Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
BEGINNINGS.
Caring dove said:
hi fay ,, this is very lovely :-) your wording in this is beautiful , a truly expressive and lovely poem .. :-)
February 22nd, 2018 05:59
Caring dove said:
hi fay ,, this is very lovely :-) your wording in this is beautiful , a truly expressive and lovely poem .. :-)
February 22nd, 2018 05:59
LIVE SILVER.
Christina8 said:
Great write Fay! It\'s a hard job being a fisherman--which you so eloquently displayed in your poem.
February 21st, 2018 22:08
Christina8 said:
Great write Fay! It\'s a hard job being a fisherman--which you so eloquently displayed in your poem.
February 21st, 2018 22:08
INVENTION.
FredPeyer said:
And I thought all I am doing is simply putting words on paper. But you make me feel like a magician! Beautiful eloquent writing, Fay, you are an inspiration to us all.
February 21st, 2018 10:44
FredPeyer said:
And I thought all I am doing is simply putting words on paper. But you make me feel like a magician! Beautiful eloquent writing, Fay, you are an inspiration to us all.
February 21st, 2018 10:44
LIVE SILVER.
Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive work with some great imagery
February 21st, 2018 07:11
Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive work with some great imagery
February 21st, 2018 07:11
LIVE SILVER.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ On the NE COAST it was always a JOY & RELIEF \"Wen the BOOT cums in\" You have captured the Agony & Ecstasy of \"The hard Lives of FISHERFOLK everywhere ! Another wee gem ~ Yours eternally BRIAN !
February 21st, 2018 04:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ On the NE COAST it was always a JOY & RELIEF \"Wen the BOOT cums in\" You have captured the Agony & Ecstasy of \"The hard Lives of FISHERFOLK everywhere ! Another wee gem ~ Yours eternally BRIAN !
February 21st, 2018 04:37
LIVE SILVER.
Laura🌻 said:
You are an amazing
gift to the literary world,
my dear Fay!
This is an awesome descriptive penned poem !
My mom has a similar pic
of her grandmother and
aunt who were married to
fishermen!
As I read your poem, I envisioned them standing by the Bay of Naples waiting for their husbands with the day’s catch ready to clean, pack, and deliver!
Loved this very special read! Thank you!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 03:55
Laura🌻 said:
You are an amazing
gift to the literary world,
my dear Fay!
This is an awesome descriptive penned poem !
My mom has a similar pic
of her grandmother and
aunt who were married to
fishermen!
As I read your poem, I envisioned them standing by the Bay of Naples waiting for their husbands with the day’s catch ready to clean, pack, and deliver!
Loved this very special read! Thank you!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 03:55
LIVE SILVER.
Goldfinch60 said:
Hard work back in the day and maybe even harder now as the fish stocks get lower. Good write Fay.
February 21st, 2018 03:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Hard work back in the day and maybe even harder now as the fish stocks get lower. Good write Fay.
February 21st, 2018 03:21
INVENTION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
All ARTISTS ~ POETS ~ MUSICIANS have a spark of Genius and given time will produce a New Art Movement ~ A New Poetic Form or a New Music Genre ~ we all seek to add our Mark to Society & History ! Elvis was just a Poor Boy from Tupelo but He inspired a GENERATION ~ DALI a mystic Spanish Painter but He revolutionised 20th Century Art and Robbie Burns a Crofters Son who died Young but his Satire & Poetry is celebrated Worldwide. In the WORLD of SCIENCE a Girl from Poland ~ was forced to study Science in Paris because she was a GIRL ! By serendipity Becquerel chose her to examine the radiation emanating from Uranium and she isolated RADIUM & POLONIUM and obtained not just a PhD (which is a useful qualification) but became the only person to receive two NOBEL PRIZES in Science ~ Physics & Chemistry ~ She also added a very precious word to the WORLD\'s DICTIONARIES ~ RADIOACTIVITY Alas she died of LEUKEMIA ~ But she left an awesome legacy. We can\'t all be WORLD CHANGERS ~ BUT ~ We all leave a legacy ~ even if it\'s only our portfolio of Poems on MPS ! Yours Creatively ~ BRIAN
February 20th, 2018 11:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
All ARTISTS ~ POETS ~ MUSICIANS have a spark of Genius and given time will produce a New Art Movement ~ A New Poetic Form or a New Music Genre ~ we all seek to add our Mark to Society & History ! Elvis was just a Poor Boy from Tupelo but He inspired a GENERATION ~ DALI a mystic Spanish Painter but He revolutionised 20th Century Art and Robbie Burns a Crofters Son who died Young but his Satire & Poetry is celebrated Worldwide. In the WORLD of SCIENCE a Girl from Poland ~ was forced to study Science in Paris because she was a GIRL ! By serendipity Becquerel chose her to examine the radiation emanating from Uranium and she isolated RADIUM & POLONIUM and obtained not just a PhD (which is a useful qualification) but became the only person to receive two NOBEL PRIZES in Science ~ Physics & Chemistry ~ She also added a very precious word to the WORLD\'s DICTIONARIES ~ RADIOACTIVITY Alas she died of LEUKEMIA ~ But she left an awesome legacy. We can\'t all be WORLD CHANGERS ~ BUT ~ We all leave a legacy ~ even if it\'s only our portfolio of Poems on MPS ! Yours Creatively ~ BRIAN
February 20th, 2018 11:40
INVENTION.
orchidee said:
Necessity is the mother of........ I would weave something in to this, if I had your poetic qualities! A fine write Fay.
February 20th, 2018 08:53
orchidee said:
Necessity is the mother of........ I would weave something in to this, if I had your poetic qualities! A fine write Fay.
February 20th, 2018 08:53
INVENTION.
Michael Edwards said:
Superb work Fay - ah the dripping metaphor.
February 20th, 2018 07:00
Michael Edwards said:
Superb work Fay - ah the dripping metaphor.
February 20th, 2018 07:00
INVENTION.
Lorna said:
Words, painting, music - these are the true legacies that man will leave behind I think. The CEO\'s will be forgotten - the artists (good or bad) will remain in some fashion.... trying so hard to see and catch the magic!
February 20th, 2018 05:45
Lorna said:
Words, painting, music - these are the true legacies that man will leave behind I think. The CEO\'s will be forgotten - the artists (good or bad) will remain in some fashion.... trying so hard to see and catch the magic!
February 20th, 2018 05:45
INVENTION.
kevin browne said:
brilliant piece of bringing such wonderful words together revealing how you painted this picture pf poetry. loving your language, Fay Slimm.
February 20th, 2018 05:33
kevin browne said:
brilliant piece of bringing such wonderful words together revealing how you painted this picture pf poetry. loving your language, Fay Slimm.
February 20th, 2018 05:33
SUCHNESS.
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful and
loving write, my
dear Fay!
Stop and listen for a
moment. Appreciate
the love in your heart!
Such is the moment!
~Laura~
February 19th, 2018 17:15
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful and
loving write, my
dear Fay!
Stop and listen for a
moment. Appreciate
the love in your heart!
Such is the moment!
~Laura~
February 19th, 2018 17:15
SUCHNESS.
Poetic25 said:
Faye,
a lovely piece of reflecting your soul, flowing with your heart
Michael :)
February 19th, 2018 15:59
Poetic25 said:
Faye,
a lovely piece of reflecting your soul, flowing with your heart
Michael :)
February 19th, 2018 15:59
SUCHNESS.
FredPeyer said:
Love the whole poem, Fay, but that last stanza is pure magic and delight!
February 19th, 2018 12:14
FredPeyer said:
Love the whole poem, Fay, but that last stanza is pure magic and delight!
February 19th, 2018 12:14
SUCHNESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUCH LOVE ~ White as the driven snow
SUCH LOVE ~ I & Angela know
SUCH LOVE ~ Down through the years I show
O FAY ~ SUCH LOVE !
As your perfect poem reminds us:
No Fear ~ Forgiveness ~ No Weeping
Thanks FAY for caring & Sharing
Your Forever Friend ~ BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 09:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUCH LOVE ~ White as the driven snow
SUCH LOVE ~ I & Angela know
SUCH LOVE ~ Down through the years I show
O FAY ~ SUCH LOVE !
As your perfect poem reminds us:
No Fear ~ Forgiveness ~ No Weeping
Thanks FAY for caring & Sharing
Your Forever Friend ~ BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 09:56
SUCHNESS.
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely. If you have achieved such then it must be blissful. I\'m sadly lagging for parts of love still generate tears in me (and i don\'t just refer to romantic love here)
February 19th, 2018 08:16
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely. If you have achieved such then it must be blissful. I\'m sadly lagging for parts of love still generate tears in me (and i don\'t just refer to romantic love here)
February 19th, 2018 08:16
SUCHNESS.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written and superb construction - a work of poetic art.
February 19th, 2018 07:22
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written and superb construction - a work of poetic art.
February 19th, 2018 07:22
More Than.
FredPeyer said:
That light is what it is all about. Without it our lives would not be livable. Beautifully written, Fay!
February 18th, 2018 06:50
FredPeyer said:
That light is what it is all about. Without it our lives would not be livable. Beautifully written, Fay!
February 18th, 2018 06:50
More Than.
Heather T said:
So wonderful to have a writer of your caliber to read daily on this site! Your pen never fails to delight.
February 16th, 2018 16:21
Heather T said:
So wonderful to have a writer of your caliber to read daily on this site! Your pen never fails to delight.
February 16th, 2018 16:21
More Than.
Laura🌻 said:
So happy you reposted
this gem my dear Fay!
Beautifully written in its
entirety!
I especially liked...
...melting black fingers...
...but not before that
glittering exit...
Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:27
Laura🌻 said:
So happy you reposted
this gem my dear Fay!
Beautifully written in its
entirety!
I especially liked...
...melting black fingers...
...but not before that
glittering exit...
Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 08:27
More Than.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"GOD said ~ Let there be light
and there was light !
When we opened our EYES
and saw what GOD had created
We saw the VISIBLE SPECTRUM
R O Y G B I V ~ and could not
believe our eyes !
BUT we understood why GOD SAID ........
FIAT LUX ~ LET THERE BE LIGHT ~ AMEN
Thanks for caring & sharing ~
Yours enlightened ~ BRIAN !
February 16th, 2018 05:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"GOD said ~ Let there be light
and there was light !
When we opened our EYES
and saw what GOD had created
We saw the VISIBLE SPECTRUM
R O Y G B I V ~ and could not
believe our eyes !
BUT we understood why GOD SAID ........
FIAT LUX ~ LET THERE BE LIGHT ~ AMEN
Thanks for caring & sharing ~
Yours enlightened ~ BRIAN !
February 16th, 2018 05:10
More Than.
Lorna said:
And now I sit waiting for the light which is showing up earlier and earlier! Lovely way to wake up Fay!
February 16th, 2018 04:34
Lorna said:
And now I sit waiting for the light which is showing up earlier and earlier! Lovely way to wake up Fay!
February 16th, 2018 04:34
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