Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Never Forget.
Michael Edwards said:
You have captured so well the spirit of the past and in doing so the hope for the future - touching write Fay.
November 11th, 2017 04:32
Michael Edwards said:
You have captured so well the spirit of the past and in doing so the hope for the future - touching write Fay.
November 11th, 2017 04:32
Today\'s Poem.
Michael Edwards said:
What was I thinking of? I nearly missed this gem Fay.
November 10th, 2017 17:04
Michael Edwards said:
What was I thinking of? I nearly missed this gem Fay.
November 10th, 2017 17:04
Today\'s Poem.
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful write it is, Fay.\"Bird-agility,\" \"feathers reflect to perfection,\" \"natures sessions of fresh happenings.\" - Loved those three. Also loved the Open and closing lines. Oh to have the Sun as your morning muse. _ Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:53
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful write it is, Fay.\"Bird-agility,\" \"feathers reflect to perfection,\" \"natures sessions of fresh happenings.\" - Loved those three. Also loved the Open and closing lines. Oh to have the Sun as your morning muse. _ Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:53
Today\'s Poem.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As so often FAY ~ your poem paints a perfect picture of natural Cornwall ! It is also complemented by an elegant photograph. This poem enables me to visualise ~ the last red rose of Autumn ~ nodding marigolds and the singular Sparrow ~ drinking from dew-wet geranium heads ! You have unique Poetic Skills which we all admire ~ but none can emulate ! You are both a hallmark and an encouragement. We all love you FAY ~ just for being you ! Yours forever BRIAN.
November 10th, 2017 15:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As so often FAY ~ your poem paints a perfect picture of natural Cornwall ! It is also complemented by an elegant photograph. This poem enables me to visualise ~ the last red rose of Autumn ~ nodding marigolds and the singular Sparrow ~ drinking from dew-wet geranium heads ! You have unique Poetic Skills which we all admire ~ but none can emulate ! You are both a hallmark and an encouragement. We all love you FAY ~ just for being you ! Yours forever BRIAN.
November 10th, 2017 15:04
Today\'s Poem.
Louis Gibbs said:
I have no doubt you have been here many, many times, Fay. An old and wise soul you are, revealed in the beauty of your work. This is but another fine example.
November 10th, 2017 11:28
Louis Gibbs said:
I have no doubt you have been here many, many times, Fay. An old and wise soul you are, revealed in the beauty of your work. This is but another fine example.
November 10th, 2017 11:28
Today\'s Poem.
myself and me said:
What a beautiful, peaceful autumn morning to enjoy. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 09:48
myself and me said:
What a beautiful, peaceful autumn morning to enjoy. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 09:48
Today\'s Poem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write with great imagery.
November 10th, 2017 09:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write with great imagery.
November 10th, 2017 09:04
Today\'s Poem.
dusk arising said:
You do paint such wonderful pictures for me when reading your words.
So easy to take all of those things you describe for granted everyday. But reading your words, i stop and look, feel the damp mornings atmosphere, hear the sparrow wings, wonder if the rose will still be here tomorrow. Enchanting.
Yes another of your fine pieces into my favourites.
November 10th, 2017 08:04
dusk arising said:
You do paint such wonderful pictures for me when reading your words.
So easy to take all of those things you describe for granted everyday. But reading your words, i stop and look, feel the damp mornings atmosphere, hear the sparrow wings, wonder if the rose will still be here tomorrow. Enchanting.
Yes another of your fine pieces into my favourites.
November 10th, 2017 08:04
Today\'s Poem.
Lauraš» said:
Your pen is magical Fay...
and a beautiful poem you
did write! Your descriptive
words of natureās beauty
paint a glorious morning!
What a delight!
November 10th, 2017 04:51
Lauraš» said:
Your pen is magical Fay...
and a beautiful poem you
did write! Your descriptive
words of natureās beauty
paint a glorious morning!
What a delight!
November 10th, 2017 04:51
Wordless.
lasergraph said:
Nature\'s symphony for our ear,
If we just open up to hear. I could hear the music. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:56
lasergraph said:
Nature\'s symphony for our ear,
If we just open up to hear. I could hear the music. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:56
Wordless.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you describe the beauty of stillness so incredibly well. Stillness filled with unheard sounds of music. Your writing is exquisite!
November 9th, 2017 14:07
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you describe the beauty of stillness so incredibly well. Stillness filled with unheard sounds of music. Your writing is exquisite!
November 9th, 2017 14:07
Wordless.
orchidee said:
Lovely write Fay. It\'s a pity - I tried to join a cat in its singing / mewing. But it was terrified and dashed off quick! Well, it would, cos it heard me sing and thought there was cat-fight somewhere. heehee.
November 9th, 2017 11:11
orchidee said:
Lovely write Fay. It\'s a pity - I tried to join a cat in its singing / mewing. But it was terrified and dashed off quick! Well, it would, cos it heard me sing and thought there was cat-fight somewhere. heehee.
November 9th, 2017 11:11
Wordless.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Speechless contact\", doesn\'t that describe what poetry is? And the poetry of nature as well. as you so finely portray. A beautiful, mind-stimulating poem, Fay!
November 9th, 2017 10:25
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Speechless contact\", doesn\'t that describe what poetry is? And the poetry of nature as well. as you so finely portray. A beautiful, mind-stimulating poem, Fay!
November 9th, 2017 10:25
Wordless.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again FAY for a pictorial poetic Gem ~ straight form you loving heart. The sounds of NATURE are more profound than mere words ~ they are evocative and evoke individual sensations and memories in our hearts and minds in a language we can all understand ! The voice of Nature is never silent and normally has great strength to soothe the troubled soul ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN \"Nature Boy\"
November 9th, 2017 09:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again FAY for a pictorial poetic Gem ~ straight form you loving heart. The sounds of NATURE are more profound than mere words ~ they are evocative and evoke individual sensations and memories in our hearts and minds in a language we can all understand ! The voice of Nature is never silent and normally has great strength to soothe the troubled soul ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN \"Nature Boy\"
November 9th, 2017 09:24
Wordless.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem, natureās symphony is glorious, even in its silence.
November 9th, 2017 09:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem, natureās symphony is glorious, even in its silence.
November 9th, 2017 09:11
Wordless.
myself and me said:
Yes, the harmony and the peace in nature are the best music on earth.
November 9th, 2017 08:47
myself and me said:
Yes, the harmony and the peace in nature are the best music on earth.
November 9th, 2017 08:47
Wordless.
Christina8 said:
You effortlessly describe the music of the earth n this poem in only the way that you can. So beautifully captured! Wonderful!
November 9th, 2017 07:35
Christina8 said:
You effortlessly describe the music of the earth n this poem in only the way that you can. So beautifully captured! Wonderful!
November 9th, 2017 07:35
Wordless.
Michael Edwards said:
Just mentioned Solveigs Song on another posting - ah the voice not singing words but just used as an instrument - beauty everywhere if only we listen. Steam massages its back - what a majestical phrase - super as ever Fay.
November 9th, 2017 06:40
Michael Edwards said:
Just mentioned Solveigs Song on another posting - ah the voice not singing words but just used as an instrument - beauty everywhere if only we listen. Steam massages its back - what a majestical phrase - super as ever Fay.
November 9th, 2017 06:40
Summer\'s Climb.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your \'barren to bounty\' summer poem is outstanding. You keep on surprising the reader with your imagination and choice of words. Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 12:52
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your \'barren to bounty\' summer poem is outstanding. You keep on surprising the reader with your imagination and choice of words. Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 12:52
Summer\'s Climb.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very encouraging \"Ode to Nature\" ! It may be the effect of climate change ~ but even in the \"East Country! (ESSEX etc) Nature has been (almost) as abundant as in the \"West Country\" (CORNWALL ~ DEVON etc.). From Winter to Autumn has been ~ in Essex ~ from Barren to Bounty ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 8th, 2017 12:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very encouraging \"Ode to Nature\" ! It may be the effect of climate change ~ but even in the \"East Country! (ESSEX etc) Nature has been (almost) as abundant as in the \"West Country\" (CORNWALL ~ DEVON etc.). From Winter to Autumn has been ~ in Essex ~ from Barren to Bounty ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 8th, 2017 12:19
Summer\'s Climb.
Louis Gibbs said:
\'\"Nature is bent on survival\" ... love the line! As we all are, as part of nature. An elegant poetic painting here, Fay! So well done.
November 8th, 2017 10:54
Louis Gibbs said:
\'\"Nature is bent on survival\" ... love the line! As we all are, as part of nature. An elegant poetic painting here, Fay! So well done.
November 8th, 2017 10:54
Carrying On.
MendedFences27 said:
Living by the sea, one learns of its might, but making a living on the sea, one feels its might. A struggle for sure, one that is often lost, and courageous men die. Loved your poem that brought it all back to mind. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 19:39
MendedFences27 said:
Living by the sea, one learns of its might, but making a living on the sea, one feels its might. A struggle for sure, one that is often lost, and courageous men die. Loved your poem that brought it all back to mind. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 19:39
Carrying On.
WL Schuett said:
The power and ferocity of the ocean really comes through , very good poem Fay
November 7th, 2017 17:32
WL Schuett said:
The power and ferocity of the ocean really comes through , very good poem Fay
November 7th, 2017 17:32
Carrying On.
FredPeyer said:
We have a saying here in Hawaii: Never turn your back towards the ocean! And your incredible poem tells us why!
November 7th, 2017 12:35
FredPeyer said:
We have a saying here in Hawaii: Never turn your back towards the ocean! And your incredible poem tells us why!
November 7th, 2017 12:35
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