Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Winter Sounds.
FredPeyer said:
Interesting form, well written. Fay, you surprise us with so much talent and diversity.
January 8th, 2018 12:04
FredPeyer said:
Interesting form, well written. Fay, you surprise us with so much talent and diversity.
January 8th, 2018 12:04
Winter Sounds.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Well, for us in the UK, it can often be \'the damp fingers of winter\'! And it may not always be \'proper rain\' but that drizzle stuff. Oh well, at least it\'s milder at those times!
January 8th, 2018 10:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Well, for us in the UK, it can often be \'the damp fingers of winter\'! And it may not always be \'proper rain\' but that drizzle stuff. Oh well, at least it\'s milder at those times!
January 8th, 2018 10:03
Winter Sounds.
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m with Kat too waiting for future birdsong.
January 8th, 2018 09:49
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m with Kat too waiting for future birdsong.
January 8th, 2018 09:49
Winter Sounds.
lasergraph said:
The cold frosty fingers of winter has a tight grip. Hopefully that grip will loosen soon.
January 8th, 2018 09:26
lasergraph said:
The cold frosty fingers of winter has a tight grip. Hopefully that grip will loosen soon.
January 8th, 2018 09:26
Winter Sounds.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, mind you those winter times need not be lonely, there is always somebody with you.
January 8th, 2018 08:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, mind you those winter times need not be lonely, there is always somebody with you.
January 8th, 2018 08:59
Winter Sounds.
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice experiment with form here, Fay. And a good write to boot! Kudos.
January 8th, 2018 08:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice experiment with form here, Fay. And a good write to boot! Kudos.
January 8th, 2018 08:02
Applause.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For another POEM \'n PIC winner ! I love the image of QUAILS ~ like Businessmen in pin-striped suits ! This image is complemented by their lovely freckled eggs ! In my experience Girls with freckles (and especially red hair & freckles !) have a special aura ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 19:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For another POEM \'n PIC winner ! I love the image of QUAILS ~ like Businessmen in pin-striped suits ! This image is complemented by their lovely freckled eggs ! In my experience Girls with freckles (and especially red hair & freckles !) have a special aura ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 19:22
Applause.
FredPeyer said:
Simply beautiful!!! Worthy of being a favorite, and worthy of three of my exclamation marks.
January 7th, 2018 11:33
FredPeyer said:
Simply beautiful!!! Worthy of being a favorite, and worthy of three of my exclamation marks.
January 7th, 2018 11:33
Applause.
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant usage of words, as only an accomplished poet can, Fay! Well done.
January 7th, 2018 11:13
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant usage of words, as only an accomplished poet can, Fay! Well done.
January 7th, 2018 11:13
Applause.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
You never cease to amaze me! A brilliant write simply inspired by quails’ eggs! Amazing! Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2018 10:10
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
You never cease to amaze me! A brilliant write simply inspired by quails’ eggs! Amazing! Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2018 10:10
One More.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YESTERDAY ~ LOVE WAS SUCH AN EASY GAME TO PLAY ~ Oh I remember yesterday ............. ! I love your nostalgic poems FAY ~ but they make me CRY ~ Saved as Favourite ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 17:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YESTERDAY ~ LOVE WAS SUCH AN EASY GAME TO PLAY ~ Oh I remember yesterday ............. ! I love your nostalgic poems FAY ~ but they make me CRY ~ Saved as Favourite ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 17:24
One More.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you have a way of expressing life in beautiful terms, both the good and the bad. I think we all sometimes long for yesterday, especially if it involves a loved one who is not with us anymore. While we cannot turn the time back, we do have the memories!
January 6th, 2018 15:22
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you have a way of expressing life in beautiful terms, both the good and the bad. I think we all sometimes long for yesterday, especially if it involves a loved one who is not with us anymore. While we cannot turn the time back, we do have the memories!
January 6th, 2018 15:22
One More.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
A sensitive and beautiful reminder of our yesterdays gone by! ...and then the reality of it all...
These are the words that speak to me at this time...
...“thrown overboard suddenly had
no chance of tomorrow “...
Now we have the memories!
Great pic!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2018 10:28
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
A sensitive and beautiful reminder of our yesterdays gone by! ...and then the reality of it all...
These are the words that speak to me at this time...
...“thrown overboard suddenly had
no chance of tomorrow “...
Now we have the memories!
Great pic!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2018 10:28
One More.
Louis Gibbs said:
Reminds me of a song lyric:
\"Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far away, now it seems as if they\'re her to stay, I believe in yesterday\".
A beautiful, emotive write, Fay!
January 6th, 2018 09:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Reminds me of a song lyric:
\"Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far away, now it seems as if they\'re her to stay, I believe in yesterday\".
A beautiful, emotive write, Fay!
January 6th, 2018 09:49
His Laughter.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your beautifully written poem made me remember my own dad. He was quite the comic! An accomplished musician too, always ready with a smile and a joke.
Thank you for writing this!
January 5th, 2018 11:53
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your beautifully written poem made me remember my own dad. He was quite the comic! An accomplished musician too, always ready with a smile and a joke.
Thank you for writing this!
January 5th, 2018 11:53
His Laughter.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
First poem I read this
morning! A great write!
So relatable!
I miss my dad so much!
I remember his laugh...
I remember his jokes...
He had a great sense of
humor. Beautiful memories!
Thank you for making me
smile today...
I’ve been in a depressive
state in the past few weeks!
~Laura~
January 5th, 2018 11:04
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
First poem I read this
morning! A great write!
So relatable!
I miss my dad so much!
I remember his laugh...
I remember his jokes...
He had a great sense of
humor. Beautiful memories!
Thank you for making me
smile today...
I’ve been in a depressive
state in the past few weeks!
~Laura~
January 5th, 2018 11:04
His Laughter.
Louis Gibbs said:
So fortunate to have loving memories of one\'s parents. Kudos on this fine tribute, Fay!
January 5th, 2018 10:31
Louis Gibbs said:
So fortunate to have loving memories of one\'s parents. Kudos on this fine tribute, Fay!
January 5th, 2018 10:31
His Laughter.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Lovely tribute to your DAD ~ I still have mt Parents but your Poem reminded me to make sure to ring therm tomorrow. I generally go for Lunch on Sunday ~ usually with ANGELA ~ Life is too short for regrets ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
January 5th, 2018 10:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Lovely tribute to your DAD ~ I still have mt Parents but your Poem reminded me to make sure to ring therm tomorrow. I generally go for Lunch on Sunday ~ usually with ANGELA ~ Life is too short for regrets ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
January 5th, 2018 10:12
His Laughter.
Goldfinch60 said:
Lovely write, love the phrase ‘remembered laughter’ it was obviously so inspiring.
January 5th, 2018 09:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Lovely write, love the phrase ‘remembered laughter’ it was obviously so inspiring.
January 5th, 2018 09:24
New Leaves.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing and stunning form/shape! And thank you for your New Year wishes, the same from me to you too!
January 4th, 2018 16:14
FredPeyer said:
Great writing and stunning form/shape! And thank you for your New Year wishes, the same from me to you too!
January 4th, 2018 16:14
New Leaves.
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterful display of shaped poetry here, Fay! A most clever form. Well done, dear teacher of our art.
January 4th, 2018 10:16
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterful display of shaped poetry here, Fay! A most clever form. Well done, dear teacher of our art.
January 4th, 2018 10:16
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