Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Today\'s Poem.
dusk arising said:
You do paint such wonderful pictures for me when reading your words.
So easy to take all of those things you describe for granted everyday. But reading your words, i stop and look, feel the damp mornings atmosphere, hear the sparrow wings, wonder if the rose will still be here tomorrow. Enchanting.
Yes another of your fine pieces into my favourites.
November 10th, 2017 08:04
dusk arising said:
You do paint such wonderful pictures for me when reading your words.
So easy to take all of those things you describe for granted everyday. But reading your words, i stop and look, feel the damp mornings atmosphere, hear the sparrow wings, wonder if the rose will still be here tomorrow. Enchanting.
Yes another of your fine pieces into my favourites.
November 10th, 2017 08:04
Today\'s Poem.
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, I have to agree with Martina that you very well might be the re-incarnation of some great poet from another time. Your words flow like a beautiful waterfall. Thanks for sharing your gifts.
November 10th, 2017 05:03
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, I have to agree with Martina that you very well might be the re-incarnation of some great poet from another time. Your words flow like a beautiful waterfall. Thanks for sharing your gifts.
November 10th, 2017 05:03
Today\'s Poem.
Lauraš» said:
Your pen is magical Fay...
and a beautiful poem you
did write! Your descriptive
words of natureās beauty
paint a glorious morning!
What a delight!
November 10th, 2017 04:51
Lauraš» said:
Your pen is magical Fay...
and a beautiful poem you
did write! Your descriptive
words of natureās beauty
paint a glorious morning!
What a delight!
November 10th, 2017 04:51
Wordless.
lasergraph said:
Nature\'s symphony for our ear,
If we just open up to hear. I could hear the music. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:56
lasergraph said:
Nature\'s symphony for our ear,
If we just open up to hear. I could hear the music. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:56
Wordless.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you describe the beauty of stillness so incredibly well. Stillness filled with unheard sounds of music. Your writing is exquisite!
November 9th, 2017 14:07
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you describe the beauty of stillness so incredibly well. Stillness filled with unheard sounds of music. Your writing is exquisite!
November 9th, 2017 14:07
Wordless.
orchidee said:
Lovely write Fay. It\'s a pity - I tried to join a cat in its singing / mewing. But it was terrified and dashed off quick! Well, it would, cos it heard me sing and thought there was cat-fight somewhere. heehee.
November 9th, 2017 11:11
orchidee said:
Lovely write Fay. It\'s a pity - I tried to join a cat in its singing / mewing. But it was terrified and dashed off quick! Well, it would, cos it heard me sing and thought there was cat-fight somewhere. heehee.
November 9th, 2017 11:11
Wordless.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Speechless contact\", doesn\'t that describe what poetry is? And the poetry of nature as well. as you so finely portray. A beautiful, mind-stimulating poem, Fay!
November 9th, 2017 10:25
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Speechless contact\", doesn\'t that describe what poetry is? And the poetry of nature as well. as you so finely portray. A beautiful, mind-stimulating poem, Fay!
November 9th, 2017 10:25
Wordless.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again FAY for a pictorial poetic Gem ~ straight form you loving heart. The sounds of NATURE are more profound than mere words ~ they are evocative and evoke individual sensations and memories in our hearts and minds in a language we can all understand ! The voice of Nature is never silent and normally has great strength to soothe the troubled soul ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN \"Nature Boy\"
November 9th, 2017 09:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again FAY for a pictorial poetic Gem ~ straight form you loving heart. The sounds of NATURE are more profound than mere words ~ they are evocative and evoke individual sensations and memories in our hearts and minds in a language we can all understand ! The voice of Nature is never silent and normally has great strength to soothe the troubled soul ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN \"Nature Boy\"
November 9th, 2017 09:24
Wordless.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem, natureās symphony is glorious, even in its silence.
November 9th, 2017 09:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem, natureās symphony is glorious, even in its silence.
November 9th, 2017 09:11
Wordless.
myself and me said:
Yes, the harmony and the peace in nature are the best music on earth.
November 9th, 2017 08:47
myself and me said:
Yes, the harmony and the peace in nature are the best music on earth.
November 9th, 2017 08:47
Wordless.
Christina8 said:
You effortlessly describe the music of the earth n this poem in only the way that you can. So beautifully captured! Wonderful!
November 9th, 2017 07:35
Christina8 said:
You effortlessly describe the music of the earth n this poem in only the way that you can. So beautifully captured! Wonderful!
November 9th, 2017 07:35
Wordless.
Michael Edwards said:
Just mentioned Solveigs Song on another posting - ah the voice not singing words but just used as an instrument - beauty everywhere if only we listen. Steam massages its back - what a majestical phrase - super as ever Fay.
November 9th, 2017 06:40
Michael Edwards said:
Just mentioned Solveigs Song on another posting - ah the voice not singing words but just used as an instrument - beauty everywhere if only we listen. Steam massages its back - what a majestical phrase - super as ever Fay.
November 9th, 2017 06:40
Wordless.
Accidental Poet said:
The music of the Earth\'s heart. So beautiful Fay.
November 9th, 2017 04:49
Accidental Poet said:
The music of the Earth\'s heart. So beautiful Fay.
November 9th, 2017 04:49
Summer\'s Climb.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your \'barren to bounty\' summer poem is outstanding. You keep on surprising the reader with your imagination and choice of words. Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 12:52
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your \'barren to bounty\' summer poem is outstanding. You keep on surprising the reader with your imagination and choice of words. Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 12:52
Summer\'s Climb.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very encouraging \"Ode to Nature\" ! It may be the effect of climate change ~ but even in the \"East Country! (ESSEX etc) Nature has been (almost) as abundant as in the \"West Country\" (CORNWALL ~ DEVON etc.). From Winter to Autumn has been ~ in Essex ~ from Barren to Bounty ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 8th, 2017 12:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very encouraging \"Ode to Nature\" ! It may be the effect of climate change ~ but even in the \"East Country! (ESSEX etc) Nature has been (almost) as abundant as in the \"West Country\" (CORNWALL ~ DEVON etc.). From Winter to Autumn has been ~ in Essex ~ from Barren to Bounty ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 8th, 2017 12:19
Summer\'s Climb.
Louis Gibbs said:
\'\"Nature is bent on survival\" ... love the line! As we all are, as part of nature. An elegant poetic painting here, Fay! So well done.
November 8th, 2017 10:54
Louis Gibbs said:
\'\"Nature is bent on survival\" ... love the line! As we all are, as part of nature. An elegant poetic painting here, Fay! So well done.
November 8th, 2017 10:54
Carrying On.
MendedFences27 said:
Living by the sea, one learns of its might, but making a living on the sea, one feels its might. A struggle for sure, one that is often lost, and courageous men die. Loved your poem that brought it all back to mind. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 19:39
MendedFences27 said:
Living by the sea, one learns of its might, but making a living on the sea, one feels its might. A struggle for sure, one that is often lost, and courageous men die. Loved your poem that brought it all back to mind. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 19:39
Carrying On.
WL Schuett said:
The power and ferocity of the ocean really comes through , very good poem Fay
November 7th, 2017 17:32
WL Schuett said:
The power and ferocity of the ocean really comes through , very good poem Fay
November 7th, 2017 17:32
Carrying On.
FredPeyer said:
We have a saying here in Hawaii: Never turn your back towards the ocean! And your incredible poem tells us why!
November 7th, 2017 12:35
FredPeyer said:
We have a saying here in Hawaii: Never turn your back towards the ocean! And your incredible poem tells us why!
November 7th, 2017 12:35
Carrying On.
myself and me said:
I always admire the courage of those fishermen. Beautiful writing.
November 7th, 2017 11:39
myself and me said:
I always admire the courage of those fishermen. Beautiful writing.
November 7th, 2017 11:39
Carrying On.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI FAY ~ Another GEM in both Picture and Poetry ~ I could feel the spray and taste the salt. I have already sent you WHITE ROSES to thank you for the elegance of your Poems an\' Pics and now I know why ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours for ever BRIAN
November 7th, 2017 10:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI FAY ~ Another GEM in both Picture and Poetry ~ I could feel the spray and taste the salt. I have already sent you WHITE ROSES to thank you for the elegance of your Poems an\' Pics and now I know why ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours for ever BRIAN
November 7th, 2017 10:47
New Depths.
dusk arising said:
Your ability to find words which reach into our very soul and tingle the deepest emotions is astounding here. Where there are no words to describe the vastness, as you state, your words find a place which stirs within us the wonderful things we, who have loved, have felt. Belongs in my favourites.
November 6th, 2017 18:36
dusk arising said:
Your ability to find words which reach into our very soul and tingle the deepest emotions is astounding here. Where there are no words to describe the vastness, as you state, your words find a place which stirs within us the wonderful things we, who have loved, have felt. Belongs in my favourites.
November 6th, 2017 18:36
New Depths.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Perfect visual ~ Precious poem ! In my experience (as in yours) the Dimensions of Love are INFINITE ! The more I delve into the Depths of God\'s Love ~ and Human love with ANGELA ~ the more I appreciate its INFINITY ~ AMEN ~ Yours for ever ~ BRIAN
November 6th, 2017 18:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Perfect visual ~ Precious poem ! In my experience (as in yours) the Dimensions of Love are INFINITE ! The more I delve into the Depths of God\'s Love ~ and Human love with ANGELA ~ the more I appreciate its INFINITY ~ AMEN ~ Yours for ever ~ BRIAN
November 6th, 2017 18:32
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