeyer said:
First of all you are absolutely right, Fay! And secondly you expressed it beautifully!
February 15th, 2018 17:09
CAGELESS.
Michael Edwards said:
This excels - a marvellous write in support of the birth right to freedom that every creature should enjoy - another brilliant penning Fay.
February 15th, 2018 11:26
Michael Edwards said:
This excels - a marvellous write in support of the birth right to freedom that every creature should enjoy - another brilliant penning Fay.
February 15th, 2018 11:26
CAGELESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
It is wonderful to see raptors in flight, they should all have their freedom.
Statistics show that there are more Barn Owls in captivity than live in the wild.
February 15th, 2018 08:58
Goldfinch60 said:
It is wonderful to see raptors in flight, they should all have their freedom.
Statistics show that there are more Barn Owls in captivity than live in the wild.
February 15th, 2018 08:58
CAGELESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"My heart enrages
Over BIRDS in cages
I long to see
Every BIRD fly free !\"
Love POEM \'N PIC ~ FAY
Thanks for Carin\' \'an Sharin\'
Yours BRIAN Aveophile !
February 15th, 2018 05:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"My heart enrages
Over BIRDS in cages
I long to see
Every BIRD fly free !\"
Love POEM \'N PIC ~ FAY
Thanks for Carin\' \'an Sharin\'
Yours BRIAN Aveophile !
February 15th, 2018 05:49
CAGELESS.
Caring dove said:
hi fay , no bird should be caged or trapped .. they have the right to be free, to fly in the breeze. i love birds and i love being able to see them fly . a lovely and intelligent piece of writing, which i enjoyed.. x
February 15th, 2018 05:47
Caring dove said:
hi fay , no bird should be caged or trapped .. they have the right to be free, to fly in the breeze. i love birds and i love being able to see them fly . a lovely and intelligent piece of writing, which i enjoyed.. x
February 15th, 2018 05:47
CAGELESS.
Lorna said:
Marvelous Fay - there is nothing like seeing creatures free in their own space. When we used to turn the horses loose for the day I could feel their joy as they turned and ran like the wind!
February 15th, 2018 04:56
Lorna said:
Marvelous Fay - there is nothing like seeing creatures free in their own space. When we used to turn the horses loose for the day I could feel their joy as they turned and ran like the wind!
February 15th, 2018 04:56
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
Laura🌻 said:
The sentiments you’ve
expressed in this exquisite
poem are beyond beautiful,
my dear Fay!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2018 17:13
Laura🌻 said:
The sentiments you’ve
expressed in this exquisite
poem are beyond beautiful,
my dear Fay!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2018 17:13
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
Jo Middleton said:
Such a capturing and beautiful read.. really enjoyed this
February 14th, 2018 16:32
Jo Middleton said:
Such a capturing and beautiful read.. really enjoyed this
February 14th, 2018 16:32
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Fay! Happy Valentine\'s Day!
February 14th, 2018 13:36
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Fay! Happy Valentine\'s Day!
February 14th, 2018 13:36
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
malubotelho said:
Always a new beautiful writing Fay. Loved to read it.
February 14th, 2018 13:05
malubotelho said:
Always a new beautiful writing Fay. Loved to read it.
February 14th, 2018 13:05
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Lost ~ long distance ~ VALENTINE !\" Better to have loved ................... ! Whenever I sent a Valentine to the then current GIRL of My Dreams ~ I always included a Personal Poem ~ which they loved and cherished. I am pleased we share an Elizabethan (1st !) trait ~ an EMAIL is not a VALENTINE. A Lady once sent an intimate Love email to me ~ but she pressed the wrong button (easily done !) and mailed it to the 357 people in her MESSAGE OUT BOX some of whom were our CHURCH ELDERS ! Thanks for reprising ~ Yours for ever BRIAN.
February 14th, 2018 09:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Lost ~ long distance ~ VALENTINE !\" Better to have loved ................... ! Whenever I sent a Valentine to the then current GIRL of My Dreams ~ I always included a Personal Poem ~ which they loved and cherished. I am pleased we share an Elizabethan (1st !) trait ~ an EMAIL is not a VALENTINE. A Lady once sent an intimate Love email to me ~ but she pressed the wrong button (easily done !) and mailed it to the 357 people in her MESSAGE OUT BOX some of whom were our CHURCH ELDERS ! Thanks for reprising ~ Yours for ever BRIAN.
February 14th, 2018 09:26
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
Heather T said:
Fay, gosh...spellbound in the pining.
February 14th, 2018 07:28
Heather T said:
Fay, gosh...spellbound in the pining.
February 14th, 2018 07:28
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
Christina8 said:
Excellent write Fay! Just beautiful!
February 14th, 2018 07:23
Christina8 said:
Excellent write Fay! Just beautiful!
February 14th, 2018 07:23
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