Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Behind and Between.
Lauraš» said:
Beautiful write my dear Fay!
The last six lines sum it all
up for me! Meaningful and
comforting!
~Laura~
February 8th, 2018 08:50
Lauraš» said:
Beautiful write my dear Fay!
The last six lines sum it all
up for me! Meaningful and
comforting!
~Laura~
February 8th, 2018 08:50
Behind and Between.
TrystanBehm said:
A sentiment I feel strongly about so beautifully articulated - as usual Fay!
February 8th, 2018 08:36
TrystanBehm said:
A sentiment I feel strongly about so beautifully articulated - as usual Fay!
February 8th, 2018 08:36
Behind and Between.
Poetic25 said:
Simply wonderful Fay, with so many vivid images.
Michael :)
February 8th, 2018 07:46
Poetic25 said:
Simply wonderful Fay, with so many vivid images.
Michael :)
February 8th, 2018 07:46
Behind and Between.
Lorna said:
Morning Fay (your p.m.) - I spend half my days in the nether world you have described so perfectly.... and I am so content there! And dreams!! What wonderful images.......
February 8th, 2018 05:49
Lorna said:
Morning Fay (your p.m.) - I spend half my days in the nether world you have described so perfectly.... and I am so content there! And dreams!! What wonderful images.......
February 8th, 2018 05:49
EBONY CHILL.
Accidental Poet said:
This reminds me of the few rabbits that scurry around where I work. I try to leave baby carrots sprinkled around on the ground for them a few times a week. Great write Fay.
February 7th, 2018 18:48
Accidental Poet said:
This reminds me of the few rabbits that scurry around where I work. I try to leave baby carrots sprinkled around on the ground for them a few times a week. Great write Fay.
February 7th, 2018 18:48
EBONY CHILL.
Poetic25 said:
Fay,
A lovely seasonal piece, with so much imagery throughout.
Makes me look forward to summer days.
Michael :)
February 7th, 2018 15:33
Poetic25 said:
Fay,
A lovely seasonal piece, with so much imagery throughout.
Makes me look forward to summer days.
Michael :)
February 7th, 2018 15:33
EBONY CHILL.
dusk arising said:
Huddling, snuggling to keep warm these winter nights its quite easy to selfishly forget those wonderful creatures we like to think we adore with our mental picture of their appearance in warmer times. How clever they are to survive these chill to the bone frozen solid times to thrll us tomorrow.
I read you as reminding us to do a few helpful things without intruding. Wonderfully written piece quite deserving of being a favourite all round.
February 7th, 2018 15:23
dusk arising said:
Huddling, snuggling to keep warm these winter nights its quite easy to selfishly forget those wonderful creatures we like to think we adore with our mental picture of their appearance in warmer times. How clever they are to survive these chill to the bone frozen solid times to thrll us tomorrow.
I read you as reminding us to do a few helpful things without intruding. Wonderfully written piece quite deserving of being a favourite all round.
February 7th, 2018 15:23
WHITE STUFF.
FredPeyer said:
Really like your \'fun\' poem, Fay! I think that sometimes dogs are smarter than us, who wants to run around in the cold if one could sit all comfy in front of that roaring fire!
February 7th, 2018 12:08
FredPeyer said:
Really like your \'fun\' poem, Fay! I think that sometimes dogs are smarter than us, who wants to run around in the cold if one could sit all comfy in front of that roaring fire!
February 7th, 2018 12:08
EBONY CHILL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another seamless fusion of Poem \'n Pic ! Your choice of WORDS ~ SIMILE & METAPHOR is so so perfect ~ further comment would be superfluous ! The high standard of each of your poems ~ in content ~ rhythm and ofttimes rhyme is both a challenge and a benchmarh to us lesser poets ~ you are a GEM ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 11:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another seamless fusion of Poem \'n Pic ! Your choice of WORDS ~ SIMILE & METAPHOR is so so perfect ~ further comment would be superfluous ! The high standard of each of your poems ~ in content ~ rhythm and ofttimes rhyme is both a challenge and a benchmarh to us lesser poets ~ you are a GEM ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 11:55
EBONY CHILL.
TrystanBehm said:
This poem transcended me into a place where I could feel the cold, see the sky, hear the sounds - with such clarity. This is wonderful Fay. Into my favorites it goes!
February 7th, 2018 10:29
TrystanBehm said:
This poem transcended me into a place where I could feel the cold, see the sky, hear the sounds - with such clarity. This is wonderful Fay. Into my favorites it goes!
February 7th, 2018 10:29
EBONY CHILL.
Lauraš» said:
We too this morning woke up to snow and soon itāll be freezing rain! Snow I like! Freezing rain...not so much!
I do feel for those innocent little creatures out there in the freezing cold!
A beautiful and engaging write my dear Fay! Love the visual! I hope those two little badgers have a warm and cozy burrow to go back to!
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 09:38
Lauraš» said:
We too this morning woke up to snow and soon itāll be freezing rain! Snow I like! Freezing rain...not so much!
I do feel for those innocent little creatures out there in the freezing cold!
A beautiful and engaging write my dear Fay! Love the visual! I hope those two little badgers have a warm and cozy burrow to go back to!
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 09:38
EBONY CHILL.
Lorna said:
Wonderful Fay........ I so wish we had badgers here........
February 7th, 2018 09:24
Lorna said:
Wonderful Fay........ I so wish we had badgers here........
February 7th, 2018 09:24
WHITE STUFF.
Christina8 said:
I hope for Spring for you soon as I do for us. Cute poem!
February 6th, 2018 19:09
Christina8 said:
I hope for Spring for you soon as I do for us. Cute poem!
February 6th, 2018 19:09
WHITE STUFF.
Lauraš» said:
Sweet and smart Tessa!!
A wonderful write, dear Fay!
I really liked the way you used the semicolon. Very clever of you! I truly enjoyed the read along with the adorable pic! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
P.S.- Just heard the weather report...snow is headed my way!
February 6th, 2018 15:41
Lauraš» said:
Sweet and smart Tessa!!
A wonderful write, dear Fay!
I really liked the way you used the semicolon. Very clever of you! I truly enjoyed the read along with the adorable pic! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
P.S.- Just heard the weather report...snow is headed my way!
February 6th, 2018 15:41
WHITE STUFF.
orchidee said:
Nice write and pic Fay. I saw a seire: \'you know you\'re getting old when....\' We could add \'....when we leave the snow for children and dogs to enjoy!\'
February 6th, 2018 10:04
orchidee said:
Nice write and pic Fay. I saw a seire: \'you know you\'re getting old when....\' We could add \'....when we leave the snow for children and dogs to enjoy!\'
February 6th, 2018 10:04
WHITE STUFF.
Goldfinch60 said:
I counted about twenty flakes this morning, that is more than enough for me! You had better ensure that the fire is kept going for Tessa.
February 6th, 2018 09:33
Goldfinch60 said:
I counted about twenty flakes this morning, that is more than enough for me! You had better ensure that the fire is kept going for Tessa.
February 6th, 2018 09:33
WHITE STUFF.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another excellent Poem and a lovely picture of TESSA ! Dogs make excellent thermometers and barometers as well ! Yours as always BRIAN WE had a bit of snow yesterday (Monday) cold & dry today
February 6th, 2018 08:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another excellent Poem and a lovely picture of TESSA ! Dogs make excellent thermometers and barometers as well ! Yours as always BRIAN WE had a bit of snow yesterday (Monday) cold & dry today
February 6th, 2018 08:45
Love\'s Birthright.
Goldfinch60 said:
Lets us move forward in the kindness within ourselves being shared with those around us. Good write Fay.
February 6th, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Lets us move forward in the kindness within ourselves being shared with those around us. Good write Fay.
February 6th, 2018 01:44
Love\'s Birthright.
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, love that last line! So well written, as always!
February 5th, 2018 18:25
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, love that last line! So well written, as always!
February 5th, 2018 18:25
Love\'s Birthright.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a very elegant and thought provoking POEM ! The Good Book says we must LOVE OTHERS to the same extent that we LOVE OURSELVES ! A Priori ~ How we treat others is proportional to our own SELF ~ ESTEEM and SELF WORTH ~ Yours as always BRIAN (Priceless !)
February 5th, 2018 14:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a very elegant and thought provoking POEM ! The Good Book says we must LOVE OTHERS to the same extent that we LOVE OURSELVES ! A Priori ~ How we treat others is proportional to our own SELF ~ ESTEEM and SELF WORTH ~ Yours as always BRIAN (Priceless !)
February 5th, 2018 14:55
Love\'s Birthright.
orchidee said:
Ahh - \'Love our neighbour as ourself\'. Fine words here Fay. I must love them - not sing to them! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 06:49
orchidee said:
Ahh - \'Love our neighbour as ourself\'. Fine words here Fay. I must love them - not sing to them! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 06:49
Love\'s Birthright.
Lorna said:
Fay - such a lovely message and absolutely the hardest thing to do .....
February 5th, 2018 05:23
Lorna said:
Fay - such a lovely message and absolutely the hardest thing to do .....
February 5th, 2018 05:23
Alltogetherness.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED ~ Great thoughts to enrich he mind as we enter the Sabbath (It\'s 9pm in the EAST !) Believing in the LOVE that flows daily from the Throne of GOD ~ breaks down all barriers and produces ALLTOGETHERNESS ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN Love the visual ~ The Shekinah Glory of the juxtaposition of the WORD of GOD and the Throne of GOD ~ AMEN !
February 3rd, 2018 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED ~ Great thoughts to enrich he mind as we enter the Sabbath (It\'s 9pm in the EAST !) Believing in the LOVE that flows daily from the Throne of GOD ~ breaks down all barriers and produces ALLTOGETHERNESS ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN Love the visual ~ The Shekinah Glory of the juxtaposition of the WORD of GOD and the Throne of GOD ~ AMEN !
February 3rd, 2018 16:18
Alltogetherness.
FredPeyer said:
The answer to the \'who?\' is quite simple: It is YOU Fay!!!
How else could you write so beautifully?
February 3rd, 2018 13:34
FredPeyer said:
The answer to the \'who?\' is quite simple: It is YOU Fay!!!
How else could you write so beautifully?
February 3rd, 2018 13:34
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