Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LOVE\'S STILLNESS.
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful and poignant write, my dear Fay! The ending words of your poem speak volumes! I enjoyed the read in its entirety!
~Laura~
March 1st, 2018 05:19
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful and poignant write, my dear Fay! The ending words of your poem speak volumes! I enjoyed the read in its entirety!
~Laura~
March 1st, 2018 05:19
ENDANGERED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay and it is not the greed for oil it is the greed for more, more money, more power and blow the world if it gets destroyed in their quest for more.
February 28th, 2018 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay and it is not the greed for oil it is the greed for more, more money, more power and blow the world if it gets destroyed in their quest for more.
February 28th, 2018 01:50
ENDANGERED.
Christina8 said:
Not sure where this picture is from, but if money and power are involved, I agree with your poem. What a wonderful poem it was!
February 27th, 2018 13:12
Christina8 said:
Not sure where this picture is from, but if money and power are involved, I agree with your poem. What a wonderful poem it was!
February 27th, 2018 13:12
ENDANGERED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Fracking in the Plains of America ~ exploiting the Virgin Oilfields of Alaska or Polluting the N Sea and the Bay of Mexico is all a result of Greedy 21st C Man in his search for the \"Black Gold of Oil\" ! We have all become too dependent on Electricity and the % of Urban Man increases day by day. In essence we are destroying the WORLD ! I\'ll be 100 in 2083 ~ BUT ~ what about our GRANDCHILDREN what legacy are we leaving them ! Yours as ever BRIAN X
February 27th, 2018 08:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Fracking in the Plains of America ~ exploiting the Virgin Oilfields of Alaska or Polluting the N Sea and the Bay of Mexico is all a result of Greedy 21st C Man in his search for the \"Black Gold of Oil\" ! We have all become too dependent on Electricity and the % of Urban Man increases day by day. In essence we are destroying the WORLD ! I\'ll be 100 in 2083 ~ BUT ~ what about our GRANDCHILDREN what legacy are we leaving them ! Yours as ever BRIAN X
February 27th, 2018 08:24
ENDANGERED.
Michael Edwards said:
Greed and stubborn blindness alongside mistaken ideologies are the legacies which we are passing on to our innocent children - fine work Fay.
February 27th, 2018 06:08
Michael Edwards said:
Greed and stubborn blindness alongside mistaken ideologies are the legacies which we are passing on to our innocent children - fine work Fay.
February 27th, 2018 06:08
ENDANGERED.
Lauraš» said:
A lot to think about my dear Fay! Itās like playing Russian roulette with nature! I enjoyed reading this fine write! Thank you for sharing your thoughts! Always a pleasure no matter what your subject matter is!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 05:59
Lauraš» said:
A lot to think about my dear Fay! Itās like playing Russian roulette with nature! I enjoyed reading this fine write! Thank you for sharing your thoughts! Always a pleasure no matter what your subject matter is!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 05:59
ENDANGERED.
Lorna said:
I\'m with you Fay - I think it\'s Greed at the bottom of most of the evils of the world..... and the perpetrators stand there looking so pleased with themselves.... but more and more there is good news if looked for.... the wind farms and solar farms (did you know they are going to put solar farms at Chernobyl!!!!) are taking hold - change will come!
February 27th, 2018 05:13
Lorna said:
I\'m with you Fay - I think it\'s Greed at the bottom of most of the evils of the world..... and the perpetrators stand there looking so pleased with themselves.... but more and more there is good news if looked for.... the wind farms and solar farms (did you know they are going to put solar farms at Chernobyl!!!!) are taking hold - change will come!
February 27th, 2018 05:13
TICKING AWAY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ 7:30 am and I\'m ready to go ~ Lots of SNOW in the EAST ! Sorry I\'m a day late but now I\'m WIDE AWAKE and going to work on SKI\'s today ~ no fancy tricks though ~ Yours warmly BRIAN !
February 27th, 2018 02:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ 7:30 am and I\'m ready to go ~ Lots of SNOW in the EAST ! Sorry I\'m a day late but now I\'m WIDE AWAKE and going to work on SKI\'s today ~ no fancy tricks though ~ Yours warmly BRIAN !
February 27th, 2018 02:32
TICKING AWAY.
dusk arising said:
WOW! and some people just call it waking up before dawn. I never knew what i was missing.
You put us to shame with work like this. Truly magnificent phrases you conjure into our unworthy minds.
Favourite for its brilliance!
February 26th, 2018 15:37
dusk arising said:
WOW! and some people just call it waking up before dawn. I never knew what i was missing.
You put us to shame with work like this. Truly magnificent phrases you conjure into our unworthy minds.
Favourite for its brilliance!
February 26th, 2018 15:37
TICKING AWAY.
Michael Edwards said:
A language kaleidoscope - super work Fay
February 26th, 2018 08:07
Michael Edwards said:
A language kaleidoscope - super work Fay
February 26th, 2018 08:07
TICKING AWAY.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. At the moment I\'ve an adapted version beginning: \'And now the ice-cold chill blasts me ears, so they tingle.....\' I didn\'t really want to write a poem like that! lol.
February 26th, 2018 06:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. At the moment I\'ve an adapted version beginning: \'And now the ice-cold chill blasts me ears, so they tingle.....\' I didn\'t really want to write a poem like that! lol.
February 26th, 2018 06:50
TICKING AWAY.
Lorna said:
Lovely lazy wake up poem Fay! I wish I woke up this way - I sit bolt upright ready for action!
February 26th, 2018 06:14
Lorna said:
Lovely lazy wake up poem Fay! I wish I woke up this way - I sit bolt upright ready for action!
February 26th, 2018 06:14
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Experience the feel
of love\'s fateful kiss and give its fire a chance
to liquify previous snow\"
Beautiful lines Fay in a very good write.
February 26th, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Experience the feel
of love\'s fateful kiss and give its fire a chance
to liquify previous snow\"
Beautiful lines Fay in a very good write.
February 26th, 2018 01:47
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Caring dove said:
hi fay , a very nice read :-) i love your ideas here ,, the snow being a cold pain and the fire being warmth and love . nice how you used nature in this one, . truly enjoyed reading . x
February 25th, 2018 16:20
Caring dove said:
hi fay , a very nice read :-) i love your ideas here ,, the snow being a cold pain and the fire being warmth and love . nice how you used nature in this one, . truly enjoyed reading . x
February 25th, 2018 16:20
LOVE\'S GLOW.
FredPeyer said:
Love, fire, heat, warmth, glow....they all go together and you presented it in your usual eloquent way!
February 25th, 2018 14:36
FredPeyer said:
Love, fire, heat, warmth, glow....they all go together and you presented it in your usual eloquent way!
February 25th, 2018 14:36
LOVE\'S GLOW.
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, i can feel it creeping all over me already. Which is just as well for we are expecting a freeze up!
February 25th, 2018 11:50
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, i can feel it creeping all over me already. Which is just as well for we are expecting a freeze up!
February 25th, 2018 11:50
LOVE\'S GLOW.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. A quote goes something like this: \'Nothing will get a coat off a man\'s back sooner than the warm sunshine!\' Something like that anyway. Maybe it\'s from \'Confucius he say.....!\'
February 25th, 2018 11:44
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. A quote goes something like this: \'Nothing will get a coat off a man\'s back sooner than the warm sunshine!\' Something like that anyway. Maybe it\'s from \'Confucius he say.....!\'
February 25th, 2018 11:44
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Accidental Poet said:
Love has a tenacious will to grow when least expected Fay. And you\'ve captured it quite well here in your poem. Beautiful!
February 25th, 2018 08:28
Accidental Poet said:
Love has a tenacious will to grow when least expected Fay. And you\'ve captured it quite well here in your poem. Beautiful!
February 25th, 2018 08:28
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Michael Edwards said:
The warmth of love that falls as salt on snow - Super Fay.
February 25th, 2018 05:21
Michael Edwards said:
The warmth of love that falls as salt on snow - Super Fay.
February 25th, 2018 05:21
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Lorna said:
I remember it well although it doesn\'t happen often! Lovely Fay.
February 25th, 2018 05:17
Lorna said:
I remember it well although it doesn\'t happen often! Lovely Fay.
February 25th, 2018 05:17
LOVE\'S GLOW.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The SPANISH SAY \"Amor esta Caliente y Piquante ! LOVE IS HOT & SPICY ~ AMEN ! That is my current experience
with ANGELA Hot in the sense of STEAMY and SPICY in the sense of experience ! For poeple in our Age group the unfolding of True Love is the SPICE of LIFE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the Picture ~ God indeed is the source of all LOVE ! Yours as ever BRIAN X
February 25th, 2018 05:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The SPANISH SAY \"Amor esta Caliente y Piquante ! LOVE IS HOT & SPICY ~ AMEN ! That is my current experience
with ANGELA Hot in the sense of STEAMY and SPICY in the sense of experience ! For poeple in our Age group the unfolding of True Love is the SPICE of LIFE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the Picture ~ God indeed is the source of all LOVE ! Yours as ever BRIAN X
February 25th, 2018 05:11
STILL CLIMBING.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful and imaginative writing, Fay! Love that last stanza!
February 24th, 2018 14:30
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful and imaginative writing, Fay! Love that last stanza!
February 24th, 2018 14:30
STILL CLIMBING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay. Being betrayed is one of the worst things that can happen in a relationship. It is good to see that wisdom prevails at the end.
February 24th, 2018 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay. Being betrayed is one of the worst things that can happen in a relationship. It is good to see that wisdom prevails at the end.
February 24th, 2018 01:17
STILL CLIMBING.
Christina8 said:
Excellent write Fay on a difficult topic! Whether the betrayal is lover or family, it is devastating and you wrote about it in a way only you can! Amazing!
February 23rd, 2018 20:09
Christina8 said:
Excellent write Fay on a difficult topic! Whether the betrayal is lover or family, it is devastating and you wrote about it in a way only you can! Amazing!
February 23rd, 2018 20:09
STILL CLIMBING.
dusk arising said:
Wisdom and love of humanity, human nature, does educate us as we age. Pain however is a price we pay as we negotiate several learning curves, often curves we thought had been such excellent teachers before. A positive spirit, faith in human kind and yes \'hope\' lead us forward.
Another of your heartfelt beautiful writes.
February 23rd, 2018 16:08
dusk arising said:
Wisdom and love of humanity, human nature, does educate us as we age. Pain however is a price we pay as we negotiate several learning curves, often curves we thought had been such excellent teachers before. A positive spirit, faith in human kind and yes \'hope\' lead us forward.
Another of your heartfelt beautiful writes.
February 23rd, 2018 16:08
STILL CLIMBING.
Lauraš» said:
A compelling read, my dear Fay, from beginning to end!
The perfect title and first two lines totally immerse the reader in the subject matter! It commands the readerās attention. Cannot stop reading till the end is reached! Just like a mystery! The relatability takes hold upon the consequent readings! The more I read it, the more it resonates! The saving grace is that as time elapses, the pain subsides!
A superb write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 09:53
Lauraš» said:
A compelling read, my dear Fay, from beginning to end!
The perfect title and first two lines totally immerse the reader in the subject matter! It commands the readerās attention. Cannot stop reading till the end is reached! Just like a mystery! The relatability takes hold upon the consequent readings! The more I read it, the more it resonates! The saving grace is that as time elapses, the pain subsides!
A superb write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 09:53
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