Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE.
Accidental Poet said:
Your mastery of words is top notch Fay. A very heartfelt write for this day of love.
February 14th, 2018 05:19
Accidental Poet said:
Your mastery of words is top notch Fay. A very heartfelt write for this day of love.
February 14th, 2018 05:19
COPING ALONE.
FredPeyer said:
You truly do have the gift, Fay! Beautifully written with just the right amount of emotion.
February 13th, 2018 20:48
FredPeyer said:
You truly do have the gift, Fay! Beautifully written with just the right amount of emotion.
February 13th, 2018 20:48
UNDETERRED.
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoy I did - life is all about positivity - if it wasn\'t I wouldn\'t be me - great write Fay.
February 13th, 2018 16:48
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoy I did - life is all about positivity - if it wasn\'t I wouldn\'t be me - great write Fay.
February 13th, 2018 16:48
UNDETERRED.
dusk arising said:
Lovely force of positivity seeps into me from reading your words, just when i need it. Thank you.
February 13th, 2018 12:08
dusk arising said:
Lovely force of positivity seeps into me from reading your words, just when i need it. Thank you.
February 13th, 2018 12:08
UNDETERRED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENT ADVICE as usual FAY ~ In all situations (so far) I have discovered that a GENTLE ANSWER deflects WRATH ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always BRIAN
February 13th, 2018 09:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENT ADVICE as usual FAY ~ In all situations (so far) I have discovered that a GENTLE ANSWER deflects WRATH ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always BRIAN
February 13th, 2018 09:43
UNDETERRED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, looking for the positive in all is a wonderful thing to do.
February 13th, 2018 09:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, looking for the positive in all is a wonderful thing to do.
February 13th, 2018 09:09
UNDETERRED.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear poetess Fay,
Remembering your beautiful words of wisdom...
“Relationships thrive when leaving momentary need for contest behind.”
...would make this world a better place!
The positivity of your fine penned poem is
a breath of fresh air! A much needed and welcomed share! Thank you!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 07:43
Laura🌻 said:
My dear poetess Fay,
Remembering your beautiful words of wisdom...
“Relationships thrive when leaving momentary need for contest behind.”
...would make this world a better place!
The positivity of your fine penned poem is
a breath of fresh air! A much needed and welcomed share! Thank you!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 07:43
COPING ALONE.
Christina8 said:
Emotional and such a well written piece! Gripping! Very well expressed. Great write, Fay!
February 12th, 2018 14:58
Christina8 said:
Emotional and such a well written piece! Gripping! Very well expressed. Great write, Fay!
February 12th, 2018 14:58
COPING ALONE.
dusk arising said:
Indeed, what is the point of going to war if this is its harvest.
February 12th, 2018 11:23
dusk arising said:
Indeed, what is the point of going to war if this is its harvest.
February 12th, 2018 11:23
COPING ALONE.
Michael Edwards said:
Emotion torn piece - so well expressed.
February 12th, 2018 11:06
Michael Edwards said:
Emotion torn piece - so well expressed.
February 12th, 2018 11:06
COPING ALONE.
Poetic25 said:
Hi Faye,
A heart-gripping piece, that flows really well with emotion.
M :)
February 12th, 2018 10:47
Poetic25 said:
Hi Faye,
A heart-gripping piece, that flows really well with emotion.
M :)
February 12th, 2018 10:47
COPING ALONE.
Lorna said:
You always hit to the heart Fay. Bad enough to be a widow older but can\'t imagine how the young can handle it, especially because of a war death. Don\'t know how they make sense of it. I myself am an \"Alzheimer\'s\" widow who lives somewhere between him living and dying. It\'s a most other worldly place to be.
February 12th, 2018 07:06
Lorna said:
You always hit to the heart Fay. Bad enough to be a widow older but can\'t imagine how the young can handle it, especially because of a war death. Don\'t know how they make sense of it. I myself am an \"Alzheimer\'s\" widow who lives somewhere between him living and dying. It\'s a most other worldly place to be.
February 12th, 2018 07:06
THOSE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those who go to sea are so brave.
Shanties are very meaningful if you listen to them properly.
February 11th, 2018 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those who go to sea are so brave.
Shanties are very meaningful if you listen to them properly.
February 11th, 2018 01:24
THOSE.
FredPeyer said:
You conjure up great scenes of life on the sea, Fay. So well written! I love to read your poems.
February 10th, 2018 19:53
FredPeyer said:
You conjure up great scenes of life on the sea, Fay. So well written! I love to read your poems.
February 10th, 2018 19:53
THOSE.
Laura🌻 said:
Ah, yes...in peril of the Sea!
Respect! It’s all about respect...my great grandfather’s words!
My great grandfather, a fisherman from Naples, was all about having respect for the Sea!
As per my mom, his mantra was “YOU HAVE RESPECT FOR THE SEA AND THE SEA WILL SERVE YOU WELL”!
Enjoyed the read my dear Fay. Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 10th, 2018 11:49
Laura🌻 said:
Ah, yes...in peril of the Sea!
Respect! It’s all about respect...my great grandfather’s words!
My great grandfather, a fisherman from Naples, was all about having respect for the Sea!
As per my mom, his mantra was “YOU HAVE RESPECT FOR THE SEA AND THE SEA WILL SERVE YOU WELL”!
Enjoyed the read my dear Fay. Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 10th, 2018 11:49
THOSE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LORD hear us when we cry to thee
For those in peril on the Sea !
We must be aware (every Friday !)
Of the REAL price of \"Fish & Chips !\"
Perfect fusion of POEM \'n PIC ~ Thanks for caring & scaring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 10:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LORD hear us when we cry to thee
For those in peril on the Sea !
We must be aware (every Friday !)
Of the REAL price of \"Fish & Chips !\"
Perfect fusion of POEM \'n PIC ~ Thanks for caring & scaring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 10:17
UNLATCHED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another Perfect Poem ~ Only in Cornwall ~ You are so Blessed. I live 12 miles from the SEA ~ I can smell it but can\'t see it ~ shame. Sometimes I stay with a Friend on the East Coast and the SUNRISES are breathtaking ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
February 9th, 2018 16:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another Perfect Poem ~ Only in Cornwall ~ You are so Blessed. I live 12 miles from the SEA ~ I can smell it but can\'t see it ~ shame. Sometimes I stay with a Friend on the East Coast and the SUNRISES are breathtaking ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
February 9th, 2018 16:22
UNLATCHED.
dusk arising said:
Brrrrrr how could you write such a warm inviting nay, encouraging encounter with the dawn on such a cold and frosty occasion. I know you are in our southernmost county but the chill even without the frost is biting.
You must have a very warm spirit to pen these wonderful pieces. A pleasure to read.
February 9th, 2018 15:30
dusk arising said:
Brrrrrr how could you write such a warm inviting nay, encouraging encounter with the dawn on such a cold and frosty occasion. I know you are in our southernmost county but the chill even without the frost is biting.
You must have a very warm spirit to pen these wonderful pieces. A pleasure to read.
February 9th, 2018 15:30
UNLATCHED.
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully penned poem to welcome this brand new day! Ahh...the beauty of nature. A wondrous sight to behold! I enjoyed the read and visual very much my dear Fay! Thank you.
~Laura~
February 9th, 2018 07:50
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully penned poem to welcome this brand new day! Ahh...the beauty of nature. A wondrous sight to behold! I enjoyed the read and visual very much my dear Fay! Thank you.
~Laura~
February 9th, 2018 07:50
Behind and Between.
Louis Gibbs said:
A thin veil it is, indeed! This poem is both beautifully constructed and visionary. Exquisitely penned, Fay! Packed with truths not known to many. Kudos!
February 8th, 2018 10:53
Louis Gibbs said:
A thin veil it is, indeed! This poem is both beautifully constructed and visionary. Exquisitely penned, Fay! Packed with truths not known to many. Kudos!
February 8th, 2018 10:53
Behind and Between.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Meanwhile -
\'I wandered lonely as a cloud
Meditating on dreams
But bit difficult
With only me two brain cells\'.Doh!
Erm, this does not have quite the same ring as your poem! lol.
February 8th, 2018 09:17
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Meanwhile -
\'I wandered lonely as a cloud
Meditating on dreams
But bit difficult
With only me two brain cells\'.Doh!
Erm, this does not have quite the same ring as your poem! lol.
February 8th, 2018 09:17
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