Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Ocean\'s Guns.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Those fisher folk are some of the bravest in the world.

March 8th, 2018 04:11

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w c said:

A very beautiful poem. It\'s definitely one of my favorites. It\'s wonderful to be imprinted as we.

March 6th, 2018 20:20

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March 6th, 2018 20:17

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Christina8 said:

This is an excellent write Fay! Loved it very much!

March 6th, 2018 12:52

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Lorna said:

Sometimes it takes so long to realize that is where you wanted to be all along!

March 6th, 2018 10:17

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write aFay

March 6th, 2018 09:09

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orchidee said:

Lovely write Fay. Pity I spoil me home life by singing there often! heehee.

March 6th, 2018 06:52

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AMEN TO THAT FAY ~ For me \"Home is where the Family is !\" Currently I live in a FLAT ~ not a HOME ~ but my PARENTS live close so I go for lunch every Sunday (nobody cooks like your MUM !) and play with the CATS and enjoy the GARDEN and talk FOOTBALL with DAD we both still support EVERTON FC not LIVERPOOL ! Rhyming couplets are my favorite and yours (like You !) are PERFECT ! Love all the nature references ! A great \"Image of Home !\" Your faithful follower ~ BRIAN ! Please check my CHAMELEONS !

March 6th, 2018 05:50

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Laura🌻 said:

A brilliant write, my dear Fay!
“Home is where the heart is...”
We find ourselves saying those words often. You’ve given them an ultra special meaning with this beautiful poem!

~Laura~

March 6th, 2018 05:50

LOVE IS....
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. Love, the strongest of all emotions and can never be stopped - nor should it be stopped.

March 5th, 2018 02:06

LOVE IS....
Laura🌻 said:

Awesome write and visual,
my dear Fay!
Love does live inside of us!
It’s up to us to keep it alive!

~Laura~

March 4th, 2018 10:18

LOVE IS....
Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful poem Fay. Everyone has a unique recipe for love. And that\'s the beauty of it.

March 4th, 2018 10:13

LOVE IS....
Michael Edwards said:

Brill Fay - love sure is...!

March 4th, 2018 06:55

LOVE IS....
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

March 4th, 2018 06:30

LOVE IS....
Poetic25 said:

Fay,
It really is \'life\' and love really is that and to love unconditionally both others and yourself indeed
Beautiful
Michael :)

March 4th, 2018 05:59

LOVE IS....
Lorna said:

Lovely Fay - such a simple message about love and so hard to get just right!

March 4th, 2018 05:46

YOU.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Fay. Dogs are wonderful companions.

March 4th, 2018 01:19

YOU.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FAY ~ One of my Mantras is : A Loving PET can change your life ! In my experience DOGS (and CATS) are the best in the UK ! TESSA obviously does exactly what it says on the Dog Basket ! Every Blessing ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ~ A cuddle for TESSA !

March 3rd, 2018 10:40

YOU.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

aaw, what a lovely and adorable looking dog ! i love animals, cats, dogs, penguins , most animals really .. lovely piece of writing fay .. glad she keeps you company x

March 3rd, 2018 08:06

YOU.
Laura🌻 said:

A beautiful and sweet write, my dear Fay!
Love that pic of Tessa! She looks adorable! And the way you describe her, she seems perfect! She is fortunate to have you...and you are fortunate to have her! A perfect duo! A perfect companionship!

~Laura~

March 3rd, 2018 07:32

YOU.
Michael Edwards said:

I don\'t have a dog but we\'ve got two in the extended family who go mad when we see them. A lovely write about such a wonderful pet.

March 3rd, 2018 07:20

YOU.
Accidental Poet said:

A wonderful write Fay of your Tessa. She\'s a beautiful girl just like her mom.

March 3rd, 2018 07:17

YOU.
orchidee said:

I know someone who had two Yorpoos I think - cross between Yorkie and Poodle. Or Pooyorks?!

March 3rd, 2018 06:15

YOU.
orchidee said:

Ahh who can resist this write and pic?! I saw similar dog, but white. Tied to a lamp-post while owner wen it not a shop, with its little coat on, and padding cos its paws were cold! aahhh. A sentimental tear fell, besides the ones that fell from the icy blast, making me eyes water!

March 3rd, 2018 06:14

YOU.
Lorna said:

Oh Fay! I already have a picture of you in my head of walking along the coast and now you gave us your little friend to go with it! (Can I ask what kind of dog she is? - I haven\'t decided whether or not to commit to owning a dog yet but yours certainly melts me!)

March 3rd, 2018 05:50

LOVE\'S STILLNESS.
Lorna said:

It\'s almost a test isn\'t it - if two people can stay quiet together....... love it Fay!

March 2nd, 2018 03:25

LOVE\'S STILLNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write of love. Love\'s stillness is so wonderful.

March 2nd, 2018 01:54

LOVE\'S STILLNESS.
Michael Edwards said:

Another great write Fay

March 1st, 2018 11:30

LOVE\'S STILLNESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Drop thy still dews of quietness
Till all our strivings cease
Take from our souls ~ the strain and stress
And let our ordered lives confess
The beauty of thy PEACE !

Loved you poem FAY and it reminded me
of our SCHOOL HYMN ~ \"Dear Lord and
Father of Mankind ~ Forgive our foolish ways\"
We live in a very loud and much overstressed
World one longs for the Peace & Quiet in a rural
community !
How are you getting on with the SNOW ?
Please check my SNOW LADY ~ Thanks BRIAN

March 1st, 2018 09:14

LOVE\'S STILLNESS.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. If we never risk \'relationship\'s curse\', being a curse sometimes I feel, not always, we are like an oyster.
It is safe if never coming out of its shell, but missing out on good relationships.

March 1st, 2018 06:03



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