Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Ethereal Music.
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know what to say that hasn\'t been said. It\'s simply a magnificent poem!! You have an uncanny way with words. Just beautiful!
October 21st, 2017 10:56
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know what to say that hasn\'t been said. It\'s simply a magnificent poem!! You have an uncanny way with words. Just beautiful!
October 21st, 2017 10:56
Ethereal Music.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful lyrical write as ever - well done Fay
October 21st, 2017 10:04
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful lyrical write as ever - well done Fay
October 21st, 2017 10:04
Ethereal Music.
orchidee said:
All that wonderful stuff to see on a moonlit night!
October 21st, 2017 08:26
orchidee said:
All that wonderful stuff to see on a moonlit night!
October 21st, 2017 08:26
Ethereal Music.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
You are truly a poetess in every sense of the word! Your choice of words are enchanting! AP said it best in describing your poem! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this charismatic piece of poetry!
October 21st, 2017 06:31
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
You are truly a poetess in every sense of the word! Your choice of words are enchanting! AP said it best in describing your poem! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this charismatic piece of poetry!
October 21st, 2017 06:31
Captured.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for an enigmatic Poem ~ sharing four aspects of the WIND ! The WIND is BLIND and unwittingly hinders Bird Migration ~ The WIND is DESTRUCTIVE - eroding coastlines and scaring Sailors ~ The WIND is SOLITARY and its solitary power can destroy Buildings ~ BUT ~ The WIND can be CAPTURED (and Tamed) to turn the Sails of a Windmill (to grind corn) (and modern Wind Turbines to produce Electricity !) ~ Awesome ! Thanks for Sharing ~ Your forever Friend ~ BRIAN
October 20th, 2017 19:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for an enigmatic Poem ~ sharing four aspects of the WIND ! The WIND is BLIND and unwittingly hinders Bird Migration ~ The WIND is DESTRUCTIVE - eroding coastlines and scaring Sailors ~ The WIND is SOLITARY and its solitary power can destroy Buildings ~ BUT ~ The WIND can be CAPTURED (and Tamed) to turn the Sails of a Windmill (to grind corn) (and modern Wind Turbines to produce Electricity !) ~ Awesome ! Thanks for Sharing ~ Your forever Friend ~ BRIAN
October 20th, 2017 19:04
Captured.
Christina8 said:
A great write Fay. Love the way you captured the beauty of the wind but also how you made the shapes out of your poem. I enjoyed the last stanza very much--I hadn\'t thought of how the wind does know capture.
October 20th, 2017 16:17
Christina8 said:
A great write Fay. Love the way you captured the beauty of the wind but also how you made the shapes out of your poem. I enjoyed the last stanza very much--I hadn\'t thought of how the wind does know capture.
October 20th, 2017 16:17
Captured.
MendedFences27 said:
Caught and captured, to be turned into useful energy, by boat sails, by mill\'s for grinding, or by today\'s turbines to produce electricity. The wind is an ever present force of Nature, which can be good or evil. More and more it is becoming stronger, destructive, and all the while Man cannot seem to grasp the enormity of her resource.
A great write Fay. Loved it. -Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 14:06
MendedFences27 said:
Caught and captured, to be turned into useful energy, by boat sails, by mill\'s for grinding, or by today\'s turbines to produce electricity. The wind is an ever present force of Nature, which can be good or evil. More and more it is becoming stronger, destructive, and all the while Man cannot seem to grasp the enormity of her resource.
A great write Fay. Loved it. -Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 14:06
Captured.
Michael Edwards said:
Great one Fay - I know only too well the ravages of wind...!!
October 20th, 2017 11:34
Michael Edwards said:
Great one Fay - I know only too well the ravages of wind...!!
October 20th, 2017 11:34
By Scribes
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a lovely piece fay,love the thought of a guiding spirit giving you inspiration
October 20th, 2017 11:32
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a lovely piece fay,love the thought of a guiding spirit giving you inspiration
October 20th, 2017 11:32
Captured.
Louis Gibbs said:
I appreciate this fine poem, Fay, and the shape of it is quite pleasing. Well done, again!
October 20th, 2017 09:04
Louis Gibbs said:
I appreciate this fine poem, Fay, and the shape of it is quite pleasing. Well done, again!
October 20th, 2017 09:04
By Scribes
Goldfinch60 said:
As I read these wonderful words Calliope is watching over me. (I have a picture of Calliope on my wall).
October 20th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
As I read these wonderful words Calliope is watching over me. (I have a picture of Calliope on my wall).
October 20th, 2017 01:00
By Scribes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ~ There are more things wrought by Poetry ~ than this World dreams of ! Yours as ever BRIAN
October 19th, 2017 17:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ~ There are more things wrought by Poetry ~ than this World dreams of ! Yours as ever BRIAN
October 19th, 2017 17:22
By Scribes
WL Schuett said:
😎 cool poem Fay I never ever think about a muse but if that’s being inspired then that comes frequently and without control
October 19th, 2017 16:40
WL Schuett said:
😎 cool poem Fay I never ever think about a muse but if that’s being inspired then that comes frequently and without control
October 19th, 2017 16:40
By Scribes
Christina8 said:
Beautiful piece about the Muse. Sometimes I wish it would come to me at a more convenient time! Great poem, Fay!
October 19th, 2017 12:45
Christina8 said:
Beautiful piece about the Muse. Sometimes I wish it would come to me at a more convenient time! Great poem, Fay!
October 19th, 2017 12:45
By Scribes
orchidee said:
Amen to all that, though I don\'t know this Calliope lass much me self!
October 19th, 2017 10:39
orchidee said:
Amen to all that, though I don\'t know this Calliope lass much me self!
October 19th, 2017 10:39
By Scribes
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, by invoking the Muse we do become mere scribes of wisdom greater than our own. \"Never touch your pen without the help of one\", should be the motto of every aspiring poet.
A great poem and a good reminder to us all, Fay!
.
October 19th, 2017 07:57
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, by invoking the Muse we do become mere scribes of wisdom greater than our own. \"Never touch your pen without the help of one\", should be the motto of every aspiring poet.
A great poem and a good reminder to us all, Fay!
.
October 19th, 2017 07:57
Glorious Din.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beautiful fay,it all works great together
October 18th, 2017 21:02
ron parrish aka wordman said:
beautiful fay,it all works great together
October 18th, 2017 21:02
Glorious Din.
orchidee said:
I sees them geese too, by a riverside near-ish to our town centre. Lovely write Fay.
October 18th, 2017 09:29
orchidee said:
I sees them geese too, by a riverside near-ish to our town centre. Lovely write Fay.
October 18th, 2017 09:29
Glorious Din.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, those geese are wonderful to see and when they are quiet it can be overwhelming.
October 18th, 2017 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, those geese are wonderful to see and when they are quiet it can be overwhelming.
October 18th, 2017 08:00
Be To Me.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY. The Nature of the perfect RELATIONSHIP you describe ~ is what we all crave for the whole of your life. My current relationship with ANGELA os like that and I trust it will last for ever. But like all things LOVE is transient ~ so I just enjoy it \"One Day at a time !\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN ~ Please check out my FUSION on COLOUR and ~ if your muse moves ~ please add an ode ~ Thanks B.
October 17th, 2017 16:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY. The Nature of the perfect RELATIONSHIP you describe ~ is what we all crave for the whole of your life. My current relationship with ANGELA os like that and I trust it will last for ever. But like all things LOVE is transient ~ so I just enjoy it \"One Day at a time !\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN ~ Please check out my FUSION on COLOUR and ~ if your muse moves ~ please add an ode ~ Thanks B.
October 17th, 2017 16:01
Be To Me.
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful message. True love til the last, always for all time.
Excellent,
Mugsdaddy
October 17th, 2017 12:54
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful message. True love til the last, always for all time.
Excellent,
Mugsdaddy
October 17th, 2017 12:54
Be To Me.
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully said, a love that withstands time! Of course you said it so beautifully. A truly great poem!
October 17th, 2017 07:05
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully said, a love that withstands time! Of course you said it so beautifully. A truly great poem!
October 17th, 2017 07:05
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