Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
COPING ALONE.
Michael Edwards said:
Emotion torn piece - so well expressed.
February 12th, 2018 11:06
Michael Edwards said:
Emotion torn piece - so well expressed.
February 12th, 2018 11:06
COPING ALONE.
Poetic25 said:
Hi Faye,
A heart-gripping piece, that flows really well with emotion.
M :)
February 12th, 2018 10:47
Poetic25 said:
Hi Faye,
A heart-gripping piece, that flows really well with emotion.
M :)
February 12th, 2018 10:47
COPING ALONE.
Lorna said:
You always hit to the heart Fay. Bad enough to be a widow older but can\'t imagine how the young can handle it, especially because of a war death. Don\'t know how they make sense of it. I myself am an \"Alzheimer\'s\" widow who lives somewhere between him living and dying. It\'s a most other worldly place to be.
February 12th, 2018 07:06
Lorna said:
You always hit to the heart Fay. Bad enough to be a widow older but can\'t imagine how the young can handle it, especially because of a war death. Don\'t know how they make sense of it. I myself am an \"Alzheimer\'s\" widow who lives somewhere between him living and dying. It\'s a most other worldly place to be.
February 12th, 2018 07:06
THOSE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those who go to sea are so brave.
Shanties are very meaningful if you listen to them properly.
February 11th, 2018 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, those who go to sea are so brave.
Shanties are very meaningful if you listen to them properly.
February 11th, 2018 01:24
THOSE.
FredPeyer said:
You conjure up great scenes of life on the sea, Fay. So well written! I love to read your poems.
February 10th, 2018 19:53
FredPeyer said:
You conjure up great scenes of life on the sea, Fay. So well written! I love to read your poems.
February 10th, 2018 19:53
THOSE.
Laura🌻 said:
Ah, yes...in peril of the Sea!
Respect! It’s all about respect...my great grandfather’s words!
My great grandfather, a fisherman from Naples, was all about having respect for the Sea!
As per my mom, his mantra was “YOU HAVE RESPECT FOR THE SEA AND THE SEA WILL SERVE YOU WELL”!
Enjoyed the read my dear Fay. Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 10th, 2018 11:49
Laura🌻 said:
Ah, yes...in peril of the Sea!
Respect! It’s all about respect...my great grandfather’s words!
My great grandfather, a fisherman from Naples, was all about having respect for the Sea!
As per my mom, his mantra was “YOU HAVE RESPECT FOR THE SEA AND THE SEA WILL SERVE YOU WELL”!
Enjoyed the read my dear Fay. Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 10th, 2018 11:49
THOSE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LORD hear us when we cry to thee
For those in peril on the Sea !
We must be aware (every Friday !)
Of the REAL price of \"Fish & Chips !\"
Perfect fusion of POEM \'n PIC ~ Thanks for caring & scaring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 10:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LORD hear us when we cry to thee
For those in peril on the Sea !
We must be aware (every Friday !)
Of the REAL price of \"Fish & Chips !\"
Perfect fusion of POEM \'n PIC ~ Thanks for caring & scaring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 10:17
UNLATCHED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another Perfect Poem ~ Only in Cornwall ~ You are so Blessed. I live 12 miles from the SEA ~ I can smell it but can\'t see it ~ shame. Sometimes I stay with a Friend on the East Coast and the SUNRISES are breathtaking ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
February 9th, 2018 16:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another Perfect Poem ~ Only in Cornwall ~ You are so Blessed. I live 12 miles from the SEA ~ I can smell it but can\'t see it ~ shame. Sometimes I stay with a Friend on the East Coast and the SUNRISES are breathtaking ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
February 9th, 2018 16:22
UNLATCHED.
dusk arising said:
Brrrrrr how could you write such a warm inviting nay, encouraging encounter with the dawn on such a cold and frosty occasion. I know you are in our southernmost county but the chill even without the frost is biting.
You must have a very warm spirit to pen these wonderful pieces. A pleasure to read.
February 9th, 2018 15:30
dusk arising said:
Brrrrrr how could you write such a warm inviting nay, encouraging encounter with the dawn on such a cold and frosty occasion. I know you are in our southernmost county but the chill even without the frost is biting.
You must have a very warm spirit to pen these wonderful pieces. A pleasure to read.
February 9th, 2018 15:30
UNLATCHED.
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully penned poem to welcome this brand new day! Ahh...the beauty of nature. A wondrous sight to behold! I enjoyed the read and visual very much my dear Fay! Thank you.
~Laura~
February 9th, 2018 07:50
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully penned poem to welcome this brand new day! Ahh...the beauty of nature. A wondrous sight to behold! I enjoyed the read and visual very much my dear Fay! Thank you.
~Laura~
February 9th, 2018 07:50
Behind and Between.
Louis Gibbs said:
A thin veil it is, indeed! This poem is both beautifully constructed and visionary. Exquisitely penned, Fay! Packed with truths not known to many. Kudos!
February 8th, 2018 10:53
Louis Gibbs said:
A thin veil it is, indeed! This poem is both beautifully constructed and visionary. Exquisitely penned, Fay! Packed with truths not known to many. Kudos!
February 8th, 2018 10:53
Behind and Between.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Meanwhile -
\'I wandered lonely as a cloud
Meditating on dreams
But bit difficult
With only me two brain cells\'.Doh!
Erm, this does not have quite the same ring as your poem! lol.
February 8th, 2018 09:17
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Meanwhile -
\'I wandered lonely as a cloud
Meditating on dreams
But bit difficult
With only me two brain cells\'.Doh!
Erm, this does not have quite the same ring as your poem! lol.
February 8th, 2018 09:17
Behind and Between.
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write my dear Fay!
The last six lines sum it all
up for me! Meaningful and
comforting!
~Laura~
February 8th, 2018 08:50
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write my dear Fay!
The last six lines sum it all
up for me! Meaningful and
comforting!
~Laura~
February 8th, 2018 08:50
Behind and Between.
TrystanBehm said:
A sentiment I feel strongly about so beautifully articulated - as usual Fay!
February 8th, 2018 08:36
TrystanBehm said:
A sentiment I feel strongly about so beautifully articulated - as usual Fay!
February 8th, 2018 08:36
Behind and Between.
Poetic25 said:
Simply wonderful Fay, with so many vivid images.
Michael :)
February 8th, 2018 07:46
Poetic25 said:
Simply wonderful Fay, with so many vivid images.
Michael :)
February 8th, 2018 07:46
Behind and Between.
Lorna said:
Morning Fay (your p.m.) - I spend half my days in the nether world you have described so perfectly.... and I am so content there! And dreams!! What wonderful images.......
February 8th, 2018 05:49
Lorna said:
Morning Fay (your p.m.) - I spend half my days in the nether world you have described so perfectly.... and I am so content there! And dreams!! What wonderful images.......
February 8th, 2018 05:49
EBONY CHILL.
Poetic25 said:
Fay,
A lovely seasonal piece, with so much imagery throughout.
Makes me look forward to summer days.
Michael :)
February 7th, 2018 15:33
Poetic25 said:
Fay,
A lovely seasonal piece, with so much imagery throughout.
Makes me look forward to summer days.
Michael :)
February 7th, 2018 15:33
EBONY CHILL.
dusk arising said:
Huddling, snuggling to keep warm these winter nights its quite easy to selfishly forget those wonderful creatures we like to think we adore with our mental picture of their appearance in warmer times. How clever they are to survive these chill to the bone frozen solid times to thrll us tomorrow.
I read you as reminding us to do a few helpful things without intruding. Wonderfully written piece quite deserving of being a favourite all round.
February 7th, 2018 15:23
dusk arising said:
Huddling, snuggling to keep warm these winter nights its quite easy to selfishly forget those wonderful creatures we like to think we adore with our mental picture of their appearance in warmer times. How clever they are to survive these chill to the bone frozen solid times to thrll us tomorrow.
I read you as reminding us to do a few helpful things without intruding. Wonderfully written piece quite deserving of being a favourite all round.
February 7th, 2018 15:23
WHITE STUFF.
FredPeyer said:
Really like your \'fun\' poem, Fay! I think that sometimes dogs are smarter than us, who wants to run around in the cold if one could sit all comfy in front of that roaring fire!
February 7th, 2018 12:08
FredPeyer said:
Really like your \'fun\' poem, Fay! I think that sometimes dogs are smarter than us, who wants to run around in the cold if one could sit all comfy in front of that roaring fire!
February 7th, 2018 12:08
EBONY CHILL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another seamless fusion of Poem \'n Pic ! Your choice of WORDS ~ SIMILE & METAPHOR is so so perfect ~ further comment would be superfluous ! The high standard of each of your poems ~ in content ~ rhythm and ofttimes rhyme is both a challenge and a benchmarh to us lesser poets ~ you are a GEM ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 11:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another seamless fusion of Poem \'n Pic ! Your choice of WORDS ~ SIMILE & METAPHOR is so so perfect ~ further comment would be superfluous ! The high standard of each of your poems ~ in content ~ rhythm and ofttimes rhyme is both a challenge and a benchmarh to us lesser poets ~ you are a GEM ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 11:55
EBONY CHILL.
TrystanBehm said:
This poem transcended me into a place where I could feel the cold, see the sky, hear the sounds - with such clarity. This is wonderful Fay. Into my favorites it goes!
February 7th, 2018 10:29
TrystanBehm said:
This poem transcended me into a place where I could feel the cold, see the sky, hear the sounds - with such clarity. This is wonderful Fay. Into my favorites it goes!
February 7th, 2018 10:29
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