Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
EBONY CHILL.
Lauraš» said:
We too this morning woke up to snow and soon itāll be freezing rain! Snow I like! Freezing rain...not so much!
I do feel for those innocent little creatures out there in the freezing cold!
A beautiful and engaging write my dear Fay! Love the visual! I hope those two little badgers have a warm and cozy burrow to go back to!
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 09:38
Lauraš» said:
We too this morning woke up to snow and soon itāll be freezing rain! Snow I like! Freezing rain...not so much!
I do feel for those innocent little creatures out there in the freezing cold!
A beautiful and engaging write my dear Fay! Love the visual! I hope those two little badgers have a warm and cozy burrow to go back to!
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 09:38
EBONY CHILL.
Lorna said:
Wonderful Fay........ I so wish we had badgers here........
February 7th, 2018 09:24
Lorna said:
Wonderful Fay........ I so wish we had badgers here........
February 7th, 2018 09:24
WHITE STUFF.
Christina8 said:
I hope for Spring for you soon as I do for us. Cute poem!
February 6th, 2018 19:09
Christina8 said:
I hope for Spring for you soon as I do for us. Cute poem!
February 6th, 2018 19:09
WHITE STUFF.
Lauraš» said:
Sweet and smart Tessa!!
A wonderful write, dear Fay!
I really liked the way you used the semicolon. Very clever of you! I truly enjoyed the read along with the adorable pic! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
P.S.- Just heard the weather report...snow is headed my way!
February 6th, 2018 15:41
Lauraš» said:
Sweet and smart Tessa!!
A wonderful write, dear Fay!
I really liked the way you used the semicolon. Very clever of you! I truly enjoyed the read along with the adorable pic! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
P.S.- Just heard the weather report...snow is headed my way!
February 6th, 2018 15:41
WHITE STUFF.
orchidee said:
Nice write and pic Fay. I saw a seire: \'you know you\'re getting old when....\' We could add \'....when we leave the snow for children and dogs to enjoy!\'
February 6th, 2018 10:04
orchidee said:
Nice write and pic Fay. I saw a seire: \'you know you\'re getting old when....\' We could add \'....when we leave the snow for children and dogs to enjoy!\'
February 6th, 2018 10:04
WHITE STUFF.
Goldfinch60 said:
I counted about twenty flakes this morning, that is more than enough for me! You had better ensure that the fire is kept going for Tessa.
February 6th, 2018 09:33
Goldfinch60 said:
I counted about twenty flakes this morning, that is more than enough for me! You had better ensure that the fire is kept going for Tessa.
February 6th, 2018 09:33
WHITE STUFF.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another excellent Poem and a lovely picture of TESSA ! Dogs make excellent thermometers and barometers as well ! Yours as always BRIAN WE had a bit of snow yesterday (Monday) cold & dry today
February 6th, 2018 08:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another excellent Poem and a lovely picture of TESSA ! Dogs make excellent thermometers and barometers as well ! Yours as always BRIAN WE had a bit of snow yesterday (Monday) cold & dry today
February 6th, 2018 08:45
Love\'s Birthright.
Goldfinch60 said:
Lets us move forward in the kindness within ourselves being shared with those around us. Good write Fay.
February 6th, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Lets us move forward in the kindness within ourselves being shared with those around us. Good write Fay.
February 6th, 2018 01:44
Love\'s Birthright.
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, love that last line! So well written, as always!
February 5th, 2018 18:25
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, love that last line! So well written, as always!
February 5th, 2018 18:25
Love\'s Birthright.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a very elegant and thought provoking POEM ! The Good Book says we must LOVE OTHERS to the same extent that we LOVE OURSELVES ! A Priori ~ How we treat others is proportional to our own SELF ~ ESTEEM and SELF WORTH ~ Yours as always BRIAN (Priceless !)
February 5th, 2018 14:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a very elegant and thought provoking POEM ! The Good Book says we must LOVE OTHERS to the same extent that we LOVE OURSELVES ! A Priori ~ How we treat others is proportional to our own SELF ~ ESTEEM and SELF WORTH ~ Yours as always BRIAN (Priceless !)
February 5th, 2018 14:55
Love\'s Birthright.
orchidee said:
Ahh - \'Love our neighbour as ourself\'. Fine words here Fay. I must love them - not sing to them! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 06:49
orchidee said:
Ahh - \'Love our neighbour as ourself\'. Fine words here Fay. I must love them - not sing to them! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 06:49
Love\'s Birthright.
Lorna said:
Fay - such a lovely message and absolutely the hardest thing to do .....
February 5th, 2018 05:23
Lorna said:
Fay - such a lovely message and absolutely the hardest thing to do .....
February 5th, 2018 05:23
Alltogetherness.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED ~ Great thoughts to enrich he mind as we enter the Sabbath (It\'s 9pm in the EAST !) Believing in the LOVE that flows daily from the Throne of GOD ~ breaks down all barriers and produces ALLTOGETHERNESS ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN Love the visual ~ The Shekinah Glory of the juxtaposition of the WORD of GOD and the Throne of GOD ~ AMEN !
February 3rd, 2018 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED ~ Great thoughts to enrich he mind as we enter the Sabbath (It\'s 9pm in the EAST !) Believing in the LOVE that flows daily from the Throne of GOD ~ breaks down all barriers and produces ALLTOGETHERNESS ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN Love the visual ~ The Shekinah Glory of the juxtaposition of the WORD of GOD and the Throne of GOD ~ AMEN !
February 3rd, 2018 16:18
Alltogetherness.
FredPeyer said:
The answer to the \'who?\' is quite simple: It is YOU Fay!!!
How else could you write so beautifully?
February 3rd, 2018 13:34
FredPeyer said:
The answer to the \'who?\' is quite simple: It is YOU Fay!!!
How else could you write so beautifully?
February 3rd, 2018 13:34
Alltogetherness.
Lauraš» said:
Much to reflect upon,
dear Fay!
Thank you for this
thought provoking
beautiful share!
~Laura~
February 3rd, 2018 10:20
Lauraš» said:
Much to reflect upon,
dear Fay!
Thank you for this
thought provoking
beautiful share!
~Laura~
February 3rd, 2018 10:20
Alltogetherness.
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed - subtle reflections enjoyed Fay.
February 3rd, 2018 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed - subtle reflections enjoyed Fay.
February 3rd, 2018 09:11
Alltogetherness.
Lorna said:
Fay - I\'m not religious but I believe in Love! (Nature is god to me.....)
February 3rd, 2018 08:45
Lorna said:
Fay - I\'m not religious but I believe in Love! (Nature is god to me.....)
February 3rd, 2018 08:45
Too Long.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and the imagery is wonderful. I do hope the rain stops soon and the glory of Spring comes to the valley.
February 3rd, 2018 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and the imagery is wonderful. I do hope the rain stops soon and the glory of Spring comes to the valley.
February 3rd, 2018 01:25
Too Long.
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully written, Fay! And while I write this comment, I look out the window and see rain clouds, rain, and everything wet!!! Perfect poem for a perfectly wet day!
February 2nd, 2018 14:48
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully written, Fay! And while I write this comment, I look out the window and see rain clouds, rain, and everything wet!!! Perfect poem for a perfectly wet day!
February 2nd, 2018 14:48
Too Long.
TrystanBehm said:
Simply beautiful. Reminds me of a hours long train ride from Edinburgh to Chester in the rain through the highlands. Wonderful write!
February 2nd, 2018 09:58
TrystanBehm said:
Simply beautiful. Reminds me of a hours long train ride from Edinburgh to Chester in the rain through the highlands. Wonderful write!
February 2nd, 2018 09:58
Too Long.
Lorna said:
A forlorn picture Fay - it very much brought to mind a cold, wet day in March on the horse farm one year when the entire barn had flooded - all the stalls were liquid sawdust and manure and we spent the cold, cold day using buckets to get it all out. The horses stood with their heads down - it was miserable..........
February 2nd, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
A forlorn picture Fay - it very much brought to mind a cold, wet day in March on the horse farm one year when the entire barn had flooded - all the stalls were liquid sawdust and manure and we spent the cold, cold day using buckets to get it all out. The horses stood with their heads down - it was miserable..........
February 2nd, 2018 06:20
Too Long.
Michael Edwards said:
Like a good curry it\'s matured with the repost - such a great work Fay
February 2nd, 2018 05:51
Michael Edwards said:
Like a good curry it\'s matured with the repost - such a great work Fay
February 2nd, 2018 05:51
Regeneration.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that door into a new you is a wonderful feeling.
February 2nd, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that door into a new you is a wonderful feeling.
February 2nd, 2018 01:32
Regeneration.
FredPeyer said:
And there she goes...gallivanting around with a big smile on her face!
I like that new you, Fay, and I like your poem too!
February 1st, 2018 13:22
FredPeyer said:
And there she goes...gallivanting around with a big smile on her face!
I like that new you, Fay, and I like your poem too!
February 1st, 2018 13:22
Specialness.
FredPeyer said:
That picture goes perfectly with your beautiful poem, Fay! While the last stanza is sad, that sadness is offset by all the beauty before and the very special last four lines! Beautiful!
February 1st, 2018 12:50
FredPeyer said:
That picture goes perfectly with your beautiful poem, Fay! While the last stanza is sad, that sadness is offset by all the beauty before and the very special last four lines! Beautiful!
February 1st, 2018 12:50
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