Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Alltogetherness.
Laura🌻 said:
Much to reflect upon,
dear Fay!
Thank you for this
thought provoking
beautiful share!
~Laura~
February 3rd, 2018 10:20
Laura🌻 said:
Much to reflect upon,
dear Fay!
Thank you for this
thought provoking
beautiful share!
~Laura~
February 3rd, 2018 10:20
Alltogetherness.
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed - subtle reflections enjoyed Fay.
February 3rd, 2018 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed - subtle reflections enjoyed Fay.
February 3rd, 2018 09:11
Alltogetherness.
Lorna said:
Fay - I\'m not religious but I believe in Love! (Nature is god to me.....)
February 3rd, 2018 08:45
Lorna said:
Fay - I\'m not religious but I believe in Love! (Nature is god to me.....)
February 3rd, 2018 08:45
Too Long.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and the imagery is wonderful. I do hope the rain stops soon and the glory of Spring comes to the valley.
February 3rd, 2018 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and the imagery is wonderful. I do hope the rain stops soon and the glory of Spring comes to the valley.
February 3rd, 2018 01:25
Too Long.
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully written, Fay! And while I write this comment, I look out the window and see rain clouds, rain, and everything wet!!! Perfect poem for a perfectly wet day!
February 2nd, 2018 14:48
FredPeyer said:
Very beautifully written, Fay! And while I write this comment, I look out the window and see rain clouds, rain, and everything wet!!! Perfect poem for a perfectly wet day!
February 2nd, 2018 14:48
Too Long.
TrystanBehm said:
Simply beautiful. Reminds me of a hours long train ride from Edinburgh to Chester in the rain through the highlands. Wonderful write!
February 2nd, 2018 09:58
TrystanBehm said:
Simply beautiful. Reminds me of a hours long train ride from Edinburgh to Chester in the rain through the highlands. Wonderful write!
February 2nd, 2018 09:58
Too Long.
Lorna said:
A forlorn picture Fay - it very much brought to mind a cold, wet day in March on the horse farm one year when the entire barn had flooded - all the stalls were liquid sawdust and manure and we spent the cold, cold day using buckets to get it all out. The horses stood with their heads down - it was miserable..........
February 2nd, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
A forlorn picture Fay - it very much brought to mind a cold, wet day in March on the horse farm one year when the entire barn had flooded - all the stalls were liquid sawdust and manure and we spent the cold, cold day using buckets to get it all out. The horses stood with their heads down - it was miserable..........
February 2nd, 2018 06:20
Too Long.
Michael Edwards said:
Like a good curry it\'s matured with the repost - such a great work Fay
February 2nd, 2018 05:51
Michael Edwards said:
Like a good curry it\'s matured with the repost - such a great work Fay
February 2nd, 2018 05:51
Regeneration.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that door into a new you is a wonderful feeling.
February 2nd, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that door into a new you is a wonderful feeling.
February 2nd, 2018 01:32
Regeneration.
FredPeyer said:
And there she goes...gallivanting around with a big smile on her face!
I like that new you, Fay, and I like your poem too!
February 1st, 2018 13:22
FredPeyer said:
And there she goes...gallivanting around with a big smile on her face!
I like that new you, Fay, and I like your poem too!
February 1st, 2018 13:22
Specialness.
FredPeyer said:
That picture goes perfectly with your beautiful poem, Fay! While the last stanza is sad, that sadness is offset by all the beauty before and the very special last four lines! Beautiful!
February 1st, 2018 12:50
FredPeyer said:
That picture goes perfectly with your beautiful poem, Fay! While the last stanza is sad, that sadness is offset by all the beauty before and the very special last four lines! Beautiful!
February 1st, 2018 12:50
Specialness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, counting the time in flowers gives a wonderful imagery.
February 1st, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, counting the time in flowers gives a wonderful imagery.
February 1st, 2018 01:40
Specialness.
dusk arising said:
Quite quite beautiful and very moving. You\'ll know from my occasional pieces i too look back upon such wonderful times and your words today took me to those times and places. It was a great joy to reminisce warmed by the grace of your words. Sraight into my favourites.
January 31st, 2018 18:59
dusk arising said:
Quite quite beautiful and very moving. You\'ll know from my occasional pieces i too look back upon such wonderful times and your words today took me to those times and places. It was a great joy to reminisce warmed by the grace of your words. Sraight into my favourites.
January 31st, 2018 18:59
Specialness.
Michael Edwards said:
A lesson in metaphor and suggestion - great read Fay.
January 31st, 2018 09:17
Michael Edwards said:
A lesson in metaphor and suggestion - great read Fay.
January 31st, 2018 09:17
Specialness.
TrystanBehm said:
The imagery and analogy of love, loss and seasons is amazing. Such a great write. I agree with previous comments - should get 10 stars and is definitely a favorite of mine!
January 31st, 2018 08:20
TrystanBehm said:
The imagery and analogy of love, loss and seasons is amazing. Such a great write. I agree with previous comments - should get 10 stars and is definitely a favorite of mine!
January 31st, 2018 08:20
Specialness.
Lorna said:
Fay - beautifully written - you have painted the solace of nature like a work of art.
January 31st, 2018 06:37
Lorna said:
Fay - beautifully written - you have painted the solace of nature like a work of art.
January 31st, 2018 06:37
Specialness.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello fay , this is very beautiful :-) i love how you have used seasons and flowers .. to describe love and its ending . even when winter has appeared and spring / summer has disappeared we are still left with the memories of those beautiful days, those beautiful flowers, scents . i love this ending \'\' rainbowed in memory
those flowers still hold colours\'\' even when a flower wilts, dies and loses its colours, we have got to remember when it was colourful , alive and hold onto that ... this is so lovely fay , i have saved it to my favourites, an enjoyable read which i actually read a few times lol
January 31st, 2018 03:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello fay , this is very beautiful :-) i love how you have used seasons and flowers .. to describe love and its ending . even when winter has appeared and spring / summer has disappeared we are still left with the memories of those beautiful days, those beautiful flowers, scents . i love this ending \'\' rainbowed in memory
those flowers still hold colours\'\' even when a flower wilts, dies and loses its colours, we have got to remember when it was colourful , alive and hold onto that ... this is so lovely fay , i have saved it to my favourites, an enjoyable read which i actually read a few times lol
January 31st, 2018 03:59
Specialness.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I did a similar but unrefined poem: \'Meanwhile ten pork-pie-and-sherry Summers ago.....\' heehee.
January 31st, 2018 03:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I did a similar but unrefined poem: \'Meanwhile ten pork-pie-and-sherry Summers ago.....\' heehee.
January 31st, 2018 03:54
Unfettered.
FredPeyer said:
\'Facing tomorrows without need of phantom....\'
Beautiful writing again, Fay!
January 31st, 2018 01:50
FredPeyer said:
\'Facing tomorrows without need of phantom....\'
Beautiful writing again, Fay!
January 31st, 2018 01:50
Unfettered.
dusk arising said:
Lovely words again Fay. If only we could do as you suggest. Sadly all too often yesterdays taint our tomorrows and our early yesterdays can have sometimes damaged us quite seriously.
January 30th, 2018 17:20
dusk arising said:
Lovely words again Fay. If only we could do as you suggest. Sadly all too often yesterdays taint our tomorrows and our early yesterdays can have sometimes damaged us quite seriously.
January 30th, 2018 17:20
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