Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
BIRTHRIGHT.
willyweed said:
wonderful work Fay, joy and peace does come from within. nicely done. ww
March 14th, 2018 07:28
willyweed said:
wonderful work Fay, joy and peace does come from within. nicely done. ww
March 14th, 2018 07:28
BIRTHRIGHT.
Lorna said:
You had me breathing slowly and evenly and feeling at peace Fay.....It\'s been harder to feel just sheer joy lately - which I used to feel for absolutely no reason at all! Just joy! Your first stanza says it all - if the knots would loosen, the joy is still there!
March 14th, 2018 06:45
Lorna said:
You had me breathing slowly and evenly and feeling at peace Fay.....It\'s been harder to feel just sheer joy lately - which I used to feel for absolutely no reason at all! Just joy! Your first stanza says it all - if the knots would loosen, the joy is still there!
March 14th, 2018 06:45
BIRTHRIGHT.
Nicholas Browning said:
A very optimistic view of human nature and our purpose as a species. Your way with words astounds me. Also, the fact that you don\'t stray from the message you\'re trying to portray at all is incredible. Well done.
March 14th, 2018 06:19
Nicholas Browning said:
A very optimistic view of human nature and our purpose as a species. Your way with words astounds me. Also, the fact that you don\'t stray from the message you\'re trying to portray at all is incredible. Well done.
March 14th, 2018 06:19
No Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! I can empathise ~ even in my short life I remember situations where a GOOD BYE was not possible and it still hurts. BUT ~ like you ~ I have many sweet Memories of those who have been \"Called Home\" ~ sometimes tragically. The memories have softened my loss and th lack of opportunity to say A REAL GOOD BYE ! Gone but never forgotten ! Yours Friend as always ~ BRIAN
March 13th, 2018 18:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! I can empathise ~ even in my short life I remember situations where a GOOD BYE was not possible and it still hurts. BUT ~ like you ~ I have many sweet Memories of those who have been \"Called Home\" ~ sometimes tragically. The memories have softened my loss and th lack of opportunity to say A REAL GOOD BYE ! Gone but never forgotten ! Yours Friend as always ~ BRIAN
March 13th, 2018 18:55
No Time.
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Fay.
Meanwhile - some wish there was no time to hear me sing. But oh, there\'s always time for that, unfortunately! lol.
March 13th, 2018 10:42
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Fay.
Meanwhile - some wish there was no time to hear me sing. But oh, there\'s always time for that, unfortunately! lol.
March 13th, 2018 10:42
No Time.
Lauraš» said:
Iām reading this beautiful but sad write with a heavy-heart, my dear Fay! The imagery is remarkable! It conveys the message of the agonizing pain of missing a loved one. It can be so unbearable at times!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 05:18
Lauraš» said:
Iām reading this beautiful but sad write with a heavy-heart, my dear Fay! The imagery is remarkable! It conveys the message of the agonizing pain of missing a loved one. It can be so unbearable at times!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 05:18
TIMED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those yellow trumpets are blowing in our garden.
March 13th, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those yellow trumpets are blowing in our garden.
March 13th, 2018 01:57
TIMED.
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Fay! I wish Spring would come and begin her \"floral task\" (great words!) where I live. Loved it from beginning to end!
March 12th, 2018 11:10
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Fay! I wish Spring would come and begin her \"floral task\" (great words!) where I live. Loved it from beginning to end!
March 12th, 2018 11:10
INTERLACED.
Jeremy Cohen said:
This is so beautiful! Ugh I\'m such a hopeless romantic! Well done!
March 12th, 2018 11:06
Jeremy Cohen said:
This is so beautiful! Ugh I\'m such a hopeless romantic! Well done!
March 12th, 2018 11:06
TIMED.
Ivory said:
Very descriptive piece. Spring is a magical season. I enjoyed ready this.
March 12th, 2018 06:39
Ivory said:
Very descriptive piece. Spring is a magical season. I enjoyed ready this.
March 12th, 2018 06:39
TIMED.
Lorna said:
I love this and \"her need to change to a greener dress\"........... very beautiful Fay!
March 12th, 2018 06:36
Lorna said:
I love this and \"her need to change to a greener dress\"........... very beautiful Fay!
March 12th, 2018 06:36
TIMED.
Accidental Poet said:
So beautiful a poem Fay. The approaching Spring is oh so welcome among Winter stressed poets. May we all write of warmer days and nights.
March 12th, 2018 04:51
Accidental Poet said:
So beautiful a poem Fay. The approaching Spring is oh so welcome among Winter stressed poets. May we all write of warmer days and nights.
March 12th, 2018 04:51
TIMED.
Lauraš» said:
An awesome write,
my dear Fay!
The imagery in your poem
is immense! It conjures up
a beautiful image of Spring!
We are definitely ready for
Spring to make its debut!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:44
Lauraš» said:
An awesome write,
my dear Fay!
The imagery in your poem
is immense! It conjures up
a beautiful image of Spring!
We are definitely ready for
Spring to make its debut!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:44
INTERLACED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good romantic write Fay, those \'single\' went into \'duo\' but would eventually combine as a \'single\'. That is what love does.
March 10th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good romantic write Fay, those \'single\' went into \'duo\' but would eventually combine as a \'single\'. That is what love does.
March 10th, 2018 01:19
INTERLACED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Some enchanted evening
You may see a Stranger
Across a crowded Room .........
It happens FAY and in my memory
sometimes it is the most intense
LOVE ~ I have felt ~ With ANGELA
The first time I saw Her Face ....... !
Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
March 9th, 2018 15:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Some enchanted evening
You may see a Stranger
Across a crowded Room .........
It happens FAY and in my memory
sometimes it is the most intense
LOVE ~ I have felt ~ With ANGELA
The first time I saw Her Face ....... !
Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
March 9th, 2018 15:36
INTERLACED.
Lorna said:
Interlaced forever! Lovely Fay.... for lovers everywhere!
March 9th, 2018 07:09
Lorna said:
Interlaced forever! Lovely Fay.... for lovers everywhere!
March 9th, 2018 07:09
INTERLACED.
Lauraš» said:
Romantic indeed,
my dear Fay!
A beautifully scribed poem enhanced with a fine visual! An enjoyable read! āPassion alighted on two interlaced soulsā...is my favorite line! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 05:49
Lauraš» said:
Romantic indeed,
my dear Fay!
A beautifully scribed poem enhanced with a fine visual! An enjoyable read! āPassion alighted on two interlaced soulsā...is my favorite line! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 05:49
Ocean\'s Guns.
Lorna said:
How we love the fisherfolk...... what hard lives they must live........
March 8th, 2018 17:22
Lorna said:
How we love the fisherfolk...... what hard lives they must live........
March 8th, 2018 17:22
Ocean\'s Guns.
Poetic25 said:
Fay
You have such a way with words and images. Such is the power of the waters, but \'fisher-folk\' have to survive.
nicely penned
Michael :)
March 8th, 2018 11:37
Poetic25 said:
Fay
You have such a way with words and images. Such is the power of the waters, but \'fisher-folk\' have to survive.
nicely penned
Michael :)
March 8th, 2018 11:37
Ocean\'s Guns.
Michael Edwards said:
Paints the scene so well - love the line: from land\'s bolstered sides. Great work Fay
March 8th, 2018 05:00
Michael Edwards said:
Paints the scene so well - love the line: from land\'s bolstered sides. Great work Fay
March 8th, 2018 05:00
Ocean\'s Guns.
Lauraš» said:
Oh yes...the mighty
oceanās guns that the
fishermen must fight...
Indeed they must!
A fine write, my dear Fay!
Metaphorically rich!
Great title!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 04:11
Lauraš» said:
Oh yes...the mighty
oceanās guns that the
fishermen must fight...
Indeed they must!
A fine write, my dear Fay!
Metaphorically rich!
Great title!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 04:11
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
