Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Sound-Encounter.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY for a beautifully sculptures Sound Poem in five honed verses ! It is a Seasonal poem and focusses on the season of migration ! As Humans ~ once we \"put down our roots \" we stay put ~ some of my 70+ Friends still live in the house they were born in ! Verses two & three capture some of the agony and ecstasy of Bird Migration and many die in the process ! In verse four you celebrate ~ the stability of sheep ! Also our non-migratory birds ! In verse five you celebrate the Birds return ! Thanks for caring FAY and thanks for sharing ~ You are a great blessing to all MPS Members and you always pen a masterpiece ! I could HEAR the Picture and the Poem ! Yours as ever BRIAN
December 10th, 2017 16:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY for a beautifully sculptures Sound Poem in five honed verses ! It is a Seasonal poem and focusses on the season of migration ! As Humans ~ once we \"put down our roots \" we stay put ~ some of my 70+ Friends still live in the house they were born in ! Verses two & three capture some of the agony and ecstasy of Bird Migration and many die in the process ! In verse four you celebrate ~ the stability of sheep ! Also our non-migratory birds ! In verse five you celebrate the Birds return ! Thanks for caring FAY and thanks for sharing ~ You are a great blessing to all MPS Members and you always pen a masterpiece ! I could HEAR the Picture and the Poem ! Yours as ever BRIAN
December 10th, 2017 16:12
Sound-Encounter.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I agree with Michael wholeheartedly.
December 10th, 2017 10:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I agree with Michael wholeheartedly.
December 10th, 2017 10:42
Sound-Encounter.
WL Schuett said:
A vivid write , your poems are always so well written, good write Fay !
December 10th, 2017 07:45
WL Schuett said:
A vivid write , your poems are always so well written, good write Fay !
December 10th, 2017 07:45
Sound-Encounter.
Michael Edwards said:
A great read for a Sunday in - who wants to venture out with so much snow - a glass of something and good poetry to read.
December 10th, 2017 07:17
Michael Edwards said:
A great read for a Sunday in - who wants to venture out with so much snow - a glass of something and good poetry to read.
December 10th, 2017 07:17
Boisterous.
FredPeyer said:
Watching the waves crash on the beach is magical and awesome. Your poem is the same, Fay! So well written, it leaves lasting impressions on the mind of the reader.
December 9th, 2017 13:16
FredPeyer said:
Watching the waves crash on the beach is magical and awesome. Your poem is the same, Fay! So well written, it leaves lasting impressions on the mind of the reader.
December 9th, 2017 13:16
Boisterous.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
fay,you always paint such lovely images with your words
December 9th, 2017 00:56
ron parrish aka wordman said:
fay,you always paint such lovely images with your words
December 9th, 2017 00:56
Boisterous.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ~ I have experienced you Poem on holiday in Tintagel (Cornwall) and it is awesome ~ just as you describe it ~ Beautiful Poem \'n Pic ~ Yours BRIAN
December 8th, 2017 18:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ~ I have experienced you Poem on holiday in Tintagel (Cornwall) and it is awesome ~ just as you describe it ~ Beautiful Poem \'n Pic ~ Yours BRIAN
December 8th, 2017 18:57
Boisterous.
myself and me said:
You describe the boisterous moment of the sea so powerful and beautiful.
December 8th, 2017 10:03
myself and me said:
You describe the boisterous moment of the sea so powerful and beautiful.
December 8th, 2017 10:03
Boisterous.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
Super write! The metaphors
create an imagery as explosive as that
unloading ocean!
Worth reading many times!
Brilliant!
December 8th, 2017 07:38
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
Super write! The metaphors
create an imagery as explosive as that
unloading ocean!
Worth reading many times!
Brilliant!
December 8th, 2017 07:38
Seduction.
Goldfinch60 said:
The entrapment worked Fay, is there anyway out. Good write.
December 8th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
The entrapment worked Fay, is there anyway out. Good write.
December 8th, 2017 01:13
Seduction.
FredPeyer said:
Even if I wanted to, I could not escape your incredible writing, Fay!
December 7th, 2017 20:06
FredPeyer said:
Even if I wanted to, I could not escape your incredible writing, Fay!
December 7th, 2017 20:06
Decisive.
FredPeyer said:
There is something magical about dusk and the onset of night and you captured that magic perfectly in this incredible poem.
December 7th, 2017 19:41
FredPeyer said:
There is something magical about dusk and the onset of night and you captured that magic perfectly in this incredible poem.
December 7th, 2017 19:41
Seduction.
MendedFences27 said:
The call of the siren, not to be taken lightly, but with extreme caution, for escape may not be possible. Oh, but to die a thousand deaths. To die in the fire of passion, is to live again. Sultry and sweet, a delicious poem. - Phil A.
December 7th, 2017 17:20
MendedFences27 said:
The call of the siren, not to be taken lightly, but with extreme caution, for escape may not be possible. Oh, but to die a thousand deaths. To die in the fire of passion, is to live again. Sultry and sweet, a delicious poem. - Phil A.
December 7th, 2017 17:20
Seduction.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ Love this cheeky poem and cheeky visual ~ a real libido raiser ! Love the invitation to UNCAP & TAP ~ BUT ~ I know I would never ESCAPE and what would ANGELA do then ~ poor thing ! Love you even more when you are being frivolous ! Yours as ever BRIAN XOX
December 7th, 2017 10:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ Love this cheeky poem and cheeky visual ~ a real libido raiser ! Love the invitation to UNCAP & TAP ~ BUT ~ I know I would never ESCAPE and what would ANGELA do then ~ poor thing ! Love you even more when you are being frivolous ! Yours as ever BRIAN XOX
December 7th, 2017 10:27
Seduction.
Louis Gibbs said:
A punctuated poem ... what an interesting departure for you, Fay! It is fun to experiment with these different forms, isn\'t it. I enjoyed this amusing one!
December 7th, 2017 08:10
Louis Gibbs said:
A punctuated poem ... what an interesting departure for you, Fay! It is fun to experiment with these different forms, isn\'t it. I enjoyed this amusing one!
December 7th, 2017 08:10
Decisive.
Michael Edwards said:
Or as my grandson once said: \'time to put the dark light on\'. Super write Fay.
December 6th, 2017 11:24
Michael Edwards said:
Or as my grandson once said: \'time to put the dark light on\'. Super write Fay.
December 6th, 2017 11:24
Decisive.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I\'m pleased to be back and have the opportunity to unlock the meaning(s) in your latest poem ! In my experience Night has always followed Day (except once when I was in the North Cape on 21st June ~ The SUN almost set ~ and then came back up again ~ awesome !). Each ~ sentence commencing word has a different connotation of night fall ! DARK ~ does indeed descend (erupt) fast (too fast sometimes ?) ~ DUSK ~ certainly enfolds ! and NIGHT surely creeps ~ shuts out the LIGHT ~ and then ~ shuts in the DARK ! A perfect description form a very observant POET ! Love the Cornish Sunset ~ a perfect complimentary visual ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 11:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I\'m pleased to be back and have the opportunity to unlock the meaning(s) in your latest poem ! In my experience Night has always followed Day (except once when I was in the North Cape on 21st June ~ The SUN almost set ~ and then came back up again ~ awesome !). Each ~ sentence commencing word has a different connotation of night fall ! DARK ~ does indeed descend (erupt) fast (too fast sometimes ?) ~ DUSK ~ certainly enfolds ! and NIGHT surely creeps ~ shuts out the LIGHT ~ and then ~ shuts in the DARK ! A perfect description form a very observant POET ! Love the Cornish Sunset ~ a perfect complimentary visual ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 11:17
Decisive.
orchidee said:
Erm, ahh, perhaps, maybe,....now come on Orchi, be \'decisive\' and comment on a further good write!
December 6th, 2017 11:11
orchidee said:
Erm, ahh, perhaps, maybe,....now come on Orchi, be \'decisive\' and comment on a further good write!
December 6th, 2017 11:11
Decisive.
Louis Gibbs said:
As my young grandson would put it, \"Dark came\", as though it were an entity unto itself rather than the absence of light. Good write on this dark subject, Fay!
December 6th, 2017 08:33
Louis Gibbs said:
As my young grandson would put it, \"Dark came\", as though it were an entity unto itself rather than the absence of light. Good write on this dark subject, Fay!
December 6th, 2017 08:33
Do You ?
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay! \'Blackbird has spoken\' as the hymn says. Well, I dunno. I\'ve not heard a talking blackbird, but if I did, it\'s better than me singing! heehee. I heard a chirping one!
December 5th, 2017 10:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay! \'Blackbird has spoken\' as the hymn says. Well, I dunno. I\'ve not heard a talking blackbird, but if I did, it\'s better than me singing! heehee. I heard a chirping one!
December 5th, 2017 10:09
Do You ?
Accidental Poet said:
Yet again you\'ve danced into my favorites Fay.
December 5th, 2017 05:06
Accidental Poet said:
Yet again you\'ve danced into my favorites Fay.
December 5th, 2017 05:06
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