Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
The Proof
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the creative shape of this fine poem, Fay! So well done, so pleasing to the eye. And of course, your unique use of words is nothing short of masterful!
November 22nd, 2017 09:47
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the creative shape of this fine poem, Fay! So well done, so pleasing to the eye. And of course, your unique use of words is nothing short of masterful!
November 22nd, 2017 09:47
The Proof
Christina8 said:
This is poetic dynamite Fay! I absolutely love this poem! Fantastic job!
November 22nd, 2017 07:36
Christina8 said:
This is poetic dynamite Fay! I absolutely love this poem! Fantastic job!
November 22nd, 2017 07:36
The Proof
Michael Edwards said:
Wish you could buy it in cartons - great work Fay
November 22nd, 2017 06:51
Michael Edwards said:
Wish you could buy it in cartons - great work Fay
November 22nd, 2017 06:51
I Am Cloud.
orchidee said:
I wandered lonely as a cloud.... dunno why I did now, cos I forgot the rest of the poem. heehee! Lovely write Fay.
November 21st, 2017 11:01
orchidee said:
I wandered lonely as a cloud.... dunno why I did now, cos I forgot the rest of the poem. heehee! Lovely write Fay.
November 21st, 2017 11:01
I Am Cloud.
Louis Gibbs said:
In fact, the mind can affect clouds, to a degree. I\'ve seen it done.
Fine tribute to the beauty and power of the cloud, Fay!
November 21st, 2017 10:55
Louis Gibbs said:
In fact, the mind can affect clouds, to a degree. I\'ve seen it done.
Fine tribute to the beauty and power of the cloud, Fay!
November 21st, 2017 10:55
I Am Cloud.
Lauraš» said:
Iām in awe of this powerful ācloudā as I am of you my dear Poetess Fay! A magnificent write! Your ability to compose a piece of writing is extraordinary! You give it life! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Thank you!
November 21st, 2017 06:52
Lauraš» said:
Iām in awe of this powerful ācloudā as I am of you my dear Poetess Fay! A magnificent write! Your ability to compose a piece of writing is extraordinary! You give it life! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Thank you!
November 21st, 2017 06:52
I Am Cloud.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"I wandered lonely as a CLOUD !\" Thanks FAY for an awesome coalescence of Poem \'n Pic ! Clouds are awesome in both shape and character and have awesome names like Nimbo-Cumulus and are another aspect of God\'s Blessing and are part of the oft castigated Water Cycle. The Farmer prays for rain and we blame GOD when it rains on our Parade ! Your poem is full of metaphor (and even innuendo !) I love every word of it ~ a great \"Ode to Clouds\" ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ~ Please check my new FUSION on Food & Drink ~ Thanks B.
November 21st, 2017 06:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"I wandered lonely as a CLOUD !\" Thanks FAY for an awesome coalescence of Poem \'n Pic ! Clouds are awesome in both shape and character and have awesome names like Nimbo-Cumulus and are another aspect of God\'s Blessing and are part of the oft castigated Water Cycle. The Farmer prays for rain and we blame GOD when it rains on our Parade ! Your poem is full of metaphor (and even innuendo !) I love every word of it ~ a great \"Ode to Clouds\" ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ~ Please check my new FUSION on Food & Drink ~ Thanks B.
November 21st, 2017 06:25
I Am Cloud.
kevin browne said:
indeed, a very weathering poem, let\'s hope more sun shines through your cloud. I love this work, Fay, very imaginative writing.
November 21st, 2017 05:04
kevin browne said:
indeed, a very weathering poem, let\'s hope more sun shines through your cloud. I love this work, Fay, very imaginative writing.
November 21st, 2017 05:04
Caught.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ First let me say ~ I love your new PHOTO ~ very attractive ~ looks like a Lady ready to party @ CHRISTMAS ! I love the simplicity (and the awesomeness) of BUBBLES ~ so elegant and yet so fragile (like some Ladies I know !) Reflections in Bubbles are always ethereal and of course the disappear when \"The Bubble bursts\" just like in real life ! All the KIDS I know (in my Extended Family & at Church) love Bubbles and I always give them those bubble making kits which keeps them amused for hours ! Thanks for sharing ~ when I read you poem ~ I blew some Bubbles of my own ~ I\'m just a kid at heart ~ Bubble Hugs ~ BRIAN OOOOOOO (A Bubble for each day !)
November 20th, 2017 18:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ First let me say ~ I love your new PHOTO ~ very attractive ~ looks like a Lady ready to party @ CHRISTMAS ! I love the simplicity (and the awesomeness) of BUBBLES ~ so elegant and yet so fragile (like some Ladies I know !) Reflections in Bubbles are always ethereal and of course the disappear when \"The Bubble bursts\" just like in real life ! All the KIDS I know (in my Extended Family & at Church) love Bubbles and I always give them those bubble making kits which keeps them amused for hours ! Thanks for sharing ~ when I read you poem ~ I blew some Bubbles of my own ~ I\'m just a kid at heart ~ Bubble Hugs ~ BRIAN OOOOOOO (A Bubble for each day !)
November 20th, 2017 18:34
Fervour.
FredPeyer said:
And that \'emotional fire\' in you keeps on burning very brightly!
November 20th, 2017 17:18
FredPeyer said:
And that \'emotional fire\' in you keeps on burning very brightly!
November 20th, 2017 17:18
Fervour.
myself and me said:
Great, just great. no matter what subject your pen touched.
November 20th, 2017 10:28
myself and me said:
Great, just great. no matter what subject your pen touched.
November 20th, 2017 10:28
I Saw Him.
myself and me said:
You describe the experience in such a tremendous way.
November 20th, 2017 10:03
myself and me said:
You describe the experience in such a tremendous way.
November 20th, 2017 10:03
Caught.
Louis Gibbs said:
Enchanting and well presented, Fay! Brings back childhood memories of awe at new experiences.
November 20th, 2017 09:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Enchanting and well presented, Fay! Brings back childhood memories of awe at new experiences.
November 20th, 2017 09:45
Caught.
kevin browne said:
you caught me and I fell straight into your bubble. great wording, Fay Slimm.
November 20th, 2017 04:18
kevin browne said:
you caught me and I fell straight into your bubble. great wording, Fay Slimm.
November 20th, 2017 04:18
Caught.
dusk arising said:
Yes you\'re right, they are awesome structures. I haven\'t seen any for quite some time. Your fine words evoke a memory, thank you.
November 20th, 2017 04:11
dusk arising said:
Yes you\'re right, they are awesome structures. I haven\'t seen any for quite some time. Your fine words evoke a memory, thank you.
November 20th, 2017 04:11
Caught.
Michael Edwards said:
The use of language can only come from the magic which enchants - love it Fay.
November 20th, 2017 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
The use of language can only come from the magic which enchants - love it Fay.
November 20th, 2017 04:04
Fervour.
Lauraš» said:
A great read, Fay!
Enjoyed it very much!
Beautiful painting to accompany your great poem! Delightful dear Poetess!
November 19th, 2017 21:00
Lauraš» said:
A great read, Fay!
Enjoyed it very much!
Beautiful painting to accompany your great poem! Delightful dear Poetess!
November 19th, 2017 21:00
Fervour.
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Made me think!
November 19th, 2017 15:20
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Made me think!
November 19th, 2017 15:20
Fervour.
dusk arising said:
Yeay tho i didst first see etchings of my forebears which didst portray the beauty within, images carved in bloody awe, upon their cave dwelling walls. Twas empathy for their passionate expression, inner emotional turmoil. To spear the beauty and tear its flesh for sustenance. Something within cries out.
Great fun to read \'olde worlde\' stuff.
November 19th, 2017 13:29
dusk arising said:
Yeay tho i didst first see etchings of my forebears which didst portray the beauty within, images carved in bloody awe, upon their cave dwelling walls. Twas empathy for their passionate expression, inner emotional turmoil. To spear the beauty and tear its flesh for sustenance. Something within cries out.
Great fun to read \'olde worlde\' stuff.
November 19th, 2017 13:29
Fervour.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The moving hand doth write ~ and having writ moves on ~ because the MUSE ~ MOVED !
Just occasionally ~ when I read back a poem ~ I HAVE WRITTEN ~ I am amazed and put it down to \"The long~licked bones which actually maketh the sake of the poem !\" Sometimes the elegance of the resultant ODE is confirmed by comment by equally elegant Poets ~ such as yourself ! Because of the way MPS is organised each of our Poems only gets a 24 hour window so anything in excess of 5 comments is a bonus ! The oft castigated FUSION POEM has a much longer shelf life ! Mine on DRINK ~ unsurprisingly has 20 poems (MAX + 5) and comments ! The opportunity to comment is one of the many Blessings of MPS and ~ thank GOD ~ our fellow commentators are on the whole very gracious ! I love the nostalgia and pensiveness in the painting of my Maternal Great~granny ~ Yours graciously BRIAN.
November 19th, 2017 04:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The moving hand doth write ~ and having writ moves on ~ because the MUSE ~ MOVED !
Just occasionally ~ when I read back a poem ~ I HAVE WRITTEN ~ I am amazed and put it down to \"The long~licked bones which actually maketh the sake of the poem !\" Sometimes the elegance of the resultant ODE is confirmed by comment by equally elegant Poets ~ such as yourself ! Because of the way MPS is organised each of our Poems only gets a 24 hour window so anything in excess of 5 comments is a bonus ! The oft castigated FUSION POEM has a much longer shelf life ! Mine on DRINK ~ unsurprisingly has 20 poems (MAX + 5) and comments ! The opportunity to comment is one of the many Blessings of MPS and ~ thank GOD ~ our fellow commentators are on the whole very gracious ! I love the nostalgia and pensiveness in the painting of my Maternal Great~granny ~ Yours graciously BRIAN.
November 19th, 2017 04:03
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