Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Winter-Clad.
Caring dove said:
winter does not care for its impact upon the land or on animals ... it just is .. winter , sadly it can impact negatively
January 23rd, 2018 06:19
Caring dove said:
winter does not care for its impact upon the land or on animals ... it just is .. winter , sadly it can impact negatively
January 23rd, 2018 06:19
Winter-Clad.
Caring dove said:
great piece of writing fay .. i love your style of writing .. you seem talented :-)
January 23rd, 2018 06:17
Caring dove said:
great piece of writing fay .. i love your style of writing .. you seem talented :-)
January 23rd, 2018 06:17
Souls Know.
Caring dove said:
loving the ending to this one \'\'
that destiny made them one single flame
which inhabits foreverness.\'\' really quite lovely fay :-)
January 23rd, 2018 06:12
Caring dove said:
loving the ending to this one \'\'
that destiny made them one single flame
which inhabits foreverness.\'\' really quite lovely fay :-)
January 23rd, 2018 06:12
I Am Cloud.
Caring dove said:
oh , wow , fay ! this is amazing .. the way you have spoken of the cloud with huge thighs, i really like that .. and your reference the moon peeping into your bedroom .. and stars playing hide and seek amongst the white flimsy frock, you make the cloud sound like a dress lol.. i very much enjoyed this .. such a lovely enjoyable poem..
January 23rd, 2018 06:05
Caring dove said:
oh , wow , fay ! this is amazing .. the way you have spoken of the cloud with huge thighs, i really like that .. and your reference the moon peeping into your bedroom .. and stars playing hide and seek amongst the white flimsy frock, you make the cloud sound like a dress lol.. i very much enjoyed this .. such a lovely enjoyable poem..
January 23rd, 2018 06:05
Silent Music.
Caring dove said:
i love the reference to \' a flowers silent music \'\' i do not think i have ever heard of a flower singing silent music .. this is quite lovely Fay , enjoyed, nature is one of the most beautiful things in this world.. i would love for you to check out my poems on here, i have a few so far on nature, one on spring and one on winter
January 23rd, 2018 05:50
Caring dove said:
i love the reference to \' a flowers silent music \'\' i do not think i have ever heard of a flower singing silent music .. this is quite lovely Fay , enjoyed, nature is one of the most beautiful things in this world.. i would love for you to check out my poems on here, i have a few so far on nature, one on spring and one on winter
January 23rd, 2018 05:50
No More.
Heather T said:
A sad beauty. It\'s a little like when your children fly from the nest and you have little of a part in their days anymore. Sad to wrest the human touch from such a noble work.
January 22nd, 2018 15:37
Heather T said:
A sad beauty. It\'s a little like when your children fly from the nest and you have little of a part in their days anymore. Sad to wrest the human touch from such a noble work.
January 22nd, 2018 15:37
No More.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks fr for another elegant and nostalgic POEM ! Even in my short lifetime I have seen things once sacred (audio tapes & video tapes & pressure cookers etc) become outmoded and discarded ! I love LIGHTHOUSES and thank God many are under preservation orders ! Your poem highlights the bravery and diligence of those who once bravely manned them ~ their fortitude will never be replaced ! Thanks for caring FAY ~ Yours as ever BRIAN !
January 22nd, 2018 08:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks fr for another elegant and nostalgic POEM ! Even in my short lifetime I have seen things once sacred (audio tapes & video tapes & pressure cookers etc) become outmoded and discarded ! I love LIGHTHOUSES and thank God many are under preservation orders ! Your poem highlights the bravery and diligence of those who once bravely manned them ~ their fortitude will never be replaced ! Thanks for caring FAY ~ Yours as ever BRIAN !
January 22nd, 2018 08:56
No More.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write and tribute to all those wonderful lighthouse keepers, they were wonderful people.
January 22nd, 2018 08:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write and tribute to all those wonderful lighthouse keepers, they were wonderful people.
January 22nd, 2018 08:55
This Chair.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
I enjoyed this write immensely!
It brought to mind beautiful
memories of me holding my
daughter and rocking her to
sleep! We spent many precious moments in our rocking chair! Thank you for sharing your exceptional talent!📃
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 19:18
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
I enjoyed this write immensely!
It brought to mind beautiful
memories of me holding my
daughter and rocking her to
sleep! We spent many precious moments in our rocking chair! Thank you for sharing your exceptional talent!📃
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 19:18
This Chair.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your chair and beautiful poem started a bunch of thoughts of what old furniture, walls, houses, could tell us. Maybe the chair stopped rocking, but you, dear Fay, just keep on rocking with your writing!
January 18th, 2018 16:27
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your chair and beautiful poem started a bunch of thoughts of what old furniture, walls, houses, could tell us. Maybe the chair stopped rocking, but you, dear Fay, just keep on rocking with your writing!
January 18th, 2018 16:27
This Chair.
lasergraph said:
I loved this, those old chairs are so full of character. My grandfather used to share stories while rocking in one of those and myself a jockey on his knee.
January 18th, 2018 12:22
lasergraph said:
I loved this, those old chairs are so full of character. My grandfather used to share stories while rocking in one of those and myself a jockey on his knee.
January 18th, 2018 12:22
This Chair.
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, that wise old rocker has probably seen more butts than an ashtray. Sorry to sully your fine poem like that, Fay ... I couldn\'t resist. Cheers.
January 18th, 2018 09:22
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, that wise old rocker has probably seen more butts than an ashtray. Sorry to sully your fine poem like that, Fay ... I couldn\'t resist. Cheers.
January 18th, 2018 09:22
This Chair.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that chair could tell so many stories.
January 18th, 2018 09:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that chair could tell so many stories.
January 18th, 2018 09:05
This Chair.
orchidee said:
Looks like the Queen contemplating that chair there Fay, which makes the pic and poem even more interesting!
January 18th, 2018 06:40
orchidee said:
Looks like the Queen contemplating that chair there Fay, which makes the pic and poem even more interesting!
January 18th, 2018 06:40
This Chair.
Michael Edwards said:
The stories it could tell - fine work Fay.
January 18th, 2018 05:55
Michael Edwards said:
The stories it could tell - fine work Fay.
January 18th, 2018 05:55
Esteem.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ The BIBLE teaches we should love our \"Neighbours\" to the same extent as we love ourselves ! If we have no Self Esteem or Self Worth then we can be of NO help or support to our (needy) Neighbours. Thanks for caring & sharing ! Love the VISUAL ~ I have met many \"Pussy Cats\" who (on reflection !) turned out to be LIONS Grrrrrrrrrrr NOT Purrrrrrrr ! Yours as ever BRIAN
January 17th, 2018 18:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ The BIBLE teaches we should love our \"Neighbours\" to the same extent as we love ourselves ! If we have no Self Esteem or Self Worth then we can be of NO help or support to our (needy) Neighbours. Thanks for caring & sharing ! Love the VISUAL ~ I have met many \"Pussy Cats\" who (on reflection !) turned out to be LIONS Grrrrrrrrrrr NOT Purrrrrrrr ! Yours as ever BRIAN
January 17th, 2018 18:32
Esteem.
Michael Edwards said:
As I\'ve said beore on this site (somewhere!) my fathers advice was \' always hold your head erect and be proud of who you are\' Well it\'s worked for me. Mind you there can be a fine between self respect and smugness and pomposity - just hope I don\'t fall into those categories. Fine work Fay.
January 17th, 2018 12:26
Michael Edwards said:
As I\'ve said beore on this site (somewhere!) my fathers advice was \' always hold your head erect and be proud of who you are\' Well it\'s worked for me. Mind you there can be a fine between self respect and smugness and pomposity - just hope I don\'t fall into those categories. Fine work Fay.
January 17th, 2018 12:26
Esteem.
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Fay. I will aim to stay \'dry\' too - except for a sherry or three quite often! lol
January 17th, 2018 11:34
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Fay. I will aim to stay \'dry\' too - except for a sherry or three quite often! lol
January 17th, 2018 11:34
Esteem.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
An awesome pic to illustrate an amazing write! I’m definitely going to “try to dance and stay dry”! My endeavor to achieve in 2018!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2018 09:12
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
An awesome pic to illustrate an amazing write! I’m definitely going to “try to dance and stay dry”! My endeavor to achieve in 2018!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2018 09:12
Esteem.
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the experimental construction of this one, Fay! It is fun to branch out with different forms of poetic expression. Kudos!
January 17th, 2018 09:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the experimental construction of this one, Fay! It is fun to branch out with different forms of poetic expression. Kudos!
January 17th, 2018 09:05
Esteem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true, self esteem is everything.
January 17th, 2018 08:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true, self esteem is everything.
January 17th, 2018 08:45
Arousal.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I think that turning night into day through a sexual encounter, written as beautiful as only you can do, is something really special.
January 16th, 2018 02:48
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I think that turning night into day through a sexual encounter, written as beautiful as only you can do, is something really special.
January 16th, 2018 02:48
Arousal.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, I could see this in my mind as the words came into it.
January 16th, 2018 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, I could see this in my mind as the words came into it.
January 16th, 2018 01:41
Arousal.
Michael Edwards said:
Saw the title and thought I must read that - lol - pleased I did - another great write Fay
January 15th, 2018 10:04
Michael Edwards said:
Saw the title and thought I must read that - lol - pleased I did - another great write Fay
January 15th, 2018 10:04
Arousal.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ When one has experienced the sensual fulfilment of true love ~ The memory of it is always fresh and it always leads to arousal ! Tingled with the reality of a Cornish December Sunset ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
January 15th, 2018 08:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ When one has experienced the sensual fulfilment of true love ~ The memory of it is always fresh and it always leads to arousal ! Tingled with the reality of a Cornish December Sunset ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
January 15th, 2018 08:20
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