Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Shore-Songs.
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite poem, so finely presented in precise form! This is truly a beauty in all aspects, Fay!
October 24th, 2017 09:57
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite poem, so finely presented in precise form! This is truly a beauty in all aspects, Fay!
October 24th, 2017 09:57
Shore-Songs.
Goldfinch60 said:
I was starting to get soaked as this poem washed over me, great write.
October 24th, 2017 08:04
Goldfinch60 said:
I was starting to get soaked as this poem washed over me, great write.
October 24th, 2017 08:04
Shore-Songs.
WL Schuett said:
The crashing waves of this poem roll all over me ....😎🌊
October 24th, 2017 07:51
WL Schuett said:
The crashing waves of this poem roll all over me ....😎🌊
October 24th, 2017 07:51
Shore-Songs.
Laura🌻 said:
Great write, Fay!
It brings the coast to life.
I could almost see, feel and smell the
wonders of that coastline! I’ve never lived
near one...only vacationed
near one once in a while!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 05:37
Laura🌻 said:
Great write, Fay!
It brings the coast to life.
I could almost see, feel and smell the
wonders of that coastline! I’ve never lived
near one...only vacationed
near one once in a while!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 05:37
Oiled with Love.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
As everyone has said...a beautiful write!
I still remember that unhinged feeling when that key unlocked that door!
The feelings are still all there!
Like the pic you chose for your perfect poem!
~Laura)
October 24th, 2017 03:27
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
As everyone has said...a beautiful write!
I still remember that unhinged feeling when that key unlocked that door!
The feelings are still all there!
Like the pic you chose for your perfect poem!
~Laura)
October 24th, 2017 03:27
Shore-Songs.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING CORNWALL ! Hi FAY ~ love the North Cornish Coast ~ TINTAGEL ~ real rocks ~ real breakers ~ I could taste the SALT ! Thanks for sharing ~ Coastal Hugs ~ BRIAN
October 24th, 2017 03:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING CORNWALL ! Hi FAY ~ love the North Cornish Coast ~ TINTAGEL ~ real rocks ~ real breakers ~ I could taste the SALT ! Thanks for sharing ~ Coastal Hugs ~ BRIAN
October 24th, 2017 03:26
Oiled with Love.
Louis Gibbs said:
Another fine ode to lost love, Fay, as only you can pen them!
October 23rd, 2017 16:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Another fine ode to lost love, Fay, as only you can pen them!
October 23rd, 2017 16:19
Oiled with Love.
lasergraph said:
A fine write, and a lock without a key is lonely indeed.
October 23rd, 2017 14:58
lasergraph said:
A fine write, and a lock without a key is lonely indeed.
October 23rd, 2017 14:58
Love\'s Wand.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. A bit of \'thinking deeper\' won\'t hurt us! But maybe not over-doing it, or we\'ll get a headache. Well, I will, so I say! lol.
October 22nd, 2017 06:04
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. A bit of \'thinking deeper\' won\'t hurt us! But maybe not over-doing it, or we\'ll get a headache. Well, I will, so I say! lol.
October 22nd, 2017 06:04
Love\'s Wand.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay.
Beautiful message
for this Sunday morning!
A lot to think about.
I do a lot of it these days
while sitting and reading
bible verses to my mom!
She is mentally lost
without my dad.
Since she cannot read
her favorite book any longer,
she asks me to do it!
It consoles her! So be it!
Thank you for your beautiful message!
~Laura~
October 22nd, 2017 05:44
Laura🌻 said:
Fay.
Beautiful message
for this Sunday morning!
A lot to think about.
I do a lot of it these days
while sitting and reading
bible verses to my mom!
She is mentally lost
without my dad.
Since she cannot read
her favorite book any longer,
she asks me to do it!
It consoles her! So be it!
Thank you for your beautiful message!
~Laura~
October 22nd, 2017 05:44
Love\'s Wand.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ~ a very salutary message for Sunday Morning ! We all need to be more CALM & ENLIGHTENED ! I achieve it by focussing on God and the Spiritual Dimension ~ especially on a Sunday ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
October 22nd, 2017 03:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ~ a very salutary message for Sunday Morning ! We all need to be more CALM & ENLIGHTENED ! I achieve it by focussing on God and the Spiritual Dimension ~ especially on a Sunday ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
October 22nd, 2017 03:37
Ethereal Music.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was drawn into the beauty of its words, I too was entranced.
October 22nd, 2017 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, I was drawn into the beauty of its words, I too was entranced.
October 22nd, 2017 00:27
Ethereal Music.
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know what to say that hasn\'t been said. It\'s simply a magnificent poem!! You have an uncanny way with words. Just beautiful!
October 21st, 2017 10:56
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know what to say that hasn\'t been said. It\'s simply a magnificent poem!! You have an uncanny way with words. Just beautiful!
October 21st, 2017 10:56
Ethereal Music.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful lyrical write as ever - well done Fay
October 21st, 2017 10:04
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful lyrical write as ever - well done Fay
October 21st, 2017 10:04
Ethereal Music.
orchidee said:
All that wonderful stuff to see on a moonlit night!
October 21st, 2017 08:26
orchidee said:
All that wonderful stuff to see on a moonlit night!
October 21st, 2017 08:26
Ethereal Music.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
You are truly a poetess in every sense of the word! Your choice of words are enchanting! AP said it best in describing your poem! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this charismatic piece of poetry!
October 21st, 2017 06:31
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
You are truly a poetess in every sense of the word! Your choice of words are enchanting! AP said it best in describing your poem! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this charismatic piece of poetry!
October 21st, 2017 06:31
Captured.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for an enigmatic Poem ~ sharing four aspects of the WIND ! The WIND is BLIND and unwittingly hinders Bird Migration ~ The WIND is DESTRUCTIVE - eroding coastlines and scaring Sailors ~ The WIND is SOLITARY and its solitary power can destroy Buildings ~ BUT ~ The WIND can be CAPTURED (and Tamed) to turn the Sails of a Windmill (to grind corn) (and modern Wind Turbines to produce Electricity !) ~ Awesome ! Thanks for Sharing ~ Your forever Friend ~ BRIAN
October 20th, 2017 19:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for an enigmatic Poem ~ sharing four aspects of the WIND ! The WIND is BLIND and unwittingly hinders Bird Migration ~ The WIND is DESTRUCTIVE - eroding coastlines and scaring Sailors ~ The WIND is SOLITARY and its solitary power can destroy Buildings ~ BUT ~ The WIND can be CAPTURED (and Tamed) to turn the Sails of a Windmill (to grind corn) (and modern Wind Turbines to produce Electricity !) ~ Awesome ! Thanks for Sharing ~ Your forever Friend ~ BRIAN
October 20th, 2017 19:04
Captured.
Christina8 said:
A great write Fay. Love the way you captured the beauty of the wind but also how you made the shapes out of your poem. I enjoyed the last stanza very much--I hadn\'t thought of how the wind does know capture.
October 20th, 2017 16:17
Christina8 said:
A great write Fay. Love the way you captured the beauty of the wind but also how you made the shapes out of your poem. I enjoyed the last stanza very much--I hadn\'t thought of how the wind does know capture.
October 20th, 2017 16:17
Captured.
MendedFences27 said:
Caught and captured, to be turned into useful energy, by boat sails, by mill\'s for grinding, or by today\'s turbines to produce electricity. The wind is an ever present force of Nature, which can be good or evil. More and more it is becoming stronger, destructive, and all the while Man cannot seem to grasp the enormity of her resource.
A great write Fay. Loved it. -Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 14:06
MendedFences27 said:
Caught and captured, to be turned into useful energy, by boat sails, by mill\'s for grinding, or by today\'s turbines to produce electricity. The wind is an ever present force of Nature, which can be good or evil. More and more it is becoming stronger, destructive, and all the while Man cannot seem to grasp the enormity of her resource.
A great write Fay. Loved it. -Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 14:06
Captured.
Michael Edwards said:
Great one Fay - I know only too well the ravages of wind...!!
October 20th, 2017 11:34
Michael Edwards said:
Great one Fay - I know only too well the ravages of wind...!!
October 20th, 2017 11:34
By Scribes
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a lovely piece fay,love the thought of a guiding spirit giving you inspiration
October 20th, 2017 11:32
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a lovely piece fay,love the thought of a guiding spirit giving you inspiration
October 20th, 2017 11:32
Captured.
Louis Gibbs said:
I appreciate this fine poem, Fay, and the shape of it is quite pleasing. Well done, again!
October 20th, 2017 09:04
Louis Gibbs said:
I appreciate this fine poem, Fay, and the shape of it is quite pleasing. Well done, again!
October 20th, 2017 09:04
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