Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Reflections.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wisdom is reflected in asking the right questions, which your intriguing poem does so well, dear Fay. Have yourself a wonderful Christmas. I look forward to your return and continued brilliant writes.
December 21st, 2017 10:13
Louis Gibbs said:
Wisdom is reflected in asking the right questions, which your intriguing poem does so well, dear Fay. Have yourself a wonderful Christmas. I look forward to your return and continued brilliant writes.
December 21st, 2017 10:13
Reflections.
Christina8 said:
A simply wonderful write today, Fay! Merry Christmas to you!
December 21st, 2017 10:01
Christina8 said:
A simply wonderful write today, Fay! Merry Christmas to you!
December 21st, 2017 10:01
Reflections.
Goldfinch60 said:
We would all like to know more but if we got to know everything for what would we strive.
Have a great Christmas Fay.
December 21st, 2017 09:06
Goldfinch60 said:
We would all like to know more but if we got to know everything for what would we strive.
Have a great Christmas Fay.
December 21st, 2017 09:06
Reflections.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Enjoyed your awesome write! The mysterious āIā within us knows. It knows and understands the beauty and generosity within YOU, my dear Fay! Bless you and yours! Enjoy the holidays! Be safe and return soon!
~Laura~
December 21st, 2017 08:13
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Enjoyed your awesome write! The mysterious āIā within us knows. It knows and understands the beauty and generosity within YOU, my dear Fay! Bless you and yours! Enjoy the holidays! Be safe and return soon!
~Laura~
December 21st, 2017 08:13
Reflections.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and thanks for all your postings over the year - best wishes for Christmas.
December 21st, 2017 04:14
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and thanks for all your postings over the year - best wishes for Christmas.
December 21st, 2017 04:14
December Sun.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you perfectly described a lot of our sunsets here! Magic, and so is your poem.
December 20th, 2017 20:03
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you perfectly described a lot of our sunsets here! Magic, and so is your poem.
December 20th, 2017 20:03
December Sun.
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely picture you paint for us, Fay. Kudos on the attention to poem shape!
December 20th, 2017 12:17
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely picture you paint for us, Fay. Kudos on the attention to poem shape!
December 20th, 2017 12:17
December Sun.
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
What a beauty of a gem! Always a delight to read your amazing poems! Many a day they pull me out of my gloomy state of being! You are my scrumptious ātiramisuā...(an Italian dessert)! (literally means āpull me upā)!
~Laura~
P.S.-just noticed Santiās comment. Congratulations for your poem of the year award! Not surprised at all! All your poems should be award winning! Brava!šš»
December 20th, 2017 11:52
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
What a beauty of a gem! Always a delight to read your amazing poems! Many a day they pull me out of my gloomy state of being! You are my scrumptious ātiramisuā...(an Italian dessert)! (literally means āpull me upā)!
~Laura~
P.S.-just noticed Santiās comment. Congratulations for your poem of the year award! Not surprised at all! All your poems should be award winning! Brava!šš»
December 20th, 2017 11:52
December Sun.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another perfect POEM \'N PIC to start the DAY ! Thanks for getting up early to share a \"sight \'n sound\" glimpse of your beloved Cornwall Coast for those of us exiled in the East where the Coast borders on the dull ! Blessings @ Christmas ~ BRIAN
December 20th, 2017 04:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another perfect POEM \'N PIC to start the DAY ! Thanks for getting up early to share a \"sight \'n sound\" glimpse of your beloved Cornwall Coast for those of us exiled in the East where the Coast borders on the dull ! Blessings @ Christmas ~ BRIAN
December 20th, 2017 04:42
December Sun.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. The sun at its lowest, this time of year. But soon, an extra minute or two each day again. Wheee! Let\'s not spend them all at once. lol.
December 20th, 2017 04:22
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. The sun at its lowest, this time of year. But soon, an extra minute or two each day again. Wheee! Let\'s not spend them all at once. lol.
December 20th, 2017 04:22
December Sun.
Michael Edwards said:
Those last two lines are magic - Brilliant dear Fay
December 20th, 2017 04:08
Michael Edwards said:
Those last two lines are magic - Brilliant dear Fay
December 20th, 2017 04:08
Locked In.
Louis Gibbs said:
Great advice ... not easy to follow, as you know. Well penned as usual, Fay!
December 19th, 2017 09:00
Louis Gibbs said:
Great advice ... not easy to follow, as you know. Well penned as usual, Fay!
December 19th, 2017 09:00
Locked In.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you for a wonderful tribute to the Memory of your Loved One. We all shed tears FAY at the homecall of a Loved One ~ BUT ~ We do not sorrow like those who have no hope in Eternal Life and a reunion in Glory ! Also a Beautiful Lady (like you !) has no regrets ~ only Precious Memories. Every blessing at this Special Time of Year ~ We all love you ! Yours BRIAN XOX (Hugs and Mistletoe Kisses !)
December 19th, 2017 04:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you for a wonderful tribute to the Memory of your Loved One. We all shed tears FAY at the homecall of a Loved One ~ BUT ~ We do not sorrow like those who have no hope in Eternal Life and a reunion in Glory ! Also a Beautiful Lady (like you !) has no regrets ~ only Precious Memories. Every blessing at this Special Time of Year ~ We all love you ! Yours BRIAN XOX (Hugs and Mistletoe Kisses !)
December 19th, 2017 04:13
Swift Magic.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY. A perfect blending of POEM \'n PHOTO in celebration of Swifts a most beautiful ~ especially in flight. You describe it perfectly. The combination of the SIGHT of the swirling FLOCK and the SOUND they make in flight is called a MURMURATION which is shortened to a MURMUR of SWIFTS (and LARKS etc) This is a collective name for a \"Flock in Flight\" Thanks for sharing it made my day complete as I had posted a Poem on Collective Nouns for \"Groups of Birds\" ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
December 18th, 2017 18:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY. A perfect blending of POEM \'n PHOTO in celebration of Swifts a most beautiful ~ especially in flight. You describe it perfectly. The combination of the SIGHT of the swirling FLOCK and the SOUND they make in flight is called a MURMURATION which is shortened to a MURMUR of SWIFTS (and LARKS etc) This is a collective name for a \"Flock in Flight\" Thanks for sharing it made my day complete as I had posted a Poem on Collective Nouns for \"Groups of Birds\" ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
December 18th, 2017 18:45
Swift Magic.
Goldfinch60 said:
Swifts are magnificent birds as is this poem.
December 18th, 2017 13:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Swifts are magnificent birds as is this poem.
December 18th, 2017 13:38
Swift Magic.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your tribute poem soars and inspires like the birds of its subject. Great write, Fay!
December 18th, 2017 10:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Your tribute poem soars and inspires like the birds of its subject. Great write, Fay!
December 18th, 2017 10:43
Swift Magic.
orchidee said:
It is a magical write Fay, though I don\'t go along with \'magic\' in any spooky sense.
December 18th, 2017 09:14
orchidee said:
It is a magical write Fay, though I don\'t go along with \'magic\' in any spooky sense.
December 18th, 2017 09:14
Swift Magic.
Michael Edwards said:
They do create magical sights - great work Fay.
December 18th, 2017 04:52
Michael Edwards said:
They do create magical sights - great work Fay.
December 18th, 2017 04:52
If.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful and that last stanza is absolutely glorious.
December 18th, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful and that last stanza is absolutely glorious.
December 18th, 2017 01:34
If.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This strikes a CHORD with ME ~ FAY and I can read Myself and Angela into each of these verses ! Verse 1. She fills all my voids of Ardour Verse 2. When we need assurance in Life & Love ~ we turn to each other. Verse 3. ANGELA and I have been in a serious Relationship for 18 months and already we have a store of Precious Memories which lift us up when we are separated ~ AMEN ! Thanks for your precious comments FAY ~ Blessings as ever BRIAN & ANGELA Love the PHOTO ~ JETTIES are a great place for meditation ~ B.
December 17th, 2017 17:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This strikes a CHORD with ME ~ FAY and I can read Myself and Angela into each of these verses ! Verse 1. She fills all my voids of Ardour Verse 2. When we need assurance in Life & Love ~ we turn to each other. Verse 3. ANGELA and I have been in a serious Relationship for 18 months and already we have a store of Precious Memories which lift us up when we are separated ~ AMEN ! Thanks for your precious comments FAY ~ Blessings as ever BRIAN & ANGELA Love the PHOTO ~ JETTIES are a great place for meditation ~ B.
December 17th, 2017 17:16
If.
Michael Edwards said:
A Princess of the written word - Fay you are more - A Queen - Superb.
December 17th, 2017 13:45
Michael Edwards said:
A Princess of the written word - Fay you are more - A Queen - Superb.
December 17th, 2017 13:45
If.
Lauraš» said:
Oh, My Dear Poetess Fay...
As Iām reading your write of a jewel, a love song by Michael McDonald came over the radio waves! Do I call this a coincidence?
Regardless, your exquisite poem doesnāt need background music! It beautifully stands all on its own ! Enjoyed it thoroughly! Very relatable to me of a lost love of long ago! I could never express the feeling as well as you do! You are a master of the craft! In your debt My Dear Poetess!
~Laura~
December 17th, 2017 10:41
Lauraš» said:
Oh, My Dear Poetess Fay...
As Iām reading your write of a jewel, a love song by Michael McDonald came over the radio waves! Do I call this a coincidence?
Regardless, your exquisite poem doesnāt need background music! It beautifully stands all on its own ! Enjoyed it thoroughly! Very relatable to me of a lost love of long ago! I could never express the feeling as well as you do! You are a master of the craft! In your debt My Dear Poetess!
~Laura~
December 17th, 2017 10:41
If.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem without doubt, Fay, but it left me with a question: You shift from assertions in the last lines of the first and third stanzas, (\'I will\' and \'he will\'), to a question in the second, (\'will I\'). Was this shift deliberate? Apologies if I\'ve completely failed to comprehend your intent, my talented friend.
December 17th, 2017 08:40
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem without doubt, Fay, but it left me with a question: You shift from assertions in the last lines of the first and third stanzas, (\'I will\' and \'he will\'), to a question in the second, (\'will I\'). Was this shift deliberate? Apologies if I\'ve completely failed to comprehend your intent, my talented friend.
December 17th, 2017 08:40
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