Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
STILL CLIMBING.
Lorna said:
Beautiful Fay - the courage comes in trying to trust people again doesn\'t it.
February 23rd, 2018 07:48
Lorna said:
Beautiful Fay - the courage comes in trying to trust people again doesn\'t it.
February 23rd, 2018 07:48
STILL CLIMBING.
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent work Fay. Betrayal, the worst slap in the face from a trusted friend or family member.
February 23rd, 2018 06:25
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent work Fay. Betrayal, the worst slap in the face from a trusted friend or family member.
February 23rd, 2018 06:25
BEGINNINGS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, fabulous and very meaningful last two lines.
February 23rd, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, fabulous and very meaningful last two lines.
February 23rd, 2018 01:32
BEGINNINGS.
Poetic25 said:
Fay,
you have captured a wonderful spring-time scene, and I\'m sure I speak for many that we feel the warmth of the sun very soon.
A nice write
Michael :)
February 22nd, 2018 13:30
Poetic25 said:
Fay,
you have captured a wonderful spring-time scene, and I\'m sure I speak for many that we feel the warmth of the sun very soon.
A nice write
Michael :)
February 22nd, 2018 13:30
BEGINNINGS.
Laura🌻 said:
Spring...new birth...
So beautifully expressed, my dear Fay! A metaphorically rich and luscious write...as lush and vibrant as Spring jewels! A very enjoyable read!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 11:29
Laura🌻 said:
Spring...new birth...
So beautifully expressed, my dear Fay! A metaphorically rich and luscious write...as lush and vibrant as Spring jewels! A very enjoyable read!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 11:29
BEGINNINGS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Let\'s hope it\'s not too far away! We never know with the weather. Hope you don\'t have to write \'But then cruel frosts killed off the new growth, etc\'
February 22nd, 2018 06:51
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Let\'s hope it\'s not too far away! We never know with the weather. Hope you don\'t have to write \'But then cruel frosts killed off the new growth, etc\'
February 22nd, 2018 06:51
BEGINNINGS.
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work Fay and I see the beginnings all round me. Currently in bloom in the garden: snowdrops, cyclamen, crocus, hellebores, iris, primroses, polyanthus and, as of yesterday, daffodils.
February 22nd, 2018 06:31
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work Fay and I see the beginnings all round me. Currently in bloom in the garden: snowdrops, cyclamen, crocus, hellebores, iris, primroses, polyanthus and, as of yesterday, daffodils.
February 22nd, 2018 06:31
BEGINNINGS.
Caring dove said:
hi fay ,, this is very lovely :-) your wording in this is beautiful , a truly expressive and lovely poem .. :-)
February 22nd, 2018 05:59
Caring dove said:
hi fay ,, this is very lovely :-) your wording in this is beautiful , a truly expressive and lovely poem .. :-)
February 22nd, 2018 05:59
LIVE SILVER.
Christina8 said:
Great write Fay! It\'s a hard job being a fisherman--which you so eloquently displayed in your poem.
February 21st, 2018 22:08
Christina8 said:
Great write Fay! It\'s a hard job being a fisherman--which you so eloquently displayed in your poem.
February 21st, 2018 22:08
INVENTION.
FredPeyer said:
And I thought all I am doing is simply putting words on paper. But you make me feel like a magician! Beautiful eloquent writing, Fay, you are an inspiration to us all.
February 21st, 2018 10:44
FredPeyer said:
And I thought all I am doing is simply putting words on paper. But you make me feel like a magician! Beautiful eloquent writing, Fay, you are an inspiration to us all.
February 21st, 2018 10:44
LIVE SILVER.
Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive work with some great imagery
February 21st, 2018 07:11
Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive work with some great imagery
February 21st, 2018 07:11
LIVE SILVER.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ On the NE COAST it was always a JOY & RELIEF \"Wen the BOOT cums in\" You have captured the Agony & Ecstasy of \"The hard Lives of FISHERFOLK everywhere ! Another wee gem ~ Yours eternally BRIAN !
February 21st, 2018 04:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ On the NE COAST it was always a JOY & RELIEF \"Wen the BOOT cums in\" You have captured the Agony & Ecstasy of \"The hard Lives of FISHERFOLK everywhere ! Another wee gem ~ Yours eternally BRIAN !
February 21st, 2018 04:37
LIVE SILVER.
Laura🌻 said:
You are an amazing
gift to the literary world,
my dear Fay!
This is an awesome descriptive penned poem !
My mom has a similar pic
of her grandmother and
aunt who were married to
fishermen!
As I read your poem, I envisioned them standing by the Bay of Naples waiting for their husbands with the day’s catch ready to clean, pack, and deliver!
Loved this very special read! Thank you!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 03:55
Laura🌻 said:
You are an amazing
gift to the literary world,
my dear Fay!
This is an awesome descriptive penned poem !
My mom has a similar pic
of her grandmother and
aunt who were married to
fishermen!
As I read your poem, I envisioned them standing by the Bay of Naples waiting for their husbands with the day’s catch ready to clean, pack, and deliver!
Loved this very special read! Thank you!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 03:55
LIVE SILVER.
Goldfinch60 said:
Hard work back in the day and maybe even harder now as the fish stocks get lower. Good write Fay.
February 21st, 2018 03:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Hard work back in the day and maybe even harder now as the fish stocks get lower. Good write Fay.
February 21st, 2018 03:21
INVENTION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
All ARTISTS ~ POETS ~ MUSICIANS have a spark of Genius and given time will produce a New Art Movement ~ A New Poetic Form or a New Music Genre ~ we all seek to add our Mark to Society & History ! Elvis was just a Poor Boy from Tupelo but He inspired a GENERATION ~ DALI a mystic Spanish Painter but He revolutionised 20th Century Art and Robbie Burns a Crofters Son who died Young but his Satire & Poetry is celebrated Worldwide. In the WORLD of SCIENCE a Girl from Poland ~ was forced to study Science in Paris because she was a GIRL ! By serendipity Becquerel chose her to examine the radiation emanating from Uranium and she isolated RADIUM & POLONIUM and obtained not just a PhD (which is a useful qualification) but became the only person to receive two NOBEL PRIZES in Science ~ Physics & Chemistry ~ She also added a very precious word to the WORLD\'s DICTIONARIES ~ RADIOACTIVITY Alas she died of LEUKEMIA ~ But she left an awesome legacy. We can\'t all be WORLD CHANGERS ~ BUT ~ We all leave a legacy ~ even if it\'s only our portfolio of Poems on MPS ! Yours Creatively ~ BRIAN
February 20th, 2018 11:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
All ARTISTS ~ POETS ~ MUSICIANS have a spark of Genius and given time will produce a New Art Movement ~ A New Poetic Form or a New Music Genre ~ we all seek to add our Mark to Society & History ! Elvis was just a Poor Boy from Tupelo but He inspired a GENERATION ~ DALI a mystic Spanish Painter but He revolutionised 20th Century Art and Robbie Burns a Crofters Son who died Young but his Satire & Poetry is celebrated Worldwide. In the WORLD of SCIENCE a Girl from Poland ~ was forced to study Science in Paris because she was a GIRL ! By serendipity Becquerel chose her to examine the radiation emanating from Uranium and she isolated RADIUM & POLONIUM and obtained not just a PhD (which is a useful qualification) but became the only person to receive two NOBEL PRIZES in Science ~ Physics & Chemistry ~ She also added a very precious word to the WORLD\'s DICTIONARIES ~ RADIOACTIVITY Alas she died of LEUKEMIA ~ But she left an awesome legacy. We can\'t all be WORLD CHANGERS ~ BUT ~ We all leave a legacy ~ even if it\'s only our portfolio of Poems on MPS ! Yours Creatively ~ BRIAN
February 20th, 2018 11:40
INVENTION.
orchidee said:
Necessity is the mother of........ I would weave something in to this, if I had your poetic qualities! A fine write Fay.
February 20th, 2018 08:53
orchidee said:
Necessity is the mother of........ I would weave something in to this, if I had your poetic qualities! A fine write Fay.
February 20th, 2018 08:53
INVENTION.
Michael Edwards said:
Superb work Fay - ah the dripping metaphor.
February 20th, 2018 07:00
Michael Edwards said:
Superb work Fay - ah the dripping metaphor.
February 20th, 2018 07:00
INVENTION.
Lorna said:
Words, painting, music - these are the true legacies that man will leave behind I think. The CEO\'s will be forgotten - the artists (good or bad) will remain in some fashion.... trying so hard to see and catch the magic!
February 20th, 2018 05:45
Lorna said:
Words, painting, music - these are the true legacies that man will leave behind I think. The CEO\'s will be forgotten - the artists (good or bad) will remain in some fashion.... trying so hard to see and catch the magic!
February 20th, 2018 05:45
INVENTION.
kevin browne said:
brilliant piece of bringing such wonderful words together revealing how you painted this picture pf poetry. loving your language, Fay Slimm.
February 20th, 2018 05:33
kevin browne said:
brilliant piece of bringing such wonderful words together revealing how you painted this picture pf poetry. loving your language, Fay Slimm.
February 20th, 2018 05:33
SUCHNESS.
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful and
loving write, my
dear Fay!
Stop and listen for a
moment. Appreciate
the love in your heart!
Such is the moment!
~Laura~
February 19th, 2018 17:15
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful and
loving write, my
dear Fay!
Stop and listen for a
moment. Appreciate
the love in your heart!
Such is the moment!
~Laura~
February 19th, 2018 17:15
SUCHNESS.
Poetic25 said:
Faye,
a lovely piece of reflecting your soul, flowing with your heart
Michael :)
February 19th, 2018 15:59
Poetic25 said:
Faye,
a lovely piece of reflecting your soul, flowing with your heart
Michael :)
February 19th, 2018 15:59
SUCHNESS.
FredPeyer said:
Love the whole poem, Fay, but that last stanza is pure magic and delight!
February 19th, 2018 12:14
FredPeyer said:
Love the whole poem, Fay, but that last stanza is pure magic and delight!
February 19th, 2018 12:14
SUCHNESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUCH LOVE ~ White as the driven snow
SUCH LOVE ~ I & Angela know
SUCH LOVE ~ Down through the years I show
O FAY ~ SUCH LOVE !
As your perfect poem reminds us:
No Fear ~ Forgiveness ~ No Weeping
Thanks FAY for caring & Sharing
Your Forever Friend ~ BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 09:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUCH LOVE ~ White as the driven snow
SUCH LOVE ~ I & Angela know
SUCH LOVE ~ Down through the years I show
O FAY ~ SUCH LOVE !
As your perfect poem reminds us:
No Fear ~ Forgiveness ~ No Weeping
Thanks FAY for caring & Sharing
Your Forever Friend ~ BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 09:56
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