Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Were I.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Unsettled my sleep ... Uneasy my soul ... Unrested my mind\" ... Things you and I share with so many creative types, Fay. This one is simply beautiful and quite touching!
November 24th, 2017 09:25
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Unsettled my sleep ... Uneasy my soul ... Unrested my mind\" ... Things you and I share with so many creative types, Fay. This one is simply beautiful and quite touching!
November 24th, 2017 09:25
Were I.
Michael Edwards said:
Sweet, succinct and one of your best - super work Fay.
November 24th, 2017 06:29
Michael Edwards said:
Sweet, succinct and one of your best - super work Fay.
November 24th, 2017 06:29
Were I.
kevin browne said:
you are such an entices poet that I wish I were in paradise with you. lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 24th, 2017 04:07
kevin browne said:
you are such an entices poet that I wish I were in paradise with you. lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 24th, 2017 04:07
No Words.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Excellent Picture & Awesome Poem ~ Thanks for sharing & caring ! The voice of NATURE is oft more reassuring than the clamour of MAN ! Yours as ever BRIAN
November 23rd, 2017 17:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Excellent Picture & Awesome Poem ~ Thanks for sharing & caring ! The voice of NATURE is oft more reassuring than the clamour of MAN ! Yours as ever BRIAN
November 23rd, 2017 17:59
No Words.
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fay. Made me wonder, if a bird could write poetry, of what he might say. I think he\'d have much in common with you.
November 23rd, 2017 09:06
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fay. Made me wonder, if a bird could write poetry, of what he might say. I think he\'d have much in common with you.
November 23rd, 2017 09:06
No Words.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and a wonderful bird. I have spent hours watching them in the past, they are super to watch.
November 23rd, 2017 06:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and a wonderful bird. I have spent hours watching them in the past, they are super to watch.
November 23rd, 2017 06:32
No Words.
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write Fay. Erm, sometimes \'little birds\' can be awful gossips if the \'speak\'. Oohh heehee.
November 23rd, 2017 06:17
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write Fay. Erm, sometimes \'little birds\' can be awful gossips if the \'speak\'. Oohh heehee.
November 23rd, 2017 06:17
No Words.
kevin browne said:
ah, this is so sweet and nice to read. a lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 23rd, 2017 04:39
kevin browne said:
ah, this is so sweet and nice to read. a lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 23rd, 2017 04:39
The Proof
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love your poem, love the excellent choice of words, the flow, EVERYTHING! And that last stanza is a gem (or maybe a pearl!).
November 22nd, 2017 13:24
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love your poem, love the excellent choice of words, the flow, EVERYTHING! And that last stanza is a gem (or maybe a pearl!).
November 22nd, 2017 13:24
I Am Cloud.
FredPeyer said:
I always viewed clouds as objects, but thanks to you and your very imaginative and beautiful poem, you personalized them for me!
November 22nd, 2017 12:52
FredPeyer said:
I always viewed clouds as objects, but thanks to you and your very imaginative and beautiful poem, you personalized them for me!
November 22nd, 2017 12:52
The Proof
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the creative shape of this fine poem, Fay! So well done, so pleasing to the eye. And of course, your unique use of words is nothing short of masterful!
November 22nd, 2017 09:47
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the creative shape of this fine poem, Fay! So well done, so pleasing to the eye. And of course, your unique use of words is nothing short of masterful!
November 22nd, 2017 09:47
The Proof
Christina8 said:
This is poetic dynamite Fay! I absolutely love this poem! Fantastic job!
November 22nd, 2017 07:36
Christina8 said:
This is poetic dynamite Fay! I absolutely love this poem! Fantastic job!
November 22nd, 2017 07:36
The Proof
Michael Edwards said:
Wish you could buy it in cartons - great work Fay
November 22nd, 2017 06:51
Michael Edwards said:
Wish you could buy it in cartons - great work Fay
November 22nd, 2017 06:51
The Proof
Accidental Poet said:
This write speaks volumes to me Fay. Every word resonates with a love that goes beyond all time. Thank you for writing and posting this great poem. Straight to my favs.
November 22nd, 2017 05:00
Accidental Poet said:
This write speaks volumes to me Fay. Every word resonates with a love that goes beyond all time. Thank you for writing and posting this great poem. Straight to my favs.
November 22nd, 2017 05:00
I Am Cloud.
orchidee said:
I wandered lonely as a cloud.... dunno why I did now, cos I forgot the rest of the poem. heehee! Lovely write Fay.
November 21st, 2017 11:01
orchidee said:
I wandered lonely as a cloud.... dunno why I did now, cos I forgot the rest of the poem. heehee! Lovely write Fay.
November 21st, 2017 11:01
I Am Cloud.
Louis Gibbs said:
In fact, the mind can affect clouds, to a degree. I\'ve seen it done.
Fine tribute to the beauty and power of the cloud, Fay!
November 21st, 2017 10:55
Louis Gibbs said:
In fact, the mind can affect clouds, to a degree. I\'ve seen it done.
Fine tribute to the beauty and power of the cloud, Fay!
November 21st, 2017 10:55
I Am Cloud.
Laura🌻 said:
I’m in awe of this powerful “cloud” as I am of you my dear Poetess Fay! A magnificent write! Your ability to compose a piece of writing is extraordinary! You give it life! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Thank you!
November 21st, 2017 06:52
Laura🌻 said:
I’m in awe of this powerful “cloud” as I am of you my dear Poetess Fay! A magnificent write! Your ability to compose a piece of writing is extraordinary! You give it life! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Thank you!
November 21st, 2017 06:52
I Am Cloud.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"I wandered lonely as a CLOUD !\" Thanks FAY for an awesome coalescence of Poem \'n Pic ! Clouds are awesome in both shape and character and have awesome names like Nimbo-Cumulus and are another aspect of God\'s Blessing and are part of the oft castigated Water Cycle. The Farmer prays for rain and we blame GOD when it rains on our Parade ! Your poem is full of metaphor (and even innuendo !) I love every word of it ~ a great \"Ode to Clouds\" ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ~ Please check my new FUSION on Food & Drink ~ Thanks B.
November 21st, 2017 06:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"I wandered lonely as a CLOUD !\" Thanks FAY for an awesome coalescence of Poem \'n Pic ! Clouds are awesome in both shape and character and have awesome names like Nimbo-Cumulus and are another aspect of God\'s Blessing and are part of the oft castigated Water Cycle. The Farmer prays for rain and we blame GOD when it rains on our Parade ! Your poem is full of metaphor (and even innuendo !) I love every word of it ~ a great \"Ode to Clouds\" ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ~ Please check my new FUSION on Food & Drink ~ Thanks B.
November 21st, 2017 06:25
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